TUGAS TUTORIAL KE-2

1. Perhatikan surat di bawah ini. / Please look at the letter below.

Rachel Gomez, Sr. Project Manager

555-555-5555 |[email protected] | Seattle, Washington98128

July 1, 2023

Vincent Prasad, Sr. Data Analyst

123-456-7890 | [email protected] | New Orleans, Louisiana 70122

1 Dear Vincent Prasad,

It's my pleasure to strongly recommend Ashley Singer for the Jr. Data Analyst role with
Clouddatanow Tech. I'm Rachel Gomez, a project manager at Asomtech Solutions. I
have 12 years of experience working in the tech industry and have seen many young
people come and go. Ashley Singer is one individual I have worked with who has always
distinguished herself as a team member.

During our time together, Ashley displayed great talents in data analytics. When we first
met, I felt immediately impressed with Ashley. During the time we worked together, her
understanding of analyzing data to achieve results for our company grew far more than
that of her peers.
2
It's not just her technical skills that impress me. Ashley was a joy to work with because
of her amazingly positive attitude and ability to communicate across teams. Her focus
and attention to detail were also necessary and valued not just by me, but also by her
peers, who often relied on her to get the job done. I'm absolutely confident that Ashley
would be a great fit at Clouddatanow Tech. She can bring the skills and experiences
you're looking for in a candidate, and she can quickly become an asset and help your
company grow.
If you need more information or specific examples, please don't hesitate to contact me.
As a recommendation letter likely only provides a snapshot of her talents and
achievements, I'd be happy to further elaborate on my time working with her.

Sincerely,

3 Rachel Gomez

Sr. Project Manager

Pertanyaan / Questions
Identifikasi bagian surat yang ditandai oleh nomor 1-3. / Please identify the part of the letter
numbered 1-3.(@5 pts)
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2. Perhatikan surat di bawah ini. / Please look at the letter below.

March 15th, 2024

Customer Service Department

Greenery
Oatside Road 35
New York, 356

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with a recent order I placed with your company. On
January 24th, I ordered 5 boxes of vegetables (Order Number: SPX35672980). Unfortunately,
the delivery was significantly delay, arriving on February 13rd, well past the expected date.

Moreover, upon inspection of the vegetables, I found that several items were in poor condition.
Many of the vegetables were wilted, discolored, and showed signs of spoilage. This is
acceptable, as I had expected fresh and high-quality produce based on your company's
reputation.

I request a full refund for the damaged items or a replacement of the affecting vegetables.
additionally, I would appreciate an explanation for the delay and steps that will be taken to
prevent such issues in the future.

Please contact me at your earliest convenience to resolve this matter. I look forward to your
prompt response and a satisfactory resolution.

Sincerely,
Pamela Taylor

Pertanyaan / Questions
Identifikasi 5 (lima) kesalahan pada surat di atas. / Please identify 5 (five) errors in the letter
above. (@5 pts)

TUGAS TUTORIAL KE-2

 3. Anda adalah ketua panitia sebuah seminar internasional dan mengundang pakar di
bidangnya. Salah satu pakar yang hadir menjadi narasumber adalah Prof. Allen Smith. Tulislah
email ucapan terima kasih untuk Prpf. Allen Smith yang bersedia menjadi narasumber di
seminar internasional Anda. Email Anda harus berisi 100-150 kata.
(60 pts)

You are chairman of the committee for an international seminar and invite experts in the field.
One of the experts who attended as a guest speaker was Prof. Allen Smith. Write a thank-you
email for Prof. Allen Smith who is willing to be a guest speaker at your international seminar.
Your email should be 100-150 words long.

ANSWER TUTORIAL KE 1

The parts of the letter numbered 1-3 are as follows:

1. "Dear Vincent Prasad" - This is the salutation of the letter, where the writer addresses the
recipient by name.
2. "It's my pleasure to strongly recommend Ashley Singer for the Jr. Data Analyst role with
Clouddatanow Tech. I'm Rachel Gomez, a project manager at Asomtech Solutions. I have
12 years of experience working in the tech industry and have seen many young people
come and go. Ashley Singer is one individual I have worked with who has always
distinguished herself as a team member." - This is the introduction and the main body of
the letter. In this part, the writer introduces themselves, provides their credentials, and
explains their relationship with the recommended candidate. They also highlight the
candidate's qualifications and skills.
3. "Sincerely, Rachel Gomez Sr. Project Manager" - This is the closing of the letter, where
the writer signs off and provides their name and job title.

ANSWER TUTORIAL KE 2
1. Spelling and Grammar Errors:
 "significantly delay" should be "significantly delayed"
 "February 13rd" should be "February 13th"
 "This is acceptable" should be "This is unacceptable"
2. Address Format:
 "Oatside Road 35 New York, 356" should be "35 Oatside Road, New York, 356"
3. Punctuation Errors:
 "I request a full refund for the damaged items or a replacement of the affecting
vegetables. additionally," should be "I request a full refund for the damaged items or a
replacement of the affected vegetables. Additionally,"
4. Inconsistent Tense:
 "I found that several items were in poor condition" should be "I find that several items are
in poor condition"
5. Typographical Error:
 "or a replacement of the affecting vegetables" should be "or a replacement of the affected
vegetables"

ANSWER TUTORIAL KE 3
Dear Prof. Allen Smith,
On behalf of the organizing committee, I would like to express our deepest gratitude for
accepting our invitation to be a guest speaker at our upcoming international seminar. Your
expertise and insights in the field of [insert field] are highly regarded, and we are honored to
have you as part of our distinguished panel of speakers.
Your presence and contribution will undoubtedly enrich the seminar and provide valuable
knowledge to our participants. We believe that your extensive experience and research in [insert
specific topic] will greatly benefit the attendees and inspire fruitful discussions.
We have carefully designed the seminar program to ensure a dynamic and engaging experience
for all participants. Your keynote speech on [insert topic] is highly anticipated, and we are
confident that it will captivate the audience and stimulate further exploration of the subject
matter.
Once again, thank you for your willingness to share your expertise with us. We truly appreciate
your commitment to advancing knowledge in the field and your support for our seminar. We
look forward to welcoming you to our event and to the valuable insights you will bring.
Should you have any specific requirements or need further information, please do not hesitate to
contact us. We will be more than happy to assist you in any way we can.
Thank you once again, and we eagerly await your presence at the seminar.

Best regards,

Haerullah