The Fallen Champ
The Fallen Champ
by
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FADE IN:
TEENAGE GUY
Did you find our row?
(pause)
Ok, let me take a wiz -- HEY, watch
my seat.
The guy zips his pants and creeps toward the noise. Upon a
closer look, he can see black legs wearing a pair of white
boxing shoes, and white satin boxing trunks draped over them.
The slapping gets faster and the legs vibrate too -- then
they stop.
The teenage guy snickers, holds his mouth and backs towards
the door.
From the top of the stall, we can see the top of the head of
a BLACK GUY. He turns off his phone and listens. He peeks
through the crack in the stall.
GUY (O.S.)
Ha! Ha! Ha!
FADE TO BLACK.
REFEREE (O.S.)
1... 2... 3...
FADE UP ON:
If we peer into his eyes, he's the type of guy that doesn't
like conflict, but wants the victory.
REFEREE
...4 ...5 --
REFEREE (CONT'D)
-- Can you continue?
Doug glances across the ring at one time, top ten contender,
KIRK JOHNSON late 30 s bouncing on his toes; poised, ready to
attack.
CORD
I'm moving forward with turning
Esteban pro. He needs a match.
DEZZY
I thought yawl was waitin' for the
Olympics?
CORD
There's no money in winning medals.
Quicker he turns pro, quicker he
becomes champ.
Dezzy grins and the dim light flashes off his gold tooth.
DEZZY
Cool, don't worry 'bout nothing.
I'll have yawl lined up in no time.
Like a dog with his tail tucked, Doug leans over and taps
Kirk's glove to congratulate him.
DR. LEE
Mr. Robertson it appears you have a
few tares in the back of your right
eye. You can come into the office
and I can fix those tares but if
you want to continue in this sport,
you are going to have to protect
that eye.
DOUG
Yes sir, I appreciate it.
Dr. Lee puts his tools back in his bag and heads toward the
exit.
DEZZY
Thanks for seeing 'bout my man,
Doc.
DR. LEE
I think he can't take much more in
that eye. One more solid punch and
his vision could be lost in that
eye.
5.
DEZZY
He'll be fine Doc, that's the
champ. I'm gonna get his defense
right, you just watch.
Dr. Lee shakes his head and walks away. He's seen how this
plays out before.
WILLIAM
There is no challenge we can't win
if God is on our side. The question
is, are we gonna fight?
(pause)
Will it be easy..? No, but you got
to fight! Will the enemy keep
coming..? Yes, but you got to
fight!
WILLIAM (CONT'D)
Speaking of fighting... A man who
needs no introduction, BUT HE IS
our cities five-time Toughman champ
and four-time national qualifier --
My brother, Doug - The Preacherman!
DOUG
By the way pastor introduced me,
you would've thought I won the
fight --
6.
WILLIAM (O.S.)
You're gonna come out on top, I can
see it!
DOUG (O.S.)
Pastor you were speaking the truth,
we have to keep fighting.
WILLIAM
(whispers)
Brother...
WILLIAM (CONT'D)
Don't forget about Tuesday.
William wraps his arm over Doug's shoulder and stares at the
crowd by the table.
WILLIAM
(whispers)
BROTHER, look -- That's the highest
turnout we've ever had. We're
building the Kingdom!
DOUG
You got that right, Pastor.
Trisha scoffs and walks toward the exit with the kids.
TRISHA
I'm in the car.
WILLIAM
What's wrong with her?
DOUG
She's just hangry.
William laughs.
WILLIAM
Tell her to start eating breakfast.
We're trying to build something
that will last.
TRISHA
Be ready when I come to pick yawl
up.
Doug peeps over at Trisha. Her face rest against hand that's
propped on the door.
DOUG
Where you wanna eat?
TRISHA
I don't care, just pick somewhere.
DOUG
Just tell me what you want.
Trisha cuts her eye at him, and turns down the music.
TRISHA
I've told you over and over, but
you ain't listening.
(pause)
We ain't been out of church five
minutes and you playing THIS kind
of music?
DOUG
I figured I'd be a little romantic,
since the kids were gone.
Trisha scoffs.
TRISHA
ROMANTIC, for what? You up in that
pulpit saying all the right stuff,
but if they knew what I did --
(frustrated pause)
-- You know what, never mind.
DOUG
Can we just have ONE good day? Does
everything got to be a fight?
TRISHA
Whatever, all I know is I'm tired
of watching you play church...
PREACHERMAN.
9.
DOUG
How you gonna do daddy like that?
MARIAH
What you always say, you sow what
you reap.
DOUG
That's YOU REAP, WHAT YOU SOW.
What's the color?
MARIAH
Red!
DOUG
Good, that's the color I wanted.
MARIAH
No it's not. I looked at your hand.
DOUG
You little cheater.
DOUG (CONT'D)
It's on you. What you got?
Preston eyes shift back and forth behind two cards. He lays
down a red two.
PRESTON
UNO...
He then lays down another red two on top of the last one.
PRESTON (CONT'D)
GAME!
TRISHA
Good job Preston!
Trisha rakes in all the cards. She cuts her eyes at Doug then
back at the cards.
TRISHA (CONT'D)
I was doing the bills and I was
thinking if you sold that bike, we
could get a little breathing room.
DOUG
WHAT? Come on man, you can't be
serious. You wanna take away what
little fun I have left?
TRISHA
You say you want to be the man of
the house, then the man got to make
manly sacrifices.
Doug sighs and shakes his head.
MARIAH (O.S.)
I'm winning next game.
TRISHA
It's time for bed.
MARIAH
Awe mama, just one more game?
11.
TRISHA
Nope. Yawl got school in the
morning and I don't need you asking
for five more minutes of sleep.
(pause)
Go take your baths and I'll be in
there so we can read.
Trisha stares at her husband who rubs his brow. She gets up
and exits the room.
Doug grabs the deck of cards and shuffles them, but gazes at
his trophies.
TRISHA
Can I talk to you..?
DOUG
Just a second, I'm trying to make a
job list.
TRISHA
Am I enough for you?
TRISHA (CONT'D)
You know what -- NEVER MIND. What
was I thinking? If it ain't about
Doug, you ain't trying to listen.
DOUG
What do you mean if ain't about me?
I'M LOOKING FOR A JOB FOR THE
FAMILY --
(deep sigh)
Yes, I love you more than anything.
Doug shuts off the computer and goes over to the bed.
TRISHA
Wrong answer. It's GOD, then me. If
I'm enough, why you keep looking at
porn?
(pause)
(MORE)
12.
TRISHA (CONT'D)
Matter of fact, when was the last
time you looked at it?
DOUG
(defensive)
I don't know, whenever the last
time we talked about it. It's been
awhile.
DOUG (CONT'D)
I'M SERIOUS. Listen, I want to make
this right. Whatever you want me to
do, I'll do it.
DOUG (CONT'D)
COUNSELING? You trippin' if you
think I'm going to see a counselor,
and she a woman?!
(scoffs)
I already know how to fix us.
TRISHA
(sarcastic)
Let me guess -- more sex.
TRISHA (CONT'D)
I knew you were just talking, like
always. -- We better do something,
cause I don't know how much more I
can take.
DOUG
Ok, Ok, I'll go. -- But if he says
something outta line ONE time, I'M
OUT.
Doug cuts the lamp off. He observes Trish's curvy hips under
the covers and slides her in close.
DOUG (CONT'D)
Since I'm doing what you want, how
about doing a little of what I
want.
13.
TRISHA
Sooo, making sure I'm secure ain't
what you want?
DOUG
Uh... Yeah. Of course that's what I
want.
Trisha zips back and forth in the room. She goes to the
dresser mirror, digs into a purse, and pulls out a tube of
lipstick.
TRISHA
DOUG, wake up.
TRISHA (CONT'D)
You need to get up and make sure
the kids catch the bus.
(pause)
What are your plans for today?
DOUG
(mumbles)
Only phone calls. My options are
getting low, what do you think
about me working out of town?
TRISHA
It hasn't crossed my mind. I don't
trust you like that.
(pause)
Plus, we are down to the bare
minimum. In order for you to work
out of town, they would have to pay
for all of our expenses.
DOUG
Well, we better do something, or
we're going to be doing some
serious downsizing.
14.
TRISHA
Don't forget to meet me at the
counselor this evening.
BURLY GUY
That's badass!
Doug counts the cash as the guy climbs onto the bike.
VROOM, VROOM!
DOUG
Hopefully it'll make you as happy
as it made me.
MS.ANDREWS (V.O.)
Sometimes a loss is the best thing
for our growth.
15.
DOUG (O.S.)
YOU THINK I'M ONE OF THE
KIDS OR SOMETHING?!
TRISHA (O.S.)
YOU MIGHT AS WELL BE, YOU ACTING
LIKE'EM!
The door flings open and hits the wall; Doug exits! He barges
into the foyer, snatches his hat off a rack, and exits the
front entrance.
TRISHA
(whimpers)
He never fights.
MS. ANDREWS
If you'd like to reschedule, I can
always see what's available on my
calendar.
TRISHA
If he don't want to try, ain't no
sense of --
Doug enters the room and sits on the couch with Trisha, but
at a distance.
DOUG
(to Trisha)
I'm sorry... I lost my cool.
(to Jessica)
Can we start over?
MS. ANDREWS
Let's try something.
(pause)
I want you two to think back to
when you first met...
SUPER: 1989
HAYMOND
The way I see it, if we sneak
around to the back parking lot we
can head to the mall from there.
TEEN DOUG
What if coach sees us?
HAYMOND
SEE, that's why I don't like you
hangin' with me. If you scared,
stay here.
(to the other)
Man, when we was little, he
couldn't go to sleep without a
night light.
TEEN DOUG
Check it, I'll catch up with yawl
later.
HAYMOND
Man, forget that nigga. He can't
commit to nothing! Let's jet.
Trisha puts a few books into her bag and closes the locker.
She is startled when she turns around.
TRISHA
UH... HEL-LO.
DOUG
What up ma'. I saw you from the
other side of the room, and had to
come meet you.
TRISHA
Well, you've accomplished something
today, excuse me.
DOUG
Hol' up! I didn't catch yo' name.
TRISHA
(mumbles)
Go away ugly boy.
DOUG
Wait a minute, Don't you go to
Mount Gideon church?
TRISHA
Yeah.
DOUG
I knew it! My big mama go over
there. You used to say them Easter
speeches back in the day.
TRISHA
(curious)
I sure did but I don't remember you
coming.
DOUG
We go to another church, but we
came over there on the holidays.
DOUG (CONT'D)
I was like who is that girl wearing
them BIG OLE glasses always saying
her speech perfectly!
Trisha laughs.
DOUG (CONT'D)
You look a lot different without
them glasses.
Trisha releases the bag. The two teens walk through the
hallway laughing and talking.
MS. ANDREWS
You guys have lots of history. I
think you're going to be ok. You
just need a few tools to get you
back on track.
(pause)
Marriage is a life-long project
that requires commitment. It's a
relationship that that calls for
sympathetic listening with a view
to understand your spouses inner
desires.
TRISHA
In the beginning, I didn't have to
do nothing, he was like my...
(MORE)
19.
TRISHA (CONT'D)
my, knight in shining armor. Now I
can't get him to make me a cup of
coffee.
(pause)
I expect to be loved through thick
and thin, not just when things are
going good. I don't want my
marriage to be another statistic.
MS. ANDREWS
Interesting, so what you want is
security. Doug what about you?
DOUG
I just want to make her happy.
MS. ANDREWS
Doug could you be more specific?
DOUG
Well... being treated like the man
of the house would be cool. I can't
even learn from my mess-ups without
her tripping.
(long pause)
Of course, more sex would be nice
too.
MS. ANDREWS
What I'm hearing is you would like
more respect.
TRISHA
I better go get the kids. They
probably driving mama crazy.
DOUG
Your mama wouldn't care if they
burned the house down.
Trisha laughs.
TRISHA
Yeah, she definitely wasn't like
that with us. Well, you better get
to work.
Dezzy and his son, D.J., 10, walk down a long path with dog
pins on each side. The pins have massive Pit-bulls in each of
them. The dogs yelp and leap in excitement.
Dezzy holds a phone to his ear and watches D.J. dig into a
food bin.
D.J.
Is this enough daddy?
DEZZY
(to person on phone)
Hold on --
DEZZY (CONT'D)
Put some mo' in there. They got to
fight later.
(back on phone)
Alright, yeah I'm on it. I got to
find other matches too.
CORD (V.O.)
I'm sure they're not paying what
I'm paying.
Dezzy smirks.
21.
DEZZY
True, true. Listen, managers run
for cover when I mention yo' boy.
I'm gonna need a little mo' time.
(pause)
I know something gonna pop open.
Have you ever had to worry?
CORD (V.O.)
You've kept your word.
DEZZY
Right, you know I'm good for it.
Listen, since I got you on the
phone, what you think 'bout adding
ten percent to my fee?
DEZZY (CONT'D)
Hello? Hello? Ain't this a --
(to son)
HEY, stop being skimpy on them
portions!
KEISHA
Let's go! Let's go people! These
orders ain't gonna walk themselves
out.
She glares back at Doug.
KEISHA (CONT'D)
DOUG, help Hector dress them
burgers. You ain't just gonna work
that grill tonight.
KEISHA (CONT'D)
I don't care 'bout you making faces
either. Ya'll ain't gonna make my
shift the weak link.
22.
Like an assembly line, the crew gets each order to the front
counter.
KEISHA
Great job everybody! That's what it
takes, teamwork!
(pause)
Alright, let's get ready for the
next run. Stock those stations up.
KEISHA (CONT'D)
(grits teeth)
Didn't you hear what I said? STOCK -
YOUR - AREA.
DOUG
You don't see this mess?
KEISHA
If you got a problem with my
authority, you know what you can
do.
DOUG
My bad, BOSS.
Doug opens a box of meat and puts the frozen patties into the
container. Tears well up in his eyes.
DOUG
What are you doing to me?!
The door CLICKS -- It swings open and Keisha peeks around the
corner.
KEISHA
You trying to build an igloo or
something?! And who you talking to
in here?
Doug wipes his eyes and steps out with the tray under his
arm.
KEISHA (CONT'D)
Uh... Mr. Doug go ahead and get
setup. You still got a little time.
The room has several shelves filled with dusty V.H.S tapes.
Dezzy closes his door and sees Doug's Dodge Ram pull up a few
cars over.
DEZZY (O.S.)
Champ, what's happening?!
DOUG
Just the man I wanted to see.
DEZZY
Brother it's the other way around.
DOUG
Bro, I got a chance to talk to Hall
Fame referee, Richard Steele! The
cat was dropping knowledge. -- He
told me, quit taking the medium
fight paydays, and fight lesser
known talent.
(pause)
Then he said ,once I build my
record, the big money will come. I
told him, I knew just the man to
help me out.
DEZZY
Boy, god must be shinin' down on
you! You rubbin' shoulders with all
the celebrities.
(holds up paper)
I just got you on the fight card
with Pretty!
DOUG
WHAT, FLOYD MAYWEATHER JUNIOR? Bro,
how you pull that one off?
DEZZY
Don't worry 'bout it -- here give
me that.
(grabs bag)
We got to get you in here trainin'!
Mike stares from the window with concern as they walk toward
the gym. He hurries out his chair.
DEZZY
Mike.
MIKE
Preacherman go get your hands
wrapped.
MIKE (CONT'D)
(nods head)
Let me holla to you for a second.
MIKE
Close the door.
DEZZY
DAMN, thought I had a porn
collection.
Mike sneers.
26.
MIKE
Only a weak man lends his eyes to
something that will destroy him.
MIKE (CONT'D)
What you want?
DEZZY
OH -- I got a match lined up for
champ.
MIKE
It's a little early for Preacherman
to be stepping back in the ring,
don't you think?
DEZZY
It's a good one for him. This cat
making his pro debut. That's an
easy win.
MIKE
Hmm... let me think on it.
DEZZY
I don't know Mike, this gonna be on
the undercard of a Mayweather
fight, AND it's on HBO.
(pause)
Yawl need to jump on --
MIKE
I SAID LET ME THINK ABOUT IT. I'll
let you know something in a few
days.
Dezzy raises his hands and backs away.
DEZZY
Still got anger issues I see. We
don't want you to catch another
case, so I'll be out -- you know my
number.
MIKE
DEZZY!
27.
MIKE
(to coach)
Look at him, fighting like folks on
T.V.
(to Doug)
Quit that Floyd shit, and clinch if
you have to!
ASSISTANT COACH
He needs to stay off them ropes.
MIKE
Yeah, we need to get him a mean
streak.
MIKE (O.S.)
Preacherman, FOCUS!
LONG BEEP!
MIKE
That's enough. Preacherman hit the
showers.
ASSISTANT COACH
(sarcastic)
Oh I see, he just needs the right
motivation.
Mike enters the room and hears the showers turn off. He sees
Doug's hand grab a towel.
MIKE
HEY PREACHER, I'm in here! Don't
come out here with your junk out!
Doug laughs.
DOUG (O.S.)
Glad you said something. What's up,
how I do tonight?
MIKE
Good! Listen, you can't be going in
on your sparring partners like
that. Eighty percent, remember?
Doug snickers.
DOUG (O.S.)
Cool. Just make sure you tell him
too.
MIKE
You got it. How's the family? I
haven't seen your wife since
Preston was born.
DOUG
Uh, she's cool. Matter of fact, I'm
about to meet her for this, Uhm --
(pause)
Meeting session. Why you ask?
MIKE
(eyebrows raised)
MEETING SESSION? Hmm, I don't
believe I've ever heard of one of
those.
DOUG
(jokingly)
What?
MIKE
Nothing. Ain't my business but,
don't mess up a good thing son.
Keep your eyes on your prize. Don't
let your vision slip.
DOUG
What you talking about coach? I
only got eyes for Trisha.
MIKE
That's it?
DOUG
(firm)
Yes sir. That's it.
MIKE
Alright cool. Listen, when you got
more time, we need to talk about a
possible fight.
(pause)
I'll holla at you later.
DOUG
Hold on, what fight?!
MIKE (O.S.)
We'll talk! Better get to your
MEETING SESSION!
30.
MS. ANDREWS
During our last visit, I thought of
another exercise that helps couples
develop a deeper understanding of
each other.
(pause)
Have you guys ever heard of The
Five Love Languages?
Doug and Trisha look at each other, it's like a light bulb
comes on.
Jessica gets up and goes to a dry erase board and draws the
five categories.
MS. ANDREWS
As we can see, Trisha you respond
well to acts of service, and words
of affirmation. Douglass you
respond well to physical touch and
words of affirmation.
(pause)
(MORE)
31.
DOUG
I don't understand. Seems like mine
would be easier. All I want is for
her to want me as much as I want
her --
TRISHA
And all I want for you to do is do
the things you did when we first
got together! Unless you were
faking.
DOUG
WHAT? That's so dumb. Who's gonna
fake that long?
TRISHA
OH, I'M DUMB NOW?
MS. ANDREWS
MR. AND MRS. ROBERTSON, PLEASE.
MIKE
(waves)
Alright now, be careful out there!
Mike closes the door and his eyes zeroes in on a bird cage
across the room. He walks toward it.
MIKE (CONT'D)
Hey pretty girl. You miss me? I
missed you.
Mike grabs a small box of food next to the cage and pours it
into the bird's bowl. He peers into the cage, but his eyes
move past the bird onto a picture on the wall of a beautiful
black woman.
MIKE (CONT'D)
I know, I know, don't open the
cage. You ought to know she ain't
going nowhere.
Mike goes over to the wall and gently pulls the picture down.
He sits in a chair, holds the picture close, and slumps in
the seat.
MIKE (CONT'D)
(sleepy whisper)
I miss you so much.
A few of them chat with people coming out the store and
others catch people passing by.
Trisha spots two teen HOOD GUYS with their pants sagging
approaching the store.
33.
TRISHA
Excuse me!
One of the guys is waving his arms and pointing to the sky.
Trisha's hands is on her hips and she's shaking her head.
HOOD GUY
You know I'm right, that's why you
shaking your head. Ain't nobody
named Jesus come from no sky.
(pause)
If he did, where the proof?
Trisha is silent.
The hood guy taps his friend on the arm and they laugh
hysterically.
DOUG (O.S.)
History said he existed...
DOUG (CONT'D)
Yawl ever heard of a cat named
Tacitus..? What about Seutonius..?
Pliny the Younger..?
DOUG (CONT'D)
They are just a few people who
wrote about Yeshua back in the day,
and they're located in other
ancient documents.
HOOD GUY
Say bruh, who's Yahoo?
DOUG
That's YE-SH-UA, and it's Jesus'
original name.
CUT TO:
Trisha and Doug burst into the room. They kiss passionately
and rip off each others clothes!
TRISHA
(panting)
Thanks for tonight.
DOUG
(panting)
You know I got you.
TRISHA
(whispers)
WAIT, we can't.
(pause)
I'm on my cycle.
DOUG
You playing right?
TRISHA
I'm sorry. We could do that other
thing --
Doug flings her arm away and gets out the bed. He walks over
to the dresser.
35.
DOUG
IF YOU KNEW YOU WERE -- never
mind.
DOUG
Guess I'll take a cold shower.
JULIE
Your ten o' clock is here.
JOHNNY
Come again?
JULIE
Doug Robertson... The welder.
JOHNNY
OH, YEAH! The guy with the
impressive resume. Send him on
back.
JULIE (O.S.)
Doug, grab your stuff, hun. Mr.
Smith will see you now.
JOHNNY
(motions hand)
Thanks, be on standby to get this
guy whatever he needs.
DOUG (O.S.)
Mr. Smith?
DOUG (CONT'D)
I'm here for the job. Can I sit my
bucket over here?
Doug sits the tools on a metal table, and walks over to the
welding machine.
JOHNNY
YOU'RE DOUG ROBERTSON?
DOUG
Yes sir, Douglass Robertson Jr. I
see your company likes Miller
machines, good choice.
JOHNNY
But I thought you were --
(pause)
Julie didn't tell you? We've
already filled the position.
DOUG
Already filled huh, I see.
DOUG (CONT'D)
You might wanna take the hiring
sign off your door.
DOUG
I was the wrong person for the job.
TRISHA (V.O.)
That's crazy, you got more
experience than anybody.
DOUG
Punk-ass foreman saw I was black
and they wasn't hiring no more.
TRISHA (V.O.)
Awe, I'm sorry baby. Don't worry
about it, God will open another
door.
(pause)
But He ain't gonna do it with you
cussing and stuff. You know better.
Doug hangs up the phone and scrolls through the names on the
phone. He stops at: Dezzy "Matchmaker" McMillian.
38.
DEZZY
Get'em boy! Get'em!
The group of thugs shout and jeer; they flash their money in
the air.
DEZZY (CONT'D)
Preacher, what up?
(pause)
Nah, I'm out here 'bout to take
these fools money.
D.J. (O.S.)
Doe-boy losing daddy!
DEZZY
What tha Hell, hold on Doug --
DEZZY (CONT'D)
DAMN IT, COME ON BOY!
(to Doug)
All I got is that Mayweather fight
card. You gonna have to put some
pressure on your boy Mike, cause he
ain't tryin' to hear me.
(pause)
Yeah, it's a big pay day too! We
all gonna come out on top! Hey, I
gotta jet, my money ain't lookin'
good over here!
Dezzy hangs up the phone and jogs over to check on his dog.
He sees the dog laying on the ground with blood pouring from
its throat. He drops his head and shakes it.
39.
MR. WILLIE
This is why I don't like messing
with yawl. Nobody knows nothing!
I'm gonna take my business
somewhere else!
TRISHA
I'm sorry Mr. Willie but this is my
first time hearing about what
happened. I'll try to help the best
way I can.
MR. WILLIE
Why does my bill keep going up?!
Yawls don't think I notice it, but
I see what's going on. It just keep
tip, tip, tipping up. My bills are
set for a certain amount.
TRISHA
I'm with you Mr. Willie, I don't
like people messing with my money
either. It's too hard to get now
days.
TRISHA (CONT'D)
What's your last name again Mr.
Willie? I'm gonna find you another
provider. Some of these companies
will try to be slick.
Carolyn watches how Trisha satisfies Mr. Willie, she leans
back at her desk thinking. After a short time Mr. Willie
rises to his feet smiling holding a new policy in hand.
Trisha even escorts the elderly man to the door; great
service.
CAROLYN (O.S.)
Trisha could you come here for a
second?
40.
CAROLYN
Could you close the door?
CAROLYN (CONT'D)
That was pretty impressive the way
you handled Mr. Bivins.
TRISHA
Thank you Mrs. Adams.
CAROLYN
You are such a great employee
Trisha but as you know, business
hasn't been going well lately.
(pause)
Corporate won't be sending out
bonuses this year, BUT they are
looking for an assistant manager's
position. Is that something that
may interest you?
TRISHA
Yes ma'am, I would love that
position. Thank you!
CAROLYN
Fantastic, there's a slight bump in
pay, but it won't kick in till the
beginning of the year.
TRISHA
That's fine. I appreciate you
thinking of me. Uh, since we're
talking. Do you think it will be a
problem if I got a cash advance
since we're not getting our
bonuses.
Carolyn smiles and pulls a metal box from under her desk.
CAROLYN
I don't see why not.
Doug can be seen from the chest up on the toilet. His face is
covered in sweat and he's jiggling fast. His eyes widen as he
brings a phone closer to his face.
The Jaguar car pulls into the driveway and the garage door
scrolls up.
Doug pauses from his rapid movement and just stares blankly;
he's listening. He cuts off the phone and hears laughter from
the garage.
TRISHA (O.S.)
Girl you crazy! That's why you
ain't got no man.
Doug puts the phone on the bathroom counter and quickly rises
to his feet!
Trisha enters the room with her hands full; she holds her
purse and tray with two ice-cream sundaes.
TRISHA
Baby I'm home, I brought you
something!
(pause)
Girl I gotta go, unlike you, I'm
willing to make my man happy.
DOUG (O.S.)
Baby, you should've told me you
were coming, I would've made you
lunch!
Trisha puts her purse down and glances down the hall; she
sees Doug dart into the bedroom.
42.
Trisha enters the room holding the tray and notices Doug
wearing a pair of boxers. He wipes sweat from his head.
TRISHA
You already took a bath?
DOUG
Uh yeah, might as well, nowhere
else to go.
DOUG (CONT'D)
AWE MAN, THANK YOU!
(takes a bite)
I'm starting to feel better
already.
TRISHA
I don't understand how people still
racist in this day and age.
Trisha shakes her head, puts her phone on the dresser and
walks toward the exit. Doug watches her walk across the hall
to the bathroom; his eyes widen.
DOUG
Uh, baby what you doing? Your stuff
gonna melt.
TRISHA (O.S.)
I've been holding this all day!
Trisha sits on the toilet but we can only see her from the
shoulders up. She looks to the right then to the left and
notices Doug's phone on the counter.
TRISHA
Doug!
DOUG
(nervously)
Yeah?
43.
Slow motion.
TRISHA
What did I tell you about this?
Doug grins with relief. Trisha places the empty roll and the
phone on the dresser; she grabs her ice-cream.
TRISHA (CONT'D)
Mrs. Adams offered me a assistant
managers position.
DOUG
Oh wow, that's what's up!
Congratulations baby.
TRISHA
Only bad thing is, we ain't getting
our bonuses this year. So we'll
have to figure out something else
for the kids birthday party.
DOUG
I might have a big money fight
coming up, but Mike don't want me
to take it.
(Doug scoffs)
We can use that money for the kids
party, plus it can help on some
bills.
TRISHA
I don't know baby, Mike might have
a good reason for you not to take
it.
(pause)
We'll talk later about it. Hey, I
probably won't be able to make it
to the session tonight, but I want
you to still go -- we paying for
it.
44.
They both laugh. She accidently grabs his phone and exits the
room.
MS. ANDREWS
Wow, so the guy was really that
fast.
DOUG
Man, I swore he had four arms! The
heavyweight division ain't like the
old days. They're like fast moving
dinosaurs.
MS. ANDREWS
Well, I don't want to prolong the
time, so let's get started -- I am
glad we're alone today, because it
will allow for a different topic.
Doug relaxes.
DOUG
To be honest, my problems are
deeper than Trisha trying to boss
me.
MS. ANDREWS
What do you mean?
TEEN DOUG
Where Pee-Wee at?
BLACK BOY
In his room.
TEEN DOUG
Where Ms. Willis at?
BLACK BOY
At work.
Doug peeks down the dark hallway and sees dim light peeking
under a door.
PEE-WEE (O.S.)
GET YO' PUNK ASS AWAY FROM THAT
DOOR!
PEE-WEE
DAMN NIGGA, you ain't never seen a
flick before?
The young black boy's head peeks around the corner next to
Doug. Pee-Wee springs to his feet, yanks Doug into the room
and slams the door!
46.
PEE-WEE
His lil nosey ass been trying to
come in here all day.
(to the door)
And you better not be listening at
my door!
PEE-WEE (CONT'D)
What up homie, sit down -- you
bring my paper?
Doug pulls a folded paper out his pocket and hands it to Pee-
Wee.
PEE-WEE (CONT'D)
My nigga! When I pass the test,
Mrs. Harris gonna be saying Pee-Wee
but how?
(pause)
I'm gonna say, don't yo' old ass
worry 'bout it, just give me the
twenty you promised. You know what--
PEE-WEE (CONT'D)
A favor for a favor. And if your
mama find it, you better not
mention my name!
DOUG
It took me awhile to understand,
but a young mind is not to be
exposed to certain things.
DOUG (CONT'D)
This is the worst thing they
could've ever made for a guy like
me.
47.
MS. ANDREWS
Mr. Robertson I appreciate your
candor.
She hands Doug the book; The title: Every Man's Battle. Doug
looks at Trisha's phone again and springs to his feet.
DOUG
UH, Thanks Mr. Gill but I forgot I
have to pick up the kids from over
my mother-n-laws before Trisha gets
off.
SHANIQUA
How many times you try the code?
Trisha sighs.
TRISHA
Shaniqua it's not a big deal.
SHANIQUA
Not a big deal? Then why am I
picking you up? All I know is, if
he was my man, it wouldn't be no
secret codes. Them preachers be the
worst ones.
Trisha glances out the window and sees her house coming up.
She grabs her purse.
SHANIQUA (CONT'D)
You know they got it where you can
synchronize phones, computers, all
stuff together. That way you can
check on everything.
TRISHA
Thanks for coming to get me.
SHANIQUA
Girl please, you know I got you,
but you need to go check yo' man.
Trisha enters the door; she sees Doug and the kids sprawled
on the floor sleep. The game console plays on the T.V.
Feeling tired she leaves everything the way it is and goes
toward her bedroom.
Trisha's eyes slowly come into focus; she sees a hot steamy
cup of coffee and a plate of breakfast goodies on the
nightstand next to her.
TRISHA
(groggy)
Thanks baby.
Doug turns around and smiles. He walks over and kisses her
head.
DOUG
You're welcome. I came in here last
night and saw you sleep in your
work clothes and knew you must've
been tired.
(pause)
The kids are next door playing.
TRISHA
I tried to call you last night
because I had a flat. I realized I
had your phone.
DOUG
Don't trip, I'll swing by and fix
it -- HEY, remember that big fight
Dezzy had for me? I'm gonna take
it. He emailed it to me this
morning.
TRISHA
What did Mike say?
DOUG
I haven't told him yet. If he don't
accept me doing it, I'll just pay a
coach to work my corner at the
venue.
(pause)
I'm going to practice in a little
bit, and we gonna talk then.
Doug rises to his feet and walks to his gym bag by the door.
He grabs his phone on the dresser.
TRISHA
Doug what's your phone code? I
couldn't get in touch with you, and
Shaniqua had to bring me home.
50.
DOUG
What, you wanna check my phone?
Here -- I ain't got nothing to
hide.
(hands over phone)
Could you hurry, cause I don't want
to be late.
DOUG (CONT'D)
See I told you, nothing.
He kisses her on the forehead and goes to the exit.
DOUG (CONT'D)
I've already cleaned the house. So
just relax today. Love you.
Mike rearranges boxing tapes when Doug enters the doorway and
knocks on the frame.
DOUG
Coach?
Mike smiles through the frown. A few tapes are in his hand.
MIKE
PREACHERMAN, kind of early. Have a
seat -- What you out doing?
DOUG
Came by to holla at you about some
business.
(pause)
That fight Dezzy had lined up, I
took it.
DOUG (CONT'D)
My kids birthday party coming up.
51.
MIKE
Always chasing what's not meant for
you to have. When you gonna learn
to take it slow son.
DOUG
I knew you was gonna say that,
that's why I --
MIKE
Save it. You already made your
choice. Ain't no sense of trying to
convince me it was a good one.
DOUG
You gonna train me for it?
MIKE
I'm behind whatever you want
Preacher.
Doug rises to his feet adjusts his gym bag. He looks at the
back of Mike's head.
DOUG
I'm gonna go wrap my hands, ok?
DEZZY (O.S.)
It's a done deal. I make things
happen.
CORD (V.O.)
Excellent, there may be a seat at
the big table for you after all.
I'll be sending over the flight and
hotel information later. See you in
Miami.
MIKE
Your timing was horrible last
fight. We got to get that head
moving after them punches. You
ready?
The weights pause in the air and swing back toward Doug who
throws a combination of punches.
LONG BEEP!
MIKE (CONT'D)
(hand on timer)
That's it!
DOUG
One more round before I head to
work.
Mike nods and reaches for the timer. He grabs the weights but
coughs and hacks violently. -- He hunches over.
DOUG (CONT'D)
You aight coach?
MIKE
(wheezing)
Bathroom.
Mike nudges Doug back in the doorway, and turns the faucet
on.
MIKE
I'll be fine just let me catch my
breath.
Mike leans over the sink rinsing his mouth. Blood and water
swirl down the drain.
ASIA (O.S.)
Is he ok?
ASIA (CONT'D)
I went to nursing school. Let me
check.
(pause)
Coach, it's Asia, I'm coming in.
DOUG
Good thing you were here. What you
think is wrong with him?
ASIA
Unfortunately guys like coach only
have one gear, GO. When the engine
overheats, they're down for awhile.
(pause)
He needs to rest for a few days.
DOUG
Dang, this would happen before my
biggest fight.
ASIA
Didn't you just fight, like a month
ago?
54.
DOUG
I had to jump on this one -- It's
on HBO. Can you believe that?!
ASIA
WOW, I can't wait to see you do
your thing!
DOUG
Huh, that's the reaction I was
expecting from my wife.
ASIA
Don't worry about it. It's hard to
appreciate things like that when
you're not in our world.
ASIA (CONT'D)
Keep me posted on coaches status. I
got to head to work. Call me when
you can.
Doug watches her exit the house. He then stares at the card.
SHANIQUA
You can't tell me he ain't doing
nothing --
(glares backwards)
CUT OUT ALL THAT RACKET, DANG!
55.
SHANIQUA (CONT'D)
What? How can you think with all of
that?
TRISHA
I tuned it out. I'm used to it,
they're kids.
Shaniqua scoffs.
SHANIQUA
ANYWAY, what the Robertsons gonna
do about the kids birthday party?
(sarcastic)
No big balling this year with Doug
working at What-a-burger.
TRISHA
He actually got a big fight coming
up on T.V. So we're going to do it
big like we always do.
SHANIQUA
If it was me, I'd be trying to save
my money -- but hey, do you.
DOUG
Hey baby, did you wash my work
clothes?
TRISHA
They're laid on the bed.
SHANIQUA
(smug)
Doug me and the kids will be up
there in a little bit. What's good
on the menu?
DOUG (O.S.)
Trisha can I see you for a sec.
56.
Doug stands at the door holding the knob. Trisha enters and
he slams the door.
DOUG
(loud whisper)
What was that?! So we're making fun
of where I work now?
TRISHA
Awe baby, you know how Shaniqua is.
She didn't mean no harm. At least
you working somewhere.
DOUG
You think this is a game? I'm a
grown man flipping hamburgers,
HAMBURGERS.
TRISHA
I'm sorry, dang.
DOUG
Whatever, could you wash these
sweats. They bring me good luck.
TRISHA
We don't believe in that round
here.
DOUG
Just do it please. I'm gonna eat at
work tonight.
TRISHA
(jokingly)
I already knew that -- That's one
thing you're not complaining about.
DOUG
Dang shame, got to laugh to keep
from crying.
Shaniqua flips the remote when she sees Doug enter the room.
SHANIQUA
(sarcastically)
Don't forget about me.
Doug rolls his eyes and grabs the door handle. He turns and
looks at Trisha in the hallway.
DOUG
Don't forget my sweats, please.
Trisha nods and Doug exits the door. She cuts her eye at
Shaniqua.
TRISHA
Why you do that? You know how he
is.
SHANIQUA
What? My kids like What-a-burger.
SHANIQUA
I might have to go see a counselor
next time I get married.
TRISHA
Girl do it, this guy has worked
wonders for me and Doug!
SHANIQUA
GIRL PLEASE, you know black folks
don't do counselors. That's for
niggas tryin' to be bougie.
Trisha stares at her then rolls her eyes. She throws more
clothes into the washer.
SHANIQUA (CONT'D)
(reads card)
Well, I do know who workin' wonders
with they SPECIAL nurse.
TRISHA
What?
Shaniqua passes her the card and grunts. Trisha reads it.
SHANIQUA
Hmm, I think you need a different
counselor.
KEISHA
I knew you couldn't do it, you too
tall!
KEISHA (CONT'D)
(to crew)
Yawl be quite.
(on the phone)
What-a-burger on the Loop...
KEISHA (CONT'D)
Yes ma'am. Yes ma'am.
(pause)
Do you want to talk to him?
(pause)
Ok, I'll tell him.
Keisha hangs up the phone and looks at Doug.
KEISHA (CONT'D)
OOH WEE, MR. DOUG YOU IN TROUBLE!
DOUG
(dismissively)
In trouble..? I'm a grown man.
KEISHA
Well yo' wife been trying to call
you.
59.
Doug pulls his phone out his pocket and observes it: 13
missed calls. He presses Trisha on speed dial...
DOUG
What? I can't understand you. What
are you talking about?
INTERCUT TRISHA/DOUG
TRISHA
Don't play dumb!
SHANIQUA
(whispers)
Who the Hell is Asia?
TRISHA
Who the Heck is Asia?!
SHANIQUA
(whispers)
HECK? I didn't say that.
DOUG
I don't know no Asia.
TRISHA
Then why you got her card?!
DOUG
OH, Asia, from the gym. She's --
TRISHA
Why haven't I've heard of her till
now? You know what, never mind.
WE'RE DONE!
DOUG
What?!
60.
TRISHA
I'm not dealing with this! Me and
the kids are leaving!
DOUG
Hello? TRISHA?
SHANIQUA
What I tell you, I knew it!
SHANIQUA (CONT'D)
Who you calling?
TRISHA
(trembling voice)
My brother. He's gonna have to
bring his truck so I can get my
stuff.
SHANIQUA
Where you taking it?
TRISHA
Over my mama's.
SHANIQUA
Nah girl, you and the kids can stay
with me. Don't bring that drama
over your mama house.
Trisha nods and puts the phone to her ear; tears roll down
her face.
SHANIQUA (CONT'D)
Don't even worry 'bout it, you
gonna be aight.
SHANIQUA
Ain't no sense trying to explain
now!
SHANIQUA (CONT'D)
Did that nigga throw me a finger?
(to William)
OH, excuse me Pastor, I forgot you
was a man of God.
Doug enters the room and sees Trisha with a rack of clothes.
DOUG
Why you didn't let me explain?
DOUG (CONT'D)
Will you talk to me!
TRISHA
You just gonna try to lie your way
out of it! MOVE!
DOUG
BUT I DIDN'T DO ANYTHING.
Someone beats on the door, and fiddles with the knob.
SHANIQUA (O.S.)
Trisha you aight?! Open the door.
TRISHA
(to Shaniqua)
I'm fine.
(pause)
Move out the way Doug.
62.
DOUG
Asia just wanted me to let her know
when coach was feeling better.
She's a nurse.
TRISHA
Move Doug.
SHANIQUA (O.S.)
The police on their way girl!
TRISHA
You ain't nothing but a lying
hypocrite, and I'm not gonna keep
wasting my time with you!
DOUG
If I wanted the girl, I could've
had her but I don't. The only thing
I've done is watched porn --
TRISHA
YOU AIN'T NOTHING BUT A LIAR!
SHANIQUA
You ain't gonna do nothing?!
William sprints over to the door and slams his frail body
against it. He rubs his arm.
SHANIQUA (CONT'D)
Girl we gonna get you out! Hold on!
TRISHA
(Crying)
I GAVE YOU EVERYTHING! I HATE YOU!
63.
DOUG
I'M SORRY! BUT YOU GOTTA BELIEVE
ME!
A firm knock hits the door. One that only a few will
recognize.
POLICE VOICE
Mrs. Robertson could you open the
door!
Doug rolls her off him and pins her down, but scratches her
cheek in the process.
TRISHA
DOUG, THAT WAS MY FACE!
The TWO POLICEMEN BURST in the door! They rush over and pull
Doug up. One of the officers helps Trisha to her feet. The
policemen stand in between the couple.
POLICE #1
Ma'am are you ok?
Trisha nods.
POLICE #1 (CONT'D)
We were called for a domestic
dispute. What happened?
SHANIQUA
His punk ass been sleeping around
and now he wants to beat on her!
POLICE #1
(to Trisha)
Ma'am is this true?
Trisha drops her head and cries. Police #1 looks at the other
and nods.
DOUG
I ONLY CAME HERE TO TALK. SHE WAS
THE ONE HITTING ME.
64.
POLICE #1
Sir, we need you to cooperate. Your
wife has a mark on her face and we
have to take you in for
questioning.
DOUG
BUT I DIDN'T DO NOTHING!
SHANIQUA
WATCH IT, HE'S A PRO FIGHTER!
The cops look at each other, then rush Doug! The three men
struggle but the police subdue Doug. They lead him to the
exit.
TRISHA
NO, I JUST WANTED HIM TO LEAVE!
DON'T TAKE HIM TO JAIL!
TRISHA
Please don't take him!
DOUG
(stern)
Could you get her off me?
POLICE #1
Ma'am we need you to step a side
please.
Shaniqua runs over and nudges Trisha to the side, but still
manages to keep filming.
TRISHA (O.S.)
Doug I'm sorry!
POLICE #1
(snide)
Oh look, the fighter is in tears
now? Better dry it up before you
get in there with the big boys.
POLICE #2
Do you know who that is? I'm
positive he's not worried, that's
the Preacherman.
POLICE #1
(jokingly)
OH WOW, A BOXING PREACHER GOING TO
JAIL? I've finally seen it all.
Doug slumps down in the backseat and stares out the window at
Trisha. He watches her slowly fade away.
MALE VOICE
Mr. Robertson!
OFFICER
You made bail.
66.
Doug and Mike walk toward an old-school ride. One that fits a
smooth guy like Mike.
DOUG
I owe you big for this one.
MIKE
Don't worry about it, I'll take a
little extra after the fight.
MIKE (CONT'D)
Why don't you come stay with me,
you need to clear your head. You
can get a little more training in
before we leave.
DOUG
This is crazy, all this for a woman
I didn't even mess with.
MIKE
Yeah but you hit it 'bout fourteen
times in your mind. That's where it
starts.
SHANIQUA (CONT'D)
You eat bacon?
TRISHA
Uh, thanks girl, but I don't eat
this early in the morning,
67.
SHANIQUA (O.S.)
I know some people when they turn
Christian stop EVERYTHING, even
down to what they eat.
(pause)
I ain't 'bout to give up pork, you
feel me?!
SHANIQUA (O.S.)
Ronald!
SHANIQUA (CONT'D)
They wanna go on a double-date at
that new spot downtown. Look how
God be turning things around. -- He
be UPGRADING girl!
Doug and Mike enter the house. Doug puts his bag on the
floor. The picture of the black woman on the wall catches his
attention.
MIKE
You can have the back room for the
night. It's some blankets in the
closet, you gonna need them, cause
that room gets chilly.
DOUG
It's cool. I'm hot-natured anyway.
(points to picture)
Hey coach who is this?
Mike glances back but moves toward the kitchen, like Doug
didn't ask anything.
68.
MIKE
I didn't get a chance to go grocery
shopping so we gonna head to the
lake about an hour.
He exits the room. Doug shrugs but quickly turns back toward
Mike's direction.
DOUG
HOLD UP, WE'RE GOING FISHING?!
Esteban cuts an eye over at Cord outside the ring and winks.
DEZZY
OH HE'S NICE!
CORD
You're looking at the first Cuban-
American heavyweight champ.
DEZZY
No doubt, no doubt. Glad you
trusted me with matching him.
Dezzy stretches out his hand. Cord glances at it, then shakes
it.
CORD
This is just the first. You find
ten more matches like the
Preacherman and we'll all be
sitting pretty in the next couple
of years.
Doug cast his reel out into the lake. Mike slowly winds his
back in.
DOUG
Coach you miss boxing?
MIKE
All the time. If it wasn't for
these old eyes, me and you probably
wouldn't be talking.
DOUG
How did you adjust to not wanting
to do it no more?
MIKE
The desire is always going to be
there. You just have to make
yourself move on. Our minds do what
we tell it to.
DOUG
My mind wouldn't let me think about
nothing else.
MIKE
That's why you got to keep your
guard up, set some boundaries. Your
enemy is always looking for to slip
up, so he can catch you with the
big one.
MIKE (CONT'D)
You got another chance Preacher, I
can feel it, but you got to work on
that defense, people would kill for
the life you got.
Doug peeks over at Mike who's looking out over the water.
DOUG
Who's the woman on the wall?
MIKE
The prize I lost. It took me years
to get my defense right, when I
did, it was too late.
70.
A few people sit at the table with them and they all have
drinks, but Mike has several glasses in front of him. He
picks up a fresh glass full of dark liquor.
PENNIE
(holds Mike arm)
Baby, don't you think you've had
enough?
MIKE
DAMN BABY, I just won the title --
(to friends)
Nigga can't even celebrate with his
friends.
(mumbles to friend)
A nigga might have to hold off on
the ring.
MIKE (CONT'D)
Suga-Ray I'm coming for you
brother!
Mike shoots down the liquor and his groupies follow suit.
They all laugh. He ignores Pennie until...
DARK BROTHER
(to Pennie)
Babygirl, I bet sweet music is yo'
middle name.
MIKE (O.S.)
She's taken brother!
The guy cuts his eye over to Mike and his posses and scoffs.
He turns back to Pennie.
DARK BROTHER
This ain't no boxing ring nigga.
You best to keep it moving.
The guy slides his jacket back to expose the handle of his
gun.
Mike erupts in anger and cold-cocks the guy across the room!
He then reaches for Pennie's hand --
BANG! BANG!
Mike quickly runs for cover but slips out his pistol and
fires backwards while weaving through the crowd. The people
in the club run and scream; it's pandemonium!
Mike sprints back across the room with bullets zipping past
his head.
DOUG
How did you dodge prison?
MIKE
My money got me a slick-talking
lawyer...
MIKE (CONT'D)
But the cell I live in now, has no
key.
Asia closes the door to her car and observes Doug and Mike
coming out of the house.
Mike backs away and slides his hand out of one of the mitts.
He heaves in some oxygen.
MIKE (CONT'D)
Go get you a drink.
DOUG
Don't need it, I'm straight.
MIKE
Well I ain't.
MIKE (CONT'D)
Take five.
Mike walks away and Doug wails on the heavy bag next to him.
ASIA
Looking good! Push yourself!
ASIA (CONT'D)
And the winner is -- THE
PREACHERMAN!
Doug laughs.
73.
DOUG
I better be, coach putting me
through the grinder.
ASIA
You might not see it but you're the
next great champ the world is
waiting for.
(pause)
You're training hard and staying
away from your family to achieve
your goal -- Oh yeah, I see it.
ASIA
Do you know who you're fighting?
DOUG
Nah, I just know he's a hometown
kid.
ASIA
Those are the toughest ones. Even
when you win, you don't win.
Is your wife going to the fight
with you? You guys can look at it
as a second honeymoon.
DOUG
We're going through some problems
right now. Actually I'm staying
with coach to get my mind right.
ASIA
Yeah, I seen you both coming from
the house this morning. Listen, if
you ever want to go do something --
DOUG
Asia... I don't want you to get the
wrong idea, I love my wife. You're
a great person. Back in the day, I
definitely would've jumped on the
opportunity.
(pause)
But I know me, and it's best we
don't go down that road. You feel
me? Let's just keep it in the gym,
cool?
ASIA
I feel you. You're a good guy
Champ, in more ways than one.
Hopefully, it won't be awkward
going forward?
DOUG
Of coarse not! You're my friend.
Plus, if I pass out from training I
might need your assistance.
ASIA
I better let you get back to work.
Doug lies in the bed reading the book Edward gave him. He
hears a somber voice in the background that's disturbing.
Doug follows the voice and peers out the kitchen window. He
sees Mike sit on the back porch and sip from a bottle.
MIKE
(holds picture)
Life ain't the same without you. I
miss you so much! I know you tired
of hearing it but I'm sorry. Sorry
for not listening, sorry for not
showing you how much you meant to
me.
75.
Mike presses the picture against his heart and takes a swig
from the bottle. He jumps up from the chair and runs over to
the steps.
He puts the picture on the top step and goes to the bottom of
them.
MIKE (CONT'D)
(digs in pocket)
I GOT YOU SOMETHING!
MIKE (CONT'D)
I got that ring you wanted, we can
make it official.
(on one knee)
Pennie Rochelle Givens, will you
marry me...?
(pause)
You will? Awe, baby this is the
best day of my life.
MIKE (CONT'D)
(whisper)
Ain't no one like you Pennie,
Nobody!
Doug and Mike walk toward the exit. They spot Dezzy wearing a
nice shirt and slacks in the crowd holding a sign by the
door. They approach him.
DEZZY
CHAMP, yawl made it!
DOUG
Dezzy? I almost didn't recognize
you. You clean up nice bro.
DEZZY
I'm making big moves champ.
MIKE
(grips luggage)
I got it.
76.
Dezzy smirks.
DEZZY
They put all the fighters in the
Biscayne Marriot. I got the meal
tickets. You hungry champ? It's
some good stuff around here. I'm
gonna take you to this Cuban spot.
MIKE
He don't need any of that. A good
pasta restaurant will be good.
Dezzy scoffs at Mike but nods with respect. They walk toward
a car parked by the curve.
Doug and Mike enter the room. It's lights, camera, and plenty
of action. Reporters, boxers, and ring-card girls swarm the
room. Mike sees a guy holding a tray of liquor.
MIKE
Preacherman, I believe I'll make
myself friendly.
Doug shakes his head and smirks, thinking Mike is going for
the girls, but Mike scurries away and snatches a drink off
the tray while fading into the crowd.
DOUG
This is crazy stuff ain't it?
SPORTS AGENT
Yes, that Mayweather is a cash-cow.
DOUG
I can only hope to be at that level
in my career.
SPORTS AGENT
Oh, you're a fighter? What weight?
DOUG
Heavyweight.
77.
SPORTS AGENT
Little on the light side don't you
think? Who are you fighting?
DOUG
(pointing)
That cat over there, Esteban.
The sports agent looks at Doug with great fear in his eyes.
SPORTS AGENT
YOU'RE FIGHTING ESTEBAN GARCIA? Do
you know who that is?!
DOUG
I won five Toughman contest and
went to the National level four
times plus I --
SPORTS AGENT
TOUGHMAN? -- My man, that's not
boxing.
(hand extended)
Good luck, you're gonna need it.
MIKE
What I miss?
DOUG
I'm dead.
78.
MIKE
Huh?
DOUG
I'm fighting the boxer of the
century.
MIKE
You done fought guys bigger than
that before. You got this.
DOUG
I'm not talking about that. This
guy has --
MIKE
PREACHER, I said you got this. Now
let's get back to the room so I can
see if our room got a mini-bar.
DOUG
You don't need NOTHING else to
drink.
SHANIQUA
I should've gotten something new
and took it back in the morning.
(glances at Trisha)
What's wrong, you don't like what
you're wearing either? Come here...
SHANIQUA (CONT'D)
Girl I had the niggas losing their
minds, when I wore this! Of coarse
that was a few years ago, but
still.
79.
TRISHA
A little small for my taste.
SHANIQUA
YOU'LL BE SLAYING IT THOUGH! Ronald
gonna be all over you.
(pause)
Now don't be sinning tonight. I
don't want to be held accountable
COMMENTATOR #1
This may be Floyd's most defining
fight of his career.
COMMENTATOR #2
Yes, Henry Bruselles has the
technical skill-set that could
present problems for Mayweather,
even though he has two losses.
COMMENTATOR #2 (CONT'D)
This guy really packs a lot of
power!
COMMENTATOR #1
And speaking of power-- this show
promises plenty of that! Making his
pro-debut, the Cuban sensation,
Esteban Garcia who skipped the
Olympics to try his hand in the
pros. He'll be fighting Doug
Robertson from Texas.
COMMENTATOR #2
Now this kid Esteban has the goods.
Born to a family of fighters, this
could be an early night for Doug.
80.
DOUG
Can't believe I'm still getting
butterflies.
MIKE
That's a good thing, keep you
alert. You get cold-cocked when you
get too cocky.
(looks at official)
You like it?
Mike steps to the side and the official walks over examines
Doug's wraps; then autographs them with a marker.
OFFICIAL
You guys are the second bout of the
evening.
MIKE
This is your night champ. You're at
the crossroads, make a decision.
(pause)
You gonna great or stay mediocre.
MIKE (CONT'D)
I'm gonna check out the show for a
little bit, go sense the energy.
WAITER
Table for four?
WAITER (CONT'D)
I'm sorry but it looks like we're
at capacity.
JAMEEL
You SURE you can't squeeze four
more in?
WAITER
Right this way sir.
CORD
I'll be depositing an extra ten
percent into your account. -- I
figure that preacher guy goes down
in the first round, after that,
Esteban's name will ignite.
DEZZY
For sho'. Tell ya boy, Preacher is
open to left hooks, he carry his
jab hand low.
CORD
Oh yeah? We can use that.
Mike slides behind the wall. He shakes his head in disbelief.
MIKE
(whisper)
Ain't this a bitch.
COMMENTATOR #1
Good, Anthony seems to be moving.
Just moments ago, he laid lifeless,
after an unbelievable straight
right by Lorenzo Reynolds.
COMMENTATOR #2
Let's not kid ourselves this is
still a dangerous sport that can
turn on a dime. Fortunately for
Derek, he'll live to see another
day...
JAMEEL
WHOA, YOU SEE HOW THAT NIGGA WENT
DOWN? I knew Reynolds had power,
but MAN! A couple of more years,
AND HE'S THE ONE that's gonna give
Floyd a run for his money.
SHANIQUA
That's right baby, my man know his
sports.
Shaniqua wraps her arms over Jameel and gives him a big kiss.
RONALD
(whispers)
You ok? You look lovely by the way.
TRISHA
Thank you.
MIKE
That Dezzy trying to set us up!
DOUG
What?
MIKE
They done overmatched us for the
fight. Plus, that nigga telling
them how to beat you.
MIKE (CONT'D)
You remember the plan? -- VOLUME,
VOLUME, VOLUME. You gotta rack up
the points on this cat. Be first!
DOUG
I got'cha coach. We gonna pull this
one out, God got us.
MIKE
That nigga done worked my nerves. I
gotta piss.
Mike hurries out the room and Doug continues to shadow box
but at a much urgent pace.
DEZZY
COACH, what's happening! Yawl
ready?
MIKE
Kick rocks, you slimy bastard.
84.
DEZZY
What the Hell wrong with you?
MIKE
Don't play dumb nigga. I heard the
convo between you and that
promoter. You might think this
gonna be a walk in the park, but
trust me, we got some for your ass!
Dezzy zips his pants and smirks. He walks past Mike to wash
his hands.
DEZZY
I'm glad you believe that noise you
talking, maybe you can feed some to
the preacher.
(pause)
But we both know how this gonna
play out. This new kid gonna mess
yawl up, and yawl gonna go home
happy with a nice payday saying you
were happy, yawl got messed up.
MIKE
How you gonna do Preacherman like
that? If it wasn't for him, you'd
be living on the streets.
DEZZY
I've repaid my debt to that man.
Shit, all the matches I've found
for him, that nigga owe me.
MIKE
Ain't surprised. Just another black
man building his career on the back
of another black man.
DEZZY
The only color that matters in this
world my man is, GREEN.
MIKE
I live by different principles.
DEZZY
Mike... MIKE... SOMEBODY HELP!
DOUG
COACH!
DEZZY
(holds Doug)
He's gonna be ok champ we got
medics on the way.
DOUG
WHAT HAPPEN?
DEZZY
Don't know. I got here just in time
and saw him lying on the floor.
(pause)
We got to get you out of here. Your
fight coming up.
DOUG
FIGHT? I'M NOT STEPPING IN NO RING.
86.
DEZZY
Preacher let me talk at you for a
second...
DEZZY
(aggravated whisper)
I'm gonna let that little episode
slide, cause yo' mind ain't
straight right now.
(pause)
But here's the deal. You're going
to fight tonight just like the
CONTRACT says. Or, you and your
coach will be hitching a ride back
to East Texas. You feel me?
Dezzy straightens his suit one more time, cracks a smile, and
pats Doug on the arm.
DEZZY (CONT'D)
That's my nigga. We gonna may sure
yo' coach is straight, so don't be
worryin' 'bout him. Plus, he
probably gettin' back what he done.
You need to focus.
(pause)
I'll find a cornerman for you. I
just need you to put on a good show
for the people tonight. We
straight?
Doug returns the gaze and nods. He knows he must comply or
else.
Dezzy strolls away with a slight smirk. Doug watches him but
goes back into the bathroom.
COMMENTATOR #1
This next fight promises to deliver
just as much action as the last.
COMMENTATOR #2
Absolutely! There always seems to
be a bigger buzz when it comes to
the Heavyweight division. And the
buzz around this young man is just
as loud...
JAMEEL
Oh girl, still sexier than a video
model. That preacher had him a good
one! I know you gonna try to hit
that tonight.
RONALD
It's not even like that bruh. I'm
just trying to catch up with her.
JAMEEL
Nigga please! She ain't my girl and
"I" got a little hard when I saw
her.
(pause)
Lookin' all classy, that be the
freakiest ones.
JAMEEL (CONT'D)
Shaniqua used to look like that,
but she done fell off. If she don't
get right, I'll be finding me a
dark-skinned chick like yours.
(pause)
You better put a lock on it this
time around.
SHANIQUA
(whisper)
What you think? Still look good
don't he!
SHANIQUA (CONT'D)
I heard him tell Jameel he hate you
and Doug didn't work out but he
think this is a sign for you and
him to get back together.
(pause)
Girl ain't that exciting!
At that moment the guys appear from around the corner. Jameel
glances at the T.V. and sees the match-up between Doug and
Esteban.
JAMEEL
OH SNAP! LOOK WHO 'BOUT TO FIGHT.
The couple sit at the table with their eyes locked on the
screen. However, Trisha hands are clasped together under the
table.
TRISHA
Lord don't let him get hurt.
JAMEEL
What Chris Tucker say on Friday..?
Your preacher husband 'bout to get
knocked the F--
RONALD
JAMEEL, watch your mouth bruh.
JAMEEL
Dang homie, it's like that?
JAMEEL (CONT'D)
You see this nigga? Trying to be
all chivalrous.
RONALD
It's ok. I think he's going to be
fine.
TRISHA
Thank you.
Everyone looks back at the screen.
MIKE
(tired whisper)
Don't worry about me Preacher,
focus on what's in front of you.
You here me?
DOUG
Yes sir.
MIKE
I'm serious. Whoever this guy is,
they're fully invested in him. But
they don't know you got a secret
weapon.
DOUG
I do?
MIKE
God's in your corner.
Doug smiles.
MIKE (CONT'D)
But you have to fight. Nothing of
value comes easy.
(looks at medic)
Do they got cable at the hospital?
MIKE (CONT'D)
Good. You hear that Preacher, I'm
gonna be watching. So if you ain't
moving that head, I'm gonna be
pissed.
Doug laughs.
DOUG
Don't worry coach. We gonna bring a
win back to Texas.
(to medics)
Whatever he needs, make sure he has
it. He's all I got.
Christian rap music plays over the arenas sound system, but
Doug is not pumped up. He has on his white outfit but his
trainer is not matching; this is definitely a stand-in.
CORD
Your guy doesn't look bad.
DEZZY
Yeah he's ok. But our boy gonna
make quick work.
Cord smirks.
CORD
I agree but we DON'T want it to
look fake.
DEZZY
I feel you. Preacherman will give a
good effort.
COMMENTATOR #1
The Preacherman is a southpaw with
a jab and we don't know if Esteban
has faced many lefties at this
stage of his career.
COMMENTATOR #2
I'm positive with the credentials
Esteban has -- he has seen every
kind of fighter there is.
The commentators watch Doug bounce and move around the ring
attempting to get loose. Suddenly the lights dim and eerie
Latin music permeates the sound system followed by drums.
The entire crew wear red and stridently make their way to the
ring.
92.
COMMENTATOR #1
Out of all the ring entrances I've
seen, this is the first I felt the
need to go to Mass after the fight.
COMMENTATOR #2
Is that a bird in that guys hand?!
COMMENTATOR #2 (O.S.)
I know we must accept everyone's
culture but this -- WHOA.
COMMENTATOR #1 (O.S.)
Looks like we might see blood
before the fight even begins! Has
this sanctioned?
The BABALAWOS' knife descends upon the bird, but upon contact
the bird explodes into colorful smoke forming the words
above: "El Monstruo".
COMMENTATOR #2
WHAT AN AMAZING SHOW! If the crowd
wasn't on his side, they are now!
JAMEEL
Maaan, that cat into that VooDoo!
(to Trisha)
I hope your husband -- EXCUSE ME,
finna-be ex-husband is prayed up,
cause he fighting the DEVIL
tonight!
93.
CORD
I know you're a gambling man. How
much do you have riding on this
one?
DEZZY
Maaaan, EVERYTHING! I'm 'bout to
make a serious come-up.
Esteban finally comes out his corner and tosses off his robe!
He raises a fist to the crowd!
Ronald has his arm around Trisha as they watch the screen.
Her hands are still clasped together, but now they're on the
table.
REFEREE
You both received my instructions
in the dressing rooms. Obey my
commands at all times. I expect a
clean fight. Let's touch'em up.
ESTEBAN
(touches glove)
Your God can't save you from me.
Doug kneels in the corner for one final prayer. The referee
stands in the center of the ring with his arms spread, ready
to signal the ringer of the bell.
REFEREE
(to Doug)
You ready?
(to Esteban)
You ready? -- Let's go!
Trisha and the entire group flinch at the brutal power of the
Goliath type of man. Jameel glances at Trisha.
JAMEEL
This is going to be too much for
Preacher. He needs to take a knee.
RONALD
Bruh, give it a rest, aight?
JAMEEL
(shrugs)
I'm just saying.
Trisha rises out of her seat and walks closer to the T.V.
TRISHA
(mumbles)
God please cover him.
MIKE (V.O.)
(whisperings echo)
Clinch if you have to.
ESTEBAN
One more round.
COMMENTATOR #2
This is panning out as expected.
It's only a matter of time before
the Preacherman succumbs to the
skill of Esteban.
DEZZY
Our boy looks good.
CORD
He looks phenomenal! One more round
and the investors should be ready
to fall at my feet.
Trisha animates her hands and body with Doug's. She is in the
fight with him.
TRISHA
That's it! That's it! Keep your
hands up!
COMMENTATOR #1
I give Robertson credit. He is
holding his ground.
97.
COMMENTATOR #2
Yes, but HOW LONG is the question.
Doug throws a combo but hits only air. Esteban pushes him
into the ropes and throws blistering punches to the body,
head, arms, anywhere the punches will land. It's a pure
crucifixion.
MIKE
What are you doing Preacher?! Fight
back son, you better than that.
CORD
Your guy is durable.
(looks at Dezzy)
This is not suppose to go the
distance.
MIKE
DON'T DO IT! HE'S TRYING TO TEMP
YOU.
Doug takes the bait and goes on the attack. He pins the more
skilled fighter on the ropes. He lands chopping blows to the
body of Esteban. Esteban smirks, taking them with ease.
SUDDENLY, Doug splits the guard of Esteban with an uppercut!
Doug sits on the stool while the HIRED CORNERMAN holds an ice-
pack to his face, and rubs salve on the eye.
HIRED CORNERMAN
We gonna get you right!
DOUG
(whisper)
Thank you Jesus.
HIRED CORNERMAN
Switch it up a little bit. Don't be
predictable.
MIKE (V.O.)
A big guy can throw so many
punches. Once it's safe, THEN YOU
ATTACK, make him pay for missing.
COMMENTATOR #2
UNBELIEVABLE, what a fight! These
two guys might steal the show
tonight!
COMMENTATOR #1
This was truly a test of David and
Goliath!
DEZZY
COME ON NOW, THAT'S SOME BULL. What
fight was yawl looking at!
(to Cord)
Florida got jacked up judges.
DEZZY (CONT'D)
Don't worry 'bout it. Next one I
find, we gonna bring our own
judges.
CORD
That won't be necessary. We will no
longer be needing your services.
DEZZY
BUT THIS WASN'T ON ME. THE JUDGES
WERE TRIPPIN'.
HIRED CORNERMAN
Good fight homie, but I ain't gonna
lie, I thought you wasn't gonna
last. You got that dog in ya.
Doug smiles.
DOUG
Me either.
HIRED CORNERMAN
But on the real, you a preacher?
DOUG
Yeah, ordained since ninety-six.
HIRED CORNERMAN
Well I be dang, a boxing preacher,
that's what's up. Hey, if you don't
mind, send a prayer up for my moms.
101.
DOUG
Absolutely. If you don't mind, can
you run me to the hospital to check
on my coach? I'll give you some gas
money.
HIRED CORNERMAN
No problem, I got you.
They look at each other and smile. Ronald gestures for her to
speak first.
TRISHA
I really enjoyed your company
tonight.
RONALD
Somehow I feel a "but" coming.
TRISHA
Ronald I'm sorry.
RONALD
It's ok. You don't have to explain.
I knew once I saw you throwing
punches, it was over for me.
(pause)
You only have one true love. It was
really good seeing you again.
Ronald reaches out and hugs her. He then opens her car door.
HONK! HONK!
JAMEEL (O.S.)
Let's jet bruh!
102.
RONALD
I better go. Have a good night.
(to Shaniqua)
Check you later Shaniqua.
TRISHA
You ok?
SHANIQUA
I don't understand why God won't
bless me with a good man.
Doug peeks in the room and taps on the door frame. Mike who's
dozed off, cracks open his eyes.
MIKE
(groggy)
PREACHERMAN, get on in here.
MIKE (CONT'D)
You made me proud out there
tonight.
DOUG
I appreciate it coach.
MIKE
(points)
You good? He caught you with a good
one.
103.
DOUG
Ring doctor said I might have to
get surgery. But enough about me,
how YOU doing?
MIKE
I got liver damage, but they said
it will regenerate.
DOUG
Yeah, but you got to stop drinking
though. If God can do it for me, he
can do it for you.
DOUG (CONT'D)
Who knows, if I can't box no more,
I might need you to train my boy.
SHANIQUA
Look who done showed up.
PRESTON
(points)
THERE GO MY DADDY!
Trisha grins big as she watches a sword battle with all the
kids. Even, Shaniqua has to smile.
TRISHA
What the doctor say?
DOUG
Looks like I'm done with boxing.
TRISHA
Awe nah Doug. I'm sorry.
DOUG
It's cool. At least God gave me two
eyes, right?
DOUG (CONT'D)
Can you take a walk with me? I want
to talk to you about something.
Trisha stares at Doug's one eye for second, but she finally
concedes. She looks at Shaniqua.
TRISHA
Shaniqua, can you watch things for
me while I talk to Doug for a
second?!
DOUG
I want to tell you I'm sorry again,
but I DIDN'T MESS WITH ASIA.
TRISHA
I know.
DOUG
WHAT? You know?
TRISHA
I called and talked to her.
TRISHA (CONT'D)
What? Don't look at me like that. I
had to know for sure.
DOUG
Man you crazy.
TRISHA
Listen Doug. I love you and I feel
like you love me too, but if you
ain't willing to give up that
addiction, you can forget about me
and the --
DOUG
THAT'S WHAT I WANTED TO TALK TO YOU
ABOUT. Trisha I don't want to lose
you.
(pause)
Before all this went down, we were
doing so good. I felt like we
started new. Whatever you want,
I'll do it. You can have my codes,
I'm done with porn. I don't care,
as long as I got you.
TRISHA
I'm serious. If you're not ready to
put me first, you need to --
106.
DOUG
I'm putting GOD first... then you.
Trisha grins big! She grabs his face and kisses him! They are
interrupted when they hear the kids coming in the distance.
TRISHA
I guess you better get ready for
your next match.
Doug gets in his karate stance and runs out to meet the kids.
MS. ANDREWS
I must say, you guys have made a
full turnaround.
TRISHA
Yes sir. And we owe it all to you.
DOUG
Mr. Gill I can never thank you
enough for what you've done.
MS. ANDREWS
It was my pleasure, but it was you
guys who put in the work. -- and
congratulations on the new job. I
hate you guys will be moving so far
away.
TRISHA
Yeah, I hope I can get used to the
weather.
MS. ANDREWS
Southern Indiana isn't so bad. I've
been there a few times. OH, I
almost forgot...
Jessica quickly rises and walks to the closet. She pulls out
a shining trophy.
DOUG
Wow, I appreciate it Mr. Gill.
TRISHA
It's beautiful. Will you take a
picture with us?
MS. ANDREWS
It would be an honor.
Carla enters the room and Trisha hands her the phone.
FADE OUT
108.
109.