Harry Potter - The Ring Maker - Scribble Hub
Harry Potter - The Ring Maker - Scribble Hub
Synopsis
Nicholas Iron was reborn into the world of harry potter as a orphan with the ring maker system , this is his story. Loskro1
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Action Adventure Fan ction Fantasy School Life Supernatural
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Harry Potter
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Livid Lockhart 21 hours ago 1182 reading
Don’t touch my stu ! 21 hours ago 130 plan to read
28 completed
Detention(2) Aug 17, 2023
27 paused
Detention Aug 17, 2023
43 dropped
Foolish Lockhart Aug 16, 2023
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I like the premise of the story, I haven't read anything like ring-making in a story.
The grammar, while not perfect, is de nitely readable; which is better than others so full marks.
I like the chapters being how they are, two chapters, even ~800 words at a time; more than one
longer chapter.
However, the story fails to keep you interested, with too short chapters (800 words), the MC
protagonist syndrome and the amount of stu that is thrown at him for nothing. More importantly,
the protagonist doesn't make any sense, by that I mean his personality, which is a huge series of
contradictions
I like, it the MC seems smart but not overly so, hes not arrogant like most MCs and he doesn't aunt
the intelligence he does have over everyone, it's a bonus as he wasn't placed in
Spoiler
as most do, he is also muscular which is a delightful surprise for a Harry Potter ick or any ick, so
plus 1*.
A muscular MC will always get a plus 1* bonus, too many string beans able to lift cars.
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I'm too lazy to write a full review, but this story is pretty neat. Even grammar isn't atrociously bad,
so it's easily readable. Just give it a try.
Good things
- the crafting aspect is very interesting and the author expands on the magic of the world a lot to
make it interesting. Not to mention they are breaking away from canon so it's not just another
'harry potter + random guy' it's an actual story in the universe that the changes have started to
slowly build up.
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Really good story with some mystery. The characters are eshed out and don't feel two
dimensional. Storyline somewhat follows the canon, with the di erence that that the existence of
MC alone makes minor and major di erences here and there. Im very exited what comes next. Also
while the breakneck speed of 2 chapters a day feels like Readers wettest dream, I hope the author
doesn't burn out...
I think it's very well written, I'm bad at reviews but this had my seal of approval
yo so this is my rst review and I gotta say this story pretty good, it seems indulgent so not really
challenges appearing too much yet but it has a good update speed, grammars acceptable,
worldbuilding has got to be the best part and the characters pretty alive. In short well done.
I enjoy Loskro's writing style as it is quite easy to read and his scripts never lack interesting details
and coherence behind the world the wordsmith is presenting us.
This particular manuscript presents the Harry potter universe in clear light and the characterization
of the personalities we love is well done, a great job.
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