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The document is about a man named Sidda who lives with his wife and sick child. He works hard farming to pay for his child's medical expenses but faces difficulties selling his crops due to lack of space in the trader's warehouse. He struggles financially and must borrow money from others. His child remains ill and requires an expensive operation.

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The document is about a man named Sidda who lives with his wife and sick child. He works hard farming to pay for his child's medical expenses but faces difficulties selling his crops due to lack of space in the trader's warehouse. He struggles financially and must borrow money from others. His child remains ill and requires an expensive operation.

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0A (V.O)OKA OORLO 0A

1 EXT/INT. HOME - NIGHT 1

SIDDA comes into the home from out. (The GATE LIGHT is
lighted richly) His WIFE is filling milk in BABY SIPPER
BOTTLE. Sidda enters into room. Sat on a CHAIR.(Room
becomes more darker). He turns on the matchstick. There is
filled CHILLAM in his mouth. He lights it up. He quickly
takes 3-4 puffs, continuing it he takes deep puff and
raises his head and leans back, with head almost facing
backwards. He releases smoke. There is a MARRIAGE PHOTO
hanged on the wall behind him. Music Que: Indian marriage
shehnai & tabala music (Gatti melam) along with shot:
Camera dolly shot from above his face towards photo until
photo fits into frame and dolly shot backwards Backward
dolly shot continues.(Going back to the past). A. (pregnant
wife). comes into frame serving FOOD to Sidda who is
sitting on the floor. Movement of camera reaches over the
shoulder of SIDDA. Camera movement continues BABY comes
into frame. Baby is trying to walk with his/her first
steps. Baby suddenly fells down forward and starts crying.
Baby cry picks up the fade out notes of marriage music. A
and Sidda turns back at once. A keeps VESSEL on the floor
and runs towards the baby and picks him/her up and cuddles.
Kid fells unconcious Sidda and wife got scared and sidda
starts rubbing legs.

CUT TO

2 EXT. HOME - CONTINUOUS 2

Sidda washes his hands and picks GRAPE HOE.

CUT TO

3 EXT. FARM - MOMENTS LATER 3

Sidda is breaking down soil line with GRAPE HOE. R is going


somewhere notices Sidda and shouts. (include spade sound)
2.

R
Sidda, Ippudu yenduku gandi
kodtunnav. Ippudu yada varsham
vastudindi?

Why are you making way to water drain out, there is lot of
time to rain?

SIDDA
2 yella nunchi ilane avtundi, poina
sari kuda chetiki vachindanta
mandul baki kattadanike saripoindi.
EE sari kodukki/kuturki dogade
bandi tiskovali.

Last two times whole money was sufficient to pay medicine


debt. This time, have to buy baby walker.

(talking to himself) Okate kakapote

INKOKATI. YENNI SARLU CHUDLEDU.


Manaki chetilo migeledi yemi
undadu.

One or the other reason. It has been witnessed every time.


Nothing remains in our hands

Sidda Continues to work.


(TRANSITION: GRAPE HOE TO
BED SHEET SPREAD)CUT TO)

4 INT. HOME - NIGHT 4

A making bed to sleep. A & Sidda sleeps on the bed.

A hears sounds of thunder and rain. A worries little bit


and sees Sidda's face.

SIDDA
Yem parledu, gandi kottunna. Nellu
nilabadav.

No need to worry, I have broken the ridges water doesn't


store.

A Peddodu 2 sarlu tala tirge


padipoyadu. Kamala akka aaspatri lo
chupiste manchide annaru. CUT TO
3.

5 INT/EXT. HOME - 5

Sidda and Kid are getting ready to leave home for hospital.
The left the gate. (Sun is replaced with evening moon)

Sidda and kid returned from hospital. Sidda is holding


small cover/ bag.

6 INT. HOME - CONTINUOUS (DAWN) 6

B takes out Tonic bottle from the cover/bag. A enters into


the frame. Her eyes are expecting him to speak.

B
Tallo raktam gadda katind ata.
Malli malli ilane tale tirge
padipotad ata. Cheppalem yeppudaina
alane padipoinappudu ika leyka
povacchu. Veelainanta tondarga
operation cheyali annaru.

There is a blod clot in brain, He will fall unconscious


again and again. May be he won't wake up again permanently.
Operation has to be done as soon as possible

7 INT. HOME - NIGHT 7

A , Sidda and kid are lying on bed to sleep. A cuddling


kids hair and tears are coming out from her eyes. Sidda
sees the tears.

B
Repe poyyi nayadu gar daggara panta
ammi, Dabbu testa, Operation cheste
anta bag avtundi ata.

I will go to Nayadu sir tomorrow only. I will sell crop and


bring money. Everything will be alright

AFTER OPERATION IS DONE.

CUT TO:

8 EXT. FARM - DAY 8


4.

Sidda reaches his farm in BULLOCK CART with a bundle of


jute bags. Sidda starts cutting the crop with hand sickle.
Starts filling his bags with paddy. He left with most of
the bags unfilled.

FADE IN

9 EXT. FARM - THE NEXT DAY 9

Sidda is filling his BAGS with paddy BAGS.

Half of them are unfilled.

B starts his KART with paddy bags and empty bags.

10 EXT. TRADER PLACE - MOMENTS LATER 10

Sidda reaches NAIDU's Place. Sidda parks his kart and


approaches Naidu.

NAIDU

(eating pan) (peeks at Kart)

Arre bali vadiv nuvvu. Monne vana padindi, appude panta


techesi unnav.

So much was happening around him.

Kani yem chendam cheppu. Godown ninde poyi undi. Dinni


teskoni nen yekkada pettukunnide. Vere daggara chusko.

Areee what a man you are. It just rained a day before


yesterday and u bought crop today? but I can't help. There
is no space in godown. You try somehwhere else

B
Ala anakandi naidu garu, Ee oorlo
meer tiskopote inka yavaru
tiskontar cheppandi.

NAIDU
Ledu Sidda, Stalam unte tiskona
cheppu. Ivi tiskoni veeedi lo
pettikunnena cheppu.

No. Sidda, Wouldn't have I took it if there is space.


Should I keep it on road?
5.

B turns back with worry face. And About to go towards his


kart.

In the background Worker comes to the trader and says


something to him.

NAIDU
(in little high pitch).
Sidda ,)
Reddy gari intiki 20 mootlu
kavalata. Stalam avtundi. vadlu
dimpu.

CUT TO

11 EXT. TRADER PLACE - CONTINUOUS 11

Trader is counting money and gave it to Sidda.

FADE IN

12 EXT. ROAD - MOMENTS LATER 12

(Wide Shot). Sidda is returning to home in his KART . P is


trying to reach Sidda from back with his CYCLE. Finally
reaches Sidda.

P
Sidda, Sidda.

B turns.

P
baa unnava?, ippude naidu gari
daggara nunchi vastunnanu, Panta
ammav anta ga?

How are you?, I am returning from naidu garu, I heard you


sold crop?

SIDDA
Avunu P.

Yes P.

Ade kuturu pelli undi, cheppangaa? poina rendu sarlu kuda


baki iledu...
6.

I told you right, my daughter marriage is coming up, Last


two times also you haven't cleared the debt.

SIDDA

Arre nene intiki vochi iddam

ANUKANNA. IPPUDA KADA AMMINDI.


Idigo.

Arre, I was decided to come your home and hand it over to


you. Just now I sold right?

SIDDA takes money out of his pocket and gives to P. P takes


it keeps in his Pocket. There was hesitation in B's face
which P doesn't noticed.

P
Sare vastanu Sidda.

Okay, See you!

P gets on his Cycle. And starts to leave

P
Marchipoku pelli ki vadinne kuda
tisko raa.

Don't forget to come to my daughter marriage, with your


wife!

CUT TO

13 EXT/INT. HOME - MOMENTS LATER 13

Sidda reaches home with no money. Sats on katte next to the


door! A comes out from the door offers him water.

A
Naidu garu vadlu tiskontaro ledo
ani bay paddanu.

CUT TO

14 EXT. ROAD - DAWN 14

Sidda walking nearby his House. Z wishes Sidda

Z
7.

B manchidaindi nuvv kanapadatam,


Kodi kura undi raa kurchundam.(
pointing food box in his hand)

B good thing we met now, come let's sit. Chicken curry has
been prepared.

SIDDA
Vaddu bava, mansem baledu.

No man, I am not feeling great.

Z
Avuna, niku oka vishayam cheppana,
mansu balenappude kurchovali.

You know what? We have to sit when

NOT FEELING GREAT.


CUT TO

15 INT. SITTING PLACE - NIGHT 15

Z & BSidda sat together. Chicken dish was in between them.


Bhang glasses are filled.

Z
yenti bava vadlu chetiki vocchayi,
Naidu gar daggariki poyyi vachav,
mansem baledu antav?

SIDDA
Yem panta bava, Chetilo yem
migeladi undadu, prati saree itne
avtundi. Niku polem lende manchidi
aindi.

Z
Ad ante yendukante aye vadlu kada.
Avi tino vallu andaru bagane
untaru, penchi vade ke bokka.

Ade chetlu penchu tiskonne vadu baguntadu, penche vadu bag


untadu.

SIDDA
Chetlaa..? Chetlu penchadam tappu
kada? Papam vastundi.

Z
8.

Itne sagam akalto batuku gadipeste,


baga punyam vastundaa? Chudu bava
papam, punyam ani kurchunte nevalla
nee pellam ki kuda upayogam undadu.

Ee okka savachram yesi chudu. Niku nachakapote , Malle


vadle pandichu. Okka savachram lo nee vadlu jeevitannem
marchiyevvu kada? Z takes out the seeds. Offers him over
the table. CUT TO

16 EXT. FARM - MORNING 16

Sidda ploughing his farm with PLOUGHING POLE. He is tied.


(Ploughing track 1) He comes to the bank of farm. He took
off the seeds, He is confused. (He is not yet convinced
completely to plant them) He stares at seeds, he grabs them
and left the place.

CUT TO

17 EXT/INT. HOME - MOMENTS LATER 17

SIDDA is sitting on the katte in confused state.

Slow motion of kid blinking eyes. Kid fell unconscious. A


was checking out empty vessels of groceries, notices that
and runs to kid, B notices it and comes to kid. They both
are

tensed and don't know what to do. B is rubbing kid's feet.


Few moments later baby wakes up Mom ( A) is relaxed a bit.
Mom sips kid tonique B's tension continues on the face.
(Close shot on his face). F

18 18

19 EXT. FARM - MOMENTS LATER(PREFERABLY FOG AMBIENCE) 19

Frame continues. Sidda is spilling seeds in his farm.


(complete scene in drip mode).

20 20

FADE IN

21 FOUR MONTHS LATER 21

22 INT. HOME - MORNING 22


9.

2 empty Tonic bottles are empty and lying on the table next
to it half left 1 tonic bottle. (Pan towards Bed) Kid is
starts crying in ascending sound. (Cuts) B is getting
disturbed because of crying sound. B

Pillodu yedustunnadu chudu.

(Cuts) A is not slept at all.

A
Palu ki.. B

PALU IVVU MARI

PALU RAVATLEDU
Sidda is shock and broken. ( Kid
crying sound increases to max)

Gate lamp was off

FADE OUT

23 EXT. FARM - NIGHT 23

Plucking work going. Wind blow.

Yem baypadaku, anta valle chuskuntaru.

(Plants sounds and plucking sound in the Background)

Z goes to Y.

Z
Konchem chusi ivandi ayya. Modati
sari penchadu. manchi ga iste
konasaginchadaniki baga untundi.

Y shooks his head, gives few a bundle of cash to Sidda.


Sidda takes it and wraps in his towel. ( BGM Music
reference: https://youtu.be/awPp4nN75-8)

BLEND TO

24 INT/EXT. HOME - LATE DAWN 24


10.

(music continues.) Milk is boiling on the stove. Gate lamp


is lighten up bright. Remaining cash was kept on table
along with towel. It also contained few pieces of cannabis.

Mom is looking at the kid while standing next to stove. Kid


fells unconscious. A & B rushes to kid. Both are tensed. B
is rubbing feet. (Tensed BGM starts) (Gate lamp close shot
panned to wide cumulating neighbours gate lamp zoom out to
trees.)

(V.O) - aala oorlo andaru chetlu pencharu, taruvata


yemaindante

TITLE - (Uday Giri) (Shouting in Nisha(dripping) sound)

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