1. Structure
Salutation
Dear…
2. Writing Guide
1. Salutation
Start with Dear followed by the first name of the person to whom you are writing. In
emails, you can also start with Hi (and the person’s name). Dear Ben, or Hi Ben,
(Don’t forget to use only the first name of the person you are writing to and not Dear
Mr John, which is never used, or Dear Mr John Brown, which sounds too formal.)
When writing an informal letter, you are usually replying to another letter. You would
normally start with a greeting, then acknowledge the letter to which you are
replying. It is often a good idea to acknowledge some key information given in the
original letter too.
How are you? / How have the family been? / I hope you are well.
Thank you / Many thanks for your (recent/last) letter/postcard.
It was good /nice/great to hear from you again.
Say why you are writing. If you need to change agreements or turn someone down,
give reasons. Give the information that you have been told to give. Add some more
details of your own if you like.
The end of your letter is as important as the beginning. There are some standard ways
of finishing an informal letter or email.
Between paragraphs:
Within a paragraph:
3. Example
Also, you should speak several languages because it’s an international camp
Write a letter applying to become a volunteer
Model answer
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regard to the advertisement posted in yesterday’s newspaper about
the camp for diabetic children. I would like to take part as a volunteer if it is possible.
As you can see in my résumé, I completed a degree in nursing, so I am qualified to
teach children about it. Besides, I suffer from diabetes, so I am quite familiar with this
illness and how to deal with it.
Furthermore, I have some experience organising entertaining events for children, as I
worked at a regular camp for children last summer. For this reason, I am capable of
organising and playing fun games with children.
Finally, I must say that I can speak 3 languages, since I have spent some time abroad,
in England and Germany. Therefore, apart from Spanish, I am fuent in English and
German.
Can I ask about the duration of the camp? What is the daily timetable?I look forward
to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
José