Promise
Promise
The last year has been pretty horrendous* and I’ve been working non-stop**. Working from
home means it’s virtually impossible*** to switch off****. A few months ago, I was at breaking
point*****. I was working 18 hours a day. When I wasn’t sitting at my desk, I was cooking,
******downtime =
cleaning, washing, ironing etc. I had zero downtime******. time to relax
*pretty horrendous = **non-stop = ***virtually = ****to switch off = to stop giving *****to be at breaking point = the point where you
very bad without stopping almost your attention to something lost control of your physical or mental health
I wasn’t just doing it on weekdays, my weekends were wall-to-wall* work and chores** as well. The knock-on effect***
was that I was snappy**** with my family, I wasn’t keeping in touch with my friends, I was doing no exercise, the list
goes on. I felt worn-out***** and I’d had enough******.
*wall-to-wall = **chores = tasks; ***knock-on effect = something that ****snappy = short-tempered; *****worn-out ******to have enough =
continuous household jobs causes another thing to happen irritable = exhausted you want a situation to
stop/change
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One Saturday morning, I woke up with a migraine* and I just couldn’t get out of bed. I
realise now that it was my body’s way of telling me to stop. I needed a break. I spent two
days in bed and I came to the realisation** that I couldn’t carry on*** like this. My head
was pounding**** and I said to myself that things had to change.
*a migraine = a very bad headache **to come to the realisation = to realise ***to carry on = to continue ****pounding = throbbing
I vowed to myself* that I would no longer** work weekends. I needed time to chill out*** and recharge my
batteries****. In addition, working all hours***** had to stop. I now limit****** the number of hours a day I work
and I say ‘no’ if I’m feeling overworked******* and someone asks me to do another piece of work. It isn’t always
easy, but I’m trying my best********. My mental health has improved significantly and I am sleeping better. I’m
eating healthier because I have time to prepare meals instead of eating processed foods and takeaways. Making a
promise to be kinder to myself is the best promise I’ve ever made and I’m going to try to keep********* it.
*to vow = to promise **no longer = not anymore ***to chill out = to relax ****to recharge my batteries = to rest and relax to get energy
*****to work all hours = a long time/until very late ******to limit = to restrict *******overworked = you have too much work to do
Fluency and Coherence - Organisation ********to try your best = to do your best *********to keep a promise = to not break it
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