Proccess Writing
Proccess Writing
1. Prewriting
“I will always jot down things, little ideas. I may never go back to
them. I may never see them again. But once they’re jotted down,
they’re rotting away, usefully, on the compost heap of my
imagination. And they’re there if I need them.”—Neil Gaiman
Make a habit of writing down the things that have captured your
attention in the past week or month. These may become the
source motivators of your writing, maybe of your career. Any
writing project will require a sustained interest, so be sure to fill
this page with your truth: What interests you? This can be
anything: a word, a movie, a person, an event, so long as it
inspired you. It can be subjects (cactus species, muscle cars, a
voyage to Mars) or people/types of people (therapists, spies, your
Aunt Germaine). Try to include things from other arts—for
example, foods, music, or movies.
It’s all about turning a thought over in your mind like a little piece
of grit. When you have something that looks vaguely like a pearl,
it’s time to sketch out a plan.
2. Planning
“I don’t like outlining either. But now I can’t work without one. I
have to have it. I have my whole plan.”—
Common wisdom holds that there are two types of writers. Plotters
are those who meticulously plan every book before they write it,
and are those who fly by the seat of their pants, setting off into a
novel without a clear map. There are benefits to both styles, and
both types can get stuck at any point in their writing. For plotters,
problems arise when their characters decide to do something they
weren’t expecting. It can be difficult to accept that your story isn’t
what you thought it would be, and there’s often a tendency to
force your way forward. Pantsers incline toward a different
problem: they get lost, usually in the middle section of their work,
because they haven’t got a clear enough idea of where they’re
going. Plotters will benefit from a re-thinking of their story
structure, and pantsers will often benefit by building some of the
architecture their story needs.
If you put enough work into your outline, the most difficult part of
writing your book is finished. Doing so allows you to be relaxed as
you write and confident of the direction you are headed. It makes
the writing process more enjoyable. Here’s an example of a short
outline format:
4. Revising
“The process of doing your second draft is a process of making it
look like you knew what you were doing all along.”—Neil Gaiman
As you enter the revising stage, read your manuscript aloud. Your
ear will catch awkward patches of sentence structure and
infelicities that your eye often won’t. Here you’ll just be looking at
language, formatting, and style. One good technique is to identify
problem areas that you’d like to improve, then mark all of those
areas with a colored highlighter. Set a goal for yourself to get the
entire manuscript back to colorless. Look especially for sections
where the writing seems different—maybe it’s too sloppy, or
something is overwritten—or sequences where someone acted out
of character. Search for sections that are too heavy on dialogue, or
too dense with exposition, and try to balance them out. Let your
instincts guide you to the places where something feels off and go
back to them later for correction.
Each section of a novel will have its own challenges, and you may
struggle with one more than another. Some writers find that their
beginnings are too slow, their middles tend to be shapeless and
messy, or their endings lack a satisfying note.
Be careful of falling in love with your story. That will make seeing it
objectively difficult, and may get in the way when it’s time to cut or
tighten.
5. Editing
“The story is an explosion. And you get to the end of it, and once
it’s done, then you get to walk around it and you get to look at the
shrapnel and the damage it did. And you get to see who died. And
you get to see how it worked.”—Neil Gaiman
There are two kinds of editing: editing as you write, and editing
once you’ve finished a draft. It’s a good idea to practice the first
type on a daily basis by tightening and proofreading your prose to
make it concise and effective. When reviewing the work that
you’ve just done, ask yourself if it conveys what you meant it to, if
it makes sense, and if the writing feels good.
Don’t spend too much time editing the same problem areas
over and over. This is a type of procrastination and will
generally only augment your feelings of frustration. Try to
find a balance: edit to smooth out your writing but don’t edit
so much that you ruin the original magic of your novel.
Ask what your story is about. The major dramatic question is
usually involved the main character’s primary desire. This
will often be the driving force in your story. Ask yourself
which areas you need to work on to buttress that main story
line. What areas are superfluous and distract from it? Does
your ending answer the major dramatic question?
What areas have problems with pacing? (i.e. too much
dialogue, too much exposition, things feel “draggy”)
6. Publishing
A piece of writing may never truly feel complete to its author, but if
you’ve made it all the many iterations of your draft, and feel
confident that you’ve answered your major dramatic question,
you’ve arrived at the last step! Once you’ve finished editing your
novel, you have two choices: you can self-publish or sell your book
to a publisher. Self-publishing has become more popular with the
rise of e-books and the ease with which you can upload your work
to online booksellers like Amazon and iTunes—keep in mind this
means you’ll have to make all of your own decisions in the
publishing process, and this often requires hiring editors,
copyeditors, proofreaders, and cover artists.
Writing Preferences
Each writer has his/her own preferences when drafting a document.
Whether a person is writing a story, a poem, a journal entry, a letter,
or a creative non-fiction piece, the writing approach is idiosyncratic,
meaning that it is distinctive to the person who is writing.
Some are think-write writers. They need to think and think and think
some more until they can write their first draft. When they write
their first draft, they need a large block of time to get it down on
paper. Their first drafts feel like a finished product to the writer
because they’ve done most of their prewriting and revising in the
thinking process. However, these writers need to remember that the
first draft is just that—a first draft. Revision is necessary. See Figure
1.1 for a list of the advantages and disadvantages of being an
extreme think-write writer.
Advantages
Disadvantages
Other writers are write-write writers. They write, cut, copy, and
reorganize their work as well as throw away and start again—
sometimes multiple times. They are constantly prewriting, planning,
and revising as they go. They sometimes struggle with finishing a
final draft, and they have even been known to delete some of their
best work. These writers need to remember to save all drafts, so
that the best work is never lost. See Figure 1.2 for a list of
advantages and disadvantages of being an extreme write-write
writer.
Figure 1.2: Advantages and Disadvantages for the Write-
write Writers
Advantages
They are willing to try multiple ideas to see what will work
best.
They can easily leave sentence and grammar errors to be
edited later in the revision stage.
They embrace revision as it is part of their drafting process.
Disadvantages
Prewriting/Planning
Prewriting writing begins with what draws the writer to write. The
writer may be inspired by nature, people, animals, life events, etc.
Drafting
Cooling
Revising
Revising literally means “to see again” not just once but multiple
times. Revision has two types of processes:
To look at the larger problems such as content and
organization
To look at the smaller problems such as sentence structure,
word choice, and formatting
Part of revising may include asking others to read drafts and make
revision recommendations. Ultimately, it’s always up to the writer
whether those revision recommendations will be implemented into
the final draft.
Publishing
Although it’s great to see one’s name in print, not all writers write
for publication. Some write their stories, poems, letters, diaries, etc.
for the next generations – their children, grandchildren, and great-
grandchildren. They write to record their personal history.