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IELTS Writing Task 2 Ngày 27 - 01 - 2024 - Topic - Uni Life (Education)

The document discusses the advantages and disadvantages of students living away from or with their families while attending university. While living away can present financial and emotional challenges, the benefits of increased independence, personal growth, and exposure to new experiences outweigh these disadvantages.

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IELTS Writing Task 2 Ngày 27 - 01 - 2024 - Topic - Uni Life (Education)

The document discusses the advantages and disadvantages of students living away from or with their families while attending university. While living away can present financial and emotional challenges, the benefits of increased independence, personal growth, and exposure to new experiences outweigh these disadvantages.

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In some countries, students live with their family while studying at a university.

In
other countries, students attend university in another city.

Do you think the advantages of living away from family home while attending
university outweigh the disadvantages?

Phân tích đề bài

Dạng đề: Opinion essays

Từ khóa: students live with their family, university, attend university in another country,
living away from family.

Phân tích yêu cầu: Cần phải đưa ra các lợi ích và bất lợi của việc đi học đại học xa gia
đình và kèm theo đó là quan điểm cá nhân cho rằng mình nghiêng về phía nào hơn.
Cũng cần phải đưa ra lý do cho câu trả lời của mình và kèm theo các ví dụ có liên quan
đến từ kiến tức và trải nghiệm của bản thân.

Có hai cách làm:

● Lợi ích lớn hơn bất lợi: đưa ra các lợi ích và bất lợi của việc sống xa gia đình
khi theo học đại học và cho rằng lợi ích áp đảo hơn.

● Bất lợi lớn hơn lợi ích: đưa ra các lợi ích và bất lợi của việc sống xa gia đình
khi theo học đại học và cho rằng bất lợi áp đảo hơn.

Dàn ý

Mở bài Paraphrased Topic (Giới thiệu chủ đề bài viết)


Thesis statement (Nêu lên quan điểm chính của người viết)
Thân bài 1 Topic Sentence (Câu chủ đề)
Disadvantage 1 (Bất lợi số 1)
Effect 1 (Kết quả của Bất lợi số 1)
Disadvantage 2 (Bất lợi số 2)
Effect 2 (Kết quả của Bất lợi số 2)

Thân bài 2 Topic Sentence (Câu chủ đề)


Advantage 1 (Lợi ích số 1)
Effect 1 (Kết quả của Lợi ích số 1)
Advantage 2 (Lợi ích số 2)
Effect 2 (Kết quả của Lợi ích số 2)
Link (Liên kết 2 ý chính lại với đề bài)
hoặc: Advantage 3 (Lợi ích số 3)
Effect 3 (Kết quả của Lợi ích số 3)

Kết bài Restated thesis (Nhắc lại quan điểm chính của người viết)
Summarized main points in body paragraphs (Tóm tắt lại các ý chính ở trong 2
phần thân bài)
PLAN

DRAFT (5.5)

It is sometimes said that living at home with family while studying is an option for
university students in many countries. Meanwhile, there is a university in another city
where students from other countries study. While the drawbacks of temporarily living
away from home can be severe, I firmly say that the value of that statement is much
more significant due to the valuable skills provided.

There are a couple of disadvantages that students may face when studying in other
places. One of them is university learners may find the new environment unadapted and
strange. If they do their daily routine in that place for the first time, they will be easily
aware that they could not do anything smoothly and flexibly due to the strange feeling in
another area and thus, the time-consuming period is required to get used to living and
studying there.

Notwithstanding, the advantages of temporarily studying in another area may be worth


mentioning. The crucial point among these is that it is a potential chance for students to
open their minds. Living away from home can indeed allow them to learn more about
local cultures, which means that such valuable knowledge could help students attend
local society easily whenever they have to work there. This can be seen that students
from Vietnam find the USA or other countries interesting and for them, those places are
exactly the paradise for studying and working.

To sum up, university students in some countries may indeed tend to live and study at
home with their parents and relatives, while others in several countries might participate
in permanently studying in another city. Despite the knowledgeable drawbacks of
studying away from home, the benefits are far more significant.

SAMPLE VERSION FROM ZIM ( estimated 7.5-8.0 )

In many regions around the world, university students face a pivotal choice: to live with
their families or to embark on their academic journey in a different city. I have a
strong conviction that the advantages of residing from the family home during university
studies significantly eclipse the disadvantages.

Admittedly, embarking on university life away from home does present notable
challenges. Foremost among these is the financial burden, it imposes on students,
who must navigate the costs of accommodations, food and other living expenses
without the direct support of their families. This can lead to increased stress and
potential distraction from academic pursuits. Additionally, the emotional toll of being
separated from loved ones and the familiar comfort of home cannot be understated.
This separation often triggers homesickness and loneliness, which can affect a
student’s mental health and academic performance.

Nevertheless, the benefits of living independently while attending university are more
substantial. This arrangement fosters a sense of autonomy, crucial for personal growth
and development. Students learn to manage their time, finances, and day-to-day
responsibilities, skills that are essential for their future professional and personal lives.
Another merit worth mentioning is that living apart from family exposes students to new
social circles and cultural experiences, enhancing their understanding and
appreciation of the world around them. This independence often leads to a boost in self-
confidence and problem-solving abilities, as students are complied to navigate various
life situations on their own. These experiences collectively contribute to a richer, more
holistic educational experience.

In summary, although living away from home for university presents financial and
emotional challenges, these are far outstripped by the invaluable life skills and
personal growth that it facilitates. The journey towards independence and the
broadening of horizons make this an integral component of university education

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