IA3 High-Level Annotated Sample Response
IA3 High-Level Annotated Sample Response
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IA3 high-level annotated sample response
February 2023
Assessment objectives
This assessment instrument is used to determine student achievement in the following
objectives:
2. apply understanding of special relativity, quantum theory or the Standard Model to develop
research questions
3. analyse research evidence about special relativity, quantum theory or the Standard Model
4. interpret research evidence about special relativity, quantum theory or the Standard Model
5. investigate phenomena associated with special relativity, quantum theory or the Standard
Model through research
6. evaluate research processes, claims and conclusions about special relativity, quantum
theory or the Standard Model
7. communicate understandings and research findings, arguments and conclusions about
special relativity, quantum theory or the Standard Model.
Note: Objective 1 is not assessed in this instrument.
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Instrument-specific marking guide (ISMG)
Criterion: Research and planning
Assessment objectives
2. apply understanding of special relativity, quantum theory or the Standard Model to develop
research questions
5. investigate phenomena associated with special relativity, quantum theory or the Standard
Model through research
• systematic and effective analysis of qualitative data and/or quantitative data within the
sources about special relativity, quantum theory or the Standard Model demonstrated by
- the identification of sufficient and relevant evidence
- thorough identification of relevant trends, patterns or relationships 5–6
- thorough and appropriate identification of the uncertainty and limitations of evidence
• insightful interpretation of research evidence about special relativity, quantum theory or
the Standard Model demonstrated by justified scientific argument/s.
• effective analysis of qualitative data and/or quantitative data within the sources about
special relativity, quantum theory or the Standard Model demonstrated by
- the identification of relevant evidence
- identification of obvious trends, patterns or relationships 3–4
- basic identification of limitations of evidence
• adequate interpretation of research evidence about special relativity, quantum theory or
the Standard Model demonstrated by reasonable scientific argument/s.
• rudimentary analysis of qualitative data and/or quantitative data within the sources about
special relativity, quantum theory or the Standard Model demonstrated
- the identification of insufficient and irrelevant evidence
- identification of incorrect or irrelevant trends, patterns or relationships 1–2
- incorrect or insufficient identification of limitations of evidence
• invalid interpretation of research evidence about special relativity, quantum theory or the
Standard Model demonstrated by inappropriate or irrelevant argument/s.
• invalid interpretation of research evidence about special relativity, quantum theory or the
Standard Model demonstrated by inappropriate or irrelevant conclusion/s
• superficial evaluation of the research processes, claims and conclusions about special
relativity, quantum theory or the Standard Model demonstrated by 1–2
- cursory or simplistic statements about the quality of evidence
- application of insufficient or inappropriate findings of the research to the claim
- ineffective or irrelevant suggestions
Task
Gather secondary evidence related to a research question in order to evaluate the claim. Develop
your research question based on a number of possible claims provided by your teacher.
Obtain evidence by researching scientifically credible sources, such as scientific journals, books
by well credentialed scientists, and websites of governments, universities, independent research
bodies or science and technology manufacturers. You must adhere to research conventions.
Sample response
Criterion Marks allocated Provisional marks
Communication 2 2
Assessment objective 7
Total 20 20
The annotations show the match to the instrument-specific marking guide (ISMG) performance-
level descriptors.
Communication [2]
The sun emits energy in the form of electromagnetic radiation:
approximately 99% of this radiation is in the form of visible light, ultraviolet
fluent and concise use and infrared (Villanueva, 2010). When this light reaches Earth, the
of scientific language
and representations
atmosphere reflects some of this radiation and the rest is absorbed by
Earth’s surface (Australian Government, 2021). The surface then re-
Data is clearly emits this light (most being infrared) into the atmosphere. Greenhouse
represented so that the gases (GHGs) are then responsible for absorbing some of this radiation,
trends, patterns and
relationships can be keeping it close to Earth’s surface (Figure 1) (Australian Government,
easily identified. 2021). This is called the greenhouse effect and the process maintains
Data is clearly
represented so that the
trends, patterns and
relationships can be
easily identified.
Evidence
M. Scheffer et. al (2006) investigated a series of historical fluctuations in
Analysis and carbon concentrations and climate change. At the time of publication,
interpretation [5–6]
many believed that an increase in CO2 emissions would increase the rate
identification of of photosynthesis, hence, leading to a negative feedback system in which
sufficient and relevant the Earth could be cooled. Furthermore, the focus of the most research
evidence
was understanding the effect that doubling CO2 concentrations in the
The evidence is atmosphere would cause. Some estimated that this could be as high as
appropriate for the 11.5°C. Prior efforts to construct models proved considerably inaccurate
purpose of responding
to the research and did not take into account positive feedback systems. Scheffer et. al
question. It is applicable believed positive feedbacks could override pre-existing negative
and directly connected feedbacks.
to the formation of the
scientific argument.
Research uncovered that as CO2 emissions were increased, the rate of
other gases, such as methane and water vapour also increased, creating
Analysis and
interpretation [5–6]
Figure 4: The proposed impact of a positive feedback on equilibrium.
thorough
identification of
relevant trends, Figure 3 illustrates the relationship between rising temperature and
patterns or greenhouse gas concentration. In context of water vapor, when the
relationships concentration increases to the point of equilibrium (intersection of lines) it
The identified will rain, leading to a decrease in water vapour. Figure 4 shows the
relationships are impact the positive feedback of CO2 concentration has on the point at
adequate for the which equilibrium is reached. Originally, the increase was thought to
purpose of responding
to the research question reach equilibrium at 500ppm and increase global temperature by ~2°C.
and can support a valid The research found that the effect of the feedback would increase the
conclusion. They have ppm by a further 20% and temperature would increase a further 1°C.
direct bearing upon and
are applicable to the
formation of the Extrapolation of this data to the claim, suggests that as CO2 is increased,
scientific argument. water vapor feedback loops are created which introduce more GHGs to
the atmosphere. This leads to increased absorption of blackbody
radiation, intensifying the greenhouse effect and thus, modelling climate
Analysis and change.
interpretation [5–6]
acknowledgement of
sources of information
through appropriate
use of referencing
conventions
Figure 6: Relationship between surface temperature and water vapor after a 10%
increase in CO2.
Figure 6 displays these results after processing data. It was found that
the amount of precipitable water dramatically increased following a
doubling of CO2 which heated the environment (expressed as a surface
temperature on x-axis). Specifically, as the CO2 created more heat due to
Analysis and
interpretation [5–6] the greenhouse effect, the amount of precipitable water increased
substantially. Plotted below the precipitable water-surface temperature
thorough graph, a smaller graph features the number of observations made at each
identification of
relevant trends, temperature (in thousands). The inclusion of the graph increases the
patterns or reliability and accuracy of the results.
relationships
Another limitation of the research is the age of the data which impacts its
reliability. Although global warming is an increasingly researched topic,
data around water vapor feedback is less focussed on how much it
influences climate change, and more focussed on finding methods to
reduce CO2 concentrations to stop this feedback from occurring.
Conclusion
Conclusion and
evaluation [5–6] To encapsulate the evidence provided in this report the research
question, ‘is there a relationship between the concentration of water-vapor
justified conclusion/s and carbon dioxide greenhouse gases that leads to an increase in the
linked to the research
question rate of global warming?’ can be answered confidently. It was found that
the relationship linking these greenhouse gases is called the water vapor
The response uses feedback. It is facilitated by an increase in atmospheric CO2 which
sound reasoning
drawing upon valid and consequently increases the humidity, hence, magnifying the greenhouse
reliable evidence to effect. The claim, ‘climate change can be modelled using blackbody
support conclusions that radiation’ can be partially supported as all sources’ relied heavily on
directly respond to the
research question.
metaphorical situations and were largely affected by error due to the
complicated process which changes depending on the climate. In order
to increase the reliability and validity to fully support the claim the
following improvements and extensions should be considered in the
future.
Sources of information Soden, I. H. (2000). Water Vapor Feedback and Global Warming. Retrieved
are acknowledged using
a referencing style that
from Annual Reviews:
is suitable for the https://www.annualreviews.org/doi/pdf/10.1146/annurev.energy.25.1.44
purpose of the essay. 1
Tjemkes, G. S. (1993). Water Vapor and Its Role in the Earth’s Greenhouse.
Retrieved from Harvard.edu: http://articles.adsabs.harvard.edu/cgi-
bin/nph-
iarticle_query?bibcode=1993AuJPh..46..149S&db_key=AST&page_ind
=0&data_type=GIF&type+SCREEN_VIEW&classics=YES
Turrentine, A.M. (2021, April). Global Warming 101. Retrieved from Natural
Resources Defense Council, Inc.: https://www.nrdc.org/stories/global-
warming-101