Unit 9 - IBC - Writing Memos, Circulars and Notices
Unit 9 - IBC - Writing Memos, Circulars and Notices
9.1 Introduction
In the previous unit, we learnt the various types of meeting. We learnt the
responsibilities of a chairperson during a meeting and how to prepare before
meeting. We also learnt the significance of and steps for follow-up after a
meeting. Some of the important points or issues discussed in the meeting
have to be conveyed to others in the organisation who were not a part of the
meeting. Such formal communication can happen with the help of memos,
circulars and notices. In this unit, we will discuss some of the written
communication media, including memos, circulars and notices. We shall
define the specific purpose of each of these media and offer guidelines for
writing them, along with the appropriate formats to be used.
Your project manager Mr. Russell Peter wants you to inform the staff
members to attend an orientation session to be held in conference room
on Tuesday, at 11 a.m. To convey your message you just have to write a
small note and circulate it to the members formally. As the
communication happens within the organisation and you are requesting
the members to attend a meeting you need not use a formal language. At
the same time, the information is not sensitive or confidential. So, you
need not worry about the security aspect while communicating the
message. As you are circulating the information on behalf of your project
manager you need not have a salutation and complimentary closing. How
are you going to communicate the information to all the members in a
formal way keeping all these points in mind? Are you going to use a
memo, notice or circular to communicate and why do you choose it? You
can find answers to these questions only if you know what a memo,
notice and circular are.
This unit helps you to answer the following questions:
What is a memo?
What is a notice and circular?
How are they used in business communication?
In this unit we will study the importance of written communication and define
memo. We will learn the structure of a memo. We will also discuss the use
of circulars and notices for business communication.
Objectives:
After studying this unit, you should be able to:
describe the structure of a memo
explain the purpose of circulars and notices
prepare memos, circulars and notices
9.2 Memo
As studied in unit 5, in an organisation a large amount of information is
communicated via the written medium. Written communications include
memos, notices, circulars, organisation periodicals, etc communicated via
e-mails, bulletin boards, etc.
Written communication is preferred over other forms of communication as it
provides a tangible and verifiable record of the information that was
exchanged. The record can be stored for an indefinite period and hence, in-
case of any concern on the communicated message, it is physically
available for verification. This is very useful for communication that involves
complex and lengthy information. For example, the company's marketing
plan for a new product contains a number of tasks spread out over several
months and numbers of stakeholders are associated with it. Writing it down
helps to communicate the plan effectively to all and it will be readily
available for reference over the entire life span of the product.
Written communication can be used for both informal to formal
communication. As it can be easily duplicated, many individuals in the
organisation can receive the message simultaneously making it highly
flexible. The errors made in written communication can be easily identified.
Hence, individuals who prepare it take extra care. Thus, written
communications are likely to be well thought out, logical and clear.
Memo is one of the most important forms of written communication in an
organisation. Memos can be used for formal and informal communication.
The word ’memo’ is a short form for ‘memorandum’, which is derived from
the Latin word ‘memorandus’ which means “a thing which must be
remembered”. It is also referred to as an “inter office memorandum”, since it
is used primarily as a tool for communicating within the organisation. The
memo is essentially a condensed or a brief report that can be used to
convey information and decisions or to make short requests to co-workers,
superiors and subordinates. It is relatively informal in style, compared to
letters and long reports and is unpretentious and concise.
It is important for the business executive to know how to write condensed
reports or memos. Often, business executives may also be asked to
condense business articles for their superiors. This is essentially the same
as ’précis writing’, where an article is condensed to one fourth its size,
without losing the essence or meaning. The condensed article could then be
put in memo format and sent to the superior.
Given its importance, we shall briefly discuss how to write a ’précis’.
9.2.1 Principles of précis writing
As mentioned, précis writing is regularly done by assistants of top
executives, to help them in keeping up with their business reading. There
are three main principles of précis writing, which may be referred to as the
three C’s of précis writing. They are:
Condensation – This means that the précis must be a brief, shortened
version of the original article. In general, the précis must be one fourth
the length of the original article.
In the précis shown in figure 9.1, the main theme is contained in the subject
line “Changing Face of Customer Relationship Management (CRM).” The
components or the main ideas are expressed by the different paragraphs,
each with a subhead. Some of the key words that are used to express these
ideas are “revolutionary technology”, “long-term benefits”, “in-depth cost-
benefit analysis”, “functional aspects”, “customised solutions” and “survival
of the fittest.”
Activity 1:
Select an article from any business publication and prepare a précis of the
article by reducing it to one fourth its size.
(Refer sub-section 9.2.1 for detailed guidelines.)
Many companies have their own printed format in which the message is
written and sent. The format is similar to a letter as shown in figure 9.2.
Let us now study the components that form the structure or format of a
memo. Figure 9.3 depicts the components that form the structure of a
memo.
The “To” heading must mention the name of the receiver or the primary
target audience for example, in the memo shown in the figure 9.1 the ‘to’ is
the Marketing Vice President (VP). The ‘From’ heading must include the
name of the sender or writer of the memo (Marketing Executive). The
‘Subject’ line must include the specific purpose of the memo (the title of the
précis memo shown in figure 9.1). This helps the writer in the development
of the message and lets the reader know what the memo is all about. Date
is the day when the memo is drafted or circulated.
2. Body – This is the text of the memo which contains the details and major
topics. Unlike letters, the memo need not have a formal salutation such as,
‘Hi’, ‘Respected’, ‘Dear’, etc. Unlike a formal report which has to be
completely objective, personal pronouns such as “I” and “you” are
acceptable in a memo, as in the opening sentence of the memo shown in
figure 9.3. This is because a memo is purely for internal use of an
organisation.
3. Close/action – Usually, unlike formal letters, memos did not have a
formal close for example, ‘Sincerely’ and a signature line. However, now-a-
days many organisations close their memos with letters like ‘Sincerely’,
followed by the hand written signature and name of the person circulating
the memo. But, it is up to the organisation standards which define the memo
structure. Therefore, it is very important to know standard template of the
organisation to know the organisation standard.
If the purpose of the memo is not just to communicate the message, then
there must be a clear call for action. The action indicates what the audience
has to do for example, “I request you to review my proposal and to grant
approval.”
4. Courtesy copy – This is widely known as ‘cc’ and earlier stood for
carbon copy. Sometimes a copy of the memo may go to another person(s).
This is indicated by cc., followed by the name(s) of the person(s) to whom
the memo is being sent. As shown in figure 9.1 and 9.2.
Memo format
A memo may follow one of two types of formats, depending on its nature
and purpose:
Direct organisational plan or deductive organisation
In the memo shown in figure 9.4, the sales manager is confident that his
request for strengthening the sales force will be granted, as it has obvious
benefits. Therefore, the request is made right at the outset, followed by the
reasons.
Indirect organisational plan or inductive organisation
This type of memo format is appropriate when the purpose of the memo is
to persuade, but when the writer feels that the reader might object to the
request or the proposal. Therefore, the writer may try to convince the reader
by presenting the reasons first and then make the request or
recommendation right at the end. An example of a memo written using this
format is as depicted in figure 9.5.
In the memo shown in figure 9.5, the writer mentions his request or proposal
at the end and justifies the need for a bigger advertising budget first, by
listing out the reasons. As the writer is suggesting that the budget be
doubled, but the writer is not sure if the request will be granted. That is why
the indirect organisational plan is used instead of the direct plan. Unlike the
direct plan, the subject line does not reveal the real purpose of the memo,
which is a request for doubling the budget in the memo shown in the figure
9.5.
9.2.3 Language and writing style of a memo
As a memo is a short, informal report, the following points have to be
remembered regarding the language and style that is used:
Be concise – It is important to be brief and focus on the point, so that the
memo does not exceed two pages in length. Make the sentences and
paragraphs short, limit each paragraph to five lines or less and use bullet
points wherever possible. If you are giving reasons, number them or put
them in separate paragraphs with double line spacing. Otherwise use
single line spacing between lines.
Use active not passive voice – As mentioned earlier, use of personal
pronouns and active voice is permitted in a memo, unlike a formal report
where the passive voice must be used for the sake of objectivity. In other
words, it is appropriate to say for example that “Based on ‘my’
experience, ‘I’ feel that the budget is not adequate.”
Use simple language – In earlier units, the importance of using simple
English was emphasised. It is a good practice to use short and simple
words. At the same time avoid trying to impress the reader by using
unnecessary jargon.
Avoid giving too many reasons – Although, it is important to provide a
justification when you make a request or try to persuade someone to do
something, do not overdo it. In general, a reader can only absorb a
maximum of six or seven reasons at once. Therefore, do not overstate
your reasons.
Close with a call for action – Do not leave the reader hanging. If you
wish to persuade the reader to accept your request or recommendation,
you must say it clearly using action words and indicating a time frame or
limit. For example, “I would like to discuss this in person with you and get
your approval before the end of this week.”
Additional Reference:
Sehgal, M.K, & Khetarpal, V. (2011). Business Communication. New
Delhi: Excel Books.
and there may be too many suggestions. Instead, you may choose to
invite only the committee members to discuss details such as the date,
venue, duration, how to get sponsors, etc. For this purpose, you may
send a circular (as shown in figure 9.6) only to the student committee
members, requesting them to attend the meeting.
During the meeting, the date and venue are finalised and various smaller
committees may be formed, such as a reception committee and stage
committee. You may also decide to get each student to contribute a
nominal amount for the Fest. In order to announce these details and to
ask for student contributions, you may then put up a notice on the official
college notice board, which all students can see and respond to. The
notice can include the following details (as shown in figure 9.7):
Purpose of the notice
Date and time of the event
Venue
Names and details of special invitees
Figure 9.6 depicts a sample circular.
Note that a circular, like a memo is brief and to the point. It has a caption
that indicates the message to be conveyed, like a memo, there is no formal
salutation or close as shown in figure 9.6.
Figure 9.7 depicts a sample notice for the fest.
The notice depicted in figure 9.7 is meant for all students of the college. It
has a reference number, date and a subject, similar to a memo. The
signature, name and designation of the issuer of the notice appear at the
bottom on the left hand side. The notice covers three different issues related
to one subject. Students are first informed that special dignitaries Mr. Roy
and Dr. Arun Patil who will preside the fest. Secondly, it informs the topics
on which the dignitaries will talk during the fest. It also mentions that lunch
9.4 Summary
Let us recapitulate the important points discussed in this unit:
Compared to other forms of communication, written communication is
preferred as it provides tangible and verifiable record of the information
that was exchanged.
Memo writing is similar to précis writing where, detailed information is
presented in a concrete form to the audience especially to top executives
of an organisation.
9.5 Glossary
Customer Relationship Management: A widely implemented strategy for
managing a company's interactions with customers, clients and sales
prospects.
Fest: A gathering or occasion characterised by a specified activity.
Jargon: The specialised or technical language of a trade, profession or
similar group.
Salutation: A polite expression of greeting or goodwill.
9.7 Answers
We have provided leadership in our industry, across our supply chain and
among the global business community. Fox Entertainment developed
robust carbon footprinting standards and tools for film, television, sports
and event production, as well as a sustainable vendor guide. The
standards we set helped lead to a new industry-wide consortium and the
online, open-source Green Production Guide. Our initiative has even
prompted major suppliers, like paper manufacturer Norske Skog, to set
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supply chain initiative with Wal-mart, which pioneered an eco-case that
reduced emissions from raw materials alone by 13% and has become the
industry standard. Most recently, we became founding members of the
UK-India Business Leaders Climate Group.
Most important, throughout this endeavour we have continued to do what
we do best: engage our audiences around the world with the most
compelling content. Twentieth Century Fox's Ice Age franchise and the
most successful film of all time, Avatar, prove that passionate
environmental messages can be fodder for both blockbusters and real-
world action, like the million trees planted in 2010 through the Avatar
Home Tree initiative. National Geographic Channel offers scientifically
rigorous programmes, like Preserve Our Planet and Great Migrations,
that are also visually stunning. The Times of London built on its long
history of outstanding science coverage to launch Eureka, a monthly
magazine supplement dedicated to science, innovation and the
environment. News Limited recently launched the public face of its
award-winning employee-facing One Degree initiative. And The Wall
Street Journal's fourth annual ECO:nomics conference, the leading forum
for conversations at the intersection of business and the environment,
kicks off tomorrow.
News Corp.'s leadership in this area has been recognised by key
independent parties, recently earning top marks in the Carbon Disclosure
Project's leadership indices and winning big in the Environmental Media
Association's 20th annual awards, with top honours going to Avatar and
Bones.
We are well on our way to becoming the innovative, regenerative
business we want to be. In the long term, we aim to grow our business
without growing our carbon footprint, to power our operations with clean
electricity, to minimise solid waste to landfill from our production
operations and to continue to engage our audiences on sustainability
issues through partnerships and content of the highest calibre.
To help us realise this vision, I ask only that you apply the same creative
thinking to sustainability that you already do to your jobs every day.
Congratulations and thank you for putting us on the right path. We have
come a long way and we have much to do together.
Sincerely,
Rupert Murdoch
Discussion Questions:
1. What is the memo about?
(Hint: The CEO is congratulating the company’s employees as the
company has been recognised as a carbon neutral company)
2. Do you think the memo is written keeping in mind the standard
guidelines for writing a memo? Explain.
(Hint: Refer to sub sections 9.2.2 and 9.2.3)
(Source: http://gei.newscorp.com/letter.html)
Reference:
Kaul, A. (2006). Effective Business Communication. New Delhi: Prentice-
Hall of India Private Limited.
E-References:
http://stacienaczelnik.hubpages.com/hub/How-to-write-a-Memo
– Retrieved on January 18, 2012.
http://gei.newscorp.com/letter.html – Retrieved on January 19, 2012.