Continuous Writing Feedback Form

Level Content-Descriptors Attained

6  Ideas are fully relevant to the given
topic
 Very interesting and thoroughly
developed writing
5  Ideas are fully relevant to the given
topic
 Interesting and thoroughly developed
writing
 Ideas are generally relevant to the given
4 topic
 Generally interesting and developed
writing
 Ideas are minimally developed and some
3 ideas can be incoherent
 Ideas are somewhat relevant to the given
topic
 Ideas are mostly undeveloped and some
2 ideas can be incoherent
 Picture(s) is/are not used to link to the
theme
 Ideas are mostly irrelevant and
1 inadequate
 Vague and confusing ideas
 Does not answer the theme of the
composition even
though the picture(s) is/are used

though the picture(s) is/are used

Language and Organisation

Level Content-Descriptors Attained

6  Almost error-free in grammar,
expression, spelling and
punctuation
 Rich vocabulary that are used
appropriately
 Very good organisation of ideas
5  A few errors in grammar, expression,
spelling and punctuation
 Adequate vocabulary that are used
appropriately most of the time
 Good organisation of ideas
 Some errors in grammar, expression,
4 spelling and punctuation
which do not affect the flow of the story
  Adequate vocabulary but some words
may be inappropriate in
some parts of the writing
 Fairly good organisation of ideas
 Many errors in grammar, spelling and
3 punctuation which somehow
affect the flow of the story
 Functional vocabulary and some words
may be inappropriate in
some parts of the writing
 Satisfactory organisation of ideas
 Numerous errors in grammar, spelling
2 and punctuation that which
affect the flow of the story
 Basic vocabulary and inappropriately
used
 Poor organisation of ideas
 Full of errors in grammar, spelling and
1 punctuation which greatly
affect the flow of the story
 Very basic vocabulary
 Very poor organisation of ideas

level 6 • Ideas are fully relevant to the given topic

• Very interesting and thoroughly developed writing

level 5 • Ideas are fully relevant to the given topic

• Interesting and thoroughly developed writing

level 4 • Ideas are generally relevant to the given topic

• Generally interesting and developed writing

level 3 • Ideas are minimally developed and some ideas can be incoherent

• Ideas are somewhat relevant to the given topic

level 2 • Ideas are mostly undeveloped and some ideas can be incoherent

• Picture(s) is/are not used to link to the theme

level 1 • Ideas are mostly irrelevant and inadequate

• Vague and confusing ideas

• Does not answer the theme of the composition even

Dear Principal,

The incident echoed through my mind. It played like a broken recorder and I
would chuckle slightly whenever I thought about it. It was indeed a silly incident which I
experienced. It started off like this...
I was at home, all alone in my study room. The moon hung in the sky like a
huge lamp. As I flipped through the old, yellowish pages of my
handed-down science textbook, I could not help but wonder what my parents were buying from the
nearby supermarket at this time of the day. Owing to my fear of the dark, I decided to stay home
with the company of my cat. At that point of time, she was nowhere in sight but I was not too
bothered by that. It was my bright night lamp that kept me going amidst the fact that I was sitting
all by myself. Suddenly, a loud growling sound filled the air. Startled, I jumped out of my chair
before my fight or flight response was activated. No matter the case, I would always pick the latter.

Then again, the growling sounded! This time, I figured out that it was none other than my stomach
which produced the petrifying sound, I was famished! Before I knew it, I found myself at my
kitchen spreading strawberry jam on a slice of bread. Being situated on the ground floor of my
block, book wind entering my house was a rare occurance. Thus, a shiver ran down my spine when
a gush of cold wind rattled me. No sooner had I finished making a perfect sandwich than I spotted a
sillhoutte on my refrigerator. It looked menacing and it let out a deafening growl, just like my
stomach had. Turning pale as a chalk, I darted out of the kitchen with jam filled hands and dived
into my cushion. I was mortified! Was it really a ghost? To take my mind off of what just happened,
I decided to relax by watching some television. In the midst of my channel surfing, a specific movie
caught my attention. I saw the words "Friday the 13th " in red and a man with claws for hands. He
was chasing after a boy my age and I noticed that he was in the same state as me. Pale face, beady
eyes and dry lips, were could be distinguished on his face. I watched with horror as the boy reached
a dead end. Without a second to spare, I changed the channel. After a while, I turned off the
television completely...

I stared into the black screen and was lost in a world of thoughts. "What was that creature on the
fridge?" I pondered. Yet, I was not able to get single clue. Out of the blue, I heard footsteps! They
were soft and nimble but were enough to drive me out of the house with my lamp! I was not going
to spend my night with an unsettling creature! I needed to escape. Nevertheless, throughout the
episode, I did not pay attention to the pitter-patter of water and loud, "Boom! Boom! sounds. When
I stepped out of the house, I was astonished to see the ground covered in flooded water and
raindrops falling from the sky. I retreated back into the house in an instant. This time, I dashed
towards my bedroom and hid under the covers. Scared out of my wits, I began trembling. The
whole blanket also shivered along. Momentarily, I regretted not tagging along with my parents. At
least I would have been safe from danger!

Time flew. No sound emerged at all! I perked up slightly, peeking through the small hole in front of
me. The sillhoutte was now running towards me! "Aah! Help!" I screamed at the top of my lungs. I
was done for. I kept praying that I would not be harmed by the ferocious beast. Terror and fear
gripped me. Upon seeing the pointed ears and a long tail of the dark figure, realisation struck me
like a twenty-pound sledge hammer that my situation was going to end well. It leaped onto the bed.
My blanket was filled with scratches and holes in less than a few seconds. "Scratch! You almost
gave me a heart attack!" I jokingly said to my feline friend. However, it disappeared under the
blanket.. "What's wrong, girl?" I asked Scratch was shivering out of her fur! As I looked ahead, the
reason for her fright intimidated me. A huge shadow. Gnarly teeth. Sharp claws. These were some
of the features of the thing. Without warning, it charged towards us.
"if Scratch is here, then what is that?" I asked myself in horror. I had never been that terrified in my
life. "This is not good! " I screamed. Hiding under the blanket was the last resort. My heart
palpitated faster and my breathing got heavier. The enormous shadow kept running! I did not know
what to say. The end of the world was now became a reality! with tightly closed eyes, I braced
myself. The "thing" all of a sudden, jumped.
Ding dong! Ding dong!" the doorbell rang. Because of my state at that point in time, I screamed
like never before upon hearing that Since I was not expecting that. I leaped out of bed and headed to
the door and flung it open. There stood my parents, dumbfounded at my act. Even before they could
ask what had happened, I dragged them to the bedroom and showed them what I was expecting to
be the huge shadow. Instead, I was met with Scratch grabbing hold of a mouse. The bright night
lamp stood on a table along with rotten cake.. It dawned on me what had happened.

Without knowing, I carried the night lamp around with me throughout the
house. Earlier on, the figure on the fridge turned out to be Scratch, who was meowing in hunger.
Scratch must have been running towards me later when I was in bed as it was frightened by another
sillhoutte or rather, the mouse's shadow. Its shadow appeared humongous as it stood in the way of
my lamp. In the end, it really was going after piece of old cake which I had left on table
in my bedroom a few days ago.

At the end of the day, it was a rat and a cat that caused me to become
scared. I vowed that I should not easily get frightened by minor things.
silly incident which I experienced will always be mused in my mind for the years to come.