THE VSL BIBLE

28 PROVEN WAYS TO GET RICH CREATING

VIDEO SALES LETTERS THAT CONVERT
By Peter Kell
 TABLE OF CONTENTS

VSL Principles 4
Wheel Of Emotions 7
Universal Objections 8
Powerful Metaphors 10
Angles Blueprint 11
SALES STORY BLUEPRINTS #1- #7 12
RESEARCH DEEP DIVE 19
KINDERGARTEN SIMPLE PITCH 20
$50k Every 2 Weeks Is the Dream. 21
How To Avoid A FTC/FDA Lawsuit 23
9 Multi-Million Dollar Brand Friendly VSL Formulas 27
1. Tvidler Ear Wax Remover - 27.6M Views 28
2. UMZU ZuPoo Script - 50M Views 32
3. 4Patriots Survival Food - 16.8M Views 37
4. Stephen Ridley Piano Method - 21M Views 45
5. Organifi Superfoods - 175M Views 48
6. Healthy to 120 Free Book - 13.9M Views 52
7. Snow Teeth Whitening - 5.7M Views 58
8. PROVEN SKINCARE - 5M Views 61
9. ST JUDE’S HOSPITAL - 58M Views 66
THE ULTIMATE AOV CLOSE 69
THE RESURGE CLOSE 70
The Mindvalley Subscription CLOSE 78
Upsell Video Script Formula 87
19 BRAND FRIENDLY LONG FORM VSLs. $1B+ IN SALES 94
1. Mindvalley’s Silva Ultramind 95
2. Dr Gundry Total Restore
Supplement for Healthy Gut Lining 98
3. Dr Marty Nature’s Blend 101
4. Nucific - BioX4 104
5. Dr. Gundry - Prebio Thrive 107
6. Dr. Gundry Dark Spot Correcting Product 110
7. Beverly Hills MD - Dermal Repair Complex 113
8. vShred - Quiz Funnel EndoMorph Females 116
9. vShred - Testosterone Booster 118
10. ActivatedYou 121
11. Superbrain 124
12. Randy Jackson Unity Health Labs 127
13. Dr Gundry’s Energy Renew 130
14. Charity Water - 31M Views 132
15. Truth About Liver - 20m Views 136
16. Meticore VSL 139
17. Quietum Plus 142
18. Pro Dentin VSL 145
19. Lean Belly Juice 148
 VSL Principles

#1 - Don’t Persist - Dominate - Set Your Intentions - Double Your High Score

When you’re committed. And not going to stop working towards your goals no
matter what…
Then It’s easy to get caught up in that life of trudging through. Persisting on. Fuck
persisting. Dont just inch your way forward. Dominatte that shit. You live for this shit.
You live for making these kind of campaigns. Wake the fuck. Sooner than later you
have to be sick and tired of not being thebest in the world. Not having your super car.
Not having the success you’ve already dreamed off. Fuck Persisting. Dominate that
shit.

#1 - Your Whole World Revolves Around Getting an ROI

It’s not about making videos. It’s about doubling the most amount of money your
business has ever made in a month. VSLs are just the vehicle we use to do that.

#1 - Know the EXACT CPA That Would DOUBLE YOUR HIGH SCORE AND GIVE
YOU THE MOST EPIC LIFE EVER!!!

What is the cost per acquisition you’re aiming for? If your product costs $49 and
you’re getting $25 sales at scale. Then you’re printing pretty hard.

#1 - Complete the Entire Research Process & Have Big Ideas Approved By
Authority

#1 - “What I noticed about your writing is it’s all Laser Focused on 1 Idea” - Jon
Benson

This

#1 - Simple Unique Problem Mechanism + Simple Unique Solution = Problem

Solved. 2 Sentences
Problem Problem Solution Solution
Your Aging Fast Mechanism Mechanism Cream w/
Toxic Progerin Progeline reduces Progeline Wrinkles
breaks down skin progerin by 22% go away
Back Pain
Feet Arn’t Acupuncture spots Foot insoles hit
Supported on your Feet these spots to
make Back pain
Your Losing Money Ads arn’t goes away
converting your Modeling the
Better way to viewers biggest campaigns Start making
advertise in the world. Make millions of dollars
Not following a world class VSLs per month
winning formulas

#1 - DONT ASSUME YOU KNOW WHAT THE UNIQUE MECHANISM IS!!!!! YOU HAVE
BEEN WRONG 1000X ABOUT THIS. YOU MUST INTERVIEW AUTHOR!!!

This is one of the most common mistakes I have made in my career. Assuming I
know “how it works”. Writing a VSL. Having it flop. Then figuring out that I never
really understood how the root cause of my prospects problem and how my product
solves that.

Go straight to the source the author. Ask them.

- What was the core problem you needed to solve?

- What did you discover was the real reason you couldn’t solve this problem?
- What was the unique mechanism that allowed you to over come this?
- How is this mechanism delivered through the product?

#1 - Know Exactly Who You’re Talking Too. Who has

#1 - Retard Proof. Dumb down the Language for Joe the 51 Year Old Plumber. 5
FK Score (how would a dumb person say this sentence?)
Science discovered there’s a toxic protein that causes your skin to age.
Doctor are like, “Yeah thats true. And it makes me sad”
Here’s how you know if you actually have it.
We found an answer. It’s called Progeline.
We tested it. It reduced progerin. Healed their skin. And made them happy.
We put it in a cream. It works great.

#1 - Follow the Flow of A Winning Campaign

Wheel Of Emotions
 Universal Objections
“Objections are so devastating to sales that we don’t handle them. We devastate their entire
existence.” ~ Jason Fladdlen

BIG —> “Constant reassurance that everything’s OK”/“This Will NEVER HAPPEN TO ME!”

○ “Dont worry these things never stopped her before. I’ve been an actress for a
decade. I’ve always been more or less invincible”
○ ”Well I strongly disagreed, but I didn’t want to argue with my mother. So I tried to
dismiss this whole falling thing, assuming it was just an “off night” for her
○ Happens after the first little incident. She must reject help because she held this
false belief. This leads into the second PAINFUL state
○ This is all actually pretty common. “Doctors see this all the time”

● BIG —> You’ve tried to solve this Problem before. You failed every time. Why is this
different?
○ She tried popular patches and creams advertised on the internet. Yes despite
promising the moon and making outrageous claims...they just drained our bank
account and made us feel stupid (she’s failed just like you)
○ Discovers MMP-13. New unique mechanism

● BIG —> I can trust My doctor to handle this For me

○ Complete waste of time. Gave her more drugs. Every 90 minutes. Appetite was
gone. Chronic dizziness everyday. Start developing rashes. Lidoderm cream
caused even stronger burning sensations. Side effects felt worse than the
neuropathic pain itself.
○ Studies show neuropathic drugs and creams can lead to increased burning, rapid
heartbeat, and mental confusion.
○ Estimated death toll is half a million innocent American lives by 2027
○ Studies show that neuropathic drugs like Gabapentin Dont actually do anything
long term. It numbs for a couple hours. And gives you a euphoric “high” with each
dose. Making these drugs way more addictive than hard drugs sold on streets.
○ Maybe Doctors are “careless” and doing the “bare-minimum” to keep their jobs?
● I Don’t Believe You
○ Hero Says “Almost sounded too good to be true”
○ Even though I was skeptical of what he mentioned...I couldn’t help but feel a
slight glimmer of hope...”
○ Here’s the research studies to back up all my statements

1. “How do I know this is really for me?”

2. “What unique benefits do you bring to the table?”

3. “Why should I believe your claims and promises?”

4. “Yeah, but will it work for ME?”

5. “How is this any different than everything else I’ve tried?”

6. “What makes you think I’ll actually get results this time?”

7. “Why haven’t I heard of this already?”

8. “How come my [expert] never told me this?”

9. “Is this really that good of a deal?”

10. “What if I’m not ready to act today?”

11. +1. “I don’t have the money.”

 Powerful Metaphors
● Covering up the fact
● Stealing away and and all pleasures you once enjoyed
● Liberating You
● Race against the clock
● Tearing through scientific research
● laundry list of scary side effects
● Tried-and-true nerve pain remedy
● Stick with me
● Health started withering away
● I put my Foot Down
● Cocktail sized medication regime
● I still cringe in horror when I remember...
● Rushed to ER
● Seeing my mother white from fear as she imagined her dark future...
● Have zero idea about what to do tore me to pieces on the inside...
● NOT the time to start beating myself up...
● Click was still sticking on my mother’s life...
● Hard-Headed nature paid off...
● Having a critical eye...
● Breaking the shackles on her life...
● You can only imagine the weight lifted from us...
● Another lightbulb went off in my head
Angles Blueprint
SALES STORY BLUEPRINTS #1- #7
 RESEARCH DEEP DIVE
Complete this doc to gather all the pieces of your VSL puzzle before you rewrite a
winning campaign

Age Demographic:
- Who are we targeting?

Physical Problem: Emotional Problem

What are all the different ways you can What pain is this causing them
describe the problems someone is having? emotionally? How do they feel about
Which problem is the most famous? them? What’s even worse than that?

Root Cause of Problem Root Cause of Solution

What’s the root cause of the problem? How do you solve this?
How do you know? How did this happen to
me?

Physical Benefit Emotional Benefit

What are the amazing benefits? What are the amazing feelings this will
create inside of them?

Tools & Techniques Authority Figure & Other Ideas

What are all the tools, techniques, Who is the authority figure that’s
ingredients that cause this to work? qualified to deliver this message?

What’s the Story? How did this discovery happen?

 KINDERGARTEN SIMPLE PITCH
Complete to doc to make sure your pitch is so simple a kindergartener could
understand it

Problem
Emotional
Problem
Root Problem

Root Solution

Delivery
Techniques /
Features/Ingredi
ents
Physical Wins
Emotional Wins
 $50k Every 2 Weeks Is the Dream.

Double Your High Score Is Your Focus

Back when I was struggling in my parents basement. I thought if I could make

$10,000 per month then I’d be rich. I could live the most amazing life imaginable.

I became obsessed, however after 4 years of failined to achieve that goal. I realized it
wasn’t working. I wasn’t making $5,000/month. Or even $2,000/month. I was making
nothing.

So instead of focusing on getting to a number. I changed my plan to just “Doubling

My High Score”. What’s the most amount of money you’ve ever made in a day. How
do you double that number? Because if you’ve never made a sale, then your first sale
is huge.

So I created this checklist that you’re about to get below. The biggest mistake you
can make is comparing your personal goals to other people’s goals. Other people’s
goals have nothing to do with your goals.

All that matters is your high score. The best that you’ve ever done. And the next todo
list you must pass. If you plan on becoming a 9-figure entrepreneur you must check
off each one of these.

Your first $100,000/Day. Your first $150,000/Month. This was a game that I created to
become an Iconic Internet Baller Level 5 before I discovered the idea of being a
savage $40,000,000 entrerenur. And there’s still more levels it’s endless.

This is what’s going to make you feel happy. As Tony Robbins says, progress equals
happiness. Most people forget to turn around to see how far they’ve come. This list
will help you see how far you’ve come and everything you’ve checked off. You’ll get
that positive emotional feeling thats going to get you to keep pushing forward.

Print it out. Make the next milestone on your todo list. And begin visualizing yourself
already there. I just had one of my coaching students send me a video crossing out
$150,000/DAY BACK TO BACK, $200,000/DAY, $1,000,000/WEEK all in the same video
clip.
So when you cross one out. Tag me @PeterKell on Instagram. I love to see this.

Meteoric Growth Milestones

Print this out and cross off your milestones as you get there.
Life really becomes epic at Internet Baller Level 1 any beyond.
BEGINNER TIER LEGENDARY INTERNET BALLER LEVEL 4
FIRST SALE! $300,000/MONTH
$100/DAY $150,000/WEEK
$200/DAY $40,000/DAY
$1000/WEEK $200,000/WEEK
$500/DAY $400,000/MONTH
$1000/DAY $50,000/DAY
$2000/WEEK
ICONIC INTERNET BALLER LEVEL 5
AMATUER TIER $200,000/WEEK
$2,000/DAY $300,000/WEEK
$5,000/WEEK $400,000/WEEK
$10,000/MONTH $75,000/DAY
$3,000/DAY $100,000/DAY
$7,000/WEEK $1,000,000/MONTH

ROCKSTAR TIER $40,000,000 SAVAGE ENTREPRENEUR

$5,000/DAY $150,000/DAY BACK TO BACK
$10,000/WEEK $200,000/DAY
$50,000/MONTH $1,000,000/WEEK
$10,000/DAY $2,000,000/MONTH
$3,000,000/MONTH
INTERNET BALLER LEVEL 1 $4,000,000/MONTH
$30,000/WEEK $40,000,000/YEAR
$15,000/DAY
$50,000/WEEK THE $100,000,000 MASTER
$100,000/MONTH $300,000/DAY
$500,000/DAY
INTERNET BALLER LEVEL 2 $600,000/DAY
$20,000/DAY $2,000,000/WEEK
$75,000/WEEK $3,000,00/WEEK
$150,000/MO $6,000,000/MONTH
$8,000,000/MONTH
INERNET BALLER LEVEL 3 $10,000,000/MONTH
$30,000/DAY $100,000,000/YEAR
 $100,000/WEEK
$250,000/MONTH

How To Avoid A FTC/FDA Lawsuit

Even though I'm not a lawyer. I have learned a few things about what you are
allowed to do and not allowed to do while advertising.

Back In the 1990s, the head of the FDA wanted to outlaw Nutritional Supplements.
So all the big marketers at the time reached out to their lists and said “Call your
senator, call your congressman, fight this. This is bullshit. So they did.

So there was a comprimise made. The FDA’s position was, “well drugs have to get
FDA approval and supplements should get FDA approval as well”

The marketer’s position was, “Well supplements are foods.”. But theyre not really
foods. They’re somethinng in between.

What congress came up with was the Dietary Health Supplement Education Act of
1994. The basic gist of the law was. You’re allowed to sell supplements. They are not
drugs. But you are not allowed to make health claims.

Now they kinda make health claims, but they dont make disease claims. You never
mention arthritis, or anything cancer. You dont say Alzheimers.

But you are allowed to make Structure Function Claims. You’re allowed to talk
about A structure of the body. And you’re allowed to talk about a function of the
body.

When you’re selling an Arthritis pill, you dont talk about arthritis but you talk about
joints. Joints are a structure of the body. You talk about a function of the body like
better movement. Mobility.

You can talk about inflammation, even though it’s a grey area.
Another thing you can say is Joint Pain. It’s also a grey area. But if you didn’t say it,
you’d never sell anything so they say it. And nobodys ever gotten in trouble for saying
joint pain.

Thats nutritional supplements. And if you make a disease claim in your supplement
marketing, the government says, “once you make a disease claim, you are now a
drug. Therefore you need to get FDA approval. Which costs around $100,000,000 to
get FDA approval.”

Now lets take Skincare. You’re not allowed to say skincare reverses aging. And
you’re not allowed to say it gets rid of wrinkles.

What you’re allowed to say is It gets rid of the appearance of wrinkles.

Any area where there’s money to be made, the government regulates the crap out of
it.

Now in ecommerce. Lets take a foot insole for example. Same rules apply. If you start
saying Arthritis or anything like that. You are now a medical device.

So you have to get FDA approval as a medical device. So they way to stay out of that
trouble is to talk about structure function claims.

On top of that, anytime you compare your product to a drug you are now a drug.
You need FDA approval.

For exmaple, conspiracy copy around “‘the greedy pharmacutal companies”. If you
start going far down that path, and you start invoking the name of the government
agencies themselves in any of your copy. That pissed them off. They don’t like it.

It’s basically like an implied endorsement, and that pisses them off more than
anything. Be careful with that.

But you’ve probably seen copy. Where they’re slamming the pharmaceutical
companies. They’re going off on them. They’re slamming everybody.

If you see copy like that. It means one of two things. Number 1, they’re going to be in
trouble soon.

Or number 2. They’re not selling a supplement. They’re selling an information

product.

If I’m selling an ebook, video, documentary, course, or event where people to come to
get information. If I am selling information, I can say whatever the fuck I want.
Beacuse I am protected by freedom of speech and freedom of the press.

You can talk about it as long as you’re selling an information product.

Here’s a ridiculous example. If you are selling a book the only thing you’re not
allowed to do is false advertising. You cant make claims that arn’t true.

No fake stories. No fake claims. No fake authority figures. No fake testimonials.

Now if the book happens to make some claim. Even if the claim is on the outlandish
side. And you are accurately reflecting what’s in the book. Then you’re cool.

So if you look at old Gene Scwartz ads where he says “Rub the Fat out of Your body
by rubbing your stomach”. He was reflecting what was in the book.

Freedom of the press. You may not agree with it. But we have freedom of the press.

Guys like Kevin Trudeau, who was sentenced to 10 years in jail deserved it. He
scammed people, he didn’t give people refunds. He put people on forced continunity
and they called for refund and he wouldn’t refund their money. He did all kinds of
shit. He didn’t get in trouble for the claims we’re talking about. He got in trouble for
fucking people over.

Now, if you really started going crazy in your advertising. It’s up to you to defend
yourself. And even if you’re legally correct it’s going to cost you $500,000 to defend
yourself. But the FTC has unlimited funds. They can fight you forever. And are you
willing to do that?

Most people say, “Okay my bad. And they stop doing what they’re doing.”

Some people fight it. There’s a guy named Ben Suarez. He’s been around along time.
He was Gary Halbert’s most successful student author of 7 Steps to Freedom. He
would write all kinds of shit that would piss off the feds in his copy. And then he
would fight them. And didn’t give a fuck.

One time the attorney general went after him, so he ran advertorials all over the
place. About how the guy’s a corrupt asshole, and got him voted out of office.

And when the FDA made him destroy this Bread he was selling because of health
claims about the bread. He ran a negative ads about the FDA all over the place for
years and years and years. The guy would just not take shit from anybody. And he got
away with it for about 40 years. And in 2014 they finally nailed him for something and
went to prison. At like 70 years old.
Word is from Ben’s neighbors there’d be black cars in front of his house all the time.
Staking him out. Government agencts. 40 years ago they tried to nail him and they
finally got him.

So thats the story with that stuff. I am not an attorney. But thats how I understand it.

Now really what you need is seek council from an a good FDA & FTC attorney you can
run your copy by. I use Damon Wright at GSMR.

What Damon & his team will do is tell you the different levels of risk on a 1-10 scale.
1 being you go to jail. And 10 being you’re low risk and they’d never go after you.

Damon and his team sees whats going on. They watch cases. They’re on all the
newsletters and update on what the latest is.

Now lets get into VSLs.

9 Multi-Million Dollar Brand
Friendly VSL Formulas
 1. Tvidler Ear Wax Remover - 27.6M Views
LINK TO SCRIPT – LINK TO VIDEO

Authority Figure Product / Price VSL Length

Actor in Labcoat & Dr’s Ear Wax Remover $19 3min 30 sec
Office

Proof of Massive Success:

Pete’s Insights:
At 27 million views. This VSL has likely done 8 figures in revenue from an
ecommerce product. Professionally shot. Brilliantly made. Powerful spokesperson
who never claims to be a doctor. Just guy with labcoat sitting in an office. If you
watch the video you can see how clearly they show the root cause of the problem.
Which is earwax stuck in your ear. And how the current solutions dont solve it. They
also crushed it with the product discovery story, the increase rapid rise of demand,
and offing a 50% discount to get people to buy today.

Kindergarten Simple Pitch

Problem Root Problem Root Solution Benefits:

Hearing Loss, Ear Wax is stuck in Tvidler catches all You get Clean Ears
Tinnitus, your ear. built up earwax as & Good Hearing
Headaches, High you twist it like a
Blood Pressure screw.
VSL Formula:
Hey! Stop using these for ear cleaning. It only makes your ear wax buildup worse.
Leading to serious health problems like hearing loss and chronic headaches.
Luckily a medical resident found a solution. After working with thousands of
patients he discovered build up ear wax was causing all their problems. So he
invented a new device that would screw the ear wax right out. It completely went
viral and millions purchased it. He wants to help the whole world so he’s offering a
50% discount you can buy it right now!

How To Rewrite It:

Hey stop doing this big mistake. It’s making your problems worse and even causes
all these other problems. The good news is an expert has found a solution.

He was working with all these patients who had a similar problem as you, but no
one could figure out the root cause of the problem. Until they met 1 guy who had it
really bad. And they figured out the root cause of his problem!

He created a product that solves the problem. And now lots of people have
purchased it. He made it his mission to help the world so he’s offering a 50%
discount so can buy it right now!

Tvidler Ear Wax Removal Script:

STOP DOING THIS TO SOLVE YOUR PROBLEM

Hey stop using these for ear cleaning. They're even banned to use in the United
Kingdom

HOW IT MAKES THE ROOT PROBLEM WORSE

Cotton swabs are not designed for ear wax removal. They only push everything
deeper. if you still use cotton swabs you may see some earwax on them after use.

but the thing is all you did is just push all the earwax deeper into your ear. And what
you see is actually only a very small part of it.

WHICH LEADS TO THESE PROBLEMS

this could lead to serious health issues such as hearing loss, tinnitus, chronic
headaches, and high blood pressure just to name a few.

HOW THE SOLUTION WAS DISCOVERED

The good news is that a medical residency student has created a solution. He
noticed thousands of people coming to the hospital complaining of similar
symptoms.

Doctors were struggling to find the cause of the problem. And in most cases simply
recommended painkillers. Until the arrival of someone almost deaf.

He was complaining of balance issues tinnitus, and random headaches. What they
found after detailed research shocked everyone. Accumulated earwax was the cause
of almost all his health problems.

A hospital resident reached out to all patients complaining of similar symptoms and
recommended them to visit an ear nose and throat doctor. Also known as an ENT.

After one month his inbox was overflowing with thank you letters for the solution to
their problem. But they were all asking the same question how do I clean my ears
properly?

The resident searched online for safe and affordable ear cleaners but only found
dangerous Chinese stuff. Which could cause more harm than good. So he took
matters into his own hands and developed a brilliant alternative.

INTRODUCE THE PRODUCT

He named it Tvidler. A new earwax cleaning tool that catches all of the built up
earwax and pulls it out of your ears as you twist it. There is no risk of injury or any side
effects.
RAPID RISE IN DEMAND

After he saw how well it worked he started selling the product online. At first he
relied exclusively on Word of Mouth. What he didn't expect was his product winning
a healthcare Innovations award.

Since then he has sold over 5 million Fiddler earwax cleaners all over the world.

CLOSE
To celebrate his award the inventor is launching a 50 discount for the next 24hours.
His mission is to spread the importance of clean ears and good hearing. So he set a
goal to reduce the number of people suffering from hearing problems by half. Till
2030.

Tell your friends, tell your family, tell your co-workers, and even your mailman what
you see in this video.

Want my advice it's 2022 so ditch the old-fashioned cotton swabs and get a tiddler by
clicking the link below for a 50 discount. This is a limited time opportunity while
supplies last and the price is set to increase at any moment.

Click the link below to visit the official website and claim your discount today.
 2. UMZU ZuPoo Script - 50M Views
LINK TO SCRIPT – LINK TO VIDEO

Authority Figure Product - Price VSL Length

Young Neuroscientist ZuPOO Colon Clenase &
Gut Support. $34.44 3min 25sec

Proof of Massive Success:

Pete’s Insights: So this VSL is a complete mystery. While ever other monster
campgin selling supplements is 40minutes or longer, Umzu managed to put
together a mysteriously successful campiagn thats only 3min 25 second long.
Unheard of in the supplement world and widely impressive.

There’s really no story telling. And is basically all a lecture around the problem.
Which is also something I avoid but these guys proving me wrong. Brilliant work.

One of the ways I believe they do this is 2 things. 1 the price for the supplement is
only $34.44. Which is super low compared to most supplement funnels literally
twice the price. And second. The amount of BRILLAINT animation inside the video.
 this is one clip form their VSL.
Helping me visualize all the toxic waste thats backing up in your body. Leading to
all these other scary health problems. Super awesome and super epic VSL to
recreate.

Check out the kindergarten simple pitch. Notice how simple and obvious they’ve
made it. They dont really mention the ingredients or how he discovered this was a
good idea to try. But damn they really figured out how to make it work.

Kindergarten Simple Pitch

Problem Root Problem Root Solution Benefits:

excess fatigue,
weight gain, five to 20 pounds all natural You’ll feel amazing
digestive issues, of toxic poop is ingredients that when it’s gone
like ibs, leaky gut trapped in your will get things
syndrome, body thats moving and flush
constipation and comprimising your out that extra
diarrhea & more. digestive system waste

VSL Formula:
Did you know there’s toxic poop is rotting in your gut? No wonder why colon
disease is on the rise.

All this waste builds up your body become a walking vessel of fecal toxiity. Causing
fatigue, weight gain, digestive issues ibs, leaky gut and more.

It might be embarrassing but it impacts your entire body. If you’re not pooping
after each meal then youre likely suffering from this toxic buildup.

The quality of our food has gone down hill. Which is whats causing all thees health
concerns. Doctors around the world agree it’s a problem.
 So if you’re experiencing any of this. Try our ZuPoo product for 14 days. There’s
hilarious reviews all over our website. And you’ll feel amazing when it’s gone. Click
now to give it a try.

How To Rewrite It:

Did you know this is the terrifying root cause of your problems? No wonder why
more and more people are getting screwed.

This root cause of the problem messes with everything. And causes all these
additional problems.

It might be embarrassing but it’s a serious concern. And if you’re not doing this 1
thing it’s a sign you likely have this issue.

Here’s a conspiracy that makes you feel like it’s not your fault. And all the experts
agree thats how it started.

So if you have any of these problems, Try our product today. There’s amazing
reviews on our website. And you’ll feel amazing when it’s fixed. Click now to give it
a try.

UMZU zuPOO Supplement Script

TERRIFYING ROOT CAUSE OF THE PROBLEM

Did you know that the average adult has five to 20 pounds of toxic poop in their body
at any given moment? Seems crazy right? All that poop just sitting there rotting
away inside their intestines and colon.

EVEN WORSE PROBLEMS IT CAUSES

Is it any wonder that colon disease is on the rise with all this waste just sitting inside
your body.

Most of this waste contains chemicals that your body rejected. But due to certain
issues like constipation you couldn't flush it all out effectively.

CALL TO ACTION #1
So if you're feeling sluggish, bloated around the waist, or even just plain backed up…
Then give ZuPoo a try for 14 days. It will clean you out guaranteed.

Click through to read the hilarious reviews about how consistently effective ZuPoo
truly is. It contains the perfect dosages of all natural ingredients that will get things
moving and flush out that extra waste you're carrying around. You'll feel amazing
when it's gone

ROOT CAUSE OF THE PROBLEM

As this toxic waste builds up your body becomes a walking vessel of fecal toxicity.
Once this happens you begin to experience excess fatigue, weight gain, digestive
issues, like ibs, leaky gut syndrome, constipation and diarrhea.

Skin conditions like eczema, psoriasis, rosacea, and acne, brain fog, focus, and
attention issues, mood swings, anxiety, and depression and that's just the beginning.

It might be a bit embarrassing to talk about your poop but it has a huge impact on
your health. And it's something that you have to understand if you want to look and
feel your best. It might come as a shock but your digestive system impacts the
health of your entire body. and understanding the health of your digestive system
begins with understanding your poop.

SYMPTOMS OF THIS PROBLEM

if you're not producing well-formed stools after each meal then you're most likely
suffering from a toxic buildup inside your digestive system that's secretly causing all
of your health concerns.

New research suggests that most people have up to eight undigested meals in their
gut at any given moment or possibly even more. This undigested food is secretly
putting a huge strain on your digestive system, immune system, and overall health
and well-being.

IT’S NOT YOUR FAULT CONSPIRACY

As the quality of modern food is deteriorated with the invention of unnatural, hard to
digest, heavily processed foods, loaded with artificial flavors, preservatives,
sweeteners, and gmos, we're unknowingly putting a massive strain on our digestive
system, that's leading up to an epidemic of illnesses.
As we consume more and more unnatural manufactured highly processed junk food
we begin overloading our bodies with toxins that destroy the fragile ecosystems of
bacteria in the gut.

THE IS THE ROOT CAUSE OF YOUR HEALH CONCERNS

The bottom line is this when you have a toxic buildup of waste and bad bacteria
in your gut, your digestive system becomes compromised. Leading to dozens of
serious health concerns if you suffer from digestive issues constipation weight gain
gas bloating, indigestion, skin issues, fatigue, or a slew of other health issues, your
bad gut may be slowly and secretly killing you.

At this very moment you may have up to 20 pounds of poop trapped inside your
digestive system, aiming to destroy your precious health.

EXPERTS AROUND THE WORLD AGREE THIS IS THE PROBLEM

That's why doctors now believe supporting intestinal health and restoring the
integrity of the digestive system is one of the most important goals of medicine in
the next 10 years.

And for good reason in fact doctors from the mayo clinic harvard medical school yale
and mit all say death begins in the colon.
CALL TO ACTION #2

If you're feeling sluggish bloated around the waist or even just plain backed up and
you're ready to flush out that extra five to twenty pounds of toxic poop. Then give
ZuPoo poo a try for 14 days. it will clean you out guaranteed.

Click through to read the hilarious reviews about how consistently effective Zupoo
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 3. 4Patriots Survival Food - 16.8M Views
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Authority Figure Product VSL Length

Mom spokesperson Survival Food 11min 54 sec

Proof of Massive Success:

Pete’s Insights: So this script is written by some of the top copywriters in the
world. You can tell with the hard hitting power of scarcity & social proof riddled
through the entire VSL.

It’s all about being sold out, coming back in stock, and you getting it before it’s
gone again. On top of that they really hit the nail on the head with the bonuses
and how they delivered the pitch. Totally unique.

I also love how it goes straight into story after the initial hook. Talking about going
from Sold out. I see this working alot. Whenever we tell how the creation of the
product all started.

Also note all of the bonuses that they used are incredible. Going that extramile to
stack more and more value ontop of the offer. And also instead of this being super
expensive. They make it a monthly rebill until they pay for it all. Great way to make
it affordable to everybody.

Use this VSL if you ever sell out of a product or have a very successful launch and
want to bring a product back.

Kindergarten Simple Pitch

Problem Root Problem Root Solution Benefits:

A crisis like Covid Not being
can cause people prepared with food Bulk ordering 3 Peace of mind
to be scrambling & months of survival knowing you and
hoarding for super food that your family are
suppliest leading lasts 25 years. ready for anything
little for those who
didn’t get there
first

VSL Formula:
This is what 3 months of food looks like! It’s out special kit! We’ve been completely
sold out since covid hit but now we’re back with more bonuses than ever.

In 2020 people started feelling they needed to be prepared for a crisis when food
was running out. So we sold out. And instead of rushing to get it back in stock, we
made it better than ever. More food. Tastier. Lasts longer. And comes in this special
box.

If you want one, you better hurry because it’s very popular. And people who arn’t
prepared get screwed by the people to get there first and take all the supplies.

And to celebrate. We’ve got a bunch of free bonuses you’re going to love. Here’s 20
testimonials of people raving about our food. Here’s even more bonuses, a
payment plan, and a money back guarantee to make this a no brainer.

Only available when you order now through this video. No pressure if you dont
want to buy. But if you do. You better do it right now because this offer will go
away. Dont Wait! Buy Now!
How To Rewrite It:
This is what this amazing benefit looks like! It’s what our product does! We’ve been
completely sold out since this big event happened, but now we’re back with a
better deal than ever.

Recently people started feeling this big problem because of this big event that
happened. So we sold out. And instead of rushing to get it back in stock, we made
it better than ever. Increasing the parts you love the most while avoiding all the
parts that no one wants.

If you want one you better hurry because it’s very popular. And people who dont
get it will have to suffer witih all thees problems. To celebrate our sale we’ve added
a bunch of bonuses you’re going to love. Here’s 20 testimonials to show how
amazing this is and a money back guarantee so it’s a no brainer.

This is only available when you order through this video. No pressure if you dont
want to buy. But if you do. You better do it right now because this offer will go
away. Don’t Wait buy now!
 4Partiots - 3 Months Survival Food Script

THIS IS A HUGE BENEFIT. ITS OUR PRODUCT!

This is a full three months of food without needing any refrigeration or special
storage. And you're looking at our long awaited three month survival food Kit.

SOLD OUT! NOW BACK BETTER THAN EVER!

We've been completely out of our three month kit since early 2020 just as the world
turned upside down. So I wanted to make you this special video before it's gone
again. And today, as part of this special inventory celebration event, we're not only
bringing you a new and improved heartier and even more delicious three month
survival food stockpile, we're gonna load you up with an arm full of free bonuses. You
are going to absolutely flip for.

Including two free 72 hour food kits. Our Victory Garden Seed collection, our popular
Sun Kettle solar cooker, survival coffee, and cocoa and more. That's over $478 in free
bonus gifts with your order. Incredible.

HERE’S THE CATCH, THIS CRISIS CAUSED IT TO SELL OUT

But here's the catch. In 2020, just as people started waking up to being prepared
saying, “Hey, I better get enough food to ride out a crisis that lasts weeks or months.”
We sold every last three month kit left before we really even knew what was about to
happen in this country. All our available three month kits were just gone poof.

SO WE REBUILT IT BETTER THAN EVER

Now, when it comes to a kit like this, we pride ourselves on getting it just right. So we
could have rushed to bring our three month survival food kits back sooner, but with
demand sky high and a supply chain and chaos, it would mean limited variety or
boring meals you could survive on, which you might get tired of fast.

That's not gonna cut it. So instead, we decided to take our time and start from
scratch to make our three month kit bigger and better with more delicious food,
more variety, and brand new recipes too. Then we got to work. We put on our aprons
in the test kitchen to try out new recipes. Expanded the variety of foods so you get
even more options for breakfast, lunch, and dinner. And at the same time, we cut
back on what some other companies use to pump up servings and calories that
skimp on flavor. Like plain white rice or oatmeal.
Because we want you to have something your whole family will love, delicious taste,
great variety, and priceless peace of mind.
HERE’S WHAT YOUR KIT WILL HAVE

It took us a while to get it just right. I'm not gonna lie, but now we're ready to help as
many Americans as we can. So you are prepared when a crisis darkens your door. It's
what we do. Our new and improved three month survival food kit now has 688
servings for a tot al of over 135,000 calories. That's 80 more servings and 27,000 more
calories than before. You'll find delicious and hardy breakfast filling lunches,
satisfying dinners, and even desserts, drinks and snacks too.

Plus, we're bringing you eight brand new meals, including some you'd swear your
Italian great grandma made. Even if you don't actually have an Italian great
grandma. Your three month kit comes packaged in discreet, stackable, and rugged
totes so you can store your food away easily or pick it up and go in a flash.

HURRY! IT’S POPULAR & WILL SELL OUT

Now, if you're here to claim a survival food supply for yourself or your family designed
to last 25 years, your timing is perfect my friend, but you better hurry.
This brand new three month kit is going to be very popular and I don't want you to
miss out. Our mission is to champion freedom and self-reliance and with all that's
happening in this country than around the world, survival food is more important
than ever.

NIGHTMARE THAT HAPPENS IF YOU DONT

You've seen it for yourself. Shelves picked bare and people who haven't prepared
scrambling and hoarding, leaving precious little for those who didn't get there first.
FEMA and the Red Cross both recommend Every American has non-perishable food
on hand.

So it's no wonder our three month kit has always been a best seller. After all, this isn't
ordinary food. This is mouthwatering nutritious, good for 25 years, super survival food
that protects you from going hungry in a crisis.

TO CELEBRATE, WEVE ADDED SPECIAL BONUSES WHEN YOU ORDER TODAY

And to celebrate finally getting these best selling kits back in stock to make it a
no-brainer for you to get one while you can. With more variety, more calories, more
servings and more delicious options than ever before…

we're gonna load you up with free gifts. When you claim yours today, just look at all
you get. With this special. Not only do you get our brand new three month survival
food kit, you'll also get $478 and 65 cents worth of free bonuses to be precise.

First, because they're so popular and a true foundation for your preparedness plan,
we're going to include not one but two free 72 hour survival food kits with your order
today. That's 32 free meals, grab and go portability and a way to get through any
short-term crisis without even breaking into your stash. People love these kits. It's
one of the top rated items on our website,

MEGA SWEEP OF 20 TESTIMONAILS

“Uh, the four week kit. It's really given me peace ofMind, so appreciate, uh, four
Patriots gives us a a lot of peace of mind. Four week Survival kit. Just to gimme a
little bit more peace of mind. Purchased a four week supply of for Patriot food. It's
really put my mind at ease. It's very satisfying knowing that you've got some meals in
storage
And we feel confident now that should anything happen, we're able To feed our
family. What really premed me to get survival food was covid 19.
I had covid 19. I was so proud that I had survival food on hand. Most Of the other
companies delays our months, uh, right now because of Covid, but we got, uh,
several supplies from uh, four Patriots in less than a week. We tried other brands and
the food is not good. The food from the this company is absolutely excellent.
The fireside stew is delicious. The rice is fluffy, just pancakes for a good breakfast with
oatmeal, but with
The four week kit, all you've gotta do is boil water very quick, very easy to make, and
they taste pretty damn good if I do say so myself.
Why did I get the four week survival food kit? It has a 25 year shelf life. It's high
quality miler packaging. The four, four week kits, I got those on the plan that they
have so I can pay over several months Allowing us to do a payment plan so we don't
have to save up to be able to get One because of the covid threat when we can order
in these products, it is a great Feeling in this time with Covid,

I got my four week kit and I'm very happy that I did. I ordered my first four week
supply of food from four Patriots and I feel a lot better. You cannot afford to not start
getting four Patriot foods. The folks at four Patriots are very, very easy to deal with.
We are so happy to be associated with four Patriots.
Thank you and I love you four Patriots.
AND YOU GET MORE BONUSES. VALUE STACKING

You'll get those and you'll also get our five star customer favorite Sun Kettle solar
cooker. It's an ingenious way to heat water, to boiling for cooking, cleaning, making
water safe for drinking and more, all using the free power of the sun. You'll love your
free sun kettle in an emergency or for everyday adventures like camping, hiking, or
fishing trips plus.

And these work great in your sun kettle. You'll get a supply of both our Freedom Joe
Survival Coffee and BCA Boy Cocoa, also free. I can't imagine going without coffee
even in a crisis. And now you won't have to.

Not only that, but you'll get our super popular Victory Garden seed collection. So
you'll have heat and eat food at the ready and a variety of fresh vegetables to
supplement your stockpile. The first things that go missing when a crisis hits and
people are scrambling, this kit has literally thousands of seeds.

Just the thing to help you create your own sustaining victory garden for fresh
produce, as close as your backyard. And your bonus package includes an exclusive
library of self-reliance manuals, crisis protection tips, and other information you won't
find anywhere else, including recipes and ways to use your three month kit you
might not have thought of but are sure to love.

And we're going to put a $25 savings certificate in your pocket so the next time
you're ready to get food or another survival essential, you'll be getting it at a healthy
discount. Pretty nice. We'll even throw in free shipping to really make this a
no-brainer. Isn't that great?

WE EVEN HAVE A PAYMENT PLAN

And here's the best part, the peace of mind that comes from having a survival food
stockpile shouldn't only be for well off Americans. So we'll give you a discount today,
a discount for the future, and you can get an easy interest free payment plan.

So you only pay $199 now and the rest and monthly installments as you go. No credit
check, no nonsense. Just the best tasting made in America. Survival food protection
without the sticker shock. You get your food right away, but only pay part to start.
Nope, that's a great deal.

And it's good to know that even if you need to stretch out the payment, you can and
still have peace of mind and a healthy stockpile of food on its way to you.

MONEY BACK GUARANTEE

Now look, this food tastes homemade. It's built to last the long haul to snap to
prepare, and everyone from former Navy Seals to middle American grandmas are
singing its praises and you're protected by our famous double guarantee today. So
there's absolutely no risk to you. First, you get a no questions asked 365 day money
back guarantee. That way there's absolutely no risk to you and you can keep the free
gifts just for giving your survival food a try.

Second, if you open your four Patriots meals anytime in the next 25 years and find
your food is spoiled or gone bad or replace it, no questions asked. So there's never
any worry about anything going to waste.

We've got you covered. That's how confident we are that this food will stay delicious
and nutritious for up to 25 years.

NO PRESSURE CLOSE. SOCIAL PROOF & SCARCITY.

Now don't worry, there's no pressure to claim your kit. In fact, if you don't want it, you
can step aside with no hard feelings.

There are plenty of other people who've been waiting for our three month kids to
finally come back. Folks are dead set on preparing right now, and they see the need
to act fast before these kids sell out.

Just keep in mind that once this inventory celebration event is over, we may never be
able to offer this special deal again. All the details are below.
Please don't wait. I don't want you to miss out on the peace of mind that true
self-reliance can deliver order now.
 4. Stephen Ridley Piano Method - 21M
Views
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Authority Figure Product - Price VSL Length

Piano Expert Play Piano in 21 Days
Piano Masterclass $1,500 2:14

Proof of Massive Success:

Pete’s Insights: Love the high production again here. This is a very processional
looking shoot. I love the demonstration he goes into showing Level 1, Level 3, Level
6, Level 10 of a piano player. Turning it into a game.

How can you gamify your product? Showing what day 1 looks like compared to
 month 1, year 1 and year 3?

Kindergarten Simple Pitch

Problem Root Problem Root Solution Benefits:

Leaning piano Using piano apps The Ridley method Master the piano
takes a really long or youtube makes it much quicker than any
time tutorials take 10 faster & easier to other method out
years go from Level 1 to there
level 10

VSL Formula: You can read it below.

How To Rewrite It: People think getting benefit takes a long time. But thats false.
Here’s how long it really takes with this new method.

(Show the gamification from noobie to master from hour 1, week 1 month 6, month
9, year 1, year 2)

Of course if you do it wrong. It could take you 10 - 15 years to master it. But we
developed a method that makes it easier, faster and more fun to go from noobie to
mastery.

My name is Expert. I’ve taught this to alot of people. Their results are amazing.
(Insert testimonials)

If you want to discover this new method, I’ve developed a free masterclass. Click
below to get an email with your access link. Getting this benefit doesn’t have to
take along time. It can be fast & fun. So click to join now.

Stephen Ridley - Piano Script

AGAINST WHAT EVERYONE BELIEVES

people think learning piano takes a really long time. but that's false.
here's how long it really takes with this new method.

[Music] [Music] [Music] [Music]

DOING IT THIS WAY MAKES IT HARD

pretty good right of course if you take traditional music lessons use piano apps or
YouTube tutorials it could take you 10 to 15 years to get to level 10.

DOING IT THIS WAY MAKES IT FAST & FUN

but I developed a method that makes it much easier faster and more fun to go from
level one to mastering the piano quicker than any other methods out there

Hi I’m an Expert & Taught This to Lots of People

my name is Stephen Ridley I taught this method to more than 80 000 people. In my
different classes and workshops and their results are incredible.

TESTIMONIALS
“everything that I thought before how you should learn piano seems to be wrong I
didn't expect it can be that fast and it's so easy my fingers just remember how to do
stuff I don't even know how that's happening.

CALL TO ACTION

So if you want to discover this new method of learning piano I've developed a free
online masterclass to participate. It’s super easy. Click the button below enter your
first name and email address on the next page. And then you'll receive an email with
the access link to the free masterclass.

Learning piano doesn't have to take a long time it doesn't have to be painful. It can
be really fast and really fun when you know how to go from one level to get to level 10
as fast as humanly possible. Click the button below and join me for this free online
piano masterclass and be fast because this might be the last time that you ever see
this ad register now and I'll see you in there.
 5.Organifi Superfoods - 175M Views
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Authority Figure Product - Price VSL Length

Superfood Junkie Organifi Superfood Green 5:17
Drew Canole Shake - $69.95

Proof of Massive Success:

Pete’s Insights: At 175M views uploaded 5 years ago. This was a absolutely monster
campaign that helped put Organifi on the Map. Here’s very cool in this video. Not
serious. Having fun. Being interesting. Doing it his own way. You can tell he’s not
reading off a script. Just flowing.

Kindergarten Simple Pitch

Problem Root Problem Root Solution Benefits:
Your Unhealthy Missing Take These 11 Live a Longer
Micronutrients Superfoods to be healthier happier
Healthy life

VSL Formula:

How To Rewrite It:

Are these people getting the benefits? Or are those people getting the benefits?

What they forgot to think about is the root cause of the problem. Lets take alook at
all the pieces of the root cause of the solution.

Hi I’m obsessed with everything related to the root cause of the problem. Today I’m
going to show you an easy way to get everything you need to solve this.

Here’s what they are. On the surface it looks like alot. And hard to do. But we’ve
actually made it super easy with this product.

Just click the link below to get yours right now . It’s fast, easy, and awesome.
So if you’re looking for these benefits, try it for yourself today.

Organifi Superfoods Script

QUESTIONING IDENTITIES

Are vegans healthy? Are vegetarians health? French fries and beer are vegan? So you
tell me?

But seriously the easy part for most of my clients who go vegan or vegetarian is
cutting out the meat.
 THE MISSING INGREDIENT
What they forgot to include is the micronutrients. Let's take a look at the 11
superfoods. You should take every day if you're a vegan or a vegetarian or just
anybody wanting to increase their health,

HI I’M OBSESSED WITH THIS

I'm drew Canole and I am Obsessed with superfoods. I'm the weird dude that goes
into the Whole Foods and smells like patchouli. Today I want to show you my 11
favorites that you can naturally get in less than 30 seconds a day and you can take
them while traveling and they'll help you stay healthy and committed to maybe that
weight loss or that fat burning regimen.

Are you ready? I'm talking fast today. So try to keep up.

KEY ROOT SOLUTION INGREDIENTS

first is chlorella now chlorella is one of my favorite things I like to call. Chlorella Bella,
Chlorella Bella and it's absolutely incredible. Astronauts take this stuff in space. It's
loaded with chlorophyll carbohydrates vitamins minerals... gives you loads of energy.

I just have five of these things, my energy is through the roof Next up is Moringa leaf.
Separate studies have shown that Moringa can lower blood sugar up to 29% Which is
great news for the diabetic community. I know many people that are diabetic. You
probably do, too Maybe you're even one of them.

Third is spirulina. You got it right here. Spirulina has strong neural protective benefits
and it may actually help with Alzheimer's disease has four times the amount of
antioxidants as blueberries on the auric field. Right?

Fourth is mint. Now mint is antimicrobial antiviral anti-tumor anti allergenic and
antioxidant properties. But it is not anti-tasty. Now that's not a word. I just made that
up, but it is delicious.

Fifth is matcha matcha matcha green tea. right here. Matcha has l-theanine in it
which can help reduce stress, promote relaxation, and encourage mental clarity. I
love a lot of mental clarity.

Six is wheatgrass. Ok? Did you know consuming just one ounce of wheatgrass is
nutritionally equivalent to eating two pounds of greens?! Who doesn't want more
greens in their life? Green on the inside. Clean on the inside. I mean you should have
known that.

Seventh is ashwagandha. Ashwagandha sounds like a yogi right? It's hard to spell it's
much easier to understand. Ashwagandha may help lower anxiety. Keeping those
stress levels in check. and it can also decrease depression.

Eighth is turmeric turmeric this little golden spice is Incredible. mmm. I love tumeric
studies show that its golden spice is superior to prozac in treating depression, which
is pretty cool.

Ninth is lemon. Lemon is one of the only citrus fruit on the planet that actually helps
a phase 2 liver detoxification.

10th are beets. Much like the workout music, these beets boost stamina. Studies
show that athletes who drink beet root before working out could last 16% longer.
Next up monk fruit. Who needs sugar to spike up that insulin? Do something that
doesn't have that in it. This exotic fruit 170 times sweeter than sugar but has zero the
calories.

Somebody write that in the comments below 0 the calories. Right here a monkfruit
has medicinal benefits. Did you get all that? Good!

INTRODUCING THE PRODUCT

Because I've got some great news for you You can actually get all these superfoods in
One stop right here when you click the link below this video you get organifi green
juice for less than 30 seconds a day. Less than $2 a day It's less expensive than any
juice you can get with all the powerful medicinal benefits that we talked about of
these 11 age- defining, skin-refining components that are right here.

Check it out it mixes so easy. I don't even really need to use the spoon to mix it. I

Mean legitimately. Do you see how well this is mixing my friend? It doesn't go to the
bottom. It mixes with the water perfectly and it makes it an easy drink and it tastes
absolutely incredible. Mmm,

CALL TO ACTION

so if you're looking to live a healthier longer Life. If you're looking for more energy If
you're looking for more vitality more mental focus then add in these a eleven
superfoods in your diet. I have this organifi green juice less than 30 seconds a day. No
shopping. No chopping really easy to clean up. It's all right here in this glass, which is
pretty wild if you think about it.

Mmm, try it for yourself today Click the link below this video get it right now and
move forward with transforming your life.

I'm Drew Canole cheers to you for a new decision. A new day something that's gonna
be so powerful. You're gonna look back a year from now.

You're gonna say where was I without my organifi green juice? Click below this video.
I'm Drew Canole. Remember we're in this together and I'll see you soon

6. Healthy to 120 Free Book - 13.9M

Views
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Authority Figure Product - Price VSL Length

Matt Cook. Popular 6min

Longevity Expert

Proof of Massive Success:

Pete’s Insights: World class way to do a free book funnel. In fact one of the most
successful book campaigns I’ve ever seen. If you’re selling a book, this is a rocksolid
way to do it. Might even reverse engineer this one for the VSL Bible.

I love how they show they’re using 3 people who are living amazing lives in their
later years by using this 1 super food. And then 3 famous people who died early
because they avoided that food. Brilliant.

Kindergarten Simple Pitch

Problem Root Problem Root Solution Benefits:

Dying Young Avoiding 1 Food Eating 1 Food Live to 120

VSL Formula:

How To Rewrite It:

I’ve spent years researching people who achieved this amazing feat. I discovered 1
thing these people are doing. 1 Thing I believe is responsible for all their amazing
benefits.

Here’s 3 of those amazing people who do this one thing. And then 3 people with a
huge problem who preached avoiding this one thing.
Who do you want to copy? People with the benefits? Or people with problems?

Hi I’m an Expert. And all my research has led me to creating a book about
achieving this amazing goal. You can buy it on amazon for alot. Or you can get it
free today here. Just pay for shipping and handling.

Here’s what else is inside the book.I found this trick that gets that benefit. (Page
38) And this trick that gets that other benefit too. (Page 123)

Just go ahead and click on the link to claim your copy. We didn’t print enough so
hurry and buy it right now.

Healthy to 120 Script

DISCOVERED A SIMPLE SECRET

I spent 25 years researching men living to 110 or 120. I discovered one food that these
men who are 110 or 120 years old are eating. One food i believe is responsible for their
incredible long life.

3 AMAZING PEOPLE WHO DO THIS

Stanislaw kowalski still runs races he's 110 years old. Orville rogers who is 99 runs
marathons. Magamet is 121 years old still grows and eats his own food. These men all
eat this one food even though the so-called experts will tell you it's bad for you.

3 PEOPLE WHO DISAGREED WHO DIED EARLY

Remember Euell Gibbons the outdoors fanatic made famous in the cereal
commercials? Cubans avoided this one food he died at age 64.

Nathan Pritikin one of the most famous health food experts. Ever he avoided this one
food he died at age 69. and Dr Robert Adkins author of the all-time best-selling diet
book avoided this one food. Sadly dr atkins died at a relatively young 72.

WHO DO YOU WANT TO COPY?

So who would you rather copy? Men like stanislaw kowalski running races 110 years
old? Or orevo rodgers who is 99 running marathons? Magamed at 121 years old still
growing and eating his own food? Or these men who died young despite being
supposed experts.

iIf you want to live to 120 like i believe i'm doing you need to choose. Listen to these
experts or do what these very healthy men are doing at 110 or 120 years old.

INTRODUCE THE EXPERT & CREATION OF BOOK

My name is Matt Cook i have over 350 000 subscribers to my longevity newsletter. I'm
an amazon author and was originally interviewed by ABC News.

I had so many men ask me for my notes my research on how to live to age 120 that i
managed to put all my notes and discoveries into a book i'm calling healthy to 120.

And I got a small quantity printed up so that i'm giving them away for free today.

My book shows you how you might live a lot longer by doing the opposite of
everything you've been told about what's supposedly healthy what's supposedly
good for you. So you can buy healthy 120 for $29.95 at amazon or you can click the
link and get it free today.

CALL TO ACTION #1
Just go ahead click on the link and claim your copy. It's a physical book i'm mailing
to your home but sadly i only was able to afford to print a small quantity of books so
when they're gone i don't know if i will be able to print more.

So please get it right now. If you really would like to try to live life until age 120 with a
happy and healthy, physical, and spiritual life.

Click on the link get my book for free today. All i'm asking is for guys to help me out
with the shipping and handling if they can.

HERE’S WHAT YOU WILL LEARN

And if you want to learn more here's what's in my book. In my book i'm showing men
how i discovered the key to supporting a healthy prostate. That's on page 101.

I found what works for me to naturally maintain 110 over 80 blood pressure
consistently without pills. Page 139. When a family member had to go on blood
thinners i found this alternative. The doctor was very happy with it and you may find
it helpful to ask your doctor about. Page 180. After friends seem to suffer very severe
side effects from cholesterol medications i began looking for natural alternatives and
i found them. The doctor told me you don't need to take these pills anymore. And
this is what i've been doing. Page 162.

Having good high male hormone levels is helpful to men. Here's the story of how i
raised my male hormone levels and got much better health as a man. Page 96.

I found certain fats that can improve all markers of health in men with regular
consumption. I am showing you how to eat these fats if you want to improve your
male hormone profile and feel better. Page 243 in my book i talk about medications
and supplements that you may want to discuss with your doctor. My doctor was
flabbergasted when i showed him my list.

But he couldn't argue with my results and he's trying them himself now. That's on
page 14. What i discovered about the longest living people on earth.

Two secret foods to eat. One secret they all avoid. These are men that are routinely
living past a hundred. I've done detailed research discovered some startling facts
that gave me great ideas on how i plan to live decades longer. Page 33.

I was exercising too hard so instead i do this now. Much more fun and pleasurable
and it is hopefully adding decades of healthy lifespan i'm looking forward to. Page
316. Why losing weight the right way made all my health problems better. I love the
thinner me and nothing else ever worked. The secret was NOT in eating fewer
calories or cutting carbs or skipping meals. Here's what's working for me. Page 250
the number one food ingredient that you may want to avoid.

It affects male hormones it can actually harm your health if you eat it too often. Page
48. I regularly use a simple blue dye that's been known for 150 years to help cells
generate energy more efficiently. Page 91.

I found that cholesterol is needed for the male body to create all the steroid
hormones including the primary male hormones. I found a way to help increase the
body's conversion of cholesterol into these important male hormones. Page 168. My
blood sugars used to creep up but not anymore. Now i started to eat a little
differently at breakfast. My blood sugars went from 120 to 88 in the morning. Page
276.

Why calories in equal calories out. May not be true, How i increased my metabolic
rate and began burning food faster letting me lose unsightly and dangerous body fat
without cutting calories. Page 292.

CALL TO ACTION
Just go ahead click on the link claim your copy of healthy to 120. And if you can
please help me out with the shipping and handling. I really appreciate that healthy
to 120 is a physical book that i'm mailing to your home.

Sadly i only was able to afford to print a small quantity of books. When they're gone i
don't know if i will be able to print more. So please get it right now.

If you really would like to try to live to age 120. With a happy and healthy physical and
spiritual life. Click on the link get my book for free today. Plus the shipping and
handling if you don't mind if you can help me out. Thank you so much. God bless you
and your family. As i say to everyone i will see you at 120.
 7. Snow Teeth Whitening - 5.7M Views
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Authority Figure Product - Price VSL Length

Real User Teeth Whitening - $69 1:38 min

Proof of Massive Success:

Pete’s Insights: Leading with “Fascinating Benefit” is always one of the best ways
for a brand to advertise. I spied on a few other Snow Ads. And noticed that they
used a few of people who were “embarrased with their yellow teeth”.

However they pivoted those becuase they just know they’re not brand friendly. And
what that means is that brands dont want to assosiate users with negative feelings.
They want to associate with positive feelings. So starting out with fascination is
killer.

Notice in the kindergarten simple pitch how the problem is not yellow or ugly
stained teeth. It’s that the user doens’t have white teeth. Always focusing on the
end outcome.

They crushed it with the amount of “Ugly” B-Roll in this video. Demonstrating the
difference in color in teeth.

Also it’s a 21 Day challenge! Not just a normal sale. They’re challenging people to
get the result.

Kindergarten Simple Pitch

Problem Root Problem Root Solution Benefits:

Wants bright white Teeth whitening
smile. Coffee & Red products cause
Wine Stains painful sensitivity

VSL Formula:

How To Rewrite It:

After x Time by amazing benefits are the best they’ve ever been. Thanks to this
product.

I always wanted this amazing result. But this thing would always stop me. This
product is designed to achieve benefits and remove products in x time.

This is all you have to do to use it. I’ve never been more confident.

Here’s 5 testimonails that proof it’s amazing.

Results are guaranteed so take the Challenge yourself!

 Snow Teeth Whitening Script
FASCINATING BENEFIT
After 21 days my teeth are the whitest they have ever been Thanks to Snow. I cannot
believe the results.

CUSTOMERS STORY

I have always wanted a bright white smile but generic teeth whitening products
always cause me painful sensitivity. With snow is at home teeth whitening kit it is
designed for sensitive teeth and it removes coffee and red wine stains and as little as
nine minutes per day.

HOW IT WORKS
You just plug the LED mouse piece straight into a smartphone and you can whiten
your teeth anywhere. With snow you can get bright pearly whites at home in just
three easy steps.

First brush your teeth. I like to use Snow's whitening toothpaste but any will do here.
Next apply the whitening serum. All the snow's products are designed for sensitive
teeth. So I apply generously to get the widest smile possible. Insert the LED
mouthpiece for about 9 to 30 minutes and voila.

EMOTIONAL BENEFITS & SOCIAL PROOF

I have never been more confident in my smile. Snow has helped transform over 1
million Smiles. With thousands of five star reviews.

TESTIMONIALS

I’ve tried so many I've been using this one for years it works. You do this for nine
minutes per day you will have the whitest teeth.

You'll have a beautiful smile. Dang dang this works good. Seriously the easiest at
home and teeth whitening kit I am in love. It's it's crazy. I cannot believe this I have
tried everything to whiten my teeth and nothing nothing has gotten my teeth as
white as snow. wow. Every time never fails that's how you do it so easy.

CALL TO ACTION
Results are guaranteed try snow take the 21 Day Challenge and see for yourself
 8. PROVEN SKINCARE - 5M Views
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Authority Figure Product - Price VSL Length

Beautiful Skin Actress $129 - AutoRebill Every 8
Weeks 5min 13sec

Proof of Massive Success:

Pete’s Insights: Brilliant Brand Friendly Skincare Angle. Starting with a huge
conspiracy. Leading into the Founders story.

Also the quiz funnel they’re running is one of the best I’ve ever seen. Everytime you
answer a new ingredient pops into your jar making it completely personalized to
you.

Another thing is they’re selling $129 every 2 month subscription. A very unique
business that would only be tested and implemented by very experienced
businessman.

Kindergarten Simple Pitch

Problem Root Problem Root Solution Benefits:

Your skin sucks Companies are Using Legimimate more uniform skin.
lying to you with science to create a bright radiant
marketing custom skincare complexion.
gimmicks routine softer skin.
personalized just clear skin.
for you

VSL Formula:

How To Rewrite It:

Your daily routine for this benefit sucks.

Here’s what most companies dont want you to know. There’s conspiracies all over
the place. In a recent study, scientists discovered lots of people were lying. And
that they trick you with multiple different techniques. Like this one. Or that one.
And this one.

If you want results, you need a product that uses legitimate science to support all
your ingredients.

Thats where we come in. We create custom routines that are perfectly
personalized to you. So it’s no marketing gimmicks, just science.

We’re been seen on all these famous outlets. Our CoFounder was a expert who did
a crap load of research to find out what works. And what’s all marketing BS.

Just click below to take our fre quiz. We use this information to create a
personalized solution for you to achieve benefits.
 If it doesn’t work, you can work with an expert 1 on 1 to get a formula that really
works for you. So click the link below now.

And in case youre wondering if it works. We did an independent study. And got all
these amazing benefits.

Click below to get your free quiz today.

PROVEN SKINCARE SCRIPT

ATTACK THE DAILY HABIT

Your skincare routine sucks. Sorry i had to say it.

LEAD INTO CONSPIRACY

Here's what most skin care companies don't want you to know. The beauty industry
is filled with pseudoscience, marketing loopholes, and miracle claims, that have no
scientific support at all.

And yet you still buy their products. Why? Because you just don't realize how bad it is
out there. So let me tell you….

SCIENCE PROVES ITS TRUE

in a study of 757 different advertising claims. 82 percent of them can't be supported
by science. 82%. That's like finding out that 82 of your science textbook was written
by flat earthers.

In another study scientists and researchers found that when most companies say
things that sound great… they're actually extremely misleading.

TECHNIQUES THEY USE TO TRICK YOU

All natural. There's no legal definition for what that even means. In other words it's
completely worthless. Just like my first ex-husband jerry. Pretty much anything can
be called all-natural. In fact another study found that 47% of products claiming to be
natural, actually had a known carcinogen.

Meaning it's known to cause cancer.

Dermatologists recommended just pay one dermatologist a little bit of money to
recommend your product and you can make this claim too. Hypoallergenic. This is
directly from the fda. And i quote.

“There are no federal standards or definitions that govern the use of the term
hypoallergenic. The term means whatever a particular company wants it to mean.

The same goes for the terms organic, clean, anti-aging, and many more. You might
think that the skincare brands that you use are different. But statistically speaking
they're probably lying to you too. Just like my third ex-husband on valentine's day.

INTRODUCING THE PRODUCT

If you want to make sure that you're not being tricked by clever marketing…. You
need a skincare product that uses real legitimate science. To support all of their
ingredients.

That's where proven skin care comes in. We use comprehensive science to create a
custom skin care routine that is perfectly personalized for you. No marketing
gimmicks. Just science.

SOCIAL PROOF

Proven has been featured on the new york times, vogue, the wall street journal,
people, and even shark tank. Beautiful faces all around the world are ditching
their skincare routine and switching to proven. Because they want to rely on science
too.

FOUNDERS STORY

This is one of the co-founders Amy. She's a stanford physicist that analyzed 20 000
ingredients, 100 000 individual products, 4 000 scientific publications, and 20 million
real testimonials. To find out exactly what works. And what's just marketing hype.

Amy's research was so thorough it won the artificial intelligence of the year award
from MIT.

HERE’S HOW IT WORKS

Here's how it works.

just click the link below to take our free skin genome quiz
Once you submit it, RAI will comb through our skin care database which is the
largest in the world. We'll use that information to prescribe a simple custom system
with ingredients that are perfect for you.

We take a personalized approach to skin care because personalization is crucial to

seeing results. Skin care is medicine. If you had a specific problem with your heart
would you go into any drugstore and buy a random heart medication?

No of course not you would go to the doctor have them examine your heart and they
would select a scientifically reputable medication that aligns with your specific
needs and your unique genetics.

That's how medicine is for every other part of your body and that's how skin care
should be too. Because skin care is medicine.

CALL TO ACTION

iIf these products don't work for you you can speak to our dermatologist to
reformulate your prescription for free. So you have nothing to lose.

Click the link below to take your free quiz now. The three-step system we create for
you is very dynamic. It evolves every month based on your city's unique humidity uv
index, water hardness, and even what season it is.

ADDRESS THE SKEPTICISM WITH DATA

In case you're wondering if this stuff really works….

We conducted an independent third-party clinical trial and this is what we found.

77% reported more uniform skin.

81% reported a bright radiant complexion.
94% reported softer skin.
And this is how many people saw clear skin.

Yes 100%. And this is how many people reported any sign of irritation. None because
that's what happens when you use science. Not marketing gimmicks

Click the link below to take your free skin genome quiz today.
 9. ST JUDE’S HOSPITAL - 58M Views
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Authority Figure Product - Price VSL Length

Reputable Hospital $19/mo 2 min

Proof of Massive Success:

Pete’s Insights: Reminds me of te Sarah McLachlan - In The Arms of An Angel

Infomercial that used to run 20 years ago. With the crying puppy dogs on TV.

If you’re promoting a charity. Or doing something for a big cause. This is an

amazing way to do it. Professional Videographer. And putting together a list of tear
jerking testimonails .

If you ever see horrific things happening to someone that society loves. And you’re
able to come in, and ask the right questions to pull out that emotional moment.
Organize them into a list like this. And you’ll be able to move the world.

Kindergarten Simple Pitch

Problem Root Problem Root Solution Benefits:

Children are Hospitals need to becoming a Give hope to the
suffering with work hard to find partner in hope & hearts of hopeless
horrible illnesses cures send $19/mo helps children
because the
hospital never
sends bills
 VSL Formula:

How To Rewrite It:

Insert two of the most tear jerking testimonails you have. From 2 differnt types of
people. Come in for a call to action asking for help. Deliver two more tear jerking
testimoniails. Then another call to action with a free bonus. Then 2 more tear
jerking stories.

ST JUDE’S HOSPITAL SCRIPT

TEAR JERKING TESTIMONAIL #1

“I am Melanie. I'm a fun, caring, and goofy person. The doctor said I had a brain
tumor and it was scary, but you can't be sad.”

TEAR JERKING TESTIMONIAL #2

These kids, they don't deserve to have to go through this. My beautiful little
redheaded girl has cancer. You don't know what's gonna happen.

CALL TO ACTION
St. Jude Children's Research Hospital works day after day to find cures and save the
lives of children with cancer and other life-threatening diseases.

Please become a St. Jude partner in hope for only $19 a month.

TEAR JERKING TESTIMONAIL #3

I hope there's a cure because all the children here deserve to have a life.

Families never receive a bill from St. Jude for treatment, travel, housing, or food.
Because all a family should worry about is helping their child live.

TEAR JERKING TESTIMONAIL #4

I was just so scared, like I think the reality of what was happening within our family
just hit me. Her doctor came in and she just said, it's gonna be okay. It's gonna be
okay. We're here to help her.

CALL TO ACTION #2
You can join our mission by becoming a partner in hope. When you join with your
credit or debit card, we'll send you this St. Jude t-shirt

TEAR JERKING TESTIMONIAL #5.

I think it's the most worthwhile place to put your money when it comes to childhood
cancer. The partners in hope, They mean everything because I'm just so grateful to
have her.

TEAR JERKING TESTIMONAIL #6

Hope is when you never, ever give up. Become a partner in hope today.
 THE ULTIMATE AOV CLOSE

This is really the key to inspiring people to buying as much as they can. I’ve tested
alot of closes over my career. It started out with Stefan Georgi’s Money Close that
made me realize how much changing a close would impact your campaign.

Then I went out an test a bunch of closes and found 2 you’re about to see below. The
Resurge Close. The Best AOV Close we’d ever seen. For ecommerce & supplements
this is still the best close that i’ve ever seen.

It’s just the most perfect formula to follow. Read it below to find the formula. It’s
super simple and works like crazy. So rewrite this for your own VSL. It’s phenomenal.
If you’re doing ecommerce with a 3 sentence close just add this. And keep pounding
it home.

Next you’re going to see Mindvalley’s Subscription Close. Perfect for anything course
related.
 THE RESURGE CLOSE

(The Ultimate AOV Close)

(PRODUCT INTRODUCTION)

I'm honored to introduce you to Resurge, the world's first and only clinically
proven anti-aging nutritional protocol that cures the true cause of
unexplained weight gain, stubborn belly fat and metabolic slowdown.

Resurge is the only product in the world that contains the eight special
nutrients in the exact amount, scientifically proven to dramatically improve
deep sleep and enhance natural metabolic regeneration in both women and
men.

(IT’S UNLIKE ANYTHING THAT EVER BEEN CREATED)

Let me be clear. There's never been anything like Resurge in the history of
health as myself, Lisa and thousands of everyday women and men can attest.

Burning fat, totally restoring your health and turning back the clock simply
couldn't be easier or more automatic.

Yet this breakthrough formula is miles more powerful than any amount of
diet or exercise ever could be because it naturally awakens the true fat
burning and regenerative potential that's lying dormant within you.

(HOW TO USE IT/WHAT TO EXPECT)

Just take Resurge before bed and let your own body naturally do the rest
while you sleep.

You can look forward to waking up to a leaner, healthier, younger, and way
more energized version of yourself in the bathroom mirror each and every
morning without having to change a single thing to do with your diet,
exercise or lifestyle.

(IT’S SAFE TO TAKE)

Every capsule Resurge is manufactured here in the USA, in our state of the art
FDA approved and GMP, Good Manufacturing Practices, certified facility
under the most sterile, strict and precise standards.

Resurge is a hundred percent all natural, vegetarian, non-GMO and

completely safe and clinically proven to have absolutely zero side effects.

And you'll be able to get access to this miraculous health transforming

formula in less than two minutes.

(PRICE CLOSE #1. HOW MUCH ARE THESE BENEFITS WORTH?)

First, let me ask you this. How much would it be worth to you to live your life
in the body of your dreams without ever again having to diet, count calories,
exercise or deprive yourself of your favorite foods?

How much would it be worth to you to literally age in reverse and to reclaim
the youthful appearance, boundless energy and pristine health of your prime?

How much would it be worth to you to be fully rested and recharged each day
yet to need less total sleep to do so than ever before?

Just think about that for a second.

How much would that extra time, those extra hours each week, each month
and each year be worth to you, extra hours to enjoy, to spend with family,
friends, loved ones or whomever you please?

To live more life on your terms, any way that you want and doing so in the
healthy, lean and youthful body of your dreams. $10000? $20000? $50000?

Could you really even put a number on it?

Well, don't worry. You're going to experience all of this for nowhere near what
you're thinking or what you'd happily pay.

(OF COURSE, IT”S NOT ABOUT THE MONEY)

This isn't about money for me, this is about knowing what it feels like to have
your health, your metabolism, and your appearance stolen from you.

This is about having lived through the endless pain, frustration and
helplessness of watching the weight pile on and the devastating health issues
that accompany it and not being able to do anything about it.

I do not want you or your loved ones or anyone else to needlessly suffer any
longer the way I have. I've been blessed to have stumbled upon this amazing
nutritional formula.

(GIGANTIC PRICE DROP. I JUST WANT EVERYONE TO GET IT)

And all I care about is getting it into the hands of as many people as possible
that it can help.

That's why I'm not going to ask for $599, which I was recommended to or half
of that.

The last thing I want is for price to stand in your way.

(I’M GOING TO BE FORCED TO SELL IT FOR $297)

So even though I will be forced to charge a minimum of $297 per bottle in the
upcoming days just to cover costs, you won't have to pay that today either.

(BUT TODAY YOU CAN GET IT FOR $49)

Right now, today, you can get a one bottle 30 day supply of Resurge for a
simple one time fee of just $49. Yes, just $49.
 (YET IT TAKES 90-180 DAYS TO WORK)

Yet before you order, know that research shows it's best to take Resurge
consistently for at least 90 to 180 days to experience optimal results and to
ensure you reach your desired weight and that you stay there.

(SO I’M GOING TO LET YOU ORDER A LOT MORE)

So to guarantee the most impactful life changing results, I'm going to let you
order 90 days worth of Resurge or 180 days worth today at astounding one
time discounts, which will save you even more money on top of today's
special low pricing.

(PRICING IS LIMITED TO TODAY ONLY)

That said, I'm only able to guarantee the special pricing for today or until our
limited inventory runs out as I've recently received word from our suppliers
that the cost of key nutrients in Resurge is going up substantially on our next
order.

And we're selling out of this current stock faster than anyone could have
anticipated, more reasons why picking up at least 90 days worth today is a
smart option.

(YOU’LL NEVER GET THIS DEAL AGAIN)

And just let me be super clear about a few things. You'll never be able to buy
Resurge cheaper than today.

And Resurge will never be available for purchase at any other website or store.

I'm only able to offer today's incredible pricing because I've eliminated all
middlemen and agents and I've partner directly with the manufacturer so
that we can ship directly to you right away.

(IT’S A ONE TIME PAYMENT)

Furthermore, rest assured this is a onetime payment. There are no hidden
charges or subscription fees whatsoever.

I've always hated that stuff as much as you do.

(HERE WHAT TO DO NEXT)

So provided Resurge is still in stock, you'll see a table appear below this video
with three money saving options for you to choose from.

Select your package and then click the add to cart button to proceed to our
256 bit secure order page that looks like this.

Then fill in your order information and confirm your order to our 100% safe
and secure order form and we'll get your package sent directly to your door
right away.

(MONEY BACK GUARANTEE)

And listen, because I'm so confident that you'll experience more profound life
changing results than literally anything you've ever purchased before, I'm not
promising the results, I'm going to completely guarantee them.

I'm giving you a 60 day, no questions asked 100% money back guarantee to
make getting started an absolute no brainer for you.

If trying Resurge doesn't turn out to be the best decision you've ever made, or
if you change your mind for any reason whatsoever, just let us know anytime
in the next 60 days and we'll refund you the purchase price right away.

My team and I are extremely easy to get a hold of. There's simply no risk to
you.

(WHAT MISSING OUT LOOKS LIKE)

The only risk you could possibly face is the one of pain and regret if you miss
out on experiencing this life changing formula when you had the chance.

Right now you have two full months to test drive the amazing impact this
miracle fat burning formula will have on your health, your metabolism, your
appearance and your life, then decide.

It's time to select your money saving package below and to experience
firsthand everything I've talked about a hundred percent risk free today.

(NOTHING ELSE WILL WORK)

Remember, no amount of diet, exercise or anything that you've tried up until

now has even had a chance at working and now you know why.

(CROSS ROADS CLOSE)

And even though you may not realize that at this moment, right now, you've
come to a very real crossroads of a once in a lifetime choice you must make
between two very different realities.

(REALITY #1 THE NIGHTMARE )

The first choice has a reality where you do anything other than finally fixing
the one problem holding you back from the body, the health and life you truly
desire and deserve.

A reality that is full of even more pain, frustration, and despair as your weight
gain inevitably worsens, your metabolism continues to slow down and your
health and appearance continues to deteriorate, a reality in which you never
feel truly free.

Never free to eat what you want without guilt, to wear what you want without
hesitation, to live the life you really want to live.
Until one day, not so far off, you find yourself feeling completely trapped living
inside of a body and a life that's simply a shell of what it once was, of what it
could have and should have been.

None of this is what I want for you. And I know this is not what you desire for
yourself.

(REALITY #2: HEAVEN WITHOUT HELL)

There is another reality available for you're choosing, a new reality that has
been chosen and celebrated by thousands of women and men that have
been to this same once in a lifetime crossroads before you.

One in which exhausted calorie counting, dieting, grueling amounts of

exercise and more failed attempts at weight loss doesn't exist.

Yet it's a reality where the excess body fat you've been burdened with for so
long, doesn't exist either.

It's a reality in which you have complete effortless and permanent control of
your weight, your metabolism and your health.

A reality where each morning you wake up fully revitalized, vibrant, engulfed
with natural all day energy and bursting with anticipation to see the younger,
healthier you in the bathroom mirror.

A reality in which every relationship you have, the decisions you make and
even the opportunities that come your way are all positively affected by the
renewed you.

A reality in which you're finally free. Free of the pain, free of the frustration and
free of what was holding you back from the body and the life you truly
deserve.

And let's face it, this is the reality you've been waiting for your whole life.
You may never forgive yourself if you let today's once in a lifetime opportunity
slip between your fingertips.

(TAKE ACTION NOW)

It's time to do the smart thing, the right thing for you and your family while
you still can.

Select your money saving package below and take advantage of today's 100%
risk free opportunity to claim the body, the health and the life you truly
deserve.
 The Mindvalley Subscription CLOSE

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MINDVALLEY PROGRAM IS CREATED/

INTRODUCE EVERYDAY BLISS

I took the most powerful techniques I’ve ever used for my clients …

And transformed it into an online program that is changing lives everywhere.

It’s called EVERYDAY BLISS.

It is my most advanced program in the world right now.

And it is only available on the Mindvalley platform…

To translate my work and legacy to a new generation (so I can finally bloody
retire!)

COURSE MATERIALS

Everyday Bliss is a 21-day program hosted by me, Paul Mckenna.

It is the culmination of my 30 years as the tip-of-the-spear in treating stress

and anxiety.

Every day, you go through 15 to 20-minute training designed to re-program

your brain for everyday bliss … creating new neural pathways that ERADICATE
stress … and give you total freedom…

So you can keep your spark, your joy, no matter WHAT is happening in your
life.
You’ll discover how to access a deep sense of calm and relaxation with such
ease and fluidity that it’ll become second nature.

Your journey begins with the centerpiece of my whole methodology…

The Hypnotic Trance.

Using a sophisticated “double induction” script that communicates with your

left and right brain simultaneously…

This powerful trance “re-programs” your subconscious mind to achieve deep

states of relaxation, have more energy, and be more effective in your everyday
life.

What that REALLY means is that you start to ENJOY life more often.

Appreciating everything about life … big and small.

The first sip of a cup of tea in the morning. The chirp of the birds out of your
window. The loving company of a friend.

All these things that we don’t have the bandwidth to notice when we’re
stressed, start to soothe us …

And you get the overwhelming feeling that ALL IS WELL.

This creates a POSITIVE LOOP where we start noticing more good, becoming
happier, and attracting more incredible things in life.

You can use the Hypnotic Trance in so many ways…

You can listen to it before going to sleep or before a high-stress situation like a
meeting, or a date.

And the results of even ONE LISTEN will blow your mind.
You might find yourself feeling euphoric for no particular reason. Other than
we have programmed your mind to produce more happy neurochemisty,
every minute of every day.

Now as you go deeper into the program, you’ll learn one of the most powerful
tools of all…

The psycho-sensory techniques … which include The Havening technique …

Are amazingly effective at relieving the most deeply-rooted anxiety, trauma,

and pain.

I work with a lot of PTSD sufferers, and many of them thought that
PTSD-induced stress was simply something they’d have to live with forever ….
And many cry tears of joy from how quickly everything turns around.

And become a bit pissed off at how long they had to suffer through
traditional therapy.

In Everyday Bliss, you’re also going to discover Neuro-Linguistic

Programming.

This is an incredible way to tap into your subconscious and reprogram

different aspects of your life.

By taking control of your thoughts and feelings.

Ex-prime minister Tony Blair, arguably the UKs most charismatic ever leader,
and ex-president Bill Clinton are both HUGE fans of NLP.

And Oprah Winfrey uses NLP to manage audiences and motivate them…

All of these techniques and more are layered on Day by day,

using a unique methodology, speaking to your subconscious.

And as you start practicing these techniques… something will shift inside
you…
And previously “stressful” situations will barely even register…

Because you’ll be so much more resilient and capable.

(Total it up, Price Loop)

So in total, when you buy Everyday Bliss you get.

21, individual sessions with me … all less than 15 minutes.

Sessions that are impossible to get with me in person. But as soon as you buy
Everyday Bliss, I’ll be coaching you personally for 3 weeks.

You dont have to spend thousands of dollars or fly london.

If you need confidence, happiness, calm, you touch a button on your phone
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I’m your personal coach in your pocket 24.7

Everyday bliss is one of my finest pieces of work.

It’s taken me decades to get to the point where I can deliver it to you in a fast
simple, beautiful way.

It’s not a lecture. It’s an experiential coaching session.

Because it's delivered online, the enrollment price is nowhere close to what I
normally charge for a session

(Introduce Mindvalley Membership & Price)

In fact, here’s the best part …

Everyday Bliss is part of Mindvalley, the world’s biggest personal growth
company.

With 60 plus unique programs in every aspect of human transformation.

So when you become a Mindvalley Member, you automatically get Everyday

Bliss …

As well as all other programs that get unlocked for you as well.

Now you might want to start with Everyday Bliss and go through this 21-day
experience.

But after that, you might want to jump into another program.

Maybe my other program, Total Self Confidence… where I program you to

have the confidence to achieve anything you want in life.

Maybe Mindvalley's programs on focus and entrepreneurship, so your career

can skyrocket.

Maybe Mindvalleys programs on relationships, so you can have the love life
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Maybe mindvalleys programs on energy healing and spirituality, so you can

further unleash your inner Buddha.

All of these are freely available to you on the platform, so you never stop
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And all of this is available when you sign up for Everyday Bliss today.

(Introduce The Community)

Now, in addition,, you’ll have access to thriving community of over a hundred
thousand people all around the world…

Who are so dedicated to improving their lives and each other's lives.

You'll be able to make new friends and even attend community meetups
happening across the planet.

(Guarantee)

And the best part is…

You don't have to risk a thing with Mindvalley.

You get to try Everyday Bliss risk-free for the next 15 days.

At any point in the next 15 days, with one click, you can get yourself a full
refund.

You can go through the entire program if you want in 15 days.

And then with one click, get a full refund, no email, no phone call needed.

You can get a full no risk money-back guarantee.

(Order Details)

Now, here’s exactly what to do next.

Simply click on the link around the video.

Then you’ll be taken to our site where you can choose your membership
option. Either monthly or yearly.

After that, all you have to do is enter your regular details in our secure
checkout …
And you’ll be instantly welcomed into the Mindvalley family.

Within a minute, you’ll get an email with your login instructions.

You can access the Mindvalley platform on your computer or download the
iPhone or Android app.

(Scarcity Close)

Though I do have to warn you…

This one-time offer on the yearly price is giving you a pretty big discount.

So it's only for people who have had time to sit through this entire video.

It is a thank you for spending this much time with me.

As soon as you click off this page, it will be gone…

So please don't close this page because you may not see this again.

Even better…

You’ll be able to LOCK IN this discounted rate… for as long as you CHOOSE to
stay a member.

So even if MindValley membership shoots up to $2000… or $3000… or even

$5000 a year in the future…

Which is VERY possible… considering some of the new courses we’re currently
working on…

You’ll be unaffected.

Because you’ll have already locked in your discount rate.

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Everyday Bliss is the single most impactful program I've ever created.

These are the tools I use with my personal clients …

Helping to “cure the incurables” …

It’s what thousands of graduates have been using to successfully change

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To be unstoppable in your quest for amazing health, amazing relationships,

and having an amazing career.

Before you go …

I just wanted to say that if there is ONE THING that I want to leave the world
with…

It is the ability to profound relax - at will.

Discovering the ability to really relax - whenever you want - has the single
greatest impact on happiness levels and quality of life.

And that is EXACTLY what I’m going to show you in EVERYDAY BLISS.

(Final CTA)

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Just click the button below this video to get started.

 Upsell Video Script Formula

Hey, it's Vishen here.

You’ve made a great decision to try MindValley Membership so I wanted to

say a BIG CONGRATULATIONS!

I admire anyone who steps up to take control of their future.

And I know you’re going to be stunned by how much your life begins to take
off in just a few weeks!

Just imagine how shocked friends and family are going to be as they see you

(Insert benefits)
a more powerful, more confident, more transformed you.

They’ll probably have to do a double-take… just to make sure it’s really you.

All you need to do to get these kind of results is stay with me for a few
minutes.

Make sure you stay on this page and don’t accidentally close the page or hit
the “back” button on the browser because I want to show you how to get the
absolute best results!

Look right now…

Our team is getting your MindValley Membership login ready…

But before we send it over I’ve got a really important question to you.

What would it mean to you to be able to go one level higher?

(Describe the level higher)

(How they feel)
(Being Admired by friends, family, or strangers)

How could that change your life?

Because about a year ago, we found that many members want to get to the
next level.

We started running experiments to find out what would happen,

if I personally worked with members on transforming their lives.

Here’s what we did.

We took our members and we first put them together in peer groups.
Where they could get to connect with each other To co-elevate each other. To
help each other.

Not just with accountability. But with growth in their personal life and their
business life.

These type of peer groups are commonly called masterminds.

And Masterminds have been proven to be an amazing way to grow in all areas
of your life.

The second thing we did it. We get these groups to come live with me on a
coaching call once per month,

but these were no ordinary coaching calls.

I was not just lecturing or teaching you a new technique.

These were coaching calls with what we call embodiment practices…

meaning, I would directly work with our members live,

to shift some aspect of their mind and their soul.

Now what this means is that we would take them through a guided practice
that could involve Hypnotherapy, NLP, meditation, to shift their levels of
intuition.

To shift the way their body heals itself.

To open themselves up to greater levels of confidence.

To help them zero in on blocks they may have inherited through childhood.

To clear energy patterns that may be holding them back in life

These are happening in real time with our members on live calls.
And we did this for about a year with close to a hundred members, and the
results were amazing.

These are all of the case studies that we got from this beautiful experience
with

A) our mastermind groups and

B) live coaching with me.

Now these members were paying $2500 per year. For the past 1 year.

And the success that they had was astounding.

In fact this particular program became the program generating the highest
number of case studies on Mindvalley’s case study engine.

A full 70% of people who went through it, released a case study on how this
program changed their lives.

But the problem is, $2500 is a lot. And so over the last 1 year, we worked with
our team to scale this. And lower the price.

We now call this MindValley Pro.

And Mindvalley Pro is just an extra $500 on top of Mindvalley membership.

So we’ve gone from $2500, to just $500.

Now, as I mentioned, Mindvalley pro involves 2 powerful new pieces that we’re
going to bring together.

And I want to talk about this for a moment because this will completely
change your life.

For just an extra $500 over 12 months.

Now this comes up to just under $42 a month.

Thats it! $42 a month.

And here’s what you're going to be experiencing every month.

#1. When you scroll down on this page and sign up for Mindvalley Pro, we’re
going to give you a survey to understand your goals

Your motivations, your values.

We’re going to understand who you want to connect with.

We’re then going to put you in a mastermind group. With like minded
individuals.

You will meet people who are so passionate about transforming themselves,
about hitting goals, about personal growth, you will meet people who will
help hold you accountable to your growth and your success.

People love our mastermind groups.

And so many close tight knit friendships are forming.

It is almost certain that you will make new friends who are going to be
among the closest people to you.

Thats the first thing..

And the second thing is this.

Every month you’re going to be connecting with me.

And I’m going to be coaching with you on a key transformation for the
month.

Now these coaching calls as I mentioned are not just lectures.

We’re going to be going through embodiment practices,

We’re going to be working with your energy field.

We’re going to be working with aspects of your belief system.

Working with your subconscious and there’s a good chance that you will
experience instant shifts after these coaching calls.

You see, my job is to travel the world, to meet the greatest teachers, the
greatest healers, the most transformative individuals, and to work with them
to create the methodologies that power mindvalley.

And so I have access to so many of these incredible minds.

There are healers out there that I have invested $100,000 with.

So they can train me on some of their methodologies.

ANd I get permission from them to introduce these methodologies to you.

Very often, I bring on these guest teachers, these guest healers.

People whom I have worked with. I’ve seen remarkable results.

Not just healings, but Mindset shifts, synchronicities, and coincidences

appearing in my life.

And I bring these methods to you as part of our coaching program.

So many people say, Mindvalley Pro is one of the best investments they make
in their lives.

If you find these ideas interesting, all the information is below.

You get all the benefits of mindvalley membership.

But just for an extra $42 a month.

You get your monthly peer group and the deep rich powerful connections
from this group.

And you and I, well I'm going to be working with you to ensure that you are
going through some incredible transformations.

I want to warn you about one thing.

You need an open mind.

Because many of the methodologies I’m going to use are deeply spiritual.

So I ask that you come in with an open mind.

Not all of these can be scientifically explained.

But if there's one thing that I've learned from working with so many
incredible thinkers around the world.

Is that, we are not just physical beings, but spiritual beings,

And there’s so much about our inner powers and our inner abilities waiting to
be unlocked.

And I’m excited to get these to you.

Scroll down below, Enroll in MindValley Pro, complete the survey so we can
find out what mastermind group to put you in.

And I cannot wait to meet and connect with you on our next call.

Thank you
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 1. Mindvalley’s Silva Ultramind
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Authority Figure Product - Price VSL Length

CEO of Largest Personal Digital Subscription 32 minutes
Development Company Course $79/mo $399/yr

Proof of Massive Success:

Pete’s Insights: Those who teach are often those who needed it the most. If you’re
a course creator or online course, you likely have a world class story of going
through issues to come up with your solution. This formula is one of the best for
highlighting your life story. And assembling all the techniques. Use the VSL God
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Kindergarten Simple Pitch

Problem Root Problem Root Solution Benefits:

Unable to Access The way we’re Mind Achieve the life of

Your Lost Hidden raised suppressed empowerment your dreams
Psychic Abilities these innate techniques gain
abilities access to different
brainwave states
that provide
different abilities

Proven VSL Formula:

Helen Hadsell could any competition she took park in. 7 Trips to Paris, Boats,
Houses. All because she was Jose Silva’s former PR Director & learned this secret
from him.

Jose Silva was a radio repair man who’s kids wer failing in school. So he began
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tells a credible professor but the professor claims it’s impossible. No one can be
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Jose disagrees so he tests in on 39 other children & documents everything. Getting

even better and better results. Proving the professor wrong. Anyone can be
psychic.

He create the Silva Mind Method and begins teaching his mind empowering
techniques. Journalists catch wind and suddenly mods of people come to try.
Hundreds of people from all walks of life begin to transform. The Silva Method took
the nation by storm.

Hi I’m Vishen Lakhiani & I stumbled upon the Silva Method many years ago. My life
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on the Silva Method. I tried it out and suddenly I became very successful. It helped
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Sadly Jose Silva died so I decided to become the new face of the Silva Method &
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How To Rewrite It:

Some mind-boggling amazing results are happening to this person because they
studied from this expert.

Now this expert was a special person who was fascinated at solving a problem he
had. But afer a few experiments something shockingly amazing and unexpected
happens.

He shares his results with some other experts. But nobody believes it’s possible. He
goes on a mission to prove them all wrong. When SUCCESS! After alot of
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He starts putting together all his best techiques/ingredients/packages into a

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We heard about all these transformiatons and thought they sounded a bit too
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we can confirm that this is the real deal. It works absolutely amazing and can
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We improved upon the formula and now rereleased it. Peoples lives are being
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 2. Dr Gundry Total Restore
Supplement for Healthy Gut Lining
Link to Video & Script

Authority Figure Product VSL Length

52 min

Proof of Massive Success:

Pete’s Insights: Total restore has been one of the absolute biggest campaigns on
the internet. Wouldn’t be surprised if single video passed $100M in sales on it’s
own. If you search this on a Facebook Spytool you’ll find dozens and dozens of
variations with millions upon millions of views in all languages.
Dr Gundry the perfect credible authority to deliver this message and reveal to the
world the problem is “leaky gut”
Kindergarten Simple Pitch
Problem Root Cause of Root Solution Benefits:
Problem
No energy, Powerful No more
digestive pain, Holes in your gut ingredients that heartburn,
brain fog, weight lining at causing will sooth & heal bloating, gas. More
fain skin rashes toxins to leaks in your gut lining energy.
your blood stream
Aka Leaky Gut

VSL Formula: Remember when you were a kid? Lots of Energy, no digestive pain,
no brain fog, weight gain or skin rashes? Hi I’m Dr. Gundry & your leaky gut may be
causing all these problems. I was a heart surgeon & quit because research shows
much of what I learned is wrong.

Digestive issues, fatigue, skin rash, aching joints, low mood, headaches all happen
because leaky gut. A Leaky Gut is when your digestive tract is leaking & allows
toxins to sneak in & wreck havoc on your body.

Eating foods with Lectins are the #1 things that cuts holes in your digestive lining.
These holes let endotoxins invade your body causing dangerous health issues.

Thats why leaky gut is the root cause of many of the issues you’re dealing with. So I
quit my job & started a mew mission to solve leaky gut.

I had people stop eating foods with lectins like tomatoes, beans & grains. Peoples
lives started changing but big pharma didn’t care because they only want money.
So I wrote a book detailing everything & it went viral.

Unfortunately no one reads books so I started working on a supplement to fix leaky

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tested it on 258 people with heartburn, bloating, gas and got amazing results.

Here’s how the incredible work, all the benefits. Buy it today before it sells out!

How To Rewrite It: If you got these problems, THIS is the root cause behind it all!
Hi I’m a famous expert who was frustrated that no one ever seems to actually treat
the root cause of the problem. All of your physical & emotional pains stem from this
one root issue.
Here’s how the root cause of the problem is causing all your issues you’re
experiencing. I set out to search for a solution and had a breakthrough. I started
sharing it with other experts but they didn’t care because they only wanted more
money!

So I decided to formulate it for myself. Introducing My Product! We’ve tested it on a

bunch of people and there’s so much proof it works to solve the problem and get
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Buy it today before it sells out!

 3. Dr Marty Nature’s Blend
LINK TO SCRIPT – LINK TO VIDEO

Authority Figure Product - Price VSL Length

Dr. Marty
40 min

Proof of Massive Success:

Pete’s Insights: This is really such a simple VSL formula that people can use all over
the world. It’s literally just competitors are using cheap ingredients which are
causing all these problems in your dog. So we were forced to make our own dog
food.
I mean how many food companies could this work for? You could start a monster
food brand almost instantly just by having a sales pitch similar to this.

Kindergarten Simple Pitch

Problem Root Problem Root Solution Benefits:

Dogs are sick, 3 cheap Having your dog Clear skin, shiny
depressed, have ingredients inside eat 3 nutrients will coats, regular
bad digestion and most dog foods. heal your dog right bathroom, more
joint pain. Meat byproducts, up. energy, happier
preservatives and dogs.
fillers

VSL Formula:
They’re known as Marty’s Miracles. Dogs sentenced to death, brought back to life
with Mary’s unique methods.

Hi I’m Dr. Marty & I’m showing you 3 dangerous ingredients in pet foods. Leading
to sickness, depression, bad digestion, and joint pain in your dog. I found the first in
my own food. Preservatives. They’re even worse for dogs.

Fillers are the 2nd worst ingredient. They’re cheap and used in pet foods to save on
money instead of using real meat.

#3 is Meat Byproducts. Aka. Slaughterhouse waste. Beware of generic meats.

If you want to have your dog thrive you need to go beyond regular food.

These 3 nutrients clear your pets skin products, get them shiny coats, have regular
bathroom, more energy, and a happier dog! They’re all critical to your dogs
digestion.

First, Organ Meat. Densely packed with Nutrients & Vitamins. 2nd. Omega 3s, make
them more alert, reduce joint pain, and ease allergies. #3. Prebiotics. Superfood for
Dog’s gut bacteria. Supporting their immune sstem.

This makes dogs happier, soothes digestion, gives a fast metabolism and is better
at absorbing nutrients.

You your dog needs to eat raw food. Freezed dried makes it easy & preserves
nutrients. I discovered how to make this and tested it on some sick dogs and got
incrediblre results.

So I’m proud to present, Dr Marty’s Nature’s Blend. Premium Freeze Dried Dog
Food. Here’s everything inside. We’re almost sold out and there’s very high
demand so buy as much as you can right now!

How To Rewrite It:

Life changing miracles are happening before of this experts methods! Hi I’m an
expert and here are 3 dangerous things that end up causing all theesa physical &
emotional problems. This is what they do & why they’re the root cause of all your
pain & suffering.

If you want these dream physical & emotional benefits you need these 3
nutrients/tips/tricks. They’re critical to fixing the root cause of the problem. Here’s
what the 3 things are and how the solve the root cause of your problems. Here’s all
the amazing physical & emotional benefits that happen when you do this.

I know they’re really hard to consistently do so we created a product that makes it

really easy for you! Buy now before it sells out!
 4. Nucific - BioX4
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Authority Figure Product - Price - $49 VSL Length

45min

Proof of Massive Success:

Pete’s Insights: You’ll notice this campaign is almost the exact same at Dr Marties
above. 3 harmful things, and then 3 nutrients that can fix up everything. A world
class presentation.

Kindergarten Simple Pitch

Problem Root Problem Root Solution Benefits:

Cravings, low 3 harmfu foods 3 nutrients that Flatten belly,

energy, poor that kill grow build up your good improved
mood, clogged harmful bacteria bacteria & kill the digestion and
digestive system that kills your bad bacteria faster metabolism
metabolism &
hurts digestion

VSL Formula:
Breakfast means break fast. And the first foods you eat are critical for cravings,
energy levels, and mood for the day.

Hi I’m Dr Lee & I’m showing you 3 harmful foods that can ruin your weight loss
goals. They’re banned everywhere but legal in the US & Heavily marketed to
children.

They clog digestive systems, irritate bowels, and turn into ugly fat, so pay attention.
Celebs in LA pay me thousands for these secrets that improve digestion and
flattens their belly.

Harmfulfood #1 is yogurt. It contains 2x sugar as lucky charms cereal. Pasteurized

yogurt kills good bacteria and has little to no probiotic benefit. Harmful food #2 is
weat bread. It contains lots of high fructorce corn syrup.

It knocks hormones out of whack & forces your brain to eat more than it should.
Harmful food #3 is cerea bars. Packed with corn syrup and recipe for weight gain.

Patients come to me wanting to lose weight. I’d tell them exercise is not enough.
Dieting is temporary, if you don’t have discipline. It’s a rollercoaster.

The secret is your digestive system, it absorbs food and helps you make energy or
make fat. There’s 3 nutrients that help with weight loss, digestion, energy levels,
sleep & skin health.

They destroy bad bacteria like Candida that wreak havoc on the metabolism &
body.

I created the perfect supplement called Bio X4 with all these ingredients. A bunch
of people tried it and had amazing results so buy it today!
How To Rewrite It:

There’s 1 thing thats critical to avoiding all these painful physical & emotional
problems.

Hi I’m an expert and I’m going to show you 3 of the worst thing that cause all these
problems. Celebs pay me thousands for this information to give them these
amazing physical & emotional benefits.

Here’s the 3 things to avoid because they end up causing the root cause of the
problem. Thats why nothing you try to fix ends up working.

Here’s 3 nutrients/techniques/tips you must do to solve the root cause of the

problem. We put them into abottle that you can buy today. Insert close.
 5.Dr. Gundry - Prebio Thrive
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Authority Figure Product - Price VSL Length

Dr Gundry

Proof of Massive Success:

Pete’s Insights:

Another variation very similar to Dr Marty. There’s so much evidence that attacking
certain foods or bad habits that are causing issues inspires people to pay attention.
 Kindergarten Simple Pitch

Problem Root Problem Root Solution Benefits:

You’re Hungry, Your bad gut Taking Special Giving more
have Digestive microbes are Prebiotics can energy, less food
problems, and overgrown startve the bad cravings, improved
weight gain issues. bugs boost good weight
bugs. managaement

VSL Formula:
This is a tomato. Think it’s good for you? Think again…
Hi I’m Dr. Gundry. I’m a world famous heart surgeon with lots of accolades.
However this is me 70lbs overweight. Today I weight 165lbs healthy.

All because I stopped eating 4 fake health foods and did 1 thing to my diet.
Foods like Tomatoes. Beans. Cashews. Grains. Are high in lectuns.
A toxic protein that cuts holes in the gut lining causing leaky gut.
But there’s something even more important. Your gut-brain microbiome.
Bad microbes will make you hungry , cause digestive problems & weight gain
issues. And anti-biotics kill off your rainforeces of good gut microbes for up to 2
years!

But by nourishing your good microbes they can cause bad bugs to go away.
Prebiotics are superfoods for your good gut microbes. They give easier digestion,
increased metabolism, you’re sick less often and have better skin.

They’re different probiotics. Which are like planting trees without giving water.
I’ve had a breakthrough in Prebiotics that help starve bad bugs and boost good
bugs. Giving more energ, less food cravings, improved weight management.

I call it Prebio Thrive. The ultimate in healthy gut support. We tested it out and it
works like crazy. So buy it today!

How To Rewrite It:

Here’s 1 thing you want to make sure you avoid.

Hi I’m an expert and famous but still used to have similar problems that you
currently have. Today I’ll reveal 4 different things I started avoiding that turned it all
around for me.
But then I discovered something even more important. It’s the root cause of the
problem! This is exactly how to fix the root cause of the problem. With all the
amazing physical & emotional benefits you’ll achieve when you solve this.

It’s different than anything you’ve tried and this is how it works to achieve those
results. We put it into a bottle and you can buy it today!
 6. Dr. Gundry Dark Spot Correcting
Product
LINK TO SCRIPT – LINK TO VIDEO

Authority Figure Product - Price - $49 VSL Length

Proof of Massive Success:

Pete’s Insights: I love this angle. The classic story “fall from grace” of the fitness
trainer who gets fat. Or the doctor who has a heart attack. In this story, Dr. Gundry,
the “expert who is a required reading by dermatologists” gets dark spots on his
skin.

But he doesn’t care too much. In fact it’s not until his wife falls for this pain that he
really moves. The emotional dagger that lets someone take action.

Kindergarten Simple Pitch

Problem Root Problem Root Solution Benefits:
Dark Spots Excess sugar in our There’s polyphenol Stubborn spots
diet mixed with nutrients in apple fade away and skin
body heat bonds that protect the looks healthier
with proteins and skin from this. than it has in years.
form brown spots

VSL Formula:
“I can’t believe this Steven! I’m turning into my mother!”
There I was a successful surgeon powerless to help the love of my life. I too had
begun developing dark spots on my hands & felt more self-conscious. But I knew it
was possible to get rid of them bc all blemishes can be banished.

Hi I’m Dr Gundry. My research on skin is a required reading for dermatologists.

Dark spots occur when sun UV rays hit skin & cause you to produce melanin to tan.

But over time permanent pockets of melanin form. But there’s something more.
Excess sugar in diet mixed with body heat bonds with proteins form brown spots.
These spots make you look older. And the sun’s rays speeds up this process.
My research uncovered a powerful solution that fights glycation & fades dark spots.

You know how when you cut an apple and it immediately tunrs brown?
There’s nutrients in the skin of apples called Polyphenols that protect it from this.

So I had our lab create a new polyphenol rich formula. I tried it with my wife. And
out stubborn spots faded away and our skin looked healthier than it had in years.

The polyphenols were protecting our skin. We were so happy we felt like dancing!
We put more ingredients in and called it the dark spot diminisher.

BUY NOW BITCHES!!!!

How To Rewrite It:

Tear jerking emotional disaster happens to someone our expert loves who is just
like our buyer.

The expert is frustrated yet believes there is hope. So he sets out on a mission to
solve this problem once and for all. He’s an expert so he already understands what
the root cause of the problem is.
Here’s how it all works. He starts researching and uncovers a solution. These
specific ingredients are proven to be highly effective for solving the root cause of
the problem.

We puts together a formula and tests in on loved ones. It works like crazy! So we
turned it in a product that you can try today!

BUY NOW BITCHES!!!

 7. Beverly Hills MD - Dermal Repair
Complex
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Authority Figure Product - $39.95 VSL Length

Proof of Massive Success:

Pete’s Insights: One of the most famous advertisements of all time is the Wall
Street Journals “Tale of Two Men” ad. Which sold $2 billion dollars worth of Wall St.
Journal subscriptions. The imfamous story for that campaign was two men who on
the surface were identical. However one became the manager of a company, and
the other became the president. What made the difference?

The Beverly Hills MD VSL did this perfectly. Comparing two identical twins who
walked in the office. And trying to understand why one of the looked 20 years
younger than the other.

Do you have a story about two similar people who had completely different results
because of a few simple techniques?

Also it seems like most of the successful skincare VSLs are focused around a root
cause of the problem that kill collagen production.

Kindergarten Simple Pitch

Problem Root Problem Root Solution Benefits:

Sagging skin DHT is a hormone Saw Plametto, Look younger and
makes you look that increases as Amino Acids, and fade wrinkles
older you age and stops Hyaluronic acid all
collagen help reduce DHT
production and fuel collage
production

VSL Formula:
Havine you noticed how some women never seemed to age? Staying youthful well
into their 80s? Hi I’m Dr. Layke and we’ve identified what’s making these “super
agers” look so young.

I’m a top cosmetic surgeon in Beverly Hills. And we help celebs get firmer and
tighter skin. It all started when a monther & daughter came into my office to treat
sagging skin. Then I learned they were actually sisters! One looked 20 years
younger than the other.

We were stumped figuring out what youthful sister was doing different. Same diet,
never smokes, rarely drank alcohol. No sun damage, same stress levels.

But one sisters skin was starting to sag & crease while the others was taut & lifted.
Then we discovered 3 super agingng habits. And it all starts with DHT.

DHT is a hormone that increases as you age and inhibits collagen production. The
younger sister takes a herb called Saw Palmeto which lowers DHT Levels. And
unknowingly takes amino acids which helps fuel production of collagen.

As well hylauronic acid supplement to improve the skin’s supplemness too. We

took these ingredients and aded more into it, and called it Derma Repair Complex.
We have it to the older looking sister and in two months her skin looked younger
and wrinkled and faded.

We tested it on a bunch of other women and the results were incredible!

Unfortunately we didn’t produce enough of it so buy right now!

How To Rewrite It:

Why do some people have these amazing physical benefits while others dont? Hi
I’m a famous person who specialises in solving this problem. One day I met 2
people. One who had a humiliating experience with this program, and one who
had all the amazing benefits.

I was confused because they were doing the exact same thing. After some
research we finally uncovered the key difference that was causing all these
amazing benefits.

We found the root cause of the problem! The person with the amazon benefits was
unknowing doing these 3 things to solve the root cause of their problem. So we
took those secrets and threw it into a bottle and named it XXXX.

We gave it to the woman with all the problems and it worked amazing! Now she
has all her dream physical and emotional benefits. Insert close here.
 8. vShred - Quiz Funnel EndoMorph
Females
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Authority Figure Product - Price VSL Length

50 min

Proof of Massive Success:

Pete’s Insights: Hands down the greatest fitness VSL creators of all time. The
vShred quiz funnel is legendary and was a breakthrough when it came out. A quiz
that leads 6 different VSLs all depending on whether or not the viewer was a male
or female, thin, normal, or overweight.

Also I love the additional bonuses they stacked on. A really brilliant way to design
and sell a course for sure. Notice the last pro tip was that they needed a done for
them program designed for their body. Last tip, “You need my product”

Kindergarten Simple Pitch

Problem Root Problem Root Solution Benefits:

Can’t Lose Weight Metabolism gets Metabolic Get a 6-pack, and
stuck being very Confusion can toned and
slow boost metabolism amazing body
& burn fat

VSL Formula:
So you wanna lose weight and tone up? It’s super achievable! I’ll show you how. As
an endomorph, your body is great at raising and lowering your metabolism. Your
body evolved this ability to survive long winders without food.

But this makes losing fat long term very difficult. Which is why you might have
failed. Hi I’m Vince. I was successful trainer but had 1 big problem. I’d get clients
just like you who couldn’t lose weight no matter what.

They’d get upset and I felt crushed I couldn’t help them. But then my mom calls
me crying asking for help losing 20 punds. I felt so ashamed I couldn’t help my
mom so I setout on a journey for the solution.

I learned with Metabolic Confusion you can boost metabolism and burn fat. The
secret is carb cycling. And the science is rock solid. The next trick is to avoid doing
long cardio. It cause more problems than good.

The final trick is using a weight loss plan specifically for enomorphs like you. Thats
why I create Fat loss Extrerme. Over 450,000 endomorphs have used it to drop fat.

Here’s everything inside. Including 6-pack. Booty building. And Home workouts.

The price is a steal at $59 and you can buy it today. Order now to get the dream
body you’ve always dreamed of

How To Rewrite It:

If your X kind of person. Here’s why it’s been really difficult for you to get rid of your
specific problem.
Expert explains how he discovered this was the root cause of the probme. Tries and
fails to fix it.

Finally has a breaking point and feels the emotional pain that forces him to find a
breakthrough. Uncoveres the fix to the root cause of the probme.

Explains in 3 step plan to fix it. Creates a course the helps people implement this
plan. Inspires people to buy today!

9. vShred - Testosterone Booster

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Authority Figure Product - Price $49 VSL Length

60min

Proof of Massive Success: Pete’s Insights: Once again certain

foods are killing a certain hormone
inside of your body which is causing all
of your problems. So any supplement
VSLs are essentially the same just in
different niches.
 I mean supplement literally means “to
supplement a missing nutrient”. So
usually we’re talking about a deficiency
as you age of something.

Kindergarten Simple Pitch

Problem Root Problem Root Solution Benefits:

Feeling Sluggish & Certain foods are Taking nutrients Amazing Sex, More
Weak, and low sex spiking your corisol that block cortisol Energy, Faster
drive production which will boost back up Metbolism, Higher
suppresses your natural test T
testosterone production
production

VSL Formula:
Can you guess which one of these foods are killing your testosterone? Studies
prove it’s why guys 50+ have raging sex drives while 30s feel sluggish and weak.

Hi I’m Vince, I’m famous and helped 2.5 million people become strong and healthy.
If you’re concerned about T. There’s 1 rogue hormone killing strength and sex drive.

Fix this for amazing sex, more energyt, faster metabolism and higher T. It’s called
Cortisol. It’s important and helps with sleep and even manages macro nutrients.

However too much suppressed test production and keeps test from doing it’s job.
Here’s a big study from the University of Texas with 57 people that prove it. People
with high cortisol lose muscle, get more fat and have loswer sex drive.

Even worse your body stopps producing test because you’re not using it. Signs are
increased fat, quick to anger, trouble sleeping, and struggle with winding down.

Foods that kill T & spike corisol are seed oil, flax seed, yogurt. So stop eating those.

We discovered 5 test boosting ingredients that suppress cortisol. Here’s what they
do .

We put all these ingredients into a bottle named TestBoostMax. Men who try have
more energy, better erections and harder muscles. It’s an amazing deal and we
dont have alot available so buy today.

How To Rewrite It:

Studies reveal if you have X problem it’s because of Y. Hi I’m an expert and the
good news is I have a solution that makes you feel these amazing physical and
emotinoanl benefits.

Here’s what I found is the root cause of all these problems. Here’s a bunch of
studies that prove it. Here’s the hell on earth people experience if you don’t crack
this. Here’s 5 ingredients we discovered could fix this problem.

We did the hard work for you and put them into a supplement bottle.

Buy now before they sell out.

 10. ActivatedYou
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Authority Figure Product - Price VSL Length

Proof of Massive Success:

Pete’s Insights:

Kindergarten Simple Pitch

Problem Root Problem Root Solution Benefits:

Feel better have
Bloated, gassy, Toxins & sugars The right flatter stomach
tired, couldn’t hurt your liver combination of and have more
poop or lose which creates a prebiotics and energy
weight. problem with probiotics make a
pooping and big difference
backed up poop
causes all these
problems.

VSL Formula: I love food! I eat alot because food is my fuel. But without a healthy
gut food is not your fuel.

Hi I’m maggie Q. I’m a famous actress who kicks butt in big hollywood action films.
But 15 years ago I was total mess. Bloated, gassy, tired, couldn’t poop or lose
weight. I exercised, took vitamins but had a puffy face and looked 10 years older.
Then I discovered 1 secrets & now in my 40s i feel healthier and more alive.

If you want to feel better be happier, and have a flatter stomach & have more
energy., do this! One day I met Dr. Lipman who said my Liver was to blame. Your
liver breaks down chemicals and excretes them. But today we’re exposed to more
toxins and sugars that hurt your liver.

This creates a problem with pooping. Backed up poop causes fatigue aches and
hormonal balance. Prebiotics help but we need good probiotics to really make a
difference.

So I combined Prebiotics & Probiotics & my health issues disappeared and I

became super vibrant and alive again.

I worked with Dr Lipton on all these proven ingredients to get the perfect formula.
Friends asked for some so we created Morning Complete by Actiated You. Just add
one scoop to water for natural all day energy. Better mood and sharp thinking.

Bottles are limited and there’s a special deal so order today.

How To Rewrite It:

I love doing what most people say I’m not supposed to do because i’ve fixed the
root cause of the problem. Hi I’m famous but I used to have all these physical and
emotional problems like you. I tried everything. Nothing worked.
Then I discogerd a secret and now I have all these physical and emotional benefits.
It’s all beacuse a doctor told me THIS was the root cause of the probme. Here’s how
the root cause of the problem all happened.

This is where all your emotional and physical problems come from. I tried
everything you probably already tied and it didn’t work. Then I tried THIS thing you
haven’t tried and it worked like crazy.

I put it into a supplement so you can get the amazing physical and emotional
beneits without messing it up.

So buy today!
 11. Superbrain
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Authority Figure Product - $79/mo - VSL Length

Jim Kwik- Brain Coach to $399/yr
the Stars 30min

Proof of Massive Success:

Pete’s Insights: This formula came out of the 6 News Angles style. Vishen the
owner of Mindvalley was reading this campaign outloud himself.

Kindergarten Simple Pitch

Problem Root Problem Root Solution Benefits:

Struggles to learn, Never learned how Mental training Better memory,
poor memory, to learn protocols creativity, rapid
brain doesn’t work learning, that
like everyone elses unlocks more of
your brain power

VSL Formula:
They called him ther boy with the broken brain. After cracking his skull as a kid,
Jim’s brain didn’t work like everyone elses.

He struggled to learn, had poor memory, and was afraid to be a failure for life.
One day a mentor shares that your brain is the key to unlocking your dream life.
Inspired Jim commits to reading 1 book a week but still struggles to concentrate.
Until a coffee cup inspires him to think that maybe his problem is that he’s a slow
learned with a very slow brain.

So he commits to studying everything about the brain, memory, and learning how
to learn. He discovers mental training protocols for a better memory, creativity, and
rapid learning. Life explodes and jim goes onto be the #1 brain coach in the world.

Even teaching the entire cast of XMen to remember acting ines better. So
Mindvalley partnered with Jim to create superbrain. A new couse where you can
learn how to learn & unlock more of your brain power.

Here’s jim to explain all of transformations he’s helped people achieve. .Here’s why
this program is so important to jim and what’s inside.
Here’s the price, the bonuses and what you get with mindvalley memership.

15 day money back guarantee so buy now.

How To Rewrite It:

Tear jerking disaster happs to expert that creates the same horrible problems the
viewer is experiencing.

He struggles until a meets a mentor. Tries and fails. Then finally discovers the root
cuase of his problem. Begins taking action to fix the root cause of the problem.
And achieves heaven on earth. His dream physical & emotional benefits have now
been manifested.
He creates a course so that anyone can also achieve these dream benefits. We put
them to the test on lots of people and they work like crazy.

Sign up today!
 12. Randy Jackson Unity Health Labs
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Authority Figure Product - $59.99 VSL Length

21 min

PROOF OF MASSIVE SUCCESS Pete’s Insights

I’m not exactly sure but from my

research I do believe that Randy Jackson
got super lean on his own before Golden
Hippo went out and partner with him.

Kindergarten Simple Pitch

Problem Root Problem Root Solution Benefits:

Unexplained Leaky Gut Probiotis & Way more energy,

Weight Prebiotic Fibers less cravings, and
Gain,Digestive that can heal the better weight
Issues, Fatigue gut lining

VSL Formula:
I laughed when I heard lemons are a weight loss secret… then I looked at the
studies.

Hi I’m Randy Jackson from American Idol. My health was a mess. And then I
changed. Nothing worked. Then I found 3 secrets that changed everything. I was
diagnosed with type 2 diabetes then cracked the code. And dropped 130 pounds.

After years of research. My Dr. and I discovered my weight gain isn’t beacuwe of
food. It’s leaky gut. Understanding leaky gut has kept the weight off for over 15
yerasr. Your gut is what turns food into nutrition. You GI tract absorbs all for energy.
But if the GI Tract is overrun with bad bacteria. It can get little holes in the gut
lining.

Leaky gut lets toxic waste leak into your body. Causing aches, skin redness, rashes,
heart burn, indigestion, and heart disease.

Thats what happened to me. Digestive issues. Fatigue, Weight Gain. Dieting was
no longer the answer. You need the “Digestive Jumpstarters” to supercharge your
gut.

Probiotics, Prebiotic Fibers,and healing gut lining are key. Here’s how and the
proof. I found a doctor to make a custom formula to reverse 10 yeras of gut
damage. We perfected a formula and I had waymore energy. Less cravings, better
weight.

We call it Multi GI 5. Only formula with 12 probiotics, prebitiocs and leaky gut
ingredients to fix digestion. Here’s what’s inside.

Buy it today before it sells out!

How To Rewrite It:

I laughed when I heard this trick helps fix this problem… but then I discovered it
works! Hi I’m a celebrity who had all these physical & emotional problems.
Then I fixed them and created an amazing life with physical and emotional
benefits. A doctor showed me THIS was the root cause of my problem.
Here’s how it works. And how the root cause of the problem was created in the first
place.

This is where your physical and emotional problems come from. You need to do
these things in order to fix the root cause of the problem and achieve these
amazing physical and emotional benefits like i did.

We created a product to help you make it all easy for you.

So buy it today before it sells out!

 13. Dr Gundry’s Energy Renew
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Authority Figure Product - $59.99 VSL Length

34:12

PROOF OF MASSIVE SUCCESS Pete’s Insights

Alot of the best VSLs hover around 1

simple trick. 1 thing they have to do. 1
rogue ingredient that fucks everything
up.

People love to buy that 1 simple thing

and are always looking for that easy fix.
Make your VSLs simple. The 1 Simple
Trick marketing angle will never die.

Kindergarten Simple Pitch

Problem Root Problem Root Solution Benefits:

Low Energy Oxidation slows Phytochemicals in Maximum energy,
your heart which berries can slow healthy
reduces nutrient down oxidation so metabolism, and
supply to your your heart cells feeling young!
body. can repair and
make more APT.

VSL Formula:
Knowing what happened ato this brown banna is the key to getting your energy
back. Do all your energy problems come from 1 fixable problem under your chest?

Hi I’m Dr. Gundy I”ll show you an internal switch to turn your enegy back on. Your
heart is where all your energy comes from. It keeps everything alive.

When I talk about energy i mean ATP. Your heart makes ATP every day. APT makes
your body run at full power and it all starts with heart.

Now look at this banana. This banana turns brown because oxidation. Thats what
also attacks your heart. Oxidation slows blood flow and slows nutrient supply to
your body, losing energy faster.

If you can slow down oxidation, your herat cells can repair and make more APT.
Meaning your whole body can research. Feeling younger and more alive! You can
do this with phytochemicals in berries that help slow oxidation.

Another problem is energy storage. Carnitine helps turn fat stores into energy.

There’s all these studies on it and over 300 medical papers., It’s powerful!

Good news we found a new ingredietnt that boosts ATP production even more! It’s
too hard to get these on your own. So we made it. Introducing Energy Renew!

Its the master key to maximum energy, healthy metabolism, and feeling yong.
Here’s how it works and we’re about to sell out so make sure you buy it today!

How To Rewrite It:

This weird thing holds key to solving this big problem. Hi i’m a famous expert who
wants to show you 1 switch to fix everything.
This is achieveing your benefit works. This is the 1 specific piece thats responsible
for making it all happen.

However suddenly this root cause of the problem can come around and ruin that
one little thing.

Making all these other problems appear. You can fix this doing this specific strategy
and it can create lots of physical and emotional benefits for you.

Here’s my tips, techniques, and ingredients that can do this for you with a bunch of
studies that back my science up.

However we discovered an even more powerful tip to solve the root cause of the
probme. And we turned it into a product.

It’s happed _____ and it’s been helping thousands of customers achieve their
dreams.

Buy today before it sells out!

14. Charity Water - 31M Views

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Scott Harris Water - Price 19 min 43 sec
Proof of Massive Success: Pete’s Insights

Hands down the greatest VSLs for

inspiring people to raise money for a
cause. Brilliantly produced & edited.

If you want to make a big impact on the

world. Create something like this.

They raised over $100M in 2021 and this

is their story.

Also note. If you dont make them cry,

they aint going to buy. There’s a
SERIOUS tear jerking story of a little girl
who passed away in here.

Kindergarten Simple Pitch

Problem Root Problem Root Solution Benefits:

785 million people No one was doing A charity that Kids went from
dont have clean anything to build donates 100% of drinking swamp
water wells and most proceeds to water to drinking
charities were creating clean clean water from
scams water. wells.

VSL Formula:
Hey This is Me & listen to this. I lead an organization called Charity Water. Our
mission is to bring everyone water on the planet. This is my family. And where I
grew up.

When I was 4 my mom collapsed on the floor. Her immune system failed her. And i
spent my youth taking care of her.

Then I turned 18 when I joined a band. And became a nightclub promoter. I partied
hard. I liked strip clubs and drugs.
Then I hit rockbottom. I hated my self ingulgince. And wanted to give back.
So I started applying for charities. But they all rejected me beacuse of my past.

Then I got a gig helping people in Africa detecting facial tumors. And I signed up to
be the volunteer journalist. I stopped drugs, strip clubs. To move in the other
direction.

I met a man named harris who had a ridiculous tumor. And a surgeon who’d been
helping for the past 29 years. He didn’t like these people being called worthless.
Rubbish. Or cursed.

Over 5000 people came to see our doctors. But there were too many people. And I
wanted to do even more. I kept traveling and seeing so many sick kids drinking out
of ponds with worms in it.

So many diseases caused by bad water. And they were struggling to get it. Walking
hours everyday to get it.

Dirty water is responsible for more death than all forms of violence and war. 785
million people live on planet without clean water. Twice the size of the US. Many of
them chilren dying.

So I riased $15,000. Took it to a camp in Uganda. Built 3 weeks. And took photos
and shared it.

People were shocked something actually happened with the money.

So we started charity water. Even though 42% of people dont trust charities.

So we donated 100% of donations for clean water.

A proved each water project we funded. With GPS Tracking. And Water Sensors so
we knew it’d keep working. We started blowing up all over the world. And
thousands donated.

People started giving away birthdays. Giving their birthday money to charity water.

Then one day a little girl for her birthday tried raising $300. But failed. And only
raised $220. A few weeks later she died in a car accident. So strangers started to
donating to her campaign. Within weeks she raised $1.2M raise for water.

Then 80,000 started raising money for clean water. Giving up christmas years. 12
lemonade stands. 1,000,000 people have joined to fund 50,000 water projects.

Lives around the world are being changed. And the kids are now drinking clear
water. Families were so happy and healthy.

Join us. We’ve helped 11 million people. And we want to do more.

So we created The Spring. A community of givers. A monthly subscription of giving.

100% of it goes to clean water. And well show you where your money goes.

How To Rewrite It:

Hey my name is _____. I lead an orginization called _____ with a nobile mission.
This is a little about me and my family so you know i’m trust worthy.

When I was very young a horrific thing happened to me. And in order to deal with
it i learned an important life lessons.

But when I turned 18 I said FUCK THAT and started doing stupid shit. Having fun.
Looking cool. But eventually. Basically going in the opposite direction of my lifes
purpose.

Eventually I became depressed. And wanted to get back to living life by that lesson.
So I signed up for a charity. When I leave there, I see all these horrific things
happening. So many people needing help.

Then I discovered a HUGE problem. Horrific things were happening that I knew
could be stopped. I raised some money and did a good job helping some people.
We proved that we actually did something with the money and people were
shocked.

So we decided to start an organization. That was transparent so people could

actually trust us with money. Here’s what we did differently.

Word blew up and suddenly everyone wanted to help us. Kids from all over the
world began working hard to raise money.

Until something tragic happened. Which caused the whole world to really pay
attention. And so much money was raised.

So many Lives around the world have been changed because of this.

And now we’re introducing a new product. A monthly subscription where givers
can give every month.

Sign up today and help us on our mission for clean water

 15. Truth About Liver - 20m Views
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Authority Figure Product - Price -$49 VSL Length

27 min

Proof of Massive Success:

Pete’s Insights: I love how they go directly into the root cause of the problem in
this video. Going straight for the fact that it’s an over worked liver.

Kindergarten Simple Pitch

Problem Root Problem Root Solution Benefits:

Belly Fat , Everything you eat
inflammation, bad is handled by your Powerful Feel energized,
digestion liver. So when ingredients that shrinking belly,
 sugar & toxins jumpstart your sharper thinking,
attack it, it livers health clearer skin
becomers
overworked
problems occur

VSL Formula:
If you struggle with belly fat, nothing works to remove it oif you have an over
worked liver.

Yet there is a 2,500 y/o secret to ignite your livers fat burning furnace.
Hi I’m Dr Lucille. I’m famous for helping people lose wight by fixing your liver.
Everything you eat is handled by your liver. It produces Bile that burns fat off. But if
the liver is overworked, you cant burn anything off. Thats why your belly is so big.
Sugar & Toxins are attacking your liver. But there’s 3 other big problems happening.

Age related inflammation. Bad digestive system. And low bile production.
Thankfully during my research I found sometihng that addresses all 4 things.

Research proves Artichoke extract are powerful solutions to liver health but…
You’d need to eat them everyday so I got together a team of scientists.
And created Liver Health Formula containing the perfect formula for fast loss. We
put in more ingredients all proven to address the 4 big problems of liver health.
Study after study proved how effective these ingredients all are. It’s the ultimate
formula

Today we’re releasing it to the public for the very special price. When your package
arrives take 2 capsules 20-30 minutes before your next meal.
See if you feel energized, shrinking belly, sharper thinking, clearer shin.

How To Rewrite It:

If you struggle with this physical problem it’s because THIS root cause of the
problem.

Hey I’m ____ and I’m famous for fixing the root cause of the problem. Here’s how it
works and how the root cause of the problem formed in the first place.
Here’s how these 4 things are causing all the physical and emotional pain you’ve
been experiecing.

Thankfully I’ve figured out how to fix these things. The only problem was the
remedy was hard to follow everyday. So I put it in a bottle to make it easy to follow
every day.

We added some extra things to make getting the amazing physical and emotional
benefits happen faster.

And we’re finally releasing it today to the public. Buy now before it sells out.
 16. Meticore VSL
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Authority Figure Product - Price VSL Length

Regular Guy 60Min

Proof of Massive Success:

Pete’s Insights: I do believe this got up to $16m or $20m/month on this campaign

with all the affiliates running traffic on clickbakn to this. Insanely aggressive. And
insanely bullshit.

This is the definition of “stabbing with a knife”. This kills the brand. And is the
reason why people wont ever come back to buy.

Kindergarten Simple Pitch

Problem Root Problem Root Solution Benefits:

Dangerousley low core
Overweight temperature slows Using ingredients Get your amazing
your metabolism that normalize life back. Lean
by 50% your bodies core beautiful. All while
tempurare fires up eating the foods
a slow metabolism you love
and melts fat 24/7

VSL Formula:
I almost died trying to save my son because my heart couldn’t support my weight.
Hi I’m Todd. I’m just a regular guy who lost control and got fat. Nothing worked
and I felt ashamed and guilty that my wife didn’t love me anymore.

One day I hear my son screaming for help and I end up in the hospital trying to
save him. I meet a strange doctor from Madagascar and start crying that my life
has been ruined. He says I can’t lose fat because my metabolism is 50% slower than
a slim person.

He sends me a list of ingredients that raises your bodies core temperature.

Research shows lower core temperature slows down metabolism and keeps you
fat. I saw that proof that this is the root cause ofthe problem and I tried tears of joy
and excitement.

I found a doctor who’d help source the ingredients and gives me confidence it will
work. He says, normalizing core temperature fires up a slow metabolism and melts
fat 24/7.

I partnered with the doctor. He sourced the ingredients and we put it into a bottle.
I tried it and lost 68 pounds of ugly fat while eating cake, pizza and chocolate.

My wife tried it and lost 26 pounds. And we got our amazing life back. We tested it
on 1345 people and 97% of people had their lives absolutely changed!

So we put the formula into a bottle and named it Meticore and you can buy it
today!

How To Rewrite It:

My worst nightmare just manifested. Hi I’m no famous person. I’m just a regular
guy like who who suffered from all these physical and emotional problems.
Then my worst nightmare happened and was terrified by how bad these problem
were ruining my life.

I met an expert who tells me the root cause of the problem and slips me a list of
ingredients to solve it. I do the research and finally learned how the could actually
fix the root cause of my problem.

I found another expert who could help me formulate it and that person confirms
were onto something amazing. We created the product and i tried it. All my pain
and suffering vanished and turned into an amazing physical and emotional
benefits.

I shared it with everyone I know and people are being transformed left and right.

So we named it X. Buy it today!

 17. Quietum Plus
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Authority Figure Product - $69 VSL Length

25 yr small town anatomy 60 min
professior

Proof of Massive Success:

Pete’s Insights: Similar to the city beauty VSL way above. I love how this leads with
a new root cause of the problem. People want to hear about a breakthrough
regarding the problem they’ve been struggling to solve.

An unlikely hero story.

I know a ton of affiliates who were pulling in 6-figures per day running this
campaign.

Kindergarten Simple Pitch

Problem Root Problem Root Solution Benefits:

Ringing in ear A faulty wire in the Particular Noise lifts, great

brain picks up ingredients are sleep, full energy,
electrical noises proven to cool off feel like new!
and short circus the nervous
our nervous system and boost
system brain blood flow
fxing the faulty
wire

VSL Formula:
MIT Researchers discover ear ringing caused by thin wire spiraliing from ear to
brain. Hi I’m Pat. 25 yr small town anatomy professior with a huge tinnitus
discovery.

2 years ago a screeching sound hit me out of the blue. I couldn’t focus or sleep. Drs
checked and found nothing wrong. It felt like my head was splitting in two.

Months later the ringing was so painful I snapped and the police had to take me
away. I decided to go back to the University Library, diving deep into studying and
struck gold.

An 1950s experiment where Dr’s cut the auditory nerve yet patients still had
tinnitus. Meaning tinnitus noises arn’t in the ear. Which is why people who go deaf
get tinnitus too.

Then in 2019 a study reveals a faulty wire in the brain is picking up electrical noises.
These noisy short circuits stress out the nervous system and burn brain cells.

I call a military Dr. who confirms everything. Says big pharma has been hiding the
solution. He was resistant to give me the secret formula to not lose his job yet
finally did.

All the ingredtns proven to cool off nervous system and boost brain blood flow. I
tried them. I was a miracle. Noise lefts. Great sleep Full energy. I felt like new.

We tested it on 53 people. 100% had ringing disappear! I named it Quitum PLus

and 200,000 people have tried it now.

There’s limited availability so order as much as you can today and buy right now!
How To Rewrite It:

Experts have discover the root cause of the problem is X. Hi I’m a regular guy who
started experneing these physical and emotional pains. I tried everything and it
didn’t work.

Then finally the worst case scenario happened to me. I decided to go on a mission
to solve it and uncovered the root cause of the problem. Here’s how it all works to
cause my physical and emotional pain.

I called someone who knew how to fix this and after some resistance they gave me
the formula. We created a product, and I tried it. And finally all my pain and
suffering vanished like the morning fod. It begam physical and emotional benefits!

I shared it with everyone I know and people started transforming left and right. So
we named it X and you can buy it today!
 18. Pro Dentin VSL
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Authority Figure Product -$69 VSL Length

60 min
Dentist

Proof of Massive Success:

Pete’s Insights:

I really love the introcuftion here. It’s a great question. Literally why do people find
2500 year old teeth in great shape. When most peoples teeth decay eating ice
cream?

If you can dig an find a really great question that compares two different people.
It’s worth the test. Next there’s soe big conspiracy angles in here. A doctor goes
rogue after noticing that no one else actually cares about solving the root cause of
the problem. Classic.
 Kindergarten Simple Pitch

Problem Root Problem Root Solution Benefits:

Bleeding gums. Today’s dental Probiotics Whiter Teeth,

Gum disease. Bad products are killing specifically made Sleep like a baby,
breath. Loose teeth the good bacteria for your mouth clear sinuses
that protects your
mouth

VSL Formula:
Why do 2500 y/o teeth have no cavities when most people over 40 have painful
gums and teeth? I’m Dr. Sutton, a successful Dr who quit after I realized I was never
treating the root cause.

My colleagues blindly prescribed medications without caring if it worked. One day I

met Granpa Sam who had the worst gum disease I’d ever seen.

Infected gums, bad breath, loose teeth, scared of choking while sleeping. Drs gave
him drugs for his pain, headaches, and insomnia, his life was a living hell.

I noticed all his problems came after his gums started bleeding…

I researched and found a 2500 year old pair of teeth that were perfect even though
brushes didn’t exist back then.

How could teeth survive hundreds of years in mud when your teeth gets ruined by
chocolate? Researchers uncovers your mouth’s microbiome is what keeps teeth
strong. Yet most dental products are destroying good bacteria in your mouth
causing decay.

By repopulating your mouth with good bacteria your mouth heals and health
issues disappear. Probiotics dont have correct strain for teeth so we decided to
make formula just for your mouth.

We gave it to sam. And it was a miracle. Whiter Teeth. He slept like a baby. And had
clear sinuses. We named it ProDentim. It’s 100% doctor formulated to address the
root cause of gum disease and tooth decay.

We tested it on lots of people and it worked amazing. There’s a big discount if you
order in bulk so buy right now!
How To Rewrite It:
Why do smart people have problems while dumb people have amaizng benefits?
Hi I’m an expert who quit his job after I realized the other experted never actually
cared to treat the root cause of the problem.

It all started because I met a guy who had the worst physical and emotional
problems I could ever see. He tried this and that but nothing ever worked! I found a
clue and started doing research. Then found another clue hidden in dumb people.

Then I uncovered the root cause of the probme. Thats whats’ been causing all his
physical and emotional problems. I assmbled the secrets to fixing the root cause of
the problem put it into a bottle, and gave it to the guy with the problems.

Suddenly all his pain turned into heaven on earth. Physical and emotioanl benefits.
We tested it on a bunch of people and it continued to work like crazy.

There’s a big discount if you order alot.

 19. Lean Belly Juice
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Authority Figure Product - $69 VSL Length

60 min
Regular person

Proof of Massive Success:

Pete’s Insights: I love the new packaging. People have been coming up with
whack diet supplement for a while. And these guys stand out a bit abovethe pack
with the packaging.

However it might be a waste of money spending more on that when you’re selling
a crap product with a BS mechanism.

Kindergarten Simple Pitch

Problem Root Problem Root Solution Benefits:

Grossly Toxic lipid The ingredients in Metls fat like a hot

Overweight molecule Ikaria juice butter knife.
ceramides force fat nutralized
cells into ceramides and
bloodsteam unclogs fats.
clogging organis &
slowing
metabolism

VSL Formula:

My sons screams to save my life as a black out from what feels like a heart attack.
Hi I’m Robert & 2 years ago I woke ujp in ER with 62lbs of fat crushing my heart and
liver.

I was a firefighter who hit 240lbs afer a knee injury movede me to my deskjob. I
was afraid of heart attacks and my overwierhgt wife was depressed by her fast
aging.

I tried everything. Nothing worked. My wife wanted to leave. And I felt so ashamed.
One day I find an intruder in my garage. And he points a gun at me and i black out
in terror. I woke up in the ER with family crying around me. Helpless like a beached
whale.

Dr says next time you’re dead. Never see your kids grow up. Weeks later I met
Michael. Who spent 6 months studying the longest living populations.

Heart disease and fat people disn’t exist there because of a juice they drank each
morning. He gave me the contact details of the Dr who discovered this Ikaria Juice.
Dr says the root cause of overweight people is toxic lipid molecule ceramics.

Forcing fat cells into blood steadm. Clogging organs and slowing down
metabolism. Good news! Ikaria uice Nuetralizes ceramdes and unclogs fats.

Here’s the undeniable proof and evidence the ingredients work. I tried it on me, my
wife and friends and everybody transfoemd!

We named it Lean Belly Jucie so buy it today!

How To Rewrite It:

By greatest fear manifested. Hey I’m no famous person. I’m just a regular guy like
you who had all these physical and emotional problems. I tried everything and
nothing would work. Then my worst nightmare happened and I was terrified by
how bad these problems were ruining my life.

I met an expert who tells me a story about a group of people who never
experienced the problems I have.

These people only experience heaven on earth. All the physical and emotional
benefits I dreampt of having. He introduced me to an expert of these people and
the expert reveals the true root cause of my problems.

Good news is he discovered ingredients that solve the roof cause of the problem.

There’s a ton of proof that it works and I tried it FINALLY! I achieved my dream
physical and emotional benefits.

So buy yours today!