IPLAN
IPLAN
✓Visual Aid;
✓Board and Chalk
References: The Elements of Style by William Strunk Jr. and E.B. White
Resources Needed
Garner’s Modern American Usage by Bryan A. Garner
The Chicago Manual of Style by the University of Chicago Press
To introduce the topic to the students, the instructor will first give an activity that will
lead to the main topic. The teacher will provide example sentences to be pasted on the
board and let the students read it and ask them what they have observed from the
given sentences and share it to the class.
Here are some questions:
✔ How did you know that these sentences were incorrect?
Abstraction To fully understand the topic, the instructor will now discuss the lesson and make sure
to have an interactive discussion.
✔ What are run-on sentences?
Examples:
1. I went to the store I bought groceries.
2. The lion roared the children scream.
3. The cat ran away the toddler chased it.
4. The engine roared to life Jack ran away.
2. Comma Splice- A comma splice is when two independent clauses are joined
together with only a comma.
Examples:
1. I like to play basketball, I also enjoy watching it.
2. I went to the store today, we were out of apples.
3. Koala bears are not actually bears, they are marsupials.
4. Mandy went to the store for candy, she also went for milk.
Examples:
1. I went to the store, and I bought groceries, and I came home.
2. Let's go fishing and eat a picnic lunch and go hiking but leave before dark.
3. Neither snow nor rain nor heat nor gloom of night stays these couriers.
4. Not wind, not rain, not snow could stop her from jogging her daily routine.
Run-on sentence: I love to write papers I would write one every day if I had the time.
1. Use a period. The easiest way to fix a run-on is to split the sentence into smaller
sentences using a period. This revision works especially well with longer sentences.
Check, however, to make sure that this solution does not result in short, choppy
sentences.
Revision example: I love to write papers. I would write one every day if I had the
time.
Revision example: I love to write papers; I would write one every day if I had the
time.
Revision example: I love to write papers, and I would write one every day if I had the
time.
Example: Because I love to write papers, I would write one every day if I had the time.
After all the discussion, the instructor will ask the students if they have questions or
clarifications about the lessons. If none, then an activity will be given.
Practice
Task:
Application . The class will be divided into 4 groups, and each group will be given an activity to
create a persuasive essay using run-on sentences. It could be something that they
wanted to create about, like climate change, animal rights, or the importance of
education.
Assessment
The teacher will choose 2 representatives for each group, they will be given 20 mins to
brainstorm their main argument and supporting points for their chosen topic.
After 20 mins, the chosen representative will present it in front of the class.
In the last minute of the session, another student will be called to do a summary based
on the entire discussion. This will serve as a conclusion to be shared to the whole
class. Then the instruction for the assignment will be given.
Assignment Assignment :
Activity 1: In a short bond paper, rewrite and revise these run-on sentences into more
concise and grammatically correct sentences, emphasizing the importance of proper
sentence construction.
.Today was the best day in the whole world my family began our beach vacation it
took a long time to get to the beach my sister and I were thrilled to see the beautiful
blue skies and giant ocean waves.