Analytical Writing Class 09
Analytical Writing Class 09
i.It describes the given chart, table, data, graph, cues etc.
ii. It should be brief and comprehensive (include complete information) at the
same time.
iii. It should state facts that are provided by the chart.
iv. It is necessary to make use of simple and accurate language.
v. It should mention figures and quantities appropriately.
vi. It is appropriate to use the same tense throughout the analytical paragraph.
vii. No personal observation or response should be provided.
It would be preferable to use the passive form of the v1. The introduction
The introduction is the first paragraph that should describe in brief what the
graph is about. It should be like an opening paragraph that introduces the
reader to the context of the chart given. When writing the introductory
paragraph, you need not go into the details. You just need to mention what is
clearly evident from the chart or the graph given in the question. It is best to
write the introduction in one or two lines.
2. The body of the paragraph
This part of the analytical paragraph should contain details of the graph/chart
given in the question. It should contain all the important information. It is
extremely important to choose the significant details that should be included in
the paragraph.
The body can be broken into two or three sub-paragraphs depending on the
information extracted from the graph. Breaking the body into
subparagraphs makes it easy for the reader to understand.
i. Organizing information: You should look for the large differences that are
very prominent. You can mention the aspect which is the smallest or the
largest in the data given. Any aspects that are similar should be mentioned
next. You should further mention about the aspect that has remained
unchanged or constant throughout.
ii. Comparing information: If the chart mentions two different parties, for
example, men and women, refer to both of them in the analytical paragraph. If
there is any contrast or comparison that could be drawn, you must present it
effectively. If the chart is about a particular time period or highlights trends of
several years, mention each year in a concise manner. If any comparison or
contrast can be done for two or more years, you should write about it too.
iii. Mentioning quantities: When including numbers and figures, their
accuracy must be ensured. There are a number of ways that can be used to
describe quantities, for example- percentage, fraction, ratios, etc.
iv. Connecting sentences: If different information or ideas are there, you
should use connectors or linking phrases to link them logically. The sentences
of the paragraph should be sequential and connected rationally.
3. The conclusion
The last paragraph should summarise the idea mentioned and the information
in general. It should be concluding in nature and act as the closing statement.
One should keep in mind that one must not include any personal opinions,
conclusions, or observations. You should simply stick to the facts.
You need not dispose of the information to write a good analytical paragraph.
The key is to choose wisely the important information, organize it well, state
correct facts and summarise it properly.
OLVED EXAMPLES:
1-Study the chart given below, which is the result of the survey conducted in the public
schools and government schools of Vadodara. This depicts the types of activities the
teenagers (Age 13- 19 years are involved during their leisure time). Complete the
summary in about 80 words.
Teenagers and leisure time
Now a days the teenagers are more techno-savvy than the children used to be ten
years back. They do not play games like Ludo, Carrom, Chess and other indoor games.
9-18 % of boys and girls in the age group of 13-19 years possess their own cell phones.
In the survey conducted recently on some 2000 students of two leading schools- one
government and the other a public school, the following facts were revealed. While
the students from public schools spend more of their leisure time in net-surfing and
talking on cell phones, the government school students spend it in watching TV and
talking to their friends.
2- The following data in the form of histogram shows that death due to violence has
increased considerably during recent years. Write its interpretation in 100 words
on how educated youth can play a major role in establishing peace in society.
Role of youth in establishing peace in society
Youth and peace are interlinked in society. Youth can play an important role in
establishing peace in society. In a survey conducted, it has been found that number of
deaths due to violence has increased enormously since the nineties. Death rate in
1000s was 2.5 in 1990. But in 2010, it has increased to 7.5. It is really very sad. It must
be checked.
Our youth can play a major role in controlling this crime graph. They can contribute
towards establishing peace in many ways. They can awaken the people towards the
necessity of peace. They can help the police in catching the criminals. They can bring
the criminals in the main stream by educating them and they can do much more.
UNSOLVED EXAMPLES:
1- Study the graph given below, which is based on a survey done on students of tenth
class in three different types of schools in Ahmedabad. The chart depicts the number
of students speaking English and Hindi. On the basis of the details given in the bar-
graph given below, briefly summarize the data making comparison wherever necessary
in about 80 words.
Hint- Compare the percentage of students speaking English and Hindi in all three
schools giving the possible reasons.
In a study conducted on the students of class tenth of three various types of schools-
Government school, private school and a KV, it was observed that
2. As an aware citizen of the country, you are concerned about the increase in road
accidents in the metropolitan city Delhi. Interpret the data given below in about 80
words. Also use your own ideas.
Horizontal line (x-axis) – years
Vertical line (y-axis)-No. of accidents
3-Give below is a pie-Chart, which shows different types of electric gadgets, used
by middle-class people in their houses on an average in Ahmedabad. On the basis
and the unit ‘Science’ of your Main course Book; write in about 80 words the
reason of selecting the electric gadgets for their houses.
Take into consideration the price range, durability, lower electric consumption &
after sales-service.