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Follower is a poem that focuses on the relationship between father
and son, shifting perspective from past to present which is giving
the reader an insight into a son's reaction to the passing of time and his father grown old
The poem seasoned by Elaine Gaston is partly about the sense of
role reversal she felt when all of a sudden she had to look after her father as he recuperated after an operation. It mentions he once tied her laces when she was young, now she has to tie her father's laces. The title of the follower really makes us want to dive into the poem to discover who is following who, and who is the leader. Maybe it could be a mysterious poem or maybe it could be a poem about devotion, romantic or religious. It makes our imaginations are go crazy before for we start reading.
Once we start to read the poem, we discover the title is working
on a few different levels. Most of the poem is describing how the son literally does follow his dad around the field, but we also see how the son figuratively wants to follow in his father's footsteps to become a skilled farmer just like him. By the end of the poem things turn around completely to the father following the son. The idea of following is persistent in the poem, but it doesn't always follow the same direction.
The title seasoned can be took in many different ways. Before
you start reading, you could imagine it as a poem about food and seasoned meaning seasons such as Salt, herbs, pepper, spices etc. Or it could mean having a lot of experience doing things therefore knowing how to do it well, an example of this is a seasoned traveller. Heaney’s poem is a six stanza piece, made up of quatrains, or four-line stanzas. Each line is roughly the same length and contains both slanting and perfect end word rhymes. In this piece, Heaney uses both perfect and slanting end rhymes. Slanting meaning only half a rhyme, and perfect, being exact rhymes for an example in the second stanza of the poem in which the first and third lines rhyme with “wing” and “breaking.” An example of a slanting rhyme can also be found in this stanza with the second and fourth lines, “sock” and “pluck” partially rhyme due to the organisation of their consonance.
Seasoned is a also a six stanza poem, made up of one four-line
stanza, a five line, two six line stanzas, a septet and one two line stanza. Each line differs in size unlike the follower. In seasoned there is the repetition of the word cycled and people. In the same way in the follower the word sometimes is repeated in the third stanza. Both poems use enjambment, By allowing a thought to overflow across lines, enjambment creates fluidity and brings a prose-like quality to poetry. Enjambment builds a more complex narrative within the poems by fleshing out a thought instead of confining it to one line.
Personally I like the follower better as I like the twist in the last two lines and the subtle humour used for parts.