OSSLT Workbook
OSSLT Workbook
The Ontario Secondary School Literacy Test, (OSSLT) is a provincial test of literacy
(both reading and writing) skills students have acquired by the end of Grade 9 in
The Ontario Curriculum across all subject areas.
Its successful completion is a requirement for graduation.
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UNDERSTANDING THE OSSLT
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READING
UNDERSTANDING DIFFERENT TYPES OF QUESTIONS
For the OSSLT, reading is defined as the process through which the reader makes
meaning of a variety of written texts as reflected in the expectations in The
Ontario Curriculum across all subjects up to the end of Grade 9.
Each selection focuses on 3 reading skills:
1. Understanding explicitly (directly) stated ideas and information.
2. Understanding implicitly (indirectly) stated ideas and information.
3. Making connections between information and ideas in a reading
selection and personal knowledge and experience.
EXPLICIT IMPLICIT
The answer can be Using the facts and
found in the text, details from the text as
usually in one sentence. clues to make
OR reasonable guesses
The answer is in the about what is not
text, but you will need directly stated in the
to look in several text.
different places to find
it.
MAKING CONNECTIONS
The answer comes from
your own experiences,
beliefs, and background
knowledge and how these
connect to the selection.
Text-to-Text
Text-to-Self
Text-to-World
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READING STRATEGIES
BEFORE, DURING, and AFTER
BEFORE READING
PREVIEW the selection. By skimming and scanning, you will get an overall idea of what the selection is
about.
LOOK carefully at the photograph or diagram. These graphic features will give you clues to the meaning
of the selection.
READ the questions. By doing this, you will know what to look for when reading the selection.
DURING READING
MAKE NOTES. Use the white space to jot down questions, key words, and thoughts you may have.
HIGHLIGHT or UNDERLINE facts, details or ideas that link to the questions.
Pay attention to TEXT FEATURES. Italics, bold, headings, “quotation marks” to show
dialogue/quotations, headlines, numbering of paragraphs, etc. all help you to understand the selection.
AFTER READING
ANSWER the questions.
RE-READ the selection in case you are unsure of an answer.
LOOK carefully at the selection to find details that will help you answer the questions .
News Report Presents information in the form and structure of a news article.
On the OSSLT, you are allowed to highlight and/or underline key words or phrases on
the reading selections and/or questions.
The best way to make highlighting/underlining useful as a tool for comprehension is for
it to be strategic, selective, and purposeful.
With selective highlighting and underlining the idea is to mark only the key words,
phrases, vocabulary, and ideas that are central to understanding the piece.
For example: A great deal about your personality can be read in your handwriting,
according to graphologists. Such experts consider handwriting a kind of “brainwriting,”
a direct expression of mental impulses in the brain transmitted through the writer’s
hand to the paper.
In the above example, the four words are underlined because they are the most
important in the selection.
Look carefully at the first and last line of each paragraph. Important information is
often found there.
Highlight only necessary words and phrases - not an entire sentence. Remember:
Do not highlight any more than one-third of the paragraph.
Look for those big ideas that relate to or expand the main topic.
Identify the key words in a question that can help you find the answer. Keep
those key words in mind when you return to the selection. You should search for
those exact words, or words similar in meaning.
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TIPS FOR ANSWERING MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTIONS
The OSSLT consists of 58 test questions. Ten of these questions are written responses that are to be
answered in complete sentences and scored with rubrics. The rest are multiple-choice questions.
5. If you don’t see the answer you predicted, see if you can
cross out any of the choices you know are wrong. Narrow
your choices down to as few as possible.
7. Check and double-check that you have “bubbled-in” your choice in the correct section of the
Student Answer Booklet.
Remember to:
answer ALL multiple-choice questions.
transfer your answers to the STUDENT ANSWER BOOKLET.
fill in the circle completely on the STUDENT ANSWER BOOKLET.
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SAMPLE READING SELECTION
This is an
example
of a
News
Report.
Landfills are clogged with plastic bags that can take up to 1000 years to decompose. Daniel
Burd, a 17-year-old high school student from Waterloo, Ontario, has discovered a way to break
down the plastic in a matter of months. [1]
Burd’s idea won the top prize of $10 000 and scholarships at the 2008 Canada-Wide
Science Fair in Ottawa. [2]
Burd said his idea literally hit him on the head one day. “Each time I open the closet … the
plastic bags are on the top shelf and they always fall down like an avalanche onto my head.” One
day he just got tired of it, so he researched what other people are doing with these bags. [3]
Burd discovered that approximately 500 billion plastic bags are used worldwide each year.
Many end up in the oceans, where they are ingested by animals that often die as a result. [4]
Burd’s hypothesis was that if plastic bags can eventually break down, it should be possible
to speed up the process by isolating and concentrating the micro-organism responsible for the
decomposition. [5]
To test his hypothesis, Burd took soil samples from the landfill and mixed them with
polyethylene (the substance used to make plastic bags) and a solution to encourage bacterial
growth. After concentrating the solution and incubating it for 12 weeks, Burd was able to degrade
the plastic by 43 percent in six weeks. He figures the bacterial soup would entirely break down
plastic bags in three months. [6]
Burd envisions future “recycling stations” acting as large composters for plastic bags.
Meantime, he says he hopes to attend a university to study science. [7]
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Multiple-Choice (Record the best or most correct answer on the Student Answer Booklet.)
d. paragraph 5
d. an experiment
d. large composters
Answers:
1. b 2. c 3. a 4. a 5. a
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Tips for Completing Short Writing Tasks
The second type of question that you will encounter on the OSSLT
for the Reading Selections will be Short Writing Tasks.
Provide your answers
It is always a good idea to plan your response in the “Rough Notes” in the ANSWER
section that is provided on the test. You are given only a few lines BOOKLET.
to answer the questions, so you must use them wisely.
2. Answer the question by including part of the question as part of your answer. Note that
sometimes you will be asked to state your opinion about something or comment on something
you have read. Read carefully!
3. In answering the question, go back to the selection to find specific details to support your
answer and/or opinion.
4. Think about your own experiences. In what way does the selection you have read connect to
your own experience of the world?
Does it make you think about a personal experience you have had? (Text-to-Self)
Does it remind you of another book you have read or movie you have watched? (Text-to-
Text)
Does it remind you of something that has happened in the news? (Text-to-World)
You can include these ideas in your answer. By including these ideas, you show that you have
understood what you have read in the selection.
5. Some short writing tasks on the OSSLT are not connected to a reading piece. When this is the
case, respond to the writing task that is provided. Write a clear topic sentence to start your
paragraph and state your main idea. Then provide specific details (examples, explanations,
etc.) to support your answer. Be guided by the number of lines – don’t leave more than one
blank!
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SAMPLE READING SELECTION: NARRATIVE WITH DIALOGUE
Read the selection below and answer the questions that follow it.
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Read the questions carefully!
Use part of the question as part of your answer!
Written Answers DON’T LEAVE ANYTHING BLANK; fill up the lines!
1. Does Gerry believe that Hanna’s suggestions will help him? Use specific details from this
selection to support your answer.
2. What are some strategies that people can use to overcome stresses in their lives? Use specific
details from this selection and your own ideas to support your answer.
Some strategies that people can use to overcome stresses in their lives include…
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Rough Notes
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Written Answers
1. Does Gerry believe that Hanna’s suggestions will help him? Use specific details from this
selection to support your answer.
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2. What are some strategies that people can use to overcome stresses in their lives? Use specific
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Rough Notes
Use the space below for rough notes. Nothing you write in this space will be scored.
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SAMPLE STUDENT RESPONSES: QUESTION #1
The following are student responses for the previous Reading Selection Questions.
Two samples are provided for you: an unacceptable response and an acceptable response.
The Scoring Guides that are used on the OSSLT for these open response questions follow the
sample student responses.
Annotation:
The response provides examples of suggestions that Hanna gave (taking a walk will calm the
nerves…visualizing the end of the day will picture yourself as a feeling of accomplishment) but provides no
evidence from the selection as to whether Gerry believes these suggestions will help him.
CODE 30
ACCEPTABLE RESPONSE
Annotation:
The response states that Gerry believes Hanna’s suggestions will help him and clearly explains how this is evident
using specific and relevant details from the selection (Gerry breaths a sigh of relief and asks for more tips…Gerry
is cooperative with Hanna’s suggestions, such as visualizing himself at his job).
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SCORING GUIDE FOR READING OPEN-RESPONSE QUESTIONS
QUESTION #1
Does Gerry believe that Hanna’s suggestions will help him? Use specific details from this
selection to support your answer.
Assess your level using the following rubric by highlighting which code your response
corresponds with:
CODE DESCRIPTOR
Blank nothing written or drawn in the lined spaced provided
Illegible response is illegible
An illegible response cannot be read.
A comment on the task (e.g., I don’t know.).
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SAMPLE STUDENT RESPONSES: QUESTION #2
2. What are some strategies that people can use to overcome stresses in their lives?
Use specific details from this selection and your own ideas to support your answer.
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UNACCEPTABLE RESPONSE
People can use strategies to overcome stresses. Some stresses help people to get to
their new jobs, like going for a walk or talking to friends. There are many strategies to
choose from like Gerry had a lot of stresses and found some ways to deal with it. Also,
taking a deep breath can help you.__________________________________________
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Annotation:
This response uses vague support from the reading selection to explain why everyone should learn about
workplace safety (There are many strategies from like Gerry had a lot of stresses and some ways to deal with it).
The reader must make the connection between the reason and the supporting detail.
CODE 30
ACCEPTABLE RESPONSE
People can use many strategies to overcome stresses in their lives. In the reading,
Hanna suggests that Gerry can go outside for a walk, take deep breaths and Gerry thinks
of something funny to help lighten his mood. When I am stressed, I listen to music and
talk about it with my friends and this always helps. It is important to have a variety of
ways to relieve stress in our lives.___________________________________________
Annotation:
This response uses specific and relevant details from the reading selection (Hanna suggests that Gerry can go
outside for a walk, take deep breaths and Gerry thinks of something funny to help lighten his mood) to explain
how people can overcome stresses. The response also uses relevant support from their own lives (I listen to
music and talk about it with my friends).
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SCORING GUIDE FOR READING OPEN-RESPONSE QUESTIONS
QUESTION #2
What are some strategies that people can use to overcome stresses in their lives? Use specific
details from this selection and your own ideas to support your answer.
Assess your level using the following rubric by highlighting which code your response
corresponds with:
CODE DESCRIPTOR
Blank nothing written or drawn in the lined spaced provided
Illegible response is illegible
An illegible response cannot be read.
A comment on the task (e.g., I don’t know.).
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TIPS FOR READING A GRAPHIC TEXT
Another type of Reading Selection that you will encounter on the OSSLT is a Graphic Text.
A Graphic Text presents ideas and information with the help of graphic features, such as diagrams,
photographs, drawings, sketches, patterns, timetables, maps, charts, or tables.
For the Graphic Reading Text you will be required to answer 6 multiple choice questions.
When you first see the graphic, SCAN it! Try to develop an overall impression of its
content and possible meaning.
Look at the graphic features (bullets, titles, labels, captions, legends, symbols, photos, tables,
diagrams, italics). Try to figure out what these features add to the overall meaning.
When you need to answer the multiple choice questions related to the graphic text, you will
need to go back to the graphic and consider it carefully more than once. Don’t rush.
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SAMPLE READING SELECTION: GRAPHIC TEXT
Read the selection below and answer the questions in the STUDENT ANSWER BOOKLET.
Total number of anglers Total fish caught and retained Direct fishing-related This is an
Shown in millions of resident Shown in millions of fish expenditures* asterisk. Why is
and non-resident anglers Shown in billions of dollars it here? Look
on this page for
the connection.
*Direct fishing related expenditures include food and lodging, transportation, fishing services and fishing supplies.
1. What does the increasing use of barbless hooks suggest about anglers?
a. They want to help maintain fish populations.
b. They want to retain as many fish as possible.
c. They want to make a lot of money selling fish.
Refer back to the Tips for
d. They want to make sure the fish are securely hooked.
Answering Multiple Choice
2. If the trends shown in the graphs continue, what is a logical prediction?
Questions on page 6.
3. What is the purpose of the asterisk (*) beside “Direct fishing-related expenditures”?
a. to direct the reader to the graph
b. to indicate the importance of the section
c. to connect the heading to other information
d. to emphasize the amount of fishing-related expenditures
4. Which part of the selection relates most closely to the final paragraph?
a. the introductory paragraph
b. the “Total number of anglers” graph
c. the “Total fish caught and retained” graph
d. the “Direct fishing-related expenditures” graph
6. Which part of the selection shows that the recreational fishing industry contributes to the economy?
a. the picture of the angler
b. the “Total number of anglers” graph
c. the “Total fish caught and retained” graph
d. the “Direct fishing-related expenditures” graph Answers:
1. a 2. a 3. c 4. c 5. a 6. d
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WRITING
For the OSSLT, writing is defined as a constructive process of communicating in the forms in
which students are expected to write according to the expectations in The Ontario Curriculum
across all subjects up to the end of Grade 9.
Through a combination of short and long writing tasks, the OSSLT focuses on 3 writing skills:
1. Developing a main idea with sufficient supporting details.
2. Organizing information and ideas in a coherent manner.
3. Using conventions (spelling, grammar, punctuation) in a manner that is correct and
enhances communication.
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Tips for Completing the News Report
It is always a good idea to plan your response in the “Rough Notes” section that is provided on
the test. You are only given a certain number of lines for the News Report and you must use
them wisely. You should aim to use as many of the lines as possible.
AFTER LOOKING AT THE PHOTO AND HEADLINE, HOW DO I WRITE A NEWS REPORT?
1. View the photo and read the headline carefully. Know your topic. Decide what single “happening” or
event your news report will be about. It’s always safe to turn the headline into an important sentence
in the introduction.
2. Remember that your news report will be structured like an inverted pyramid. The most important,
essential information will appear first. You will then add the extra details in the next sections. Look at
the diagram to the right to help you understand this structure.
3. The “lead” section will answer the questions: who, what, when, where, and why. This section is really a
short summary of the whole story. It should be 1 to 2 sentences long.
6. Write your answer using third person point of view: he, she, they, etc. Never use first person (I, me, my,
your) unless the sentence is a direct quotation and the person you interviewed was talking about herself
or himself.
7. Remember that you must write multiple short sections (1 to 3 sentences)! Each time you start a new
section, you must indent.
8. Check your spelling and punctuation. Do all your sentences start with capital letters and end with
periods?
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Writing a News Report
Task: Write a news report based on the headline and picture above.
• You will have to make up the facts and information to answer some or all of the following
questions: Who? What? Where? When? Why? How?
• You must relate your newspaper report to both the headline and the picture.
Purpose and Audience: to report on an event for the readers of a newspaper
Length: The lined space provided in the Answer Booklet for your written work indicates the
approximate length of the writing expected.
REMEMBER!
It’s up to you to come up with:
• THE FACTS
• PEOPLE’S NAMES
• STREET NAMES,
• PLACES, and
• QUOTES
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Remember the 5 W’s and H:
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Who is involved?
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What is happening?
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Where is the event taking place?
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When did the event occur?
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Why is the event happening?
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How did the event take place?
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SAMPLE STUDENT RESPONSES: NEWS REPORT
The following are student responses for a news report with a similar topic as the previous page.
Three samples are provided for you: 2 unacceptable responses and an acceptable response.
The Scoring Guides that are used on the OSSLT follow the sample student responses.
CODE 10
UNACCEPTABLE RESPONSE
Annotation:
The response is a news report related to the headline and/or photo. It identifies an event (On March 25th,
2015, (insert school name) Highschool qualified for the Basketball tornemin), but provides no supporting
details.
CODE 20
UNACCEPTABLE RESPONSE
Annotation:
The response is related to the headline and/or photo (On march 26th2015, the girls Volleyball team have
qualified for the finals after 10 years.), but only partly in the form of a news report. It lapses into a
conversational narrative (Some of you may ask how the team got this far, well as you can tell in the team
photo by the expressions on their face and the excitement, they’re a great team). It concludes with an
announcement (On Saturday at 12:00 P.M. We better see you there supporting your team (insert Mascot)!)
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CODE 60
ACCEPTABLE RESPONSE
Annotation:
There is a clear and consistent focus on an event (Saturday March 11th, the day of the (insert City), Ontario Regional
Basketball Playoffs). The news report is developed with thoughtful and specific supporting details (…one of the province’s
first co-ed basketball teams; after- school practice gravity-defying shots; the end score was 14-8; represents true gender
equality).
Organization is coherent with a clear introduction and conclusion and logical paragraphing. There is a sophisticated
progression of ideas from general facts to specific details about the team’s sacrifices and ultimate game play success.
Each quotation is effectively placed to add additional information (“giving up social activities; girls and boys can both be
great at sports”).
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SCORING GUIDE FOR LONG WRITING TASK: News Report
Assess your level using the following rubric by highlighting which code your response
corresponds with:
CODE DESCRIPTOR
Blank The page is blank with nothing written or drawn in the space provided.
Illegible The response is illegible or irrelevant to the prompt.
Off Topic The response is off topic.
Code 10 The response is related to headline and/or photo, but is not a news report.
OR
The response is a news report related to the headline and/or photo. It identifies an event,
but provides no supporting details, or provides details that are unrelated to the event. There
is no evidence of organization.
Code 20 The response is related to headline and/or photo, but only partly in the form of a news
report.
OR
The response is a news report related to the headline and/or photo, but the focus on an
event is unclear or inconsistent. There are insufficient supporting details: too few or
repetitious. There is limited evidence of organization.
Code 30 The response is a news report related to the headline and photo with a clear focus on an
event. There are insufficient and/or vague supporting details or the connection of the details
to the event is not always clear. There is evidence of organization, but lapses distract from
the overall communication.
Code 40 The response is a news report related to the headline and photo with a clear and consistent
focus on an event. There are sufficient supporting details, however, only some are specific.
The organization is mechanical and any lapses do not distract from the overall
communication.
Code 50 The response is a news report related to the headline and photo with a clear and consistent
focus on an event. There are sufficient specific supporting details to develop the news report.
The organization is logical.
Code 60 The response is a news report related to the headline and photo with a clear and consistent
focus on an event. There are sufficient specific supporting details, which are thoughtfully
chosen to develop the news report. The organization is coherent demonstrating a thoughtful
progression of ideas.
Writing conventions on Long Writing Tasks are also scored. Examples of writing conventions
are: spelling, punctuation, capitalization, grammar, and sentence structure.
Assess your level using the following rubric by highlighting which code your response
corresponds with:
CODE DESCRIPTOR
Code 10 There is insufficient evidence to assess the use of conventions.
OR
Errors in conventions interfere with communication.
Code 20 Errors in conventions distract from communication.
Code 30 Errors in conventions do not distract from communication.
Code 40 Control of conventions is evident in written work.
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TIPS FOR WRITING A SERIES OF PARAGRAPHS
TO EXPRESS AN OPINION
The last long writing task that you will encounter on the OSSLT will be the task of writing a series of
paragraphs to express your opinion.
In the introduction, clearly state your opinion. Choose the side of the argument that you
strongly believe. This is your main idea. Stick to ONE side of the argument. Don’t “sit on the
fence.”
Begin each body paragraph with a topic sentence. This sentence will give the reader
information about what this paragraph will address. Use specific details (examples or facts)
from what you know and how you feel about the topic to support your answer/opinion.
In the concluding paragraph, summarize your opinion. Think of a sentence to wrap up your
writing.
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Writing a Series of Paragraphs
Task: Write a minimum of three paragraphs expressing an opinion on the topic below. Develop your
main idea with supporting details (proof, facts, examples, etc.).
Audience: an adult who is interested in your opinion.
Length: The lined space provided in the Answer Booklet for your written work indicates the
approximate length of the writing expected.
Topic:
Rough Notes
To be successful you should create an outline like this.
On the day of the test, the rough notes area will be blank (below).
Use it for planning and brainstorming. For the next task, use the rough notes section before you
write your series of paragraphs.
STATE IT! What is your opinion? (Fill in the blank with IS or IS NOT)
Introduction
Paragraph I believe that participation ______________________ an
important part of secondary school life.
POINT #1 (Reason#1)
PROVE IT!
Body PROOF #1 (Example from your experience)
Paragraphs
POINT #2 (Reason#2)
POINT #3(Reason#3)
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Writing a Series of Paragraphs Practice
Task: Write a minimum of three paragraphs expressing an opinion on the topic below. Develop your
main idea with supporting details (proof, facts, examples, etc.).
Audience: an adult who is interested in your opinion.
Length: The lined space provided in the Answer Booklet for your written work indicates the
approximate length of the writing expected.
Topic: Is participation in extracurricular activities an important part of secondary school
life?
Write your series of paragraphs on the lines provided on the following two pages.
Rough Notes
Use the space below for your rough notes. Nothing you write in this space will be scored.
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Is participation in extracurricular activities an important part of secondary school life?
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SAMPLE STUDENT RESPONSES: SERIES OF PARAGRAPHS
The following are student responses for the previous Writing a Series of Paragraphs
question.
Two samples are provided for you: an unacceptable response and an acceptable
response.
The Scoring Guides that are used on the OSSLT for this question follow the sample
student responses.
CODE 30
UNACCEPTABLE RESPONSE
Annotation:
The response is related to the prompt and expresses a clear opinion. (Participation in extracurricular activities are
important Part of secondary school life). Reasons are listed, but are not developed (It is a way to meet new people.
To make some new friends. It can be a lot of fun and it deffenatly keeps you out of trouble). Lapses in organization
distract.
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CODE 60
ACCEPTABLE RESPONSE
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Annotation:
A clear and consistent opinion is developed with sufficient specific supporting details that
are thought chosen (develop skills that allow them to work well with others, improve their
organizational skills, are more likely to receive a greater benefit).
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SCORING GUIDE FOR LONG WRITING TASK:
Series of Paragraphs Expressing an Opinion
Assess your level using the following rubric by highlighting which code your response
corresponds with:
CODE DESCRIPTOR
Blank The pages are blank with nothing written or drawn in the space provided.
Illegible The response is illegible or irrelevant to the prompt.
Off Topic The response is off topic.
Code 10 The response is related to the prompt, but does not express an opinion.
OR
The response expresses an opinion with no supporting details or provides details unrelated
to the opinion. There is no evidence of organization.
Code 20 The response is related to the prompt, but only part of the response expresses and supports
an opinion.
OR
The response is related to the prompt, and expresses and supports an opinion, but the
opinion is unclear or inconsistent. There are insufficient supporting details: too few or
repetitious. There is limited evidence of organization.
Code 30 The response is related to the prompt and expresses a clear opinion. There are insufficient
and/or vague supporting details or the connection of the details to the opinion is not always
clear. There is evidence of organization, but lapses distract from the overall communication.
Code 40 The response is related to the prompt. A clear and consistent opinion is developed with
sufficient supporting details, however only some are specific. The organization is mechanical
and any lapses do not distract from the overall communication.
Code 50 The response is related to the prompt. A clear and consistent opinion is developed with
sufficient specific supporting details. The organization is logical.
Code 60 The response is related to the prompt. A clear and consistent opinion is developed with
sufficient specific supporting details, which are thoughtfully chosen. The organization is
coherent demonstrating a thoughtful progression of ideas.
Writing conventions on Long Writing Tasks are also scored. Examples of writing conventions
are: spelling, punctuation, capitalization, grammar, and sentence structure.
Assess your level using the following rubric by highlighting which code your response
corresponds with:
CODE DESCRIPTOR
Code 10 There is insufficient evidence to assess the use of conventions.
OR
Errors in conventions interfere with communication.
Code 20 Errors in conventions distract from communication.
Code 30 Errors in conventions do not distract from communication.
Code 40 Control of conventions is evident in written work.
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Short Writing Tasks
These tasks will give you the opportunity to demonstrate your writing skills by using
your knowledge and personal experience.
There is no reading selection connected to these tasks. In other words, you must write
your response based on your own experiences, background knowledge and connections in relation to
the question.
For tips on writing Short Writing Tasks without a reading selection, refer to the “Tips for Completing
Short Writing Tasks” on page 9.
2. Identify the ideal destination for a high school field trip. Explain your choice with specific details.
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experience and
knowledge.
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A Rough Notes section is provided in the Answer Booklet. Use this area to brainstorm
ideas before you begin writing. Remember, this area is not scored; however, it is a
great way for you to brainstorm ideas in order to formulate your response.
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Short Writing Task (Answer in full and correctly written sentences.)
1. What is the best advice you have ever given to someone? Use specific details to explain your
answer.
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Responses must be written in
complete sentences.
Use all the lines provided
Check spelling and grammar
2. Identify the ideal destination for a high school field trip. Explain your choice with specific details.
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Rough Notes
Use the space below for rough notes. Nothing you write in this space will be scored.
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SAMPLE STUDENT RESPONSES: SHORT WRITING TASKS
The following are student responses for the previous Short Writing Tasks.
Two samples are provided for you: an unacceptable response and an acceptable response.
The Scoring Guides that are used on the OSSLT for these Short Writing Tasks follow the sample
student responses.
CODE 10
UNACCEPTABLE RESPONSE
Annotation:
This response identifies an example of advice (tell the truth in bad situations) but does not provide an
explanation for why it was the best.
CODE 30
ACCEPTABLE RESPONSE
Annotation:
This response provides an example of advice given (telling my sister to apply for a job she didn’t think she
would be good at). The answer is clearly supported with specific and relevant details (She is still working at
this job three years later…constantly telling me how much she loves it…tells me of the many friends she has
made and the pleasure of going in to work).
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2. Identify the ideal destination for a high school field trip?
Explain your choice with specific details.
CODE 10
UNACCEPTABLE RESPONSE
Annotation:
This response identifies an ideal destination for a high school field trip (Toronto Zoo) but provides an
irrelevant explanation for the choice. The response provides directions to the zoo.
CODE 30
UNACCEPTABLE RESPONSE
An ideal destination for a high school trip would be to Quebec City. Here,
students could observe a new culture and practice their French language
skills and learn about Canada’s history. Furthermore, Quebec City is a
provincial capital so students can learn about and understand Canadian
politics.
Annotation:
This response identifies an ideal destination for a high school field trip (Quebec City) and provides details
that are specific and relevant to the destination (practice their French language skills…Quebec City is a
provincial capital, so student’s can learn about & understand Canadian politics) to clearly explain this
choice.
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SCORING GUIDE FOR SHORT WRITING TASK
Questions #1 & #2
Assess your level using the following rubric by highlighting which code your response
corresponds with:
CODE DESCRIPTOR
Blank nothing written or drawn in the lined spaced provided
Illegible response is illegible
An illegible response cannot be read.
An inappropriate response comments on the task (e.g., I don’t know).
Off Topic response is off topic, irrelevant or incorrect
does not identify an opinion in relation to the question
OR
is not specific to the question
OR
comments on the topic of the question
Code 10 response provides at least one reason, but
does not provide an explanation of the reason
OR
the explanation of the reason is irrelevant
OR
the explanation of the reason is not unique to the situation
Code 20 response provides at least one reason, but the explanation is vague
The response usually requires the reader to make the connection between the
main idea and the support.
Code 30 response clearly explains at least one reason by providing specific and relevant
details as support
Writing conventions on Short Writing Tasks are also scored. Examples of writing conventions
are: spelling, punctuation, capitalization, grammar, and sentence structure.
Assess your level using the following rubric by highlighting which code your response
corresponds with:
CODE DESCRIPTOR
Code 10 Errors in conventions distract from communication.
Code 20 Errors in conventions do not distract from communication.
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TESTING WRITING SKILLS WITH MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTIONS
Term Definition
Comma Separates items in a series – very short pause
e.g. In the end, I stayed home to read.
Colon Is used to introduce explanation, long quotations or a series – the words
after a colon do not make up a sentence
e.g. I went to the store to buy: tomatoes, lettuce, cucumbers.
Semicolon Is used to separate two contrasting parts of a sentence – very long
pause
e.g. I love watching TV after school; it relaxes me.
Quotation Marks Are used to show what someone said (dialogue) or to show a title.
e.g. The teacher said, “You must use all of the lines provided.”
Hyphen Connects two or more words that form one idea.
e.g. One-half of a pie
Dash Separates a word or phrase from the rest of a sentence (is often used
near the end of sentence to summarize an idea)
e.g. Jack works hard – when he has to.
Parentheses Separates extra information from the rest of the sentence.
e.g. They lived happily ever after (and so did the dog).
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Multiple-Choice
(Record the best or most correct answer in the Student Answer Booklet.)
1. What should the writer of the following paragraph do to improve its organization?
(1) The Comfort Maple tree stands in a field near Welland, Ontario. (2) It is over 30 metres high and
eight metres around the trunk. (3) Today it is a local attraction. (4) The tree was already 300 years
old when the Comfort family settled the land in 1816. (5) Few trees like it survive.
a. Break sentence 2 into two sentences.
b. Switch the order of sentences 3 and 4.
c. Insert “Since” at the start of sentence 4.
d. Move sentence 5 to the start of the paragraph.
Answers:
1. b 2. d 3. d 4. b
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Acknowledgements:
Originally develop by Tobi Hawthorne, Betty Hicks, Lia Pongetti, Nancy Poole, Rosemary
Pusztay and Mary Jane Di Gregorio and EQAO – Education Quality and Accountability Office.