Gaby
Gaby
ASSESSMENT
SECOND DRAFT ALL LEVELS
FULL NAME:
COURSE:
(PRINT)
LAST NAMES FIRST NAME M.I.
TIME:
TEACHER’S
NAME: ROOM: DATE:
Based on your teacher’s feedback, write the corrected version of your first draft.
My Family
There are my family memebers. I have a mother,
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She has 57 years old and she is from Peru-Trujillo. She’s
married to my father. Likewise my father is an engineer, his
hobby is drawing, his address is avenue 34 santa. He plays
football and he is very strong. Besides this, my brother is a chef
and he loves swimming. He’s single and very fast. In addition,
my grandmother has 78 years old, she is a banker. Her favorite
hobby is cooking and her favorite sport is voleyball. She’s
married to my grandfather. My grandfather is a teacher, he
likes writing and play tennis with his friends, he is very social!
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