Horses Ielts Writing Task 1
Horses Ielts Writing Task 1
Dàn ý :
1. Intro : Paraphrase lại đề
2. Overview : Nêu 2 điểm nổi bật nhất của quá trình phát triển :
- Kích thước của con ngựa to hơn theo thời gian.
- Các ngón chân dần mất hết.
3. Body 1 : So sánh đặc điểm ngoại hình kích cỡ :
- Tên của ngựa qua 4 giai đoạn.
- Chú ý phân tích : Tên/hair/mane/height/size.
4. Body 2: So sánh Toe của Horse qua 4 giai đoạn.
Bài làm 1
The provide picture illustrates the evolution of the horse over a span of
40 million years, emphasizing the transformation of its toe structure into the
familiar hoof seen in present-day horses.
Overall, it becomes evident that the size of horses has substantially
increased over time, with modern horses being notably larger than their
ancestors. Regarding their foot structure, the most prominet change is the
gradual disappearance of toes in early horses.
The earliest horse species, known as Eohippus and dating 40 million
years, possesses a notably furry appearance compared to its descendant,
Mesohippus, which existed approximately 30 million years ago. At this point,
the fur on the body has largely vanished, and a rudimentary mane begins to
emerge. A horse from 15 million years later, referred to as Merychippus,
exhibits a more upright posture and a more well-developed mane. In
contemporary times, horses have become considerably taller, larger, and
more muscular, featuring abundant hair in their tails and manes.
In terms of their feet, the transformation in the horse’s foot structure
has been equally remarkable. Eohippus has a slender foot with five distinct
toes. Mesohippus, on the other hand, possesses only three toes, a number
that remains consistent in the later horse, Merychippus, albeit with a much
larger central toe. In contrast, modern horses have a single hoof and more
advanced joints.
Bài làm 2