If you think of the all questions that have come before this as an autopsy, than this Analysis question is like
‘the trial, And just like @ lawyer or investigator would do, you need to look at the evidence - in this case,
your text extract - and ask three questions in order to interrogate it and get to the truth
1. What have they done?
What have they written about? What's the meaning and purpose of the text?
2, How have they done it?
What writing techniques have they used? Think of your figurative language techniques.
3.Why did they do it?
What effect were they hoping to achieve? How do they want you to think and feel?
How do you respond personally to the text - was the writer’s intention successful?Meaning and Purpose
You should be able to work out the explicit and implicit meaning of the text using your Critical Reading
Tools.But this question is focused more on HOW they've written the text, rather than WHAT they've
written about. We're looking at what core techniques they've employed to convey the meaning.
Writing Techniques
Going back to the criminal trial analogy, think of all the following techniques as pieces of evidence in 2
crime! How many has the writer committed? Try to look out for these when you re reading and see how
many you spot If there are any terms you don't know, write the word down ona revision card with a brief
defnnition next to it, then regularly test yourself on your new words until you remember them.Allegory Euphemism Oxymoron
Alliteration Hyperbole Paradox
Allusion Idiom Personification
Anaphora Incongruity Pathetic Fallacy
Anthropomorphism Irony Repetition
Assonance Juxtaposition Satire
Consonance Metaphor Simile
Contrast Personification Symbolism
Epistrophe Onomatopoeia ToneOo
ExamTip
When you're asked to select three examples in the exam, don't just write about the frst three you
see! Pick out the best ones - those knowyou'll have plenty to say about the effect. Also, don'tset
yourself an impossible task by choosing an obvious technique but then scramble to analyse the effect.
So if youpick out onomatopoeia, for example, of course write about the sounds the writer wants you to
‘hear'- but why those noises specifically? How do they link to the meaning?Sentence Length
Look out for when writers vary the length of their sentences.
Good writing has varied sentence lengths - it’s not just one
long sentences after another! That would just be boring. Think
about why they've chosen a short sentence after a few long
ones - is itto emphasise a point? To shock the reader? To
increase pace for excitement or dramatic effect?if the writer
has noticeably varied their sentence lengths, then comment
onthat as a technique and explain why you think they didit.0
Exam Tip
For extra marks in the exam, specify the sentence type.|sit a simple sentence, a compound sentence, a
complex sentence, a compound-complex sentence? Is the short sentence they've used actually a
fragment sentence? It's worth brushing up on these when you're revising as it might get youa couple of
extra marks!Connotations
The writer has chosen specific words and phrases very carefully - usually
because they're loaded with connotations which have a particular effect on
the reader.A word's basic connotations are positive or negative, whichis
always a good place to start! But try to be more specific about the effect
does the writer want to make you outraged, or upset, or amused etc? So if the
writeruses quite a powerful and impactful word, cutit out of the sentence and
holdit up to the light on its own; what other meanings can you see there?
Does it radiate a particular emotion? Do you think the writer has consciously
used these connotations to influence the reader some how?For example:xy
“Child badly bitten by dog”
Vs.
Child savagely bitten by dog’
That subtle but effective difference is down to that hyperbolic word “savagely” which has connotations
of a wild animal, something out of control, evil, and makes the image of the attack far more dramatic. Just
from one word.Mu
“Anger over exam grade boundaries”
Vs.
“Fury over exam boundaries”
The second heading is more sensationalist because the word 'fury” has more emotionally charged
connotations; it implies people are besides themselves with rage, and encourages the reader tobe
outraged, too.By showing the examiner you understand these techniques and connotations, you're
demonstrating that you can’t be manipulated by language and you can spot manipulation amile off!So
by showing the examiner you understand these techniques and connotations, you're demonstrating that
you can't be manipulated by language and you can spot manipulation a mile off!V2 7
Sounds
Sounds also help to convey and emphasis the meaning of a
text. If you've noticed the writer has used lots of consonance,
forexample, that makes the writing sounds auite hard, Why
have they chosen to do that? Do those repeated hard
sounds create a sense of angeror aggression, because the
author wants to provokeand antagonise?And
where assonance makes the writing sound soft, does that
create a soothing or gentle tone to emphasise
the sensitivity of the topic?Language Effects
Areally important thing to remember when you're
commenting on the effect of the languageis to ask
yourself DO YOU REALLY FEEL THAT?it might sound like
commonsense, but lots of students in the exam will write
something they don't actually believe, but at least sounds
good!Make sure the effect you're writing about is genuine. If
you spot aword that evokes sympathy, ask yourself if you
actually feel sympathetic? if a phrase encourages the reader
to feel outrage - do you actually get that feeling? If so, great -
just make sure you explain why and where that outrage comes
from; either a memory or personal experience of a topic, of just from a broad sense of injustice you
share, which you think the writeris relying on.But if you're honest with yourself and your answer feels 2
little contrived, then your examiner will think so too! You'll get higher marks when your answerrings true
and sounds genuine.