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5 IELTS COURSE
WRITING TASK 2 – LESSON 5

Nội dung bài học

Cấu trúc đề bài dạng Cause & Solution 1
Cấu trúc bài luận dạng Cause & Solution 1
Luyện tập 3

Cấu trúc đề bài dạng Cause & Solution

Ví dụ: Students leave high school without learning how to manage their money. What are the reasons for this
issue? What can be done to address it?

Lưu ý về bài luận dạng Cause & Solution

Người viết nên đưa ra và phân tích 2 nguyên nhân và 2 giải pháp.
Người viết nên chọn phân tích 2 giải pháp trực tiếp xử lý 2 nguyên nhân để đảm bảo tính mạch lạc tổng thể
của bài luận.

Cấu trúc bài luận dạng Cause & Solution

Mở bài Câu 1: Giới thiệu chủ đề
Câu 2: Đưa ra tóm tắt ý chính hoặc đưa ra thông tin chung về nội dung bài luận
Gợi ý cấu trúc câu: My essay will thoroughly analyze some major causes and propose feasible
solutions to the issue.

Thân bài Đoạn 1: Phân tích các nguyên nhân

Gợi ý các cấu trúc câu có thể sử dụng:

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 1. There are two main reasons for A. First, … (nguyên nhân 1)... Second, … (nguyên nhân
2) ...
2. There are two major contributors to A. First, … (nguyên nhân 1)... Second, … (nguyên
nhân 2) ...
3. There are two major elements/factors that contribute to A. First, … (nguyên nhân 1)...
Second, … (nguyên nhân 2) ...
4. A is attributable to two major elements/factors. First, … (nguyên nhân 1)... Second, …
(nguyên nhân 2) ...
● “A” là vấn đề được đưa ra ở đề bài
Đoạn 2: Phân tích các giải pháp
Gợi ý các cấu trúc câu có thể sử dụng:
1. Two practical measures/solutions/remedies are suggested to alleviate/mitigate the
situation. To start/begin with, … (giải pháp 1) ... Furthermore/additionally, … (giải pháp
2) ...
2. Two measures/solutions/remedies of great practicality/feasibility are suggested to
alleviate/mitigate the situation. To start/begin with, … (giải pháp 1) ...
Furthermore/additionally, … (giải pháp 2) ...
3. Remedial steps should be taken to tackle/solve/address the problem. To start/begin
with, … (giải pháp 1) ... Furthermore/additionally, … (giải pháp 2) ...
4. The government should take immediate actions to tackle/solve/address the
problem. To start/begin with, … (giải pháp 1) ... Furthermore/additionally, … (giải pháp
2) ...

Kết bài Tóm tắt ý tưởng trong bài luận

Gợi ý cấu trúc câu: In conclusion, x and y result in A, and there are a number of ways that
could be done to counteract this problem.

Bài luận hoàn chỉnh

There is a common problem amongst high school graduates these Từ vựng cần lưu ý:
days where students are leaving school without any knowledge or
● Personal money management:
skills in personal money management. This essay will outline a
Quản lý tiền bạc cá nhân
number of reasons for this trend and a number of possible solutions
to help tackle the issue. ● Deficiency in money
management skills: Sự thiếu
The reasons for high school students’ deficiency in money
hụt trong kỹ năng quản lý tiền
management skills are largely concerned with external factors. One of
bạc
the main causes of this problem is that the majority of high school
students live with their parents and are completely financially ● Financially dependent on
dependent on them. Most students do not need to work to earn money somebody: Phụ thuộc tài
while at high school, as their parents pay for all their needs, and chính vào ai đó
therefore do not gain any understanding of the realities of earning and ● Equip somebody with
saving money. Also, the only money that students receive is from their something: Trang bị cho ai đó
parents and this is typically in the form of pocket-money, which is given cái gì
with the intent on it being spent. Therefore, young people only really ● Manage one’s personal
learn how to spend money, and not how to earn, save or manage it finances: quản lý các khoản
wisely. chi tiêu cá nhân
However, there are a number of viable solutions to help students deal ● Enter employment: Tham gia
with this problem. Firstly, basic money management skills could be lực lượng lao động
included as a compulsory subject for students in their high school

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 years, which would help equip them with the knowledge and skills to ● Curb a problem: Giảm nhẹ vấn
manage their own personal finances when they leave school, move đề
out of home and enter employment. The second possible step that ● Maintain a successful and
could be taken to help curb this problem is through education at independent financial
home. Parents need to take responsibility to make sure that their situation: duy trì tình hình tài
children are adequately educated in such matters to ensure their chính độc lập và thành công
children maintain a successful and independent financial situation
after graduating and leaving home.
In conclusion, although money management is a problem for a lot of
school leavers, there are a number of viable solutions to counteract
this problem.

Luyện tập
Đề bài chỗ trống để hoàn thiện bài luận cho chủ đề sau:
More and more people are choosing to eat healthy food and exercise regularly. Why? What can we do to
encourage this?
Bài viết

This essay will outline the reasons behind this trend and possible ways to promote it further.
The main cause of this new trend may stem from the influence of the media and the availability and
accessibility of healthier options.

To help support this development, there are several issues that can be addressed by the government.

In conclusion, there are two reasons explaining why people are becoming more health-conscious and the
governments can further encourage this trend by assisting in the accessibility of healthy food ,and sport and
exercise facilities.

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Bài mẫu

The advancement of technology, medicine, and science has created Từ vựng cần lưu ý:
a major shift in many people's lifestyles these days, and there is now
● (put/ place) greater emphasis
a greater emphasis on disease prevention. People are starting to
on (something): đặt nặng cái gì
adopt healthier ways of living, including a more health-conscious diet
đó hơn, chú trọng cái gì đó hơn
and frequent exercise. This essay will outline the reasons behind this
trend and possible ways to promote it further. ● the availability and accessibility
of (something): sự sẵn có và có
The main cause of this new trend may stem from the influence of the
thể tiếp cận được của
media and the availability and accessibility of healthier options.
Firstly, there are a plethora of channels, websites, vlogs, and social ● disease prevention: ngăn ngừa
media pages about healthy living, and the mainstream media are bệnh
now promoting more and more information regarding healthy diets ● the plethora of: lượng quá lớn
and active lifestyles. Because the media has always been a major
● the mainstream media: truyền
influence on people's behavior, this can have a significant impact on
thông chính thống
them. The second reason lies in the easier access to healthy options.
Thanks to the development of agriculture and infrastructure, stores ● active lifestyle: lối sống năng
and supermarkets are now offering a much wider range of food động
products with high nutritional value. Besides, more sport and ● nutritional value: giá trị dinh
exercise facilities are springing up in urban areas, making it easier
dưỡng
than ever for people to stay physically active.
To help support this development, there are several issues that can ● stay physically active: duy trì
be addressed by the government. Firstly, despite the availability of hoạt động thể chất
healthier food products, some are only accessible at high prices, ● universally
making it difficult for low-income families to choose healthier attainable/accessible (adj): mọi
options. Therefore, the prices of these products need to be người đều có thể tiếp cận, sử
decreased in order to make them more universally attainable. dụng, có được
Secondly, governments should allocate more funding to free sport ● engage in physical activities:
and exercise facilities. This can create more opportunities for people tham gia vào các hoạt động thể
to engage in physical activities through the promotion of different chất
sports. Some remote areas nowadays still experience a severe lack ● a severe lack of (something): sự
of facilities and equipment for people to participate in sport and thiếu trầm trọng của
exercise.
In conclusion, there are two reasons explaining why people are
becoming more health-conscious and the governments can further
encourage this trend by assisting in the accessibility of healthy food,
and sport and exercise facilities.

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Phân tích và lập dàn ý chi tiết cho các chủ đề sau:
Đề bài 1: In many cities an increasing number of people do not know their neighbours and there is a lack of a
sense of community. What are the causes of this problem? How can it be solved?

Đề bài 2: Childhood obesity is a serious problem in many countries. What are the causes of this and how can
the problem be managed