SENTENCE EDITING

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Rewrite the sentences with the appropriate spelling, grammar, punctuation or structure.

1. If someone is out there with Karen it should be me.

2. Everyone were eating when Jammy entered the room.

3. Raven and iana are on their way to the shelter.

4. The porter however, could not understand what I was saying.

5. The CEO's strategic decisions effectively affected a positive change

in the company's profitability.

6. Let’s get a room at a hotel in Greenwich?

7. The school is only a few blocks. Why don’t we meet there instead?

8. Three hours later, a lady entered the classroom and said “Is there a
student named Jackson here”?

9. The waitress topped my food with a liberal amount of cheeses.

10. There were no sense of unity betweeh the catholics and muslims.

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SENTENCE EDITING
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1. If someone is out there with Karen it should be me.
If someone is out there with Karen, it should be me.

2. Everyone were eating when Jammy entered the room.

Everyone was eating when Jammy entered the room.
3. Raven and iana are on their way to the shelter.

Raven and Iana are on their way to the shelter.

4. The porter however, could not understand what I was saying.

However, the porter could not understand what I was saying.

5. The CEO's strategic decisions effectively affected a positive change
in the company's profitability.
The CEO's strategic decisions effectively effected a positive
change in the company's profitability.

6. Let’s get a room at a hotel in Greenwich?

Let’s get a room at a hotel in Greenwich.

7. The school is only a few blocks. Why don’t we meet there instead?

The school is only a few blocks away, so why don’t we meet there
instead?

8. Three hours later, a lady entered the classroom and said “Is there a
student named Jackson here”?
A lady entered the classroom three hours later and said, “Is there
a student named Jackson here?”

9. The waitress topped my food with a liberal amount of cheeses.

The waitress topped my food with a liberal amount of cheese.

10. There were no sense of unity betweeh the catholics and muslims.

There was no sense of unity between the Catholics and Muslims.

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REVISE & EDIT
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Revise and edit the following paragraph.

The laboratory tests are not suitable for the digital classroom due
to the fact that there are inadequate software programs
purchased by the institution. 3D simulations and tools like Project
Noah and Prepmagic should be invested in by the institution.
Therefore, the entire school beleives that 5th grade Science
quizzes should be improved by the instructional designers. Each
classroom activity are also not aligned with the learning objectives
because they only address lower-level thinking skills. This is through
multiple-choice tests and identification items.

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Note that the answer may vary in terms of the revising strategies
employed. This rewritten version was able to:
Introduce the paragraph with a topic sentence followed by
supporting details.
Add more information.
Make the sentences concise.
Remove the active voice.
Fix subject-verb disagreement.
Provide a clear antecedent to a pronoun.
Correct misspellings.
Remove double spacing.

The entire school believes that the instructional designers

should improve the 5th-grade Science quizzes. First, the
laboratory tests are unsuitable for the digital classroom
due to the inadequate software programs purchased by
the institution. The school should start investing in 3D
simulations and tools like Project Noah and Prepmagic.
Additionally, each classroom activity is not aligned with the
learning objectives as they only address lower-level thinking
skills through multiple-choice tests and identification items.
Lastly, the Science quizzes for the 5th grade have similar
content to the examination items from the 4th grade.
Science teachers from these grade levels should schedule
a meeting to discuss the content of their lessons.

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PARAGRAPH EDITING
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This activity requires you to fix incorrect and informal sentences while practicing your
copy editing skills.

Dear Mr. Cruz,

To keep you satisfied and happy, we are going to send you a $100 worth of
voucher and a free shipping voucher. I would even like to notify you that we
will take extra measures to make sure this does not happen again…

We’re sorry for the delay in the delivery of the product. This situations are
not typical of us, we are upset about this as much as you.

I had ran a quick investigation to know why the delay, and learned that the
courier gave your package to a different customer last week. This is a clear
mistake at our end.

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Dear Mr. Cruz,

To keep you satisfied and happy, we are going to send you a $100 worth of
voucher and a free shipping voucher. I would even like to notify you that we
will take extra measures to make sure this does not happen again…

We’re sorry for the delay in the delivery of the product. This situations are
not typical of us, we are upset about this as much as you.

I had ran a quick investigation to know why the delay, and learned that the
courier gave your package to a different customer last week. This is a clear
mistake at our end.

Dear Mr. Cruz,

We apologize for the delay in the delivery of the product. These

situations are not typical of us; we are upset about this as much as you
are.

The company has run a quick investigation to discover the reasons for
the delay. We discovered that the courier gave your package to a
different customer last week, which is a clear mistake on our end.

To keep you satisfied and happy, we are going to send you $100 worth
of vouchers and a free shipping coupon. We will take extra measures to
make sure this does not happen again.

Yours sincerely,

Daisy Reid Co.

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GRAMMAR EDITING
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Below is a draft of narrative writing which you must edit for grammar correctness. You
may use a proofreading mark in this activity or rewrite the whole paragraph.

The school librarian were reading the school newspaper when

three students entered a library. One was in 2nd grade asked to
borrow Charlottes Web. Two the other students were in 3rd
grade. They wanted to know how librarians, enter new books in
the catalog. But, before the librarian could help the three
children, she tried to silent two in the corner high school
students chatting.

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The school librarian were reading the school newspaper when

three students entered a library. One was in 2nd grade asked to
borrow Charlottes Web. Two the other students were in 3rd
grade. They wanted to know how librarians, enter new books in
the catalog. But, before the librarian could help the three
children, she tried to silent two in the corner high school
students chatting.

The school librarian was reading the school newspaper when

three students entered the library. One, in 2nd grade, asked
to borrow Charlotte's Web. The other two students were in
3rd grade and wanted to know how librarians enter new
books in the catalog. However, before the librarian could help
the three children, she tried to silence two high school
students who were chatting in the corner.

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PUNCTUATION
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Rewrite each sentence with the correct punctuation.

1. This activity can be used by parents, teachers and tutors at home or

in the classroom.

2. The 12th grade students choosebetween two college programs;

Nursing or Liberal Arts.

3. The tour this year will be LA-Tokyo.

4. Look into it’s eyes.

5. Whether hot or iced coffee is always a good idea.

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1. This activity can be used by parents, teachers and tutors at home or

in the classroom.

This activity can be used by parents, teachers, and tutors

at home or in the classroom.

2. The 12th grade students choosebetween two college programs;

Nursing or Liberal Arts.

The 12th-grade students choose between two college

programs: Nursing or Liberal Arts.

3. The tour this year will be LA-Tokyo.

The tour this year will be LA–Tokyo.

4. Look into it’s eyes.

Look into its eyes.

5. Whether hot or iced coffee is always a good idea.

Whether hot or iced, coffee is always a good idea.

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