Couse Work
Couse Work
I am writing in response to your recent article "How Zoos Improve the Lives of
Animals" in which you clearly express the idea of zoos being a method of connecting
people with nature; facilitating and promoting animal conversation and combatting
Modern society is completely ignorant about nature. It isn’t necessary for children to
spot animals in prison with the aim of obtaining an understanding of their visible
appearance. Despite the physical state of these creatures, emotions are still present
inside them. According to a recent study, zoo animals may experience more fear in
these centers than in their natural habitat, since they lack the ability to flee when they
feel under threat. Loud noises or unexpected movements from around could provoke
this fear.
Furthermore, researchers have also proved animals feel continually stressed because of
the limited space and the poor nutrition they receive, which causes them to feel sick and
traumatic event for any animal. Whether it was captured as an adult, or as a baby, it
definitely went through psychological trauma when caught and limited in a cage. In
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Lucía Oller Iglesias
The British College of Benalmádena
Centre Number: ES082
Response to Text - 0500 Coursework
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actuality, criminals who are imprisoned are there for a reason. These are people who
have committed a crime. These include robberies, sexual assaults, murders and many
more. Still, people would not pay to observe them. So why would we pay to watch these
defenseless animals in a jail? Animals do not deserve to be treated in this way: they
have no guilt!
Besides, in your article, you have quoted, "Zoos offer animals a quality of life as high or
higher than in the wild." However, I doubt few people will agree with this statement as
zoos are essentially prisons where wild animals are usually being displayed in solitary
confinement with the main objective of satisfying visitors curiosity. Animals are being
forcefully removed from their natural habitats and then placed into unnatural and
controlled environments. This stops them from living real lives where they are able to
socialise and exercise in their day-to-day lives and stops the animal from functioning
normally.
Your article then goes on to say, “Many species are going extinct across the globe and
many more are facing the threat of extinction whilst modern zoos and aquariums help
combat these problems.” However, zoos and aquariums exist to provide entertainment
to visitors and generate money. Animal welfare and well-being are always of secondary
importance. When there is an excessive number of animals in a zoo, they are murdered
or sent to circuses and other zoos abroad. As well as when zoos don’t have enough
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Lucía Oller Iglesias
The British College of Benalmádena
Centre Number: ES082
Response to Text - 0500 Coursework
Word Count: 663
funding to provide well-trained people to care for them, diseases affect the animals.
Bacterial illnesses and numerous infections can be developed from the unhygienic
enclosures these guiltless creatures are locked up in. Without access to proper medical
care, animals remain at risk of dying from untreated diseases caused by their
In addition, animals have the right to live freely. They do not deserve to live in small-
scale cages for their entire life. No one on earth could stand being in a cage every day of
their life whilst being viewed by human eyes as a consequence of interest. It’s senseless
how people feel the need of admiring animals from a close distance, despite the animals
suffer. Not to mention, in your article, you have carried on to say, “Many dreadful
things happen in the wild that aren’t present in zoos.” Nevertheless, they don’t get to
roam free or interact no longer. Their freedom is taken away from them at such a young
age, so youthful they never get to experience a true life as a regular wild animal would.
Yours faithfully,