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PREFACE
Research is the cornerstone of academic inquiry, shaping the trajectory of
educational progress and influencing teaching methodologies. This textbook,
Research Project in TESOL/TEFL, has been specifically designed for master’s
degree students majoring in Curriculum and Instruction of TESOL/TEFL. It aims to
provide a clear, comprehensive, and practical guide for conducting
educational research within the field of English language instruction.
The need for this textbook arose from the growing demand for well-structured
research training for TESOL/TEFL graduate students. As educators, we are
tasked with not only disseminating knowledge but also with generating new
insights and evidence-based practices that enhance the teaching and
learning experience. This textbook is crafted to walk students through the
multifaceted process of designing, conducting, and presenting research in
TESOL/TEFL. By demystifying the complexities of research methodology and
offering practical examples, it seeks to empower students to embark on their
research journey with confidence and clarity.
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In Chapter Four, the focus shifts to research design and methodology, where
students are introduced to various research approaches, including qualitative,
quantitative, and mixed methods. Detailed discussions on selecting the
appropriate research design, data collection tools, and analytical methods
are provided to support students in making informed decisions as they progress
through their projects.
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Contents
PREFACE .................................................................................................................... 2
CHAPTER ONE ........................................................................................................... 7
Introduction to Research in English Language Teaching/Learning ................... 7
1.1 Why Research Matters in TESOL/TEFL ............................................................ 7
1.2 Navigating Different Research Approaches ............................................... 8
1.3 Research Terminology: Speaking the Language of Research ............... 11
1.4 The Research Process: A Journey of Inquiry ............................................. 12
1.5 Embracing Research as a TESOL/TEFL Professional ................................... 13
1.6 Selecting a Research Topic in TESOL/TEFL: A Guide for Educational
Researchers......................................................................................................... 14
1.7 Writing a Research Project in Education (TESOL/TEFL).............................. 17
CHAPTER TWO ........................................................................................................ 20
Identifying Research Problem and Formulating Questions & Objectives ........ 20
2.1 Identifying a Research Problem.................................................................. 21
2.2 Writing Research Questions & Objectives .................................................. 24
2.3 Aligning Research Problem, Questions, and Objectives .......................... 27
CHAPTER THREE ...................................................................................................... 28
Theoretical Background & Literature Review ..................................................... 28
3.1 Introduction................................................................................................... 28
3.2 Importance of Theoretical Background & Literature Review .................. 28
3.3 Goals & Purposes .......................................................................................... 30
3.4 Writing a Theoretical Background .............................................................. 30
3.5 How to Write a Literature Review ............................................................... 31
CHAPTER FOUR ....................................................................................................... 34
Research Methodology & Design ........................................................................ 34
4.1 Introduction................................................................................................... 34
4.2 Selecting the Right Methodology & Research Design ............................. 34
4.3 Research Design: Planning Your Study ....................................................... 36
4.4 Structure of the Research Methodology Chapter .................................... 38
4.5 Components & Procedures ......................................................................... 39
4.6 Conclusion .................................................................................................... 43
CHAPTER FIVE ......................................................................................................... 44
Research Results & Discussion ............................................................................... 44
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5.1 Introduction................................................................................................... 44
5.2 General Tips & Guidelines............................................................................ 45
5.3 Specific Tips & Procedures........................................................................... 45
5.4 Conclusion .................................................................................................... 48
CHAPTER SIX............................................................................................................ 50
Academic Writing .................................................................................................. 50
6.1 Introduction................................................................................................... 50
6.2 Development of Ideas and Paragraphs .................................................... 53
A-Paragraph development by examples.................................................................. 53
B-Paragraph development by comparison............................................................... 59
C-Paragraph development by contrast .................................................................... 61
D-Paragraph development by narration and specific details ...................................... 62
6.3 Good Presentation of Ideas ........................................................................ 63
A-Write neatly.................................................................................................. 63
B-Write clearly ................................................................................................. 63
C-Plan your paragraphs ................................................................................. 64
D-Avoid long and unnecessary words ......................................................... 65
E-Be coherent and consistent ....................................................................... 66
F-Consider ‘register’ (suitable language & tone) ........................................ 67
G-Watch your grammar ................................................................................ 69
H-Watch your punctuation ............................................................................ 70
6.4 Editing and Revising Paragraphs and Essays ............................................. 73
6.5 Academic Document Types ....................................................................... 74
6.6 Features of Academic Writing .................................................................... 75
6.7 The Process of Academic Writing: Writing an Academic Essay .............. 80
6.8 Real Samples................................................................................................. 84
CHAPTER SEVEN Effective Reading Skills and Strategies .................................... 93
7.1 Overview of Reading Skills ........................................................................... 93
7.2 Active Reading Techniques ........................................................................ 94
7.3 Reading for Comprehension ....................................................................... 95
7.4 Online Reading ............................................................................................. 96
7.5 Critical Reading .......................................................................................... 100
7.6 SEARCH Framework for Locating Data Online ........................................ 102
7.7 Conclusion .................................................................................................. 102
CHAPTER EIGHT..................................................................................................... 104
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CHAPTER ONE
Introduction to Research in English Language
Teaching/Learning
Welcome to the exciting world of research in TESOL/TEFL! This chapter
introduces the importance of research in the field and provides you with a
foundational understanding of key concepts and terminologies that will guide
you throughout this course.
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1-Qualitative Research
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2-Quantitative Research
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but they may not be able to randomly assign students to different groups due
to existing class schedules or school policies.
4. Action Research
Action research is cyclical and iterative, meaning that the findings from one
cycle inform the next, leading to ongoing professional development and
improvement.
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Data: Data refers to the information that researchers collect during their study.
Qualitative data are non-numerical and are often in the form of text, audio, or
video recordings. Quantitative data, on the other hand, consists of numbers
that can be statistically analysed.
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will accurately assess a learner's speaking ability, rather than their reading or
writing skills.
4. Choosing a Research Design: The research design refers to the overall plan
or structure of your study. It outlines how you will collect, analyse, and interpret
your data. The choice of design depends on the nature of your research
questions, the type of data you need to collect, and the resources available
to you.
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6. Analysing Data: Once you have collected your data, you need to analyse
it to identify patterns, trends, and relationships. The methods used for data
analysis vary depending on whether you are working with qualitative or
quantitative data.
7. Interpreting Findings: Data analysis provides you with results, but research
goes beyond simply presenting numbers or descriptions. Interpretation involves
making sense of those findings in relation to your research questions, the
existing literature, and the broader context of your study. This is where you
draw connections, discuss implications, and offer explanations for what you
have found.
8. Writing the Research Report: The final stage of the research process involves
communicating your findings in a clear, concise, and engaging manner.
Research reports typically follow a structured format, including an introduction,
literature review, methodology section, results section, discussion, and
conclusion.
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The chosen topic should address current issues, trends, or gaps in TESOL/TEFL
research. It should contribute to the existing body of knowledge and have
potential implications for teaching practices, curriculum development, or
language policy.
2. Originality
While building upon existing research is important, the topic should offer a
novel perspective, approach, or application. This could involve:
3. Feasibility
5. Potential Impact
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7. Interdisciplinary Potential
Consider topics that intersect with other fields (e.g., psychology, sociology,
technology) to broaden the scope and applicability of the research.
Conclusion
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Research projects and theses, while both are forms of academic inquiry, they
differ significantly in their scope, depth, and purpose within the realm of
TESOL/TEFL studies. A research project typically represents a more focused and
time-bound investigation, often addressing a specific problem or question in
language education, and is commonly undertaken at the undergraduate or
master's level. In contrast, a thesis, particularly at the doctoral level, embodies
a far more comprehensive and original contribution to the field, demanding
years of intensive study and supervision. The distinctions extend beyond mere
length; a thesis requires a substantial original contribution to knowledge, often
challenging or extending existing theoretical frameworks, whereas a research
project may apply established theories to new contexts or explore practical
issues in TESOL/TEFL. Furthermore, the rigorous methodology and extensive
literature review characteristic of a thesis far surpasses the requirements of most
research projects. This difference in depth is reflected in the expected
outcomes: while a research project aims to provide valuable insights or solve
specific problems in language teaching, a thesis is expected to significantly
advance the theoretical or methodological landscape of TESOL/TEFL.
Ultimately, the choice between a research project and a thesis depends on
the academic level, career goals, and the nature of the contribution one aims
to make to the field of English language teaching and learning.
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Creating a realistic timeline and identifying required resources are equally vital
steps, as they prevent delays and resource shortages that could derail the
project. The data collection and analysis phases require careful planning,
including the design of appropriate instruments and the selection of analysis
methods. Establishing a writing schedule and planning for the dissemination of
findings are often underestimated aspects of project planning, yet they are
crucial for ensuring timely completion and maximizing the impact of the
research. By approaching each of these planning steps with diligence and
foresight, TESOL/TEFL researchers can significantly enhance the quality and
impact of their studies, contributing meaningfully to the field of language
education.
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1.8 Conclusion
In conclusion, Chapter One has laid a solid foundation for understanding the
pivotal role of research in TESOL/TEFL. We began by exploring the importance
of research in enhancing teaching practices, informing educational policies,
and deepening our understanding of language learning processes. The
chapter then navigated through various research approaches, including
qualitative, quantitative, mixed methods, and action research, each offering
unique insights and methodologies suited to different research questions.
We also delved into essential research terminologies, ensuring that readers are
well-equipped to engage with the language of research. The chapter
emphasised the cyclical and iterative nature of the research process,
highlighting key stages from identifying a research problem to interpreting
findings and writing the research report.
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CHAPTER TWO
Identifying Research Problem and Formulating
Questions & Objectives
In any educational research, the process of identifying a research problem
and formulating clear research questions and objectives is crucial to setting
the foundation for a rigorous and meaningful inquiry. The ability to pinpoint a
relevant, researchable problem reflects a deep understanding of the field, as
well as an awareness of the current gaps in knowledge that require
exploration. This chapter aims to guide master's students through the
systematic process of identifying a research problem that is both significant
and manageable within the scope of their academic pursuit. Furthermore, it
delves into the art of crafting research questions and objectives that are
aligned with the identified problem, ensuring that the research is focused,
coherent, and capable of contributing valuable insights to the educational
community. Through practical examples and theoretical frameworks, this
chapter provides students with the tools needed to navigate the complexities
of early-stage research design and set a solid trajectory for their studies.
Therefore, this chapter focuses on two crucial early stages of the research
process: identifying a research problem and formulating clear research
questions and objectives. These stages are crucial for setting the direction of
your inquiry and providing a framework for subsequent decisions regarding
methodology and data analysis. In the field of Teaching English to Speakers of
Other Languages (TESOL) or Teaching English as a Foreign Language (TEFL),
the ability to identify significant research problems and formulate clear
research questions and objectives is crucial for conducting meaningful and
impactful studies. This guide aims to provide educational researchers with a
structured approach to this critical phase of the research process.
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1-Start with Your Interests: Begin by considering your academic interests and
any specific areas within your field that you find particularly intriguing or
problematic. This could be a topic you've encountered in your coursework, an
issue you've observed in your professional practice, or a question that has
emerged from your personal reflections.
2-Explore Existing Literature: Once you have a broad area of interest, immerse
yourself in the relevant literature. Read widely and critically, paying attention
to the key findings, debates, and theoretical frameworks that have shaped the
current understanding of your chosen topic. As you engage with the literature,
consider these guiding questions:
• What are the key issues and debates surrounding this topic?
• What are the dominant theories and perspectives used to understand
this issue?
• What research methods have been employed, and what are their
strengths and limitations?
• What are the most significant findings and conclusions, and are there
any inconsistencies or contradictions?
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4-Assess Feasibility and Significance: Not all research problems are equally
feasible or significant. Consider the practicalities of your research project. Do
you have the necessary resources, time, and access to data to conduct this
research effectively? Additionally, consider the potential significance of your
research. Will addressing this problem contribute meaningfully to the field, and
does it align with your research interests and goals?
- Tip: Once you have a general area, narrow your focus to a specific context
that interests you. This might be a particular age group (e.g., secondary school
students), a language skill (e.g., speaking or listening), or a pedagogical
approach (e.g., task-based learning).
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- Application: You may find that many TESOL teachers struggle to implement
technology in low-resource settings, suggesting a gap in understanding how
to integrate digital tools effectively in such environments.
- Tip: Your research problem should not only address a practical issue but also
contribute to the theoretical knowledge base of the field. Make sure it
advances both theory and practice.
- Tip: After identifying a potential research problem, ask yourself: "So what?"
Ensure the problem is significant enough to warrant investigation. It should
have implications for improving practice or informing policy.
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- Tip: Ensure that the research problem is manageable within your resources
(time, access to data, participants, etc.) and your methodological expertise.
- Tip: Share your initial research problem ideas with peers, supervisors, or
colleagues to get constructive feedback. Early input can help refine your
problem and ensure it is feasible and relevant.
By following these practical steps, you will be able to identify a meaningful and
researchable problem that can contribute to both theoretical understanding
and educational practice in TESOL/TEFL.
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Research questions are the central questions that your study seeks to answer.
They should be:
3. Researchable: Framed in a way that allows for data collection and analysis
to provide answers.
Descriptive: What are the characteristics of...? Example: "What are the features
of effective online English language teaching for adult learners?"
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Causal: What effect does X have on Y? Example: "What effect does the use of
authentic materials have on the development of intercultural communicative
competence in EFL learners?"
Evaluative: How effective is...? Example: "How effective are mobile language
learning applications in improving vocabulary acquisition among beginner-
level English learners
Research objectives outline the specific goals that you aim to achieve through
your research. They should be:
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CHAPTER THREE
Theoretical Background & Literature Review
3.1 Introduction
A comprehensive and well-executed literature review is not merely a
descriptive summary of previous works, but rather a critical examination that
establishes the context, significance, and originality of your research. It requires
a deep engagement with existing scholarship to demonstrate a nuanced
understanding of the field and to effectively position your own research within
this landscape. A strong theoretical background and a well-executed
literature review are interconnected components of a robust research
foundation. They are not separate entities, but rather, should be interwoven to
create a coherent and persuasive narrative. This chapter provides a detailed
roadmap for constructing a robust theoretical foundation and literature
review, crucial for any high-quality research, particularly in education and
TESOL/TESOL MA studies.
A primary function of the literature review is to situate your research within the
existing body of knowledge. This involves identifying the key concepts, theories,
and methods that are relevant to your research topic and demonstrating an
understanding of how these elements have been explored in previous studies.
By analysing and synthesizing this prior work, researchers can articulate the
current state of knowledge, identify areas of agreement or disagreement, and
pinpoint gaps, inconsistencies, or limitations that their own research seeks to
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address. This process of positioning your research within the existing literature is
essential for establishing the context and significance of your study, as well as
for demonstrating its originality and potential contribution to the field.
Beyond demonstrating a command of the field, the literature review has a vital
role in shaping the direction of your research. By critically evaluating previous
studies, researchers can identify areas where further investigation is needed,
refine their research questions, and develop testable hypotheses. The literature
review helps to illuminate the methodological landscape of your research
area by showcasing the strengths and weaknesses of different research
designs and analytical approaches. For instance, a review might reveal that a
particular research method, while widely used, has inherent limitations that
your study seeks to overcome by employing a more robust or innovative
approach. This careful analysis of prior research methods provides a strong
justification for the methodological choices made in your own study.
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Third, a literature review plays a crucial role in shaping your research question
and justifying your methodological choices. By identifying gaps in the literature,
highlighting areas of debate or controversy, and analysing the strengths and
weaknesses of previous research designs, you can articulate the need for your
specific study and provide a rationale for your chosen approach.
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For example, if your research examines the use of technology in promoting EFL
learners' speaking skills, potential themes could include: Technology and
Second Language Acquisition, Computer-Mediated Communication and
Oral Fluency Development, and Teacher and Learner Perceptions of
Technology-Enhanced Speaking Activities.
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3-Effective Signposting: Guide your reader through your chapter using clear
signposting. Phrases like "This chapter will explore...", "The literature suggests...",
"However, other studies contend...", and "The following section will analyse..."
enhance the flow and coherence of your writing.
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CHAPTER FOUR
Research Methodology & Design
4.1 Introduction
This chapter addresses the crucial aspects of research methodology and
design, guiding TESOL/TEFL researchers in making informed decisions to
execute rigorous and impactful studies. Chapter 3 of an educational
academic thesis is where you describe the research methodology and
procedures you used to conduct your study. The purpose of this chapter is to
explain how you designed and implemented your research, what data
collection and analysis methods you employed, and how you ensured the
validity and reliability of your results.
standardized tests and statistically analysing the results to determine if the new
method leads to significant improvements.
Research Questions: The nature of your research questions should guide your
choice of methodology. If your questions explore the effectiveness of an
intervention or seek to establish relationships between variables, a quantitative
approach might be appropriate. If your questions aim to understand
experiences, perspectives, or the processes underlying a phenomenon, a
qualitative approach might be more suitable.
Research Goals: Consider the type of knowledge you aim to generate. If your
goal is to produce generalizable findings that can be applied to a wider
population, a quantitative approach might be preferable. If your goal is to
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Resources and Time Constraints: The resources available to you, including time,
funding, and access to participants, can also influence your methodological
choices. Quantitative studies often require larger sample sizes and
standardized data collection instruments, which can be more resource-
intensive. Qualitative studies, while often less resource-intensive in terms of
sample size, demand significant time for data collection, transcription, and
analysis.
Rigorous: Yields valid and reliable data to answer your research questions.
Participants: Define your target population and describe the sampling method
used to select participants. Provide a rationale for your sampling choices,
addressing issues such as sample size, representativeness, and generalizability.
Example: If you are investigating the effectiveness of a new pronunciation
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activity for EFL learners, you need to specify the age, proficiency level, and
linguistic background of your target population. You also need to describe
how you will select participants for your study. Will you use random sampling,
purposive sampling, or a combination of methods? Each sampling method has
implications for the generalizability of your findings.
Data Collection Instruments: Describe the tools and techniques used to collect
data, such as questionnaires, interviews, observations, or tests. Justify your
selection of instruments, highlighting their strengths and limitations for your
specific research context. Detail how you will ensure the validity and reliability
of your data. Example: If you are using questionnaires, describe the types of
questions used (e.g., multiple-choice, Likert-scale, open-ended) and how you
will ensure their clarity, relevance, and cultural appropriateness. If you are
conducting interviews, outline the interview protocol, including the key
questions and probes you will use to elicit rich, detailed responses from your
participants.
Data Analysis Procedures: Describe the methods used to analyse your data.
Quantitative data analysis might involve statistical techniques such as t-tests,
ANOVA, or regression analysis. Qualitative data analysis might involve
techniques such as thematic analysis, discourse analysis, or grounded theory.
Explain how your chosen analytical approach aligns with your research
questions and the type of data collected.
Timeline: Create a realistic timeline for completing the different stages of your
research
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- Introduction: This section provides an overview of the chapter and its main
objectives. It also briefly summarizes the research problem, questions, and
hypotheses that guide your study.
- Research Design: This section describes the overall approach and rationale
of your research. It explains what type of research you conducted (e.g.,
qualitative, quantitative, mixed-methods, etc.), why you chose this design, and
how it aligns with your research questions and hypotheses.
- Research Context: This section provides the background and setting of your
study. It describes where, when, and how you conducted your research, who
were your participants or sample, and what ethical issues or challenges you
faced or addressed.
- Data Collection Methods: This section details the specific methods and tools
you used to collect your data. It explains what data sources you used (e.g.,
surveys, interviews, observations, documents, etc.), how you selected them,
how you accessed them, how you prepared them for analysis, and how you
ensured their quality and credibility.
- Summary: This section concludes the chapter by highlighting the main points
and implications of your research methodology and procedures. It also
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discusses the limitations and delimitations of your study, as well as the ethical
considerations and potential biases that may affect your results.
Begin the chapter with a brief introduction that highlights the purpose of the
research methodology chapter. Explain why the chosen research methods are
appropriate for answering the research questions or achieving the research
objectives.
Describe the overall research design you employed. Discuss whether your
study is quantitative, qualitative, or a combination of both (mixed methods).
Justify your choice based on the nature of the research questions and the data
required to answer them effectively.
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Explain how you collected data for your study. If using surveys, interviews,
observations, or experiments, provide a step-by-step description of the
procedures followed. Include information about the data collection tools used
(questionnaires, interview guides, etc.) and any modifications made to existing
instruments. Address issues of reliability and validity and discuss measures taken
to ensure data quality.
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9. Provide a Summary:
Throughout the chapter, ensure that your writing is clear, concise, and well-
structured. Use headings and subheadings to organize the content and guide
the reader. Clearly explain technical terms and provide definitions or examples
where necessary. Use appropriate citations to support your choices of research
methods and techniques.
Remember that these tips are general guidelines, and the specific
requirements of your academic institution or discipline may vary. Always
consult your supervisor or department guidelines for any specific instructions or
preferences for writing Chapter 3 of your thesis.
Methodology Chapter is the core of any thesis. you discuss how you performed
the study in great detail. It should be written like a recipe so that anyone could
adopt your techniques and replicate your investigation.
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Research Design and Methodology consists of three parts: (1) Purpose of the
study and research design, (2) Methods, and (3) Statistical Data analysis
procedure.
Part one, Purpose of the study and Research Design, relates the purpose of the
study and describes the research design and the variables used in this study.
Part three, statistical data analysis procedures, reports the procedure for
scoring and the statistical analysis used to interpret the hypothesis.
Introduction, stating the purpose of the part, introducing the methods, and
outlining the section’s organization.
Study participants and data sources – explain criteria and strategies used
when selecting participants and describe systems used for collecting and
storing information.
Procedures and instruments – demonstrate methods and state each step for
performing the study in detail.
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Summary of the key points: eventually, If you make a mistake in explaining your
research methods, it can make your findings invalid.
4.6 Conclusion
This chapter has provided a comprehensive overview of research
methodology and design, equipping TESOL/TEFL researchers with the
knowledge and tools to conduct rigorous and meaningful studies. By carefully
considering your research questions, selecting an appropriate methodology,
and developing a detailed research design, you can ensure that your study
effectively addresses the research problem and contributes valuable insights
to the field. Remember that research is an iterative process, and your research
design should be flexible enough to adapt to unexpected challenges or new
discoveries that arise during the research journey.
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CHAPTER FIVE
Research Results & Discussion
5.1 Introduction
This chapter guides you through the crucial stages of presenting and
interpreting your research findings, enabling you to communicate your
research effectively to the TESOL/TEFL community. The chapter emphasises the
importance of a clear, concise, and compelling presentation of results,
whether derived from quantitative or qualitative analyses. It explores the
significance of grounding your discussion in the research literature, critically
evaluating your findings, and highlighting their implications for theory,
research, and practice.
The analysis and presentation of research data are not merely technical
exercises but integral aspects of the research process that demand rigour,
transparency, and intellectual honesty. Researchers have an ethical
responsibility to ensure that their data analysis is thorough and accurate,
avoiding selective or misleading interpretations. The chapter provides
practical guidance on how to organise and present your findings in a way that
is accessible, engaging, and informative for your target audience. It
underscores the importance of using visual aids, such as tables and figures,
effectively to present complex data in a clear and concise manner.
Furthermore, this chapter emphasises that the discussion section is not merely
a summary of findings but a space for critical analysis, interpretation, and
synthesis. You should engage with the existing research literature, comparing
and contrasting your findings with previous studies and highlighting the unique
contributions your research makes to the field. It's important to acknowledge
the limitations of your study and address any unexpected findings, offering
plausible explanations and suggesting avenues for future research. The
chapter concludes by reiterating the importance of drawing meaningful
conclusions that stem directly from your findings, highlighting their practical
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research. Here are some detailed and useful tips to help you write an effective
Chapter 4 in your thesis:
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4. Support your claims with evidence: Use specific examples or quotations from
your data to support the claims you make during the discussion. Referencing
the data directly helps strengthen the credibility of your arguments and allows
readers to evaluate the validity of your interpretations.
8. Be concise and focused: While it's crucial to provide sufficient detail, avoid
unnecessary repetition or excessive data presentation. Keep your discussion
focused on the research questions or hypotheses and stay within the scope of
your study. Use clear and concise language to convey your ideas effectively.
9. Use citations and references: Support your analysis and interpretation with
relevant citations and references to the existing literature. Cite the sources you
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used to inform your research design and methodology, as well as studies that
support or challenge your findings. Follow the appropriate citation style (e.g.,
APA, MLA) as required by your institution.
10. Seek feedback and revisions: After completing your initial draft, seek
feedback from your advisor, committee members, or other experts in your field.
Incorporate their suggestions and revise your chapter accordingly. Iterative
revisions and feedback will enhance the clarity and coherence of your
research results and discussion.
5.4 Conclusion
Chapter 4 of an educational academic thesis is typically where the researcher
presents the results of their study and discusses their implications. This is a critical
chapter, as it is where the researcher demonstrates the value of their work and
provides evidence to support their conclusions.
• Start by re-stating the purpose of your study and the research questions
you were trying to answer. This will help to orient the reader and provide
context for the results that you are about to present.
• Present your results in a clear and concise way. Use tables, figures, and
other visuals to help illustrate your findings. Be sure to label all of your
tables and figures clearly and provide a brief explanation of what they
show.
• Discuss the implications of your results. How do your findings contribute
to the existing body of knowledge? What are the practical implications
of your research?
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• Compare your results to the findings of other studies. This will help to
contextualize your findings and demonstrate the extent to which they
are consistent with or diverge from previous research.
• Consider the limitations of your study. What factors could have
influenced your results? What are some areas for future research?
• Write in a clear and concise style. Avoid using jargon or technical
language that your reader may not understand.
• Proofread your work carefully before submitting it. Make sure that there
are no errors in grammar or spelling.
• Here are some additional tips that are specific to educational research:
• Use educational theories and frameworks to frame your discussion. This
will help to demonstrate the relevance of your findings to the field of
education.
• Consider the implications of your findings for educational practice. How
can your findings be used to improve teaching and learning?
• References: Cite all of the sources that you used in your research. This will
help to demonstrate the rigor of your work and provide your reader with
a starting point for further research.
By following these tips, you can write a Chapter 4 that is clear, concise, and
informative. This will help you to make a strong case for the value of your
research and contribute to the field of educational research.
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CHAPTER SIX
Academic Writing
6.1 Introduction
Generally, writing is a language skill, an everyday practice, a form of literacy,
a communicative activity, and sometimes a means through which learners
can be assessed, especially within the Egyptian context. As a method of
communication, for example, writing can be used to establish and maintain
contact with others, transmit information, express thoughts, feelings, and
reactions, entertain, and persuade. As a personal or private activity, it can be
a powerful tool for learning and remembering. It can be used to explore and
refine ideas, organise thoughts, and record information. At school, learners are
usually asked to use writing to display what they know, and thus, writing
becomes the medium through which pupil learning is measured (Browne, 1999:
p2).
Therefore, people write for different reasons and in a wide range of contexts.
They normally write in order to:
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In its simplest form, writing may take the form of notation: copying in
conventional graphic form something already written, or reproducing in
written form something that has been read or heard. This act hardly involves
anything more than the ability to use the writing system of the language.
Writing in the language becomes more complicated when it involves writing
meaningful segments of language which might be used in specific
circumstances by native speakers. This is the type of writing involved in things
like grammatical exercises, the construction of simple dialogues, and dictation.
In its most highly developed form, writing refers to the conveying of information
or the expression of original ideas in the target language. These distinctions
among the types of writing activities reflect the major areas of learning
involved in the writing process. Students must learn the graphic system and be
able to spell according to the conventions of language. They must learn to
control the structure according the canons of good writing. They must learn to
select from among possible combinations of words and phrases those which
will convey the meaning they have in mind (Rivers, 1981).
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think, argue, and write in certain ways. You will need to make and support
your claims according to the expectations of the academic community.
I think that the main idea here is that the topic sentence alone is not
sufficient to provide a complete argument. The reader might need to see
more details which would definitely explore the topic more to clarify it. This
elaboration might take the form of examples, description, contrast, etc.
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• Example 1:
Effective Writing: A Must in Universities
The key words or ideas in the first two sentences of the paragraph are in
bold.
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came back. More recently, I was terribly frightened after staying up late one
night to watch The Ring. I lay awake until dawn clutching my cell phone, ready
to dial 911 the moment that spooky little girl stepped out of my TV. Just
thinking about it now gives me goose bumps.
To be successful in a job interview (or for that matter in almost any interview
situation), you should demonstrate certain personal and professional qualities.
You need to create a good image in the limited time available, usually from 30
to 45 minutes. Furthermore, you must make a positive impression which the
interviewer will remember while he interviews other applicants. At all times,
you should present your most attractive qualities during an interview.
You should, for example, take care to appear well-groomed and modestly
dressed, avoiding the extremes of too elaborate or too casual attire. On the
positive side, clothes may be a good leveller, putting you on a par with other
applicants and requiring the interviewer to consider more important
qualifications. On the other hand, clothes which are too informal may convey
the impression that you are not serious about the job or that you may be casual
about your work as well as your dress. Clothes which are too elaborate, too
colourful, or too expensive suggest that you do not understand what behaviour
is appropriate for the job or that you are snobbish or frivolous. The right
clothes worn at the right time, however, gain the respect of the interviewer and
his confidence in your judgement. It may not be true that 'clothes make the
man,' but the first and often lasting impression of you is determined by the
clothes you wear.
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Besides care for personal appearance, you should pay close attention to your
manner of speaking. Since speech is a reflection of personality, you should
reflect confidence by speaking in a clear voice, loud enough to be heard without
being aggressive or overpowering. Your speech should not call attention to
itself, but it should reveal the individuality and ability of the speaker. Obviously,
you must speak without grammatical or dialect differences for which you
might be criticised or which might cause embarrassment to the employer.
Although there are cultural differences with respect to the formality of the job
interview, your speech must show you to be a friendly and pleasant person.
Speaking without a subject worth talking about will not impress anyone. You
should be prepared to talk knowledgeably about the requirement of the
position for which you are applying in relation to your own professional
experiences and interests. Knowing something about the position enables you
ask intelligent questions about the work and the requirements for the job. The
interviewer can decide from the questions asked whether you are genuinely
interested or knowledgeable. You can comment on your own training,
experience, and other qualifications in relation to the specific tasks of the
position. The interviewer can determine whether your background and
potential seem to fit the position. The position for which you are applying is not
only the safest topic for discussion, it is essential that you demonstrate your
understanding of the requirements and your abilities in meeting these
requirements.
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forms and other papers may express self-confidence. The eagerness with which
you discuss the job rather than the salary may reveal your enthusiasm for
work. You may express it also through your questions and comments about
working conditions and facilities. And, of course, your previous experiences and
success will tell the interviewer about your enthusiasm for work. Both of these
qualities – self-confidence and enthusiasm for work – are valued highly by all
interviewers.
The appropriately dressed job applicant indicates his sound judgement. His
manner of speaking suggests his friendliness and competence. His curiosity and
information about the position he is seeking demonstrate his sincerity and
potential in the job. He exhibits self-confidence through his knowledge, and he
shows his enthusiasm for work. If you display these characteristics, with just a
little luck, you will certainly succeed in the typical personnel interview.
A lasting impression
Attractive qualities
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Manner of speaking
Dress
Speech
Sincerity RP
Self-confidence
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Despite their obvious differences in length, the paragraph and the essay are
quite similar structurally. For example, the paragraph is introduced by
either a topic sentence or a topic introducer followed by a topic sentence. In
the essay, the first paragraph provides introductory material and
establishes the topic focus. Next, the sentences in the body of a paragraph
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Now discuss this: Does this paragraph include the necessary parts
discussed – topic sentence, developers, and terminator? Identify
them!
In college and university courses, the objective test and the essay exam are two
contrasting methods of evaluation commonly used to measure a student’s
grasp of subject matter. The objective test usually consists of a large number
of unrelated questions that require the student to demonstrate mastery of
details. It often leads to rote memorisation of isolated facts during the pre-test
period of study. Since the questions on the objective test are presented in true-
false or multiple choice form, the student may be encouraged to guess answers
for which he has no accurate knowledge. The essay exam, on the other hand,
usually consists of a few broadly stated questions that require the student to
organise his response in essay form. Such questions force the student to give
proof of his ability to handle general concepts. This type of exam also relies on
factual information, but there is far greater necessity for the student to
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• Example
Where to Study
One major decision which faces the American student ready to begin higher
education is the choice of attending a large university or a small college. The
large university provides a wide range of specialised departments, as well as
numerous courses within such departments. The small college, however,
generally provides a limited number of courses and specialisations but offers a
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My friend Jones is not a very practical person. Driving along a main way
one dark night, he suddenly had a flat tyre. Even worse, he discovered that he
did not have a spare wheel in his car trunk! Jones waved to passing cars and
lorries, but none of them stopped. Half an hour later, he was almost in despair.
At last, he waved to a car just like his own. To his surprise, the car actually
stopped and a well-dressed young woman got out. Jones was terribly
disappointed: How could a person like this possibly help him? The lady,
however, offered him her own spare wheel, but Jones had to explain that he had
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never changed a wheel in his life! She set to work at once and fitted the wheel
in a few minutes while Jones looked on in admiration.
A-Write neatly
B-Write clearly
Clarity is very important; so, keep sentences short and try your best to avoid
complicated constructions with unnecessary subordinate clauses. It is far
better to cut long sentences into short ones by the use of punctuation. The
following example taken from a Government publication illustrates the case
of a very long sentence which could be written better:
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Thus, one long sentence has been cut into THREE, and made simpler and
clearer.
• Paragraphs break the text into units, and this makes reading and
understanding easier;
• There should be only one theme (topic) per paragraph. Therefore,
paragraphs help the organisation of one’s thoughts;
• Each paragraph has to contain a topic sentence; that is a sentence
stating the theme of the paragraph. This sums up for the reader what
the writer is trying to say;
• Each paragraph should end on a transition which introduces the next
paragraph. This helps the reader to follow the reasoning structure.
Paragraphs can have many sentences, so long as the unity of the theme is
preserved. There should be only one theme per paragraph. If the paragraph
is a long one, it may be desirable to put the topic sentence at the beginning.
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However, there is no hard or fast rule; the topic sentence can go wherever it
fits.
However, in some cases, the long word is better because it describes the
meaning more accurately. Moreover, there are occasions when long words
are called for, because they either add to the meaning or improve the rhythm
of the sentence. For example: "The moon-landing was a significantly
memorable achievement" is stronger than: "The moon-landing was a
great feat to remember".
Unnecessary words are those words which add nothing to the meaning of
the sentence. Sometimes, we – as English learners – add some empty or
unnecessary words that would add nothing to the meaning of the sentence.
Some of us, for example, would prefer to start writing, especially when
introducing a topic, with specific phrases or starters, such as: 'As a matter of
fact……', 'There is no doubt that …….', 'Generally speaking ……', and 'Needless
to say…..'. Those starters can be removed or replaced by shorter ones (or just
a single word) to convey the same meaning. Sometimes, we repeat ourselves
by writing many synonyms (Don’t panic! All of us – as Arabic speakers – did
this!). For example, we might write down a sentence like this: The Maths test
was so hard, difficult, complicated and tricky! Perhaps, just one of the
above adjectives is sufficient to do the job.
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"He took out his gun, blew his nose, wiped it clean, put it in his pocket and
wondered whether it would go off"!
The sentence was not meant to be funny; its author simply forgot to keep
together the words which belonged together. It was the gun he wiped clean,
not his nose; the sentence ought to run like this: "He blew his nose: took out
his gun, wiped it clean, put it in his pocket and wondered whether it
would go off."
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Nothing is more irritating than to find the same word spelt in different ways.
If one spells 'Muslim' with a 'u' and an 'i', one must not switch to 'Moselm'
with an 'o' and an 'e'. The same applies to Koran/Quran, and to English
words like cheque/check, through/thru, and rhyme/rime.
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Pay attention to the way academic writers, for example, use language.
If it seems too dense and formal then do not copy their style. However,
if you find a book that is lucid, interesting and readable, try to work out
what makes it so clear.
Avoid being too personal: Your name appears on the front of your
essay, therefore your marker already knows that everything in the
essay is your opinion. Do not keep saying ‘in my opinion’ or ‘it seems
to me that’ etc. Have the courage of your convictions and state what you
think. If you can back up your views with evidence from sources, there
is no need to apologise or hesitate. You do not need to fear the first
person, but don’t overdo it. Present your work as a piece of cohesive
thought rather than as collection of your own responses. Avoid using
phrases such as, ‘I want to look at’ – just get on with it.
Avoid being too clever: Some of the worst grammatical errors are
caused by trying to write long, complex sentences. A short sentence is
the most powerful way to make a cogent point. However, one short
declarative after another quickly rings wooden. Similarly, do not use
words that you think you understand. If in doubt, look them up instead
of leaving them out.
Avoid slang: This does not just cover words and phrases. It also applies
to informal expressions and sentence constructions. Do not say,
‘Cicourel’s analysis of juvenile delinquency blew me away. You know
what I mean?’ You can express the same idea by saying, ‘Cicourel’s
analysis is vivid and engaging,’ or, ‘Cicourel’s observational research
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demands a strong response from the reader.’ Avoid using ‘you’ or ‘us’
for the reader of the text. ‘One’ sounds formal in everyday speech, but it
is very useful in this setting.
Tenses: Use the past tense for anything that happened in the past. If you
use the present tense to refer to an author’s argument (‘Bruce says x, y.
Brewer argues that …’) then stick with that consistently. The present
tense may be the most appropriate for certain generalizations (‘Social
stratification exists in every known society.’), but make sure that they
really do apply to the present day.
This section will point out a few common problems, and offer definitions of
some terms that may crop up in your markers’ comments. If you have serious
problems with the English grammar used in academic writing, you have to
work hard to solve them. If your markers consistently complain about your
syntax, sentence structure, tenses, pronouns and the like, you probably need
some help from specialised sources on syntax and grammar.
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Punctuation is very important; without it, words would follow each other in
an endless stream and the meaning would be lost. The role of punctuation is
to make meaning clear. I remember a funny famous example (perhaps it was
a joke about what male students wrote, and what female students in the
same classroom wrote) that shows the importance of punctuation:
A full-stop (.) is needed to end the sentence, when a complete meaning has
been reached. However, three full-stops (…) placed one after the other mean
that words have been left out in a quotation; ‘Let me tell you … I hope you
agree.’ Or to indicate that the sentence has been left unfinished deliberately,
‘I could go on and on…’
The colon is used to introduce the words which follow it. 'My shopping list
reads: 12 eggs, 1 lb butter, 2 lbs sugar…' To introduce direct speech or a
quotation. Then he said: 'After all …'
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The semi-colon is very useful, especially because it is less final than a full-
stop. It can be used between sentences which are complete in themselves, to
indicate that there is a connection between their meaning: 'I disliked her at
first sight; she looked sloppy in her jeans and her kinky hair dyed green
was unkempt'. A full-stop after 'sight' would cut off the trend of thought
while the insertion of ‘because’ would weaken the meaning.
Because the semi-colon is less than a full-stop, but more than a comma, it
is useful to break up long sentences which already have commas in them.
Here is an example taken from Samuel Johnson:
'The notice which you have been pleased to take of my labours, had it been early had
been kind; but it has been delayed until I am indifferent, and cannot impart it; till I
am known and do not want it'.
The comma is a useful stop, especially when reading out loud; it gives you
time to breathe. There are as many different ways of using commas as there
are styles of writing. However, here are 9 different cases when commas must
be used:
• Before and after speech: ‘I must ask you to repeat these words,’ said
the priest, ‘before I can pronounce you man and wife.’
• When listing things, qualities, ideas or clauses: ‘Fear, love, hate,
hunger and death are man’s lot’. ‘His dedication to office, his endless
energy, his honesty and his generosity will long be remembered.’
• To separate words of the same part of speech: Look at these
examples:
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Moreover, there are many other punctuation marks can be used for
different purposes. These include:
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It should be clear that getting your thoughts down on paper is not the final
stage of writing a good paragraph or essay. There remains the rewriting of
the first draft so as to shape your ideas into a carefully styled composition.
Nowadays, computers and other electronic devices and software have made
the editing and redrafting process even easier and more manageable.
Ordinarily, editing involves changes at three points: between sentences,
within sentences, and in individual words.
At the word level, spelling and capitalisation are checked, but more
creatively, words are often changed. A different word may be substituted for
the original word because it is easier to understand, is more colourful, gives
a more precise meaning, or provides variety.
Finally, for smoothness and balance, changes are made between sentences
or paragraphs. Such changes, designed to clarify relationships between
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There are many types of academic documents, which do not look like such
informal and/or personal documents like newspaper, magazines, and
personal diaries. These include:
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Academic writing in English is linear, which means it has one central point
or theme with every part contributing to the main line of argument, without
digressions or repetitions. Its objective is to inform rather than entertain. As
well as this it is in the standard written form of the language. There are eight
main features of academic writing that are often discussed. Academic
writing is to some extent: complex, formal, objective, explicit, hedged, and
responsible. It uses language precisely and accurately.
a) Complexity
b) Formality
1. colloquial words and expressions: "stuff", "a lot of", "thing", "sort of".
2. abbreviated forms: "can't", "doesn't", "shouldn't"
3. two word verbs: "put off", "bring up"
4. sub-headings, numbering and bullet-points in formal essays -
but use them in reports.
5. asking questions.
c) Precision
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d) Objectivity
The question of what constitutes "language proficiency" and the nature of its
cross-lingual dimensions is also at the core of many hotly debated issues in the
areas of bilingual education and second language pedagogy and testing.
Researchers have suggested ways of making second language teaching and
testing more "communicative" (e.g., Canale and Swain, 1980; Oller, 1979b) on
the grounds that a communicative approach better reflects the nature of
language proficiency than one which emphasizes the acquisition of discrete
language skills.
We don't really know what language proficiency is but many people have
talked about it for a long time. Some researchers have tried to find ways for us
to make teaching and testing more communicative because that is how
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A reader will normally assume that any idea not referenced is your own. It is
therefore unnecessary to make this explicit.
Don't write: "You can easily forget how different life was 50 years ago."
Write: "It is easy to forget how difficult life was 50 years ago."
e) Explicitness
For example, if you want to tell your reader that your line of argument is
going to change, make it clear.
The Bristol 167 was to be Britain's great new advance on American types
such as the Lockheed Constellation and Douglas DC-6, which did not
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have the range to fly the Atlantic non-stop. It was also to be the largest
aircraft ever built in Britain. However, even by the end of the war, the
design had run into serious difficulties.
If you think that one sentence gives reasons for something in another
sentence, make it explicit.
If you think two ideas are almost the same, say so.
Marx referred throughout his work to other systems than the capitalist
system, especially those which he knew from the history of Europe to
have preceded capitalism; systems such as feudalism, where the
relation of production was characterized by the personal relation of the
feudal lord and his serf and a relation of subordination which came from
the lord's control of the land. Similarly, Marx was interested in slavery and
in the classical Indian and Chinese social systems, or in those systems
where the ties of local community are all important.
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This has sometimes led to disputes between religious and secular clergy,
between orders and bishops. For example, in the Northern context, the
previous bishop of Down and Connor, Dr Philbin, refused for most of his
period of leadership in Belfast to have Jesuits visiting or residing in his
diocese.
If you know the source of the ideas you are presenting, acknowledge it.
McGreil (1977: 363-408) has shown that though Dubliners find the English more acceptable
than the Northern Irish, Dubliners still seek a solution to the Northern problem within an all-
Ireland state.
NOT
Although Dubliners find the English more acceptable than the Northern Irish, Dubliners still
seek a solution to the Northern problem within an all-Ireland state.
NOT
Researchers have shown that though Dubliners find the English more acceptable than the
Northern Irish, Dubliners still seek a solution to the Northern problem within an all-Ireland
state.
e) Accuracy
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Some students do not get high scores in these courses, not mainly because
they are not well-informed in the subject or do not have much knowledge,
but simply because they are not able to compose an academic essay! An
academic essay, as the table below indicates, should be characterized by:
1. being centred around one main topic that should involve some minor
topics;
2. having: (1) an introduction (in which the learner/writer should
introduce the topic at hand). This includes setting the scene and
stating the main topic/thesis/claims that the writer wants to defend;
(2) a body, which is composed of some paragraphs (usually three or
more), that usually develop an idea with some details, examples,
illustrations, etc. This involves arguing about something, and
supporting the main argument logically and coherently; (3) a
conclusion that usually summarises the main argument and gives a
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final note to the reader. This might include mentioning briefly the
main ideas;
3. going through a provisional and developmental process of: mapping,
brainstorming, planning, drafting, re-drafting, revising, editing, and
writing a final draft;
4. requiring many skills, such as: (1) Composition & linguistic skills:
These include things like: how to utilize vocabulary and grammatical
competence to produce accurate words, phrases, sentences, and
paragraphs; the ability to properly express oneself; the ability to
develop an idea using supporting examples and details; the ability to
create shifts and transitions between ideas/points; the ability to
summarize a section by, for example, removing unnecessary details;
the ability to use punctuation marks accurately and functionally; the
ability to move certain sentences back and forward as required; (2)
Research skills: These skills involve: how to choose and search for a
topic; how to identify the appropriate resources and references
needed for getting information about the topic (e.g. books, articles,
websites, and research papers); (3) Organizational skills: These
relate to organizing ideas, taking notes, suggesting a time frame, and
employing time and resources efficiently; (4) Reading skills: These
include things like reviewing academic and relevant resources and
skimming and/or scanning some texts (both online and offline); (5)
Computer and electronic skills: These include the skills of employing
computer and the Internet for composing the essay (e.g. using
keyboard for composing the essay, copying and pasting texts, editing
and saving the document, and sharing the document online with
others).
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writing paragraphs
typing/word-processing
if possible.
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checking style
checking organisation,
references etc.
Sample 1:
Abdallah, M. M. S. (2011). Web-based new literacies and EFL curriculum design in teacher
education: A design study for expanding EFL student teachers’ language-related literacy
practices in an Egyptian pre-service teacher education programme. PhD Thesis. Graduate
School of Education, College of Social Sciences and International Studies, University of
Exeter, England, UK.
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marks a shift from page to screen. More specifically, the development of Web
2.0, a new generation of the Web that has been enabling new functions and
possibilities for learning such as social networking, easy publishing online, and
collaborative construction of knowledge (Alexander, 2006; Parker & Chao,
2007), imposes a new reality for language learning and practice.
Today, literate individuals should know how to gather, analyse, and use
information resources to solve problems and accomplish certain goals (Kasper,
2000). This has become crucial within English language learning (ELL) contexts
where learners are required to use English for a variety of communicative and
functional purposes. As language learners are increasingly involved in
electronic environments, they need new strategies because the ability to
communicate through information resources necessitates new literacy skills
(Karchmer, 2001). As a result, education and language learning demand a
major restructuring based on these new literacies and curricula (Kellner, 2002)
to understand the new competencies required by the Web (especially Web
2.0 technologies) along with a wide range of functional, cultural, critical, and
technological aspects deemed vital for language learning.
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The Web and other new technologies should be perceived, not merely as
products, but also as literacy tools (Coiro et al., 2008) and means towards
improving educational practices. Hence, Van Braak (2001) proposes
‘technical innovativeness’ as a key component in influencing how individuals
would enhance their practices based on technology use.
Sample 2:
What is an Introduction?
Much work has already been published on the structure of the introduction
sections of IMRD research articles. Swales (1990, 1994) in particular presents a
comprehensive account. In this section we make use of his CARS (Create a
Research Space) Model This model illustrates how an introduction is typically
shaped by its purpose of 'creating a research space'. Swales uses an
ecological metaphor to suggest that research articles are all competing for
'space'. Thus introductions have to start by establishing the significance of the
research field ('establishing a territory'); then provide a rationale for their
research in terms of that significance ('establishing a niche'); and finally show
how the paper will occupy and defend the ecological niche that has been
carved out ('occupying the niche').
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The first part of the paper develops an educational strategy for the use of more
directive `tutorial' software which can be incorporated by teachers into
curriculum-based classroom activities. This strategy is based upon coaching
'exploratory talk' and then encouraging 'exploratory talk' in group work around
computers within different curriculum subject areas. 'Exploratory talk' is
defined, through the findings of a survey of research on collaborative learning,
as that kind of interaction which best supports group problem-solving and
group learning. The second part of the paper reports on the implementation
and evaluation of an intervention programme which applied the proposed
strategy in primary classroom. The intervention programme was designed to
explore three research questions which arose from the educational strategy:
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Abstract
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For the past decade, the field of computers and writing has focused on literal
and metaphoric networks as possible pedagogical models. Networks can
socialize the writing process, readily
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reexamine and redefine their goals for the classroom, asking and
demonstrating how established teaching practices can be stretched and
strained with the introduction of new technological practices. Though there
is clear overlap between these two approaches to researching classroom
technologies, this article primarily participates in the second. Like Eldred &
Toner (2003), DeWitt & Dickson (2003), and Moxley & Meehan (2007), I
begin with the premise that new technologies challenge, often in productive
ways, long-held assumptions in the field of computers and writing. The
increasing perception of a “networked” pedagogy as a productive possibility
can and should encourage us to re-examine the goals and beliefs under
which we operate, even as we discuss how new technologies may help meet
those goals.
Wikis are a particularly productive site for this examination for a number of
reasons. First, as a web-based technology they clearly participate in network
culture. Wikis have steeply increased in popularity since their initial
application as spaces in which computer programmers could collaboratively
develop and share code. Now such web sites as Wikipedia and WikiHow have
put the technology to a variety of literacy uses, developing massive, and
popular, resources of collective information, aggregating copious amounts
of text as well as a variety of multimedia elements. As Purdy (in press)
observed, the online presence of Wikipedia is nearly inescapable (Wikipedia
sites often appear first on Google searches for a wide range of issues) and
serves as a testament to the growing popularity of wikis. Despite this
popularity, academia often lags behind, both in its acceptance of resources
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such as Wikipedia and in its use of wiki software (see, for example, Cohen,
2007; Purdy, in press). Given the drastic break between popular network
culture’s acceptance of these online writing environments and academia’s
resistance to them, analysing the challenges that wikis present to traditional
methods of teaching promises to provide a constructive tension. This is
particularly clear when we examine new modes of composition, which can
broaden significantly in the new media environment provided by wikis, and
when we explore the critical interaction that can occur in wiki
communication between students.
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CHAPTER SEVEN
Effective Reading Skills and Strategies
7.1 Overview of Reading Skills
Reading is an integral skill that goes beyond mere word recognition. It involves
a complex array of sub-skills that enable us to extract meaning from text.
Understanding the types of reading can help develop proficiency in this
valuable skill.
Types of Reading
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Extensive Reading is reading large amounts of text, usually for pleasure. The
goal is to understand the overall meaning rather than focusing on the specific
details.
Active reading involves engaging with the text to improve comprehension and
retention. This can be achieved through the SQ3R method and annotating
and note-taking.
SQ3R Method
- Survey: Skim the text to get a general idea of the content. Look at headings,
subheadings, and highlighted words.
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- Read: Read the text carefully with the aim of answering the questions you
formulated.
- Recite: Summarize the text in your own words. This will help cement the
information in your memory.
- Review: Review the material after a few hours or days to reinforce your
memory.
The main idea is the central point that the author is trying to convey. Supporting
details provide evidence or examples to back up the main idea. Identifying
these components can help you understand the text's message.
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By the same token, Leu et al (2007) conclude that video recordings for some
adolescent readers while reading online suggest that readers who struggle
with offline materials may not struggle with online materials to the same degree
as long as they have the skills and/or strategies essential for online reading
comprehension. They conclude that isomorphism does not exist between
offline and online reading comprehension because if they were the same,
high-achieving offline readers would always be high-achieving online readers
and vice versa.
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The environment, medium, and ways of navigation of print and hypertext are
completely different. While both environments typically provide supportive
navigational features (e.g., a table of contents), the actual content of
hypertext is hidden beneath multiple layers of information not viewable with
traditional previewing procedures such as rapidly going through the pages of
a printed book (Coiro & Dobler, 2007). Besides, the Web itself provides many
features, such as hyperlinks, which facilitate the navigation process to the
readers.
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than reading narrative texts (e.g., Biancarosa & Snow, 2004). The difficulty
posed by informational texts becomes more challenging when readers are to
define a specific task, search for information, and select the resources
themselves.
The nature of the text itself is different as online texts are more complicated
than linear, printed texts. Online texts appear in types new to the readers,
which Coiro (2003a/b) identifies as nonlinear, multiple-media, and interactive
texts, to clarify the message transferred. Readers online are provided with
options like clicking a hyperlink to access further details on a particular word or
item. Now that online texts involve new forms and ways of arranging and
structuring textual material introducing new challenges for readers, especially
second and foreign language readers (Anderson, 2003: p4), higher levels of
inferential reasoning and comprehension monitoring strategies are
demanded.
There are many new skills and strategies needed within an online reading
context. Leu et al. (2008: pp322-37) detail some of these skills and strategies as
follows: (1) Online reading is usually initiated by a pre-reading question or query
that guides the reading process, something not necessarily needed within a
print-based reading context; (2) locating information online is another aspect
of online reading comprehension that requires new skills (e.g., using a search
engine, reviewing returned results, and quickly reading a webpage to locate
links to required data). Locating information may create a bottleneck for the
subsequent skills of online reading comprehension in the sense that those who
possess those online skills necessary to locate information can continue to read
and solve their problem, while those who do not possess them cannot; (3)
During critical evaluation, a unique set of skills are required. Whereas critical
evaluation is important when reading offline, it is perhaps more important while
reading the Web where anyone can publish anything. Therefore, it is vital to
identify to what extent the online information is reliable. The unique nature of
the Web, as a source of information that differs from traditional resources, has
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been thoroughly explored, mostly by librarians, who have highlighted the need
for greater critical evaluation of Web-based resources (see Barker, 2004 and
Kirk, 1996, for examples of evaluative schemes).
Reading online is a complicated process that is not simply defined around the
encoding of online texts, or just the purpose, task, and context. Instead, as Leu,
et al (2008: pp332-36) argue, online reading comprehension is also defined by
a process of self-directed text construction that occurs as readers navigate on
their own through an infinite informational space to construct their own versions
of texts encountered online.
Many new reading sub-skills and strategies have emerged to express the new
online processes. In this context, Leu (2002) suggests that developing more
critical reading skills within networked ICT will be an important aspect of the
new literacies to face the challenge ahead. Clarifying the nature of the
challenge we have today, Eagleton and Dobler (2007) suggest that in order to
be Web literate, we should meet the demands of the Web, which are
associated with reading by acquiring new skills and strategies.
2.2.1 Students should understand the features of online texts represented in the range of
symbols, cueing systems, and multiple-media formats (e.g. icons and animated symbols).
2.2.2 Students should understand the nature of hypertext that entails new screen-based
interactions between word, image and sound.
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2.2.3 Students should look for and work out the overall meaning of an online message that has
been formulated in a complicated digital context.
2.2.4 Students should focus on a particular question/problem/query to guide the online reading
process.
2.2.5 Students should try to activate their prior knowledge and make use of their background
information while dealing with new online texts.
2.2.6 Students should be able to read across an evolving range of online texts through skimming
and scanning websites.
2.2.7 Students should be able to navigate through links and connected pages to construct
meanings that meet goals and/or answer questions.
2.2.8 Students should be able to employ new reasoning and comprehension strategies to deal
with nonlinear, interactive online texts.
2.2.9 Students should be able to read purposefully, selectively and pragmatically within an
online environment to accomplish their objectives (e.g. by selecting relevant information).
2.2.10 Students should be able to make use of cues (e.g. captions, icons, hyperlinks, and
interactive graphics) to identify relevant and important ideas.
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2.3.1 Students should understand some important facts about websites that relate to reliability
(e.g. the fact that each website has its own agenda, perspective, and bias).
2.3.2 Students should be able to identify a website’s form (e.g. blog, forum, or advertisement)
and general purpose (e.g. entertainment, educational, or commercial) in order to evaluate the
reliability of online sources.
2.3.3 Students should be able to identify the type of webpage content (e.g. a book, an article, a
brochure, and an archive).
2.3.4 Students should be critical and reflective by going beyond the simple decoding and
comprehension of the online text.
2.3.5 Students should be able to employ critical thinking skills and strategies while
investigating web-based information to discover its accuracy, validity, reliability, and
appropriateness to the task at hand.
2.3.6 Students should make use of their background knowledge to evaluate what they read
online and to question the relevant social, political, and ideological elements.
2.3.7 Students should make critical, informed judgments about online information, which
include: recognising bias, identifying the authors and their purposes, and distinguishing the
commercial content from the academic one.
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2.3.8 Students should be able to use clues on a webpage that help with evaluating it as an
information source (e.g. clues in a URL or web address that help with determining a website
location and type).
2.3.9 Students should be able to ask and answer evaluative questions such as: Is the
information accurate? Is the author an authority on the subject? Is the information current and
timely?
2.3.10 Students should be able to compare and contrast the reliability of the information they
find by investigating multiple sources on the same topic.
7.7 Conclusion
This chapter aims to equip student teachers with the necessary skills to
navigate diverse reading demands effectively. By mastering these strategies,
they can enhance their understanding, critical thinking, and overall teaching
proficiency in English language education. Through the application of these
techniques, student teachers will be prepared to foster a similar depth of
reading comprehension and analytical skills in their future classrooms.
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CHAPTER EIGHT
Citations and Referencing Styles
8.1 Introduction
This chapter explores the crucial role of citations and referencing styles within
the domain of educational research, with a specific focus on TESOL/TEFL. It
emphasizes the importance of accurate attribution as an ethical and
academic imperative, examining the potential consequences of neglecting
proper citation practices. Additionally, the chapter will provide an overview
of common referencing styles prevalent in TESOL/TEFL research, highlighting
their key features and offering practical guidance on avoiding common
pitfalls.
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Chicago/Turabian: The Chicago Manual of Style offers two distinct formats for
citations and references: notes-bibliography and author-date. The notes-
bibliography system utilizes footnotes or endnotes for citations, while the
author-date format aligns more closely with APA style. Chicago's versatility has
led to its adoption in a wide range of disciplines.
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In-Text Citations
APA style utilizes an author-date system for in-text citations, requiring the
inclusion of the author's last name and the year of publication within the body
of your text. This approach serves to immediately attribute ideas and findings
to their original sources.
Narrative Citations: When incorporating the author's name into your sentence,
place the publication year in parentheses immediately after the author's
name.
Multiple Authors: For sources with three or more authors, APA style implements
a shortened format using "et al." after the first author's name in all in-text
citations, except in cases where it might create ambiguity.
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Reference List
A cornerstone of APA style, and indeed of all formal referencing styles, is the
comprehensive list of sources cited within your paper. This list, typically titled
"References," is placed at the end of your document and adheres to specific
formatting rules that ensure consistency and ease of retrieval. The sources
provide several key guidelines for crafting an APA reference list:
Author Information: List authors' last names followed by their initials, separated
by commas.
Example: (2018)
Title: Capitalize only the first word of the title and subtitle, as well as any proper
nouns. Italicize the titles of books and journals.
Publication Information:
Journal Articles: Provide the journal title, volume number (italicized), issue
number (in parentheses), and page range.
DOI (Digital Object Identifier): Whenever available, include the DOI for journal
articles, books, and other digital sources. Present DOIs as hyperlinks, omitting
the "DOI:" prefix.
Example: doi.org/10.1080/13670050.2012.688608
Retrieval Dates: For online sources with content that may change over time,
provide the date you accessed the information using "Retrieved Month Day,
Year" format.
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8.6 Seeking Help and Support: You Don't Have to Navigate Alone
Mastering the art of citations and referencing is an ongoing endeavour. As
new source types emerge and styles evolve, researchers must remain vigilant
in updating their knowledge and seeking guidance when needed. The
sources, along with our conversation history, highlight several valuable
avenues for seeking help and support:
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