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The document contains 4 responses in Indonesian by Nashrul Atho'illah to English language assignments. 1. Identifies parts of a sample job networking letter and finds 3 errors. 2. Drafts a letter to a cookie company expressing disappointment over an expired cookie and requesting a refund or replacement. 3. Provides a template for a thank you letter to a donor for their generous contribution following a natural disaster.

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Tugas 2 Bahasa Inggris

The document contains 4 responses in Indonesian by Nashrul Atho'illah to English language assignments. 1. Identifies parts of a sample job networking letter and finds 3 errors. 2. Drafts a letter to a cookie company expressing disappointment over an expired cookie and requesting a refund or replacement. 3. Provides a template for a thank you letter to a donor for their generous contribution following a natural disaster.

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Tugas 2 Bahasa Inggris

Nama : Nashrul Atho’illah


NIM : 048711833

Jawaban :

1. Identifikasi bagian surat yang ditandai oleh nomor 1-3. / Please identify the part of the letter
numbered 1-3.
a. Salutation: "Dear Ms. Lee,"
b. Invitation to job networking event: "I would like to invite you to attend our upcoming
Liberal Arts department job networking event. The event will be held on the afternoon
of May 1, 2020. We wish to provide our graduating seniors with an opportunity to meet
business leaders in the area who may be looking for new hires who hold degrees in the
liberal arts. The event will be held at the Cox Student Center at Northern State
University and will last about 2 to 3 hours. If you have an interest in attending or sending
a company representative to meet with our students, please let me know at your
earliest convenience and I can reserve a table for you."
c. Sender's information and closing: "Thank for your time and I hope to hear from you
soon. Respectfully, Linda Lau, Liberal Arts Department Chair"

2. Please identify 3 (three) errors in the letter above.


a. Spelling and grammar: The letter contains several spelling and grammar mistakes, such
as "Thank you" instead of "Thank you," "july" instead of "July," "catalogue" instead of
"catalog," "n" instead of "and," and "receive" instead of "receiving." These errors should
be corrected for proper communication.
b. Lack of proper formatting: The letter lacks proper formatting with inconsistent
capitalization, punctuation, and spacing. It would be better to maintain a consistent and
professional format throughout the letter.
Incomplete address: The sender's address is incomplete. It should include the name of
the company, such as "Bridgestone International Co.," before the address, providing a
complete and accurate identification of the sender.

3. Dear Customer Service,


I am writing to express my deep disappointment regarding my recent online order of cookies
from your company. Upon receiving the package, I discovered that one of the cookies
included in the shipment had expired. As a loyal customer, I have always trusted the quality
and freshness of your products, but this experience has left me quite dissatisfied.

The expired cookie not only compromised the taste and texture but also raised concerns
about the overall quality control and attention to detail in your packaging and shipping
processes. As a consumer, it is disheartening to receive a product that does not meet the
expected standards.
I kindly request a refund or an exchange for the expired cookie. I believe it is fair to expect a
replacement that is fresh and within its expiration date, or alternatively, a refund for the
defective item. I have attached a picture of the expired cookie as evidence for your
reference.

I have been a loyal customer of your brand for quite some time, and I hope that this
unfortunate incident can be resolved promptly and amicably. I trust that your customer
service team will take the necessary steps to rectify this situation and ensure that such
issues do not occur in the future.

I look forward to your prompt response and a satisfactory resolution to this matter.

Thank you for your attention to this concern.

Sincerely,
[Nashrul Atho’illah]

4. Dear [Donor's Name],


On behalf of [organization/community], I wanted to express my heartfelt gratitude for your
incredibly generous donation towards our fundraising event in response to the recent
natural disaster. Your contribution of [amount] will have a significant impact on our efforts
to support those affected by this tragedy.
Your kindness and compassion are truly inspiring, and we are immensely grateful for your
support during this challenging time. Your donation will enable us to provide essential relief
and assistance to those in need, and it will make a real difference in the lives of the affected
individuals and communities.
Once again, thank you from the bottom of our hearts for your remarkable generosity. We
are deeply appreciative of your commitment to helping others and for standing with us in
our mission to bring relief and hope to those affected by this disaster.
Warm regards,

(Nashrul Atho’illah)

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