Creating Compelling Characters Cheat Sheet
Creating Compelling Characters Cheat Sheet
Character Name
The Lie: the lie that the character believes about their life or world, can also be thought of as
the fatal flaw, but is essentially what the character is struggling with that prevents them from
achieveing what they need
Want: what the character wants and thinks will solve the problems in their life, usually related to
the external goal of the novel
Need: what the character actually needs to solve the problems in their life, at least at an internal
level
Effect on home life: discuss how the lie they believe/their fatal flaw affects their home life from
housing situations, to conflicts with family, etc.
Effect on school/work life: discuss how the lie they believe/their fatal flaw affects their school or
work life from performance, to conflicts with authority within, etc.
Effect on relationships: discuss how the lie they believe/their fatal flaw affects their relationships
with others in general from how they make friends, to romantic relationships, to working with
others etc. You may also want to specifically highlight the relationship with the b-plot character.
Shard of glass: backstory on how/why the lie developed. This may or may not be revealed in the
novel depending on the character
Connection to MC: for non-MC characters, how they connect to the main character
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Initial Premise:
From the POV of a ghost girl who does the least amount possible to try and scare those who
come to the house. When she makes friends with a young child who becomes possessed by one
of the ghosts, she’ll have to do her very best to combat her fear in order to help her friend
Want: to help save young child from being possessed by ghost and having his whole family killed
Need: strength is not only measured by physical prowess, and those considered weak have the
ability to rise up with hidden strengths
Effect on home life: spends most of her time hiding, doesn’t not engage in conflict with others,
she doesn’t try to help the living, goes through the motions of pretending to torture the living in
order to fit in and protect herself
Effect on school/work life: afraid to draw attention to herself so she doesn’t speak in class or
answer questions despite knowing the answers, sees a bully tormenting a classmate and she
doesn’t intervene
Effect on relationships: struggles to form friendships because she has little loyalty due to fear,
avoid people who remind her of her family, she is a people pleaser. Avoids being close with little
boy because he reminds her of brother and she knows she can’t help him
Shard of glass: her family was attacked in the house where they lived, and she and her little
brother were hiding together, and she was supposed to look after him as the older sibling, and
she wasn’t strong enough to protect him. And he was killed first, and she was killed after. The
man who killed their family was shot by police and also died in the house, and he’s a ghost there
and continues to assert power over the others in the house. She remains afraid of him and unable
to do anything to help others. She’s the only one stuck in the house, not the rest of her family, feels
divinely punished for not being able to save her brother because she was too weak.
Quirks: always knows a good hiding place, really sharp hearing for guessing threats, really
standoffish, act more tough on the outside than she is inside, nail biting, sweaty, likes pink
Additional notes: “It is not a pleasant existence to be a ghost who is afraid of other ghosts
trapped in a house full of them. Furthermore, being dead is very boring.”
*Note: this is a sample story for the purposes of this exercise to show how to craft characters, not for the
purposes of being an amazing mind-blowing story idea
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