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Task 2 Essay 3 IELTS

The document discusses two views on whether people are becoming more dependent or independent. Some believe technology has increased dependence through stronger emotional attachments and reliance on others for decision making. However, others argue that modern resources and technology have equipped people with greater knowledge and access to information, allowing them to make independent decisions and handle situations themselves without relying on others. After weighing both views, the author ultimately sides with the view that modern society promotes more independent individuals.

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Task 2 Essay 3 IELTS

The document discusses two views on whether people are becoming more dependent or independent. Some believe technology has increased dependence through stronger emotional attachments and reliance on others for decision making. However, others argue that modern resources and technology have equipped people with greater knowledge and access to information, allowing them to make independent decisions and handle situations themselves without relying on others. After weighing both views, the author ultimately sides with the view that modern society promotes more independent individuals.

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3.

Some people believe that individuals are becoming more and more
dependent on each other, where as others believe that people are becoming
more independent from each other. Discuss both the views and give your
opinion.

Modern world is now fully equipped with technology and readily available resources for
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people to gain what they expect to improve. It is believed by some people that persons ?
have been strating to depend on each other, while others are of the opinion that, people
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in the current society are more independent than ever before. Even though, these both
views can be justifiable with relevant evidences, I side with the latter opinion.

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With the development of technology, smart devices made the world more closer making
everyone one-tap away. Because of that, most people have become reliable on others
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during decision-making of their lives. Having said that, this strengthned emotional
attachments supported by the technology could be the reason for not only young people,
but also adults to be more dependent. Nevertheless, there may be incidents, where, being
dependent will assure the success rate of decisions that were made. However, having
relied on another for life choices will decrease the ability of situation handeling mainly of
adolescents. include example

Despite the above view, there is also a commonly believed opinion that people in the
modern society are mostly independent characters, who take decisions based on their
not good compared to the past
own research. Not like in the past, in the current society, modern technology has been
making the society more equipped with knowledge with easy and affordable access. This
enhances them to do their own inquiry and research on the situation, to analyze the
effects and to recover the damage occured if any. Hence, it avoides humans to rely on
another person during their lives.
in conclusion

Therefore, after the crucial justifications of both of those views, I truly believe and
experience that, modern soceity has become more independent, which was the second
view, since they possess a wider range of knowledge and enough resources to take their
own decisions and to secure their privacy further.

talk about the other view as well


good essay
possible score 7-7.5

include examples!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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