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Title/Introducing
Great news!
New opportunity for all staff!
Why not take advantage of an exciting new scheme?
Informing
The changes come into place next month.
The company is happy to announce that ...
We are opening our first office in Ecuador.
Concluding
We would welcome any comments you might have about ...
Let us know if you wish to participate.
If you are interested, please contact …
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Volunteer projects for sabbaticals
Want to take that sabbatical but don’t know how to arrange it? Then you are sure to be delighted
to learn that we are sponsoring sabbaticals next year which involve overseas volunteer projects.
The company is happy to announce that it would welcome ideas for volunteering projects from
all staff. One example idea has already been suggested. It is a sabbatical working with a marine
charity on the Great Barrier Reef in Australia. In Australia you could take advantage of the
opportunity to both learn about marine life and how to surf. As you are likely to want to see more
of the country, you will have one month to travel around the country after your volunteering
work. If you are interested in this opportunity or have your own idea to submit, please contact
HR by the end of the month, when next year’s sabbatical schedule is to be finalized. Please
don’t hesitate to contact us if you have an idea you would like to discuss informally.
A TRAINING REQUEST
Requests
I am writing to request some more professional training
I would therefore like to attend
Please could you let me know if
Would it be possible for me to do a course?
I would appreciate it if I could ...
It would be very helpful if I could attend a course.
Reasons
As I have just become project leader, it is important to attend a leadership course
It is vital to develop my skills, so that I can manage team effectively
Because registration closes soon
I am interested in developing my skills for dealing with conflict
I start work in Spain soon so I need to study Spanish.
I have just been promoted to manager so ...
I do not have enough experience in this area.
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As I am now having to negotiate new contracts with our customers, I feel that it would be
very helpful if I could attend this new course to help me negotiate more effectively.
I believe that the course is ideal because it focuses on key skills such as being able to
recognise how negotiations can change during the process and how to read the reactions of the
people I am negotiating with. It is very important to be able to know if the other side is likely to
accept our offer. Another area where I need to improve my skills is being able to listen actively. I
sometimes find it difficult to keep focused on listening so I occasionally might not always ask the
right questions.
In order to create suitable strategies, the course also looks at the value of careful
planning and preparation so that I can create effective strategies to use during negotiations.
Since the next course is in two weeks’ time, I’d appreciate it if you could confirm as soon
as possible if I can take this course as I have to negotiate the new contract with our biggest
client next month.
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This proposal evaluates the possibility of investing in driverless battery-powered vehicles
to transport people around the city. Our long-term strategy is to ban gas-powered vehicles
completely from the centre within three years to reduce congestion and pollution and to
encourage more people to use public transport.
Driverless buses would be an excellent solution.
They are reasonably priced, cheaper to run than traditional forms of public transport and
much cleaner for the environment, so there would be far less pollution. People who drive into
the city usually leave their cars parked 95 percent of the time, so using these vehicles would
free up car parks for other uses. In addition, the city would not have to build new infrastructure
as these vehicles can travel safely on existing roads and bridges.
Although initial investment is high, these battery- powered vehicles are cheaper to run
than other forms of transport. As travel costs would be lower for customers, this could persuade
more people to use public transport. We could run a trial by the end of the year in part of the
city.
In conclusion, I therefore recommend the city invests in driverless vehicles and runs a
trial route before the end of the year.
MODEL SAMPLE:
From: Project Manager
To: Production Director
Subject: Unexpected problem
Hi Sofia,
I’m really sorry to tell you that an unexpected problem has arisen with the equipment we
ordered for the new factory.
The main reason for this problem is that the supplier we chose has gone bankrupt. I
received a letter this morning informing me of this. As a result, we won’t receive our order.
Unfortunately, this leaves us in a very difficult situation because we do not have the machines
we need.
Consequently, if we do not get the equipment, the factory opening will be seriously
delayed, which we cannot afford. There is also a problem with the fact that we paid a deposit to
the supplier when we ordered the equipment and it is unlikely that we will ever get it back.
I therefore propose that I investigate alternative suppliers and see if anyone can supply
the equipment as soon as possible at a reasonable cost. Unfortunately, we will probably have to
pay more for other equipment. I’ll have information about the costs, delivery times and
equipment specifications on your desk by the end of the week. Hopefully we can then make a
decision and re-assess our schedule if necessary.
PRESS RELEASE
News and key facts (Para 1)
Beeza has announced an independent review
Thousands of bags were transported to the wrong destinations
Further details (para 2)
Customers were complaining that they couldn’t contact customer services
Customers were met with automated email replies
The situation quickly went viral
Quotation (and apology if required) (Para 3)
The CEO said he was very sorry and deeply regretted the situation…
The CEO promised he would do everything he could to ensure that customers were
compensated
He also reminded everyone that customers were the key to success
Future promises (para 4)
It is expected that the review will be completed…
Beeza assured the public that regular announcements on the progress of the
investigation would be made…
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Move to Mumbai
Now that Hasfell Supplies is part of a multinational group, it has announced plans for the
relocation of its headquarters to Mumbai, in order to take advantage of the growing markets in
South East Asia. Unfortunately the media believes the company is causing huge job losses in
the UK, but this is far from the truth.
The move, which is expected to take place in December when the new office building is
ready, may result in job losses in the UK, but all employees have been offered work in other
parts of the UK organisation. Several staff have already indicated they are happy to take
voluntary redundancy.
Mr Raj Singh, the CEO, informed staff about the relocation before going public and
regretted the negative reaction to the announcement. He assured staff this expansion would
bring more business and offer new and exciting opportunities for promotion and career
development within the company.
The company management team will meet all current staff next week to discuss their
future career options. Interviews for jobs in Mumbai will take place next month. Hasfell said
there would be regular announcements on the progress of the move. For further information,
contact Anika Chadha on [email protected].