Modifiers
Modifiers
1. Dangling Modifiers:
These occur when the subject being modified is missing from the sentence.
2. Misplaced Modifiers:
These happen when a modifier is placed too far from the word it's modifying.
Example: "The teacher gave the student who was sleeping a warning."
Correction: "The teacher gave a warning to the student who was sleeping."
3. Squinting Modifiers:
These are modifiers that could apply to words on either side of them.
4. Ambiguous Modifiers:
Similar to squinting modifiers, these could logically modify multiple parts of a sentence.
Example: "The detective interviewed the suspect with the red hat."
Problem: It's unclear if the detective or the suspect had the red hat.
Correction: "The detective interviewed the suspect who was wearing a red hat."
5. Overuse of Modifiers:
Using too many descriptive words can make writing unclear or unnecessarily complicated.
Example: "The very old, wrinkled, wise man with the long, flowing, white beard spoke softly
and gently."
Correction: "The wise old man with a white beard spoke gently."
6. Illogical Comparisons:
These occur when comparing things that aren't in the same category.