Climate Change is real
Reasons for
1. Nowadays we may see the consequences of Climate Change in the planet more
frequently and analyze how nature acts differently than how it was acting more than
two hundred years ago. Huracans are bigger, sea level is higher and air is heavier.
We may see natural phenomena everyday and think they’re normal and a simple
process of our planet and that’s true. But there are symptoms which say Earth is
getting warmer and warmer while poles are thawing and increasing sea level, putting
isles around the globe under water.
2. Everyday there are more and more greenhouse gasses and fabrics are producing
more carbon dioxide affecting automatically our atmosphere and people because of
our consumerism are buying and demanding each day more and more products even
when they don’t need it, putting on Earth a lot of plastics and products non-
biodegradable that affects not only the planet itself, but animals, oceans, forests,
jungles, every kind of ecosystem and people.
Reasons against
1. Climate change is a way for biggest companies or rich people to destabilize country’s
governments and societies in order to establish their new order and make people buy
their products or services, but there are not proves of the climate change and every
single phenomena we see in the news and social medias are normal, the real
situation in here is we are more connected to social media and more informed, so we
are getting informed and informed every second making our minds believe we are
living hard moments because of earthquakes, huracans, tornados, etc. and Earth is
asking for our attention.
2. Climate change is not real or a thing, it’s just a normal cycle of the planet to debug
and clean ecosystems, atmosphere and oceans to go back to normal and start over
again.
Conclusions
In my opinion I think climate change is real. I believe we, as humans, are contaminating the
planet by our consumerism, putting more and more plastic and carbon dioxide in the
atmosphere by using our cars, trains, ships, airplanes or uncontrolled production of non-
biodegradable products. Nevertheless, we may also think the planet is speeding up the
process because we are watching news day by day about the planet and natural disasters
that makes us think each day the planet is making a call out for our behavior.
Even so there are some other aspects saying the climate change is real, like the poles
thawing, isles going underwater, sea level increase or the high percentage of carbon dioxide
in the atmosphere which makes us believe our home planet Earth is going warmer and
warmer. In my point of view, I do believe we may take consideration for the planet, the things
we buy, the plastic we throw down in the floor, oceans, rivers or forests, the way we are
using our cars instead of bicycles or friendly way of transportation. Avoid consumerism and
stop the uncontrolled production of products that we really do not need in large quantities. If
we do not stop ourselves, there won’t be any change other than climate change, which
affects us all.
Have you followed the paragraph plan?
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Does your conclusion follow naturally from the rest of the essay?
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Have you included examples of the different types of keys?
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Is your grammar, spelling and punctuation correct?
I do believe.