The Amazing Hotel Jakarta in Jakarta
The Amazing Hotel Jakarta in Jakarta
Beyond an inviting facade are simple, fulfilling comforts that let you enjoy your business or leisure trip
in Jakarta, Indonesia. In its stylish rooms alone, you will wonder how such minimalist space can grant
you a lot of chances to revel in ease. And once you step out to sit around the hotel lobby and
restaurant, we will surprise you by how we can take you on a journey around the country. And a
gastronomic journey at that — because we do this by serving you traditional Betawi snacks, plus
dishes from Indonesian and other Asian cuisines.If these aren't enough to leave you in awe, see how
we make your holiday in the capital more effortless, with a location bound by government offices and
commercial establishments. We are also merely a 5-minute walk to Blok M Square shopping center
and just an hour's drive away from Soekarno-Hatta International Airport.
We can also organise all your sightseeing trips and travel around the capital and beyond. We have
experienced and safe drivers at your disposal to ensure the best service possible. Just name your
activity and we can organise it for you– diving, museums, hiking, bus tour – leaving you free to enjoy!
Just enquire at our travel information service desk for prompt, friendly and efficient service with
satisfaction guaranteed.
1. Fill out the booking form for the hotel (3 minutes) (Part 1 Aptis Writing test)
Guest Details
Malaysia 750824045280
NIL 017-3726075
4.00 a.m
Adults 13+: ____3________
Special Requests:
No
Aliah
Month Year Security code
Same as guest name?
August 2015
Yes.
2. Write a short paragraph on why you chose this hotel? (about 30 words – 7
minutes)
I came across this Ardilaun hotel when I was browsing in the net for hotels in Ireland
last year. I was attracted to its description which was stated as a luxury
accommodation in a tranquil setting with beautifully landscaped gardens
surrounding it. Besides that, it also includes a 24 hour check in, which will be
needed by my family and I. On top of that, links to public transport can be found
on hotel's doorstep, just across the street, which will be very, very helpful to new
visitors like us.
3) Write a short paragraph about 50 words (10 minutes) about why holidays are
good for people.
Holidays are good for people because generally human beings need some kinds of
changes in their life after spending so long in one particular area in the world or
country. Having been stranded for so long in one place could be very tiring and
bored for some people. That is when one needs to be on holidays, but, it is not
necessary for those people to travel out of their respective country and spends lots
of money, they can also travel for a short trip from one side of their country to
another side, just to enjoy the journey, get fresh air and views, to relax their minds
and body, to release the stress out of their lives and to break the boredom from the
same view and environment.
Hey Susan,
How’s it going?
So much for the Amazing Hotel! One hour from the airport, my foot!! It took us 3-hours!
And another thing - the shopping centre’s miles away and they don’t organise tours.
And to top it all off – the food at the restaurant was rubbish.
We wouldn’t have stayed there if we had known how bad it was going to be.
Cheers
Pam
Word Count: 74
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to complain about our visit to your hotel in April. We found the information on your
website incorrect and misleading.
The website states that your hotel is an hour’s drive from Soekamo-Hatta International Airport but it
took us nearly three hours to reach the hotel even outside peak hours.
The Bloc-M Square shopping centre is also much further away than the advertised 5-minute walk. My
elderly father found the 20-minute walk in the heat exhausting. Had we known, we would have taken
a taxi.
We were also very disappointed with the limited choices available in the restaurants, with no Betawi
snacks or Asian food available.
Finally, because of the closure of the hotel travel desk, we had to organise our trips through an
outside company, which meant added expense and loss of time.
I strongly urge you to update the information on your website so that other travellers are better
informed.
Yours sincerely,
Pamela Anderson.Word Count: 154.
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can in Malaysia. If you don’t know the
name, use ‘Dear Sir or Madam’. Not the
capital letters.
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talking reasons. Organise your information into
one idea for each paragraph.
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sentences can to show your knowledge of these.
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speech. e.g. ‘I’ve ‘ all words. e.g. ‘I have’
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question marks and lot of them if you
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sentence
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shouting. shouting.
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phrases you know. longer words from Latin etc. but do not
become too formal.
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Extra Writing Tasks
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taking them on a tour. The one attraction that they really want to go to is Menara
Kuala Lumpur (KL Tower). However, when you get there you find out that it is
closed for a month for renovations. Your friends went to the tourist information
centre at the airport when they arrived to gather information so they could work
out their itinerary but they were not told about this tower being closed even
though they asked what hours it was open. As you can imagine your visitors are
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