Basics of Business Writing 2
Basics of Business Writing 2
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Tip: Show your document to someone outside your department or company and ask whether anything is
missing.
6. Keep it tight
Short sentences, short paragraphs and short documents have a better chance of capturing readers’
attention. That’s particularly true of e-mails and other electronic documents because we read more
slowly on screen than on paper. Cut the flab to keep your readers. Here are a few tips.
Delete redundant adjectives. All friends are personal; all innovations are new; all disasters are
serious.
Don’t disguise your verbs as verb/noun pairs. Don’t “make a decision” or “carry out an
improvement.” Just “decide” or “improve.”
Cut windy phrases. Why say “We are in the process of upgrading our IT systems” when you can
simply say “We are upgrading our IT systems”?
Tip: Pretend the document you’re working on is a telegram and every word costs you $10. Edit
accordingly.
9. Get active
What’s the difference between these two sentences?
Rebates will be provided on all new purchases.
XYZ Corp. will provide rebates on all new purchases.
In the first case, we don’t know who is providing the rebate. In the second, the company is the subject of
the sentence.
In grammatical terms, the first sentence is in the passive voice and the second is in the active voice.
OK. But why should you care?
Putting sentences in active voice is a quick way to brighten your writing. Sentences in active voice are
often shorter and usually clearer than those in passive voice, and inspire more trust in readers. Everyone
wants to know who is doing what.
Tip: Ask yourself, “Who is acting in this sentence?” If that person or organization isn’t in the sentence,
add it as the subject of the verb.
10. Proofread
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Spell checkers are useful tools, but they’re far from perfect. They’ll rarely alert you when you’ve used
an actual word in the wrong context—just ask anyone who has ever invited customers to contact the
“sales manger.” Proofread your documents before printing them or hitting “send.”
Tip: Read documents aloud to catch missing words. And if you see one mistake, read the rest of the
paragraph particularly closely—typos tend to cluster.
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