CLC How To Write Research Papers
CLC How To Write Research Papers
Title
It must precisely describe the report’s contents
Name and address of authors
Abstract
A brief overview of the report
I. Introduction
Includes the purpose of the research
States the hypothesis
Gives any necessary background information
Provides a review of pertinent literature
II. Methods and materials (Experiment)
Provides a description of material, equipment and methods used in the research
III. Results and Discussions
Results
States the results of the research. Visual materials are included here.
Discussion
Evaluation and interpretation
Was the hypothesis supported? If so, how? If not, why not? Relevant results are cited in
support.
IV. Conclusion
Conclusions to be drawn from the results Conclusions about the hypothesis Implications of the
research and results Additional research proposed
Acknowledgement
References
A list of the references cited
Include references to any works cited in the review of literature in the introduction. Use the
documentation style required by your specific field.
Abstracts
Abstracts are called ‘summaries’ by some journals, though strictly speaking the terms are not
exactly the same.
A summary restates the main findings and conclusions of a paper and is written for people who
have already read the whole thing.
An abstract is a shortened version of the paper written for people who may never read the full
version. Since abstracts are often reprinted in abstracting journals separated from the original
paper, they need to be self-explanatory.
An abstract normally appears at the top of the page in front of the actual paper it outlines. The
purpose is to inform readers as concisely as possible what is in the article so that they can decide
whether to read it in detail.
What types of abstracts are there?
There are two kinds of abstract:
Descriptive abstract: this provides a kind of ‘contents list’ of what will be in the paper; what the
writer will deal with or attempt to prove in the article, rather than a synopsis of the actual results.
Since it contains general statements, it is more appropriate for longer papers, such as review
articles, and can be written before the paper itself is drafted.
Informative abstract: this does not simply describe what will be in the paper, but also gives a
summary of the main factual information, such as your methods and materials, results and
conclusions. This type of abstract is more suited to papers or reports about original research. It is
usually better to write an informative abstract when the writing of the complete paper is finished.
The type of abstract depends on the requirements of journal.
How long should an abstract be?
There is no fixed length. It is important to write enough for what the reader needs to know rather
than summarizing everything in the paper. A typical length is between 100 and 250 words, or
between 5% and 10% of the original.
What should an informative abstract contain?
The informative abstract will contain a selection of these elements, depending on how you
perceive the reader’s needs
Normally you would NOT include in your abstract:
-any information that is not in the paper itself
-tables and diagrams
-citations from other people’s work
How is an abstract structured?
Rather than following the sequence of sections in the paper itself, it is often a good idea in an
abstract to put the most significant ideas first, whether it be the method, the results, your
recommendations, or whatever. In this way, readers who are short of time will at least know your
main point even if they only read the first sentence.
Is there any difference in style between a descriptive and an informative abstract?
Both types of abstract must communicate ideas effectively, preferably with direct, active
statements in short, simple sentences. There can be a difference in the use of verb tenses:
*use the present tense when you make general statements of fact, or say what your paper does (as
in a descriptive abstract)
*use the past tense when you explain what you actually did or found out in your piece of research
(as in an informative abstract)
The descriptive abstract will make more use of generalized vocabulary and phrases, while the
informative abstract will have more precise, specific language, including numbers.
What are ‘keywords’?
These are the most important words in your paper that are specifically related to your topic. Your
editor may want you to identify these so that they can be printed at the end of the abstract (or
sometimes after the title in the journal’s contents list).
Summary Writing
A summary is a condensation of the main ideas in an article or in a section of someone else's
writing. A summary may stand alone, for example as a similar piece of writing to an abstract. Or
it may simply form a section within a longer piece of your writing. The aim of a summary is to
give your readers a clear, objective, accurate and balanced account of an article they may, or may
not, have not read, and to put it into the context of your own work.
Summarising therefore is a skill that involves picking out the key ideas in someone else's writing
and linking them up in your own words.
In most ways the Conclusion section of a research paper is easier to write than that of an essay or
article. It must contain four straightforward elements:
-Conclusions about the hypothesis posed in the introduction
Did the hypothesis prove to be correct or incorrect? How? Why? How may the problem be
rehypothesized?
-Results of the research – and their theoretical implications
What did the research actually reveal? What was observed? Not only what do the findings
indicate about the research done, but also what broader aspects might they reveal and
explain?
-Possible hypotheses raised by the results
What questions do the results raise? What possible answers or explanations can be
hypothesised?
- Specific lines of additional research raised by the results; At each step of the research new
questions arose; how might they be answered or explained?
How these conclusions are presented depends on the research done and the demands of the
Style sheet for the particular field.
Sample phrases you can use in conclusions
Summarizing what you have done
In conclusion, we can say that …
In this paper, we have seen that …
This research paper has clearly shown that …
The discussion in this article has given an overview of …
This paper has provided a systematic study of …
From the research that has been carried out, we can conclude that …
The aim of the present paper was to examine whether … and this has now been achieved.
Finally, it is worth pointing out that …
Indicating the limitations of your own work
This article has only been able to touch on the most general features of …
Even a preliminary study, such as the one reported here, has highlighted the need for …
Looking to the future and further research
Clearly, further studies are needed to understand / prove …
In order to validate the work we have carried out, a more in-depth investigation into … is
needed. The results of this research could assist policy makers to …
Points to check in your own writing
-Can the reader understand the gist of your paper by reading only the introduction and the
conclusion? If not, re-write them.
- Have you merely re-stated what you said in the introduction? If so, think how you might
present it somewhat differently in the light of the supporting evidence in the main body.
-Do you conclude with an emphatic finish? Do you leave the reader with a strong impression?
Referencing
Reference to a book. Information to include:
Author, date, title, place, publisher
Example: Brown, S., et al. (1996) 500 tips for research students, London, Kogan Paul
Reference to an article from a journal. Information to include:
author(s), title, journal volume, (date) pages
example: Hartley, J. Tabling information, American Psychologist 46 (1991)655-6559
Reference to an unpublished work. The information would appear as follows:
The following linking words and phrases may also be used to express similarity:
like …; as well as …; both … and …; just as …; In the same way,
…Similarly,…
Dissimilarity
Dissimilarity basically means that one phenomenon is either more or less than another in one or
several respects. The following structures can be used:
much
far
substantially adjective + -er
is somewhat more + adjective than
A rather less + adjective B
slightly
almost as + adjective
is not quite so + adjective as
Example sentence:
So even though it's non-porous, much thicker and far more reliable than gold plating, we can
almost always offer our glad connectors for less than you would pay for an ordinary
connector. In general, the dependence of the open-loop gain on temperature is of less
importance than the thermal behaviour of the amplifier frequency response.
Superiority and inferiority
This means saying how something is better or worse than something else, with regard to
particular features. Phrases you can use include:
in a certain way
from a certain point of
view with regard to …
as regards …
A is superior to B in being
inferior to in that it is more + adjective
less + adjective
inasmuch as it
is giving more + noun
in showing greater + noun
exhibiting less + noun
Example sentences:
* The reciprocating pump is superior to the rotary pump in being more efficient.
* The yarn strength of air-vortex spun yarns is somewhat inferior to that of rotor-spun yarns, a
5% difference in strength being reported.
Proportionality and disproportionality
When two objects, X and Y, are considered in relation to each other, the variability of certain
of their features or characteristics can be compared. The comparison may produce either a
proportional or a disproportional result. You can use the following sentence structures:
with
changes as a change in
A feature of X varies inversely according to a variation in a feature of Y
in accordance with
is proportional to
changes so does
As
a feature of X varies so a feature of Y + verb
The (better) the (better)
Example sentences:
* The higher the velocity of steam, the greater the turbine speed.
* Data input rise and fall times reduce as driver output impedance increases.
* The critical twist value, after which strength decreases, is lower for the former, but
increases with increasing yarn linear density, which is the reverse of the effect found for
conventional yarns.
* During expansion, the pressure varies inversely to the volume.
Contrasting
Contrasting is a specific kind of comparison. Whereas in comparing you normally look for at
least one feature that the two or more objects have in common, in contrasting you aim to identify
the differences between them.
Here are some useful sentence structures:
Unlike B, A is + adjective
In contrast to As has + noun
opposed to As
distinct from As
against
Some common conjunctions and sentence linkers for expressing contrast:
While …, … Whereas …, …
On the other hand, …
Example sentences:
* The RAM differs from the ROM in that it can be written into as well as read from.
* It is useful to differentiate between a blower and a liquid.
* The engine, as distinct from the earlier one, has six cylinders.
* Unlike discrete-component designs, however, the microprocessor is not programmed using …
* These differences are ascribed to the fact … most fibres have both ends spun in, whereas in
the case of ring-spun yarns one fibre end frequently protrudes from the yarn.
* A hot engine will run on a weak mixture. On the other hand, a cold engine requires a
richer mixture.
1.4 Defining
In science and technology, there are generally two kinds of definitions:
The real definition, that is a definition that explains precisely the essential, intrinsic
characteristics of an object.
The nominal definition, that is one that helps to determine the meaning of a term, such as a
word, sentence or symbol, e.g. in a mathematical language.
What language can I use for real definitions?
Real definitions include these functions:
Defining an object
By A is meant
we mean
Example sentences:
* Geometry may be said to be a study of the properties of geometric figures.
* By a set of real numbers we mean an aggregate or class of numbers.
Defining an object by assigning it to a category and specifying it
A is B + specification:
is called termed (relative clause)
may be thought of as (prepositional phrase)
referred to as (to + infinitive)
defined as participle clause (-ing / -ed)
participle clause + to infinitive / for + gerund
By A is meant
we mean
Example sentences:
* A pyrometer is an instrument for measuring high temperatures.
* Milling is a machining process in which a rotary cutter equipped with a number of teeth is
rotated rapidly while the work is fed under it.
* Roughly speaking, a surface is a configuration of points having a two-dimensional character.
* Brittleness may be defined as the absence of the ability to deform plastically.
* A key is the information required to locate a record within a DASD file declared with the
attribute
DIRECT.
What language can I use for nominal definitions?
Here are some of the sentence patterns you can use:
said to be
called
then it is referred to as
If A satisfies certain conditions then it can be expressed as Z
expressed in the form
of termed
then we call it
is called
defined by … is said to be
A is expressed as Z
determined by …
is expressed in the form of
is termed
Example sentences:
* A curve is called smooth if two conditions are satisfied: (1) …. (2) ….
* A function f(s) defined by f(s) = ƒ ……. is called the Laplace transform of the function f(t).
* The term computer normally refers to a general-purpose, high-speed, programmable
machine that is designed to handle a wide range of computer problems.
1.5 Emphasizing
In your writing you will be making statements that vary in importance. You will therefore
need to make sure that the most important ones are given more emphasis than the less
important ones. Details in your argument have to be presented in such a way that readers
understand their relative significance.
How can I use language to emphasize points?
In spoken English, you can emphasize parts of a sentence simply by using stress on important
words. In writing, of course, we cannot do this. Instead, we can emphasize particular words or
phrases by putting everything into a kind of relative clause except the words we want to
emphasize. These structures are called cleft sentences.
It was …who / that …
Röntgen discovered X-Rays in 1895. (no emphasis)
It was Röntgen who discovered X-Rays in 1895. (emphasis on the person)
It was in 1895 that Röntgen discovered X-Rays. (emphasis on the date)
It was not until 1895 that Röntgen discovered X-Rays. (emphasis on the fact that it wasn't
earlier than this)
It was X-Rays that Röntgen discovered in 1895. (emphasis on what Röntgen discovered)
Other cleft sentence structures:
What … was …
The reason why … is that …
no emphasis emphasis
Einstein showed that space-time and What Einstein showed was that space-time and
gravitational forces are profoundly related. gravitational forces are profoundly related.
The southern hemisphere shows little response The reason why the southern
to eruptions in the north because it is dominated hemisphere shows little response to
by oceans that damp down any change. eruptions in the north is that it is
dominated by oceans that damp down
You can draw attention to the new information that anyyou
change.
want to present by changing the
sequence of the parts of a sentence, using such structural forms as:
One / The only … is / was …
One erasable system that is being considered by developers like IBM and 3M is a technology
called magneto-optic recording.
The only time this effect has been reported was in 1995.
You can add emphasis by starting your sentence with a negative expression or one including
only. Note that with these structures the subject and the main verb in the sentence have to be
inverted, or changed round.
negative expressions such as Never…, Seldom…, Rarely…; Under no circumstances…, At no
time…, In no way…
no emphasis emphasis
He did not allow his assistants to be absent Under no circumstances did he allow his
under any circumstances. assistants to be absent.
He had never managed to use his deductive Never had he managed to use his deductive
skills so well as in this experiment. skills so well as in this experiment
We will know the next steps to take when Only when the report has been carefully
the report has been carefully analysed. analysed will we know the next steps to
take.
Scientists have recently discovered a cure for Only recently have scientists discovered a
certain types of leukemia. cure for certain types of leukemia.
You can also add emphasis by using balancing or parallel structures in a sentence, e.g. not
only … but (also) …; just as … so …
Not only was Röntgen's discovery of X-Rays important in itself, but it led directly to the
discovery of radioactivity.
Just as Avogadro saved his idea that equal volumes of gases contain equal numbers of
molecules by introducing a new idea, so Kekulé rescued his idea that carbon is tetravalent by
inventing the carbon- carbon bond.
Points to check in your writing
modifying adverbs
* mainly, primarily, principally, chiefly, above all, overall
* in general, on the whole, as a rule, largely
* for the most part, mostly
* especially, particularly, notably
* clearly, obviously, evidently, distinctly, plainly, noticeably
* significantly
* relatively, comparatively
* somewhat, rather, fairly, quite
* slightly
Points to check in your own writing
Have I made any sweeping or over-generalizations that I need to cut out?
Are all my general statements, e.g. 'topic' sentences in paragraphs or conclusion, backed up the
right evidence and examples?
Have I used the right hedging language to give the tone I want to my general statements?
1.7 Paraphrasing
Paraphrasing means expressing the thought, meaning and attitude of another author in your own
words, in a clear and straightforward way. It is therefore similar to quoting, but it is done
indirectly, without using the original writer's actual words or speech marks. With paraphrasing,
you avoid continuous strings of direct quotations and are able to maintain your own style and
tone of writing. However, as with direct quoting, it is essential that you do proper referencing
for all your paraphrases.
With a paraphrase, your aim is to relate what the author has said to your own piece of work,
and this often requires you to provide an interpretation, or gloss, on their ideas in some way, to
make them fit into your argument. A paraphrase is not just a simple re-wording of the original.
What language changes do I make when paraphrasing?
vocabulary.
* keep the specialised terms that are related to the topic, or those for which there are no
synonyms, e.g calcium, neutron, protein
* do not change proper nouns (e.g. names of countries and organisations), numbers,
formulae
* for the rest of your text, use different vocabulary whenever possible, especially simpler
phrases and more common synonyms and expressions. Using your own words makes your
paraphrase fit in with the style of the rest of your text.
grammar
* the grammar of the original needs to be changed, so that the points you are reporting on
fit in with the grammatical flow of your text
* if your paraphrase is summarising and thus shortening the original, this will involve
reducing perhaps 3 or 4 sentences (or more) down to one. This will require you to use a
variety of subordinate clauses and adverbial or participle phrases.
Language to use to introduce paraphrases
You can use the same 'reporting' verbs for paraphrasing as are given in Section 4.8 on Quoting.
In particular, verbs that reflect the original writer's purpose or attitude towards his/her subject
are useful when paraphrasing, e.g.
X identifies … as …
X defends his position by arguing that ….
X attacks his opponents with his statement that … X
affirms his opinion that …
Note that the 'reporting' verb can be followed by that … (or this can be omitted).
Punctuation: there is no comma before or after that:
Fred Hein explains that each person's heredity is unique, except for identical twins.
MacSpratt (6) found that when sheep were deficient in nitrogen, the rate of mitosis in wool
follicles was 63% of normal and concluded that nitrogen is essential to normal growth of wool.
Note that the last verb is is in the present tense: this is because the writer is generalising, or
making a conclusion about what he regards as a general truth. If the writer knows that later
work found this conclusion to be false, he would use was instead.
You can also use the other introductory phrases given in the section on quoting. These in fact
are more commonly used with indirect quotations than with direct ones.
With indirect quotations, you can also simply put the name of the source at the end of the
paraphrase, without any 'reporting' verb or introductory phrase:
Changes in the surface heating of the earth will result in changes in the heating of the
atmosphere which in turn can affect the climate (Cohen, 1994).
1.8 Quoting
When writing a research paper or report, it is normal to include references and quotations
from the work of others. This is for one or more of the following reasons:
to cite evidence or opinions from an authority on the subject in support of your argument
to put forward someone else's viewpoint that you intend to argue against
to show the range of source materials you have used to support or challenge your own ideas
to acknowledge that your arguments derive from the work of others and thereby put them into
their academic context
What kinds of quotation are there?
Quotations in your text can either be
direct: that is, you use the actual words of the original writer, or
indirect: that is, you paraphrase what the original source says by putting the ideas in your own
words.
In general, it is preferable to use the indirect, or paraphrasing, method since this incorporates the
other author's ideas better into the flow of your own text. However, there are occasions when
direct quotations are better:
when the author expresses an idea in a particularly succinct or memorable way that it is
impossible to improve on it
when the writer is such an important authority on the subject that his/her actual words are
significant
when you want to avoid any ambiguity about the quoted
How long should direct quotations be?
In principle, you should keep quotations as brief as is necessary for them to make their point.
Avoid using long quotations in case they detract from your own argument; only quote longer
passages if you intend to analyse the writer's argument in detail.
Language to use to introduce quotations
There are a wide variety of 'reporting' verbs and verb phrases that you can use to
introduce a quotation. Here are some of the more common ones
You can introduce your citation with any of these longer phrases:
According to X, …
As X has shown, …
For X, …
In X's view, …
By this, X meant …
X was of the opinion that …
X distinguished between … and …
X characterised / considered / defined / recognised / referred to / regarded … as … X
illustrated his / her argument by saying / stating / showing that …
X laid particular emphasis on …
X makes the following claim / point / statement: …
X put forward the theory that …
Referring to …, X said / stated / showed …