Writing task 2

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Lesson 23: Problems - Solutions

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 Problems - Solutions

- Problem solution essays are a type of essay question sometimes given to you in the test. In
this type of essay you need to discuss the problems with regards to a particular topic and then
suggest possible solutions to these problems. One of the first things you want to make sure
that you are able to do is identify one of these questions when it arises. Here are some
examples of this type of question.
- Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two
serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these
problems.
- Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large
number of children play computer games. What are the negative impacts of
playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?
- In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will
this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be
taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.

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Structure

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 Introduction

The use of illegal drugs, such as heroin and cocaine are becoming more and more common
in many countries.
What are some of the problems and what are some possible solutions?

Introduction - 2 - sentence introduction

Sentence 1: Rephrase the question

- Topic is becoming increasingly serious in many parts of the world.

Drug abuse, such as consuming heroin or cocaine, is becoming increasingly serious in many parts
of the world.

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 Introduction

Introduction

Sentence 2: Thesis statement:

- Safe and Easy:

- This essay will discuss the possible problems caused by this action, and suggest certain
feasible solutions to mitigate the problem.

- More advanced
- Although this action has highlighted certain valid concerns for society, its detrimental
effects can also be curbed successfully due to the collective measures from the
government and individuals.

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 Causes - Solutions

This essay should have two double-idea body paragraphs

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 Body 1

Body 1 - Effects

- Topic sentence
- The consumption of narcotics causes many pressing issues. (EASY)
- This predicament poses certain serious threats to (society and individuals). (EASY)
- This menace inflicts serious damage on … (EASY)
- Perhaps, the two most pressing issues are …(HARD)

Problems 1 Problem 2

- Health problems - Dangerous to society

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 Structure

Body 1: 2 body đều có chung cấu trúc như nhau

- Point 1 + Supporting sentences

The medical effects are obvious. More specifically, addicts abuse their bodies and neglect their
health, and so eventually require expensive treatment or hospitalisation. In several cases, such as
Marilyn Monroe, a drug overdose even leads to her death.

- Point 2 + Supporting sentences

The second repercussion is a rise in crime rate. This can be explained by the fact that people who
take drugs become paranoid and irrational due to long term exposure to intoxication from these
harmful chemicals. As a consequence, they often cause harm and danger to themselves and their
surroundings.

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 Body 1

Body 1

Narcotic abuse engenders certain valid concerns in countries and communities (Topic Sentence).
The medical effects are obvious. More specifically, addicts abuse their bodies and neglect their
health, and so eventually require expensive treatment or hospitalisation. In several cases, such as
Marilyn Monroe, a drug overdose even leads to her death (Point 1 + Supporting Sentence). The
second repercussion is a rise in crime rate. This can be explained by the fact that people who take
drugs become paranoid and irrational due to long term exposure to intoxication from these harmful
chemicals. As a consequence, they often cause harm and danger to themselves and their
surroundings (Point 2 + Supporting Sentence).

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 Body 1

Body 2 - Solutions

- Topic sentence
- Fortunately, collective actions from the government and … can effectively counter the
problem.
- However, the menace of … can be fought
- Nonetheless, there are several measures to address the problem

Solution 1 Solution 2

- Education - Policy

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 Structure

Body 2: 2 body đều có chung cấu trúc như nhau

- Point 1 + Supporting sentences

The first measure is education. The government should run certain public promotion campaigns to
raise people’s awareness of the consequential impacts of drug use on their well-being. This will
likely bring a reduction in the number of addicts.

- Point 2 + Supporting sentences

The second measure is the implementation of stricter policies. Governments should strengthen
existing laws to punish drug traffickers and dealers more severely and require all addicts to undergo
rigorous relapses.

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 Body 2

Body 2

However, this menace of drug addiction can be effectively countered by actions from society and
the government (Topic Sentence). The first measure is education. The government should run
certain public promotion campaigns to raise people’s awareness of the consequential impacts of
drug use on their well-being. This will likely bring a reduction in the number of addicts (Point 1 +
Supporting Sentence). The second measure is the implementation of stricter policies. Governments
should strengthen existing laws to punish drug traffickers and dealers more severely and require all
addicts to undergo rigorous relapses (Point 2 + Supporting Sentence).

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 Structure

Conclusion - Never write 1-sentence paragraph

- Summarise main problems and solutions

In conclusion, narcotic addiction is a pressing issue for society to solve because it causes
deleterious effects on people’s health and entails increased crime rate. Nonetheless, the most
effective approaches to mitigate these problems are to educate individuals about its damaging
effects and also for the authorities to tighten regulations on the consumption and distribution of
drugs.

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 Full Essay

The predicament regarding consumers discarding a high level of food which was purchased from stores and food
vendors has constituted one of many issues prevalent in today’s society. This essay will discuss possible causes and
suggest solutions to mitigate the problems.

There are two major reasons for this negative development. One possible catalyst is oversized meals. In fact,
restaurateurs often ask their kitchen staff to cook big portions or promote the sales of food combos so most diners
are unable to finish their dish, particularly children and women. Another cause is bulk purchase deals from grocery
stores. Many consumers are encouraged to buy more of the same items because of a discounted price. For
example, Costco often sells five packs of chips at a lower price and the unfinished food has to be thrown away if the
food reaches the expiry date.

Nonetheless, these problems can be effectively countered effectively by actions from lawmakers. The first solution
begins with education. The government needs to run public service campaigns to educate people about the need of
avoiding thoughtless shopping and ordering. A public awareness campaign is organised in many states of America to
list down any necessary groceries on paper note or mobile applications to avoid making unnecessary purchases.
Another solution involves the operation of law. Food retailers and food vendors should be legally required to cease
the promotion of bulk offers. As a result, these actions can help them to avoid impulsive shopping and by extension
food waste.

In conclusion, the disposal of a large level of foodstuffs may be caused by the sales of large meal portions in
restaurants and quantity discount. Where possible, consumer education about the risk of food waste and a ban on
bulk pricing can effectively tackle the problem. (294 words)

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 Exercise

Write an essay

The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created
problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the Internet
and what solutions can you suggest?

Problems Solutions

- Cyber criminals - Regulations

- Online shaming - Education

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 Sample

The advent of the Internet has revolutionized the acquisition and exchange of information between users. This essay
discusses the issues caused by exchanging information on the internet and suggests several measures to mitigate
the problems.

Perhaps, the two most concerning issues pertaining to the use of online platforms are cybercrime and cyber-
harassment. The first major problem is related to the rise in cyber criminals. Hackers often target users when they
provide their private information on different platforms. For example, when cyber criminals breached the security
system of Facebook in 2019, victims of the leak were spammed with irrelevant advertisements as their emails and
phone numbers were compromised. Additionally, the utilisation of the internet is often associated with cyber shaming.
This is because a high level of harmful and negative content can be shared anonymously to humiliate individuals
without any trace of a digital footprint, leading to targeted people being victimized with anxiety, fear and depression.

These problems can be tackled by law enforcement on a global and national scale concurrently. The first solution can
begin with collective effort from lawmakers around the world. Online crimes may occur on a global scale; thus,
governments should cooperate to track down and apprehend cybercriminals who operate across multiple borders.
This may reduce the number of identity thefts and deter any potential criminals from committing the same illegal
activities. Another possible measure is education. The government should run certain public promotion campaigns to
raise people’s awareness of the consequential impacts of online bullying on their well-being. This will likely bring a
reduction in the number of shaming cases.

In conclusion, the Internet has caused problems relating to information privacy and online shaming. Nonetheless, this
can be countered by more rigorous global and public education. (290 words)

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 Template

The use of illegal drugs, such as heroin and cocaine are becoming more and more common
in many countries.

What are some of the problems and what are some possible solutions?

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 Template

Cách học: Giữ nguyên phần chữ in nghiêng.

Drug abuse is becoming increasingly serious in many parts of the world. Although substance
addiction threatens many societies, its effects can also be curbed successfully. This essay looks at
some of the problems caused by drug use in society, and suggests certain feasible measures to
address the problems.

Narcotic abuse engenders certain valid concerns in countries and communities. The medical effects
are obvious. More specifically, addicts abuse their bodies and neglect their health, and so eventually
require expensive treatment or hospitalisation. In several cases, such as Marilyn Monroe, a drug
overdose even leads to her death. The second repercussion is a rise in crime rate. This can be
explained by the fact that people who take drugs become paranoid and irrational due to long term
exposure to intoxication from these harmful chemicals. As a consequence, they often cause harm
and danger to themselves and their surroundings.

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 Template

However, this menace of drug addiction can be effectively countered by actions from society and
the government. The first measure is education. The government should run certain public
promotion campaigns to raise people’s awareness of the consequential impacts of drug use on
their well-being. This will likely bring a reduction in the number of addicts. The second measure is
the implementation of stricter policies. Governments should strengthen existing laws to punish drug
traffickers and dealers more severely and require all addicts to undergo rigorous relapses.

In conclusion, narcotic addiction is a pressing issue for society to solve because it causes
deleterious effects on people’s health and entails increased crime rate. Nonetheless, the most
effective approaches to mitigate these problems are to educate individuals about its damaging
effects and also for the authorities to tighten regulations on the consumption and distribution of
drugs. (288 words)

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