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The document discusses a line graph showing the number of commuters using cars, buses, or trains for daily travel in the UK from 1960 to 2020. It notes that in 1960 around 5.6 million commuters used cars while around 4 million used buses and 2.6 million used trains. By 2020, the number of car commuters increased dramatically to 9 million while train use rose to 4.8 million and bus use decreased to 3 million.

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The document discusses a line graph showing the number of commuters using cars, buses, or trains for daily travel in the UK from 1960 to 2020. It notes that in 1960 around 5.6 million commuters used cars while around 4 million used buses and 2.6 million used trains. By 2020, the number of car commuters increased dramatically to 9 million while train use rose to 4.8 million and bus use decreased to 3 million.

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Class code:

Student’s name: Nguyễn Hồ Khải Linh


Peer editor’s name:
Date:23/9/2023

WRITING ASSIGNMENT – LESSON ___

Unit:
Topic:

 1st draft

 Self-assessment (checklist)

 Peer assessment (checklist)

 Final version

The line graph illustrated the number of commuters who use car, bus or train to travelling
every day in UK from 1960 to 2020.

Overall, the car and train was used the highest through the years. And having a max
increasing of travelling by car.

In 1960, around 5.6 million of UK commuters came from car sector. And having about 4
million commuters used bus to travelling while the train only accounted for 2.6 million. In
addition, the number of commuter move by car and train so stably from 1999 to 2000.

In 2020, commuters who traveled by car increased dramatically 9 miilion. At the same time,
the train rose to maximum 4.8 million. On the other hand, commuters chose the bus to
continuous decrease about 3 million.

 Rubric for grading


 Link Sharepoint/ Onedrive/ Google drive your collaboration space (optional)

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