Business Writing
Business Writing
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8 common grammar mistakes to avoid in
business writing
When you’re writing for business, you want to put your best foot forward, but
when grammatical errors litter your writing, it can leave you looking less than
polished.
While perfect grammar is difficult to achieve for even the most highly skilled and
published writers, you can avoid some common grammatical mistakes with
practice.
The following are common errors writers make, and if you can avoid these 8,
you’re one step closer to being a more polished writer.
Only one letter separates the words “then” and “than,” yet they have drastically
different meanings.
“Then” is used to express a time frame. For example, “She has to complete the
assignment, then she will go to lunch.”
While “than” is used to compare. For example, “Her current assignment is shorter
than the previous one.”
While most people who read the words in context will be able to decipher the
meaning, it’s still best to avoid this mistake altogether.
For example, instead of asking “where are they going to?” you can simply ask “where are they
going?”
If you find it challenging to write a sentence without putting the preposition at the end, rewrite
it, so it doesn’t include the word.
These 3 words sound identical in speech, but they have different spellings in writing. It’s
necessary to differentiate between the different meanings to use them properly.
“They’re” is a contraction for “they are.” Ex: They’re my favorite clients to support.
“Their” refers to something owned by a group. Ex: We are using their data in the presentation.
“There” refers to a place. Ex: Do you want to go there for the retreat?
Once you have a solid understanding of the difference between the three, be sure to
double-check your writing when using them since they’re easy to mix up.
Passive language is another common grammatical mistake to avoid in your business writing.
Essentially, your writing is passive when the subject of the sentence is acted upon by the verb.
In contrast, active writing is when the subject performs the action stated by the verb and
follows the subject + verb + object formula. When you don’t utilize that formula, your writing
lacks clarity, as is the case with writing in the passive voice.
Passive sentence:
In this example
Object (Presentation) + Verb (Created) + Subject (Bobby) is the incorrect formula.
Active sentence:
In this example
A company is a singular noun. Therefore when referring to it in your writing, you want to use
the word “it” instead of “they.” While you might think about a company as including various
people and want to reflect the people in the company by using “they,” “their,” or other plural
words when referencing it, doing so is inappropriate grammatically.
Incorrect: We enjoy the airline because they can accommodate our last-minute flight needs.
Correct: We enjoy the airline because it can accommodate our last-minute flight needs.
There’s no doubt that these 4 words are similar; however, they carry different meanings that
you want to differentiate between in your writing.
“Whom” usually refers to someone who receives something: “To whom will you address this
letter?”
“Whose” refers to ownership of an item or other noun: “Whose team earned the highest
numbers last quarter?”
“Who’s” is a contraction for “who is” and identifies someone doing something: “Who’s taking
over the data analysis for Tanya?”
Using the word “Alot”
“Alot” isn’t actually a word. At least not with that spelling or in the way you typically use it.
When referring to a large number, you want to write the words separately “a lot.” For example,
“I have a lot of candidate applications to review today.”
Another similar-sounding word is “allot,” but this refers to setting aside an amount of an item
for a particular reason. For example, “I will allot the team $1,000 to get this project off the
ground.”
The subject and verb of a sentence should either be plural or singular. You can’t have a singular
subject and a plural verb or vice versa.
Incorrect: The best employees tries their best to get the job done well.
Correct: The best employees try their best to get the job done well.
In the above example, “employees” is a plural subject, and the verb “tries” is a plural verb.
But, since you can’t rely entirely on technology, understanding these mistakes independent of
these grammar tools can help you put your best foot forward in your writing.
How to edit your own writing before you hit
send
Depending on how you feel about writing, it can be a wonderful means of
communication or a daunting task that goes on forever. No matter where you
stand, knowing how to write and edit your work gives you an advantage in your life
and career. This is true whether you’re drafting a business proposal, writing an
email, preparing remarks for a meeting, and much more.
Editing your work not only lets you fix typos, but also lets you check for clarity to
ensure your key points are easily understood. After all, it can be hard to interpret
one’s intention and tone of voice in writing. Once you hit send, it’s off to the
recipient to decipher what you’ve written. With that in mind, it’s worth taking a few
extra minutes to look over and edit what you’ve written.
When editing, here are some tips to keep in mind to make the process easier and
lead to a better outcome
Write first
When you write, don’t try to make it perfect as you go. Instead, focus on getting
your ideas down on paper the first go-round. Following this process allows you to
get all of your information on paper and complete your writing’s overall structure. If
you try to edit as you go along, you will likely elongate the process, adding
unneeded stress along the way.
One strategy to ensure you do this is to set a timer and only write. Depending on
your project’s length, this could be 15 minutes, 30 minutes, or an hour. Your only
rule during this time is to write with no editing until the timer goes off.
Come back to it
Once you finish writing, it’s best to give yourself some time before beginning the
editing process. Putting some distance between the writing and editing phase will
allow you to edit with fresh eyes so you can pay attention to every detail instead of
glossing over them.
Editing your copy can be easier if you edit it in a different format than how you
wrote it. When editing your own writing, your brain is more likely to skim over it
because you know already what it’s supposed to say. This makes it easier to miss
mistakes. However, some simple changes can help undo this tendency. For
example, if you typed it on your computer, you can print it out, edit it, and then
update the word document.
Alternatively, you can write on paper, then type it on your computer and edit it.
Using this method might be more time-consuming than writing and editing on the
computer, but it can help you if the change in format makes it easier to edit.
Alternatively, you might find it beneficial to edit your copy on a different screen. For
example, you can write on your laptop and edit on your desktop. Any differences
you can create can make it easier to complete the editing process.
Read it aloud
Trying to edit your copy in your head can be challenging. Instead, read your writing
aloud and edit it. It’s also helpful if you read it how you would speak it. So, don’t
speed read to get the editing process done as soon as possible.
Take your time reading so that you can edit it properly. You’ll easily pick out places
where the sentence structure and word choices sound a little odd when you can
hear the words.
A thesaurus is also a helpful tool for you if you find yourself using the same words
repeatedly. You can utilize a thesaurus to vary your vocabulary when
communicating.
When editing your writing, here are a few things to look out for.
Extending your sentences’ length can make it more complicated for your audience
to understand what you’re saying. Instead, keep your sentences short, succinct, and
to the point.
Using the word “that” is a common yet often unnecessary writing practice. When
editing, ask yourself if “that” is needed to maintain your sentence’s meaning and
value. The same goes for other filler words, such as really, just, perhaps, and rather.
“Thing” is another word that doesn’t have the same value you might assume it does.
Instead of using the word “thing,” you can replace it with a more descriptive word.
For example:
Don’t say — The only thing to remember is you usually don’t need to use the word
“that.”
Instead, say — The only writing rule to remember is you usually don’t need to use
the word “that.”
Using passive voice is another standard yet unnecessary writing convention that
takes away from your work quality. Active voice focuses on the subject completing
an action. In passive voice, the action happens to the subject. Passive voice can be
confusing for even the best writers, so let’s look at an example.
Here’s an example of passive writing: My first home is one I will always remember.
Compare this to the active voice: I will always remember my first home.
Active voice adds more clarity and an overall better flow to your writing.
Use contractions
When editing, scan through your writing and ensure you’re making use of
contractions. It’ll help your text flow better for readers.
The average person reads at a 6th-8th grade level. This doesn’t mean you need to
speak down to your audience, but it does mean all of your writing doesn’t need to
read like a college essay. Consider using simple and shorter word alternatives were
possible, and try to avoid unnecessary jargon. The easier your writing is to engage
with, the better the reader’s experience will be.
One way to check the reading level of your text is to use Hemingwayapp.com. It will
provide you with the reading level and changes you can implement to make your
writing simpler, eliminate hard-to-read sentences, reduce passive voice, and more.
There are certain words in the English language that sound more casual and others
that give a more powerful impression. When you use power words in your writing,
you can set yourself apart with more professional communication.
Here are 20 words or phrases you can use to make your writing sound more
professional.
Provide
For example…
Don’t say: I will give you a copy of the data from last quarter’s report
Instead say: I will provide you with the data from last quarter’s report.
Receive
Don’t say: Did you get the package I sent via the pony last week?
Instead say: Did you receive the package I sent via the pony last week?
Attend
For example…
Assist
For example…
Don’t say: Do you need me to help you with the upcoming project?
Instead say: Do you need me to assist you with the upcoming project?
Discuss
For example…
Certainly
Instead of saying yes, you can use the word certainly.
For example…
Modify
For example…
In Conclusion
For example…
Don’t say: Finally, keep in mind that I will be out of the office next week.
Instead say: In conclusion, keep in mind that I will be out of the office next week.
However
For example…
Don’t say: That’s a great idea in my opinion, but upper management must sign off.
Instead say: That’s a great idea in my opinion, however, upper management must
sign off.
Moreover or furthermore
Instead of saying also, you can use the words moreover or furthermore.
For example…
Don’t say: Also, I found the report to include a compelling argument for plan B.
Instead say: Moreover, I found the report to include a compelling argument for plan
B.
Or say: Furthermore, I found the report to include a compelling argument for Plan
B.
Ramifications
For example…
Don’t say: The consequences can be severe for all stakeholders if this falls through.
Instead say: The ramifications can be severe for all stakeholders if this falls through.
Consensus
For example…
Don’t say: We are seeking the opinion of all involved in the new project.
Instead say: We are seeking the consensus of all involved in the new project.
For instance
Instead of saying like, you can use the phrase for instance.
For example…
Don’t say: I want you to incorporate video in the presentation —like a 5 minute
summary of the latest report for ease of understanding.
Instead say: I want you to incorporate video in the presentation. For instance, a 5
minute summary of the latest report for ease of understanding would work.
Straightforward
For example…
Don’t say: The directions for the next step are easy.
Instead say: The directions for the next step are straightforward.
Perspective
For example…
Don’t say: We are seeking the opinion of our accounting team before moving
forward.
Instead say: We are seeking the perspective of our accounting team before moving
forward.
Provided that
Instead of saying as long as, you can use the phrase provided that.
For example…
Don’t say: I am open to that option as long as you have data to back up the
decision.
Instead say: I am open to that option provided that you have data to back up the
decision.
Elaborate
Instead of saying “what do you mean”, you can ask someone to elaborate.
For example…
Don’t say: I’m not sure what you mean by that statement.
Imagine
For example:
Don’t say: I guess it’s time to test out a new hiring process.
Instead say: I imagine it’s time to test out a new hiring process.
Objective
That’s when you turn to Google for answers. “How do you write an angry email
professionally?” You’re in good company, it’s a question we’ve all asked ourselves at
one point or another.
The next time you find yourself in this position, remember, you can still get your
points across while doing so in a manner that won’t end up with a reprimand from
your boss or a meeting with HR. Any time you feel inclined to send an angry email,
follow this simple process to check your mindset, evaluate the best form of
communication, and craft an effective professional message.
While not a long-term solution, doing so can be therapeutic. It gives you the sense
of relief that you need in knowing that you were able to express your feelings in a
safe space. It also helps you think through your thoughts more clearly before
responding.
Take a breath
Just like it’s not best to send a text message or respond in an argument when angry,
it’s also not best to write an email when angry — especially at work. With emotions
running on high, you’re more likely to respond based on your initial feelings and say
something you might later regret.
Before composing your message, give yourself some room to breathe. You may
wish to get up from your desk and walk around for a few moments, complete a
one-minute meditation, or simply distract yourself for a while. Just know that you
don’t have to respond right away when you start seeing red.
A delay of 30 minutes an hour, two hours, or more lets you reapproach the
situation with a clear head. This can truly save you from sending a message that
could leave a negative mark on your professional record and damage relationships
with colleagues, clients, or stakeholders.
That’s why if you feel you’ve been wronged or a situation leads to feelings of anger
for whatever reason, think once, twice, and three times to ensure you’re not
overreacting or misinterpreting.
If, after the above, you determine that your emotions are indeed warranted,
consider whether communicating about the issue via email is the best approach.
Conversations that might bring about heightened emotions are often best had in
person, by phone, or via a Zoom meeting. Communication via text-based platforms
is notorious for miscommunication, misunderstanding, and often making the
situation worse. This is the opposite of what you want. If your goal is
communicating effectively and coming to a reasonable solution, communicate
strategically.
Upon further thought, depending on the severity of the situation, you might even
discover bringing in additional support to help resolve the problem before it
escalates. This can sometimes work better than going at it alone.
One final tip before you choose to send an angry email is to remind yourself that
emails live forever.
A good rule to remember is if you wouldn’t want the message to be plastered on
the newspaper’s front page or be tagged on social media for all of your friends,
acquaintances, colleagues, and community to see, don’t write it.
It doesn’t mean the conversation doesn’t need to occur. However, the approach
might be better suited for a spoken conversation. If not, then you’ll want to
maintain a high level of professionalism in your communication. You should always
assume that emails you send, especially professionally, are not private.
If you’ve gone through all the above steps and still feel that an email is your best
option, then there are some strategies you’ll want to implement to do so effectively.
Keep it brief
When emotions are high, you’re more likely to convey all of your thoughts and
feelings regarding a situation to ensure you communicate your viewpoint. However,
in truth, you should do the opposite and keep it brief.
The more concise you are, the less likely you are to incorporate something you
might later regret.
Additionally, getting deep into the weeds can bog down your email and cloud the
most important points you wish to convey.
Maintain formality
Sending an email when upset can lead to messaging you might later wish you could
take back. So throughout your email, err on the side of formality.
Sometimes you don’t realize how a message sounds until it’s read aloud.
If possible, write your email then read it aloud after breathing, considering the
circumstances, and remembering that emails live on forever.
When reading the message aloud, try to do so from a neutral place and eliminate
any words/phrases that might come across as rude. However, also watch out for
words that seem timid.
Your goal shouldn’t be to act as though nothing is wrong. Instead, you want to find
a way to communicate regarding the circumstances while maintaining your
professionalism. It’s common to err on the side of timid or apologetic language in
an attempt to offset feelings of anger. However, stuffing your feelings completely
can make matters worse down the road and prevent you from reaching a
resolution.
For this reason, better business writing will lead to more effective communication
in your organization.
For example, if you can quickly type up a concise email summing up your team's
duties for a new project — everyone will know what to do, and your productivity will
rise as a result. But if you use a poor writing style where the same email contains
convoluted instructions that don't make sense — nobody will know what their role
is in the new project, which can cause costly delays and mistakes.
That's why effective business writing skills are so necessary for all professional
positions. The more you can refine the quality of the written communication at your
organization, the more your efficiency and productivity will rise.
If so, you've come to the right place. We're covering 7 of the top business writing
skills that every professional needs to master. Along the way, you'll learn best
practices related to formatting, sentence structure, proofreading, and more.
From being able to craft effective emails to making company social media posts —
writing is everywhere in business.
That's especially true in today's age, with the increasing prevalence of remote work
across all industries. These remote workers rely even more on writing to keep up
with their tasks via email and online chat.
● PowerPoint presentations
● Summarizing the results of a report or study
● Creating step-by-step training tutorials for employees
● Creating convincing sales pitches and calls to action
● Drafting a formal business letter to another company
These are just a few examples where writing skills pay off. Also, the written word
leaves a record behind that colleagues can refer to later — something you can't do
with the spoken word.
That's why it's best to write out all-new training materials instead of giving a vocal
presentation. That way, new employees can refer back to the training documents
later.
Another reason why writing skills are so crucial is that lousy writing wastes a lot
of time and causes mistakes.
That's a big reason why effective writing is one of the most sought-after skills by
recruiters. The National Association of Colleagues and Employers reports that
73.4% of all employers desire candidates with strong written communication skills.
That's why you should strive to improve your own writing to make yourself a more
desirable hire to employers. Writing well will also save you time and improve
efficiency and productivity, so it's a win-win.
Now that you know why writing skills are so essential, it's time for our crash
business writing course. These seven skills will help you refine any piece of writing
to near perfection, regardless of the subject.
Being a great business writer doesn't mean you need an advanced vocabulary or a
perfect understanding of grammar. The goal isn't to reinvent the wheel when it
comes to writing. In other words, you don't have to go off on profound tangents
while attempting to be poetic.
Instead, good business writing is all about being concise, efficient, and engaging.
Yet, conducting in-depth research is always a must if you're writing a blog, detailed
email, whitepaper, or business letter.
Also, research can, and should, take many forms — not just searching on Google or
Wikipedia for quick answers.
● Consulting Reddit and Facebook groups to learn more about your target
audience/customer
● Speaking with experts in the field you're writing about
● Analyzing data from online tools and apps (such as Google Search Console)
● Vetting online sources to verify their credibility
● Consulting with your colleagues on a company matter
These are all ways you can gather information on a subject before putting pen to
paper.
While research is undoubtedly critical, it can be easy to get lost in this phase if you
aren't careful. Thorough research is always a good thing, but if you spend too much
time researching, you'll have less time to write before your deadline approaches.
To avoid over-researching, always set research goals beforehand. A research goal
lays out what you hope to accomplish with your research.
● To discover how your target audience spends money during the holiday
season.
Once you meet that goal, you can wind down the research phase and move on to
the next step. Certain documents may require more than one research goal, but it's
essential to set them so you don't get lost doing research forever.
A successful piece of writing requires a logical flow that transitions from one topic
to the next seamlessly. The most reliable way to do that is to start by writing an
outline for the document.
What's an outline?
It's a simplified version of all the points you want to cover in your piece. There's no
need to get too detailed here; a simple series of bullet points will suffice.
The point of an outline is to give you a roadmap to follow when writing the piece.
Without one, it can be easy to venture away from the topic by going on unnecessary
tangents. Also, you may forget to include essential points without an outline, so you
should always make one — even if it's brief.
An outline will save your life if you have a word count that you need to hit with a
piece. Outlines are the easiest way to calculate and hit your word count.
Outlines are invaluable for collaborating with others, too. If you're going to write a
presentation with a colleague, outlining it beforehand will help you both stay on the
same page.
There's a simple outline for a 1,900-word document. As you can see, we included
the word count for each section. That's how easy it is to create an outline, and the
benefits of it are tenfold.
The acronym K.I.S.S. sums up what it takes to achieve great writing — keeping it
simple stupid.
All too often, professionals think that business writing needs to be complicated.
That's not true at all, especially if you want your employees or customers to
understand what you're talking about. To drastically increase the retention of your
writing, always use simple words and short paragraphs.
Not only does that make your writing easier to read, but it's also scanner-friendly.
Well, 79% of internet users' scan' written content they see online. That means they
don't hang on every word — they quickly go over the page to find the most
relevant/engaging content.
Internet users aren't the only ones that read this way, either.
Your employees will likely scan your emails and chats to find the juiciest bits of
information that most pertains to them. Knowing this, you should structure your
writing in a scanner-friendly way. That will not only improve the retention rate of
your customers but also of your coworkers as well.
For word choice, do your best to keep them short and simple. If there's a simpler
term that you can use instead of a complicated one, you should always use the
version that's easier to understand.
Here's an example:
Simple: All staff must put away their smartphones and focus only on their tasks
during the work day.
While the first sentence may make the writer seem 'smarter,' it's long-winded and
confusing. The second sentence is far easier to understand and effectively gets the
message across.
If so, the best way to put an end to that is to master the art of storytelling — one of
the most influential business writing skills. Conveying your message by telling a
story is a highly effective way to improve retention, and there's scientific evidence
for it.
Research by Uri Hasson at Princeton showed that whenever someone begins telling
a story, the listener's brain activity syncs with the storyteller. That means your
audience will be directly engaged with you in a way that isn't possible outside of
telling stories. Beyond that, stories trigger the reward circuits in our brains to come
to life.
The tone is a huge aspect of writing that you shouldn't ignore. Not only is it crucial
to nail the tone for your organization, but you'll also want to know which tone
works best for your customers.
Most businesses generally prefer a professional tone when communicating
internally or with other companies. A more formal tone is accepted at some
companies, especially with their customer-facing content. Many blogs tend to adopt
a relaxed tone, as the goal is to emulate speaking to a friend.
It would be best always to consider the tone you're going for before beginning to
write a piece. To do so, consider the needs of those who will read it.
Will this go to the higher-ups at your company, or are you writing a blog to appeal to
dog lovers?
The former requires a professional tone, while you can get away with a more lax
tone for the latter.
Also, you should almost always use an active voice when writing. That's because
writing in a passive voice is often too wordy and confusing.
Here's an example:
The active voice example is concise and far easier to read than the passive example
— so always opt for an active voice whenever you can.
Once you've hammered out the first draft for a piece, it's time to start the revising
process. No document comes out perfect on the first try, so you'll naturally have to
do some editing.
There are plenty of tools out there that can help you with proofreading for spelling
and grammatical errors. Grammarly does a great job in this regard, as do other
tools online.
Yet, whenever you run one of these programs, don't automatically accept all its
corrections. These tools are by no means perfect, and they can't infer the context or
meaning of specific phrases. Double-check each one of its corrections to make sure
that it's a sound criticism.
For instance, Grammarly can make some outstanding suggestions for rearranging
sentence structure. At the same time, it can also ruin a sentence by wanting to
switch out a word or change its tense — so keep a close eye on it.
Once you've run the grammar and spell checker, you still aren't done. Now it's time
to do the most crucial task, which is to read the entire document out loud to
yourself.
While this step may seem cumbersome, it's definitely necessary. Specific phrases
and sentences may seem like they make sense as you write them but sound
different out loud. Remember, tools and apps are great, but you will always be your
best editor. Do your best to identify any spelling or grammatical errors that your
tools didn't pick up.
Also, getting a second opinion from someone is always a good idea. Have them
read the entire document to ensure that it's concise and clear in its meaning.
Clear and concise writing saves time, increases productivity, and converts web
users into customers.
That's why it's worth striving to improve your skills as a business writer. Doing so
will also make you more attractive in the eyes of potential employers, which is
always a plus.