PART I.

GENERAL EDUCATION
A. COMMUNICATION ARTS: ENGLISH

Direction: Select the best answer from the choices given.

1. The union members cannot ______ the kind of compensation plan they want.
a. agree on b. agree to c. agree with d. get agree with
2. She has no conception _______ the performance of her duties.
a. as to b. as with c. with d. as on
3. The witness testified _________ the defendant’s early life.
a. as to b. as on c. about d. with
4. It is essential that harmony prevail _______ the departments.
a. between b. among c. with d. with all
5. Please _______ the book with you the next time you come to my office.
a. take b. bring c. carry d. bring along
6. The friendliness ________ the Philippine Foreign Minister and American Secretary of State promoted harmony.
a. between b. with both c. with d. of both
7. Since Mr. Dela Cruz was elected President of the organization, the members _________ better socials.
a. enjoyed b. are enjoying c. have enjoyed d. had enjoy.
8. I was filing when I returned but I ________ the report that time.
a. was typing b. was still typing c. am typing d. had been typing
9. The Congolese refugees painted a ________ picture of their suffering in the hands of the Chadian rebels.
a. ubiquitous b. exciting c. poignant d.blatant
10. It’s plain to see, said she, “there are too many and’s in that sentence.”
a. Its plain to see, said she, “there are too many and’s in that sentence.
b. “ It’s plain to see,” said she, “there are too many and’s in that sentence.”
c. “Its plain to see,” said she, “there are too many and in that sentence.”
d. Its plain to see, said she, there are too many ands in that sentence.
11. Suffrage is a privilege in a democracy. Those who are deprived of their voting right s are normally:
a. penalized b. criminally- liable c. disenfranchised d. imprisoned
12. “Join the street rallies and demonstrations!” shouted the rallyists. What was asked of the crowd?
a. Sympathy for a cause c. Empathy for a cause
b. Apathy for a cause d. Avoidance of the action
13. The statement “I am used to the same tales” means,
a. there was redundancy c. there is nothing new
b. there is great news d. this is original
14. The Personnel Manager told the Labor Representative: “We have to reduce our workforce.” What does this mean?
a. Workers have to be more efficient.
b. Workers are required to take their forced leaves.
c. Workers are warned of possible layoffs.
15. Some media people are charged of corruption. They are branded as:
a. Commissioners c. Media Grafters
b. Corruptors d. “Envelope mentalists”
16.She ignored the doctor’s recommendation that she ____________ smoking.
a. should stop b. stop c. will stop d. stops
17. When I came home, the children still ___________ dinner.
a. didn’t finish b. haven’t finished c. hadn’t finished d. hasn’t finished
18. She claimed she _________ there.
a. has never been c. had never been
b. have never been d. had not been
19. Neither of them ________ expert on the subject.
a. are b. is an c. is an d. is
20. It cost twice _________ I thought it would.
a. as much as b. as much c. more than d. most
21. The _________ you become, the less time you have for reading.
a. more busy b. busier c. busiest d. more busier
22. She was much different __________ I expected.
a. than b. from what c. from d. than what
23. We have described that _________ is more important from than being bright.
a. to be diligent b. on e to be diligent c. diligence d. being diligent
24. Weightlifter: Strength::
a. marathoner: endurance c. goalie: skill
b. hiker: agility d. dancer: speed
25. Lubricant: friction::
a. speed: drag c. muffler: noise
b. motor: electricity d. insulator: heat
26. Without hardly a moment’s delay, the computer began to print out the answer to the problem. No error.
A B C D E
27. Diligence and honesty, as well as being intelligent are qualities which I look for when I interview applicants. No error.
A B C D E
28. Writing a beautiful sonnet is as much as achievement as to finish a 50 page novel. No error.
A B C D E
29. Elevator: shaft::
a. electricity: outlet c. railroad: train
b. water: conduit d. skyscraper: foundation
30. Hydrology: science::
a. astronomy: galaxy c. fashion: style
b. fir: tree d. theory: practice
31. I his adders the Regional Director exhorted the teachers to discover and __________ each student’s _______ talents.
a. develop: intrinsic c. redirect: specialty
b. justify: gratuitous d. uplift: unrecognized
32. The enforcers feel that the ________ shown by the judges to first offenders unfortunately _________ many
youngster to embark on a life crimes.
a. harshness: predisposes c. clemency: encourages
b. indifference: directs d. understanding: condemns
33. As long as our political leaders would emulate the virtues of the great leaders of our country, we shall have economic
and social progress.
a. set free b. embolden c. encourage d. imitate
34. I can safely vouchsafe you a fair return for your investments.
a. borrow b. grant c. punish d. qualify
35. The deal was held in abeyance until her arrival from a sales convention.
a. obedience b. absence c. familiar d. suspended
36. The boy gave a furtive look at his classmate’s test paper.
a. coy b. sneaky c. abortive d. underhanded
37. All attempts to denigrate the character of our President, have failed.
a. deceive b. venerate c. malign d. build- up
38. I must remonstrate about the lack of police protection in our area.
a. protest b. resign c. restate d. reject
39. Unless we find a witness to corroborate your evidence, it will not stand courts.
a. collaborate b. negate c. interpret d. confirm
40. He preyed upon gullible people, who easily believe his stories.
a. incredulous b. easily deceived c. fickle d. indifferent
41. The lawyer objected that the testimony being offered was not germane to the case on hand.
a. original b. relevant c. connected d. assisting
42. His speeches were aimed at the plebeian minds and emotions.
a. sophisticated b. pragmatic c. persuade d. common
43. People dislike his sly ways but granted him a certain vulpine intelligence.
a. surprise b. careful c. wily d. cunning
44. Easy access to credit encourages people to become spendthrift.
a. stingy b. sophisticated c. spender d. moneyed
45. I think it is impolitic to raise the issue at this point in time because the public is too emotional about it.
a. advisable b. explosive c. unwise d. apolitical
46. I admire his terse style of writing; he comes directly to the point.
a. better b. dull c. illusionary d. concise
47. His parsimonious nature did not permit him to enjoy any luxury and relaxation.
a. frustrating b. distinct c. stingy d. vulnerable
48. Jose refused to take sleeping pills that might stupefy him.
a. rigid b. dull c. illusionary d. make numb
49. Liza is not a pariah to be shunned and ostracized.
a. citizen b. parishioner c. outcast d. benefactor
50. The wizened old man in the home for the aged was still active and energetic.
a. mascular b. clever c. shriveled d. wise and smart
51. He has the dubious distinction of being the lowest man in his class.
a. strange b. satisfying c. doubtful d. existing
52. The evidence gathered against the racketeers incriminates some high government officials as well.
a. exacerbate b. accuse c. intimidate d. discriminate
53. Jose does not need a new car, but he traded his old one to keep up with the Joneses.
a. to imitate others in extravagance c. to be responsible
b. to be envious d. to please others
54. The politician is witty speaker but he beats around the bush too much.
a. speaks emotionally c. avoids the main topic
b. away from the public d. keeps on talking
55. After all has been said, the issue was a tempest in a teapot.
a. temperature dropped c. heated argument followed
b. simmered down d. boiled down to nothing
56. All his life he has tried to be a good citizen, but still he doesn’t seem to get any place.
a. change location c. unsuccessful
b. take a trip d. miserable
57. The committee members have gone off, leaving everything at sixes and sevens among themselves.
a. harmony b. disagreement c. unproductive d. disorganized
58. “Rome was not built in a day!”
a. always on the move c. great things require time and effort
b. accept and bear consequences of your own doings d. hatred between forgiven two parties
59. All is well that ends well. The hatchet is buried as the dye is cast.
a. The action is done and every feeling is forgiven as it is forgotten.
b. the weapon is buried
c. judgment is given
d. in serious trouble
60. Pilar tasted a dose of her medicine.
a. suffered the consequences c. self medication
b. tasted her glory d. rewarded
61. Don’t trust him completely; he may try to put one over you.
a. overcome b. be subordinated c. to deceive you d. impulsive
62. Mrs. Gonzales is as good as her last triumph.
a. can’t be a good all throughout c. as nice as ever
b. can’t be bad d. in trouble
63. When a leader is succeeded by another leader, the former is referred to as __________.
a. replaced b. dethroned c. defeated d. deposed
64. “Never in World History was there a leaderless nation.” This passage means ___________.
a. nations can survive without leaders c. leaders come and go
b. a leader is always born d. a leader fades away but another comes up
65. Adopting the values of __________ colonizer would be tragic and meaningless independence.
a. the b. one’s c. it’s d. a
66. Colonialism was itself violent in ___________ natural state.
a. the b. its c. it’s d. their
67. The right form to address an invitation for a lawyer husband and his doctor wife.
a. Atty. And Mrs. Josef Novales c. Atty. Novales and Dr. Novales
b. Atty. And Dr. Josef Novales d. Atty. Josef Novales ans Dr. Novales
68. What utterance shows determination?
a. This time, I have not made my mind c. I have good news for you
b. This time I won’t stop schooling d. What a shame, she came back
69. “You wouldn’t want to be accused of theft, ___________?”
a. wouldn’t you b. won’t you c. will you d. would you
70. An appropriate philosophy of education _________ Filipinos must consider this historical aspect.
a. if b. by c. for the d. of their
71. The referee may not _________ these regulations no matter how much you complain.
a. explain to you b. exempt you from c. accept you from d. expect you from
72. This iPod is my sister’s. How about this?
a. This is to him b. This is to his c. This is his d. This is of him
73. “His ultimately death has left us blinder than we might have been.” This means?
a. Those left behind are left homeless c. Those orphans are left to themselves
b. Those left behind are blind d. Those who are blind are orphans
74. Which of the following quotations is the best example of aphorism?
a. “That is no country for old men”
b. “Out of the frying pan and into the fire
c. “Fools rush in where angels fear to tread”
d. “I fear thee, ancient mariner”
75. Adults acquire new words and experience primarily through?
a. formal education c. exposure to their use
b. use of dictionary d. casual explanation from peers
76. The best definition of the meaning of the word.
a. the object to which it refers c. its use in a particular situation
b. its general dictionary definition d. kits corresponding idea in the mind
77. People living in the mountainous and rugged areas were advised about the occurrence of La Nina. This means?
a. there will be famine c. there will be abundance
b. there will be drought d. there will be flashfloods
78. Professionals going abroad to seek greener pasture as one type of _____________?
a. brain drain b. employment c. tourism d. migration
79. “The modern heroes are understandable products of one’s literary heritage and the present world. Heroes of the
present are prototypes of the society in which they flourish. This means?
a. Heroes are alike, modern and classical
b. Modern society affects the modern literary heroes
c. Literature has heroes who represent the people, race and times
d. Modern heroes are the embodiment of the society’s values
80. The victim’s father refused revenge when he said:
a. “an eye for an eye” c. “Don’t take the law into your hands”
b. “Justice is always delayed” d. “Give him the other cheek”
81. Identify the Filipino value and its influence on the Filipino youth as stated:
a. Lack of Initiative……….. Passionism c. Extereme personalism…………….. Individualism
b. Faith…………….Conflicting attitudes d. Lack of discipline………………… Indifference
82. We should work for a total ban ____________of pesticides that are hazardous to man.
a. on the use b. by the use c. on using d. with the use
83. “It is only with the heart that one can see rightly.” This means __________?
a. the heart is always correct about everything
b. important things are not always for the heart but for the brain
c. heart should always be over and above the brains
d. only the heart can see the beauty of life and love
84. “I will take the road less travelled by and be condemned if necessary.” said one politician. His decision shows
____________?
a. regrets come before decision
b. decisions are made despite differences from the majority
c. decisions are made on the crossroads
d. regrets come after decisions
85. What word is not properly spelled and used in these sentences?
a. There were commissions on the fare
b. There were confusions on admissions
c. There was confusion on the plane
d. There was confusion of directions
86. You should be more __________ instead of being _________ in order to avoid committing mistakes.
a. literate…..erudite c. cautious…..impetuous
b. intelligent….smart d. practical…..passive
87. Only world- class athletes win medals at the Olympic Games. Michael Phelps won several gold medals in swimming
at the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games. Therefore:
a. Michael Phelps is an all- time American swimmer
b. Australia won the most number of gold medals in swimming
c. Michael Phelps is a world- class athlete and an Olympian
d. Michael Phelps is a swimmer
88. i. Treasury bills have an interest rate of 6.85% per annum
ii. Savings accounts have interest rate of only 2.0% per annum
iii. Treasury bills used to have 9- 10% interest rate per annum
Therefore, it is better to invest in Treasury bills than to just out your money in regular savings account.
a. definitely true c. most likely false
b. most likely true d. definitely false
89. “She was a Phantom of delight…When first she gleamed upon my sight.”
William Wordsworth
a. metaphor b. simile c. apostrophe d. hyperbole
90. Which of the following words are misspelled?
1. transgression 2. transcent 3. Inmunity 4. Percieve
a. 2&3 b. 2, 3 &4 c. 1, 3 &4 d. 1, 2 &3

91. Take note of the immediate affect this drug has on the behavior of the hamsters in the cage. No error.
A B C D E

92. Do not be aggravated by his bad manners, he is merely trying to attract attention. No error.
A B C D E

93. This scholarship should be awarded to whomever best meets the requirements. No error.
A B C D E

94. I fail to understand why you are seeking my council after you ignored my advice last week. No error.
A B C D E

95. Our’s is a critical period; we are confronted with grave problems which must be solved if we are to avert a tragedy.
A B C D
No error.
E

96. More than sixty percent of this project still has to be completed. I am afraid that we shall have to work overtime
A B C D
tonight. No error.
E

97. Alfredo usually eats a quick lunch, regardless of whether what he eats is healthy or not. No error.
A B C D E

98. If I were you, I would never permit them to take part in such an exhausting activity. No error.
A B C D E

99. The reason for my long absence from class was because I was sick for almost three weeks. No error.
A B C D E

100. I will always remember you standing by me and offering me pieces of advice and encouragements. No error.
A B C D E
 ANSWER KEY:

1. A 21. B 41. B 61. C 81. C

2. A 22. B 42. D 62. A 82. A
3. C 23. D 43. D 63. A 83. D
4. B 24. A 44. C 64. D 84. B
5. B 25. C 45. C 65. B 85. C
6. A 26. A- WITHOUT 46. D 66. B 86. C
7. C 27. B- INTELLIGENCE 47. C 67. A 87. C
8. D 28. C- FINISHING 48. D 68. B 88. B
9. C 29. B 49. C 69. D 89. A
10. B 30. B 50. C 70. C 90. B- TRANCEND,
11. C 31. A 51. C 71. B 91. IMMUNITY,
12. A 32. C 52. B 72. C 92. PERCEIVE
13. C 33. D 53. A 73. C 93.
14. C 34. B 54. C 74. C 94.
15. D 35. D 55. D 75. C 95.
16. B 36. B 56. C 76. A 96.
17. C 37. C 57. B 77. D 97.
18. C 38. A 58. C 78. A 98.
19. C 39. D 59. A 79. C 99.
20 A 40. B 60. A 80. C 100.

91. B- EFFECT
92. A- IRRITATED
93. C- WHOEVER
94. B- COUNSEL
95. A- OUR
96. E
97. D- HEALTHFUL
98. E
99. D- THAT
100. C- YOUR
PART I. GENERAL EDUCATION
A. COMMUNICATION ARTS ENGLISH: Grammar and Correct Usage
Direction: The sentences below contain errors in idioms, grammar, word choice, English usage, etc., you are to
detect such error by writing the letters of the part of the sentence where the mistake is found.

Start Here:

1. Take note of the immediate affect this drug has on the behavior of the hamsters in the cage. No error.
A B C D E

2. Do not be aggravated by his bad manners, he is merely trying to attract attention. No error.
A B C D E

3. This scholarship should be awarded to whomever best meets the requirements. No error.
A B C D E

4. I fail to understand why you are seeking my council after you ignored my advice last week. No error.
A B C D E

5. Our’s is a critical period; we are confronted with grave problems which must be solved if we are to avert a tragedy.
A B C D
No error.
E

6. More than sixty percent of this project still has to be completed. I am afraid that we shall have to work overtime
A B C D
tonight. No error.
E

7. Alfredo usually eats a quick lunch, regardless of whether what he eats is healthy or not. No error.
A B C D E

8. If I were you, I would never permit them to take part in such an exhausting activity. No error.
A B C D E

9. The reason for my long absence from class was because I was sick for almost three weeks. No error.
A B C D E

10. I will always remember you standing by me and offering me pieces of advice and encouragements. No error.
A B C D E

11. Although I am playing golf for more than 4 year now, I cannot imagine to break a 90. No error.
 A B C D E

12. Between twenty and thirty students are willing to volunteer; the rest are not planning to participate in the activity.
A B C D
No error.
E

13. He is not the kind of a person who accepts such challenge negatively; he is certain to seek competition. No error.
A B C D E
14. Although Jake is in this country for only two years, he talks like he has lived here for ten years. No error.
A B C D E

15. Even if you go shopping late, will you please bring this note to the store’s manager? No error.
A B C D E

16. Let me say that once and for all that between you and I, there can be no further friendship. No error.
A B C D E

17. He proved to his satisfaction that he was as good as, if not, more good than she. No error.
A B C D E

18. We insist upon your telling us who else’s signature appeared on this petition besides yours. No error.
A B C D E

19. The Student Council would appreciate hearing from anyone whose interested in organizing a drama club. No error.
A B C D E

20. English people of the Renaissance were accustomed to resorting to wizards and astrologers for help in alleviating
A B C
diseases, identifying threats and to locate lost property. No error.
D E

ANSWER KEY:

1. B- EFFECT 11. B- HAVE BEEN PLAYING

2. A- IRRITATED 12. E
3. C- WHOEVER 13. A- KIND OF PERSON
4. B- COUNSEL 14. B- HAS BEEN
5. A- OUR 15. C- TAKE
6. E 16. C- ME
7. D- HEALTHFUL 17. D- BETTER
8. E 18. C- WHOSE
9. D- THAT 19. C- WHO IS
10. C- YOUR 20. D- LOCATING

PART I. GENERAL EDUCATION

 A. COMMUNICATION ARTS ENGLISH: Grammar and Correct Usage
Direction: The sentences below contain errors in idioms, grammar, word choice, English usage, etc., you are to
detect such error by writing the letters of the part of the sentence where the mistake is found.

Part B: Start Here:

1. Because of the high interest rate on installment schemes, it is advisable to pay things in cash. No error.
A B C D E

2. The man who is laying in the pavement needs immediate medical attention. No error.
A B C D E

3. Neither Jose or Mark handed in his resignation letter yesterday. No error.

A B C D E

4. More experimental data is required before we can accept the theory. No error.
A B C D E

5. Choosing between you and she is very difficult; both of you are qualified. No error.
A B C D E

6. It is not you who are at fault; rather, it is I who are to blame. No error.
A B C D E

7. Since you do not participate in any of the club’s activities. I must conclude that you are disinterested. No error.
A B C D E

8. She reported to the police that a large quantity of clothing and of jewelry were missing. No error.
A B C D E

9. Neither the editor nor the Circulation Manager were satisfied with the salary increase offered by the management.
A B C D
No error.
E

10. In the rush to get to the executive meeting, one of the directors forgot their documents. No error.
A B C D E

11. The principal of equality is a pillar of democracy; this is not true of other forms of government. No error.
A B C D E

12. The Lieutenant report to his officer regularly everyday. No error.

A B C D E

13. He can’t hardly do anything with his right hand ever since he had his stroke. No error.
A B C D E

14. Ms. Espiritu’s decision to retire came as a shock to all who respected his ability. No error.
A B C D E
15. In all my years as a researcher, I have never encountered an individual such as he; he definitely is most hardworking.
A B C D
No error.
E

16. Although I am willing to go along with your idea, I cannot enthuse over its chances of success. No error.
A B C D E

17. If you plan to become an English major, you should learn grammar, read lots of books, as well as practicing your
A B C D
writing skills. No error.
 E

18. After his heart attack, he was ordered to lay in bed and rest for two weeks. No error.
A B C D E

19. Was it they who were involved in the recent unruly demonstration? No error.
A B C D E

20. She is the only one of the applicants who are fully qualified for the position. No error.
A B C D E

ANSWER KEY:

1. E 11. A- PRINCIPLE
2. B- LYING 12. B- REPORTS
3. B- NOR 13. A- CAN HARDLY
4. B- ARE 14. E
5. B- HER 15. E
6. D- AM 16. C- BE ENTHUSIASTIC
7. D- UNINTERESTED 17. D- PRACTICE
8. C- WAS 18. C- LIE
9. B- WAS 19. E
10. D- HIS/HER 20. C- IS
PART I. GENERAL EDUCATION
A. COMMUNICATION ARTS ENGLISH: Grammar and Correct Usage
Direction: Below you will find groups of sentences. Select which one in each group is preferable with respect to
grammar and correct usage.

1. Except for you and I, everyone brought a present to the party.

1. Except for you and I, everyone brought
2. With exception of you and I, everyone brought
3. Except for you and I, everyone had brought
4. Except for you and me, everyone brought
2. The reason I came late to office today is because the car broke down.
1. I came late to office today is because
2. why I came late to office today is because
3. I was late to office today because
4. I came late to office is that
3. When the war is over, no nation will either be isolated in war or peace.
1. either be isolated in war or peace
2. be either isolated in war or peace
3. be isolated in neither war or peace
4. be isolated either in war or in peace
4. The supermarket owner hadn’t hardly any of those kind of canned goods
1. hadn’t hardly any of those kind
2. hadn’t hardly any of those kinds
3. had hardly any of those kind
4. had hardly any of those kinds
5. Irregardless of the outcome of the competition, our schools will remain staunchly allies.
1. Irregardless of the outcome
2. Regardless of how the outcome
3. With regards to the outcome
 4. Regardless of the outcome
6. She was told to give the award to whomever she thought had contributed most for the welfare of the student
organization.
1. to whomever she thought
2. to whoever she thought
3. to the senior whom she thought
4. to whomsoever
7. Senator Josef is one of the legislators who are going to discuss the budget in the Upper Chamber.
1. one of the legislators who are going
2. one of the legislators who is going
3. one of the legislators who has gone
4. the legislator who is going
8. She not only was competent but also friendly in nature.
1. She not only was competent but also friendly
2. She not was only competent but friendly also
3. She not only was competent but friendly also
4. She was not only competent but also friendly
9. Most student like to read these kind of books during their break time.
1. these kind of books
2. these kind of book
3. this kind of book
4. this kinds of book

10. It is not for you to assume responsibility, it is, rather, me who is the guilty person in this matter.
1. me who is 2. me who am 3. I who is 4. I who am
11. The “Aurora Borealis” or Northern Lights, is so named because it is a light display that takes place in the
northern skies.
1. because it is a light display that takes place
2. as a light display taking place
3. because of taking place
4. due to the fact that it is a light display
12. The giving of foreign aid is a tool of national policy, the hoped- for return is often indirect and long- term.
1. policy, the hoped- for return is often indirect and long- term
2. policy, however the hoped- for return is often indirect and long- term
3. policy, though the hoped- for return is often indirect and long- term
4. policy, albeit the hoped- for return is often indirect and long- term
13. The difference between the candidates is that one is radical, the other conservative.
1. one is radical; the other, conservative
2. one is radical, the other being conservative
3. while one is radical; the other, conservative
4. one is radical; the other, is conservative
14. Many middle class individuals find that they cannot obtain good medical attention, despite they need it
badly.
1. despite they need it badly
2. despite their bad need of it
3. in spite of they need it badly
4. however, much they need it
15. If I would have known about the traffic jam in the area, I would have taken an alternate route.
1. If I would have known about
2. If I would of known about
3. If I would of known about
4. Had I known about
16. Using it wisely, leisure promotes health, efficiency and happiness.
1. Using it wisely 3. Having used it wisely
2. If it used wisely 4. Because it is used wisely
17. Neither the earthquake or the subsequent fire was able to destroy the spirit of the populace.
1. or the subsequent fire was 3. Or the subsequent fire were
2. nor the subsequent fire were 4. Nor the subsequent fire was
18. Of the two candidates for this government position, Jose Maria is the most qualified because of his
experience in the field.
1. most qualified because 3. More qualified due
2. most qualified due to 4. More qualified because of
19. He has not only violated the law, but also he has escaped punishment.
1. not only violated the law, but also he has escaped punishment
 2. violated not only the law, but also he has escaped punishment
3. violated not only the law, but he has escaped punishment also
4. not only violated the law, but also escaped punishment
20. She seldom ever wants to try and face the true facts.
1. seldom ever wants to try and face the true facts
2. seldom ever wants to try and face the facts
3. seldom wants to try and face the facts
4. seldom wants to try to face the facts

ANSWER KEY:

1. (4) you and me

2. (4) “is that” is preferred to “because”
3. (4) either…or…
4. (4) double negative: had hardly; “those kinds”
5. (4) Regardless
6. (2) “whoever”…had contributed
7. (1) original sentence is correct
8. (4) “was not only”… but also…
9. (3) “kind” is singular, so use “this”
10. (4) use “I” instead of me; 1st person singular verb am
11. (1) original sentence
12. (3) addition of conjunction “though”
13. (1) original sentence is correct
14. (2) “Despite” used as a preposition
15. (4) correct use of subjunctive mood to indicate a condition contrary to fact
16. (2) change participial phrase to a clause
17. (4) “neither…nor…”
18. (4) use “more” because only 2 persons are compared
19. (4) “not only” and “but also” placed near the words violated and escaped
20. (4)