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Considering the Phonics vs. Whole Language Debate
Ashley Garrigan
The phonics approach and the whole language approach are two of the most well-
known approaches to teaching reading. You might already be familiar with them, even if
you don’t know them by name. Because the two approaches think about the process of
reading in very different ways, there is an ongoing debate about which method is better
for developing reading proficiency. Thinking about theory is one thing, but we each have
our own personal experiences with learning to read, and I began to wonder about my
journey toward reading proficiency. How did my experience of learning to read fit into
this debate? To find out, I called my mother and asked her to tell me how I learned to
read.
“Well, you came down the stairs one morning, saw me reading the paper, and said ‘I
want to do that!’ So I went out and bought the book Why Johnny Can’t Read and a
chalkboard.”
Why Johnny Can’t Read (Flesch, 1986) was a popular book that advocated teaching
reading through phonics. In the phonics approach, the process of reading starts with the
word, and beginning readers learn that letters and sounds work together to form words
(Ediger, 2001; Freeman & Freeman, 2008; Hawkins, 1991). Learners are taught letter-
sound correspondences, how sounds blend together to form words, and to notice
sounds in words; learners then use these strategies to read and recognize written words.
This is exactly what my mother and I did on the chalkboard. Why did she think starting
there was a good idea?
“Because the book said to, and that’s how I learned to read.”
Similarly, Hawkins (1991) notes that many teachers start this way because it just seems
like the natural place to start. Freeman & Freeman (2008) state that phonics proponents
believe that when a learner successfully reads a word out loud, the learner relates the
written word to that word in his/her oral vocabulary. This helps the learner understand
the meaning of the written word. Then, by an extension of that process, the learner
comes to understand the meaning of the whole text (Freeman & Freeman, 2008;
Hawkins, 1991). Okay, but many words in English don’t follow phonics rules. How did I
read those?
Mom’s response: “You just did. Even three- and four-syllable words.”
Hmm. My professional self was highly skeptical of this possibility. And what about words
that I didn’t have in my oral vocabulary? Did I actually understand what I was “reading”?
“You seemed to. I mean, we didn’t have complex discussions about character and plot
development. You were four.”
I still wasn’t convinced. I remembered working with young readers who sounded out
words beautifully but understood very little about the meaning of the text. Because
phonics rules are typically taught in a certain sequence, reading materials used in the
phonics approach control for phonics rules by including only certain words at certain
levels (Ediger, 2001; Hawkins, 1991). So maybe that accounted for my ability to read
texts – I was reading carefully controlled texts. “No, you were reading whatever was on
your bookshelf.” Aha! This was interesting. If this were a true phonics approach, I
wouldn’t be reading such authentic materials. This sounded like the whole language
approach to reading.
So, these books that I was reading – were they books that I had read before with my
parents? And were they on topics that I had some knowledge about? “Probably. You
constantly had a book in your hand starting from when you were about six months old,
and we read to you every night.” Now we were definitely into whole language approach
territory. This fit with Krashen’s ideas about comprehensible input and the use of familiar
texts when learning to read (as cited in Freeman & Freeman, 2008). I also knew that my
parents both loved to read and did so often (which probably had something to do with
my own personal motivation to read!). All of this meant that when I learned to read
independently, I already had some knowledge about the larger picture of what it meant
to “read,” which contributed to my development as a proficient reader.
The conversation with my mother had given me a lot to consider. Without knowing it, she
had exposed me to both the phonics and whole language approaches to reading – she
taught me to sound out and recognize words using phonics but also provided me with
familiar and authentic texts that we read together and I read independently. What did
this mean about the phonics vs. whole language debate? Probably that there is not just
one answer when it comes to teaching reading (see Ediger, 2001, p. 161-162 and
Hawkins, 1991, pp. 169-170 for a discussion of this). So instead of phonics or whole
language – well, how about some of both? It worked for me.
• I was learning to read in English as a native English speaker. What specific challenges
might English language learners face when learning to read using the phonics or whole
language approaches?
You may wish to post your thoughts on the course discussion board.
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[MUSIC] Where am I? What's going on? What is this? I don't seem to know anything. >>
Well, that's a shame. I bet I can help you. >> What's that supposed to mean? >> I just
mean that, you know, if you knew something you could
probably get out of here just fine. Reading is power, don't you know? >> I guess I don't
know. Who are you? >> I'm a teacher. So, you wanted to know where you are. And let
me guess,
you can't even read this simple sign? >> No, I guess I can't. You know, you're pretty
good at guessing. >> [LAUGH] Most good readers are. Here's another guess,
things that you know and there are some things that you could do. >> Like what? >>
Well for starters silly, listen to me. [LAUGH] Let's get to work right away. Now, reading is
a simple thing. [SOUND] While reading was once viewed
variables that operate simultaneously rather than sequentially. Got it? >> Maybe I
should get off this pole and
from the very beginning. A very good place to start. >> Wrong movie. >> Anyway,
do you have automatic recognition skills? >> You mean, do I understand what I see?
Hm, not much,
I think that sound is an O and that Z sound is like a bee buzzing. >> Yes, very good and
that is a start. This sound does make an O,
especially when followed by other vowels, such as A or U, like boat or though. Or when
followed by a consonant and
an E, such as tote or mote. But it also has a short sound. Usually when followed by a
consonant. >> Short sound. And is Z a consonant? >> Yes, great job. >> Then the
sound is Oz. >> Yes, very good. I'll make sure you recognize all of
the sounds consonants and vowels make. But let me ask you a few more questions. Do
you have any vocabulary and
structural knowledge? >> Hm, I guess I don't have that either. How many words do I
need to know? >> Let's start small. About 85% of all communication is
done with as little as 2,000 words. >> 2,000 words? Is that a little? >> [LAUGH]
Compared to the more than
we'll get there eventually. In fact, in the back of this book, there's some vocabulary
builders called
word lists that we'll want to look at. Now, how about your formal
discourse structural knowledge? >> Say what? >> [LAUGH] Do you know, eh, the
difference
between the different kinds of genres. For example, the difference between
I guess I know a little. I mean a text is short. You can use emoticons. Is that
important? >> Well, for good reading, sometimes
transitions, all of that. >> No, I don't know all of that. I don't even know what tropes and
collocations mean. >> Well, it's just the rules of the game. So much good reading comes
from knowing these rules so that you could predict what's coming up. Let me think of an
example
of how to predict. Do you have any world
background knowledge? Okay, let me make this easier. Like if I said, crows are,
you might finish the sentence by saying? >> Pesky corn eating robbers. >> Perfect. So
you do have some world knowledge and that can help you as you read to
know what is likely coming up next. If a reading said something like, the
different kinds of energy, for example. You might immediately think of fossil
fuels, solar energy, nuclear, and? >> Wind? >> Exactly. That is the strategy of prediction.
And prediction comes from both world and
left to right or from up to down? >> Sort of. >> How about like moving
your finger across the page? I can totally do that. >> I guess that's a strategy. But there
are even more strategies to
think about, such as the ability to read and then compare that information
from multiple sources. To think critically as you read. And here is a big strategy,
to ask questions. >> Asking questions is a strategy? >> Scarecrow, you've been asking
me questions this whole time. Don't you see how that has helped
you have a discussion with me? Those questions of yours can lead you
down a path to some amazing discoveries. They can get you thinking and can definitely
help you to look for
be a fabulous reader. >> How about that? Asking questions is a strategy. I didn't even
know. I thought I was just being,
dull-witted, doltish. >> Not at all, you are well on your way. We'll be reading this sign in
no time. You want to come along? >> I sure do. Thanks, Dorothy. [MUSIC]
LESSON 2
harder than teaching the scarecrow. Are you even going to respond to me? >> Not sure,
why? >> Excuse me? Were those words coming out of your mouth? >> Not sure,
why? >> Not sure why? Not sure why! Let me tell you why, first of all
your holding this book upside down. >> Well, I'm still not sure it's
important to be talking to you, can't you see I'm reading. >> [LAUGH] That's exactly why
you should be talking to me. I'm a teacher. >> Please, reading is a solitary sport. It isn't
meant to be done in groups. Please go away you're so wrong, reading is precisely the
kind of sport that should be done with others. In fact, even when you're reading by
yourself, it is not something that should be done passively. >> Whatever, do you
mean? >> Listen, reading is an active sport. It's like a conversation. It involves your mind
and the mind of the writer interacting with each other. It involves you asking questions,
predicting, thinking about the text. And evaluating what you think about the reader's
ideas. >> It seems, well, highly unlikely. I would much rather stay here,
that tree over there. But for the sake of fun, let's pretend that reading is an active
sport, what sport would it be? >> I'd say it would be a lot like tennis, with two people on
opposite sides of the net. So the writer serves you the ball,
dislike about what the writer is saying. >> That does sound like work. Would you say that
is
my book without having to do anything. Then you are missing out on the exciting
part of what you're actually reading. Let me ask you, what are you reading? >> Hm,
some boring story about a man
who goes to an island called Utopia, pretty dry stuff, really. Thomas Moore's Utopia?
That's a fabulous book to talk about and
if you do some work. >> Mm, if you say. >> For example, have you ever imagined
what a perfect world might look like, a perfect society? You mean like there would be no
rain,
And in fact you may have something in common with the Utopians who believe
that everyone should farm and build houses, including the king. You see,
thinking about a perfect society and a perfect place is exactly what Thomas
Moore was doing when he wrote that book Utopia, which is Latin for,
a perfect society. >> Thomas More still sounds like a bore. >> Thomas More was
nothing of the sort. He worked hard fighting
against a king in England, and even got beheaded for standing up to him. Part of his
dislike for kings you can
find in this book which he wrote in 1516. >> Beheaded. That is pretty cool. I'd love to
read that part, but are you saying I can have conversation
with a guy who died hundreds of years ago? >> That is exactly what I'm saying. And
Moore's ideas have been influencing
people all over the world even today To help us think about people, property,
culture, politics, you name it. You know, when I was younger, I used to think a perfect
world would
there are 54 cities in Utopia, and it was originally part of a continent. But the king
decided to have a river to
divide the country from the continent so they could live a life away from others. >> I can
certainly understand that,
that is not the place for me. But, I do love the part where
could get eggs whenever I wanted. >> Any other things you like or dislike? I asked you
to underline
work six hours a day. But really hard, I like the idea of
working hard in a short focused bursts. >> You do? >> Yes. Don't you believe me? I can
work hard, at least when properly
motivated, I just rust easily. >> And I also like that they gave sick
people first choice at getting food. To be honest, that seems kind. >> And what do you
think of the fact
that utopia, they had slaves? >> At first I hated the idea,
thing to do in society. It was like a prison system, really. And if they cheated again? Well,
they were executed. It seems strict, but ultimately fair. Sounds like you have a lot of
opinions on this book, and I'm glad. You know what, I would like to do next. >> You are
not going to gloat are you? So you are right, reading is more fun when
you think of it as an active process. >> No, I'm not going to gloat, too much. What I want
to do is invite
others to share these ideas, and see what they think. And I'd like us to do a few
activities. >> More activities with others? Why is everything so active with you? >> Hey,
trust me, first I want you to hear other people's opinions about how
what each of you, like about his model. And then I want you to design
your perfect Utopian society and tell me what the people in your
society will do, think, and feel. I'll be honest. I bet you could create a society that will
be even more interesting than Mr. Mores. >> I agree. Make my own society? Hm.
>> Yes. Here you go. >> I already have some wonderful ideas,
I know exactly what I would do. >> Okay, wait, I'm excited too but
let's hold on. Let's talk with the other readers first. [MUSIC]
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learner similar to the Tin Man. Learner's who do not connect reading with
active strategies, with movement and with the need to actually engage a text. These learners in
short need to
see reading as interactive and should be engaged not only with a text but
with others around them as well. Almost all lovers of books had a teacher
that opened books and reading to them. And we want you to seriously consider
the importance of your ability to make reading by the very nature of your
involve pre-reading, reading, and post reading activities. In this way, you will immediately see
that
reading is not just a solitary activity but can be enhanced by the teacher and
the class all throughout the process. Let's talk first about
the Tin Man to think about himself and his position on things? In other words, Dorothy connected
the Tin Man's prior knowledge and opinions to the text. The use of have you ever
connecting what the Tin Man might like. She talked about Thomas Moore
support and interest for the reader. As students read, there are also a number
of activities that can be performed to make reading come alive. A teacher might invite students
to look
to share later in the class. Even stop after certain points to meet
with a partner and discuss the reading or predict what might happen next. For groups that need
a lot of support,
you might want to do read aloud or reading circle, wherein there are numerous
filling in the missing word and so forth. Furthermore, there are powerful
teacher techniques, such as pausing, asking questions, inviting students
opening up a book to students' minds and imaginations. As in the side, often discuss the
importance of schema
help you to know what you are reading. Consider, for example, that in a story
focus on geography, politics, occupations, and customs. Each of these topics, geography,
and concepts to different students. Some students may have studied customs for
few things when a teacher invites them to predict what is meant by customs. Food, music, dance.
But others will have a fuller,
can learn upon finishing. For example, now is the opportunity for learners to apply, synthesize,
and evaluate a reading. It is also a chance for teachers to assess what a student
was able to comprehend and recall. Notice that Dorothy wanted the Tin Man
him with the final activity. And notice that the activity she created,
make your own model society, was yet again, another way to share a learner's
own views in contrast to Morris. Thus, post-reading activities are perfect
really show how active reading can be. Think about how powerful these
words are when it comes to creating a post reading activity. Do, choose, transfer,
answer, condense, extend, duplicate, model and converse. To sum up, let me say it again,
inviting the students to read in groups. Post reading activities can invite
recreate a model society. In our next video, you'll discover our last non reader,
one who's love of technology and self, prevents him from doing anything
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pretty in your own way. >> I'm sorry, am I interrupting something? >> Who are you? >> Hi I'm
Dorothy and I'm a teacher. I'm going to teach you how to read. >> But I don't need to read. Who
told you that? And do really have you
I have important things to do. >> But you're just playing around
in a field staring at flowers. >> Important things to do. I have 10,000 followers who agree. >>
Followers? >> Yes, on my blog,
A Lion's Life in Pictures. I pose with flowers, I love flowers. There are posies, and
pansies, and poppies. I have a whole of album on poppies, see? >> Are you doing duck lips
there? >> Maybe? So, why should I read? >> Well, fair question. I guess, well,
you don't have to learn but, I'd hate to have you missed out
on another 10,000 followers. >> I'm listening. >> Well, so I was just looking through
your blog here and it seems like you're missing out on a wonderful opportunity to
share your experiences with your readers. These are just pictures and you mostly
write the same caption in each one. Lion with a puppy. Lion with a pansy. Lion with a. Ugh. I just
think we can do better than this. >> But
how will that give me more followers? >> Here's how it will work. I want to write a story. And that
story will have a star. And that star is you. >> [NOISE] That's exciting. >> I want to write a story
about you and
your love of nature and flowers. And then you're going to read to me,
with me, and tell me what I need to add and revise. >> Story about me. Wow. I never. What will
my mother say,
she'll be thrilled. >> And not just your mother. [LAUGH] We'll post that
story to your blog and people will get to learn even more about
the exciting things that you're doing. So, are you ready to tell me your story? Tell me a little bit
about flowers. >> Well I think it
different kinds of flowers. >> All right, we posted it to your blog. How do you like it? >> I loved it,
are you kidding, I've never really had a teacher
take an interest in me like that. >> [LAUGH] You’re so welcome. I was just wondering though, if
you might
be interested in reading anything else. >> I knew it! You tricked me into thinking you care. Now,
you just want to force me
into reading your icky literature. >> Lion, you know that I care. And in fact, that's why I found a
book that might
be of particular interest to you. >> Wait. You found a book for me? >> I sure did. And in fact, a
few books. So I was thinking about your love of
flowers and how much you love nature, so I thought you might be interested in reading
a little bit more about the natural world. >> Can I see it? >> Yes. >> Wow, let me see. I didn't
even know that
did you know that the Saguaro Cactus flowers pollinated at night
that leads me to a proposition. >> What's that? >> You see, there is this amazing place, you
might have seen the signs,
the emerald city. >> Why would I want to go there? >> So the Emerald City you see has one
of the best gardens in all of the world. It has over 2000 different
types of flowers. >> 2000? That is amazing. Do you know how many
selfies that would be? >> Right. So, I was thinking after you studied a
little more about the Emerald City Garden, here's the brochure,
maybe we could take s little trip there. >> Yes, wow, I would love to go. But, before we journey
with our feet,
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learned from Dorothy's attempts to help out the Lion. The Lion represents perhaps
students, are still finding themselves, have particular interests, and may or
may not have a love of reading. To be honest you will encounter a lot of
readers that simply don't see themselves in the material you are presenting. Whereas the
Scarecrow may
lack the skills to read, and the Tin Man fails to see
did to help our unengaged lion. First of all, try immediacy. By immediacy, we mean that you
focus on
the here and now, on the context that the learners themselves are most
writes down their experiences. And then the students, who are quite familiar with the
experience, can see themselves in print. Notice for example, that Dorothy sat down
and listened to Lion talk about flowers. Then she wrote a story about it,
and had the Lion read and post the story on his blog. I remember the first time I learned
this writer's trick, in six grade. I told a story to my sixth grade class
called, Room 18 and the Jungle Safari. And I had each student star in one of
the many adventures within my small story. I remember how each student was
huddled around me as I told my story. And I realized the reason why. Students love to hear
about themselves. And that is one of the strengths of
the language experience approach. And the language experience approach has
another added benefit, especially for English as a Second Language learners. After a teacher
constructs a story about a
student or students, you can use the story to reinforce phonics, punctuation,
are familiar with the story, the English becomes easier to comprehend. And students are more
likely to work
through the difficulties of the English to understand the story in its entirety. So, our first tip, make
things personally
meaningful and immediately useful. Remember our word, immediacy. Second of all, try
autonomy. By autonomy, we mean that you allow
students to find literature that reflects their current interests and ideas. You may wish to provide
lists and give
your students to explore on their own and find items of high interest. You will find that
authors believe are high interest topics. And you should consider carefully what
these experts think your learners will be interested in. However, every once in a while you will
run across that one difficult reader, that one student that doesn't seem interested
in what everyone else in the class is interested in and may I suggest that
you start doing a little exploring. Find out that learner's hobbies,
interests and background. And then find books and other reading
material that might best suit what that reader might be interested in. You may discover that as
you find literature that reflects that one student, that student will respond in a remarkable way.
Did you see how our lion lit up with
reading is just the thing. Finally try future authenticity. By authenticity, we mean that the readings
that you give the students can and should come from the real
real items like travel brochures, menus, maps and so forth. By future authenticity,
that is not only real, but that they can imagine using for
a script about going to a restaurant in London, only makes sense, if they can
imagine themselves going to London. If you can help sell the idea
of a future context to them, the more likely they will be
I will begin a reading by saying something like, some of you will someday go to
this place, it is an amazing place. Let me tell you about it. Or, if I'm talking about a future event, I
might say, have any of you ever imagined
the lion to go to the Emerald City, and the reading she gave him,
trip they were planning to take? Pretty impressive. By the way, planning a trip around a reading
is
a great way to ensure future authenticity. So there you have it. Dorothy tried immediacy,
autonomy, and future authenticity to engage
means to use a student's own story and context in the readings you present. Autonomy means
to allows students some
freedom to choose material they might be interested in. And future authenticity means to give
learners a reading that can speak to a real future context. An easier way to think about this is
that non engage readers are often most interested in themselves, immediacy. Others like them,
autonomy, and then the
larger world around them, future context. Think of it as three concentric circles. Self, others, and
the world. Well, that is a lot of information. And we've now arrived at the end
of our yellow brick road, or at least the end of our first module. In the next video we'll
certain to be dancing around in your head. Stay with us as we clarify, and thanks
By Elizabeth Mosaidis
Countless possibilities abound for what you can do with The Wizard of Oz in your
reading class and beyond. You’ll find a shortened version of The Wizard of Oz in the
attached Education Manual along with some ideas on how you can incorporate it into
many different types of lessons and curricular units for varying levels and ages. If you’re
teaching children, you might enjoy doing some of the craft activities at the end of the
manual, while if you’re teaching young adults, a few of the writing activities, such as
character analysis or writing a sequel, might fit in well with the objectives for your class.
Here are a few reading activities that you can try out in your classroom to deepen
students’ understanding of the material while also keeping them engaged.
Pre-reading Activities
1. Pre-teach vocabulary with images: Show images of the characters from The Wizard of
Oz and ask students to draw pictures or write down words that they would associate with
the characters in a vocabulary notebook.
2. Prediction: Read the first couple of sentences from the story and ask the students to
write down what they think will happen next. Students share their predictions in small
groups.
During reading
1. Emotion cards: Put students into small groups and give each group a picture of a
character and blank sheets of paper. Start reading the story aloud and stop at different
points in the story. Ask students how their characters might be feeling at this point in the
story. Students should confer with their group members to decide how their character is
feeling, write that emotion down on the blank sheet of paper, hold it up, and have a
spokesperson for the group explain why their character is feeling that way.
2. Sequencing with pictures: Distribute a handout with a series of pictures from the
scenes of the Wizard of Oz. As you’re reading the story, students should number the
pictures in the order that they occur. Alternatively, students could read the story aloud in
small reading circles, numbering the pictures as they go along.
Post-reading Activities
1. What happens next?: Each student imagines that they are a journalist and chooses a
character from The Wizard of Oz. Then they write a newspaper article about what
happens to that character in the future. Students share their articles in small groups.
2. Quiz Bowl: Hand out strips of paper to each student. Students write down questions
to quiz each other on the story. Collect the questions and put them in a fishbowl. Draw
the questions out of the fishbowl and have students write their answers on mini
whiteboards. (If you don’t have mini whiteboards, students could raise their hands to
answer the questions.)
This is just a springboard of ideas to get you started. How will you incorporate a variety
of reading activities into your lessons?
that won't always be the case. Stay with us in this summary video so
you can understand the big picture of what we are trying to get you
problems that are worth considering. >> The first reader, the scarecrow, gave us insights
into the learner
diligent, and willing to learn, but simply doesn't have the information
of knowledge with information. >> However, we show that there are different kinds of
knowledge that students may not possess. First, students may lack
the necessary decoding skills needed to recognize words and word sounds. Thus, you
may need to teach a student to
connect different sounds with letters or groups of letters. Second, you may need to
teach
vocabulary and some parts of speech, as some learners may not possess enough
knowledge to recognize simple sight words. Third, you may have to teach rules
of different kinds of discourse, such as essay writing, newspaper articles, menus and
other styles of writing
that all have their own set of logic. Fourth, you may also need to
that they can understand difficult texts. Finally, you may encounter
students who simply don't employ good reading strategies, and you may wish to teach
some useful
understanding that reading can be done in an interactive and involved way. He thought
of reading as a solitary,
reading is an involved, active process. And that there are many things
the reader can do to expand their ideas about the text. First, we suggested that
activities into three parts. Pre reading, reading, and post reading. Pre reading activities
can include,
that help support, the reader. Reading activities can include inviting
readers to look for certain key facts or inviting them to highlight, take notes, or even stop
reading to share ideas
with a class member or the class. To really involve students, you might want
to invite students to a read-aloud or reading circle and use teacher techniques that help
students
critically respond to the text. >> Our final reader, the lion, was presented as a self
absorbed anti-reading personality. He just didn't have time to read. He didn't think
reading mattered. Dorothy, our master teacher, was able
to confront his un-engaged attitude by finding ways to intrigue him, to peak his
curiosity and to make him want to read. She motivated him through the art of
point of his own story. She used the principle of autonomy, which
shows that many readers are intrigued when they're able to choose
the idea of a future event, and then gave a reading that might help the
lion enjoy that future event even more. She gave the lion a glimpse
into his own future, and then helped him to prepare for it. We have to applaud, Dorothy
for the way she was able to meet all
the needs of all her students. So, did she and her three learners
for us to move beyond the rainbow. And move on to your own adventure. After this video,
will interest your learners. Share why you think this reading would
be appropriate for your learners. While you won't create a lesson plan yet, have in mind
that whatever reading
you choose will be used later on. Finally, we invite you to take the quiz. It isn't meant to
be difficult but it is
meant to ensure that you have been paying attention to the basic
ideas found in this module. We hope you enjoy both of these tasks, and we'll see you in
our next module where we will meet two very unusual characters, a tortoise and a hare
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construct your lesson plan. As you listen, make sure you note some of
the similarities these teachers have with the teachers you learned
caps, and let's begin our second journey. This time into the world of fables. Dear Diary,
strategies,
many different strategies to talk about. How do I share them all? And the debate, there
is always a debate. Some teachers want to teach in the micro,
some want to go small. So sleepy. [MUSIC] >> Hello. This is Joe Axel reporting from
coaches, back in their day, they were fierce competitors with each other, and
of these quality coaches and get some of the tips from the very best. >> I'll go first. Beat
you again, Tortoise! [LAUGH] That guy is so slow. All right, what would you like to
know? >> You have taught literally thousands of
the world at reading a lot. Volume is the answer. In order to read well,
you need to put in the mileage. [SOUND] You need to get lost in books. The people who
become fluent
are those that are able to let go and enjoy the journey of the book. The people who read
well are those that
get the information they want and need. >> So what you are saying is that
students need to read for pleasure. >> That is exactly it, reading for
teacher what you have to read. It's precisely what makes learners
fall in love with reading. If you never love reading, you're never
a library full of possibilities for all learners. In this library are literally
about there interests, and I think about where students want to go,
and what adventures I can take them on. I will often read the first chapter
then invite them to finish that novel. The whole point is to start
a fire in the students, so that they want to start reading. If they get addicted to reading,
I know I have been a successful coach. >> Sounds exciting! And just a couple more
questions. How do you evaluate students who simply
choose to read whatever they want? You can't have an individualized test for
each learner, can you? >> Another great question, Joe. I like to help students share their
adventures with me using book reports, reading logs, picture books, and outlines. They
can do character maps and
that relate to the book, and give a presentation about what they
learned and loved about the book. There are so many ways we can get
students to rev up their motors and go. I don't need to give multiple choice tests
the amount they read, the pleasure they have reading, and their ability to
share their ideas about what they read. My students leave my class bragging,
do that with his learners. He is so green with envy. >> I can still see that you
presents certain, well, weaknesses. >> Yeah, like what? >> Well, some opponents of
yours state
that you tend to under coach learners, that you actually don't teach
reading skills in any detail, and that you tend to focus only on
those that already read well. What do you think of the critique that
you under coach your learners, and especially your poor learners. Are you, in fact, a lazy
coach? So lazy in fact that you fell asleep
once while you were coaching and that you lost an entire competition? >> Look, that
was just once. Obviously, I put a lot
them is to find books they like and to read those books. My approach is
not me. And the work is enjoyable, so sue me! My learners like my class. They read for
pleasure, and they will always read more than those who
decide to hang out with Coach Tortoise. I want you to remember this,
passion fuels proficiency, and you can take that to the bank. >> Well, there you have it,
an intriguing
the Harry Potter novels, read the seventh book all night long. It was exhilarating! [MUSIC]
going over some of the basic concepts and techniques that our modern teacher uses in
order to engage students in
suggested, tend to feel that just giving students a lot of free time to
suggest that those who read entire books are at a decidedly large advantage to
those who might read small paragraphs. Since extensive readers will be exposed
through the small vocabulary lists found in a language classroom. Consider, for example,
that studying
good readers often know seven times that. How do they do it? Proponents would say,
if learners read 25 minutes a day, and learned just a few new words,
that they are unfamiliar with that they will likely learn 1,000 new
words in a single year. That is some serious speed. And remember, it isn't just new
words
that learners acquire when they read for pleasure, but learners also reinforce
knowledge and discourse knowledge, and gain insights into interesting stories and
they must read for homework. Students are allowed to choose whichever
article they want to read and study. Students are required to report on their
reading when they arrive in class, either in partners or in groups. Students may also be
asked to summarize or
her insights into the news as well. Several websites provide easy,
separate room at some schools, where reading and English is encouraged. There might
also be movies and games to
encourage language learning, in general. But the concept of a reading zone is that
it serves primarily as a comfortable place where students can read. This is different from
a library in that
it should feel like a space that students can let her their hair down so to speak. Bean
bag chairs, comfortable couches and walls littered with books,
students to out perform each other. Like a summer book club for
those of you who know what that means. Reading Logs. Giving students a goal other
than reading
comprehension can shift their focus away from precision and towards something
interest them and read at a faster rate. By having classroom goals or competitions,
they all read over 200 pages a week, collectively, I would do a samba
in the middle of a busy street. Did they do it? They sure did. Did I do it? Absolutely.
Evaluative Exercises. One of the most difficult parts of
extensive reading is that learners are basically on their own, and choosing
material that they want to focus on. So how do you test student knowledge? How do you
assess if they have actually
done what you have asked them to do? Most evaluative instructors use book
reports, outlines, and presentations to help learners demonstrate the knowledge
they have gained from extensive reading. A book report generally consists of a
other details from the reading. It could also include a short discussion
of a favorite scene, an opinion about the reading, and any number of questions
you wish to ask in the book report. There are a number of book report
templates to choose from online. And we recommend you find one that allows
you to feel comfortable with the amount and quality of the work necessary to prove
that they have truly done the reading. An outline is another way of inviting
learners to show their knowledge of the reading. Asking students to fill out an outline
gives them the experience of learning how to distinguish main ideas from specific
details and can give them experience in learning how different forms
as top ten new vocabulary words or top ten reasons I love or hate this book, is a good
way to ensure that students give
at finding materials that might meet their needs is so crucial. Did you notice that Mr.
Hare has experience with knowing what books might be at the right level for
with the readability of the text. Is the book too hard for a student? Well here's a quick
rule of thumb for
have students hold up a finger for each word that they do not know,
if they hold up more than five fingers for children, or ten fingers for adults,
the reading is probably too hard. Finally, you may also have noticed that
some of the criticism leveled against Mr. Hare is that he is a lazy teacher. And there are
no doubt some teachers
posing as Mr. Hare that simply have students sit quietly at their desk,
while the teachers themselves, take a nap. When encouraging students to read
extensively, you may wish to spend time individually with students, calling them
up and asking them about their interests, their ideas, and what kinds of readings
you might want to recommend for them. All in all, I love extensive reading. The very
concept of a learner as an
is an empowering and motivating one. And extensive reading, when done right, can help
to inspire curiosity and
attention to Coach Tortoise, who I believe is coming into view. There you are. Come on
over here,
let me ask you a few questions. Great. >> Hello. >> Hello.
students myself learn how to read. >> Yes and I think what is on all the
minds of our listeners out there is this, what is your general philosophy
of teaching reading? How do you do it? >> Well, it is simply really. While Coach Hare
believes that
students can all sit by themselves and learn how to read just by spending
when you just throw them a book. A lot of students need you,
me to be their guide, their helper. And you need to carefully, slowly, thoughtfully teach
them certain
going on in the book they are reading. So fun is not a good primary goal. The primary
goal should
have come to me frustrated and sad because they can't read as quickly or
all of his students well. But he doesn't spend the time to know
about those struggling students who don't read or say as much. They sit there quietly
while
other students have discussions, share presentations, give reports. And in fact some of
his students end
up cheating because they feel so dumb. >> That is scandalous. >> Truly it is. >> So
what do you do to help
your students learn how to read? >> Take my time, of course. I break things down for
students. I ask them to pay attention to
transition words, prefixes, suffixes, to notice major ideas and minor ideas. I might
scramble a paragraph and
make sense of the words and how they all fit together. I teach them to pay attention to
folded
that students can help each other. Excuse me, I'm speaking too fast. >> Take your
time. >> I ask them to get in groups so
that they can support each other. I invite them to rank different ideas and
for them to become successful readers. Take that, Coach Hare. >> And beg my pardon.
What would you say to the criticism that
Coach Hare has often publicly stated that your method is simply too slow? >> I am quite
familiar with coach Hare and
not read as much, what they do read they understand better and deeper, and
better readers in the long term. Slow and steady wins the race. That is what I always say.
When my readers learn how to become good
readers it simply creates more passion, more knowledge, and more success. Coach
Hare's students simply get lost, think that reading just means
getting through something quickly, they never get to savor the flavors of
a well written paragraph or a poem. The truth is, proficiency fuels passion. >> Interesting.
Isn't that exactly the opposite of, what? Hm. Food for thoughts? And one more question,
Coach Tortoise,
you have given me a lot to think about. Some people also believe that you
might well, over coach your students. In other words, you're giving so
and that mine is teacher centered, but that isn't true at all. My method is even more
student centered. I spend more time with
that a teacher simply goes away. Student centered means that a student
exciting ways to improve their reading. My students, in the end will be faster and more
accomplished than any
going slow, but I have seen it myself. And let me remind you,
who won the last most important race. >> Well there you have it, two legendary coaches
giving different
opinions about how to teach reading. I have to admit the reason I became
a teacher was when I watched a careful and knowledgeable teacher like Coach Tortoise,
help me to understand
language that I didn't get. I couldn't believe that she could make
changing Shakespeare could be. Thanks so much to my beautiful teacher. This is Joe
Axle signing off. [MUSIC]
Video 4: Intensive Reading Techniques
[MUSIC] One more time,
techniques are aligned with techniques associated with intensive reading. In short,
intensive reading suggest
for a love of language itself. So, what are techniques that might allow
you to break down difficult readings for your students? Discussions of parts of speech.
One thing that intensive reading
instructors do is pay attention to language in a way that is intensive. This means that a
teacher might point
has the use of active or passive phrases. In other words, the teacher is constantly
show learners how language works. Whereas, the extensive reading teacher
might look at the meaning, the story line, the main ideas of a text. The intensive reading
teacher
can turn that focus to look at the details of language. Morphology. Another item of
interest to the intensive
encourage learners to guess whole meanings from parts, and give them strategies to
break down unfamiliar words themselves. Jigsaw. Jigsaw is a common TESOL reading
activity. There are many variations but
four with one part for each group. So group A reads part A. The students in each group
must read and
take notes on each part of the reading. After each group had finished
reading the assigned section, students form new groups with one member
the members of the new group, and every student should take notes
that the final group must answer, and should monitor each group to provide
guidance and answer questions. Cloze Passage Exercises. The word cloze is TESOL
jargon, meaning
fill in the blank or missing information. A cloze passage generally has missing
students can identify with. So who is right? Coach Hare or Coach Tortoise? Does
proficiency create passion,
like Coach Tortoise explained? Or does passion lead to s? To be honest, I have been
taught by both
teachers throughout my language career. And I'll admit I have gain a healthy
a zoom lens and a wide angle lens. While we might be able to have a healthy
debate about the amount of intensive and extensive reading to have in a classroom,
amounts of texts to consume and enjoy. That's all for now. We'll see you in our summary
video, where
we'll try to prepare you for the quiz, and just allow you a chance to solidify
by Iva Skobic
Fables are a great tool for the ESL classroom. They often use language that is simple
enough for beginning learners, but have lessons and morals which are complex enough
for advanced students. Below are some pre-, during, and post-reading activity
suggestions using "The Tortoise and the Hare," one of Aesop's most famous fables.
Pre-reading: To activate schema and raise interest, the teacher may pre-teach the term
“fable” and “moral” (in a culturally homogeneous class, the teacher may show pictures of
popular fables from the students’ country) and lead a class discussion around the
following questions:
1. The teacher divides the class into groups of 4. Each student receives 1/4 of the story.
Each student reads his/her section and decides whether it should go in the
beginning/middle/end of the story. Students then discuss their sections and put the story
together. Finally, the the teacher provides the full story and students discuss whether
what they did correctly and incorrectly and why.
2. An alternative would be to divide the story into 5, not giving the students the ending of
the story. After putting the story together, the students must write the ending. Then, the
the teacher hands out the actual ending and students discuss the similarities and
differences.
3. After reading the first few sentences, students receive a text with certain words erased
and replaced with a blank space (for example, all simple present verbs) and predict what
words should complete the cloze. Students then continue reading to check their answers.
4. Students are given the fable in sections, having to stop to make predictions after each
section they read, then reading on to see whether or not their predictions were correct.
Post-reading:
1. Students are given access to the PDF of Aesop’s fables. Each s reads 3-5 fables of their
choice and pin-points the “moral of the story.” Later activities (depending on level) can
include presentations on individual fables, mapping which animals represent which
personality traits and why, and comparing similarities and differences in 1) narrative arc,
2) “moral of the story,” 3) characters [always animals!] between these fables and
perhaps fables from the students’ own countries.
2. In groups of 3, students are given a sheet with four blank squares. Students must
summarize the story (lower levels may do this as a class) and then draw a cartoon of the
story (with or without dialogue) to test comprehension and retention.
3. Students choose one character and write a "spin-off" story (for example, what happens
to the disgraced Hare after the race? How did the tortoise learn to be persistent?)
4. Students watch a cartoon adaptation of the Tortoise & the Hare (for example,
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MeZe2qPLPh0), taking notes on the differences
between the story and the cartoon. Then, in groups of 4 or more, students develop and
put on a play with their favorite elements from each version. The class and the teacher
vote on the best (most thorough, entertaining, funny, dramatic, etc.) adaptation.
5. Students play: “How would the story be different if…?” with the the teacher providing
different scenarios and students having to “speed write” their ideas in 2-3 minutes.
Students then rewrite the ending of the story based on their favorite scenario (in groups
in class or individually as homework).
6. Students write journal entries reflecting on a time they and/or someone they know have
been like the tortoise and/or the hare. More advanced/older classes may comment on
how the lessons in the Tortoise & the Hare may apply to their personal/professional lives
and/or politics or world events, while lower-level/younger students may comment on
their own lives.
7. Students choose a fable from their own country, then journal about the
similarities/differences between that fable and its moral and the style and moral of the
Tortoise & the Hare. Another option would be to retell their country’s fable in the style of
Tortoise & the Hare.
you prepare for the final quiz and to solidify some of the key concepts
we've introduced in this module. So what did we introduce? First of all in this module we
presented
two different philosophies towards reading instruction, through two legendary
coaches, Mr. Hare and Mr. Tortoise. >> We first introduced Coach Hare, Mr.
readers should read a lot and that the experience of reading should be,
giving them a lot of different choices in books and by creating opportunities for
them to share their learning in the class. >> Coach Hare's philosophy is associated
with the real world techniques of extensive reading. Extensive reading in short suggests
that
articles in something that can be called a newspaper corner. Using this technique,
teachers encourage
students to select topics that are interesting to them, and come to class
ready to discuss the article in class. The creation of reading zones is another
to help promote reading among students. Reading logs are also often used by
extensive teachers to help learners to keep track of how much they have read and allow
learners to set goals either
doesn't care about learners enjoying themselves, but rather that the way to enjoy
reading comes
first through understanding how to read. To share the contrast most clearly, we could
say that Coach Hare believes
that proficiency fuels passion. Make sense? >> Intensive reading strategies
are also too many to list, but we did share a few principal techniques. First, many
intensive reading teachers
try to break down sentences into parts of speech, helping learners understand
the difference between verbs, nouns, adjectives, adverbs, and so forth. Intensive
teachers also try to break
down words themselves through a look at morphology. Helping readers understand that
prefixes,
suffixes, bound and unbound morphemes all carry bits of information, meaning that
also take entire reading and break it down into different sections
take a portion of the text, analyze it thoroughly and then meet with other groups
in an effort to share what they learned. The idea of a jigsaw is that collectively, students
can understand
read a text, often by having the teacher read it out loud and then allowing
learners to fill in the blank. This gives readers a chance to improve
individual word meanings and ideas. This also gives learners practice in
predicting what words might best fit into a category, especially if learners attempt the
close
passage without listening to anyone. They simply use the word bank provided. >> So,
which teacher really
intensive reading are something for you to consider for all of your students. And certainly
we recommend
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discussed reading and reading strategies. In the first module, we gave you
strategies to help engage non-readers. And in the second, we helped you to think about two
different
Wizard of Oz and Tortoise and the Hare, are intended to help improve your
memory to help you retain key concepts. We hope that you have enjoyed them so far. We will
now be introducing you to
key concepts in ESL writing theory. These key concepts have roots in rhetoric, linguistics,
English as a second language,
many approaches and philosophies. Our purpose in the next two modules is to
writing in the simplest way possible. That's what I'm going to do. All right, I need to talk about
the writing process, no doubt. And of course, it is important to talk about proficient
face when they teach writing, especially the problems of appropriation. That's a weird word,
appropriation. Almost sounds nice. Appropriation isn't nice at all. It's just, gosh, I'm so sleepy.
[MUSIC] We find ourselves in the middle of
the classroom, where young Hansel and Gretel have come to learn about writing. We are also
introduced to a teacher,
she's a rather inexperienced teacher, [SOUND] with a bit of a control streak. [SOUND] Now let's
watch our
two heroes try to figure out the teacher's writing assignment. >> Okay, class. Today's
assignment is simple. I want you to write me an essay
about your dream home. What would your dream home look like? What would you put inside it?
Ready, go. Start writing. What's the matter? Get going.
You don't want me to turn you into toads, do you? >> Sadly, our teacher doesn't seem
quick tips would help her students to write successfully. >> Seriously, cut that out. I can totally
hear you. >> She finally realized that if she
figure a few things out. >> Nonsense? I'm not talking to the ceiling. I'm okay, sure, right.
Nonsense, whatever. What might I figure out? >> The witch looks into
comes upon a brilliant idea. The idea is simple. Why not divide the writing task
into more manageable pieces? >> Like what? >> The witch starts speaking to the
decides to settle in and create some fantastic writing assignments. First, she decides to come up
with
activities that help her students to think of the general features of a home. She wants them to
explore possibilities
of what homes have in preparation for writing about their dream homes. She thinks of questions
to ask,
freely and explore their own thoughts. >> Sounds pretty good. >> She said out loud, and
then she thought of a second assignment. She realized that students often
don't understand what to write. How long should the assignment be? Does it have a traditional
structure, such
requirements that she is looking for? She realizes that she needs to give
students a clear idea of her expectations, that it might help students if she
provided models and guidance for what a good essay might look like. >> I can give them an
example
of my own dream house. I do love candy. >> She said in almost frenzied madness. And then she
recognized that students will
need a chance to test out their ideas, to work together as partners, and that she will give
feedback to them
as they create their first drafts. Finally, the witch places her three
each assignment one by one. >> Why don't I just hand them
she doesn't ask questions about it. She just lays them on the ground, evenly
spaced, and Hansel and Gretel go along, and pick them up. >> Fine. Here you go, Hansel and
Gretel. Happy gathering! >> Look, it's like a clue! >> We'll be to our dream house in no time!
[SOUND]
>> I see where you're going with this. Very clever! >> Thank you. [MUSIC]
Video 2: Process Writing: Leaving
Breadcrumbs
[MUSIC] Welcome back to teach English now. We have asked you to join in the journey
of two students who struggle with writing, Hansel and Gretel. And who are being asked by a
teacher
can be difficult and even more so in a foreign language. I believe it is safe to say that
when it comes to writing. So why do students feel overwhelmed? There are a variety of reasons.
Some students fear that
not meet the teacher's expectations. And some students fear that
their ideas are well terrible? Furthermore, less proficient writers tend
students that have so many fears? One of the simplest answers according to
and composition experts, rhetoricians and well, just about any writing
the paths of the students. You may have noticed that our teacher
would like to align to pre-writing, writing and post writing activities. Pre-writing, did you
notice how our teacher couldn't engage her learners to write. And so she was instructed to think
of
activities to help her students think. She was told to create lists, questions,
to say that pre-writing is reading, it's thinking, it's speaking. How do students know what to
write if they don't read, if they don't speak with each other,
get students talking, reading and thinking about the topic that you wish for
make them want to write about something. Help them realize that they do have
thoughts about what they're going to write about. We'll discuss specific pre-writing
techniques in our next module. Writing Assignments and Rubrics. Another reason students get
overwhelmed, is because they are afraid that they
can´t get into the teachers head. They don´t know what the teacher wants,
set very clear boundaries and rules, and in general it is wise to always
specifics on the length of the paper, the due dates for portions or
drafts some of the paper, and basic writing conventions. For example, is it double spaced,
handwritten, typed? Is it in a particular font size? What are the size of the margins? For some
students, this element of
you may be asking for the use of specific vocabulary words, transitional phrases, sentence
this can give added clarity for students as to what your expectations are. Finally, giving some
students examples,
learners have about what you expect. If you can give several models and even
discuss the strengths and weaknesses of each model, then that will give students
and idea of what you are looking for. Write and Discuss. Another problem among less proficient
writing is an important part of the collaborative process. Thus one of the most
students to talk about their writing. This often called peer review. While we don't have a lot of
I'll be honest, some teachers hate it. I recommend that you always give
students a chance to give real feedback to other students. Why do I feel strongly about this?
Well, because even professional
writers need help. Did you know that writers get together? Throughout history there
questions, and revise their own thinking. Socrates had Plato and Xenophon. Virginia Wolfe had
the E.M.
Forester and John Maynard Keynes. J.R.R. Tolkien had C.S. Lewis. And even the rugged
individualist,
Ezra Pound and F Scott Fitzgerald. Since writing is a process, it is okay to show your unfinished,
less proficient work to others. This is, however, a huge challenge for students who seldom want
to look
language learning is risk taking and looking foolish. Here you will have to encourage
students to speak with each other. Not just so that they can say nice things,
but give serious feedback and suggestions. I love to show students the feedback
the subject of our next video. Let's get into more specifics about
made the first draft of their dream home. >> Looks good, doesn't it? I've shown them a model
of exactly what I wanted. It has everything you would need. It has gingerbread walls and candy
windows,
everything in it is edible and delicious. Inside, right in the middle of the floor,
let's take a look at what we made. We made the doorknob out of marshmallows,
just like the teacher asked. >> That sure is sticky. Wonder why you would ever
what are you talking about? >> Well, for one, why is there a cauldron in the middle of the main
room? >> [LAUGH] That's so I catch a child and
quickly, I don't know [LAUGH]. >> Well, you see the problem is,
I'm kind of into organic. >> Into what? No! >> Yes, you know, whole grains and
Maybe we could have a garden out back? >> I was thinking of like a weight room. I like to work
out you know, and
can the house be near a river? I also enjoy fishing, and then I
that isn't what I had in mind at all! I had very specific requirements! I wanted everyone to-
>> It was at that moment that the witch lost her voice entirely and
their home and as they looked at each part of the home, they noticed several
things that they didn't like at all. This exercise of reviewing your writing,
their work and changing things. In some sense, writing is like that. You may come up with
different ideas you
want to add, take out ideas you don't like anymore, or change the order
like playing a musical instrument, things are never perfect the first time. Musicians constantly
have to
go back to problem areas and practice them until they feel smooth. In writing you go back to
your writing. You read it again and again and then you
change it until well it feels smooth. Here are a few tips to help your
students in the smoothing process. First, go global first. When we talk about global changes we
mean changes in organization, order, and in the ideas themselves. Many students and
sometimes teachers focus
primarily on the grammatical items and, as a result,
forget to focus on thoughts and ideas. As a teacher, don't fix grammar until you
body paragraphs, and coherent ideas. You can do this by inviting students
to think about moving thoughts around. Or by omitting and adding entire thoughts
that may help to make meaning more clear. You might invite them to add evidence or
the actual physical task of writing and express their ideas in a different way, helps them break
free of their
draw pictures that represent their ideas in the order they want them to
their focus on the ideas and the order they are presented in rather
than on individual words and sentences. Second, help students feel comfortable
with the idea that they can challenge you. Notice that our witch didn't really
want students to change their ideas or their dream house. In fact, one of the problems with
writing
assignments that are too detailed or provide too many models, is that teachers impose their
the student's own ideas and language, but the teacher's. In other words, while it is important
important to the writing process. While you, for example, may really like
gingerbread walls with a liquorice roof, that doesn't mean that your
students may feel the same. Hansel and Gretel didn't really like
the witch told them to. The marshmallow doorknob and the cauldron
were what the witch needed, but not them. Helping give students some freedom
writers feel that writing isn't for just the instructor. But it is for the students to
explore their own ideas and feelings about a subject. Finally, remember that as
the term recursion implies, this process may have to happen several
draft their writing will improve. And they can begin to focus on things
like grammar, word choice and mechanics. When you provide feedback at each stage
of the process, be positive and begin by pointing out what they have done well
and offering suggestions for improvement. When you are providing feedback
rewrite the student's sentences yourself. Instead, point out their mistakes, and ask them to
rewrite the incorrect
portion to make it clearer. Not only does this help you avoid
through the language on their own and improve their grammar and
vocabulary skills that much quicker. So what do you think? Should we give our teacher another
chance? Let's see how she does in our next video. [MUSIC]
with the second draft you have here. The kitchen is in the corner,
which is near the back door to the garden. That's smart. Well, that is different,
the house is near a river. I like that. The river is near the garden,
which of course helps the garden grow. Excellent. I also see that you've included
a weight room next to the kitchen. A weight room will help you exercise and
really good on carpets. >> That's true. Good idea, thanks for the feedback. >> Any comments for
me? >> Well, since it looks like you want
an organic theme, perhaps, you could have some wheatgrass growing right there
on the window sills in your kitchen. I think that might look good. And it might make for
easier access when making smoothies. >> Smoothies? I love smoothies! >> Yes, great idea! I
love the idea of bringing the garden
>> What just happened? >> Looks like we don't have a witch
trying to control students anymore, but a full-fledged teacher. [LAUGH] Glad to have you back. >>
Why, thank you. I promise I am completely reformed now. Although I do have some suggestions
for
>> There you have it, our teacher has finally learned how to help her
that isn't appropriative and that offers critical thought. In other words, instead of taking over the
project, she now serves as a consultant even, if you will, an interior designer,
giving suggestions and patterns and possibilities But letting the homeowners,
the writers, make up their own minds. In our next video, we will take a look
at the main points we've covered in this module and review some things
that will help you on your quiz. We'll see you then. [MUSIC]
the overall process of writing, and given you some tips to help you
provide feedback to your students. Let's summarize what we discussed. >> In our first video, our
teacher
did not see writing as a process but something that you simply sit down and do. The students,
Hansel and Gretel,
were overwhelmed when they were told to write about their dream house,
[LAUGH] breakdown her larger assignment into smaller ones that Hansel and
we gave you some tips on how to break down writing assignments into bite-sized
chunks that your students can comprehend. We suggested that you organize
the importance of helping students know what you expect of them by giving
them clear directions and a clear rubric. These should include specifics on
or grammar patterns, etc. Along with clear directions and a rubric, you can provide models that
clearly
show your students what they should do. As we mentioned in course three, it is
just copy your models. You may also want to provide models after
the students have completed a first draft so you don't stifle students' creativity,
second video was about discussion. Don't let your students just sit,
especially your less proficient students. Get them talking about ideas and
how they would organize them. Get them reviewing each other's
don't need to go it alone and they don't always need the teacher
our teacher working with Hansel and Gretel to review their first draft. Our teacher didn't
understand
listen to her student's ideas, while our students got the chance
the recursive process. Our first tip was to go global first. Going global means
ideas and how they want to present them. Once you are certain students
have got the ideas and organization down, then you can begin
to focus on more specific things. >> Our second tip was to help you,
their creativity through writing. Don't be afraid to let them challenge your
ideas and make their writing their own. On a similar note, when you
students' sentences for them. Point out where their mistakes are and
offer suggestions, but let the students do the rewriting so they can improve
their grammar and vocabulary skills. >> Then we saw our teacher take a second
while helping them by making suggestions that might make their writing
stronger than it would be on its own. >> Now, it's your turn. Think of a writing assignment that
you like to give your students. Think about how you would break down
the assignment into pre-writing, writing and post-writing activities. What readings could you
give to your students to help them build schemata on the topic? What vocabulary do they need
to know? How you can you get students talking
about the topic, and the writing? You may want to choose your writing
assignment based on the reading you chose in modules one and two. In the writing prompt that
follows
this video, describe how you would breakdown the writing assignment and what
post-writing steps of the process. >> You'll also take the quiz, of course. Feel free to go back
and review any videos
for any concepts you are unsure of, and get on those discussion boards
if you have any questions. Good luck. In our next module, we'll focus
you watched as our inexperienced teacher, or witch, learned how to help her students
make it through the writing process. And you saw Hansel and Gretel, our
students, go from not understanding how to write about their dream house to creating
a dream house they could both be proud of. The focus of that module was to help you
that students don't feel overwhelmed. We mentioned several times that we would
talk about specific strategies for each part of the writing process, and
that is the focus of this module. You will learn specific strategies you
can use in the pre-writing, writing, and post-writing phases. Of course, there are many more
strategies
learn about strategies. And that you will look for additional strategies you can use to help
your students become successful writers. All right, let the magic begin. How can I teach people
writing just seems to happen like magic. I suppose it is like magic when a student
finally produces a wonderful piece of writing. But how to help teachers get
own thoughts and ideas through writing. Definitely. But there's so much [SOUND], so
much more than that, so much more. [MUSIC] >> It's no use. I just can't think about what to write.
How am I even supposed to write about my
future husband if I haven't met him yet? And how am I supposed to meet
>> Who has summoned me? No, really. I want to think them for
cramped it is in there. Hello down there. You must be the one who beckoned me. I am at your
service. >> [LAUGH] [APPLAUSE] Wonderful! This is exactly what I needed. I get three wishes,
right? Okay, for my first wish, I wish that I had the best paper ever
written about my future husband. >> Hold on a minute! I can't just can't give
regulations that govern your wishes. Well-written papers don't just appear
out of thin air, they take hard work. >> Well, what's the point? I've been trying to write
this paper all week and I'm on a flying carpet to nowhere. It's due next week and
I don't even have one word written. What am I going to do? What good are three wishes if I can't
even
get a well-written paper out of the deal? >> Wow, really laying on the melodrama? Let's not get
accused of overacting any
more than absolutely necessary, okay? That's usually my job. Now, I didn't say it was impossible,
I just said it takes hard work. All you need is a good tutor. Now that is a wish I can grant. >>
Really? Okay, okay I wish for the best
writing tutor in the world to help me. >> Your wish [SOUND] is my command. Now, let's get
started. >> Wait, you're my writing tutor? >> Hey, what can I say? I'm over 10,000 years old,
know about good writing. If you had asked for an average tutor,
someone else might have shown up. But you did ask for the best. Now, let's begin with a brief
review. First and foremost, good writing
>> Process, I know, [SOUND]. >> And has how many steps? >> Three steps. Pre-writing, writing,
and post-writing. >> Exactly. Good job. So, on to step one. First, let's focus on the object and
about your future husband. Is that right? What a delicious topic. So, tell me about Dreamy
McDreamy. >> You mean my husband? That's the problem. I haven't even met my future
husband yet. So I don't know anything about him. This paper is supposed to help the
matchmaker find me the right man so that I don't end up with someone with no teeth
>> Doesn't like bad breath, hairy toes. Guess that eliminates me. Okay, excellent. You are
already starting to think. And I see you are thinking in terms of
that you prefer good breath, a trim physique, and hairless toes? Let's see if we can
of Teeth to look like? >> Look like? Well, let's see. Well, he should be handsome, of course. I
really like guys with long, flowy hair. And it should be dark colored. Like black or dark brown.
What else? He should be strong, but not too muscley. And he shouldn't have any facial hair.
[SOUND]
>> Not too muscly, doesn't have any hair on his face. Sort of a prepubescent Justin Bieber. >>
What? >> Nothing. All good. I think I have a good idea of
your hairless wonder of a man. Now, let's write those down [SOUND]. Now appearance can't be
the only characteristic. How about, for example, his job? >> Well, he should have a job,
pays him well so we don't have to worry about money all the time
those men are undoubtedly the manliest. Let's add those to our list [SOUND]. Now I've got a
series of questions and
out of your own head. >> Genie! If you weren't so old and blue and creepy, you just might be
trouble writing about her future husband. We also introduced you to her
writing tutor, the Genie. Who helped her come up with some
ideas to help her get started. In this video, we want to take a few
minutes to explain some of the strategies the Genie used to help begin writing. As with many
other aspects of teaching
language, our purpose as writing teachers, is to equip students with a set of skills
they find themselves in. One very important set of skills your
them produce better quality writing. It's a sort of toolkit, if you will, full of tools they
can pull out when the need arises. Before we talk about these
specific strategies, however, there are two things we need to discuss. First, I want to introduce
you
quality writing that teachers look for and that are found in good writing. The six traits are Ideas,
before focusing on other parts of writing. Why do I say this? Well, language teachers are
notorious for
way to think of the six traits. If you remember, we also talked about
breaking writing into prewriting, writing, and post writing steps. These six traits can be
associated with each of the three parts
purpose and audience for their writing. In the writing phase, a writer has to
focus on the ideas, organization and voice, but also has to consider what vocabulary they
want to use to best convey their message. And how their sentences fit
where the writer makes revisions. Here the writer may add or
clearer and easier to understand. They will also focus on conventions, making sure they have
used the correct
we may refer to these six traits again. Before I give you specific strategies,
use outlining as a strategy, for example, make sure you model outlining,
strategies you can teach to your students. One of the hardest parts about
the main content of their writing. Many students struggle with writing
because they just can't come up with ideas about the topic they've
been assigned to write about. And the truth is, students think that
ideas should just spring out of their heads, quickly and easily. But guess what? All of us need to
have our minds opened,
our pumps primed so to speak, and our imagination and ideas unlocked. You in a real sense are
a genie working
your magic to unlock student minds. So how do you do it? First, good writing is good reading.
Many students lack world
knowledge about the topic. They simply don't understand what
nuclear energy is, for example, and thus they can't write about it. In order to help students
overcome this problem, you need to help them learn how to build
teach students how find to articles on the Internet or in the local library
about the topic they are writing about. Students can also learn about a topic
more about the topic than the student. This could be a classmate,
a family member, a teacher, and so on. Of course, it could also refer to someone
who is truly an expert on that topic. The point is to help students learn what
resources are available to them and how to find what they need in order to learn
about the topic they're writing about. Second, good writing is good thinking! Even though
students have sufficient
ideas out of their head and narrow them down without some amount
of just plain old good thinking. In this case, your job is to help
students think about what they know and whittle down their ideas
into something usable. This is often called brain storming. One excellent way to help
everything they know about a topic. Some people call this free writing. Free writing is simply
writing down
to help students simply get everything they know about a topic out
of their heads and down on paper so they can see it all in one place. As E.M. Forster once said,
how do we know what I think until I write? In other words, good writing
I didn't even know I thought that. Or, I didn't realize I knew that much. That is the power of free
writing. Finally, good writing is good speaking. A third strategy to help students come
up with ideas is to have them share their ideas with others in a group
good writing is good speaking. In this method, you might have students
complete a free write or brainstorm and then have them switch papers
of the ideas in their classmates paper. Or you may ask students to find a partner
and just spend five minutes talking about their topic while their partner takes
notes on what they said, then they switch. Partners can also come up with additional
ideas about a topic that maybe the student hadn't thought of. As we mentioned in our last
module,
even great writers don't just go it alone. Don't be afraid to have students work
together to come up with ideas for their writing assignments. Well, I hope you find these
many other strategies and methods you and your students can use to come up with
interesting ideas to write about. You may want to ask your colleagues
come up with their ideas, they are ready to start thinking about
how to group those ideas together and organize them into a cohesive composition. In our next
video,
we'll get a chance to see how and the Genie organize ideas
much easier to write. But I'm stuck again. How am I supposed to know
which ideas to include and how to put all these ideas together? What do I talk about first? I need
help. [SOUND]
>> Did I hear, you asked for help? What's wrong master? Still having trouble with
that writing assignment? You know, you still have two wishes left. >> Hey genie, I'm stuck on
how to put
all my ideas into my writing assignment. I don't suppose I could just wish for my ideas to
magically
appear in the best order? >> You know it doesn't work like that but, you don't need magic to
organize your ideas. You just need a good tutor to help you. Let me hear you say it. >> All right. I
wish for a writing tutor to help me. >> What kind? Just any old tutor? >> Well, all right. How
should I say it? >> How about the bestest,
tutor in the world to help me. >> Well, how about that, here I am. All righty then,
let's get down to business. So, you've got all your ideas, now we need to think about
the best way to organize them. >> But how do I know which ideas should
come first and which should go together? There's just too many ideas, genie. >> Well, I
remember,
ideas group together naturally in some way that makes sense. For example, you've written kind,
happy and fun-loving, hard working. Do all of those fit together at all? >> Well, yeah. Those are
all personality traits
those ideas together, right? >> Of course. Are there any other ideas
together as talents? >> Perfect, now once we have all the groups we can
start thinking about the order. and which ideas to include and
which ideas to throw out. >> Okay, how do we do that? >> Well, you start by thinking about two
to read your writing. So, what ideas do you think the matchmaker
needs to know about your future husband? >> Well I think the categories
job, personality, and talents. And I have a few other too like family and
make sense can be most difficult. You have conquered it with great ease,
your paper and convince the matchmaker that Sir Hairless the Toothy Grin
is the perfect match for you. >> [SOUND] Wow, thanks Genie. I think I've got it from here.
[SOUND]
>> Of all the times to be called, I was just in the middle of making
a delicious, master, how may I help you? >> Genie, I just don't get it! I was doing well with
grouping
it just doesn't seem to flow right. I can't seem to figure out how to
>> What >> One last wish. >> That. Okay, sure. What do I say again? Genie, I asked for
the bestest, most amazing. >> Most incredible, most magnificent! >> I didn't have to say that last
time. >> Hey, humor me,
it's the only perk of this job. Well that just incredible,
magnificent writing tutor in the whole wide world to help me out. >> Well, look at that still me.
[LAUGH] What a surprise,
now let's get to work. Having troubles organising ideas? Well, I think I have just the thing. But
first, let's talk audience and
purpose again. >> Well, how will that help me organize? >> Just humor me for now. Audience,
our matchmaker, purpose,
to get a hunka hunk of not so muscly man. Hey, your words not mine. Okay now let's get into
specifics. Tell me about your match maker? What does she prefer in her writing in
your writing, what has she asked for? >> Well I'm not so sure. She asked me to write an essay
describing
the most important characteristics of my dream husband. >> Sounds like you've done just that. >>
But how do I know what
ask again, what do you know about her? What can you guess about her
own priorities in choosing men? >> Well, I know she has a very
what do you know about these interviews? >> Well I know she usually finds
out what they think and feel. So, I guess I should include ideas
about his personality and his talents. >> Yes, exactly right. If that is her priority,
finding out personality and talents. You can rightly assume that
she will be asking you to write about personality and talents. Excellent, that is what is meant
by writing for your audience. Anything else? >> Well at the end of the interviews, she usually has
someone else
anything about his looks. >> I think you are onto something. Since it isn't a part of
but I think. >> And I just remembered, did you know, she herself was a princess who
married a pauper who wrote poetry. So, she probably doesn't care
I should steer clear of that one too? Should I talk about poetry? [LAUGH] I don't even care about
poetry. Okay yes,
well you certainly know what I mean now, by paying attention to your audience. And you have
certainly organized your
>> What? >> Well here's the thing, most important to her may not be
don't forget purpose. >> What do you mean? >> Just this, while it seems that
little to our matchmaker. And trust me, I have seen her husband and I can tell you that
appearance
>> Well do you care about appearance? Do you care about family position and
prioritize the same way you do. doesn't mean you simply have to go in
this is your husband we're talking about. In other words, while it is important to think of
your matchmaker's thoughts and ideas. That doesn't mean you shouldn't think
about what is most important to you. It's a balance. >> I think I understand. Well, how about this
then? So I really don't care so
much about family position much either, so I can definitely put that last. But I still want to include
appearance and
in a way that isn't, well. >> Offensive to her troll of a husband? >> Precisely, maybe I can write
about how appearance, for me is like poetry, but visual poetry. So she can relate to
why I value appearance, even if it isn't a value to her. >> You're good. [SOUND] What? What
just happened? I'm not a tutor anymore. >> [LAUGH] No, I think it means
that you're not the bestest, most amazing writing tutor
in the world anymore. >> What in heavens do you mean? >> Don't you see? The bestest,
it looks like my work here is done. Goodbye Sherazadi. You are now truly the master! [SOUND]
[MUSIC]
help Scheherazade take all her wonderful ideas about her future husband and
organize them in a way that made sense. In this video, we will take a closer look at some of the
strategies the genie gave Scheherazade and how you can help your students add these
a clear understanding of what voices, especially since it affects organization. Simply put voice
refers to the author,
of connection, which is fun and generally easy. Reading something without that kind of
connection is boring and difficult. Each writer will have their own voice,
their own way of connecting with readers. A writer must consider voice to help
them determine which ideas to share and how to organize those ideas into a clear,
their readers would want to read. Voice, by the way is one of the hardest
things to teach in a second language, but we believe it is an essential part
how to create voice for beginning, intermediate and advanced students. Please make sure,
you take a look at that reading. Anyway, now let's return to organization. Why organize? Well,
the truth is free writing and
out isn't the same thing, as having a coherent piece of writing. And knowing which ideas are
most relevant
and which ideas you should throw out, and which order they should go in is
a thinking process in, and of itself. So, what strategies do writers use to
help them lay out their ideas in a way that makes sense? There are several, but we'll talk about
three specific ones in this video. No matter which strategy you choose,
their ideas and group that mess together. One strategy that is commonly used to help
organize ideas is the use of an outline. There are various methods for structuring
an outline using a variety of notation methods, numbers, letters and so forth. But in general,
an outline is basically a list. A list of ideas grouped together. Each group represents one
subsection of
in a much longer writing assignment. The ideas are generally written in note
form that is not in complete sentences, but enough for the writer to
remember the gist of the idea, so they can take that idea and
the topic in the center of the page and then writes words or
personality and perhaps family. Then for each of these subtopics, the writer writes supporting
how ideas fit and flow overall. A third strategy that works, especially well with kinesthetic
learners
talked about with the other strategies. In this strategy, the ideas for each
subsection are written on a separate page. The writer puts the topic of
the subsection at the top and then writes all the supporting ideas for
page allows the writer to take a step back and look at the order of the subsections,
and then easily move subsections around to find the order that is the clearest,
and makes the most sense. Of course, many writers employ multiple
strategies when organizing their writing. They might start with a mind web to help
them group their ideas together and then move to an outline where they can include
more detailed notes about each idea. They might even use paragraph blocks
to present their ideas. Being able to pick and choose from different strategies in the
organizational strategies. Make sense so far? Get out those ideas and
then impose order or form upon them. That's the idea. Outlining, mind webs or paragraph blocks.
All excellent way to impose order
on a reckless number of thoughts. That's certainly how it feels
I simply have to trim them down. Remove some of them entirely and order them in a way that my
audience will respond to. Did you know that one of the hardest
parts of writing is getting rid of the thought or paragraph that doesn't fit,
you just don't fit. I'll miss you. Still, good writers understand
that sacrifices must be made for the benefit of the audience. Well, that's it for this module. In our
next video, we'll summarize
what we've covered in this module and help you prepare for the module quiz. We'll see you then.
[MUSIC]
Upon getting her driver’s license in high school, my friend Teresa became a terror on the
streets. She chatted on her cell phone while driving, consistently failed to check her side
mirrors before changing lanes, and zoomed 10-15 miles over the speed limit at any
given time. I, on the other hand, drove hunched nervously over the steering wheel, eyes
darting from side to side, usually crawling at around 2-3 miles under the speed limit.
And yet, I was the first of the two of us to get a traffic ticket.
Teresa had been stopped before, sure, but when she just widened her eyes, teared up,
and apologized profusely, the police officers let her off with a warning. Upon finding
myself in the same situation, however, I became so terrified that I went mute, barely
squeaking out a “sorry” before accepting my $120 ticket.
Unfortunately, even the best writing class may neglect voice in favor of grammar,
structure, information, and other more tangible writing skills. In fact, many teachers
assume that voice cannot be taught - that students must organically “discover” their
voice through extensive writing.
As you may gather from this article, that is not our view on voice! Student writing that
does not employ appropriate or strong personal voice may not incur a traffic ticket, but it
will make for bland, uninspiring reading. There are a number of tactics English language
teachers can use to inspire and instruct students to write with strong and appropriate
voice even as very novice language learners. Here are some ideas, by level:
Basic levels: At basic levels, students need guidance, structure, and instruction. However,
these elements should not prevent them from “discovering” their voice! Writing
assignments which require students to draw on their own world knowledge and life
experience naturally lead students to develop voice in their writing, as do writing
assignments that speak to students’ personal interests and areas of expertise. In
addition, asking students to write simple texts with a specific audience in mind (a family
member, a favorite sports player, a romantic partner) will achieve much the same end.
Intermediate levels: The concept of voice may be explicitly introduced at the intermediate
levels. Students should be exposed to a variety of examples of texts that employ strong
voice. Vocabulary building and guided use of a thesaurus are particularly important at
this level as students struggle to understand increasingly complicated material and
convey ever more complex and subtle messages in their writing.
1. Read and evaluate simple scenarios written from a variety of points of view (for example,
a description of a trip to the grocery store written from a mother’s perspective, a child’s
perspective, a single person’s perspective, and the cashier’s perspective).
2. Actively reflect on how the narrator’s point of view and intended audience may affect the
voice of a text.
3. Read similar texts written for different audiences (an email to a college professor, a peer,
and a trusted adult, for example) and discuss how the voice of a text changes
depending on intended audience.
4. Rewrite texts from a variety of perspectives (e.g. recounting a trip to the grocery store
from the perspective of the car being driven to the store).
5. Perform “dramatic readings” or even put on plays based on their assigned reading as a
way to reinforce that writing can have drama, personality, and distinctive style and tone.
Advanced levels:
1. Rewrite the endings of news articles and stories to change the “moral” of the story.
2. Rewrite texts from the third to the first or second person, or experiment with active vs.
passive voice.
3. Write on topics about which they have very strong opinions, or which are controversial
(depending on students’ ages and the teaching context).
4. Include humor or irony in their writing, and to evaluate how this affects the quality and
impact of the text.
One particularly fun activity involves dividing the class into 4-5 groups. Each group is
given a 1-2 sentence scenario and a list of adverbs (angrily, jealously, trustingly,
innocently, etc.) and must rewrite the scenario once for each adverb. The scenarios are
written or projected on the board and the other groups must compete to label each
scenario with the appropriate adverb based on the voice of the text.
General tips:
Works Referenced
http://blog.penningtonpublishing.com/writing/how-to-develop-voice-in-student-writing/
http://www.quickanddirtytips.com/education/grammar/understanding-voice-and-tone-in-
writing#sthash.pcm1JQsH.dpuf
http://aprendeenlinea.udea.edu.co/revistas/index.php/ikala/article/view/2667/2130
http://www.brighthubeducation.com/high-school-english-lessons/12265-teaching-voice-
in-writing/
Further reading:
http://mds.marshall.edu/cgi/viewcontent.cgi?article=1871&context=etd
welcome back to Teach English Now. At the beginning of this module, we watched as Shara
Zadi struggled
she was able to retain the services of a magical genie to aid her
in the writing process. Unfortunately, for our students, writing
is not as easy as rubbing a magical lamp and having a blue genie pop out and claim
to be the world's best writing tutor. However, what we did learn from the genie
were strategies that we can use to help our students become better writers. >> In the first video,
the brilliant genie
pre-writing, writing and post-writing. During the pre-writing stage, we watched Shara Zadi
describe what
allow our students to have enough time to explore their own thoughts
bad breath and hairy toes? Well, that may be attractive to some. I do not or Shara Zadi did not
find those traits attractive. >> In the second video, we were reminded
that our purpose as writing teachers is to equip students with a set of skills
they find themselves in. For Shara Zadi, she had her ideas
of what she wanted to write about, but she was stuck. She didn't know how to
effectively organize her ideas. This is why it is so important for us as language teachers
to use the six traits of writing. These six traits provide a road map for our students by breaking
down the writing
process and allowing them to focus on one concept at a time rather than
trying to do everything all at once. If you remember from the second video,
the six traits of writing are ideas, organization, voice, word choice,
teachers need to focus on meaning first. We can worry about the conventions later. With that
being said, we can apply to six traits to each
writers should have a purpose and an audience in mind when writing. And use language and
ideas that, that particular audience would
primarily focus on their vocabulary or word choice and their sentence fluency. Finally, in the post
writing stage, a writer's main focus
should be the conventions. Making sure he or she has used the correct
job of choosing a topic. This may sound like a simple task, but
it's often one of the most difficult. So, we suggested a few pre-writing
before they even realize they have it. >> Our first strategy that was mentioned
was good writing is good reading. If students don't have enough knowledge on
whatever topic they're supposed to write about, you might want to suggest that
they do a bit of reading on that topic to become more informed. This is really a fun and much
less
daunting way to frame the dreaded word, research. Honestly though, helping students
develop their ideas and opinions and then begin writing sets them up for
that good writing is good thinking. Sometimes students do have the word
knowledge to write on the specific topic, but they don't know how or
ideas with other people helps to get your creative juices flowing and
we've mentioned this before, but it's worth repeating. All of us here at Teach English Now who
write scripts and other articles are in the habit of talking about our ideas
with each other before we start writing. Typically, when I get writers block, I tend to talk out my
ideas with my
creative colleagues Shane and Justin. >> Yep, that's true and
I in turn talk out my ideas with you two. Collaboration is effective. So in the third video, we
revisited
a very frustrated Shara Zadi who had some wonderful ideas, but
was struggling to organize her thoughts. Thankfully, the brilliant genie was there
to help her once again to take her ideas about her future husband and
organize them in a way that made sense. What a great guy that genie was. >> [LAUGH] Yeah,
he was great. But thanks to the genies helpful tutoring
that clever Shara Zadi not only became a fantastic writer, but she usurped
as the, what did the genie call it? The best test, most amazing magnificent
writing tutor in the whole world. [LAUGH] What a smart girl. I am so proud of her. [LAUGH] What
is that they say, sometimes
the best students make the best teachers? Something like that. >> Anyway, the fourth video.
Discuss the importance of organizing
writing activities and strategies for effectively organizing ideas. The first organization strategy
was to outline thoughts. Basically, an outline no matter how it's
structured is simply a list of ideas grouped together. The ideas are written in the forms
of notes not complete sentences to help the writer remember his or her ideas when they sit
down
mentioned was using a mind web or a word web. For this strategy, the writer places the
main idea in the center of the page and writes related words around it. These words will later
become
the main subsections or subtopics in the writing assignment. If further details are needed, then
related words are written
how their ideas fit together overall. >> The third organizational strategy
kinesthetic learners. For this activity, students write the topic of each sub
section at the top of a piece of paper. Under each subsection, the writer
if the writer wants to change the order. >> So whether you or your students
need help organizing ideas for writing, outlining, making a mind map and writing block
paragraphs are three
excellent ideas for organizing. Feel free to use more than one method
at the same time for the same activity, whatever helps you get organized. >> Well, that's it for
this module. Join us next time as delve in
to the glorious, glamorous. >> Don't you mean grammarous? >> World of grammar. Thanks,
Jessica. Thanks so much for watching and
see you next time on Teach English Now. Grammar. >> [LAUGH] [MUSIC]
Here are three writing activities that you can try out in the classroom:
1. Three Wishes: Have your students imagine that they have been given three wishes. What would they
wish for? They should write down their wishes and share them in a small group. You could also have
students draw a picture to represent their wishes and display these wishes around the classroom.
2. Story starters: Each student will imagine that they are Sheherezade and are starting to tell a new
story. Give the students about 2-3 minutes to write down a story starter. When the time is up, instruct
students to pass their papers to the person sitting next to them. This person will read what the other
person wrote and continue the story, and so on. You can adjust the amount of time that you give
each person to write depending on the level of your students. When everyone finishes, the original
writer will receive their story back. Students will work on reading and writing fluency during this
activity because they will need to read and write quickly, but they should enjoy practicing it in this fun,
lighthearted manner.
3. Advice Column: Students will imagine that they are one of the characters from Aladdin and the 1,000
Arabian Nights. Their character has a problem and needs some advice from friends or family
members. Hand note cards out to each student to write their problem down and ask for advice.
Collect all of the note cards and redistribute them. Students should read through the problem and
write their advice down on the back of the card. Then they should deliver it to the original writer. To
wrap up, you can have a class discussion about the kinds of problems and types of advice given for
the problems.
What other ideas do you have for using Aladdin and the 1,000 Nights in the writing classroom? Feel
free to share your ideas on the discussion board.
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it's time to talk about grammar. In particular we are going to focus on how
rather than grammar just on its own. Certainly, there are many schools and
courses that will teach grammar by itself. But our intent is to demonstrate how
it can be important to integrate into a reading and writing class. There are so many big questions
about how to integrate grammar. Should I teach grammar
form I taught them last year, last week, or even yesterday? How am I supposed in incorporate
grammar into my lesson plans? And hey, let's just back up a minute. Why do I even have to
teach grammar? Won't my students just pick it up
through using the language naturally? Actually, that last question is a great
to language teaching that you learned about back in our first specialization. Then research by
Merrill Swain showed that
still continue to make grammar errors. While the language learners were
the 1980s who had learned all kinds of techniques to make langauge
communicative and come alive began to focus away from grammar to the point
that they were unable to teach it. As one colleague of mine once said,
I know how to teach the content. But I just don't know what
to do about their grammar. So communicative teachers, now what? Well, most experts believe
that in
order for students to use grammar forms accurately, students must be encouraged
within the communicative classroom to notice and focus on grammar, even when
one more story? I know I am. Something feels wrong though. Something feels like it needs to be
here. I don’t know.
Ooh, thank you Elizabeth, Justin, that helps. But maybe if I could just call
someone then I could get some ideas. Nah, I think I'd rather maybe take
some notes and yeah, that should help. What should we do this time? Well, as you've probably
guessed,
I'm about to get really sleepy. But where will our dreamscape
see the castle because of the rain. And the prince standing on the highest
tower didn't see his perfect match because he was too busy drawing pictures of the
a woman he knew would someday be his wife. When he stood looking out the open window
clutching his pictures to his chest, the rain prevented him from hearing
the princess knocking at the castle gates, crying for help. The prince's mother, the queen,
was downstairs trying to find a wife for her princely son, but she didn't notice
the many pictures her son had drawn of the very woman who was
now just outside the gates. Instead, she kept trying to get each girl
in the kingdom to notice a small pea under a dozen mattresses, which she believed would prove
that
they were the right girl for the prince. A girl just like you, my lovely daughter. >> The princess
and the pea. You know a true princess can feel a pea
try out the mattresses. Sadly the princess walked away because
she never saw the castle gates and ended up marrying some
gained a ton of weight, and lost all his money betting on horses,
interfere with our happy ending. You see, the princess can't see
the gates because of the rain, and the prince is too busy drawing
pictures of his lovely future wife, so he doesn't even realize that his lovely
future wife is right at the gates below. And the mother is so focused on making
sure that each girl can feel a pea under a bunch of mattresses, she doesn't see
what is obvious about the whole situation. >> Hm, okay. Wait, so what do you want me to do? >>
[LAUGH] I'm glad you asked. Just one more time. >> Sure!
What's my job this time? >> Let's see. Sounds like you need to help the prince,
some things that really matter. Let's see what you can do. >> Okay. [SOUND] Hey, hey, hey
princess, princess? She can't hear me. This is going to make things a lot harder. How am I going
to get these guys
helping learners focus on grammar forms. Now let's talk about getting your
each learner has different problems. You'll notice in our last video
the Prince, the Princess, and the Queen are all having difficulties noticing certain things that
would be
helpful for them to be successful. It doesn't mean the Princess, Prince, and Queen aren't smart,
only that they aren't paying attention to certain items that might help
things go a little better for them. When it comes to teaching grammar, each of
your learners may have different problems. One may struggle with passive voice, another may
need help
doesn't get in the way of meaning. In other words, your job as a teacher
is to clear the path for them so that they can communicate their
message and achieve their goals. Did the Prince, Princess and
Queen have different problems? Yes. The Princess doesn't see the gate,
the Prince can't hear the Princess, and the Queen is focused on
all those mattresses, instead of her son's charmed pictures. Second, learners often
individualize your grammar instruction in a reading and writing class, it is also true that because
students
come to you often at the same level, there will be trends and
students need collectively. Did you notice that our Prince and
Princess both had one similar problem? That's right, the rain. The rain is preventing our Princess
from seeing and our Prince from hearing. Anyway, we'll extend our metaphor
just a bit further in the next video. For now, just remember that as a reading,
learner problems and group problems. But after you have identified those
can't see the castle. A prince who can't see the princess and a queen who isn't even paying
and focus on the biggest problem first. >> But how do I know which
that affects the most people? >> That makes sense. So one problem at a time,
affects the most people. Well, our princess can't see the castle,
knocking, because of the rain. And the queen, probably won't be able
to hear the princess knocking either, because of the rain. I've got it. So, let's take away the rain
and
put in some sunshine in its place. [SOUND] [LAUGH] Now, the prince should be able to hear our
princess knocking. No.
It looks like the princess still can't see the castle gate,
it's just so dark and gray. I know. [SOUND] [LAUGH] That should do it. There, she sees the
castle gate and
ordering other girls around, so she can't even hear [SOUND] and
them to open that door? I know. Why don't we change the knock to
something a little more noticeable? [SOUND] There we go! And look, he hears her. He's looking
out the window, and
now he's rushing to see her. How happy they're going to be. No.
the enchanting pictures he's drawn. I wish you would pay attention
to what really matters. [SOUND] That should do it. [LAUGH] No, the queen still didn't
pay attention to what she should. Look, she's going back to the mattresses. Why?
a bunch of silly mattresses? Can't she see that the prince has
found the woman of his dreams? Well, I guess if she isn't going
to notice her any other way. [SOUND] [LAUGH] That should do it and look, the princess is
waking up. Poor thing she feels terrible. Well, of course she does. She felt the pea after all,
[LAUGH] even on a dozen mattresses. I'm so happy I got to help them. [LAUGH]
except. >> Yes and they lived happily ever after. [MUSIC]
how a princess, a prince and a queen are all not seeing things. They just aren't noticing what is
right in front of their faces. Now, what does this have to do with
is a very common phenomenon in language learning. To be honest, many students who read
and write very well still don't see some
The Noticing Hypothesis, that suggests that learners can not learn the grammatical features of a
language
unless they first notice them. Now, noticing alone doesn't mean that
they will gain language acquisition. Rather, they will have to notice an act, just like the princess
didn't have
success just seeing the gate. She has to, well, knock. So what can teachers do about all of this?
First of all, as we mentioned earlier, as a teacher you need to notice the
mistakes that your students are making. That will give you a good idea of what
needs to be taught in your reading and writing classes. Second, after you've identified any
is the Theory of Input Enhancement, put forth by Mike Sharwood Smith, who
suggests that if students continually miss things, then your job is to enhance
the elements that they are missing. Did you notice anything
that Jessica enhanced? Yep, you got it. The sky, the gate, the knock on the gate, the picture, all
of these were
attempts to enhance the input and help people notice what they
should be paying attention to. So how do you do this in your classes? Well, for many teachers in
a reading,
grammatical items is another way to help students notice. Repeating back an incorrect item and
another way to help students notice. And there are even easier ways to do this. Enhancing input
is actually
done all the time. Did you know that bolded phrases,
another example of enhanced input. Make sure that all of your readings and
writing models include enhance input. Why not? All readings and writings are opportunities to
teach grammar on some kind. One last thing. Did you noticed that our queen, even after she
receive enhance input,
still they notice the picture? Did you noticed that she was obsessed with
all those mattresses, and that tiny pea? Here we want to extend
the metaphor one last time. And discuss how this queen falls into
a trap that some teachers can fall into. What should the queen have
really been paying attention to? People. What did she pay attention to? Mattresses. Here's my
point. There are times in my teaching career, where I have seen teachers who did
not use a student centered approach. Rather they used a book approach, and followed all the
rules they
magically learn language. The truth is, while teaching grammar rules
can be useful, be careful not to turn your class, into a place where all
students do, is march in line, take their tests, and focus on rules that
are barely used, in the outside world. Our queen, like these teachers, marched
people mindlessly through her exercise so that she could see if
a tiny insignificant grammar rule, one that doesn't matter when looking
don't focus on the small and by so doing, ignore them all. Now, the truth is sadly, as a language
teacher you can't
forms that might be tricky for them. Don’t expect perfection in this. And please give students time
to
work on and practice these forms. Let’s conclude. Is grammar fun? Well, there is no doubt
learners. As you provide enhanced input and even correction, remember to always
point out the gains that they have made. As you point out mistakes and
difficult grammatical structures, make sure you also praise both effort and
get you ready for our module quiz. We'll see you then. [MUSIC]
about incorporating grammar into your reading and writing instruction. First we talked briefly
about why
could teach you then it comes to the topic of grammar. We introduced you mostly
to the idea of noticing. We introduce two initial tips for helping learners when they notice and
group errors that your students make. Well we haven't spoken too much
about strategies to to correct or instruct on student errors. We want you to now how important it
is to
pay attention to your learners themselves. This is one way to ensure a student
centered rather than a book centered approach. >> But let's not stop there. Not only are you
supposed to
certain grammatical features, If they aren't made aware of them. >> [LAUGH] And how do you
help your
those that students are struggling with to jump out at your learners. And in a reading and writing
class
you can do this in a number of ways. If you notice your student struggling
that they need to start noticing. >> Above all, remember that
like the queen, on teaching elements of grammar that are not truly useful,
nor attainable, by students. Acquisition and grammatical items sometimes takes a longer
time than we teachers want it to. And often we teach tiny, difficult items, peas if you will, that only
a princess would be able to notice. So, do you have explicit grammar and
instruction in your own lesson plans? As you consider each lesson plan you
write, you may want to step back and see if there are any grammatical
the reading and writing assignments you use in your classroom create demand
for certain kinds of grammatical items. As you create your own lesson plan, one more thing to
notice is the grammar
have a little grammar noticing activity. >> That's a great idea Jessica. Now, as usual it's your
turn. After completing the writing prompt and
another checkpoint quiz. Remember that you can go back and review all the previous material in
this
module to make sure you are prepared. You can also post in the discussion boards
if there are any concepts you want to discuss further with your fellow learners. Good luck and
we'll see you again soon. [MUSIC]
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Video 1: Course Summary Video (chưa làm)
[MUSIC] Welcome back to Teach English Now!,
and the final video in this course. We hope that you have
these stories with you to make some of the concepts that we've talked about
talked about in modules one through five. Make sure that you pay attention
please go back to that module and review the videos or the material again. Don't forget to take
notes so that you can look back over
three different readers. Or, shall we say, non-readers. The scarecrow, the tin-man, and the lion
represented the non-readers that
we often see in our language classrooms. Do you remember the reading problems? And how
you, as a teacher,
can help them become better readers? Let's review them briefly. The scarecrow represented
ignorance. Which the teacher can
with letters, or groups of letters. With out stiff, robotic tin man,
reading was a solitary activity. But the teacher was able to show him how
involved include breaking reading activities into three parts. Pre-reading, reading, and post-
reading. And inviting students to evaluate,
summarize, and or give opinions about the text. Our last character, the uninterested lion,
overcame his apathy through his teacher's ability to intrigue him with immediacy,
the three I's of reading proficiency. Information, involvement, and intrigue. >> That's a lot of
information. Continuing on our journey in module two,
Coach Hare and Coach Tortoise. If you remember, Coach Hare focused on
reading logs, among others. While Coach Tortoise's main purpose was to
use strategies to help students understand what they are reading. We shared many intensive
of speech, using a jigsaw activity and a closed passage. Feel free to go back to module
two to review these intensive and extensive reading strategies. >> And then in our third module,
we presented some key ideas
in ESL writing theory. And gave you some useful tips to help
your students, just like Hansel and Gretel, to improve their writing skills. We talked about the
importance of helping
that they can accomplish in stages so that the assignment doesn't seem so
post-writing are all steps or stages in the writing process. >> We also talked about you can
ideas and give feedback to each other so they can change their writing
you, as the teacher, to avoid appropriation by giving your students the freedom to be
a director in the writing classroom. >> And then, in the fourth module, we met
Jeanie, who discussed specific strategies that you can use with your students in
giving students time to brainstorm during the pre-writing stage so they can
explore many different possibilities for the writing piece. We also focused on the six
guide them through the writing process. Remember that those six traits are ideas,
sentence fluency and conventions. If you need to review them in more detail,
feel free to go back to module four and watch those videos. >> We also shared three strategies
to
get students past the initial roadblock of choosing a topic. The first strategy was good
open their minds to new ideas is good writing is good speaking. Personally I've tried all of these
methods
when I've gotten stuck writing a script. They really work. After students generate ideas,
ideas with another three strategies. Making an outline, using a mind web,
that will aid your students during the writing process. If your students use these strategies, they
will produce better written pieces,
making your life as a teacher much easier as you sit down to grade
a stack of papers over the weekend. >> [LAUGH] And let's not scare them off
Shane, although, in our fifth module we covered a topic that some teachers and
students find really scary. Grammar. However, after watching the videos
from module five, we hope you felt equipped with concrete ideas on how to
instruction on minute, grammar points that are not used very often take
over our reading and writing classes. Having learners notice and focus on grammar forms is
important,
that the class as a whole makes. That way, you can spend valuable class
time focusing on correcting those errors. Rather than, being like the queen and teaching
grammar items that
the errors they're making. Makes sense, right? How can they fix something if
they don't know what's broken. And how can we get students to do this? Well one idea that we
talked
get students to notice certain grammatical features that they are having trouble
features in their assignments or in their textbooks as they are reading. Give students lots of time
to
practice with these principles so that they can improve. And that means that you should
review your lesson plans and make sure that you incorporated some
in mind as you're lesson planning? >> Great advice, Jessica. Well, I'm sad to say that
enjoyed this series of videos as much as we have enjoyed producing them. We hope that they
are sticky, meaning
that when you think of extensive and intensive reading you always think
of our Mr. Hare and Mr. Tortoise. When you think of writing,
house into an organic paradise. And when you think of enhanced input,
will help you to recall and reuse the techniques we intend you to have
how are you feeling about your test? Are you ready for it? Of course you are, right? However, if
you need to,
there's anything you'd like to discuss with your fellow learners. Once you feel like you've learned
all the
concepts from this course, go ahead and take your test. Good luck and we'll see you soon.
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