TUGAS TUTORIAL KE-2

1. Perhatikan surat di bawah ini. / Please look at the letter below.

Rachel Gomez, Sr. Project Manager

555-555-5555 |[email protected] | Seattle, Washington98128

July 1, 2023

Vincent Prasad, Sr. Data Analyst

123-456-7890 | [email protected] | New Orleans, Louisiana 70122

1 Dear Vincent Prasad,
It's my pleasure to strongly recommend Ashley Singer for the Jr. Data Analyst role
with Clouddatanow Tech. I'm Rachel Gomez, a project manager at Asomtech
Solutions. I have 12 years of experience working in the tech industry and have seen
many young people come and go. Ashley Singer is one individual I have worked with
who has always distinguished herself as a team member.

During our time together, Ashley displayed great talents in data analytics. When we
first met, I felt immediately impressed with Ashley. During the time we worked
together, her understanding of analyzing data to achieve results for our company
grew far more than that of her peers.
2
It's not just her technical skills that impress me. Ashley was a joy to work with
because of her amazingly positive attitude and ability to communicate across teams.
Her focus and attention to detail were also necessary and valued not just by me, but
also by her peers, who often relied on her to get the job done. I'm absolutely
confident that Ashley would be a great fit at Clouddatanow Tech. She can bring the
skills and experiences you're looking for in a candidate, and she can quickly become
an asset and help your company grow.

If you need more information or specific examples, please don't hesitate to contact
me. As a recommendation letter likely only provides a snapshot of her talents and
achievements, I'd be happy to further elaborate on my time working with her.
Sincerely,

3 Rachel Gomez
Sr. Project Manager

Pertanyaan / Questions
 Identifikasi bagian surat yang ditandai oleh nomor 1-3. / Please identify the part of the
letter numbered 1-3.(@5 pts)
Answer:
English:

1. Dear Vincent Prasad: This is the salutation or greeting of the letter. It is the
opening line addressed to the recipient of the letter, Vincent Prasad in this case.
2. It's my pleasure to strongly recommend Ashley Singer for the Jr. Data Analyst role
with Clouddatanow Tech. I'm Rachel Gomez, a project manager at Asomtech
Solutions. I have 12 years of experience working in the tech industry and have seen
many young people come and go. Ashley Singer is one individual I have worked
with who has always distinguished herself as a team member. This is the
introduction and recommendation section of the letter. Rachel Gomez, the writer of
the letter, introduces herself, provides her professional background, and expresses
her recommendation for Ashley Singer for the Jr. Data Analyst role.
3. Sincerely, Rachel Gomez Sr. Project Manager: This is the closing of the letter. It
includes the writer's name, title, and sometimes additional contact information. In
this case, Rachel Gomez signs off as the Sr. Project Manager.

Translate:
1. Vincent Prasad yang terhormat: Ini adalah salam atau salam dari surat itu. Demikian
kalimat pembuka yang ditujukan kepada penerima surat, Vincent Prasad dalam hal
ini.
2. Dengan senang hati saya sangat merekomendasikan Ashley Singer untuk peran Jr.
Data Analyst di Clouddatanow Tech. Saya Rachel Gomez, manajer proyek di
Asomtech Solutions. Saya memiliki pengalaman 12 tahun bekerja di industri
teknologi dan telah melihat banyak anak muda datang dan pergi. Ashley Singer adalah
salah satu individu yang pernah bekerja dengan saya dan selalu membedakan dirinya
sebagai anggota tim. Ini adalah bagian pendahuluan dan rekomendasi dari surat
tersebut. Rachel Gomez, penulis surat, memperkenalkan dirinya, memberikan latar
belakang profesionalnya, dan mengungkapkan rekomendasinya untuk Ashley Singer
untuk peran Jr. Data Analyst.
3. Hormat kami, Rachel Gomez Sr. Manajer Proyek: Ini adalah penutup surat ini. Ini
mencakup nama penulis, gelar, dan terkadang informasi kontak tambahan. Dalam hal
ini, Rachel Gomez keluar sebagai Sr. Manajer Proyek
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2. Perhatikan surat di bawah ini. / Please look at the letter below.

Bridgestone International Co.

1660 Maple Court
Kennett, MO 63857
July 21, 2021
William Reed Purchase Manager The Cooking Store 2175 Rivendell Drive
Mineral City, OH 44656 Dear Mr. Reed,
Thank u for your letter of 4 july inquiring about our latest catalog, price list, and terms of payment?

our latest catalog, price list, and terms of payment together with samples of our promotional gifts. We hope you will find ou

I look forward to receive your order. Yours sincerely,

Robert Brown
Robert Brown Sales Manage

Pertanyaan / Questions
Identifikasi 5 (lima) kesalahan pada surat di atas. / Please identify 5 (five) errors in the letter above.(@5 pts)
 Answer
English
1. The salutation is incorrect. It should be "Dear Mr. Reed," instead of "Thank u for
your letter of 4 july inquiring about our latest catalog, price list, and terms of
payment?"
2. The sentence structure and grammar are incorrect. It should be "Thank you for your
letter of July 4th inquiring about our latest catalog, price list, and terms of
payment."
3. The word "u" should be spelled out as "you."
4. The sentence "We hope you will find our prices n terms satisfactory" contains a
typographical error. "n" should be "and."
5. The sender's name is repeated twice at the end of the letter. It should only be
mentioned once.

Translate
1. Salamnya salah. Seharusnya "Dear Mr. Reed," bukannya "Terima kasih atas surat
Anda tertanggal 4 Juli yang menanyakan tentang katalog terbaru kami, daftar
harga, dan ketentuan pembayaran?"
2. Struktur kalimat dan tata bahasanya salah. Seharusnya berupa "Terima kasih atas
surat Anda tertanggal 4 Juli yang menanyakan tentang katalog terbaru kami, daftar
harga, dan syarat pembayaran."
3. Kata "u" harus dieja sebagai "kamu".
4. Kalimat "Kami harap harga dan persyaratan kami memuaskan" mengandung
kesalahan ketik. "n" seharusnya menjadi "dan."
5. Nama pengirim diulang dua kali di bagian akhir
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3. Anda adalah ketua panitia sebuah seminar internasional dan mengundang pakar di
bidangnya. Salah satu pakar yang hadir menjadi narasumber adalah Prof. Allen Smith.
Tulislah email ucapan terima kasih untuk Prpf. Allen Smith yang bersedia menjadi
narasumber di seminar internasional Anda. Email Anda harus berisi 100-150 kata.
(60 pts)

You are chairman of the committee for an international seminar and invite experts in the
field. One of the experts who attended as a guest speaker was Prof. Allen Smith. Write a
thank-you email for Prof. Allen Smith who is willing to be a guest speaker at your
international seminar. Your email should be 100-150 words long.

Answer
Hello Prof. Allen Smith,

I would like to express my deepest gratitude for your willingness to be a resource person at
our international seminar. We greatly appreciate your contributions and expertise in this
area.

Your presence as an expert at our seminar will provide valuable insight to participants and
will make the event a success. We are confident that your knowledge and experience will
have a great positive impact on the participants.

We are very grateful for the time and effort you took to share your knowledge with us. We
hope this event will be a good opportunity for you to interact with other professionals and
academics in this field.

Once again, thank you very much for your participation in our international seminar. We
look forward to working with you in the future and establishing a closer relationship.

Warm regards,

[Boby arisandi] [Chair of the International Seminar Committee]

 Translate
Halo Prof. Allen Smith,

Saya ingin mengucapkan terima kasih yang sebesar-besarnya atas kesediaan Anda untuk menjadi
narasumber di seminar internasional kami. Kami sangat menghargai kontribusi dan keahlian
Anda dalam bidang ini.

Kehadiran Anda sebagai pakar di seminar kami akan memberikan wawasan yang berharga bagi
peserta dan akan membuat acara ini menjadi sukses. Kami yakin bahwa pengetahuan dan
pengalaman Anda akan memberikan dampak positif yang besar pada para peserta.

Kami sangat berterima kasih atas waktu dan usaha yang Anda luangkan untuk berbagi
pengetahuan Anda dengan kami. Semoga acara ini menjadi kesempatan yang baik bagi Anda
untuk berinteraksi dengan para profesional dan akademisi lainnya di bidang ini.

Sekali lagi, terima kasih banyak atas partisipasi Anda dalam seminar internasional kami. Kami
berharap dapat bekerja sama dengan Anda di masa depan dan menjalin hubungan yang lebih
erat.

Salam hangat,

[Bobi arisandi] [Ketua Panitia Seminar Internasional]