Grammar
Grammar
ADVANCED LEARNERS) IN
HIGHER CLASSES
Structure
19.0 Objectives
19.1 Introduction
19.2 Understanding Forms and Functions in English Language
19.3 The Use of Tenses in English
19.4 Probable Hard spots for ESL Learners
19.5 Inter-language – Causes and Effects
19.6 Error Corrections – Ways and Means
19.7 Discussion
19.8 Let Us Sum Up
19.9 Key Words
19.10 Suggested Reading
19.11 Answers
19.0 OBJECTIVES
After studying this Unit and completing the exercises you would be able to:
explain the significance of grammar in meaning-making when learning
a language;
distinguish between forms and functions of /similar or dissimilar
sentences (with suitable examples) and establish the relationship (or the
lack there of) between these two aspects;
revisit and review a few selected aspects of English grammar i.e. tenses,
conditional clauses and passive constructions;
explain inter-language and enumerate the factors that lead to this
situation; and
discuss (with examples) the advantages and disadvantages of self
correction; peer correction and individual and whole group (error)
correction by the teacher in a classroom.
19.1 INTRODUCTION
“Grammar is the structural foundation of our ability to express ourselves.
The more we are aware of how it works, the more we can monitor the
meaning and effectiveness of the way we and others use language.” (David
Crystal, 2004, In Word and Deed, TES). As Julio Foppoli argues 59
Teaching Writing and Grammar (www.esaudio.net/spanish/onlineclasses.html.) that as a train cannot move
without railways, you won’t be able to convey your ideas to their full extension
without a good command of underlying grammar patterns and structures of
the language.
As classroom teachers we are often faced with a very peculiar and
contradictory situation. While we have a set of students who do very well
in discrete item grammar tests, they are incapable of speaking fluently or
writing accurately for long. On the other hand, there are a few who have
very little awareness of grammar jargon and terminology, although they
make pretty good use of the language. As teachers, we want to prepare
learners who actually engage in communicative situations using appropriate
language and patterns. We are not interested in their explaining to us or
making a list of all the grammar uses that a certain pattern has or reciting,
parrot like (from memory) , the rules or exceptions which are associated
with different grammatical elements. Students in higher classes have several
years of studying the language under their belts. This is a great resource for
us as teachers, because we can help them with what they already know and
expand upon it. We can help them with a “deeper understanding of the
nuances of the language.” The time in class must be used for providing
learners with as many communicative situations as possible, rather than
making them focus on drills and patterns that they could easily practice on
their own.
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There is no future tense in English.
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Now read the following.
1. The verb phrase is usually the time marker in most cases but is
reinforced in the form of a time adverbial. The term tense is traditionally
used to refer to the way the verb changes its endings to express this
meaning. For example -
My husband loves gardening. Come winter and he is busy with his
petunias, lobelias, dahlias, chrysanthemums and what not. He is now
water ing the plants.
64 He has been in prison for fifteen years. (He is probably still there.)
I have lived in Delhi for five years. (I still do.) Teaching Grammar
(To Advanced Learners)
The perfective aspect is formed by using the verb ‘have’. For example: in Higher Classess
The definite time in the past is usually identified by a past time adverbial
in the same sentence or the preceding language context.
In contrast, the perfect aspect is used for a past happening which is seen in
relation to a later event or time. Thus the present perfect means ‘past-
happening-related-to-present-time’, e.g.
We have eaten all the curd-rice for lunch. (There aren’t any left.)
Have you completed the project proposal? (You are expected to submit it
now.)
Different kinds of adverbials are associated with the past tense and the
present perfective, e.g.
I saw Tara a week ago.
I have not seen Shefali since December.
Using the wrong adverbial is a common error made by English learners,
As teachers you must be conscious of the fact that the verb is the central
element of a sentence. We would like to remind you here that you have to
learn all about tense and aspect of verbs because a good knowledge of verbs
is important to infer and comprehend the signification of the relationship of
the different sentences that are chosen for assessing your comprehension
skills. You would also need verbs to express your ideas in any kind of
advanced level writing tasks — be it descriptive, expository, discursive or
narrative or even a simple task like letter writing or answering questions
based on reading texts. For transformation exercises which are set in your
examination question papers you would need a thorough knowledge of the
correct form of the verb.
The two other sub-topics that we have selected to discuss in this unit –
conditional clauses and passive constructions — are also verb related. But
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Check Your Progress 2
Consult any grammar book to list the different functions that a verb in the
simple present tense performs. Now identify the functions of the verb
forms in the sentences given below.
1. Water boils at 100 degree centigrade. …………………………….
She plays the piano really well. ……………………………………
The easiest way to go to Delhi Haat is to take the Metro from Model
Town………………..
Separate the egg whites and the yolks and keep them in two separate
bowls. Beat the whites stiff till they stand in peaks …………
…………………..
2. Saurav Ganguly wins the toss and decides to bat first ………
………………….
Rani plans to join her new job in September. She wants to rest for two
weeks before taking up the new assignment …………………
……………………
3. The following sentences are in the present continuous tense. But how
does the meaning differ in each sentence?
Air pollution is becoming worse day by day.
The government is planning to allow even and odd number cars on
alternate days on the road.
I’m going to attend a mono-acting programme on Kabir by Shekhar
Sen.
It is snowing in Simla.
I’m forever looking for my room keys.
4. What is the difference in the set of sentences given below?
i(a) The sun rises in the east.
(b) The sun is rising over the horizon. What a beautiful sight.
ii(a) In summer, it always rains in the evening in this place.
(b) It is not raining but is pouring now. How can you think of going
out?
iii(a) Joy reads a lot of books.
(b) He is reading the Glass Palace by Amitava Ghosh now.
iv(a) There was an explosion at the crowded Sarojini Nagar Market
before Diwali.
(b) There has been an explosion at Sarojini Nagar market. Many
people have lost their lives.
v(a) The Mughal Gardens at Rashtrapati Bhavan have been opened
for public.
Have you ever been there?
(b) We went to the Mughal Gardens at Rastrapati Bhavan last week.
It is opened for public viewing only for a fortnight.
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5. (a) Underline all the verbs in the simple present and put a circle (To Advanced Learners)
round all the verbs in the present continuous. in Higher Classess
(b) Comment on the utility of this kind of an exercise in higher
classes.
The day is mild. A filmy diffusion pales the blue of the sky and
gives a soft extra light. A gentle breeze touches the moving sea.
Here and there the surface breaks in a pattern of light, struck by
a shower of needles. Schools of sauries, each holding a million
fish, break and boil to the top. Their sides are gleaming iridescent
silver, their backs are metallic blue green. The Little Calf and his
mother, along with seven other females, the harem bull, and a
young male, are lazily following the fish, feasting as they go…
Even the Little Calf, though nursing, is swallowing the fat, tasty,
ten inch fish.
(Adapted from Collins Cobuild English Grammar Exercises)
We will end this section with a few observations from a study conducted by
R. K. Agnihotri, A. L. Khanna and Aditi Mukherjee on Undergraduate
Students of Delhi University. (Implicational Order of Difficulty in the Use
of Tenses in English – by R. K. Agnihotri, A. L. Khanna and Aditi Mukherjee).
They suggest that “the teaching of tenses should be incorporated in the
teaching curriculum in three distinct stages. The verbal forms which the
majority of our population finds difficult to handle and which are acquired
later…should be introduced only in the last stage of teaching of tenses. It
may not be particularly damaging to introduce these forms early at the
receptive levels but to insist on their productive control in the early stages
may result in disturbing the natural stages involved in learning. In natural
language acquisition a silent period generally intervenes between reception
and production…” Their findings underscore the need for contrasting the
present indefinite (simple present) and the present continuous as also the
simple past with present perfect. They have also highlighted the necessity to
introduce the simple present for general truths and for habitual actions at the
early stage. They also proposed the use of the simple present for future
references in the Second Stage and the present continuous for future action
as one of the ways to indicate future time. The researchers/authors also feel
that the more difficult areas in tenses, i.e. the past perfect and the perfect
continuous tenses should be taken up in the later stages. In brief, “the formal
devices evolved to express different aspects of time and activity constitute
one of the most critical aspects of any language and an adequate control over
the verbal forms and the associated adverbials is necessary to use language
meaningfully.’’
Column I Column II
If you have lost money a you’ll stay slim.
If I went to Germany b you must take the call.
If you don’t eat too much c the holiday would have been
miserable.
If she liked spaghetti, d contact the police.
If David phones, e I would buy a bigger car.
If the weather had not f she must have been Italian.
changed,
If I were as tired as you, g I would visit Berlin.
If I had enough money, h I should take a holiday.
If you can’t sleep i I would visit London first.
If I went to England, j take some sleeping tablets.
Similarly,
In this section we will briefly touch upon the situations in which passive
constructions are more appropriate than pseudo-passives. But before we go
into those details, let us revise how passives are formed – although we know
that you are familiar with it.
His friend was shot in the chest and he died on the spot.
(In this sentence the subject is— His friend and the passive construction is
formed by using be (was) + shot (past participle). What according to you
is the difference between the sentences –
a) His friend was shot in the chest and he died on the spot. (passive)
b) The robbers shot his friend in the chest and he died on the spot. (active)
Before we proceed further, let us quickly look back to our own days of
learning English (which is L2 for most of us) and recollect instances of over
generalization of rules learned and mother tongue interference. Most
common, as you might have noticed, pertain to making plurals for example,
adding the extra –s to the word children; using the definite article the with
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Roys have gone to Ranikhet for a holiday – referring to the family as a Teaching Grammar
whole); use of –ed to indicate past tense e.g. buyed (x), sinked (x), etc. (To Advanced Learners)
in Higher Classess
Interference of the mother tongue is most noticeable in pronunciation and
stress patterns —(giving rise to comedy films and plays in all Indian
languages); use of wrong word order which is typically modelled on the
mother tongues the learners ; absence of inversion in interrogative sentences
or the indiscriminate use of isn’t it (?) in question tags; deviation from
grammatically correct subject –verb agreement rules –-to name only a few
areas where Indian ESL learners frequently go wrong. You can keep your
ears and eyes open and compile a list of errors your learners make.
However, we are not trying to tell you or convince you that L1 interference/
transfer and overgeneralization on the basis of incomplete rule learning,( i.e.
not knowing the exceptions of a particular rule) are the only two reasons
why the target language is not adequately mastered by a learner. There are
factors – both internal and external— like age, diminishing motivation,
waning interest, lack of self confidence, anxiety, insufficient learning
opportunities, dearth of proficient language teachers – all of which contribute
to create a situation in which “incorrect linguistic features become a permanent
part of the way a person speaks or writes a language. Thus, if we think of
interlanguage as a continuum of gradually approaching the target language,
it can stop developing in any stage and the learner is unable to acquire total/
absolute proficiency. This freezing of the transition between native language
(L1) and the target language (L2) is termed fossilization of interlanguage. 77
Teaching Writing and Grammar This phenomenon occurs mostly in adult second language learners. This
interlanguage fossilization or a permanent cessation of progress toward the
target language shows up as error-reappearance (those language phenomena
whereby repeatedly corrected language errors occur again and again resulting
in language competence fossilization (viz., fossilization of pronunciation,
syntactic structures and vocabulary).
“Mistakes thus should not worry the teacher as they can usually be
corrected by the learner himself/herself (Ellis and Tomlinson: 1980).
Peer correction is another way of error correction where students work together
on correcting each other’s work. The obvious advantage is that students can
discuss with/consult each other if in doubt. Also in case one fails to see his/
her own mistakes, the other person can always help with it. However, the
spirit of co-operation has to pervade pair work.
(Also both self correction and peer correction find support in the constructivist
theory of teaching grammar. We have touched upon this in an earlier Unit
on different methodologies of teaching grammar.)
If we think that a mistake needs to be corrected, the student who made the
mistake or another student can correct it. In this case teacher intervention is
not required. But if the particular student or any other classmate is unable
to come up with the correct answer, then obviously the teacher needs to
intervene to stop wasting available class time.
Error correction by teachers for the whole class can be either hot (the teacher
makes the correction the moment the learner uses a wrong form/pronounces
a word wrongly— then and there) or cold (delayed response/correction at a
later point of time).
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If you have written something like too many interruptions to correct mistakes
make the students hesitant and inhibited – you are right. Students would
never use new expressions / words / syntactical patterns and fall back on
safe, simple, repetitive expressions which they know are correct (albeit
overused and / or boring). Hence, language experts who look upon mistakes
as evidence of learning or learning steps, suggest that teachers should not
correct mistakes unless there is a breakdown in communication. In a delayed
correction scenario, a teacher can quietly collect samples/instances of wrong
usage, grammatical errors while going through students’ written work and
choose one or two items for re-teaching. Even if the teacher thinks that he
or she has taught a particular item but the students are still incapable of self
correction or no one in a class can correct a particular mistake, then obviously
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Check Your Progress 7 (To Advanced Learners)
in Higher Classess
1. Given below are a few incorrect expressions used by learners in their
English examination answer scripts. Write the correct version in the
space provided. Identify the grammar elements which the learners are
confused with.
Expressions used by Attention needed in Correct version
learners teaching grammar
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19.7 DISCUSSION
Learning a language is a complex process. Hence, nothing is learnt at one
go. Our understanding of the meaning-making role of grammar also grows
gradually over a period of time. Reviewing, re-using what we have learnt
earlier and reinforcing what we know or have learnt help gradually.
All languages are rule governed. But as we have said earlier, only knowing/
learning the rules do not suffice. Learners need to use the language learnt
fluently, accurately and last but not the least appropriately. While we have
referred to these concepts in an earlier lesson, we would like to remind you
of these three important strands in language use in passing. In this Unit we
have tried to focus on form vs. functions to make you aware of the facts that
grammatically similar sentences may be used in quite different ways while
sentences being used in similar way may be grammatically quite dissimilar.
In other words, the uses to which a sentence might be put cannot be
ascertained from an analysis of its consistent parts, and a learner who knows
what all the words and structures in the language signify, does not necessarily
know how to use language correctly and appropriately.
Like a first rate driver goes through the physical operations of driving a car
automatically and yet follows all traffic rules, keeps an eye on other car
drivers on the road, driving at same time that he is, is mentally alert to his
surroundings and yet carries on a conversation / argument with his co-
passengers – all at the same time. Similarly, a proficient language user gains
automatic control over complex mental routines and sub-routines. This
comparison may be a little cliché / overused, yet we think the most apt.
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process characterized by back sliding, leaps in competency, interaction
between grammatical elements, etc.
“Researches have demonstrated the complexity of the processes involved in
learning a second language. We now have data which show that it takes
much longer than we once thought to move from one developmental stage
to another… There seems to be little support for an approach in which all
explicit grammatical instruction is eschewed. However, the questions of
when, how and how much focus to place on grammar has not been settled.
In this Unit we have tried to explain that “structures are not learned in
isolation, but they interact with each other. Eisenstein et al (1982) investigated
the development of progressive and simple forms and came to the conclusion
that the problem of learning closely related verb structures is that while each
has its own job to perform, it is also interconnected with other structures.
This makes it difficult for the learner to determine where the boundaries are
and therefore, to know when it is appropriate to use one structure rather than
another. Eisenstein et al. point out that ultimately the challenge of learning
closely related verb structures is probably that they have to be integrated into
the semantic and grammatical system in such a way that each marks off its
own meaning domain, i.e. in the case of verbs, its own portion of time.
(Language Teaching Methodology, David Nunan, 1998)
Apart from internalizing complex grammar rules and using them automatically
and appropriately, another important focal point of this Unit is the fossilization
of inter language and the resultant, errors that show up in the productive
skills of speaking and writing. As most of us teachers are unwilling to accept
the errors as inevitable in second language learning and give sufficient time
to outgrow them at a later stage of learning. We think we can fully agree
with R. K. Agnihotri and A. L. Khanna when they suggest, ‘Nothing causes
more anxiety to teachers, parents, examiners and society in general than the
errors that a learner makes while learning a language. In fact, we often treat
errors as if they were diseases which need immediate treatment. The truth
is that making errors is a necessary part of a learning process.” They have
also pointed out that the rules of grammar are “created by those who use it.
And we all know languages keep changing all the time… It is possible that
today’s errors may become tomorrow’s rule.” Isn’t the comment thought
provoking and deserving some consideration? Think and ponder.
The time marker in most sentences is the verb phrase which in most cases
is corroborated by an adverb. There are two tenses in English language –
present and past tense – while future time is indicated in a variety of ways.
The aspect of the verb tells us whether the action is in progress (continuous)
or if an action is continuing up to the present (perfective).
Expressing meanings using the words and grammar which are already
known.
We should encourage self correction first and then follow it up with peer
correction, if needed. Teachers can concentrate on re-teaching certain areas
where all/most learners make errors.
Or
Pseudo Passives – (often with have or get) are common in informal English.
They have subjects which have things done for them, to them or which
happen to them e.g. I had my car washed.
Ellis, Rod and Brian Tomlinson. 1980. Teaching Secondary English, Longman
Group Ltd. England.
Websites Consulted/Referred to
Fossilization of Interlanguage.
Interlanguage
Ceremonial (or ritual language use) e.g. Dearly beloved, we are gathered
here together to writers the holy matrimony of …(different from simply
mixing expressive and directive language because performative aspects
are also included).
Phatic language – Conversations accomplishing a social task or even a
nod or a wave of hand to greet somebody.
Check Your Progress 2
1. Water boils at 100 degree centigrade. Universal truth
She plays the piano really well. Habit (repeated action)
The easiest way to go to Delhi Haat is to take the Metro from Model
Town. Giving suggestions/advice
Separate the egg whites and the yolks and keep them in two separate
bowls. Beat the whites stiff till they stand in peaks. Instructions
2. Saurav Ganguly take to section wins the toss and
decides to bat first. Present event (commentary)
Rani plans to join her new job in September. She
wants to rest for two weeks before taking up
new assignment. Plans (proposed) for a future time
3. Air pollution is becoming worse day by day. (Progressive change)
The government is planning to allow even and
odd number cars on alternate days on the road.
(Proposed plans for future time)
I’m going to attend a mono-acting programme
on Kabir by Shekhar Sen.(fixed) (Plan for future time)
It is snowing in Simla. (Event happening at
the time of talking)
I’m forever looking for my room keys. (Habitual action that
takes place regularly).
4. Difference in the set of sentences given below:
i(a) The sun rises in the east. (Universal truth. True for all times)
(b) The sun is rising over the horizon. What a beautiful sight!
(Temporary event happening at the time of speaking)
ii(a) In summer, it always rains in the evening in this place.
(Frequent action)
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(b) It is not raining but is pouring now. How can you think of Teaching Grammar
going out? (Temporary event happening at the time of (To Advanced Learners)
in Higher Classess
speaking)
iii(a) Joy reads a lot of books. (Regular action)
(b) He is reading the Glass Palace by Amitava Ghosh now. (Event
in progress but definitely for a limited period)
iv(a) There was an explosion at the crowded Sarojini Nagar Market
before Diwali. (Event happened in the past)
(b) There has been an explosion at Sarojini Nagar market. Many people
have lost their lives. (Past event but the effects (result) can be felt
in the present time).
v(a) The Mughal Gardens at Rashtrapati Bhavan have been opened for
public.
Have you ever been there? (Event in a period leading up to present
time)
(b) We went to the Mughal Gardens at Rastrapati Bhavan last week.
It is opened for public viewing only for a fortnight. (Event took
place in past time)
5. is, pales, gives, touches, breaks (sides) are, (are) (lazily) (following) is
swallouring
Check Your Progress 3
1. Completed sentences:
i If my daughter comes tomorrow, we will go to The Garden of Five
Senses to see the exhibition.
ii We will all be very happy if you spend the weekend with us.
iii If I have enough money, I will buy a small house in Ooty.
iv I could take your photo if I had a camera/A mobile with a good
quality camera.
v If my husband agrees, I would buy a house in Kodaikanal.
vi If you had a dictionary, you could have checked the pronunciation
or the meaning of the word in the given context.
vii Sheila would build up a well-stocked children’s library, if only the
School Principal had agreed to her proposal.
viii If I were you, I would never neglect such high fever for many days.
ix I wouldn’t have caught a cold, if I had taken my umbrella with me
in the morning.
x We wouldn’t have missed the train if we had not been held up in
the traffic jam.
xi If we had taken the earlier train, we could have visited the Titanic
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Teaching Writing and Grammar xii If we had taken leave for a few more days, we could have stayed
here for a few more days. This is such a quiet and peaceful place
2. i Riya could not wear her new dress because the tailor did not do the
alterations on time.
ii I shared our Sunday plans with Prateek because you never told me
not to./ I did not know it was to be kept secret.
iii Go visit a doctor. The fever may be indicative of more serious
illness than you think.
iv Tina is wearing something very light which is not very warm. (She
may feel cold later.)
v Gopal becomes angry very quickly. His colleagues do not like him
much.
3. i If he worked hard, he would pass. (b) a lazy student
ii If he had worked, he would have passed. (c) an ex-student.
iii He’ll pass if he works hard. (a) a good student
Check Your Press 4
1. i The litmus paper is placed in the liquid. The Person is either a
scientist / teacher/ student / researcher. Therefore, the doer of the
action is taken for granted.
ii The chicken breasts are cleaned, washed and then cut into half inch
broad strips.
Recipe/ instructions for making a chicken dish.
How to cook is more important than who the author of the cookbook
is.
iii The order to Public Works Department (PWD) to carry out
patchwork on Delhi roads was revoked.
Newspaper Report. Obviously the administrative authorities /
government in power.
iv A cricketer, who was acquitted of match fixing charges, was banned
for five years.
News report/Newspaper report. The Cricket Regulatory body alone
has such powers.
v Common sleep disorders that rob many people from a good night’s
sleep can be classified in four categories.
An article in a magazine or any text book chapter on sleep disorder.
Impersonal style is more acceptable in scientific writings.
2. These are suggested answers. Your answers may be different.
i The State Government has been compelled to deploy Police force
fearing arson and violence by the rioters.
ii Although the environmentalists are protesting vehemently, the
Japanese government is known to have given permission to kill
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hidden him in the empty school premises over the weekend. (To Advanced Learners)
in Higher Classess
iv Detailed proposals would be submitted in the forthcoming council
meetings suggesting alternative measures to avoid regular traffic
jams.
v New methods were discovered by medical researchers to preserve
tissues without the use of ice.
3. All clues given. Write the procedure using the passive voice and linkers
indicating sequence. (Open ended-but do not change order of the boxes
given.
4. Open ended.
5 Although a newspaper item, simple present, simple past, past tense of
modals will (would), can (could) have been used. Thus the active voice
has been used in this news item because the focus is as much on the
‘Doer’ as the action.
Check Your Progress 5
1. i(a) The car was repaired by some one else (e.g. a mechanic in a garage.)
(b) He himself repaired the car.
ii(a) The teeth came out on their own (may be because of age/accident)
(b) The dentist extracted three of his teeth.
iii(a) A direct question to the owner of the car.
iii(b) Does somebody else (other than the owner) clean the car?
2 (i) get them stitched?
(ii) a gardener does it for you?
3 i. were evacuated (agent not mentioned, understood – the cabin crew)
was retrieved (agent mentioned – (by) explosive experts from the
navy and DCI. Specialized trained agents because not everybody
can deactivate explosives.
ii. (a) is built (b) are associated (agent – strong earthquakes)
Check Your Progress 6
a The hungry victims
b It is right to say. What? - sentence incomplete.
or
The incomplete sentence can be combined with the next sentence.
c All the “effected” (used three times) should be written as affected.
The word effect which means ‘result’ is usually used with words like
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d Some others are spelling mistakes:-
pregnant - should be pregnant
aborded - should be aborted
deaealt
e It erase - it erased/killed
aftermaths - is wrong because the word aftermath
(result) is used as a singular noun
never conceive again - should be corrected as never conceived
again or could never conceive again.
lose the capability - should be – lost the ability to have babies.
The wounds close - can be written as - wounds closed and
opened for no reason.
The hair started break - The hair started to break or hair started
breaking.
There was started a - use of passive voice is inappropriate. A gum
teeth deaealt. disease spread.
the whole people - should be corrected to the people of
they cannot recover themselves - should
be rewritten as till now they have not
recovered from the aftermath of the atom
bomb (certainly to be deleted).
This is world - should be rewritten as This is the most
unfortunate unfortunate event in world history.
(Spelling, grammar, world, order difference between two closely similar
words, not known to the student. The student language use is poor and needs
remedial teaching in many areas.)
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Grammar for re-teaching Correct version Expression used in Higher Classess
by learners?
3. i) (b) a lazy student (ii) (c) an ex-student (iii), (a) a good student
4. Match the clauses:
If you have lost money, contact the police.
If the weather had not changed, the holiday would have been miserable.
5. A few examples are given here. You can try and make more.
i If Jack had studied, he would have passed.
ii If Jill had driven slowly, she wouldn’t have had an accident.
iii If Maria had taken a taxi, she wouldn’t have been late.
iv If Bob had worked he wouldn’t have failed.
(You could construct more meaningful sentences)
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