Scribd
Upload
45 views10 pages

Write 1

Teaching primary school children to grow vegetables and keep animals has both advantages and disadvantages. The main disadvantages are that it can be costly for schools to purchase required materials and tools, especially for low-budget schools, and it can be challenging for teachers to supervise children safely during outdoor activities with large class sizes. However, the advantages of teaching life skills like understanding plant growth, empathy, and patience may outweigh these disadvantages. Learning these skills can benefit students' well-rounded development.

Uploaded by

Jullie
Copyright
© © All Rights Reserved
We take content rights seriously. If you suspect this is your content, claim it here.
Available Formats
Download as DOCX, PDF, TXT or read online on Scribd
45 views10 pages

Write 1

Teaching primary school children to grow vegetables and keep animals has both advantages and disadvantages. The main disadvantages are that it can be costly for schools to purchase required materials and tools, especially for low-budget schools, and it can be challenging for teachers to supervise children safely during outdoor activities with large class sizes. However, the advantages of teaching life skills like understanding plant growth, empathy, and patience may outweigh these disadvantages. Learning these skills can benefit students' well-rounded development.

Uploaded by

Jullie
Copyright
© © All Rights Reserved
We take content rights seriously. If you suspect this is your content, claim it here.
Available Formats
Download as DOCX, PDF, TXT or read online on Scribd
You are on page 1/ 10

Advantage / disadvantage

Topic: It is clear that primary school


children should learn how to grow
vegetables and keep animals. Do you
think the advantages outweigh the
disadvantages ?

Body 1: mình ko chọn –


disadvantage
[point 1] School: costly = consuming
[explain] buy materials, tools,
equipment
[ result] challenging for low-budget
school

[point 2]teachers: teach, supervise &


manage students
[explain] ensure safety while moving
[result] challenging for teachers with
large class size

[1] It is understandable that why


some people think teaching children
to grow plants and keep animal is
detrimental.
[point 1] School: One clear
costly = disadvantage of
consuming introducing
schoolchildren to
planting and
rasing animals is
that it can be
costly for schools
[explain] buy The reason is
materials, tools, because school
equipment would need to
buy = spend
money on =
allocate funds for
materials, tools,
equipment for
this class.
[ result] This is epecially
challenging for challenging to
low-budget school with low
school budget.
[point 2] Another
teachers: teach, drawback is
supervise & teachers need to
manage students supervise and
manage students
activities more
carefully
[explain] ensure This is due to the
safety while fact that
moving teachers need to
ensure safety for
children while
they work in the
garden.
[result] Such a drawback
challenging for can especially
teachers with detrimental to
large class size teachers with
large- size
classes.
Body 2: mình chọn – advantage
[point 1] teaches valuable life skills
[explain] understand how to grow
plants -> [raise awareness of/ about]
protect environment
[expanding] beneficial for students
in urban areas -> limited exposure to
algricultrue
However, I firmly believe that the
benefits of teaching students to tend
to animals and plants are more
significant.
One clear advantage is that it
teaches valuable life skills for
students. The reason is because
students can gain an understanding
of how to grow plants = vegetables =
their own foods. This also raises
children’s awareness about
protecting the environment. This
benefit is especially important for
students in uran areas, where
children have limited exposure to
algriculture.
[point 2] virtues: empathy, patience
Another benefit is that it helps
students develop important virtues
such empathy and patience

[explain] taking care of animals


requires many works – feeding
animals
The reason is that taking care of
animals requires patience as they
wait for them to grow up.

[result] đóng góp [contribute to] vào


sự phát triển toàn diện của 1 đứa trẻ

These experiences contribute to the


well-rounded development of a
child.
Body 1:
It is understandable that why some
people think [ topic ] is
disadvantageous/ detrimental.
[point 1 ] One clear disadvantage of
[topic] is that + clause
[explain] The reason is because
[result] This is especially challenging
for sb to do sth
[point 2] Another drawback is +
noun/ is that + clause
[explain] this is due to (the fact that)
[result] such a drawback can
especially be detrimental to sb
Body 2: advantage
However, I firmly believe that the
benefits [topic] are more significant
[point 1] One clear advantage is
[explain] the reason is because
[result] the benefit is especially
important for sb

[point 2] Another benefit is


[explain] The reason is that
[result] as a result,

Some universities now offer their


courses on the Internet so that
people can study online.

Body 1: advantage
Point 1: tiết kiệm thời gian cho việc
di chuyển – save time on
transporting
Explain: need a laptop – study
everywhere at anytime, X go to
school
Result: benefit living far from
schools.

Point 2:

You might also like