Business Communication
Business Communication
Question 1...................................................................................................................2
Question 2...................................................................................................................6
Question 3...................................................................................................................7
Question 4.................................................................................................................10
Question 1
1. Content and creativity
The blog post is insightful and reflective, providing a unique perspective on why
internal communication feels tougher today. The author, Rachel Miller, identifies
employees. She argues that each type of employee has different expectations and
and employees. She provides specific examples of how the different types of
Post-pandemic employees may still be adjusting to the workplace and may need
2. Voice
The writing is appropriate for the intended audience, which is internal communicators
within their organizations. Miller's voice is consistent throughout the blog post, and
she uses a conversational tone that is easy to read. She also uses humor and
Pre-pandemic employees
These are the folks who were in role pre-March 2020. They may have been with the
company for many years, or they may have joined more recently. But one thing they
have in common is that they experienced the workplace before the pandemic.
For this group, internal communication may have been more traditional. They may
have been used to getting their information from email newsletters, intranet articles,
and town hall meetings. They may also have been more comfortable with in-person
The blog post has a visually appealing layout and is easy to navigate. The text is
well-formatted and easy to read. The blog also includes a few relevant images, such
as a graph that shows the different types of employees based on their length of
service.
4. Timeliness
The blog post was published on February 17, 2023, so it is relatively recent. This
suggests that the author is committed to keeping the blog updated with fresh
content.
5. Citations
The blog post does not include any citations to sources. This is a minor shortcoming,
as the author's observations are based on her own experience and conversations
with others. However, it would be helpful if she could provide some citations to
support her claims, especially when discussing topics such as the different types of
6. Quality of writing
The blog post is free of spelling, grammar, and punctuation errors. The author also
uses a variety of sentence structures and vocabulary, which makes the writing
engaging to read.
7. Writing style
The writing style is conversational and easy to read. Miller uses the pronoun "you" to
address the reader directly, which creates a sense of intimacy and engagement. She
also uses humour and personal anecdotes to connect with the reader.
Pandemic employees
These are the folks who joined organizations between March 2020 and January
2022. They experienced the workplace onboarding and training process remotely,
and they may have never actually met their colleagues in person.
For this group, internal communication may have been more digital and
asynchronous. They may be used to getting their information from email, Slack, and
I couldn't find any data on the blog's traffic levels. However, the blog is well-written
feels tougher today, and her observations are supported by her own experience and
conversations with others. I also appreciate her conversational writing style and her
Yes, the blog is easy to use and navigate. The text is well-formatted and easy to
read, and the blog includes a few relevant images. The blog is also mobile-friendly.
Question 2
https://josephinemashayanyika.wordpress.com/2023/09/24/integrated-
communication-in-zimbabwe-a-practical-guide/
Question 3
3.1
relationship to the topics discussed in the blog post on why internal communication
Both blog posts discuss the challenges of communicating in today's complex and
competitive environment.
3.2
Here are four specific areas that the IC blog post has improved upon in relation to
Actionability: The IC blog post provides more actionable advice for readers, such as
Visual appeal: The IC blog post is more visually appealing, with the use of images
3.3
The following are some of the interesting graphic design elements included in the IC
blog post:
Hero image: The hero image at the top of the blog post is a colorful and eye-catching
Pull quotes: Pull quotes are used throughout the blog post to highlight key points and
Infographic: The infographic at the end of the blog post provides a visual overview of
These graphic design elements are interesting and engaging, and they help to make
3.4
The target audience for the IC blog post is anyone who is interested in learning more
and students.
The purpose of the IC blog post is to provide readers with a practical guide to
integrated communication. The blog post explains what IC is, why it is important, and
3.5
To ensure that the IC blog post was free from any spelling and grammar mistakes, I
I read the post aloud to myself to catch any errors that I might have missed.
I also took the time to edit the post carefully, ensuring that the writing was clear,
4.1
Language communication barriers that the team may have felt as a result of Mr
Jacobs' communication:
jargon that the team members may not have understood. For example, he
them.
contact and his flustered demeanour, may have communicated to the team
members that he was not interested in their input or that he was not prepared
sign of engagement.
Practical example:
Jargon and complex language: Mr Jacobs may have said something like,
"We need to develop a synergistic marketing campaign that will leverage our
sales." This sentence is full of jargon and complex language that the team
members may not have understood. A better way to say this would be: "We
need to develop a marketing campaign that works together to use our
Non-verbal cues: Mr Jacobs may have spoken quickly, avoided eye contact,
and paced back and forth while he was giving his presentation. This non-
was not interested in their input or that he was not prepared for the meeting. A
better approach would be to speak slowly and clearly, make eye contact with
Cultural differences: If Mr Jacobs is from the United States and the team
members are from Zimbabwe, there may be cultural differences that affect
4.2
which the leader makes all of the decisions and gives the team members little to no
input.
This was not an appropriate leadership style for this situation. Mr Jacobs was leading
innovation.
More appropriate leadership style:
A more appropriate leadership style for this situation would have been a
encourages input from the team members and makes decisions collaboratively.
4.3
Yes, Mr Jacobs should have included visual aids in his presentation. Visual aids can
help to make complex information more understandable and engaging. They can
Visual aids can help to make complex information more understandable and
Visual aids can help to keep the audience's attention. When people are
presented with both visual and auditory information, they are more likely to
Visual aids can help to create a more dynamic and visually appealing
presentation.
4.4
Location: Boardroom
Agenda:
Brainstorming session
Please come prepared to share your ideas for the new marketing project.
References
Guffey, M.E. and Loewy, D., 2014. Business communication: Process and product.
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Lesikar, R.V., Pettit, J.D. and Flatley, M.E., 1993. Basic business communication.
Thill, J.V., Bovée, C.L. and Cross, A., 2005. Excellence in business communication.
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