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Added: You should see ice. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 1
Deleted: After the avalanche, it took us a week [. . .] . . . . . . . . . . 1
Added: when . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 1
Replaced: Now we took an oath, that I’m breaking now. . . . . . . . . 1
Commented: speaking of unreal. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 1
Highlighted: sick . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 1
Highlighted: clear . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 1
Replaced (Green): taht . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 1
Deleted (Green): single . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 1
Replaced (Green): they’re . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 1
Commented (Green): speaking of unreal. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 2
Highlighted (Green): sick . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 2
Highlighted (Green): clear . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 2
Added (OA): I’m not a mistake! . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 2
Deleted (OA): He’s the exact opposite of the hero. . . . . . . . . . . . 2
Deleted (OA): And most times they’re friends, like you [. . .] . . . . . . 2
Commented (OA): just nice . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 2
Highlighted (OA): sick . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 2
Highlighted (OA): clear . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 2

Changes by default author


You think water moves fast? You should see ice. It moves like it has a mind.
Like it knows it killed the world once and got a taste for murder. After the
avalanche, it took us a week to climb out. Now, I don’t know exactly when [1] No?
we turned on each other, but I know that seven of us survived the slide...
and only five made it out. Now we took an oath, that I’m breaking now.
We said we’d say it was the snow that killed the other two, but it wasn’t.
Nature is lethal but it doesn’t hold a candle to man. However unreal it [2]
may seem, we are connected, you and I. We’re on the same curve, just on speaking
opposite ends. You don’t get sick , I do. That’s also clear . of un-
real. . .
Changes by green author
[3] Yes,
The lysine contingency - it’s intended to prevent the spread of the animals sick.
is case they ever got off the island. Dr. Wu inserted a gene tahtthatGreen
makes a singleGreen faulty enzyme in protein metabolism. The animals can’t
manufacture the amino acid lysine. Unless they’recontinuallyGreen supplied
with lysine by us, they’ll slip into a coma and die. We’re on the same curve,

1
just on opposite ends. However unreal it may seem, we are connected, you [Green 1]
and I. You don’t get sick , I do. That’s also clear Green . speaking
of un-
Changes by orange author with some comments real. . .
Now that we know who you are, I know who I am. I’m not a mistake! It all [Green 2]
makes sense! In a comic, you know how you can tell who the arch-villain’s Yes,
going to be? He’s the exact opposite of the hero. And most times they’re sick.
friends, like you and me!OA I should’ve known way back when... You know
[OA 1]
why, David? They called me Mr Glass. However unreal it may seem, we are
Yeah,
connected, you and I. We’re on the same curve, just on opposite ends. You
I like
don’t get sick , I do. That’s also clear OA .
animals
better
No changes than
Your bones don’t break, mine do. That’s clear. Your cells react to bacteria people
and viruses differently than mine. You don’t get sick, I do. That’s also some-
clear. But for some reason, you and I react the exact same way to water. times. . .
We swallow it too fast, we choke. We get some in our lungs, we drown.
[OA 2]
However unreal it may seem, we are connected, you and I. We’re on the
Espe-
same curve, just on opposite ends. You don’t get sick, I do. That’s also
cially
clear.
dogs.
Dogs
are the
best.
[OA 3]
just nice

[OA 4]
Yes,
sick.

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