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NOTE BUỔI 2

Exercise 1:
Model answer by category
[In the model report written below the structure is by category. One
paragraph has the categories which have a different percentage in
each country, and the other paragraph has the categories which are
the same in both contracts.]

The pie charts compare weekly expenses of the six most common
categories, in typical households, in America and United Kingdom, in
2010. Overall, it is obvious from the charts that spending on rent
accounted for the largest proportion in the UK, whilst in the United
States it was food. In addition, expenditures on DVDs were the
lowest in both of the nations.
Looking first at the expenses that varies between countries, rent
accounted for a high proportion in both countries at 30% and 20% of
the weekly spending in Great Britain and the USA, respectively.
Americans spent a significantly higher proportion on food and
books, which accounted for 25% and 15% of their weekly expenses,
respectively. However, British spent only 18% and 12% on food and
books.
Turning to items that both nations spent an equal proportion on, the
expenditure for transportation, going out for entertainment, and
DVDs were the same proportion. People in both countries spent 15%
of their weekly budget on transport and also on visiting places. The
rate of spending on DVDs was slightly lower at 10%. [180 words]

Model answer by pie chart


[In the model answer below the structure is by pie charts. One
paragraph describes the first pie chart and the second one
describes the second pie chart.]
The pie charts compare weekly expenses of the six most common
categories, in typical households, in America and United Kingdom, in
2010. Overall, it is obvious from the charts that spending on rent
accounted for the largest proportion in the UK, whilst in the United
States it was food. In addition, expenditures on DVDs were the
lowest in both of the nations.
In Britain, the highest proportion was spent on accommodation,
which accounted for 30%. Food was the second highest item of
expense at 18%. The British spent exactly the same proportion on
going out for entertainment and transportation [15%]. The lowest
item of expenditure was DVDs at 10%.
Turning to America, groceries accounted for the highest proportion
of expenditure at 25%. Transportation entertainment and reading
materials each accounted for exactly fifteen per cent. As was the
case in the UK, the lowest proportion was spent on DVDs, with the
same percentage of 10%.
[154 words]

model answer 1
Overview
--> mention what was the largest proportion + DVD (lowest of both
countries)

Body 1:
--> rent --> one of the highest expended in both countries
--> books and food --> comparison between two countries (UK's
percentage is higher than that of USA)

Body 2:
--> both countries are equivalent in percentages -->categories:
going out and transport(15%) + books,going out and transport

model answer 2:
overview
--> mention what was the largest proportion + DVD (lowest)

body 1:
--> proportion in the first chart

body 2:
--> proportion in the second chart

Exercise 2:
The pie charts compares the expenditure of a school located in
England in three different time frames during the twenty-year period

It is apparent that the largest proportion belonged to the teachers'


salaries in the overall budget's allocation of the school in three
separate years (1981,1991 and 2001). Contrarily, insurance was
invested(sai collocation) the least in each listed years

In 1981, 40% of the school's budget was expended on(sai


collocation) teachers' salaries. This number showcased an uptick,
numbering up to 50% in 1991, but then reduced by 5% in 2001. The
allotment of money on other workers' salaries decreased
significantly during the twenty-year period, starting from 28% of the
overall budget in 181 to 15% in 2001

The spending on insurance only made up 2% compared to the total


in 1981, but reached 8% in 2001. Finally, the proportion of furniture
and equipment as well as resources showed vacillations. This
number for resources such as books was the highest in 1991, at
approximately 20%, and the percentages of furniture and
equipment reached a peak in 2001, constituting 23%

Exercise 3:
1. Past and future data/ concern/ worldwide carbon dioxide
emission
--> Past and future data showcased the number of concerns about
the worldwide carbon dioxide emission in percentages/specific
numbers

2. As can be seen/ two pie charts/ developing countries/ expect/


account for/ bigger share of emission/ 2030/ 48%/ compare/ 38%/
2002
--> As can be seen from the two pie charts, developing countries are
expected to account for a bigger share of emission in 2030 at 48%,
compared to the 38% in 2002

3. In contrast/ OECD countries/ project/ make up/ lower


proportion/ 43%/ 9% down/ same period
--> In contrast, OECD countries’ project makes up a lower
proportion, starting from 43% to 9% down at the same period

4. Countries with transition economies/ estimate/ take up/


remaining 9%/ 2030/ 1%/ less than/ 2002
--> Countries with transition economies are estimated to take up
the remaining 9% in 2030, which is 1% less than that of 2002

5. Carbon dioxide emissions/ expand/ varying degrees/ different


sectors/ 2030
--> Carbon dioxide emissions expand to varying degrees
categorized into different sectors in 2030
6. Industry/ continue/ major producer of carbon dioxide/ rise/
more than 10 billion tons/ 2030
--> Industry continues to be the major producer of carbon dioxide,
rising to more than 10 billion tons in 2030
7. Next/ come/ consumer sector/ project/ more than double/
emissions/ less than 4 billion/ 8 billion or more
--> What next to come is the consumer section, which is
projected to more than double the emissions, starting from less
than 4 billion to 8 billion or more
8. Transportation/ third largest producer/ a huge growth/ 6
billion/ triple the amount/ 2002
Transportation is the third largest producer, making a huge
growth to 6 billion, which triples the amount of 2002

9. By comparison/ waste combustion and other sectors/ make


up/ much lower proportion/ each/ produce/ an estimated 1 billion
carbon dioxide
--> By comparison, waste combustion and other sectors make up
much lower proportion, each producing an estimated 1 billion
carbon dioxide

Key:
1. The pie charts compare the Yemen and Italy’s population
dispersal in three separate age brackets in 2000 and 2050
2. The Yemeni aged from 15-59 will showcase a considerable
uptick in population, starting, from 46.3% to 57%
3. The 60 or older cohort of Yemini people would witness a slight
increase by over 2%
4. Contrarily, Yemini younger age group, specifically from 0 to 14
years old, would decrease considerably, from 50.1% to 37%
5. The 15-59 age brackets in Italian reduced by a quarter of the
initial population in 2000 c

The pie charts delineate how much each type of energy is consumed and the
distribution of oil barrels worldwide while the line chart illustrates the oil prices
around the globe during the 25-year period from 2000 onwards
Overall, it could be witnessed from the first pie chart is the considerably high
proportion of oil and coil compared to other categories while from the second chart,
Saudi Arabia possesses the highest amount of oil in comparison to other countries.
From the line chart, world oil prices, albeit wild vacillation, show mostly an upbeat
trend

As it could be seen the first pie chart, oil and coal take up more than half of the
energy consumption, accounting for 37% and 28%, respectively. Next comes natural
gas, constituting 23% of the energy utilization, nearly doubling that of hydro-electric
and nuclear combined, numbering up to 6%. Looking into the second chart,
Saudi Arabia, Canada and other countries take up more than half of the global oil
barrels, accounting for 20%, 14% and 18%, respectively. Coming close in worldwide
oil reserves is Iran and Iraq, making up 10% and 9%, respectively. United Arab and
Kuwait’s international oil barrels are equivalent to each other, both constituting 8%.
Finally, the lowest proportion belonged to Venezuela, Russia and the United States
at a mere 6%, 5% and 2%, respectively

Analyzing the line chart, from 2000 to 2006, the global oil barrels’ value skyrocketed
and eventually reached its peak in 2006 at almost 60 dollars per barrel. In contrast,
the world oil prices showcased a significant decrease, downgrading to below the 50
dollar per barrel. After the downward trend, the global oil prices reached a stagnant
at around the 50 dollars per barrel mark , eventually predicted to recover to the
above the 50 dollars per barrel.

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