A facture story

“The Hardworking confectioner”

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Name:Muh.Rozaan Taufik

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Class:X.2

SCHOOL YEAR OF 2022/2023

 The new version story
Once upon a time in a town lived dani a confectioner, his sweets and cakes were famous
throughout the town. Especially the strawberry cake and also the chocolate cake, dani will open
her bakery very early and only sell fresh cakes with the best ingredients, if there are any cakes
left at the end of the day she will give them free to the children and bake fresh cakes the next day
that day, people would come to his little shop. In the afternoon a husband and wife and their son
came to Dani's shop to buy a birthday cake, Dani was happy because the child's mother said that
the cake was very good and her child just wanted a cake from the shop, she gave two extra
cupcakes as a gift and said congratulations birthday to the child.

Right across from his shop is Budi's candy shop, Budi is a lazy person, he will see customers
queuing at dani's shop and feel jealous, he says if dani's cake shop business always grows like
this no one will come to his bakery, so Budi thinks plan to get more customers to come to his
store. She sells her cupcakes by paying only one cupcake to get two, some customers from dani's
shop go to dani's shop but immediately go to dani's shop. There was a customer who came to try
the cupcakes, but the customer also said the cupcakes weren't as good as dani's, even if you
charge a low price your cakes weren't fresh enough and the customer left. Next day a rich
merchant comes to dani shop, he says his son tasted chocolate dani cake on a friend's birthday
and he insists that he wants it for his own birthday party. Dani gave the cake to the rich merchant
to taste, after tasting the cake he said that the cake was very good and immediately ordered 100
cakes and told him to send them to his house at 3 o'clock on Saturday, Dani accepted the order.
Dani works very hard and prepares hundreds of cakes, on the other hand Budi hears about the
huge orders Dani is getting and decides to spoil it. That night when Dani was preparing her
cakes, she was happy because hundreds of cakes had already been finished and was about to
deliver these cakes to the rich merchant's house in the morning. It turned out that Budi was
watching her through the window at the shop. After he saw that Dani had left his cake shop, he
immediately went to Dani's shop carrying a box, inside the shop he immediately opened the box
which contained lots of rats. The next day when Dani came to her cake shop she was surprised to
see the cakes being eaten by rats, she was worried and confused what to do because the cakes
would arrive in 3 hours. Budi comes to dani, he pretends to be worried and ask what happened,
but dani asks him what he is doing here and how come he opened his shop so early, Budi says he
has to do cake delivery today to a rich merchant's shop. Dani is surprised, it turns out that Budi
stole a cake from his shop.

Dani is furious, she won't let Budi off the hook but what can she do. Suddenly she got an idea,
she quickly went to the shop kitchen and three hours later she produced a cake that she had never
made before, she quickly put it in a box and sent it out. When he got there, the rich merchant's
son was amazed to see the cake and he really liked it. Dani became famous not only for her
cupcakes but also for the beauty of her cakes and she started taking more orders than before.

In a helpless situation, Dani doesn't lose his cool and using a little bit of his creativity, he turns it
around to emerge more successful than before.
 The old version story
A long time ago,in town there lived Mandy a confectioner whose candies and cakes were famous
all over town, especially her strawberry and Chocolate cupcakes.Mandy would open her bakery
very early and sell only the freshest cakes Made with the best ingredients.If anu cakes were left
at the end of the day,she would distribute them free of cost to children and make fresh ones the
next day.People would throng to her little confectionary shop.Truly, Mandy your cupcakes are so
good! My son wants only your cakes for his birthday! Thank you so much! And here are two
extra cupcakes for you on your birthday.Happy Birthday! Thank you aunty! Right opposite her
shop was Barney's sweet shop.Barney was lazy.He would see customers Li-Ning up for Mandy's
cakes and feel jealous.If her business continues growing like this,no one Will come to my
bakery! I must do something.So Barney thought of a scheme to get more customers to come to
his shop.Two cupcakes for the price of one! Two cupcakes for the price of one! Some customers
from Mandy's shop went to Barney's but soon they went back to Mandy.Two cupcakes for the
price of one! Barney,somehow the taste of your cupcakes is not as good as Mandy's, even if you
have priced them so low.Your cakes are just not fresh enough! Sorry! One day a nobleman came
to Mandy's shop.Are you the famous confectioner Mandy? Yes! How may I help you? My son
had your Chocolate cupcakes at a friend's birthday,and he insists that he wants those for his own
birthday party.That would be an honour Sir! Why don't you sample a cake and decide whether
you would like them? Aah! That would be great.Ummmmm... these are delicious! I would
certainly like them for the party! I am so glad! How many would you like and when is the
birthday? The party is on Saturday,three days from now? Could you send about hundred cakes to
my home? I Will have the cakes Ready and sent to you by 3 o'clock on Saturday.Mandy worked
really hard and prepared hundred cupcakes.On the other hand, Barney Heard about the massive
order Mandy had got and decided to spoil it.If the nobleman at the king's court like her cakes,
nobody Will ever come to my bakery.I must spoil her order.So that night when Mandy had got
all the cakes Ready Finally,all the hundred cakes are done.I shall reach them to the nobleman's
home first thing in the morning.You Will send the cakes only if they still exist in the
morning,The next morning when Mandy came to her shop,she was shocked to see her cakes
caten my mice! Goodness! How did this happen? What am I going to do now? The cakes are due
in three hours!

Mandy was really worried.Just then Barney got there.What happened Mandy? Why are you so
worried? You! You never open your bakery this early! What are you doing here? I have a
delivery of cupcakes today at the nobleman's house! You stole the cakes from my shop!
Everything is justified in business! Now Mandy was really angry.She would not ley Barney get
away with his but what could she do? She suddenly got an idea she quickly went into the kitchen
of her shop and three hours later,this is what she came up with! Look, mother! A cake that looks
like a castle! A castle cake! I want one! Wow! What a beautiful looking cake! Did you make it
on your own? Yes! So Mandy delivered a cake like no one had seen before to the nobleman's
home.What a beautiful cake! Thank you! I know you wanted cupcakes but I thought of making
something special for you birthday! I love it! And now Mandy was famous not only for her
cupcakes but also for the beauty of her cakes and she started receiving even more orders than
before.In a helpless situation Mandy did not lose her calm and using a bit of creativity.she
changed it to emerge even more succesful than before!
 A facture story
“Jealous Neighbors”

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Name:Ria Kurnia Baharuddin

NIS:18061

Class:X.2

SCHOOL YEAR OF 2022/2023