Module 5 - PHI-1300-jul16
Module 5 - PHI-1300-jul16
OVERVIEW
In Module 5, we consider how arguments are constructed. As an initiate, you will construct your own
arguments. We will also explore key aspects of writing good critical essays. The competencies acquired
here will be of great value to you throughout your studies.
TOPICS
OBJECTIVES
MO5.2 Understand and follow generally accepted guidelines for constructing arguments when
writing argumentative essays.
MO5.3 Understand that a critical evaluation of the ideas and beliefs of other people requires a
critical attitude of self-reflection and critical evaluation of our own biases, misconceptions,
and preconceived ideas.
Readings
● Module 5 Lecture
● Glossary
● The Writing Center. (n.d.). Argument. University of North Carolina at Chapel Hill.
● A Brief Guide to Writing Argumentative Essays
Web Resources
● Purdue Global Writing Center. (n.d.). Writing to think: Critical thinking and the writing process.
● University Writing Center. (n.d.). Analyzing Scholarly Articles. Texas A&M University.
● Kevin deLaplante. (2009, November 22). How to Write a Good Argumentative Essay: Logical
Structure [Video]. YouTube.
LECTURE
By now you should have a clear idea of how to analyze and evaluate the arguments of others. But this is
only one aspect of your task as a critical reasoner. A second, and equally important task, is the
construction of arguments—that is, the construction and defense of a philosophical argument of your own.
Obviously, you should expect your own argument to meet the requirements that you demand of any other
argument. Your argument must be coherently stated and its premises must supply sufficient and relevant
reasons for the conclusion to be accepted.
Because critical reasoning is about arguments and argumentation, its primary focus is argumentative
writing. However, it would be a mistake to think that argumentative writing is the only kind of writing. There
is nothing new in telling you that writing can exist in different forms. Most likely we have all composed
both a grocery list and a love letter at some point in our lives. There is also descriptive writing,
comparative writing, and narrative writing. Although we are concerned only with argumentative writing in
critical reasoning, we should know about other kinds of writing, because this will help us to better
understand what argumentative writing entails.
In order to help you to begin to think about the issues you need to address, consider the following before
you read any further:
Why do students write? Most students would say, “because we have to.” Honest, perhaps, but
discouraging. It makes writing seem pretty trivial. How about another go? Here’s a likely second answer:
“to show what we know.” Isn’t there something more positive we can say about writing? Yes, there is. The
best reason to write is the best reason to do anything: because it helps you grow and develop your
potential. Writing is a terrific way to learn. When you write, you discover whether you really understand
something, or just think you do; and the very process of writing makes you think, and think hard. The
process of writing pushes students toward the true goals of higher education: critical thinking, creativity,
analysis, synthesis, and informed judgment. Therefore, writing is primarily about learning, not showing off
what you already know. If writing an essay teaches you nothing, the assignment has been a failure. One
common way to categorize writing is to distinguish between expressive and communicative writing.
Expressive Writing
Expressive writing is personal and informal, written to encourage comprehension and reflection on the
part of the writer. Open-ended and creative, expressive writing is a good way to start learning about a
topic. By contrast, communicative writing is analytical, formal, and more or less impersonal. It
presupposes that the writer already has considerable knowledge and understanding of the topic and is
writing to inform a reader. It demands adherence to established conventions of tone, voice, diction,
evidence, and citation; these conventions will vary according to discipline and type (e.g., laboratory report,
history paper, business plan, legal brief).
Writing as learning begins with expressive writing. Consider what it’s like when you’re first learning about
a topic. Everything is unfamiliar. It’s like being in a strange land where not only the terrain but even the
signs and maps are unfamiliar, and the words themselves are foreign. That’s the situation students find
themselves in when they begin studying a field like history, anthropology, biology, or business.
Expressive writing gives students an opportunity to start to make sense of the world they find themselves
in; to bring the myriad facts, definitions, rules, theories, and perspectives to life and impose some order
on them. There are many different kinds of expressive writing. One kind used in this course is journals.
Journals
Many educators rely on journals (also known as learning logs, idea notebooks, laboratory journals, or
commonplace books) to encourage student thinking. Journals give students the chance to reflect on what
they’re studying and to record thoughts, questions, ideas, hunches, or seemingly stray tangents.
In the future you should consider keeping one. It can help you keep track of ideas you may wish to
develop later on.
Communicative Writing
Read the following passages and identify the kind of writing in each text. In each case, you will be
provided with some background on the quoted text so that you have a context in which you could make
sense of the passage and identify the kind of writing apparent in the text.
The following text was taken from a book on social psychology dealing with social influence, attitude
change, group processes, and prejudice. TM Newcomb was a social psychologist who conducted a study
of student attitudes at Bennington College in Vermont. Vermont is one of the six New England states in
America. Newcomb’s study reports the impact the college environment had on student attitudes (Collins
1970:75):
“Newcomb chose to focus on changes in political and economic attitudes brought about by the
Bennington experience. This was a topic of some concern to the community in general and
provided an excellent opportunity to study the impact of the community on individual members.
He found that the college community did indeed have a marked impact on students’ attitudes.
The generally liberal atmosphere resulted in a definite decrease in conservatism as the girls went
from their freshman to their senior year. The senior class was more liberal than the freshman
class; the attitudes of the students became more liberal each year they spent at Bennington.
Newcomb’s study, with this finding alone, provided an important starting point for the study of
social attitudes, since it showed that attitudes can be modified as a result of social experience.
Newcomb was also able to give us some insight into the specific mechanisms by which the
values of the college community were internalized into individual attitudes.”
Feedback: This text is an example of descriptive writing. The author describes the impact of the
community on individuals’ attitudes. Note that the author is not telling a story, comparing
phenomena, or engaging in an argument.
The text that follows was taken from a book written by Ursula LeGuin. Le-Guin is well-known for her
poetry and science fiction writings. This text was taken from her book, The Left-Hand of Darkness
(LeGuin 1992:170):
“How the devil can I believe anything you say!” he burst out. Bodily weakness made his
“Have failed. And have put you in pain, and shame, and danger. I know it. But if I had tried to fight
Tibe for your sake, you would not be here now, you’d be in a grave in Erhenrang. And there are
now a few people in Karhide, and a few in Orgoreyn, who believe your story, because they
listened to me. They may yet serve you. My greatest error was, as you say, in not making myself
clear to you. I am not used to doing so. I am not used to giving, or accepting, either advice or
blame.”
Feedback: This kind of writing is narrative writing. Note that the text does not argue for or against
a particular point of view. Rather, the text aims at unfolding a story.
The text below is an example of a particular kind of writing. It is up to you to identify what kind of writing
this is:
Concerns about human rights presently fall into two schools: liberal and communitarian. Liberals
base the notion of human rights on the democratic basis of basic civil and political rights of all
citizens as individuals and insist that, since the individual’s interests can easily be threatened, all
citizens should be protected against the oppression of the state and against collective
authoritarianism. In contrast to the liberal perspective, communitarians argue that the community,
rather than the individual, the state, or the nation, is the ultimate originator of values and, in their
analysis of human rights, group or communal rights, rather than individual rights, are emphasized.
Feedback: This kind of writing is comparative writing. Here the author compares two different
approaches to human rights: liberal and communitarian.
The following text was taken from a book written by Maurice Merleau-Ponty. Merleau-Ponty (1908–1961)
was a French philosopher and contemporary of Jean-Paul Sartre, the well-known existentialist
philosopher. Merleau-Ponty wrote numerous books on phenomenology and perception. The text below is
taken from his book, Signs (Merleau-Ponty 1964:109):
“Since we are all hemmed in by history, it is up to us to understand that whatever truth we may
have is to be gotten not in spite of, but through, our historical inherence. Superficially considered,
our inherence destroys all truth; considered radically, it founds a new idea of truth. As long as I
cling to the ideal of an absolute spectator, of knowledge with no point of view, I can see my
situation as nothing but a source of error. But if I have once recognized that through it I am
grafted onto every action and all knowledge which can have meaning for me, and that step by
step it contains everything which can exist for me, then my contact with the social in the finitude
of my situation is revealed to me as the point of origin of all truth.”
Feedback: This text is an example of argumentative writing. It argues about the philosophical
problem of absolute truth versus subjective truth.
You may need to consult a variety of books dealing with different topics, such as philosophical problems,
psychology, law, history, and fiction. But in the end you should have selected only four different passages,
each of them representing a particular kind of writing. Now make a collage of these four passages by
making photocopies of them and pasting the photocopied passages in your hard copy journal or by
scanning copies into your digital journal. Mark each of them according to the appropriate type of writing
and add a full reference for the source of each example.
Critical reasoning is concerned about argumentative writing. The aim of this section, then, is to introduce
you to some key features of argumentative writing. This should enable you to start writing argumentative
essays within the framework of an acceptable structure. As you become more skilled, you may want to
change this method and organize your arguments differently. Until then, this method is useful to get you
going and by using it, you can be confident that you have adopted a sound approach.
When writing argumentative essays, keep the following key points in mind:
● Clearly state the thesis that you intend to defend in your essay.
● Analyze and explain the problem the thesis deals with.
● Use research material, documentation, and referencing.
● Provide sufficient and relevant reasons to support the thesis.
● Define the key concepts used in your arguments.
● Consider/anticipate possible opposition (counterarguments) to the thesis.
● Reply to possible opposition.
● Use appropriate language and structure.
Below is a brief guide to writing argumentative essays. These hints will probably dovetail well with the key
aspects of argumentative essay writing that you will explore in the suggested resources. Consider these
hints together with the key aspects and do the activity that follows (Jordan-Henley 1988).
Let us put some of these guidelines into practice and write brief notes on an argument that deals with
abortion. Let us say our thesis is the following:
The practice of abortion is morally permissible when the mother’s life is endangered by continued
pregnancy.
One argument we might use here is that, since everyone has a right to self-defense and even the right to
kill someone when this is the only way to save oneself, a mother has the right to defend herself against a
fetus whose continued existence clearly and unambiguously threatens her life. Here there is an appeal to
a general principle that “everyone has a right to self-defense.” We might defend this by showing through
examples how the principle fits in with what we take to be reasonable. For instance, could we morally
blame someone who defended herself from a lethal attack from a man wielding a knife if she deliberately
pushed her attacker over a cliff and this was the only way to save herself? Surely not. We may then go on
to claim that a mother who requests an abortion when continued pregnancy is a clear danger to her life is
doing nothing more than the victim in this example and, by parity of the same kind of reasoning, we
should attach no moral blame to such actions.
We may offer further arguments claiming that, since a fetus is not yet, properly speaking, a person
(perhaps only a potential person), the rights of a mother (who is a person) should take precedence over
the less important rights of the fetus. Here we would have to defend our definition of “person,” and show
how being a person makes one a rights-bearer, and how some rights are more important than other
rights. Our definition of a person may assume some factual claims about human abilities, such as the
ability to reason and communicate, and these assumptions would have to be articulated and defended.
In general, whatever arguments we use, all the points made in the preceding topics (on awareness of
fallacious reasoning and avoidance of fallacies and on argument analysis and evaluation) should guide us
in our defense of our thesis. We should take care never to simply make an assertion but always back it up
with reasons which we ourselves would accept as appropriate and well founded. When we write an
argumentative essay, our opinions carry more weight if we look at both sides of the issue. In other words,
we acknowledge our opponents’ views but try to convince the reader that our own argument is stronger.
Our essay would be extremely dull if we used the words “supporters” and “opponents” all the way
through. Similarly, it would be unimpressive if we only used the verb “say” to refer to people’s opinions.
The tables below contain lists of useful alternatives.
Positive Negative
supporters opponents
proponents opponents
those in favor of… those opposed to…
defenders of… critics of…
advocates of… objectors
pro-… (e.g., anti-… (e.g.,
pro-abortionists) anti-abortionists)
Table 2
Alternative Words
say that… argue
claim
maintain
assert
contend
allege
insist
contend
suggest
point out
In the following few paragraphs we discuss some of the key features of a philosophical attitude to
questions and problems. There is no recipe here: merely a few essential ingredients.
Philosophers have an absolute regard for clear and rigorous reasoning and the clear and rigorous
use of language.
Clarity in thought and language leaves few hiding places for prejudice and distortion. Clarity is therefore
essential if we are to achieve an acceptable understanding of the fundamental questions which puzzle us
and if we are to obtain the likely answers to these questions. This is not to say that philosophical writings
The philosophical attitude requires tolerance of the opinions, thoughts, attitudes, and arguments
of others.
Philosophers should be swayed only by the cogency of an argument, not by preconceived ideas and
prejudices. This calls for an openness to other viewpoints, however unpalatable these views may seem to
us at first. This does not mean that a philosopher may not strongly and forcibly advocate a particular
position (the best philosophers always do). What it does mean is that a philosopher’s advocacy stands on
a reasoned conviction that his or her arguments are sound, together with an openness to the possibility
that he or she is mistaken.
Merely having an open mind is nothing. The object of opening the mind, as of opening the mouth, is to
shut it on something solid. (GK Chesterton)
In this course you have explored the path of critical self-reflection and self-discovery. If you have taken
your role as “initiate” seriously by actively participating in the “initiation process” and you have worked
conscientiously, you will have acquired the competence and experience to reflect on your own thinking; to
develop a critical attitude towards all kind of stereotypes, biases, and fallacies in reasoning; to analyze
and evaluate different kinds of arguments; and to construct your own critical arguments.
ACTIVITIES
The aim of this course has been to equip you with the necessary critical thinking tools to critically analyze
and evaluate knowledge claims and provide you with the skills to develop a critical attitude towards
cultural stereotypes, biases, and preconceived ideas. These tools are vitally important for making
informed, rational, and responsible decisions so that, when you are faced with ethical dilemmas in your
professional or even private lives, you will have the tools that will enable you to make the appropriate
choice. Now formulate reflective answers to the following questions and discuss them with your
classmates:
2. How did critical reasoning help you to make responsible decisions and to justify choices in difficult
situations you encountered in your work environment, your home, life and interaction with your
community?
3. Did critical reasoning assist you with your studies of other disciplines, such as psychology, history,
English, political science and health care?
4. What, according to you, does it mean to think critically about the world?
The point of this exercise is to make you and your classmates aware that our worldviews color our
perception of the world, other people, and ourselves. People differ in their approach and views on issues
because they see things differently. That is, their understanding and interpretation of issues differ. The
way a person sees things is fundamentally influenced by his or her worldview. A worldview is the
comprehensive framework of a person’s basic beliefs about gender, race, religion, life and death, the
meaning of human life, and so on. In turn, these beliefs influence our values, attitudes, assumptions, and
emotional experiences. Fortunately, our worldviews are not static, but they change as we go through life,
encountering a variety of experiences. Reflecting on your own thinking about these issues might give you
the opportunity to “dig a little deeper” to uncover your framework of basic beliefs and see how these
beliefs influence your attitudes and behavior. A further point of this exercise is to share with you the idea
that a critical attitude calls for an openness (which is not the same as blind acceptance) to the viewpoints
of other people.
Written Assignment 7
Write an argumentative essay on a topic of your own choice by applying the key rules of writing
argumentative essays and taking into account the lessons you have learned from the essay you wrote for
Discussion Forum 1 in Module 1. Your essay should be between 500 and 600 words.
If you would like, you can write on the same topic you did before, but make sure to address any issues
with your arguments that you discovered through your analysis. If you would rather write about something
So, what do you write about? Pick a well defined, controversial issue. (Spend some time with the latest
copies of several news magazines, watch 60 Minutes, or listen to National Public Radio to generate
ideas.) Readers should understand what the issue is and what is at stake. The issue must be arguable,
as noted above. After stating your thesis, you will need to discuss the issue in depth so that your reader
will understand the problem fully.
1. A clear position taken by the writer. In your thesis sentence, state what your position is.
You do not need to say: “I believe that we should financially support the space station.”
Using the first person weakens your argument. Say “funding for the space station is
imperative to maintain America’s competitive edge in the global economy.” The thesis can
be modified elsewhere in the essay if you need to qualify your position, but avoid hedging
in your thesis.
3. A reasonable tone. Assume that your reader will disagree with you or be skeptical. It is
important, therefore, that your tone be reasonable, professional, and trustworthy. By
anticipating objections and making concessions, you inspire confidence and show your
good will.