1 MUET PAPER 4 WRITING- TASK 2 SAMPLE ESSAYS

TABLE OF CONTENTS

CONTENTS PAGE

√ SAMPLE ESSAY 1– MUET BAND 4.5- ICT and social ills 2-12
SAMPLE ESSAY 2– MUET BAND 4.5- Fashion 13-22
SAMPLE ESSAY 3– MUET BAND 4- International sporting events 23-33
SAMPLE ESSAY 4– MUET BAND 4.5- Peer pressure 34-43
SAMPLE ESSAY 5– MUET BAND 4.5- COVID-19 and online education 44-53
SAMPLE ESSAY 6– MUET BAND 5- The elderly and nursing homes (Disagree stand) 54-64
SAMPLE ESSAY 7– MUET BAND 5- Peer pressure 65-75
SAMPLE ESSAY 8– MUET BAND 5- Online information 76-89
SAMPLE ESSAY 9– MUET BAND 5- COVID-19 and online education 90-102
SAMPLE ESSAY 10– MUET BAND 5- The elderly and nursing homes (Agree stand) 103-113
SAMPLE ESSAY 11– MUET BAND 5- Public health 114-124
SAMPLE ESSAY 12– MUET BAND 5- Competition 125-134
SAMPLE ESSAY 13– MUET BAND 5- Traditional entertainment 135-144
SAMPLE ESSAY 14– MUET BAND 5- Part-time job 145-154
SAMPLE ESSAY 15– MUET BAND 5- A good scare or advice 155-164
SAMPLE ESSAY 16– MUET BAND 5- The most valuable thing in life 165-174
SAMPLE ESSAY 17– MUET BAND 5- Study abroad/locally 175-184
SAMPLE ESSAY 18– MUET BAND 5- Computer 185-193
SAMPLE ESSAY 19– MUET BAND 5- Preserve green lungs in urban areas 194-203

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Task 2
SAMPLE ESSAY 1– MUET BAND 4.5
You are advised to spend about 50 minutes on this task.

You listened to a speech by the head prefect of your school during your school’s English week. The following
comment was made by the head prefect:

“Information and communication technology (ICT) is the cause of today’s many social ills.”

Do you agree with the statement? Write an essay of at least 250 words.
ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY [60 marks]

PLAN OF DEVELOPMENT

PARAGRAPH 1 (INTRODUCTION)
Information and communication technology (ICT) includes Introduce the topic
digital products that can store, process, transmit, or receive electronic *Refer to the question

information. Examples of ICT are software applications, web-based and choose ANY WORD
to start your essay.
information and computer hardware. ICT has a profound impact on
←

society. ICT has brought about a lot of positive developments in today’s

world as ICT enables people to obtain a voluminous amount of
information and facilitates communication. However, ICT has its dark
sides.
I agree with the statement that information and communication Stand (Compulsory)
technology (ICT) is to blame for many of today's social ills. *Write your stand in
ONE SENTENCE.
This is because ICT causes addiction, obsession and depression. Thesis statement
*LAST SENTENCE of
paragraph 1. Write 3
POINTS in the thesis
statement in ONE
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*Low Frequency Words
1. profound

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2. voluminous amount

PARAGRAPH 2 (POINT NO. 1)

First and foremost, ICT causes addiction, which leads to many Topic Sentence (T)
of today’s social ills. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 1 should be
written there.
With the advent of the digital era, anyone can own a mobile phone or a Elaboration 1 (E1)
computer to conduct daily activities. Rapid-paced technology enables * Give the first
explanation for your
people to gain access to various types of information with just a click of
TOPIC SENTENCE.
the mouse. However, the convenience brought by ICT has lead to an
over-reliance on technology. Nowadays, people cannot live without
mobile phones or computers since these digital devices have brought a
lot of convenience and entertainment to their lives. The easily-accessible
digital entertainment due to user-friendly technology has caused people
to become addicted to the entertainment.
For example, people are now rely on digital entertainment like playing Example 1 (Ex1)
computer games to spend their free time.
Comment:
Elaboration to
1. Good-
example 1 (EEx1)
Point no.1 is
discussed in
detail.
The introduction of e-Sport, which is a form of sports competition using Elaboration 2 (E2)
2. Some video games, has gained popularity in today’s society due to the * Give the second
grammatical explanation for your
errors. advancement of ICT. E-Sport players are addicted to e-Sport as they can
TOPIC SENTENCE.
spend the whole day playing video games and they can’t stop playing.
For instance, they even stop eating and sleeping in order to play video Example 2 (Ex2)
games that are thematic and include a lot of interesting themes like
fighting, shooting, and survival.

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They are addicted to video games and have neglected their priority, Elaboration to
which is study or work. Addiction to video games may even lead to example 2 (EEx2)
crimes like theft or robbery. This is because teenagers tend to spend a
lot of money on buying consoles or computers in order to play video
games.

Therefore, ICT may lead to social ills as ICT can cause addiction. Concluding Sentence
*ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*Low Frequency Words
1. rapid-paced
2. over-reliance
3. easily-accessible
4. e-Sport
5. thematic
6. consoles

PARAGRAPH 3 (POINT NO. 2)

Furthermore, ICT is the cause of today’s many social ills because Topic Sentence (T)
ICT causes obsession. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 2 should be
Comment:
written there.
1. Some
Obsession is the domination of one’s thoughts or feelings by a persistent Elaboration 1 (E1)
sentences
don't sound idea, image, or desire. The ubiquitous internet enables society to gain * Give the first
right. access to various kinds of information and news about the latest fashion explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.
2. Some trends. Through social media and digital news, young people can follow
grammatical
the latest fashion trends started by celebrities.
errors.

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For example, youths are following the trend of wearing bike shorts or Example 1 (Ex1)
having a pixie cut, inspired by Korean celebrities.
Youths can spend a whale of time dressing up to look fashionable and Elaboration to
trendy so that they can be accepted by the society. This has resulted in example 1 (EEx1)
youths becoming fashion victims as they become increasingly obsessed
with the latest fashion trends. Peer influence is crucial in influencing
youth fashion attitudes. Poor fashion choices may cause youths to be
ostracised by their peers.

Youths tend to follow fashion trends started by their favourite celebrities Elaboration 2 (E2)
as informations on fashion is widespread and disseminated through ICT. * Give the second
explanation for your
In the long term, youths may become fashion obsessed. This may
TOPIC SENTENCE.
eventually lead to the neglection of their obligations like studying or
working, as youths are obsessed with fashion and they are not
concentrate on their priority tasks.
Example 2 (Ex2)
Elaboration to
example 2 (EEx2)

Thus, there is no doubt that ICT can cause obsession and lead to social Concluding Sentence
ills. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
Comment:
SENTENCE.
1. Point no.2
NOTES:
and Point
no.3 can be *Low Frequency Words
reorganised 1. domination
in terms of
their 2. persistent
seriousness. 3. ubiquitous
Point no.3
4. ostracised
should be
discussed 5. disseminated
first. Point
no.2 should
be the last
one.
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PARAGRAPH 4 (POINT NO. 3)
Last but not least, ICT can cause depression, which leads to Topic Sentence (T)
social ills. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 3 should be
written there.
It is an undeniable fact that depression and anxiety are popular and Elaboration 1 (E1)
prevalent social problems. These social issues can be attributed to ICT. * Give the first
explanation for your
The advancement in ICT enables people to use social media anytime
TOPIC SENTENCE.
and anywhere. Cyberbullying can take place on social media, which
leads to depression. Cyberbullying is bullying with the use of digital
technologies. Cyberbullying mostly takes place on social media like
Facebook, Instagram, and Twitter.
For example, youths are vulnerable and can easily succumb to Example 1 (Ex1)
cyberbullying.

Comment:
This sentence can be used to elaborate further on the effect and to
highlight social ills caused by ICT.

Correction of example:
For example, “body shaming” is a problem that is popular among
internet users, especially on Facebook and Twitter. Body shaming
is a type of cyberbullying (elaborate briefly on what body shaming
is).

The lack of parental supervision and proper moral upbringing has Elaboration to
resulted in the soaring rate of cyberbullying. example 1 (EEx1)

Those who have been cyberbullied are more prone to mental problems Elaboration 2 (E2)
like depression and anxiety as they lack mature judgement and cannot * Give the second
explanation for your
make rational decisions on ways to overcome their problems.
TOPIC SENTENCE.
Depression can have a severe impact on young people.

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For instance, some victims of cyberbullying may tend to commit suicide Example 2 (Ex2)
as they feel that life is meaningless.
Some may even resort to juvenile delinquency, such as committing Elaboration to
murder against those who have bullied them for relief from the mental example 2 (EEx2)
conflict or mental stress. The increasing juvenile crime rate may be the
negative impact of ICT on immature youths.

Hence, ICT can lead to social ills as it causes depression. Concluding Sentence
*ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*Low Frequency Words
1. prevelant
2. succumb to
3. prone to
4.juvenile delinquency

PARAGRAPH 5 (CONCLUSION)
In conclusion, ICT has a huge impact on today’s society. Concluding Line(s)
*Fresh rephrasing of the
topic
In my opinion, I strongly agree that information and communication Restate your stand /
technology (ICT) is the cause of today’s many social ills. This is due to opinion
the fact that ICT causes addiction, obsession, and depression. &
Summarise your 3
points
The accessibility of information due to technological advancement has Hope / Suggestion
brought about lots of negative impacts on society. The government
should develop and implement suitable policies to combat the social

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problems caused by ICT. This is to ensure that our nation can develop
sustainably and prosperously.

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Task 2
SAMPLE ESSAY 1– MUET BAND 4.5
You are advised to spend about 50 minutes on this task.

You listened to a speech by the head prefect of your school during your school’s English week. The following
comment was made by the head prefect:

“Information and communication technology (ICT) is the cause of today’s many social ills.”

Do you agree with the statement? Write an essay of at least 250 words.
ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY [60 marks]

PARAGRAPH 1 (INTRODUCTION)
Information and communication technology (ICT) includes digital products
Introduce the
that can store, process, transmit, or receive electronic information. Examples of ICT topic
are software applications, web-based information and computer hardware. ICT has
巨 的影响
a profound impact on society. ICT has brought about a lot of positive developments
获得
in today’s world as ICT enables people to obtain a voluminous amount of
information and facilitates communication. However, ICT has its dark sides. I agree
with the statement that information and communication technology (ICT) is to Stand
blame for many of today's social ills. This is because ICT causes addiction,
Thesis
obsession and depression. Statement

PARAGRAPH 2 (POINT NO. 1)

First and foremost, ICT causes addiction, which leads to many of today’s Topic Sentence
social ills. With the advent of the digital era, anyone can own a mobile phone or a E1
快节奏
computer to conduct daily activities. Rapid-paced technology enables people to
gain access to various types of information with just a click of the mouse. However,
Comment: 古连依赖

the convenience brought by ICT has lead to an over-reliance on technology.

1. Good-
Nowadays, people cannot live without mobile phones or computers since these
Point no.1 is
discussed in digital devices have brought a lot of convenience and entertainment to their lives.
detail. The easily-accessible digital entertainment due to user-friendly technology has
2. Some caused people to become addicted to the entertainment. For example, people are Ex1
grammatical
now rely on digital entertainment like playing computer games to spend their free
errors.
time. The introduction of e-Sport, which is a form of sports competition using video E2
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games, has gained popularity in today’s society due to the advancement of ICT. E- Ex2
Sport players are addicted to e-Sport as they can spend the whole day playing video
games and they can’t stop playing. For instance, they even stop eating and sleeping EEx2
有主题
in order to play video games that are thematic and include a lot of interesting themes
like fighting, shooting, and survival. They are addicted to video games and have
neglected their priority, which is study or work. Addiction to video games may even Concluding
Sentence
lead to crimes like theft or robbery. This is because teenagers tend to spend a lot of
money on buying consoles or computers in order to play video games. Therefore,
ICT may lead to social ills as ICT can cause addiction.
PARAGRAPH 3 (POINT NO. 2)
Furthermore, ICT is the cause of today’s many social ills because ICT Topic Sentence
causes obsession. Obsession is the domination of one’s thoughts or feelings by a E1
普通存在的
persistent idea, image, or desire. The ubiquitous internet enables society to gain
access to various kinds of information and news about the latest fashion trends.
Through social media and digital news, young people can follow the latest fashion
Comment: trends started by celebrities. For example, youths are following the trend of wearing Ex1
1. Some bike shorts or having a pixie cut, inspired by Korean celebrities. Youths can spend EEx1
sentences
a whale of time dressing up to look fashionable and trendy so that they can be
don't sound
right. accepted by the society. This has resulted in youths becoming fashion victims as

2. Some they become increasingly obsessed with the latest fashion trends. Peer influence is
grammatical crucial in influencing youth fashion attitudes. Poor fashion choices may cause
errors. 㩳
youths to be ostracised by their peers. Youths tend to follow fashion trends started E2
by their favourite celebrities as informations on fashion is widespread and
disseminated through ICT. In the long term, youths may become fashion obsessed.
Comment:
This may eventually lead to the neglection of their obligations like studying or
1. Point no.2 working, as youths are obsessed with fashion and they are not concentrate on their
and Point
no.3 can be priority tasks. Thus, there is no doubt that ICT can cause obsession and lead to Concluding
reorganised Sentence
social ills.
in terms of PARAGRAPH 4 (POINT NO. 3)
their
seriousness. Last but not least, ICT can cause depression, which leads to social ills. It Topic Sentence
流
Point no.3 is an undeniable fact that depression and anxiety are popular and prevalent social
should be E1
discussed problems. These social issues can be attributed to ICT. The advancement in ICT
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no.2 should Copyright ©2020 IVY Wong MUET Course. All Rights Reserved.
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one.
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enables people to use social media anytime and anywhere. Cyberbullying can take
place on social media, which leads to depression. Cyberbullying is bullying with
the use of digital technologies. Cyberbullying mostly takes place on social media

Comment:
This sentence can be used to elaborate further on the effect and to
Correction of highlight social ills caused by ICT.
example:
For example, like Facebook, Instagram, and Twitter. For example, youths are vulnerable and can Ex1
“body 屈服
easily succumb to cyberbullying. The lack of parental supervision and proper moral EEx1
shaming” is a
problem that upbringing has resulted in the soaring rate of cyberbullying. Those who have been
is popular svutnevnble E2
cyberbullied are more prone to mental problems like depression and anxiety as they
among
internet users, lack mature judgement and cannot make rational decisions on ways to overcome
especially on
their problems. Depression can have a severe impact on young people. For instance, Ex2
Facebook and
Twitter. Body some victims of cyberbullying may tend to commit suicide as they feel that life is
shaming is a 轻少年犯罪
meaningless. Some may even resort to juvenile delinquency, such as committing
type of EEx2
cyberbullying murder against those who have bullied them for relief from the mental conflict or
(elaborate
mental stress. The increasing juvenile crime rate may be the negative impact of ICT
briefly on
what body on immature youths. Hence, ICT can lead to social ills as it causes depression. Concluding
shaming is). Sentence
PARAGRAPH 5 (CONCLUSION)
In conclusion, ICT has a huge impact on today’s society. In my opinion, I Concluding
strongly agree that information and communication technology (ICT) is the Line(s)

cause of today’s many social ills. This is due to the fact that ICT causes addiction, Restate
Stand/Opinion
obsession, and depression. The accessibility of information due to technological & Summarise 3
advancement has brought about lots of negative impacts on society. The Points
government should develop and implement suitable policies to combat the social Hope/Suggestio
problems caused by ICT. This is to ensure that our nation can develop sustainably n

and prosperously.

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Teacher’s Comments

Task Fulfilment (TF) -fulfil the task satisfactorily

Language & Organisation (L) -some variety of sentences
-reasonably appropriate and varied vocabulary

MUET Band 4.5

CEFR Level B2

Low Frequency Words (LFW)

List of LFW in this essay:

1. profound
2. voluminous amount
3. rapid-paced
4. over-reliance
5. easily-accessible
6. e-Sport
7. thematic
8. consoles
9. domination
10. persistent
11. ubiquitous
12. ostracised
13. disseminated
14. prevelant
15. succumb to
16. prone to
17. juvenile delinquency

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SAMPLE ESSAY 2– MUET BAND 4.5
Task 2

You are advised to spend about 50 minutes on this task.

You have watched a debate competition on television. The following comment was made by one of the debaters:

“Fashion is fast becoming a new craze among today’s youths.”

Write an essay expressing your opinion on the statement. Write at least 250 words.
DISCURSIVE/ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY [60 marks]

PLAN OF DEVELOPMENT

PARAGRAPH 1 (INTRODUCTION)
Fashion is a popular aesthetic expression at a particular time, Introduce the topic
especially in clothing, footwear, makeup, hairstyle, lifestyle, and body *Refer to the question
and choose ANY WORD
proportions. Fashion is something we deal with every day. It is used for
to start your essay.
self-expression. If we observe carefully, we will notice that fashion
trends have evolved a lot over time. Fashion trends affect society
greatly.
In my opinion, I agree that fashion is fast becoming the new craze for Stand
today's youth. *Write your stand in
ONE SENTENCE.
(You will NOT BE
PENALISED if you
write- I agree / disagree
with the statement)
This is because youths want to express themselves through fashion, Thesis statement
they want to be accepted by society, and fashion can lead to job *LAST SENTENCE of
paragraph 1. Write 3
creation.
POINTS in the thesis
statement in ONE
SENTENCE.

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PARAGRAPH 2 (POINT NO. 1)
First and foremost, fashion is becoming a new craze among Topic Sentence (T)
today’s youths because it is one of the best ways for youths to express *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
themselves.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 1 should be
written there.
Fashion gives youths the opportunity to be who they are through their Elaboration 1 (E1)
fashion sense. Fashion, like clothing, is a personal statement for an * Give the first
explanation for your
individual.
TOPIC SENTENCE.

For example, teenage girls tend to follow Western fashion in dressing to Example 1 (Ex1)

Comment: highlight their individual style, such as being athletic, girly, nerdy, or
tomboy.
1. Good-
Point no.1 is The clothes allow youths to express their personalities and preferences. Elaboration to
discussed in example 1 (EEx1)
detail.
2. Some
sentences Next, since rebellion is often a huge aspect of youths’ lives, youths tend Elaboration 2 (E2)
don't sound to use shocking fashion to rebel against their parents, classmates, and * Give the second
right. explanation for your
society.
TOPIC SENTENCE.
For instance, some rebellious teenage girls follow the fashion of going Example 2 (Ex2)
braless to showcase their rebellion towards society.
Elaboration to
example 2 (EEx2)

Fashion is also a way for young people to enhance their appearance and Elaboration 3 (E3)
make a good impression. Young people will feel better about themselves * Give the third
explanation for your
if they look attractive and wear fashionable clothes.
TOPIC SENTENCE.
To illustrate, the right clothing, makeup, and accessories will make Example 3 (Ex3)
youths feel confident and able to impress others.

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A youth who has no knowledge of how to dress and accessorise in Elaboration to
current styles may lack of confidence. Fashion can bolster confidence example 3 (EEx3)
among youths and increase their self-esteem.

Therefore, fashion allows youths to express themselves, and this is why Concluding Sentence
fashion is becoming a new craze among today’s youths. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*Low Frequency Words
1. personal statement

PARAGRAPH 3 (POINT NO. 2)

Furthermore, youths follow the latest fashion trends because they Topic Sentence (T)
want to be accepted by society. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 2 should be
Comment: written there.
1. Good- Many teens pick up on fashion trends in an effort to stave off humiliation Elaboration 1 (E1)
Point no.2 is
and mocking from their peers. Poor fashion choices may cause youths * Give the first
discussed in
explanation for your
detail. to lose their friends or be ostracised.
TOPIC SENTENCE.
2. Some
grammatical
errors. For example, if a teenage girl dresses in inappropriate clothes or does Example 1 (Ex1)
not apply the latest makeup, she may be mocked by her friends, and this
may result in a decline in confidence level.
Hence, peer pressure is a factor which causes youths to pay a lot of Elaboration to
attention to dressing in order to appear up-to-date and accepted by their example 1 (EEx1)
peers.

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The way youths dress up identifies them as belonging to specific cliques Elaboration 2 (E2)
or groups who wear similar apparel. It will give them a sense of * Give the second
explanation for your
belonging and togetherness with other like-minded youths. They will
TOPIC SENTENCE.
feel included and accepted, which is essential to a youth's self-esteem.

Example 2 (Ex2)
Elaboration to
example 2 (EEx2)

Moreover, youths have the desire to be like a celebrity. Celebrities have Elaboration 3 (E3)
a great influence on young people's choices of dress and ideas about * Give the third
explanation for your
fashion. When the people around them is following the current fashion
TOPIC SENTENCE.
trend started by celebrities, youths will be influenced to follow the trend
too.
For instance, bike shorts are all the rage among Instagram celebrities. Example 3 (Ex3)
Another example is the pixie cut, inspired by Korean celebrities.
Elaboration to
example 3 (EEx3)

Thus, youths follow the latest fashion trends in order to be accepted by Concluding Sentence
society. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*Low Frequency Words
1. stave off
2. ostracised
3. cliques

PARAGRAPH 4 (POINT NO. 3)

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Last but not least, it is an undeniable fact that fashion leads to job Topic Sentence (T)
creation, as fashion is becoming a new craze for today's youth. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 3 should be
written there.
A career in fashion is a glamorous idea. The fashion industry is diverse Elaboration 1 (E1)
and has different roles. * Give the first
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.

Comment: For example, garment technologist is an innovative job that involves Example 1 (Ex1)
1. Should working on the design and development of new materials for garments.
consider Fashion designers and fashion stylists are also in high demand due to Elaboration to
giving better
points other the popularity of the latest fashion trends. example 1 (EEx1)
than Point
no.3. Please
The increasing demand for latest fashion like clothing, footwear, Elaboration 2 (E2)
search for
more accessories, and makeup has resulted in the fashion industry's * Give the second
information expansion, which creates a wide range of job opportunities. explanation for your
on other TOPIC SENTENCE.
points.
For instance, the soaring demand for makeup products like LOreal Paris Example 2 (Ex2)
2. Some and Maybelline New York has created more job opportunities in the
grammatical
errors. cosmetic industry.
Elaboration to
example 2 (EEx2)

In addition, youths’ increasing spending on fashion clothing has boosted Elaboration 3 (E3)
online sales for clothing. * Give the third
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.
E-commerce platforms like Shopee, Lazada, and Amazon offer Example 3 (Ex3)
opportunities for online retailers to sell their clothes online.

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This has created a lot of online jobs for online retailers and Elaboration to
entrepreneurs. The creation of jobs can reduce a country’s example 3 (EEx3)
unemployment rate and increase its Gross Domestic Product (GDP),
which is beneficial for economic growth.

Hence, as fashion is fast becoming a new craze among today’s youths, Concluding Sentence
it can create lots of jobs, which is important for a country’s *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
development.
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*Low Frequency Words
1. garment technologist
2. E-commerce
3. online retailers
4. Gross Domestic Product (GDP)

PARAGRAPH 5 (CONCLUSION)
In conclusion, there is a strong connection between fashion and Concluding Line(s)
youths. *Fresh rephrasing of the
topic
In my opinion, I still strongly believe that fashion is fast becoming a Restate your stand /
new craze among today’s youth. This is due to youths' desire to express opinion
themselves, be accepted by society, and fashion can create a lot of &
job opportunities. Summarise your 3
points
Youths are quick to follow fashionable trends for them to fit in. Fashion Hope / Suggestion
may cause stress and anxiety among young people who take it too
seriously. Hopefully, being trendy will not enslave束缚them, but they
will instead learn to adopt a stronger positive mindset and exercise
moderation in their thoughts and actions.

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Task 2
SAMPLE ESSAY 2– MUET BAND 4.5
You are advised to spend about 50 minutes on this task.

You have watched a debate competition on television. The following comment was made by one of the debaters:

“Fashion is fast becoming a new craze among today’s youths.”

Write an essay expressing your opinion on the statement. Write at least 250 words.
DISCURSIVE/ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY [60 marks]
ESSAY
PARAGRAPH 1 (INTRODUCTION)
Fashion is a popular aesthetic expression at a particular time, especially in
Introduce the
clothing, footwear, makeup, hairstyle, lifestyle, and body proportions. Fashion is topic
something we deal with every day. It is used for self-expression. If we observe
carefully, we will notice that fashion trends have evolved a lot over time. Fashion
trends affect society greatly. In my opinion, I agree that fashion is fast becoming Stand
the new craze for today's youth. This is because youths want to express themselves Thesis
through fashion, they want to be accepted by society, and fashion can lead to Statement
job creation.

PARAGRAPH 2 (POINT NO. 1)

First and foremost, fashion is becoming a new craze among today’s youths Topic Sentence
because it is one of the best ways for youths to express themselves. Fashion gives E1
youths the opportunity to be who they are through their fashion sense. Fashion, like
clothing, is a personal statement for an individual. For example, teenage girls tend Ex1
to follow Western fashion in dressing to highlight their individual style, such as
Comment:
being athletic, girly, nerdy, or tomboy. The clothes allow youths to express their EEx2
1. Good-
Point no.1 is personalities and preferences. Next, since rebellion is often a huge aspect of youths’ E2
discussed in lives, youths tend to use shocking fashion to rebel against their parents, classmates,
detail.
and society. For instance, some rebellious teenage girls follow the fashion of going Ex2
2. Some
braless to showcase their rebellion towards society. Fashion is also a way for young E3
sentences
don't sound people to enhance their appearance and make a good impression. Young people
right. will feel better about themselves if they look attractive and wear fashionable
clothes. To illustrate, the right clothing, makeup, and accessories will make youths Ex3
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feel confident and able to impress others. A youth who has no knowledge of how
EEx3
to dress and accessorise in current styles may lack of confidence. Fashion can
bolster confidence among youths and increase their self-esteem. Therefore, fashion
Concluding
allows youths to express themselves, and this is why fashion is becoming a new Sentence
craze among today’s youths.
PARAGRAPH 3 (POINT NO. 2)
Furthermore, youths follow the latest fashion trends because they want to Topic Sentence
be accepted by society. Many teens pick up on fashion trends in an effort to stave E1
off humiliation and mocking from their peers. Poor fashion choices may cause
youths to lose their friends or be ostracised. For example, if a teenage girl dresses Ex1
in inappropriate clothes or does not apply the latest makeup, she may be mocked
Comment:
by her friends, and this may result in a decline in confidence level. Hence, peer
1. Good- pressure is a factor which causes youths to pay a lot of attention to dressing in order EEx1
Point no.2 is
discussed in to appear up-to-date and accepted by their peers. The way youths dress up identifies E2
detail. them as belonging to specific cliques or groups who wear similar apparel. It will
2. Some give them a sense of belonging and togetherness with other like-minded youths.
grammatical
They will feel included and accepted, which is essential to a youth's self-esteem.
errors.
Moreover, youths have the desire to be like a celebrity. Celebrities have a great E3
influence on young people's choices of dress and ideas about fashion. When the
people around them is following the current fashion trend started by celebrities,
youths will be influenced to follow the trend too. For instance, bike shorts are all Ex3
the rage among Instagram celebrities. Another example is the pixie cut, inspired by
Comment:
Korean celebrities. Thus, youths follow the latest fashion trends in order to be Concluding
1. Should Sentence
accepted by society.
consider
giving better PARAGRAPH 4 (POINT NO. 3)
points other Last but not least, it is an undeniable fact that fashion leads to job creation, Topic Sentence
than Point
no.3. Please as fashion is becoming a new craze for today's youth. A career in fashion is a E1
search for glamorous idea. The fashion industry is diverse and has different roles. For
Ex1
more example, garment technologist is an innovative job that involves working on the
information
on other design and development of new materials for garments. Fashion designers and EEx1
points. fashion stylists are also in high demand due to the popularity of the latest fashion
2. Some trends. The increasing demand for latest fashion like clothing, footwear, E2
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accessories, and makeup has resulted in the fashion industry's expansion, which
creates a wide range of job opportunities. For instance, the soaring demand for Ex2
makeup products like LOreal Paris and Maybelline New York has created more job
opportunities in the cosmetic industry. In addition, youths’ increasing spending on E3
fashion clothing has boosted online sales for clothing. E-commerce platforms like
Shopee, Lazada, and Amazon offer opportunities for online retailers to sell their Ex3
clothes online. This has created a lot of online jobs for online retailers and EEx3
entrepreneurs. The creation of jobs can reduce a country’s unemployment rate and
increase its Gross Domestic Product (GDP), which is beneficial for economic
growth. Hence, as fashion is fast becoming a new craze among today’s youths, it Concluding
Sentence
can create lots of jobs, which is important for a country’s development.

PARAGRAPH 5 (CONCLUSION)
Concluding
In conclusion, there is a strong connection between fashion and youths. In
Line(s)
my opinion, I still strongly believe that fashion is fast becoming a new craze among
Restate
today’s youth. This is due to youths' desire to express themselves, be accepted by Stand/Opinion
& Summarise 3
society, and fashion can create a lot of job opportunities. Youths are quick to
Points
follow fashionable trends for them to fit in. Fashion may cause stress and anxiety
among young people who take it too seriously. Hopefully, being trendy will not Hope/Suggestion

enslave束缚them, but they will instead learn to adopt a stronger positive mindset
and exercise moderation in their thoughts and actions.

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Teacher’s Comments

Task Fulfilment (TF) -fulfil the task satisfactorily

Language & Organisation (L) -some variety of sentences
-reasonably appropriate and varied vocabulary
-paragraphs show some evidence of planning and unity

MUET Band 4.5

CEFR Level B2

Low Frequency Words (LFW)

List of LFW in this essay:

1. personal statement
2. stave off
3. ostracised
4. cliques
5. garment technologist
6. E-commerce
7. online retailers
8. Gross Domestic Product (GDP)

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Task 2
SAMPLE ESSAY 3– MUET BAND 4
You are advised to spend about 50 minutes on this task.

You attended a talk by a youth speaker talking about international sporting events. The following comment was
made by the guest speaker:

“International sporting events such as Olympic Games and the football world cup provide an outlet for
patriotic feelings and help to reduce international tensions.”

Do you agree with the statement? Write an essay of at least 250 words.
ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY [60 marks]

PLAN OF DEVELOPMENT

PARAGRAPH 1 (INTRODUCTION)
The word "sport" itself is magical enough to thrill people, Introduce the topic
especially those who love sports in their own way. Generally, sports *Refer to the question
and choose ANY WORD
promote the idea of physical and mental well-being. The globalisation
to start your essay.
of sports has lead to the introduction of international sporting events.
International sports refer to sports when participants represent at least
two or more countries.
I agree with the statement that international sporting events such as the Stand (Compulsory)
Olympic Games and the World Cup provide an outlet for patriotic *Write your stand in
ONE SENTENCE.
sentiments and contribute to the reduction of international tensions.
This is because international sporting events provide a platform to Thesis statement
express patriotic emotions, develop understanding among nations *LAST SENTENCE of
paragraph 1. Write 3
and promote world peace.
POINTS in the thesis
statement in ONE
SENTENCE.

PARAGRAPH 2 (POINT NO. 1)

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First and foremost, international sporting events provide an outlet Topic Sentence (T)
for patriotic feelings, as the sporting events serve as a platform to *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
express patriotic emotions.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 1 should be
written there.
Comment: Malaysia is a fine example where sports enable Malaysians from all Elaboration 1 (E1)
1. It's better walks of life to express their patriotism. * Give the first
to explain this explanation for your
term TOPIC SENTENCE.
“patriotism”
first before
giving an For example, Malaysia hosted the 1998 Commonwealth Games, which Example 1 (Ex1)
example. involved Commonwealth member nations. When Malaysians support
You should their team and cheer for them whenever they defeat the rival team, they
explain it more
forget about their differences and exhibit their patriotic emotions. Ever
or less like this.
since Nicol David and Lee Chong Wei went on to win international
games, namely squash and badminton, Malaysians have faithfully
rallied behind them when they were on the court defending their
championships.
The moral support gives them the impetus to defend world titles and Elaboration to
show sheer determination to bring glory to Malaysia. Athletes can show example 1 (EEx1)
their nationalism and patriotism by giving their best effort in the games.
Although they lose the games, they still display great sportsmanship in
defeat.
Comment:
1. They are
actually one Other nations are also involved in international sporting events to Elaboration 2 (E2)
of the top express their patriotism. * Give the second
teams-always explanation for your
make it to the TOPIC SENTENCE.
finals.
For instance, during the Football World Cup, the Brazilians experience Example 2 (Ex2)
You should
exhilaration and patriotic feelings as the Brazilian football team is
explain it more
or less like this. supposed to be the best in the world. People wear shirts with their team
names and buy national flags to showcase their patriotism.

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Football is said to have the power to bring people together regardless of Elaboration to
Comment: their age, race, and gender. During the World Cup, fans from the same example 2 (EEx2)

1. You should country unite to support their team, and this can raise their patriotic
explain spirit.
“patriotism”
more or less
like this. Therefore, international sporting events can give vent to patriotic Concluding Sentence
You should feelings. *ONE SENTENCE.
explain it more Refer to your TOPIC
or less like this. SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*Low Frequency Words
1. impetus
2. exhilaration

PARAGRAPH 3 (POINT NO. 2)

Furthermore, international sporting events can help to reduce Topic Sentence (T)
international tensions because they develop understanding among *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
nations.
Look at your THESIS
Comment:
STATEMENT.
1. It should be Point no. 2 should be
“disputing”, written there.
not “foe”.
What are the Rivalry will encourage foe countries to compete with each other through Elaboration 1 (E1)
reasons for sporting events. * Give the first
the dispute? explanation for your

You should TOPIC SENTENCE.

explain it more
or less like this.
For example, the 1998 World Cup in France managed to ease political Example 1 (Ex1)
tensions between the United States and Iran as they got to develop
mutual understanding through sports.
Elaboration to
example 1 (EEx1)

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International sports provide opportunities for people to explore the Elaboration 2 (E2)
Comment: cultures of their rival countries. They closely observe the host country, * Give the second

1. For explanation for your

and many misconceptions or cultural barriers are eliminated. This is a
badminton, TOPIC SENTENCE.
great way to banish hatred, racism, and class division.
you can use
the Thomas
Cup (men) For instance, during the SEA Games, people from different nations Example 2 (Ex2)
and Uber Cup obtain suitable information about each other's cultures, traditional and
(women) as
religious beliefs.
examples.
This is one of This assists governments in understanding each other and has a direct Elaboration to
the best impact on international relations, which strengthens diplomatic ties with example 2 (EEx2)
examples of
how sports other countries.
unite people.
You should Besides, citizens from different nations tend to forget their differences Elaboration 3 (E3)
explain it more
when they gather in stadiums or sports arenas to watch their teams play * Give the third
or less like this.
explanation for your
in global events.
TOPIC SENTENCE.

To illustrate, during the Olympic Games, people gather from all over Example 3 (Ex3)
the world to witness the games. They can experience local customs,
traditions, and hospitality in the host country.
When they spend time together, they will develop reciprocal respect and Elaboration to
this will release tensions among nations. example 3 (EEx3)

Thus, there is no doubt that international sports can ease international Concluding Sentence
tensions and promote understanding among nations. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*Low Frequency Words
1. rivalry
2. reciprocal respect

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PARAGRAPH 4 (POINT NO. 3)
Last but not least, international sporting events can help promote Topic Sentence (T)
world peace. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 3 should be
written there.
It is an undeniable fact that global sports can be an icebreaker as Elaboration 1 (E1)
competitors from different nations create a platform for athletes, global * Give the first
explanation for your
leaders, and organisations to interact in a more sophisticated way.
TOPIC SENTENCE.

For example, a good illustration is the Olympic Games, in which the Example 1 (Ex1)
whole world gets the opportunity to interact and maintain global
harmony.
Sportsmen and sportswomen from developed nations can compete with Elaboration to
world-class sportsmen and sportswomen from third world countries. example 1 (EEx1)

It can be seen that during international tournaments, athletes from Elaboration 2 (E2)
various nations are competing against each other in a sportive way. * Give the second
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.
For instance, the World Cup has been proven to be a catalyst for change Example 2 (Ex2)
as it brings people from different nationalities together.
Elaboration to
Comment: example 2 (EEx2)
1. It sounds
realistic and
practical, but These international games open new avenues in the world that bestow Elaboration 3 (E3)
it doesn't boons for different foe nations. This is because during international play, * Give the third
happen explanation for your
the presidents of different countries go to the host country to watch the
actually. TOPIC SENTENCE.
games, and this provides opportunities to discuss issues between the
enemy countries.

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To illustrate, during the FIFA World Cup, many nations’ leaders get to Example 3 (Ex3)
meet each other, which enables them to ease the tensions among nations
Comment:
and helps prevent war and bloodshed.
1. Find out
more about The world is already in turmoil with discrimination, political instability, Elaboration to
the games and sporting events can act as a remedy by promoting international example 3 (EEx3)
that were
harmony.
played at the
Olympic
Games. Hence, international sporting events can lead the world to live in peace. Concluding Sentence
You should *ONE SENTENCE.
explain it more Refer to your TOPIC
or less like this.
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*Low Frequency Words
1. catalyst
2. bestow boons
3. turmoil
4. political instability

PARAGRAPH 5 (CONCLUSION)
In conclusion, international sporting events indeed help promote Concluding Line(s)
and sustain many positive benefits for different nations. *Fresh rephrasing of the
topic
I strongly agree that international sporting events such as the Restate your stand /
Olympic Games and the football world cup provide an outlet for opinion
patriotic feelings and help to reduce international tensions. This is due &
to the fact that international sports provide a platform to express Summarise your 3
patriotic emotions, improve understanding between countries and points
develop world peace.
Sport delivers a clear message of peace and paves the road to building Hope / Suggestion
world harmony, which helps reduce international tensions. This will

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ensure the sustainable development and growth of the nations in the
world and ensure prosperity in the future.
NOTES:
*Low Frequency Words
1. paves the road to building world harmony

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Task 2
SAMPLE ESSAY 3– MUET BAND 4
You are advised to spend about 50 minutes on this task.

You attended a talk by a youth speaker talking about international sporting events. The following comment was
made by the guest speaker:

“International sporting events such as Olympic Games and the football world cup provide an outlet for
patriotic feelings and help to reduce international tensions.”

Do you agree with the statement? Write an essay of at least 250 words.
ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY [60 marks]

PARAGRAPH 1 (INTRODUCTION)
The word "sport" itself is magical enough to thrill people, especially those
Introduce the
who love sports in their own way. Generally, sports promote the idea of physical topic
and mental well-being. The globalisation of sports has lead to the introduction of
international sporting events. International sports refer to sports when participants
represent at least two or more countries. I agree with the statement that international
Stand
sporting events such as the Olympic Games and the World Cup provide an outlet
for patriotic sentiments and contribute to the reduction of international tensions.
This is because international sporting events provide a platform to express Thesis
patriotic emotions, develop understanding among nations and promote world Statement
peace.

PARAGRAPH 2 (POINT NO. 1)

First and foremost, international sporting events provide an outlet for Topic Sentence
patriotic feelings, as the sporting events serve as a platform to express patriotic
Comment: emotions. Malaysia is a fine example where sports enable Malaysians from all E1

1. It's better walks of life to express their patriotism. For example, Malaysia hosted the 1998 Ex1
to explain this Commonwealth Games, which involved Commonwealth member nations. When
term
Malaysians support their team and cheer for them whenever they defeat the rival
“patriotism”
first before team, they forget about their differences and exhibit their patriotic emotions. Ever EEx1
giving an since Nicol David and Lee Chong Wei went on to win international games, namely
example.
squash and badminton, Malaysians have faithfully rallied behind them when they
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or less like this.
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were on the court defending their championships. The moral support gives them the
Comment:
impetus to defend world titles and show sheer determination to bring glory to
1. They are
Malaysia. Athletes can show their nationalism and patriotism by giving their best
actually one
of the top effort in the games. Although they lose the games, they still display great
teams-always sportsmanship in defeat. Other nations are also involved in international sporting E2
make it to the
events to express their patriotism. For instance, during the Football World Cup, the Ex2
finals.
Brazilians experience exhilaration and patriotic feelings as the Brazilian football EEx2
You should
explain it more team is supposed to be the best in the world. People wear shirts with their team
or less like this.
names and buy national flags to showcase their patriotism. Football is said to have
Comment:
the power to bring people together regardless of their age, race, and gender. During
1. You should
explain the World Cup, fans from the same country unite to support their team, and this can
“patriotism” raise their patriotic spirit. Therefore, international sporting events can give vent to Concluding
more or less Sentence
patriotic feelings.
like this.
PARAGRAPH 3 (POINT NO. 2)
You should
explain it more Furthermore, international sporting events can help to reduce international Topic Sentence
or less like this. tensions because they develop understanding among nations. Rivalry will E1
Comment:
encourage foe countries to compete with each other through sporting events. For
1. It should be example, the 1998 World Cup in France managed to ease political tensions between Ex1
“disputing”,
not “foe”. the United States and Iran as they got to develop mutual understanding through
What are the sports. International sports provide opportunities for people to explore the cultures E2
reasons for
of their rival countries. They closely observe the host country, and many
the dispute?
misconceptions or cultural barriers are eliminated. This is a great way to banish
You should
explain it more hatred, racism, and class division. For instance, during the SEA Games, people Ex2
Comment:
or less like this. from different nations obtain suitable information about each other's cultures,
1. For traditional and religious beliefs. This assists governments in understanding each EEx2
badminton,
other and has a direct impact on international relations, which strengthens
you can use
the Thomas diplomatic ties with other countries. Besides, citizens from different nations tend to E3
Cup (men) forget their differences when they gather in stadiums or sports arenas to watch their
and Uber Cup
(women) as teams play in global events. To illustrate, during the Olympic Games, people gather Ex3
examples. from all over the world to witness the games. They can experience local customs,
This is one of
traditions, and hospitality in the host country. When they spend time together, they EEx3
the best
examples of will develop reciprocal respect and this will release tensions among nations. Thus,
how sports
unite people. Copyright ©2020 IVY Wong MUET Course. All Rights Reserved.
You should
explain it more
or less like this.
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there is no doubt that international sports can ease international tensions and Concluding
Sentence
promote understanding among nations.

PARAGRAPH 4 (POINT NO. 3)

Last but not least, international sporting events can help promote world Topic Sentence
peace. It is an undeniable fact that global sports can be an icebreaker as competitors E1
from different nations create a platform for athletes, global leaders, and
organisations to interact in a more sophisticated way. For example, a good Ex1
illustration is the Olympic Games, in which the whole world gets the opportunity
EEx1
to interact and maintain global harmony. Sportsmen and sportswomen from
developed nations can compete with world-class sportsmen and sportswomen from E2
third world countries. It can be seen that during international tournaments, athletes
Comment: from various nations are competing against each other in a sportive way. For
1. It sounds instance, the World Cup has been proven to be a catalyst for change as it brings Ex2
realistic and people from different nationalities together. These international games open new
practical, but
it doesn't avenues in the world that bestow boons for different foe nations. This is because E3
happen during international play, the presidents of different countries go to the host country
actually.
to watch the games, and this provides opportunities to discuss issues between the
enemy countries. To illustrate, during the FIFA World Cup, many nations’ leaders Ex3
Comment: get to meet each other, which enables them to ease the tensions among nations and
helps prevent war and bloodshed. The world is already in turmoil with EEx3
1. Find out
more about discrimination, political instability, and sporting events can act as a remedy by
the games promoting international harmony. Hence, international sporting events can lead the Concluding
that were Sentence
played at the world to live in peace.
Olympic PARAGRAPH 5 (CONCLUSION)
Games.
In conclusion, international sporting events indeed help promote and sustain Concluding
You should
many positive benefits for different nations. I strongly agree that international Line(s)
explain it more
or less like this. sporting events such as the Olympic Games and the football world cup provide an Restate
Stand/Opinion
outlet for patriotic feelings and help to reduce international tensions. This is due to & Summarise 3
the fact that international sports provide a platform to express patriotic Points
emotions, improve understanding between countries and develop world peace.
Sport delivers a clear message of peace and paves the road to building world
Hope/Suggestio
harmony, which helps reduce international tensions. This will ensure the n

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sustainable development and growth of the nations in the world and ensure
prosperity in the future.

Teacher’s Comments

Task Fulfilment (TF) -development of paragraph 1 & 2- the flow of ideas seems lacking;
certain terms are left unclear. (Touch and go)
- the contents of the discussion appear to be “lacking” in information.
Language & Organisation (L) -some variety of sentences
-reasonably appropriate and varied vocabulary

MUET Band 4

CEFR Level B2

Low Frequency Words (LFW)

List of LFW in this essay:

1. impetus
2. exhilaration
3. rivalry
4. reciprocal respect
5. catalyst
6. bestow boons
7. turmoil
8. political instability
9. paves the road to building world harmony

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NOTE:
Task 2
SAMPLE ESSAY 4– MUET BAND 4.5 This sample essay was
You are advised to spend about 50 minutes on this task. a Band 4.5 in the old
format, but in the new
format, students are
You came across an article on peer pressure. The following question came to your mind:
advised NOT to
“Can peer pressure help mould a student’s life?” change the key words
(peer pressure) to
parents, teachers,
Write an essay expressing your opinion on the statement. Write at least 250 words.
mass media. This is
due to the fear that
DISCURSIVE/ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY students [60 marks]
might lose
marks for off-topic
PLAN OF DEVELOPMENT discussions (without
discussing peer
pressure).

PARAGRAPH 1 (INTRODUCTION)
Students are learners that learn in schools, colleges, or Introduce the topic
universities. Students spend most of their time in class studying for *Refer to the question
and choose ANY WORD
exams or doing school assignments. They work hard to achieve
to start your essay.
academic excellence and learn a lot of skills during school life. A
student’s life involves receiving an education through classroom
learning and developing desirable personality traits. There are many
aspects that affect a student’s life.
In my opinion, I disagree that peer pressure can help mould a student’s Stand
life. This is because students may be immature and unable to make good *Write your stand in
ONE SENTENCE.
decisions in choosing friends that are beneficial to their lives.
(You will NOT BE
PENALISED if you
write- I agree / disagree
with the statement)
Instead of peer pressure, parents, teachers, and the mass media can Thesis statement
have a great influence on a student’s life. *LAST SENTENCE of
paragraph 1. Write 3
POINTS in the thesis
statement in ONE
SENTENCE.

PARAGRAPH 2 (POINT NO. 1)

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First and foremost, parents have a great impact on a student’s Topic Sentence (T)
life, but peer pressure cannot mould student’s life. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 1 should be
written there.
Parents are students’ first teachers, and they have a key role in shaping Elaboration 1 (E1)
students’ character. Parents can be a helping hand in a student’s * Give the first
explanation for your
educational journey. It is true that parents can be role models for
TOPIC SENTENCE.
students to emulate. They should demonstrate good moral values and a
caring, loving and responsible character for students to follow. Open-
mindedness is essential for parents to allow their children to try new
things and accept differences.
For example, parents should be open-minded in terms of education Example 1 (Ex1)
which allow their children to think out of the box and be creative in
Comment:
learning.
1. Result This can help to boost children’s confidence levels and enhance Elaboration to
You should creativity. Parents should let go of control and not overschedule their example 1 (EEx1)
explain it
Comment: children with learning activities at home.
more or less
1.
likeGood-
this.
Point no.1 is Next, parents can be great listeners for students in times of trouble. They Elaboration 2 (E2)
discussed in
can motivate their children by offering adequate moral support and * Give the second
detail- shows
RESULT explanation for your
valuable suggestions.
(change in a TOPIC SENTENCE.
student's life.) For instance, when a student faces the problem of cyberbullying, he can Example 2 (Ex2)
2. Some turn to parents for help.
grammatical
His parents will share some of their personal experiences with him and Elaboration to
errors
advise him to have sheer determination in facing problems. This will example 2 (EEx2)
Comment: encourage him to face problems optimistically and confidently.

1. Result
You should
Therefore, parents play an important role in student’s life. Concluding Sentence
explain it
more or less
like this.
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*ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*Low Frequency Words
1. emulate
2. open-mindedness
3. cyberbullying
4. sheer determination
5. optimistically

PARAGRAPH 3 (POINT NO. 2)

Furthermore, teachers play a vital role to mould a student’s life, Topic Sentence (T)
but peer pressure cannot shape a student's life. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 2 should be
written there.
Teachers take the place of parents in school and they mould the Elaboration 1 (E1)
personality and character of the student. An ideal teacher should be * Give the first
explanation for your
impartial, disciplined, and courteous to set a good example for students
TOPIC SENTENCE.
to emulate. A teacher can be a mentor, a motivator, and a source of
inspiration to students. A teacher has a unique way of improving the
social development and academic performance of students.
For example, a teacher can create a curriculum that fosters students' Example 1 (Ex1)
development.
Comment: They can teach problem-solving skills by conducting class projects Elaboration to
1. Result? relating to issues like water shortages. example 1 (EEx1)
You should
explain it
more or less
like this.

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Teachers can help to nurture students' self-esteem. Whenever students Elaboration 2 (E2)
fail in their exams, teachers can inspired students and give students the * Give the second
Comment:
explanation for your
impetus to try even harder.
1. What type TOPIC SENTENCE.
of goal?

For instance, teachers will guide students to set goals in life. Example 2 (Ex2)
During the learning process, teachers help students understand their Elaboration to
strengths and weaknesses. When students have a better understanding example 2 (EEx2)
Comment:
of themselves, they will have a higher confidence level and will be
1. Result motivated to achieve goals in life.
You should
explain it
more or less Thus, there is no doubt that teachers play a great role in moulding a Concluding Sentence
like this. student’s life. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*Low Frequency Words
1. impartial
2. impetus

PARAGRAPH 4 (POINT NO. 3)

Last but not least, the mass media can help mould a student’s Topic Sentence (T)
Comment:
life, but peer pressure cannot shape a student's life. *SHORT &
1. Point no.3
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
is NOT
Look at your THESIS
discussed in
detail- doesn’t STATEMENT.
shows
Comment:
Point no. 3 should be
RESULT written there.
The
(change in a The most common platforms for mass media are the internet, Elaboration 1 (E1)
discussion is
student's life.)
more on the newspapers, television, and radio. The ubiquitous internet in today’s * Give the first
advantages of world allows free sharing of thoughts through social networking sites. explanation for your
social media TOPIC SENTENCE.
than how it Students tend to use social media to stay connected, make friends, and
would mould satisfy their social needs.
a student's
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NO result
given.)
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For example, students love to spend time socialising through social Example 1 (Ex1)
media like Facebook, Instagram, and WeChat because they can meet
different people from all walks of life.
Students can create other online identities that the real world doesn't Elaboration to
allow. Social networking gives students the freedom to meet like- example 1 (EEx1)
minded people with the same interests. They can also gain new
perspectives by viewing other people's lives through social media.
Comment:
Needs to Students not only meet new people through social media, but they can Elaboration 2 (E2)
explain from
also have a better understanding of global issues through mass media. * Give the second
the student's
side. explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.
1. share ideas,
stay For instance, students can learn more about human rights, poverty, Example 2 (Ex2)
connected, inflation, recession, or global warming issues through newspapers or
freedom, gain
search engines like Google Chrome.
new
perspectives, Mass media spreads knowledge internationally, thereby making Elaboration to
viewing other students better global citizens. Students will be well informed about example 2 (EEx2)
people’s lives
(So, what can global issues and this makes their life more interesting as they can learn
students new things every day.
benefit from
social media?
How can it Hence, student’s life will be greatly influenced by the mass media. Concluding Sentence
mould *ONE SENTENCE.
student's Refer to your TOPIC
life?)
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*Low Frequency Words
1. ubiquitous
2. search engines

PARAGRAPH 5 (CONCLUSION)
In conclusion, students’ life is a period of confusion as they are in Concluding Line(s)
search of their personal identity.
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*Fresh rephrasing of the
topic

Correction: In my opinion, I disagree that peer pressure can help mould a student’s Restate your stand /
life. Students that are immature tend to be influenced by bad peers, opinion
RESULT:
which is detrimental to their future. It is the role of parents, teachers &
1. be
knowledgeabl and the mass media that affect a student's lives and help to shape the Summarise your 3
e character of a student. points
2. can have a Students need the support of parents and teachers in order to grow up Hope / Suggestion
more mature
with better social skills and improved behaviour. Students with good
treatment of
certain topics support from home and school will grow up with higher self-esteem.

3. help Hopefully, every student will become a successful person and become
students a future leader of tomorrow who can ensure a nation’s prosperity.
achieve
NOTES:
academic
excellence *Low Frequency Words
1. detrimental to

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40 MUET PAPER 4 WRITING- TASK 2 SAMPLE ESSAYS
This sample essay was
Task 2 a Band 4.5 in the old
SAMPLE ESSAY 4– MUET BAND 4.5 format, but in the new
You are advised to spend about 50 minutes on this task. format, students are
advised NOT to
change the key words
You came across an article on peer pressure. The following question came to your mind: (peer pressure) to
“Can peer pressure help mould a student’s life?” parents, teachers,
mass media. This is
due to the fear that
Write an essay expressing your opinion on the statement. Write at least 250 words. students might lose
marks for off-topic
DISCURSIVE/ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY [60 marks]
discussions (without
discussing peer
pressure).
PARAGRAPH 1 (INTRODUCTION)
Students are learners that learn in schools, colleges, or universities.
Introduce the
Students spend most of their time in class studying for exams or doing school topic
assignments. They work hard to achieve academic excellence and learn a lot of
skills during school life. A student’s life involves receiving an education through
classroom learning and developing desirable personality traits. There are many
aspects that affect a student’s life. In my opinion, I disagree that peer pressure can
help mould a student’s life. This is because students may be immature and unable Stand
to make good decisions in choosing friends that are beneficial to their lives. Instead
Thesis
of peer pressure, parents, teachers, and the mass media can have a great influence Statement
on a student’s life.

Comment: PARAGRAPH 2 (POINT NO. 1)

1. Good- First and foremost, parents have a great impact on a student’s life. Parents Topic Sentence
Point no.1 is are students’ first teachers, and they have a key role in shaping students’ character.
discussed in E1
detail- shows Parents can be a helping hand in a student’s educational journey. It is true that
RESULT parents can be role models for students to emulate. They should demonstrate good
(change in a
moral values and a caring, loving and responsible character for students to follow.
student's life.)
Open-mindedness is essential for parents to allow their children to try new things
2. Some
grammatical and accept differences. For example, parents should be open-minded in terms of Ex1
errors education which allow their children to think out of the box and be creative in
learning. This can help to boost children’s confidence levels and enhance creativity. EEx1
Comment: Parents should let go of control and not overschedule their children with learning

1. Result activities at home. Next, parents can be great listeners for students in times of E2

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explain it
more or less
like this.
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trouble. They can motivate their children by offering adequate moral support and
valuable suggestions. For instance, when a student faces the problem of
Ex2
Comment: cyberbullying, he can turn to parents for help. His parents will share some of their
EEx2
1. Result personal experiences with him and advise him to have sheer determination in facing
Concluding
You should problems. This will encourage him to face problems optimistically and confidently.
Sentence
explain it Therefore, parents play an important role in student’s life.
more or less
like this. PARAGRAPH 3 (POINT NO. 2)
Furthermore, teachers play a vital role to mould a student’s life. Teachers Topic Sentence
take the place of parents in school and they mould the personality and character of E1
the student. An ideal teacher should be impartial, disciplined, and courteous to set
a good example for students to emulate. A teacher can be a mentor, a motivator,
and a source of inspiration to students. A teacher has a unique way of improving
the social development and academic performance of students. For example, a Ex1
Comment: teacher can create a curriculum that fosters students' development. They can teach EEx1
1. Result? problem-solving skills by conducting class projects relating to issues like water

You should shortages. Teachers can help to nurture students' self-esteem. Whenever students E2
Comment:
explain it more fail in their exams, teachers can inspired students and give students the impetus to
or less like
1. What type try even harder. For instance, teachers will guide students to set goals in life. During Ex2
this.
of goal?
the learning process, teachers help students understand their strengths and EEx2
weaknesses. When students have a better understanding of themselves, they will
Comment:
have a higher confidence level and will be motivated to achieve goals in life. Thus, Concluding
1. Result
there is no doubt that teachers play a great role in moulding a student’s life. Sentence
You should
Comment:
explain it
PARAGRAPH 4 (POINT NO. 3)
more or less
1.like
Point
this.no.3 Last but not least, the mass media can help mould a student’s life. The Topic Sentence
is NOT
discussed in most common platforms for mass media are the internet, newspapers, television, E1
detail- doesn’t and radio. The ubiquitous internet in today’s world allows free sharing of thoughts
shows
RESULT through social networking sites. Students tend to use social media to stay
(change in a connected, make friends, and satisfy their social needs. For example, students love Ex1
student's life.)
to spend time socialising through social media like Facebook, Instagram, and
WeChat because they can meet different people from all walks of life. Students can
EEx1

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create other online identities that the real world doesn't allow. Social networking
gives

Comment:
The discussion is more on the advantages of social media than how it
would mould a student's life. (There is NO result given.)

students the freedom to meet like-minded people with the same interests. They can
also gain new perspectives by viewing other people's lives through social

Comment:

Correction: Needs to explain from the student's side.

RESULT: 1. share ideas, stay connected, freedom, gain new perspectives, viewing
other people’s lives (So, what can students benefit from social media?
1. be How can it mould student's life?)
knowledgeabl
e media. Students not only meet new people through social media, but they can also E2
2. can have a have a better understanding of global issues through mass media. For instance,
Ex2
more mature students can learn more about human rights, poverty, inflation, recession, or global
treatment of
certain topics warming issues through newspapers or search engines like Google Chrome. Mass
media spreads knowledge internationally, thereby making students better global EEx2
3. help
students citizens. Students will be well informed about global issues and this makes their
achieve life more interesting as they can learn new things every day. Hence, student’s life Concluding
academic
will be greatly influenced by the mass media. Sentence
excellence

PARAGRAPH 5 (CONCLUSION)
In conclusion, students’ life is a period of confusion as they are in search of Concluding
their personal identity. In my opinion, I disagree that peer pressure can help mould Line(s)

a student’s life. Students that are immature tend to be influenced by bad peers, Restate
which is detrimental to their future. It is the role of parents, teachers and the mass Stand/Opinion
& Summarise 3
media that affect a student's lives and help to shape the character of a Points
student. Students need the support of parents and teachers in order to grow up with
Hope/Suggestio
better social skills and improved behaviour. Students with good support from home n
and school will grow up with higher self-esteem. Hopefully, every student will

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become a successful person and become a future leader of tomorrow who can
ensure a nation’s prosperity.

Teacher’s Comments

Task Fulfilment (TF) -fulfil the task satisfactorily

-some points are not discussed in detail
Language & Organisation (L) -some variety of sentences
-reasonably appropriate and varied vocabulary

MUET Band 4.5

CEFR Level B2

Low Frequency Words (LFW)

List of LFW in this essay:

1. emulate
2. open-mindedness
3. cyberbullying
4. sheer determination
5. optimistically
6. impartial
7. impetus
8. ubiquitous
9. search engines
10. detrimental to

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Task 2
SAMPLE ESSAY 5– MUET BAND 4.5
You are advised to spend about 50 minutes on this task.

You have watched a debate competition on television. The following comment was made by one of the debaters:

“The rise of online education during the COVID-19 pandemic is effective.”

Write an essay expressing your opinion on the statement. Write at least 250 words.
DISCURSIVE/ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY
[60 marks]

PLAN OF DEVELOPMENT

PARAGRAPH 1 (INTRODUCTION)
Coronavirus Disease 2019 (Covid-19) was named by the World Introduce the topic
Health Organization (WHO) in February 2020. WHO has declared *Refer to the question
and choose ANY WORD
COVID-19 as a pandemic, which means that the disease is affecting the
to start your essay.
entire world. Due to this contagious COVID-19, new norms are
emerging in various sectors, like the economic sector, education sector,
and healthcare sector. People are struggling in order to adapt to these
new norms. In terms of education, COVID-19 has forced education to
be offered online.
In my opinion, I agree with the statement that online education is Stand
effective. *Write your stand in
ONE SENTENCE.
(You will NOT BE
PENALISED if you
write- I agree / disagree
with the statement)
This is because online education increases both students’ and Thesis statement
teachers’ efficiency, as well as it is a more economical way of *LAST SENTENCE of
paragraph 1. Write 3
learning.
POINTS in the thesis
statement in ONE
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
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*Low Frequency Words
1. emerging

PARAGRAPH 2 (POINT NO. 1)

First and foremost, online education is more effective because it Topic Sentence (T)
increases students’ efficiency in learning. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 1 should be
written there.

Comment: Most students more digitally prepared and comfortable with online Elaboration 1 (E1)
learning. This enables students to get acquainted with online learning * Give the first
1. Point no.1
is discussed in explanation for your
easily. Digital learning is an alternative method of learning that enables
detail. TOPIC SENTENCE.
students to learn digitally and aids students’ engagement. Digital
2. Some learning includes the combination of recorded video and live streaming
grammatical
errors. classes.
For example, students can preview and self-study recorded videos and Example 1 (Ex1)
online materials prepared by teachers through a mobile phone
application like WhatsApp.
Students can join the live streaming classes by being better prepared Elaboration to
with questions regarding the online materials prepared by teachers. example 1 (EEx1)

The real-time interaction offered by live streaming platforms allows Elaboration 2 (E2)
online interactions between teachers and students. * Give the second
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.
For instance, during online classes through Zoom, students are Example 2 (Ex2)
encouraged to participate, ask questions, engage and share their
opinions with classmates more comfortably.

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Students are actively involved in online learning rather than just Elaboration to
absorbing the information given to them. This gives students the example 2 (EEx2)
impetus to learn actively.

As students is more engaged in the online lessons, this can also enable Elaboration 3 (E3)
students to have better retention of information. This is because students * Give the third
explanation for your
can see visuals and graphics provided by teachers through live streaming
TOPIC SENTENCE.
classes.
Example 3 (Ex3)
Elaboration to
example 3 (EEx3)

Therefore, the shift from physical classrooms to online classes due to Concluding Sentence
COVID-19 benefits students, as online education improves students’ *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
efficiency.
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*Low Frequency Words
1. acquainted
2. live streaming
3. impetus
4. retention of information

PARAGRAPH 3 (POINT NO. 2)

Furthermore, the growing popularity of online education after Topic Sentence (T)
Comment: COVID-19 can benefit teachers because it can increase teachers’ *SHORT &

1. Point no.2 STRAIGHTFORWARD.

efficiency in providing their education.
is discussed in Look at your THESIS
detail. STATEMENT.
Point no. 2 should be
2. Some
grammatical written there.
errors.

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You should
explain it more
or less like this.
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Teachers have to adapt quickly by using digital devices like laptop Elaboration 1 (E1)
computers to prepare for online classes. Online teaching can increase * Give the first
explanation for your
teachers’ efficient and productivity.
TOPIC SENTENCE.

For example, teachers are able to plan their lessons ahead by scheduling Example 1 (Ex1)
online tasks like marking assignments, teaching and recording lectures.
Teachers can do an oline search to get endless materials and a Elaboration to
voluminous amount of information that can be used in lessons. example 1 (EEx1)

The use of digital education tools can save teachers’ time in preparing Elaboration 2 (E2)
online lessons. Teachers can prepare online teaching materials by using * Give the second
explanation for your
slides, videos, graphics, quizzes and questions through educational tools
TOPIC SENTENCE.
to make their lessons more effective.

Example 2 (Ex2)
Elaboration to
example 2 (EEx2)

Moreover, teachers can conduct live streaming classes to live stream Elaboration 3 (E3)
their lessons through Youtube Live, Facebook Live, etc. As live * Give the third
explanation for your
streaming classes enable student-centred learning, teachers are able to
TOPIC SENTENCE.
reach out to different students. There are comprehensive capabilities
with online education platforms that allow online interactions between
teachers and students.
For instance, Zoom meetings allow teachers to conduct online classes Example 3 (Ex3)
and record them to be accessed later by students.
Elaboration to
example 3 (EEx3)

Thus, teachers’ efficiency can be increased and they can provide quality Concluding Sentence
education through e-learning methods.

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*ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*Low Frequency Words
1. voluminous amount
2. comprehensive capabilities

PARAGRAPH 4 (POINT NO. 3)

Last but not least, online education is a more economical way of Topic Sentence (T)
learning because it saves educational costs and time. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 3 should be
written there.
The implementation of distance education or remote learning can lower Elaboration 1 (E1)
Comment:
the cost of education. The ubiquitous internet allows schools or learning * Give the first
1. Can add
explanation for your
additional institutions to provide online courses as an alternative way of learning
TOPIC SENTENCE.
information in response to COVID-19.
-now we can
just scan the For example, schools can offer online classes through Youtube, Zoom Example 1 (Ex1)
barcode to and Facebook, which lowers the printing costs.
gain access to
Learning materials are keep online and can be downloaded easily Elaboration to
e-book
without having to print out the materials. example 1 (EEx1)
- There is no
need for a
physical book. Not only can students reduce their education costs, they can also save Elaboration 2 (E2)
lots of time through online learning. * Give the second
Comment:
You should explanation for your
explain TOPIC SENTENCE.
1. Pointit no.3
more
or less like this.
lacks For instance, students can save time on travelling to and from school Example 2 (Ex2)
information. every day, and they do not have to waste time waiting for their parents
2. Some to bring them home after school.
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Students can also learn in a suitable and comfortable environment at Elaboration to
home, which can aid students’ concentration and require less time to example 2 (EEx2)
comprehend the learning materials.

Hence, online learning is effective because it reduces costs and time. Concluding Sentence
*ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*Low Frequency Words
1. ubiquitous

PARAGRAPH 5 (CONCLUSION)
In conclusion, the COVID-19 pandemic has changed the Concluding Line(s)
education sector dramatically. The pandemic has forced education to be *Fresh rephrasing of the
topic
offered online.
In my opinion, I still strongly believe that online education is effective Restate your stand /
due to the fact that online education boosts students’ learning opinion
efficiency, improves teachers’ productivity, and can cut down on &
educational costs and time. Summarise your 3
points
Online education should be improved in order to provide a more Hope / Suggestion
comprehensive learning experience for students and teachers.
Hopefully, all students can reap the benefits of online learning to ensure
that they have a wonderful learning experience and can improve their
academic performance.

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Task 2
SAMPLE ESSAY 5– MUET BAND 4.5
You are advised to spend about 50 minutes on this task.

You have watched a debate competition on television. The following comment was made by one of the debaters:

“The rise of online education during the COVID-19 pandemic is effective.”

Write an essay expressing your opinion on the statement. Write at least 250 words.
DISCURSIVE/ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY
[60 marks]

PARAGRAPH 1 (INTRODUCTION)
Coronavirus Disease 2019 (Covid-19) was named by the World Health
Introduce the
Organization (WHO) in February 2020. WHO has declared COVID-19 as a topic
pandemic, which means that the disease is affecting the entire world. Due to this
传染 出现
contagious COVID-19, new norms are emerging in various sectors, like the
economic sector, education sector, and healthcare sector. People are struggling in
order to adapt to these new norms. In terms of education, COVID-19 has forced
education to be offered online. In my opinion, I agree with the statement that online Stand
education is effective. This is because online education increases both students’
= lowbudgef Thesis
and teachers’ efficiency, as well as it is a more economical way of learning. Statement

PARAGRAPH 2 (POINT NO. 1)

First and foremost, First and foremost, online education is more effective Topic Sentence
①
because it increases students’ efficiency in learning. Most students more digitally
E1
prepared and comfortable with online learning. This enables students to get
可解
Comment: acquainted with online learning easily. Digital learning is an alternative method of
learning that enables students to learn digitally and aids students’ engagement.
1. Point no.1
is discussed in Digital learning includes the combination of recorded video and live streaming
detail. classes. For example, students can preview and self-study recorded videos and Ex1
2. Some online materials prepared by teachers through a mobile phone application like
grammatical
WhatsApp. Students can join the live streaming classes by being better prepared EEx1
errors.
with questions regarding the online materials prepared by teachers. The real-time
interaction offered by live streaming platforms allows online interactions between E2
teachers and students. For instance, during online classes through Zoom, students Ex2
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are encouraged to participate, ask questions, engage and share their opinions with EEx2
classmates more comfortably. Students are actively involved in online learning
rather than just absorbing the information given to them. This gives students the
emomeufum
impetus to learn actively. As students is more engaged in the online lessons, this
can also enable students to have better retention of information. This is because E3

students can see visuals and graphics provided by teachers through live streaming
classes. Therefore, the shift from physical classrooms to online classes due to
Concluding
COVID-19 benefits students, as online education improves students’ efficiency. Sentence
PARAGRAPH 3 (POINT NO. 2)
Furthermore, the growing popularity of online education after COVID-19 Topic Sentence
can benefit teachers because it can increase teachers’ efficiency in providing
their education. Teachers have to adapt quickly by using digital devices like laptop E1
computers to prepare for online classes. Online teaching can increase teachers’
efficient and productivity. For example, teachers are able to plan their lessons ahead Ex1
Comment:
by scheduling online tasks like marking assignments, teaching and recording
1. Point no.2 lectures. Teachers can do an online search to get endless materials and a EEx1
is discussed in 很约
detail. voluminous amount of information that can be used in lessons. The use of digital
education tools can save teachers’ time in preparing online lessons. Teachers can E2
2. Some
grammatical prepare online teaching materials by using slides, videos, graphics, quizzes and
errors. questions through educational tools to make their lessons more effective. Moreover,
teachers can conduct live streaming classes to live stream their lessons through E3
You should Youtube Live, Facebook Live, etc. As live streaming classes enable student-centred
explain it more
learning, teachers are able to reach out to different students. There are
or less like this.
comprehensive capabilities with online education platforms that allow online
interactions between teachers and students. For instance, Zoom meetings allow
Ex3
teachers to conduct online classes and record them to be accessed later by students.
Thus, teachers’ efficiency can be increased and they can provide quality education Concluding
through e-learning methods. Sentence

Comment:
PARAGRAPH 4 (POINT NO. 3)
1. Point no.3
lacks Last but not least, online education is a more economical way of learning
information. Topic Sentence
because it saves educational costs and time. The implementation of distance
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errors.
力
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education or remote learning can lower the cost of education. The ubiquitous
Comment:
internet allows schools or learning institutions to provide online courses as an
1. Can add
additional alternative way of learning in response to COVID-19. For example, schools can
Ex1
information offer online classes through Youtube, Zoom and Facebook, which lowers the
-now we can printing costs. Learning materials are keep online and can be downloaded easily
just scan the without having to print out the materials. Not only can students reduce their E2
barcode to
gain access to education costs, they can also save lots of time through online learning. For
Ex2
e-book instance, students can save time on travelling to and from school every day, and
- There is no they do not have to waste time waiting for their parents to bring them home after EEx2
need for a school. Students can also learn in a suitable and comfortable environment at home,
physical book.
which can aid students’ concentration and require less time to comprehend the Concluding
learning materials. Hence, online learning is effective because it reduces costs and Sentence
You should
time.
explain it more
or less like this.
PARAGRAPH 5 (CONCLUSION)
In conclusion, the COVID-19 pandemic has changed the education sector Concluding
dramatically. The pandemic has forced education to be offered online. In my Line(s)

opinion, I still strongly believe that online education is effective due to the fact that Restate
online education boosts students’ learning efficiency, improves teachers’ Stand/Opinion
& Summarise 3
productivity, and can cut down on educational costs and time. Online education Points
should be improved in order to provide a more comprehensive learning experience
Hope/Suggestio
for students and teachers. Hopefully, all students can reap the benefits of online n
learning to ensure that they have a wonderful learning experience and can improve
their academic performance.
improve

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Teacher’s Comments

Task Fulfilment (TF) -fulfil the task satisfactorily

Language & Organisation (L) -some variety of sentences
-reasonably appropriate and varied vocabulary
-paragraphs show some evidence of planning and unity

MUET Band 4.5

CEFR Level B2

Low Frequency Words (LFW)

List of LFW in this essay:

1. emerging
2. acquainted
3. live streaming
4. impetus
5. retention of information
6. voluminous amount
7. comprehensive capabilities
8. ubiquitous

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Task 2
SAMPLE ESSAY 6– MUET BAND 5
You are advised to spend about 50 minutes on this task.

You attended a talk by a non-governmental organization, which was organized by Council of the City of Kuching
South (MBKS). The following statement was made by the guest speaker:

“The elderly should live in nursing homes.”

Do you agree with the statement? Write an essay of at least 250 words.
ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY [60 marks]

PLAN OF DEVELOPMENT

PARAGRAPH 1 (INTRODUCTION)
The word “elderly” refers to people who are 65 years of age or older. Those Introduce the topic
aged 65 to 74 are referred to as "early elderly" and those over 75 years old as "late *Refer to the question
and choose ANY WORD
elderly". In today's world, where fewer children are being born into households, caring
to start your essay.
for the elderly has become a challenge for many families. Some children tend to place
their ageing parents in nursing homes as they are busy with their jobs. The question
is, should the elderly live in nursing homes?
I disagree with the statement given that the elderly should be sent to nursing homes. Stand (Compulsory)
*Write your stand in
ONE SENTENCE.
This is because living in a nursing home can lead to feelings of loneliness, nursing Thesis statement
homes can be depressing, and the elderly lose their freedom and independence. *LAST SENTENCE of
paragraph 1. Write 3
POINTS in the thesis
statement in ONE
SENTENCE.

PARAGRAPH 2 (POINT NO. 1)

First of all, nursing homes can lead to feelings of loneliness. Topic Sentence (T)
*SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.

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Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 1 should be
written there.
This is because the elderly need time to adapt to their new environment. Some elderly Elaboration 1 (E1)
people are very friendly with one another, but others are not as friendly or talkative as * Give the first
explanation for your
we think.
TOPIC SENTENCE.
(Explain why nursing
homes can lead to
loneliness)
For example, they may spend most of their time alone and avoid talking to people, Example 1 (Ex1)
especially people they have only recently met.
Some of them think that it can be awkward to strike up a conversation with strangers Elaboration to
because they might have different opinions and viewpoints. example 1 (EEx1)

The elderly will also avoid interacting with residents of the nursing home because they Elaboration 2 (E2)
are too shy to inquire about the whereabouts of the new place. * Give the second
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.
(Explain why nursing
homes can lead to
loneliness)
For instance, they will observe people’s actions in order to gain information instead Example 2 (Ex2)
of asking them directly.
They may lack companionship and feel lonely due to their reluctance to associate with Elaboration to
结交 people around them. example 2 (EEx2)

Next, some elderly people believe their standards are higher than anyone in a nursing Elaboration 3 (E3)
home and will avoid contact with other people. * Give the third
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.
(Explain why nursing
homes can lead to
loneliness)

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To illustrate, they can be arrogant in their speech and manner. Example 3 (Ex3)
This will make others feel annoyed and uncomfortable, eventually leading to an Elaboration to
increase in the likelihood that they will be marginalised or ostracized by others in example 3 (EEx3)
nursing homes.

Therefore, the elderly in nursing homes may be isolated due to their difficulty Concluding Sentence
adjusting to the new surroundings, resulting in loneliness in daily life. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*No repetition of words (Avoid repeating the same vocabulary)
1. environment- surroundings
2. adapt to- adjust to
3. strike up a conversation- talking to
4. interact with- associate with, contact with
5. marginalized- isolated

*Low Frequency Words

1. companionship
2. ostracized

PARAGRAPH 3 (POINT NO. 2)

Furthermore, nursing homes can be depressing. Topic Sentence (T)
*SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 2 should be
written there.
Depression in the elderly is due to the fact that most nursing homes don't have the Elaboration 1 (E1)
suitable living conditions. * Give the first
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.

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(Explain why nursing
homes can be
depressing)
For example, there could be a few hundred seniors living under the same roof within Example 1 (Ex1)
a nursing home. Some facilities are not disabled-friendly which causes inconvenience
to those with physical disabilities.
This means that the elderly don't have as much space and amenities as a real home. In Elaboration to
the long run, elderly people are more susceptible to anxiety and depression. example 1 (EEx1)

Other than that, nursing homes are said to be depressing because there is a lack Elaboration 2 (E2)
of activities for the elderly to spend their leisure time. * Give the second
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.
(Explain why nursing
homes can be
depressing)
For instance, nursing home residents do not have various activities to pass the time, Example 2 (Ex2)
such as board games, billiards台球, and puzzles.
A lack of activities like board games not only increases the chances of the elderly Elaboration to
feeling bored but also reduces the chances of activating memories and improving example 2 (EEx2)
cognitive functions.

In addition, some nursing home staff members lack the patience to take care of the Elaboration 3 (E3)
elderly. * Give the third
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.
(Explain why nursing
homes can be
depressing)
To illustrate, irresponsible staff may be reluctant to pay extra attention to the elderly Example 3 (Ex3)
with disabilities.
As a result, the disabled elderly may not be properly cared for, which may eventually Elaboration to
lead to severe depression as they are unable to cope with everyday life. example 3 (EEx3)

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Thus, the elderly who live in nursing homes with inappropriate settings can be Concluding Sentence
depressed. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*No repetition of words (Avoid repeating the same vocabulary)
1. due to the fact that- because
2. spend leisure time- pass the time
3. improve- enhance, boost
4. cope with- deal with, handle

*Low Frequency Words

1. disabled-friendly
2. susceptible
3. activating memories
4. improving cognitive functions

*Change word forms

1. the elderly with disabilities- the disabled elderly

PARAGRAPH 4 (POINT NO. 3)

Last but not least, the elderly will lose their freedom and independence. Topic Sentence (T)
*SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 3 should be
written there.
This is because most nursing homes control every activity held in the nursing homes, Elaboration 1 (E1)
including the elderly’s routine. * Give the first
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.

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(Explain why elderly will
lose their freedom and
independence)
For example, in a nursing home, the elderly only have control over their meals, Example 1 (Ex1)
participation in activities, and establishing routines.
They do not have much freedom and flexibility in their lives. Elaboration to
example 1 (EEx1)

Next, the elderly will stay in their comfort zones for unreasonably long periods of Elaboration 2 (E2)
time. * Give the second
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.
(Explain why elderly will
lose their freedom and
independence)
For instance, the staff will prepare everything for the elderly, such as folding their Example 2 (Ex2)
clothes, washing the dishes, and cleaning their beds.
The elderly may not be able to do the chores by themselves. Elaboration to
example 2 (EEx2)

Not only that, there are schedules in nursing homes that every elderly person should Elaboration 3 (E3)
obey without any objections. * Give the third
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.
(Explain why elderly will
lose their freedom and
independence)
In other words, elderly people have limited time to entertain themselves, such as Example 3 (Ex3)
watching TV or playing board games.
Some elderly people need more entertainment in their lives to eliminate their feelings Elaboration to
of loneliness and listlessness. example 3 (EEx3)

Hence, if the elderly stay in nursing homes, they will lose their independence, Concluding Sentence
especially if they are forced to do so against their will.

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*ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*Low Frequency Words
1. flexibility
2. listlessness

PARAGRAPH 5 (CONCLUSION)
In conclusion, living in nursing homes is not beneficial for the elderly. Concluding Line(s)
*Fresh rephrasing of the
topic
I disagree that the elderly should live in nursing homes as they may feel lonely, Restate your stand /
depressed, and lose freedom. opinion
&
Summarise your 3
points
They should be close to their families. In their old age, it is a must for their children Hope / Suggestion
to take on responsibilities towards them. The elderly should be appreciated for what
they have sacrificed during their younger days. They deserve to be cared for and
valued.

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Task 2
SAMPLE ESSAY 6– MUET BAND 5
You are advised to spend about 50 minutes on this task.

You attended a talk by a non-governmental organization, which was organized by Council of the City of Kuching
South (MBKS). The following statement was made by the guest speaker:

“The elderly should live in nursing homes.”

Do you agree with the statement? Write an essay of at least 250 words.
ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY [60 marks]

PARAGRAPH 1 (INTRODUCTION)
The word “elderly” refers to people who are 65 years of age or older. Those aged 65 to 74
Introduce the
are referred to as "early elderly" and those over 75 years old as "late elderly". In today's world, topic
where fewer children are being born into households, caring for the elderly has become a challenge
for many families. Some children tend to place their ageing parents in nursing homes as they are
busy with their jobs. The question is, should the elderly live in nursing homes? I disagree with the Stand
statement given that the elderly should be sent to nursing homes. This is because living in a nursing Thesis
home can lead to feelings of loneliness, nursing homes can be depressing, and the elderly lose Statement
their freedom and independence.
PARAGRAPH 2 (POINT NO. 1)
First of all, nursing homes can lead to feelings of loneliness. This is because the elderly Topic Sentence

need time to adapt to their new environment. Some elderly people are very friendly with one E1
another, but others are not as friendly or talkative as we think. For example, they may spend most Ex1
of their time alone and avoid talking to people, especially people they have only recently met.
EEx1
Some of them think that it can be awkward to strike up a conversation with strangers because they
might have different opinions and viewpoints. The elderly will also avoid interacting with residents E2
of the nursing home because they are too shy to inquire about the whereabouts of the new place.
For instance, they will observe people’s actions in order to gain information instead of asking them Ex2

directly. They may lack companionship and feel lonely due to their reluctance to associate with EEx2
people around them. Next, some elderly people believe their standards are higher than anyone in E3
a nursing home and will avoid contact with other people. To illustrate, they can be arrogant in their Ex3
speech and manner. This will make others feel annoyed and uncomfortable, eventually leading to EEx3
an increase in the likelihood that they will be marginalised or ostracized by others in nursing

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homes. Therefore, the elderly in nursing homes may be isolated due to their difficulty adjusting to Concluding
the new surroundings, resulting in loneliness in daily life. Sentence

PARAGRAPH 3 (POINT NO. 2)

Furthermore, nursing homes can be depressing. Depression in the elderly is due to the fact Topic Sentence

that most nursing homes don't have the suitable living conditions. For example, there could be a E1
few hundred seniors living under the same roof within a nursing home. Some facilities are not Ex1
disabled-friendly, which causes inconvenience to those with physical disabilities. This means that
the elderly don't have as much space and amenities as a real home. In the long run, elderly people EEx1

are more susceptible to anxiety and depression. Other than that, nursing homes are said to be
E2
depressing because there is a lack of activities for the elderly to spend their leisure time. For
instance, nursing home residents do not have various activities to pass the time, such as board Ex2
games, billiards, and puzzles. A lack of activities like board games not only increases the chances EEx2
of the elderly feeling bored but also reduces the chances of activating memories and improving
cognitive functions. In addition, some nursing home staff members lack the patience to take care E3
of the elderly. To illustrate, irresponsible staff may be reluctant to pay extra attention to the elderly Ex3
with disabilities. As a result, the disabled elderly may not be properly cared for, which may EEx3
eventually lead to severe depression as they are unable to cope with everyday life. Thus, the elderly Concluding
who live in nursing homes with inappropriate settings can be depressed. Sentence
PARAGRAPH 4 (POINT NO. 3)
Topic Sentence
Last but not least, the elderly will lose their freedom and independence. This is because
most nursing homes control every activity held in the nursing homes, including the elderly’s E1
routine. For example, in a nursing home, the elderly only have control over their meals, Ex1
participation in activities, and establishing routines. They do not have much freedom and flexibility EEx1
in their lives. Next, the elderly will stay in their comfort zones for unreasonably long periods of E2
time. For instance, the staff will prepare everything for the elderly, such as folding their clothes, Ex2
washing the dishes, and cleaning their beds. The elderly may not be able to do the chores by EEx2
themselves. Not only that, there are schedules in nursing homes that every elderly person should E3
obey without any objections. In other words, the elderly have limited time to entertain themselves, Ex3
such as watching TV or playing board games. Some elderly people need more entertainment in EEx3
their lives to eliminate their feelings of loneliness and listlessness. Hence, if the elderly stay in Concluding
nursing homes, they will lose their independence, especially if they are forced to do so against Sentence
their will.
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PARAGRAPH 5 (CONCLUSION) Concluding
In conclusion, living in nursing homes is not beneficial for the elderly. I disagree that the Line(s)

elderly should live in nursing homes as they may feel lonely, depressed, and lose freedom. They Restate
Stand/Opinion
should be close to their families. In their old age, it is a must for their children to take on & Summarise 3
responsibilities towards them. The elderly should be appreciated for what they have sacrificed Points
during their younger days. They deserve to be cared for and valued. Hope/Suggestio
n

Teacher’s Comments

Task Fulfilment (TF) -good response to the task

-develop ideas reasonably well
-info- well-linked
Language & Organisation (L) -meaning comes across very clearly
-able to LINK ideas effectively
-shows reasonable evidence of planning
-display reasonably confident control of language
*demonstrate the use of Low Frequency Words (LFW)

MUET Band 5

CEFR Level C1

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Important Notes!!!

Low Frequency Words (LFW)

A. LFW is a MUST for C1 as it differentiates C candidates from other candidates.

B. Minimum 3 @ 4 LFW for higher language scores

C. List of LFW in this essay:

1.companionship
2.ostracized
3.disabled-friendly
4.susceptible
5.activating memories
6.improving cognitive functions
7.flexibility
8.listlessness

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Task 2 This sample essay was
SAMPLE ESSAY 7– MUET BAND 5 a Band 5 in the old
You are advised to spend about 50 minutes on this task. format, but in the new
format, students are
advised NOT to
You came across an article on peer pressure. The following question came to your mind:
change the key words
“Can peer pressure help mould a student’s life?” (peer pressure) to
parents, teachers,
mass media. This is
Write an essay expressing your opinion on the statement. Write at least 250 words. due to the fear that
students might lose
DISCURSIVE/ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY
marks [60for marks]
off-topic
discussions (without
PLAN OF DEVELOPMENT discussing peer
pressure).

PARAGRAPH 1 (INTRODUCTION)
Students are learners that learn in schools, colleges, or universities. Students Introduce the topic
spend most of their time in class studying for exams or doing school assignments. *Refer to the question

They work hard to achieve academic excellence and learn a lot of skills during school and choose ANY WORD
to start your essay.
life. A student’s life involves receiving an education through classroom learning and
developing desirable personality traits. There are many aspects that affect a student’s
life.
In my opinion, I disagree that peer pressure can help mould a student’s life. This is Stand
because students may be immature and unable to make good decisions in choosing *Write your stand in
ONE SENTENCE.
friends that are beneficial to their lives.
(You will NOT BE
PENALISED if you
write- I agree / disagree
with the statement)
Instead of peer pressure, parents, teachers, and the mass media can have a great Thesis statement
influence on a student’s life. *LAST SENTENCE of
paragraph 1. Write 3
POINTS in the thesis
statement in ONE
SENTENCE.

PARAGRAPH 2 (POINT NO. 1)

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First and foremost, parents have a great impact on a student’s life, but peer Topic Sentence (T)
pressure cannot mould a student's life. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 1 should be
written there.
Parents are students’ first teachers, and they have a key role in shaping students’ Elaboration 1 (E1)
character. Parents can be a helping hand in a student’s educational journey. It is true * Give the first
explanation for your
that parents can be role models for students to emulate. They should demonstrate good
TOPIC SENTENCE.
moral values and a caring, loving and responsible character for students to follow.
(Explain how parents
Open-mindedness is essential for parents to allow their children to try new things and mould a student’s life)
accept differences.
For example, parents should be open-minded in terms of education which allow their Example 1 (Ex1)
children to think out of the box and be creative in learning.
This can help to boost children’s confidence levels and enhance creativity. Parents Elaboration to
should loosen up control and not overschedule their children with learning activities example 1 (EEx1)
at home. Balancing the time between lessons and leisure is important to having a
quality student life.

Next, parents can be great listeners for students in times of trouble. They can motivate Elaboration 2 (E2)
their children by offering adequate moral support and valuable suggestions. * Give the second
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.
(Explain how parents
mould a student’s life)
For instance, when a student faces the problem of cyberbullying, he can turn to parents Example 2 (Ex2)
for help.
His parents will share some of their personal experiences with him and advise him to Elaboration to
have sheer determination in facing problems. This will encourage him to face example 2 (EEx2)
problems optimistically and confidently. It is equally important for parents to give
constructive criticism if their children are not performing well in school. By doing so,
students can understand what is right and what is wrong in order to become a better
person in life.

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Therefore, parents play an important role in student’s life. Concluding Sentence

*ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*No repetition of words (Avoid repeating the same vocabulary)
1. boost- enhance, improve
2. important- essential, vital
3. adequate- appropriate

*Low Frequency Words

1. emulate
2. open-mindedness
3. cyberbullying
4. sheer determination
5. optimistically
6. constructive criticism

*Change word forms

1. Open-mindedness is essential- parents should be open-minded

PARAGRAPH 3 (POINT NO. 2)

Furthermore, teachers play a vital role to mould a student’s life, but peer Topic Sentence (T)
pressure cannot shape a student's life. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 2 should be
written there.
Teachers take the place of parents in school and they mould the personality and Elaboration 1 (E1)
character of the student. An ideal teacher should be impartial, disciplined, and * Give the first
explanation for your
courteous to set a good example for students to emulate. A teacher can be a mentor, a
TOPIC SENTENCE.

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motivator, and a source of inspiration to students. A teacher has a unique way of (Explain how teachers
mould a student’s life)
improving the social development and academic performance of students.
For example, a teacher can create a curriculum that fosters students' development. Example 1 (Ex1)
They can teach problem-solving skills by conducting class projects relating to issues Elaboration to
like water shortages, and this enables students to apply decision-making and problem- example 1 (EEx1)
solving skills.

Besides, teachers can help to nurture students' self-esteem. Whenever students fail in Elaboration 2 (E2)
their exams, teachers can inspire students and give students the impetus to try even * Give the second
explanation for your
harder.
TOPIC SENTENCE.
(Explain how teachers
mould a student’s life)
For instance, students will be guided by teachers to set learning goals for the exam, Example 2 (Ex2)
such as getting a better grade than the last exam.
During the learning process, teachers help students understand their strengths and Elaboration to
weaknesses. When students have a better understanding of themselves, they will have example 2 (EEx2)
a higher confidence level and will be motivated to achieve goals in life.

Teachers can also promote student self-determination and self-awareness by giving Elaboration 3 (E3)
challenging assignments. When students complete those assignments successfully, * Give the third
explanation for your
they will have a sense of achievement and become more confident.
TOPIC SENTENCE.
(Explain how teachers
mould a student’s life)
To illustrate, coursework and presentations are two mandatory tasks as Form 6 Example 3 (Ex3)
students.
It is part of the things that Form 6 students need to do throughout their three semesters. Elaboration to
So, doing tough tasks like coursework and presenting them is part of developing self- example 3 (EEx3)
determination and confidence among students.

Thus, there is no doubt that teachers play a great role in moulding a student’s life. Concluding Sentence

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*ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*No repetition of words (Avoid repeating the same vocabulary)
1. promote- develop

*Low Frequency Words

1. impartial
2. impetus

*Change word forms

1. become more confident- a higher confidence level

PARAGRAPH 4 (POINT NO. 3)

Last but not least, the mass media can help mould a student’s life, but peer Topic Sentence (T)
pressure cannot shape a student's life. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 3 should be
written there.
The most common platforms for mass media are the internet, newspapers, television, Elaboration 1 (E1)
and radio. The ubiquitous internet in today’s world allows free sharing of thoughts * Give the first
explanation for your
through social networking sites. Students tend to use social media to stay connected,
TOPIC SENTENCE.
make friends, and satisfy their social needs.
(Explain how mass
media moulds a
student’s life)
For example, students love to spend time socialising through social media like Example 1 (Ex1)
Facebook, Instagram, and WeChat because they can meet different people from all
walks of life.
Students can create other online identities that the real world doesn't allow. Social Elaboration to
networking gives students the freedom to meet like-minded people with the same example 1 (EEx1)

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interests. Students can have a more mature treatment of certain topics. They can also
gain new perspectives by viewing other people's lives through social media. This helps
to increase the confidence level of students and increase their mental maturity.

In addition, students not only meet new people through social media, but they can also Elaboration 2 (E2)
have a better understanding of global issues through mass media. * Give the second
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.
(Explain how mass
media moulds a
student’s life)
For instance, students can learn more about human rights, poverty, inflation, recession, Example 2 (Ex2)
or global warming issues through newspapers or search engines like Google Chrome.
Mass media spreads knowledge internationally, thereby making students better global Elaboration to
citizens. As a result, it broadens students’ spectrum of knowledge and students become example 2 (EEx2)
more knowledgeable. It also helps them with academic writing and academic
excellence, which contributes to a brighter future.

Hence, student’s life will be greatly influenced by the mass media. Concluding Sentence
*ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*No repetition of words (Avoid repeating the same vocabulary)
1. impact- influence, affect

*Low Frequency Words

1. ubiquitous
2. search engines
3. spectrum of knowledge

*Change word forms

1. students will be more mature- increase their mental maturity

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PARAGRAPH 5 (CONCLUSION)
In conclusion, students’ life is a period of confusion as they are in search of their Concluding Line(s)
personal identity. *Fresh rephrasing of the
topic
I still disagree that peer pressure can help mould a student’s life. Students that are Restate your stand /
immature tend to be influenced by bad peers, which is detrimental to their future. It is opinion
the role of parents, teachers and the mass media that affect a student's lives and help &
to shape the character of a student. Summarise your 3
points
Students need the support of parents and teachers in order to grow up with better social Hope / Suggestion
skills and improved behaviour. Students with good support from home and school will
grow up with higher self-esteem. Hopefully, every student will become a successful
person and become a future leader of tomorrow who can ensure a nation’s prosperity.
NOTES:
*Low Frequency Words
1. detrimental to

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This sample essay was
Task 2 a Band 5 in the old
SAMPLE ESSAY 7– MUET BAND 5 format, but in the new
You are advised to spend about 50 minutes on this task. format, students are
advised NOT to
change the key words
You came across an article on peer pressure. The following question came to your mind:
(peer pressure) to
“Can peer pressure help mould a student’s life?” parents, teachers,
mass media. This is
due to the fear that
Write an essay expressing your opinion on the statement. Write at least 250 words. students might lose
DISCURSIVE/ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY marks for off-topic
[60 marks]
discussions (without
discussing peer
pressure).
PARAGRAPH 1 (INTRODUCTION)
Students are learners that learn in schools, colleges, or universities. Students spend most
Introduce the
of their time in class studying for exams or doing school assignments. They work hard to achieve topic
academic excellence and learn a lot of skills during school life. A student’s life involves receiving
an education through classroom learning and developing desirable personality traits. There are
many aspects that affect a student’s life. In my opinion, I disagree that peer pressure can help Stand
mould a student’s life. This is because students may be immature and unable to make good
decisions in choosing friends that are beneficial to their lives. Instead of peer pressure, parents, Thesis
Statement
teachers, and the mass media can have a great influence on a student’s life.

PARAGRAPH 2 (POINT NO. 1)

First and foremost, parents have a great impact on a student’s life. Parents are students’ Topic Sentence
first teachers, and they have a key role in shaping students’ character. Parents can be a helping
E1
hand in a student’s educational journey. It is true that parents can be role models for students to
emulate. They should demonstrate good moral values and a caring, loving and responsible
character for students to follow. Open-mindedness is essential for parents to allow their children
to try new things and accept differences. For example, parents should be open-minded in terms of
Ex1
education which allow their children to think out of the box and be creative in learning. This can
help to boost children’s confidence levels and enhance creativity. Parents should let go of control EEx1
and not overschedule their children with learning activities at home. Balancing the time between
lessons and leisure is important to having a quality student life. Next, parents can be great listeners
E2
for students in times of trouble. They can motivate their children by offering adequate moral
support and valuable suggestions. For instance, when a student faces the problem of cyberbullying, Ex2
he can turn to parents for help. His parents will share some of their personal experiences with him
EEx2
and advise him to have sheer determination in facing problems. This will encourage him to face
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problems optimistically and confidently. It is equally important for parents to give constructive
Concluding
criticism if their children are not performing well in school. By doing so, students can understand Sentence
what is right and what is wrong in order to become a better person in life. Therefore, parents play
an important role in student’s life.

PARAGRAPH 3 (POINT NO. 2)

Furthermore, teachers play a vital role to mould a student’s life. Teachers take the place Topic Sentence
of parents in school and they mould the personality and character of the student. An ideal teacher E1
should be impartial, disciplined, and courteous to set a good example for students to emulate. A
teacher can be a mentor, a motivator, and a source of inspiration to students. A teacher has a unique
way of improving the social development and academic performance of students. For example, a
teacher can create a curriculum that fosters students' development. They can teach problem-solving Ex1
skills by conducting class projects relating to issues like water shortages, and this enables students EEx1
to apply decision-making and problem-solving skills. Besides, teachers can help to nurture E2
students' self-esteem. Whenever students fail in their exams, teachers can inspire students and give
students the impetus to try even harder. For instance, students will be guided by teachers to set Ex2
learning goals for the exam, such as getting a better grade than the last exam. During the learning
process, teachers help students understand their strengths and weaknesses. When students have a EEx2
better understanding of themselves, they will have a higher confidence level and will be motivated
to achieve goals in life. Teachers can also promote student self-determination and self-awareness E3
by giving challenging assignments. When students complete those assignments successfully, they
will have a sense of achievement and become more confident. To illustrate, coursework and
Ex3
presentations are two mandatory tasks as Form 6 students. It is part of the things that Form 6
EEx3
students need to do throughout their three semesters. So, doing tough tasks like coursework and
presenting them is part of developing self-determination and confidence among students. Thus, Concluding
there is no doubt that teachers play a great role in moulding a student’s life. Sentence

PARAGRAPH 4 (POINT NO. 3)

Last but not least, the great impact of the mass media on students' lives is an undeniable Topic Sentence
fact. The most common platforms for mass media are the internet, newspapers, television, and
E1
radio. The ubiquitous internet in today’s world allows free sharing of thoughts through social
networking sites. Students tend to use social media to stay connected, make friends, and satisfy
their social needs. For example, students love to spend time socialising through social media like
Ex1
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Facebook, Instagram, and WeChat because they can meet different people from all walks of life.
Students can create other online identities that the real world doesn't allow. Social networking
EEx1
gives students the freedom to meet like-minded people with the same interests. Students can have
a more mature treatment of certain topics. They can also gain new perspectives by viewing other
people's lives through social media. This helps to increase the confidence level of students and
increase their mental maturity. In addition, students not only meet new people through social E2
media, but they can also have a better understanding of global issues through mass media. For
instance, students can learn more about human rights, poverty, inflation, recession, or global Ex2

warming issues through newspapers or search engines like Google Chrome. Mass media spreads
EEx2
knowledge internationally, thereby making students better global citizens. As a result, it broadens
students’ spectrum of knowledge and students become more knowledgeable. It also helps them
with academic writing and academic excellence, which contributes to a brighter future. Hence, Concluding
Sentence
student’s life will be greatly influenced by the mass media.

PARAGRAPH 5 (CONCLUSION)

In conclusion, students’ life is a period of confusion as they are in search of their personal Concluding
identity. I still disagree that peer pressure can help mould a student’s life. Students that are Line(s)
immature tend to be influenced by bad peers, which is detrimental to their future. It is the role of Restate
Stand/Opinion
parents, teachers and the mass media that affect a student's lives and help to shape the character & Summarise 3
of a student. Students need the support of parents and teachers in order to grow up with better Points
social skills and improved behaviour. Students with good support from home and school will grow Hope/Suggestio
n
up with higher self-esteem. Hopefully, every student will become a successful person and become
a future leader of tomorrow who can ensure a nation’s prosperity.

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Teacher’s Comments

Task Fulfilment (TF) -good response to the task

-develop ideas reasonably well
-info- well-linked
Language & Organisation (L) -meaning comes across very clearly
-able to LINK ideas effectively
-shows reasonable evidence of planning
-use a variety of cohesive devices
-display reasonably confident control of language
*demonstrate the use of Low Frequency Words (LFW)
MUET Band 5

CEFR Level C1

Important Notes!!!

Low Frequency Words (LFW)

A. LFW is a MUST for C1 as it differentiates C candidates from other candidates.
B. Minimum 3 @ 4 LFW for higher language scores
C. List of LFW in this essay:
1.emulate
2.open-mindedess
3.cyberbullying
4.sheer determination
5.optimistically
6.constructive criticism
7.impartial
8.impetus
9.ubiquitous
10.search engines
11.spectrum of knowledge
12.detrimental to

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Task 2
SAMPLE ESSAY 8– MUET BAND 5
You are advised to spend about 50 minutes on this task.

You have watched a documentary about the growing concern on the reliability of online information to the society.
The following remark was made in the documentary:

“Online information is deceiving and unreliable.”

Do you agree with the statement? Write an essay of at least 250 words.
ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY [60 marks]

PLAN OF DEVELOPMENT

PARAGRAPH 1 (INTRODUCTION)
The advent of the digital era has revolutionised the way we communicate and Introduce the topic
disseminate information. The internet allows communication and information to be *Refer to the question
and choose ANY WORD
transmitted easily and efficiently at a minimum cost with the fastest speed. However,
to start your essay.
despite its many apparent benefits, there is a growing concern about its negative
influences on the public, especially those who are of gullible age. One of its critics’
main concerns is the reliability of online information for society. They argue that the
information posted online is deceptive and unreliable. These critics further strengthen
their argument with examples of reported cases of online fraud, scams, and misleading
news.
Nevertheless, I disagree with the statement because, in my opinion, not all information Stand (Compulsory)
posted online is deceptive and unreliable. It is one’s responsibility to discern through *Write your stand in
ONE SENTENCE.
the myriad of information found online and make a sound judgement on whether to
accept it as truth or not.
Online information can be reliable and trusted as long as it is from a trusted and Thesis statement
correct website address, supported by certified professionals, and has access to a *LAST SENTENCE of
paragraph 1. Write 3
wealth of information.
POINTS in the thesis
statement in ONE
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
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*No repetition of words (Avoid repeating the same vocabulary)
1. growing- increasing, emerging

*Low Frequency Words

1. revolutionised
2. disseminate
3. apparent
4. gullible
5. discern
6. myriad

*Change word forms

1. They argue that- their argument

PARAGRAPH 2 (POINT NO. 1)

First and foremost, trusted and correct website address is very important in Topic Sentence (T)
determining that the information one sees online is correct. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 1 should be
written there.
Knowing the source of information is crucial to ensure that the information one Elaboration 1 (E1)
receives is reliable. * Give the first
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.
For example, if one needs information on any related government projects and news, Example 1 (Ex1)
then you should go to the website that ends with.gov, like https://apdm.gov.edu.my.
Knowing the source of funding for the website is important so that you may have an Elaboration to
idea of what the website's goal is. example 1 (EEx1)

Very often, we see many websites end with.com, such as Elaboration 2 (E2)
https://www.nationalgeographic.com. This identifies the websites as commercial

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websites. Commercial websites are websites that are used for the sale of retail items, * Give the second
explanation for your
food, or beverages to the general public. They also offer services, including
TOPIC SENTENCE.
professional, trade, contracting, banking, and property management.
Amazon.com, Takeaway.com, and PizzaHut.com are just to name a few examples of Example 2 (Ex2)
food and beverage commerce sites available.
These websites are mushrooming based on popular demand by consumers. Although Elaboration to
it is widely available online, consumers must be aware of its reliability. example 2 (EEx2)

Next, due to the information and services that they offer, commercial websites are the Elaboration 3 (E3)
favourite pick for scammers. These scammers would create fake websites using the * Give the second
explanation for your
latest technology to make them look genuine. So, as long as one is vigilant while
TOPIC SENTENCE.
browsing for information, one can ascertain whether the information posted by these
websites is true or fake.
For instance, Maybank2U and CIMB are two commercial websites reported to have Example 3 (Ex3)
fake websites in 2021.
Countless reports are received from the consumers of the two banking systems. They Elaboration to
were lured into revealing their personal information once they clicked certain example 3 (EEx3)
links purporting to be from reputable companies that were sent via their email or
private messages.

By being prudent and cautious, the public could prevent themselves from being Elaboration 4 (E4)
deceived into thinking that they are browsing genuine websites and avoid being * Give the second
explanation for your
scammed by unscrupulous parties.
TOPIC SENTENCE.
Of course, we have heard of cases where victims of internet fraud were lured into Example 4 (Ex4)
divulging their personal details such as credit card numbers, bank card numbers,
addresses, and also their identification card numbers.
But all these criminal incidences do not mean that the information posted online is all Elaboration to
unreliable and deceiving, as people can easily avoid being scammed or tricked by just example 4 (EEx4)
exercising prudence and vigilance while online.

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Therefore, one needs to ensure the address of the website that one types in is correct Concluding Sentence
to prevent being scammed by unscrupulous people. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*No repetition of words (Avoid repeating the same vocabulary)
1. crucial- vital, important, essential
2. reliable- trustworthy
3. mushrooming- rapidly growing
4. ascertain- verify, find out
5. via- through
6. revealing- divulging
7. prudent – cautious, vigilant
8. genuine- real

*Low Frequency Words

1. vigilant
2. purporting
3. reputable
4. prudent
5. unscrupulous
6. divulging

*Change word forms

1. one is prudent and vigilant- exercise prudence and vigilance

PARAGRAPH 3 (POINT NO. 2)

Furthermore, another reason is that the information is verified by certified Topic Sentence (T)
professionals or is supported by various government agencies. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.

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Point no. 2 should be
written there.
Government agencies, whether they are wholly-owned by the government, statutory Elaboration 1 (E1)
corporations or semi-government agencies, have their own official websites that share * Give the first
explanation for your
any programmes or activities conducted by them.
TOPIC SENTENCE.
For example, information related to the government’s policies or laws can always be Example 1 (Ex1)
found on relevant government agencies’ websites.
This is to ensure that updated information is easily accessible to the public through the Elaboration to
online platform. example 1 (EEx1)

Besides, the same goes for any information related to medicine. It is advised to browse Elaboration 2 (E2)
any medical website supported by genuine medical practitioners and medical * Give the second
explanation for your
institutions, whether they are local or overseas.
TOPIC SENTENCE.
For instance, Malaysia’s Online Pharmacy, Gleneagles Hospitals, and Health.gov are Example 2 (Ex2)
examples of trusted digital healthcare platforms available.
These trusted websites share information about healthcare services and technologies Elaboration to
for outpatients and inpatients. Digital healthcare websites facilitate smooth example 2 (EEx2)
communication between healthcare providers and their patients.

However, it is worth noting that much of the misleading and unreliable information Elaboration 3 (E3)
found online is baseless and unsupported by facts. Most of the time, this misleading * Give the third
explanation for your
information is driven by greed, especially in the case of beauty products, so-called
TOPIC SENTENCE.
“healthcare” and slimming products.
To illustrate, skincare products that claim to be ‘age-defying’ for all skin types. Example 3 (Ex3)
These promises sound too good to be true and are indeed unethical as they deceive the Elaboration to
consumers. example 3 (EEx3)

There are many instances where people are deceived by what they see or read about Elaboration 4 (E4)
certain beauty products from unreliable sources, such as from social media influencers * Give the second
explanation for your
on TikTok, Instagram, or YouTube. Truth be told, these influencers are paid a certain
TOPIC SENTENCE.

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amount of money to promote certain products or merchandise on their platform, so
whatever claims they make about those products are subject to scrutiny.
Social media sites such as Facebook, Twitter, and Instagram are well known for Example 4 (Ex4)
posting false, paid reviews by influencers and misleading testimonials by individuals.
These platforms are popular among youngsters and adults, so it is easy to reach their Elaboration to
targets. Consumers need to be more informed and be accountable by doing extensive example 4 (EEx4)
fact-checking about certain services before purchasing an item. The onus is on one’s
willingness to go the extra mile in verifying the information he or she gets online. It is
worth noting that reliable websites will always provide an email address, phone
number, or mailing address. They would also cite the sources of the information they
posted at the bottom of every page.

Thus, to state that all information online is deceiving, unreliable and misleading is Concluding Sentence
incorrect as there are many reliable sources online supported by government agencies *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
or people of credible reputation in their respective fields of expertise.
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*No repetition of words (Avoid repeating the same vocabulary)
1. responsible- accountable

*Low Frequency Words

1. statutory corporations
2. facilitate
3. unethical
4. scrutiny
5. paid reviews
6. onus
7. cite

PARAGRAPH 4 (POINT NO. 3)

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Last but not least, it is an undeniable fact that a wealth of information is Topic Sentence (T)
available on the ubiquitous Internet through many media. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 3 should be
written there.
It is true that the information found online comes from many sources, and a large part Elaboration 1 (E1)
of them are people’s personal views and experiences relating to certain issues, about * Give the first
explanation for your
certain products or even services. These people even sometimes provide witnesses’
TOPIC SENTENCE.
accounts or video coverage of certain events.
For example, there are youtubers who base the content of their videos wholly on the Example 1 (Ex1)
concept of debunking claims made by other influencers by showing their experiences
online.
This will eventually lead to hoaxes among the community. Elaboration to
example 1 (EEx1)

So, are all these deceiving and unreliable? Elaboration 2 (E2)

* Give the second
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.
What about a doctor’s personal blog or YouTube channel that aims to educate the Example 2 (Ex2)
public by giving important information or messages based on his or her personal
experience? Are we going to deny his or her professional insight or view just because
it is posted online? What about health websites that offer information on everything
from types of diseases to treatment of diseases? Are they all untrustworthy?
If this is the case, then people are going to have a major problem working, studying, Elaboration to
and conducting businesses from home. This is especially true during the COVID-19 example 2 (EEx2)
pandemic, where many are forced to work from home and rely a lot on the internet to
work and study.

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Students, especially, need to complete assignments or thesis papers online. Where do Elaboration 3 (E3)
they access relevant and vital information for their work if not online? How can they * Give the third
explanation for your
complete their assignments if the information they get online is deemed unreliable?
TOPIC SENTENCE.
For instance, is the information still untrustworthy if it is sourced from libraries or Example 3 (Ex3)
from e-books?
It should be noted that today, many libraries have offered free access to academic Elaboration to
materials to students and the public. Furthermore, many major reputable newspapers example 3 (EEx3)
around the world, like The Guardian and The Times, have also started their own
websites offering news to the masses.

Hence, since there is a voluminous amount of information on the Internet, one can Concluding Sentence
trust the information as long as it is from a reliable and trusted website. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*No repetition of words (Avoid repeating the same vocabulary)
1. unreliable- untrustworthy

*Low Frequency Words

1. ubiquitous
2. debunking
3. hoaxes
4. insight
5. untrustworthy
6. deemed
7. masses
8. voluminous amount

PARAGRAPH 5 (CONCLUSION)
In conclusion, social media such as Facebook, Twitter, Instagram, and TikTok Concluding Line(s)
are online communities where people connect with friends, family, and strangers. So, *Fresh rephrasing of the
topic

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sharing information among friends and families is normal. Some may be true, some
may be false.
Despite this, I still disagree that online information is deceiving or unreliable. This is Restate your stand /
because the information obtained is trustworthy as long as it comes from a trusted opinion
and correct website address, is supported by certified professionals, and has &
access to a voluminous amount大量of information. Summarise your 3
points
The onus is on the individual himself or herself to use sound judgement and common Hope / Suggestion
sense when browsing for the information that he or she is looking for.

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Task 2
SAMPLE ESSAY 8– MUET BAND 5
You are advised to spend about 50 minutes on this task.

You have watched a documentary about the growing concern on the reliability of online information to the society.
The following remark was made in the documentary:

“Online information is deceiving and unreliable.”

Do you agree with the statement? Write an essay of at least 250 words.
ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY [60 marks]

PARAGRAPH 1 (INTRODUCTION)
The advent of the digital era has revolutionised the way we communicate and disseminate
Introduce the
information. The internet allows communication and information to be transmitted easily and topic
efficiently at a minimum cost with the fastest speed. However, despite its many apparent benefits,
there is a growing concern about its negative influences on the public, especially those who are of
gullible age. One of its critics’ main concerns is the reliability of online information for society.
They argue that the information posted online is deceptive and unreliable. These critics further
strengthen their argument with examples of reported cases of online fraud, scams, and misleading
news. Nevertheless, I disagree with the statement because, in my opinion, not all information
Stand
posted online is deceptive and unreliable. It is one’s responsibility to discern through the myriad
of information found online and make a sound judgement on whether to accept it as truth or not.
Online information can be reliable and trusted as long as it is from a trusted and correct website Thesis
address, supported by certified professionals, and has access to a wealth of information. Statement

PARAGRAPH 2 (POINT NO. 1)

First and foremost, trusted and correct website address is very important in determining Topic Sentence
that the information one sees online is correct. Knowing the source of information is crucial to E1
ensure that the information one receives is reliable. For example, if one needs information on any
Ex1
related government projects and news, then you should go to the website that ends with.gov, like
https://apdm.gov.edu.my. Knowing the source of funding for the website is important so that you EEx1
may have an idea of what the website's goal is. Very often, we see many websites end with.com, E2
such as https://www.nationalgeographic.com. This identifies the websites as commercial websites.
Commercial websites are websites that are used for the sale of retail items, food, or beverages to
the general public. They also offer services, including professional, trade, contracting, banking,
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EEx2
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and property management. Amazon.com, Takeaway.com, and PizzaHut.com are just to name a
few examples of food and beverage commerce sites available. These websites are mushrooming E3
based on popular demand by consumers. Although it is widely available online, consumers must
be aware of its reliability. Next, due to the information and services that they offer, commercial
websites are the favourite pick for scammers. These scammers would create fake websites using
the latest technology to make them look genuine. So, as long as one is vigilant while browsing for Ex3
information, one can ascertain whether the information posted by these websites is true or fake. EEx3
For instance, Maybank2U and CIMB are two commercial websites reported to have fake websites
in 2021. Countless reports are received from the consumers of the two banking systems. They E4
were lured into revealing their personal information once they clicked certain links purporting to
be from reputable companies that were sent via their email or private messages. By being prudent
and cautious, the public could prevent themselves from being deceived into thinking that they are Ex3
browsing genuine websites and avoid being scammed by unscrupulous parties. Of course, we have
heard of cases where victims of internet fraud were lured into divulging their personal details such EEx3
as credit card numbers, bank card numbers, addresses, and also their identification card numbers.
But all these criminal incidences do not mean that the information posted online is all unreliable Concluding
Sentence
and deceiving, as people can easily avoid being scammed or tricked by just exercising prudence
and vigilance while online. Therefore, one needs to ensure the address of the website that one types
in is correct to prevent being scammed by unscrupulous people.

PARAGRAPH 3 (POINT NO. 2)

Furthermore, another reason is that the information is verified by certified professionals Topic Sentence
or is supported by various government agencies. Government agencies, whether they are
E1
wholly-owned by the government, statutory corporations or semi-government agencies, have their
own official websites that share any programmes or activities conducted by them. For example, Ex1
information related to the government’s policies or laws can always be found on relevant
government agencies’ websites. This is to ensure that updated information is easily accessible to EEx1
the public through the online platform. Besides, the same goes for any information related to E2
medicine. It is advised to browse any medical website supported by genuine medical practitioners
and medical institutions, whether they are local or overseas. For instance, Malaysia’s Online Ex2
Pharmacy, Gleneagles Hospitals, and Health.gov are examples of trusted digital healthcare
platforms available. These trusted websites share information about healthcare services and EEx2
technologies for outpatients and inpatients. Digital healthcare websites facilitate smooth

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communication between healthcare providers and their patients. However, it is worth noting that E3
much of the misleading and unreliable information found online is baseless and unsupported by
facts. Most of the time, this misleading information is driven by greed, especially in the case of
beauty products, so-called “healthcare” and slimming products. To illustrate, skincare products
Ex3
that claim to be ‘age-defying’ for all skin types. These promises sound too good to be true and are
indeed unethical as they deceive the consumers. There are many instances where people are
deceived by what they see or read about certain beauty products from unreliable sources, such as E4
from social media influencers on TikTok, Instagram, or YouTube. Truth be told, these influencers
are paid a certain amount of money to promote certain products or merchandise on their platform,
so whatever claims they make about those products are subject to scrutiny. Social media sites such
as Facebook, Twitter, and Instagram are well known for posting false, paid reviews by influencers
Ex4
and misleading testimonials by individuals. These platforms are popular among youngsters and
adults, so it is easy to reach their targets. Consumers need to be more informed and be accountable
by doing extensive fact-checking about certain services before purchasing an item. The onus is on
one’s willingness to go the extra mile in verifying the information he or she gets online. It is worth EEx4
noting that reliable websites will always provide an email address, phone number, or mailing
address. They would also cite the sources of the information they posted at the bottom of every
page. Thus, to state that all information online is deceiving, unreliable and misleading is incorrect
as there are many reliable sources online supported by government agencies or people of credible Concluding
Sentence
reputation in their respective fields of expertise.

PARAGRAPH 4 (POINT NO. 3)

Last but not least, it is an undeniable fact that a wealth of information is available on the Topic Sentence
ubiquitous Internet through many media. It is true that the information found online comes from E1
many sources, and a large part of them are people’s personal views and experiences relating to
certain issues, about certain products or even services. These people even sometimes provide
witnesses’ accounts or video coverage of certain events. For example, there are youtubers who Ex1
base the content of their videos wholly on the concept of debunking claims made by other
influencers by showing their experiences online. This will eventually lead to hoaxes among the EEx1
community. So, are all these deceiving and unreliable? What about a doctor’s personal blog or E2
YouTube channel that aims to educate the public by giving important information or messages
based on his or her personal experience? Are we going to deny his or her professional insight or
view just because it is posted online? What about health websites that offer information on Ex2
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everything from types of diseases to treatment of diseases? Are they all untrustworthy? If this is
the case, then people are going to have a major problem working, studying, and conducting
businesses from home. This is especially true during the COVID-19 pandemic, where many are EEx2
forced to work from home and rely a lot on the internet to work and study. Students, especially,
need to complete assignments or thesis papers online. Where do they access relevant and vital E3
information for their work if not online? How can they complete their assignments if the
information they get online is deemed unreliable? For instance, is the information still Ex3
untrustworthy if it is sourced from libraries or from e-books? It should be noted that today, many
libraries have offered free access to academic materials to students and the public. Furthermore, EEx3
many major reputable newspapers around the world, like The Guardian and The Times, have also
started their own websites offering news to the masses. Hence, since there is a voluminous amount Concluding
of information on the Internet, one can trust the information as long as it is from a reliable website. Sentence

PARAGRAPH 5 (CONCLUSION)
In conclusion, social media such as Facebook, Twitter, Instagram, and TikTok are online
Concluding
communities where people connect with friends, family, and strangers. So, sharing information Line(s)
among friends and families is normal. Some may be true, some may be false. Despite this, I still Restate
disagree that online information is deceiving or unreliable. This is because the information Stand/Opinion
& Summarise 3
obtained is trustworthy as long as it comes from a trusted and correct website address, is Points
supported by certified professionals, and has access to a voluminous amount of information.
The onus is on the individual himself or herself to use sound judgement and common sense when Hope/Suggestio
browsing for the information that he or she is looking for. n

Teacher’s Comments

Task Fulfilment (TF) -good response to the task

-develop ideas reasonably well
-info- well-linked
Language & Organisation (L) -meaning comes across very clearly
-able to LINK ideas effectively
-appropriate and varied vocabulary
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-shows reasonable evidence of planning
-display reasonably confident control of language
*demonstrate the use of Low Frequency Words (LFW)

MUET Band 5

CEFR Level C1

Important Notes!!!

Low Frequency Words (LFW)

A. LFW is a MUST for C1 as it differentiates C candidates from other candidates.

B. Minimum 3 @ 4 LFW for higher language scores

C. List of LFW in this essay:

1. revolutionised 17. scrutiny
2. disseminate 18. paid reviews
3. apparent 19. onus
4. gullible 20. cite
5. discern 21. ubiquitous
6. myriad 22. debunking
7. vigilant 23. hoaxes
8. purporting 24. insight
9. reputable 25. untrustworthy
10. prudent 26. deemed
11. unscrupulous 27. masses
12. divulging 28. voluminous amount
13. statutory corporations
14. facilitate
15. unethical

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Task 2
SAMPLE ESSAY 9– MUET BAND 5
You are advised to spend about 50 minutes on this task.

You have watched a debate competition on television. The following comment was made by one of the debaters:

“The rise of online education during the COVID-19 pandemic is effective.”

Write an essay expressing your opinion on the statement. Write at least 250 words.

DISCURSIVE/ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY [60 marks]

PLAN OF DEVELOPMENT

PARAGRAPH 1 (INTRODUCTION)
Coronavirus Disease 2019 (Covid-19) was named by the World Health Introduce the topic
Organization (WHO) in February 2020. WHO has declared COVID-19 as a pandemic, *Refer to the question
and choose ANY WORD
which means that the disease is affecting the entire world. Due to this contagious
to start your essay.
COVID-19, new norms are emerging in various sectors, like the economic sector,
education sector, and healthcare sector. People are struggling in order to adapt to these
new norms. In terms of education, COVID-19 has forced education to be offered
online.
In my opinion, I agree with the statement that online education is effective. Stand
*Write your stand in
ONE SENTENCE.
(You will NOT BE
PENALISED if you
write- I agree / disagree
with the statement)
This is because online education increases both students’ and teachers’ efficiency, Thesis statement
as well as it is a more economical way of learning. *LAST SENTENCE of
paragraph 1. Write 3
POINTS in the thesis
statement in ONE
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*Low Frequency Words
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1. emerging

PARAGRAPH 2 (POINT NO. 1)

First and foremost, online education is more effective because it increases Topic Sentence (T)
students’ efficiency in learning. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 1 should be
written there.
Most students are more digitally prepared and comfortable with online learning. This Elaboration 1 (E1)
is because students have digital proficiencies far surpassing their teachers and parents. * Give the first
explanation for your
This enables students to get acquainted with online learning easily. Digital learning is
TOPIC SENTENCE.
an alternative method of learning that enables students to learn digitally and aids
(Explain how online
students’ engagement. Digital learning includes the combination of recorded video education increases
and live streaming classes. students' learning
efficiency)
For example, students can preview and self-study recorded videos and online materials Example 1 (Ex1)
prepared by teachers through a mobile phone application like WhatsApp.
By doing so, students can join the live streaming classes by being better prepared with Elaboration to
questions regarding the online materials prepared by teachers. example 1 (EEx1)

Next, the real-time interaction offered by live streaming platforms allows online Elaboration 2 (E2)
interactions between teachers and students. * Give the second
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.
(Explain how online
education increases
students' learning
efficiency)
For instance, during online classes through Zoom, students are encouraged to Example 2 (Ex2)
participate, ask questions, engage and share their opinions with classmates more
comfortably.

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Students are actively involved in online learning rather than just absorbing the Elaboration to
information given to them. This gives students the impetus to learn actively. example 2 (EEx2)

As students are more engaged in the online lessons, this can also enable students to Elaboration 3 (E3)
have better retention of information. This is because students can see visuals and * Give the second
explanation for your
graphics provided by teachers through live streaming classes.
TOPIC SENTENCE.
(Explain how online
education increases
students' learning
efficiency)
To illustrate, when students learn through Google Meet, the audio-visual aids used by Example 3 (Ex3)
teachers like Powerpoint slides and videos benefit students as they can better
understand the lessons.
This enables students to retain more information after classes as they are more engaged Elaboration to
in online classes. example 3 (EEx3)

Therefore, the shift from physical classrooms to online classes due to COVID-19 Concluding Sentence
benefits students, as online education enhances students’ efficiency. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*No repetition of words (Avoid repeating the same vocabulary)
1. due to- because of, owing to
2. enhance- boost, improve

*Low Frequency Words

1. digital proficiencies
2. acquainted
3. live streaming
4. impetus
5. retention of information

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PARAGRAPH 3 (POINT NO. 2)

Furthermore, the growing popularity of online education after COVID-19 can Topic Sentence (T)
benefit teachers because it can increase teachers’ efficiency in providing their *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
education.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 2 should be
written there.
Most teachers have embraced new challenges in implementing online learning because Elaboration 1 (E1)
they lack digital literacy skills. Teachers have to adapt quickly by using digital devices * Give the first
explanation for your
like laptop computers to prepare for online classes. Online teaching can increase
TOPIC SENTENCE.
teachers’ efficiency and productivity.
(Explain how online
education increases
teachers' efficiency)
For example, teachers are able to plan their lessons ahead by scheduling online tasks Example 1 (Ex1)
like marking assignments, teaching and recording lectures.
Teachers can do an online search to get endless materials and a voluminous amount Elaboration to
of information that can be used in lessons. example 1 (EEx1)

Besides, the use of digital education tools can save teachers’ time in preparing online Elaboration 2 (E2)
lessons. * Give the second
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.
(Explain how online
education increases
teachers' efficiency)
For instance, Projeqt allows teachers to create multimedia presentations with dynamic Example 2 (Ex2)
slides in which they can embed links, online quizzes, and videos. Kahoot, Quizizz and
Blooket are educational platforms that are based on questions and games.
Teachers can prepare online teaching materials by using slides, videos, graphics, Elaboration to
quizzes and questions through these educational tools to make their lessons more example 2 (EEx2)
effective.

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Moreover, teachers can conduct live streaming classes to live stream their lessons Elaboration 3 (E3)
through Youtube Live, Facebook Live, etc. As live streaming classes enable student- * Give the third
explanation for your
centred learning, teachers are able to reach out to different students. There are
TOPIC SENTENCE.
comprehensive capabilities with online education platforms that allow online
(Explain how online
interactions between teachers and students. education increases
teachers' efficiency)
To illustrate, through the Zoom application, teachers can schedule class sessions, share Example 3 (Ex3)
their screen and high-quality videos, as well as answer students’ questions faster and
more effectively.
Zoom meetings allow teachers to conduct online classes and record them to be Elaboration to
accessed later by students. This aids teachers’ effectiveness in delivering lectures. example 3 (EEx3)

Not only that, the use of Google Classroom also makes it easy for teachers to create Elaboration 4 (E4)
classes, distribute assignments and communicate with students. * Give the second
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.
(Explain how online
education increases
teachers' efficiency)
Teachers can quickly see who hasn’t completed the work and provide direct or real- Example 4 (Ex4)
time feedback and grades right in Google Classroom.
This enables teachers to assess students’ understanding of certain topics easily by Elaboration to
gathering data on students’ scores. example 4 (EEx4)

Thus, there is no doubt that teachers’ efficiency can be increased and they can provide Concluding Sentence
quality education through e-learning methods. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*Low Frequency Words
1. voluminous amount
2.comprehensive capabilities

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*Change word forms
1. aids teacher’s effectiveness- conduct lessons effectively

PARAGRAPH 4 (POINT NO. 3)

Last but not least, online education is a more economical way of learning Topic Sentence (T)
because it saves educational costs and time. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 3 should be
written there.
It is an undeniable fact that the implementation of distance education or remote Elaboration 1 (E1)
learning can lower the cost of education. The ubiquitous internet allows schools or * Give the first
explanation for your
learning institutions to provide online courses as an alternative way of learning in
TOPIC SENTENCE.
response to COVID-19.
(Explain how online
education save costs and
time)
For example, schools can offer online classes through Youtube, Zoom and Facebook, Example 1 (Ex1)
which lowers the printing costs.
Learning materials are kept online and can be downloaded easily without having to Elaboration to
print out the materials. example 1 (EEx1)

In addition, online education also alleviates the cost of textbooks as schools are Elaboration 2 (E2)
resorting to the use of e-books or electronic textbooks to provide education. With the * Give the second
explanation for your
advent of the fast-paced technological era, we can access information on a specific
TOPIC SENTENCE.
topic by simply scanning a barcode.
(Explain how online
education save costs and
time)
For instance, E-books can be accessed through scanning barcodes without physical Example 2 (Ex2)
books.
The flexibility and accessibility of online education can also cut down on Elaboration to
transportation costs. Students do not have to pay for bus tickets or car fuel as they can example 2 (EEx2)
learn from home without having to attend classes at school.
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Not only can students reduce their education costs, they can also save lots of time Elaboration 3 (E3)
through online learning. * Give the third
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.
(Explain how online
education save costs and
time)
For instance, students can save time on travelling to and from school every day, and Example 3 (Ex3)
they do not have to waste time waiting for their parents to bring them home after
school.
Students can also learn in a suitable and comfortable environment at home, which can Elaboration to
aid students’ concentration and require less time to comprehend the learning materials. example 3 (EEx3)
Students may save time on browsing and obtaining learning materials via search
engines like Google Chrome at home too, as they may have a better internet connection
at home compared to at school.

Hence, online learning is effective because it reduces costs and time. Concluding Sentence
*ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*No repetition of words (Avoid repeating the same vocabulary)
1. lower- alleviate, reduce, cut down
2. via- through

*Low Frequency Words

1. ubiquitous
2. electronic textbooks
3. fast-paced
4. search engines

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PARAGRAPH 5 (CONCLUSION)
In conclusion, the COVID-19 pandemic has changed the education sector Concluding Line(s)
dramatically. The pandemic has forced education to be offered online. *Fresh rephrasing of the
topic
In my opinion, I still strongly believe that online education is effective due to the fact Restate your stand /
that online education boosts students’ learning efficiency, improves teachers’ opinion
productivity, and can cut down on educational costs and time. &
Summarise your 3
points
Online education should be improved in order to provide a more comprehensive Hope / Suggestion
learning experience for students and teachers. Hopefully, all students can reap the
benefits of online learning to ensure that they have a wonderful learning experience
and can improve their academic performance.
NOTES:
*No repetition of words (Avoid repeating the same vocabulary)
1. due to the fact that- because
2. cut down- reduce

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Task 2
SAMPLE ESSAY 9– MUET BAND 5
You are advised to spend about 50 minutes on this task.

You have watched a debate competition on television. The following comment was made by one of the debaters:

“The rise of online education during the COVID-19 pandemic is effective.”

Write an essay expressing your opinion on the statement. Write at least 250 words.
DISCURSIVE/ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY [60 marks]

PARAGRAPH 1 (INTRODUCTION)
Coronavirus Disease 2019 (Covid-19) was named by the World Health Organization
Introduce the
(WHO) in February 2020. WHO has declared COVID-19 as a pandemic, which means that the topic
disease is affecting the entire world. Due to this contagious COVID-19, new norms are emerging
in various sectors, like the economic sector, education sector, and healthcare sector. People are
struggling in order to adapt to these new norms. In terms of education, COVID-19 has forced
education to be offered online. In my opinion, I totally agree with the statement that online Stand
education is effective. This is because online education increases both students’ and teachers’
Thesis
efficiency, as well as it is a more economical way of learning. Statement

PARAGRAPH 2 (POINT NO. 1)

First and foremost, online education is more effective because it increases students’ Topic Sentence
efficiency in learning. Most students are more digitally prepared and comfortable with online
E1
learning. This is because students have digital proficiencies far surpassing their teachers and
parents. This enables students to get acquainted with online learning easily. Digital learning is an
alternative method of learning that enables students to learn digitally and aids students’
engagement. Digital learning includes the combination of recorded video and live streamin classes.
For example, students can preview and self-study recorded videos and online materials prepared Ex1
by teachers through a mobile phone application like WhatsApp. By doing so, students can join the
EEx1
live streaming classes by being better prepared with questions regarding the online materials
prepared by teachers. Next, the real-time interaction offered by live streaming platforms allows E2
online interactions between teachers and students. For instance, during online classes through Ex2
Zoom, students are encouraged to participate, ask questions, engage and share their opinions with EEx2
classmates more comfortably. Students are actively involved in online learning rather than just

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absorbing the information given to them. This gives students the impetus to learn actively. As
students are more engaged in the online lessons, this can also enable students to have better E3
retention of information. This is because students can see visuals and graphics provided by teachers
through live streaming classes. To illustrate, when students learn through Google Meet, the audio-
Ex3
visual aids used by teachers like Powerpoint slides and videos benefit students as they can better
EEx3
understand the lessons. This enables students to retain more information after classes as they are
more engaged in online classes. Therefore, the shift from physical classrooms to online classes Concluding
due to COVID-19 benefits students, as online education enhances students’ efficiency. Sentence

PARAGRAPH 3 (POINT NO. 2)

Furthermore, the growing popularity of online education after COVID-19 can benefit Topic Sentence
teachers because it can increase teachers’ efficiency in providing their education. Most teachers E1
have embraced new challenges in implementing online learning because they lack digital literacy
skills. Teachers have to adapt quickly by using digital devices like laptop computers to prepare for
online classes. Online teaching can increase teachers’ efficiency and productivity. For example,
Ex1
teachers are able to plan their lessons ahead by scheduling online tasks like marking assignments,
EEx1
teaching and recording lectures. Teachers can do an online search to get endless materials and a
voluminous amount of information that can be used in lessons. Besides, the use of digital education E2
tools can save teachers’ time in preparing online lessons. For instance, Projeqt allows teachers to Ex2
create multimedia presentations with dynamic slides in which they can embed links, online
quizzes, and videos. Kahoot, Quizizz and Blooket are educational platforms that are based on
questions and games. Teachers can prepare online teaching materials by using slides, videos, EEx2
graphics, quizzes and questions through these educational tools to make their lessons more
effective. Moreover, teachers can conduct live streaming classes to live stream their lessons E3
through Youtube Live, Facebook Live, etc. As live streaming classes enable student-centred
learning, teachers are able to reach out to different students. There are comprehensive capabilities
with online education platforms that allow online interactions between teachers and students. To
illustrate, through the Zoom application, teachers can schedule class sessions, share their screen Ex3
and high-quality videos, as well as answer students’ questions faster and more effectively. Zoom
EEx3
meetings allow teachers to conduct online classes and record them to be accessed later by students.
This aids teachers’ effectiveness in delivering lectures. Not only that, the use of Google Classroom
E4
also makes it easy for teachers to create classes, distribute assignments and communicate with
Ex4
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students. Teachers can quickly see who hasn’t completed the work and provide direct or real-time
EEx4
feedback and grades right in Google Classroom. This enables teachers to assess students’
understanding of certain topics easily by gathering data on students’ scores. Thus, there is no doubt Concluding
Sentence
that teachers’ efficiency can be increased and they can provide quality education through e-
learning methods.

PARAGRAPH 4 (POINT NO. 3)

Last but not least, online education is a more economical way of learning because it Topic Sentence
saves educational costs and time. It is an undeniable fact that the implementation of distance
E1
education or remote learning can lower the cost of education. The ubiquitous internet allows
schools or learning institutions to provide online courses as an alternative way of learning in
response to COVID-19. For example, schools can offer online classes through Youtube, Zoom and Ex1
Facebook, which lowers the printing costs. Learning materials are kept online and can be EEx1
downloaded easily without having to print out the materials. In addition, online education also E2
alleviates the cost of textbooks as schools are resorting to the use of e-books or electronic textbooks
to provide education. With the advent of the fast-paced technological era, we can access
information on a specific topic by simply scanning a barcode. For instance, E-books can be Ex2
accessed through scanning barcodes without physical books. The flexibility and accessibility of EEx2
online education can also cut down on transportation costs. Students do not have to pay for bus
tickets or car fuel as they can learn from home without having to attend classes at school. Not only
can students reduce their education costs, they can also save lots of time through online learning. E3
For instance, students can save time on travelling to and from school every day, and they do not Ex3
have to waste time waiting for their parents to bring them home after school. Students can also
EEx3
learn in a suitable and comfortable environment at home, which can aid students’ concentration
and require less time to comprehend the learning materials. Students may save time on browsing
and obtaining learning materials via search engines like Google Chrome at home too, as they may
have a better internet connection at home compared to at school. Hence, online learning is effective Concluding
because it cut down on costs and time. Sentence

PARAGRAPH 5 (CONCLUSION)

In conclusion, the COVID-19 pandemic has changed the education sector dramatically. Concluding
The pandemic has forced education to be offered online. In my opinion, I still strongly believe that Line(s)
online education is effective due to the fact that online education boosts students’ learning Restate
Stand/Opinion
efficiency, improves teachers’ productivity, and can cut down on educational costs and time. & Summarise 3
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Online education should be improved in order to provide a more comprehensive learning Hope/Suggestio
experience for students and teachers. Hopefully, all students can reap the benefits of online n

learning to ensure that they have a wonderful learning experience and can improve their academic
performance.

Teacher’s Comments

Task Fulfilment (TF) -good response to the task

-develop ideas reasonably well
-info- well-linked
Language & Organisation (L) -meaning comes across very clearly
-able to LINK ideas effectively
-shows reasonable evidence of planning
-appropriate and varied vocabulary
-use a variety of cohesive devices
-display reasonably confident control of language
*demonstrate the use of Low Frequency Words (LFW)

MUET Band 5

CEFR Level C1

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Important Notes!!!
Low Frequency Words (LFW)
A. LFW is a MUST for C1 as it differentiates C candidates from other candidates.
B. Minimum 3 @ 4 LFW for higher language scores
C. List of LFW in this essay:
1. emerging
2. digital proficiencies
3. acquainted
4. live streaming
5. impetus
6. retention of information
7. voluminous amount
8. comprehensive abilities
9. ubiquitous
10. electronic textbooks
11. fast-paced
12. search engines

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Task 2
SAMPLE ESSAY 10– MUET BAND 5
You are advised to spend about 50 minutes on this task.

You attended a talk by a non-governmental organization, which was organized by Bintulu Development Authority
(BDA). The following statement was made by the guest speaker:

“The elderly should live in nursing homes.”

Do you agree with the statement? Write an essay of at least 250 words.
ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY [60 marks]

PLAN OF DEVELOPMENT

PARAGRAPH 1 (INTRODUCTION)
The word “elderly” refers to people who are 65 years of age or older. Those Introduce the topic
aged 65 to 74 are referred to as "early elderly" and those over 75 years old as "late *Refer to the question
and choose ANY WORD
elderly". Caring for the elderly has become a challenge for many families in this
to start your essay.
modern society as the number of children in a family is decreasing. Some children
tend to place their ageing parents in nursing homes as they are busy with their jobs or
due to materialism. The question is, should the elderly live in nursing homes?
I agree with the statement given that the elderly should be sent to nursing homes. Stand (Compulsory)
*Write your stand in
ONE SENTENCE.

This is because nursing homes have round-the-clock care24小时护理, a suitable Thesis statement
environment, and the elderly can have interaction with others of the same *LAST SENTENCE of
paragraph 1. Write 3
generation.
POINTS in the thesis
statement in ONE
SENTENCE.

PARAGRAPH 2 (POINT NO. 1)

First of all, the elderly should live in nursing homes as nursing homes have Topic Sentence (T)
round-the-clock care and services. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.

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Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 1 should be
written there.
At nursing homes, the elderly can receive better care because a number of services are Elaboration 1 (E1)
available. These services include help with daily tasks, food service, and * Give the first
explanation for your
housekeeping.
TOPIC SENTENCE.
(Explain how nursing
homes provide round-
the-clock care)
For example, nursing home staff can help with daily tasks like bathing, dressing, Example 1 (Ex1)
eating, and drinking.
Daily tasks can become much more difficult as we age. Many seniors need extra care Elaboration to
to live well. example 1 (EEx1)

Catering services are also available. Elaboration 2 (E2)

* Give the second
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.
(Explain how nursing
homes provide round-
the-clock care)
For instance, nursing homes provide meals and snacks throughout the day. Nursing Example 2 (Ex2)
homes can cater to different tastes and dietary supplements are requested.
Some nursing homes have a dietician or nutritionist that can consult with the elderly Elaboration to
to make sure that they are getting the nutrients they need. example 2 (EEx2)

Besides, healthcare services are also available in nursing homes. There are skilled Elaboration 3 (E3)
workers specialising in care of the elderly who are able to deal with medical * Give the third
explanation for your
emergencies better.
TOPIC SENTENCE.
(Explain how nursing
homes provide round-
the-clock care)

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To illustrate, if the elderly people have a serious health condition like chronic kidney Example 3 (Ex3)
disease, arthritis, heart failure or diabetes, trained staff or doctors can provide instant
medical care to the elderly.
The services and care offered by nursing homes can ensure the health of residents so Elaboration to
that they can live healthily. example 3 (EEx3)

Therefore, round-the-clock care and services are available in nursing homes, which Concluding Sentence
enables the elderly to receive better care. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*No repetition of words (Avoid repeating the same vocabulary)
1. catering- food
2. deal with- handle

*Low Frequency Words

1. round-the-clock care
2. dietician or nutritionist

PARAGRAPH 3 (POINT NO. 2)

Furthermore, nursing homes have a suitable environment for the elderly. Topic Sentence (T)
*SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 2 should be
written there.
The environment is specially designed for the aged. When living in a nursing home, Elaboration 1 (E1)
the elderly are protected from harm that could come their way. * Give the first
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.

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(Explain suitable
environment in nursing
homes)
For example, some senior citizens may suffer from serious diseases like Alzheimer's Example 1 (Ex1)
or dementia. If they are living in their home, they may forget to lock their door, and
they would not be safe in their home.
Nursing homes have a great level of security, and a safe environment is of the utmost Elaboration to
importance for the elderly. example 1 (EEx1)

Apart from that, some nursing homes may have access to the outdoors and natural Elaboration 2 (E2)
surroundings, which help in promoting well-being, reducing stress, improving * Give the second
explanation for your
cognitive functions, and activating good memories.
TOPIC SENTENCE.
(Explain suitable
environment in nursing
homes)
For instance, nature and gardens in nursing homes provide a symbolic environment Example 2 (Ex2)
that can help to activate memories of the elderly.
A clean and healthy environment is especially vital for the health of the elderly. The Elaboration to
elderly's health is enhanced because the nursing home's natural environment protects example 2 (EEx2)
them from pollution, and they are less susceptible to diseases caused by gaseous and
particulate pollutants.

Moreover, the various indoor and outdoor facilities prepared in nursing homes are Elaboration 3 (E3)
disabled-friendly and suitable for those with physical disabilities. * Give the third
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.
(Explain suitable
environment in nursing
homes)
To illustrate, ramps, washrooms, and non-slip surfaces, wheelchair-accessible Example 3 (Ex3)
accommodations, such as a lift to the floor where the room is located are prepared in
nursing homes.

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This helps wheelchair users move around the nursing home. Elaboration to
example 3 (EEx3)

Thus, nursing homes have suitable surroundings, which are crucial for the elderly's Concluding Sentence
safety and health. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*No repetition of words (Avoid repeating the same vocabulary)
1. suitable- proper
2. environment- surroundings
3. crucial- important, vital, essential
4. enhance- improve, boost

*Low Frequency Words

1. improving cognitive functions
2. activating good memories
3. susceptible to
4. gaseous and particulate pollutants
5. disabled-friendly

*Change word forms

1. the elderly with disabilities- the disabled elderly

PARAGRAPH 4 (POINT NO. 3)

Last but not least, the elderly should live in nursing homes because they can Topic Sentence (T)
interact with other people of their generation. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 3 should be
written there.

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There are other senior citizens who live in the same nursing homes. This provides an Elaboration 1 (E1)
opportunity for the elderly to meet new people and broaden their social circle. * Give the first
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.
(Explain how elderly
interact with others of
their generation in
nursing homes)
For example, the elderly can have meals together and enjoy companionship when they Example 1 (Ex1)
eat.
They get to mingle with each other by sharing their stories and experiences. This can Elaboration to
give them a sense of community and also a sense of belonging. example 1 (EEx1)

Next, nursing homes offer a wide variety of creative, engaging, and fun activities for Elaboration 2 (E2)
residents. These activities include cooking therapy, art therapy, gardening, musical * Give the second
explanation for your
activities, robotic pets, and workouts.
TOPIC SENTENCE.
(Explain how elderly
interact with others of
their generation in
nursing homes)
For instance, culinary therapy is a therapeutic technique that can improve the elderly's Example 2 (Ex2)
mental health. When the elderly prepare food together, it strengthens their
bond. During the musical activities, the residents get to play instruments or sing their
hearts out. Residents can participate in musical programmes and perform their music
together, which can be satisfying.
Senior citizens can interact with each other and strengthen their relationships by taking Elaboration to
part in activities organised by nursing homes. This can also help them to break up the example 2 (EEx2)
monotony of life, and they will feel less lonely than if they were living alone in their
own home.

Hence, by living in nursing homes, the elderly can interact with others of their Concluding Sentence
generation, which provides them with mutual emotional support. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.

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NOTES:
*No repetition of words (Avoid repeating the same vocabulary)
1. interact with- mingle with
2. a wide variety of- various

*Low Frequency Words

1. companionship
2. therapeutic
3. monotony of life

PARAGRAPH 5 (CONCLUSION)
In conclusion, today, nursing homes are well equipped with facilities and Concluding Line(s)
services that make life there comfortable and enjoyable. *Fresh rephrasing of the
topic
I still strongly believe that the elderly should live in nursing homes due to the fact that Restate your stand /
nursing homes offer 24/7 care, a beneficial environment, and the elderly can have opinion
interaction with others of their generation. &
Summarise your 3
points
The elderly should consider living in nursing homes instead of staying in their homes, Hope / Suggestion
as they may receive inadequate care from their busy children. The government should
also implement suitable policies and regulations that require each nursing home to
conduct care plans that meet the needs of residents. This enables the elderly to enjoy
their old age.
NOTES:
*No repetition of words (Avoid repeating the same vocabulary)
1. due to the fact that- because
2. offer- provide

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Task 2
SAMPLE ESSAY 10– MUET BAND 5
You are advised to spend about 50 minutes on this task.

You attended a talk by a non-governmental organization, which was organized by Bintulu Development Authority
(BDA). The following statement was made by the guest speaker:

“The elderly should live in nursing homes.”

Do you agree with the statement? Write an essay of at least 250 words.
ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY [60 marks]

PARAGRAPH 1 (INTRODUCTION)
The word “elderly” refers to people who are 65 years of age or older. Those aged 65 to 74
Introduce the
are referred to as "early elderly" and those over 75 years old as "late elderly". Caring for the elderly topic
has become a challenge for many families in this modern society as the number of children in a
family is decreasing. Some children tend to place their ageing parents in nursing homes as they
are busy with their jobs or due to materialism. The question is, should the elderly live in nursing Stand
homes? I agree with the statement given that the elderly should be sent to nursing homes. This is Thesis
because nursing homes have round-the-clock care, a suitable environment, and the elderly can Statement
have interaction with others of the same generation.

PARAGRAPH 2 (POINT NO. 1)

First of all, the elderly should live in nursing homes as nursing homes have round-the- Topic Sentence

clock care and services. At nursing homes, the elderly can receive better care because a number E1
of services are available. These services include help with daily tasks, food service, and
housekeeping. For example, nursing home staff can help with daily tasks like bathing, dressing, Ex1
eating, and drinking. Daily tasks can become much more difficult as we age. Many seniors need EEx1
extra care to live well. Catering services are also available. For instance, nursing homes provide E2
meals and snacks throughout the day. Nursing homes can cater to different tastes and dietary Ex2
supplements are requested. Some nursing homes have a dietician or nutritionist that can consult EEx2
with the elderly to make sure that they are getting the nutrients they need. Besides, healthcare E3
services are also available in nursing homes. There are skilled workers specialising in care of the
elderly who are able to deal with medical emergencies better. To illustrate, if the elderly people Ex3
have a serious health condition like chronic kidney disease, arthritis, heart failure or diabetes,
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trained staff or doctors can provide instant medical care to the elderly. The services and care EEx3
offered by nursing homes can ensure the health of residents so that they can live healthily.
Therefore, round-the-clock care and services are available in nursing homes, which enables the
Concluding
elderly to receive better care. Sentence

PARAGRAPH 3 (POINT NO. 2)

Furthermore, nursing homes have a suitable environment for the elderly. The Topic Sentence
environment is specially designed for the aged. When living in a nursing home, the elderly are E1
protected from harm that could come their way. For example, some senior citizens may suffer from Ex1
serious diseases like Alzheimer's or dementia. If they are living in their home, they may forget to
EEx1
lock their door, and they would not be safe in their home. Nursing homes have a great level of
security, and a safe environment is of the utmost importance for the elderly. Apart from that, some E2
nursing homes may have access to the outdoors and natural surroundings, which help in promoting
well-being, reducing stress, improving cognitive functions, and activating good memories. For Ex2
instance, nature and gardens in nursing homes provide a symbolic environment that can help to EEx2
activate memories of the elderly. A clean and healthy environment is especially vital for the health
of the elderly. The elderly's health is enhanced because the nursing home's natural environment
protects them from pollution, and they are less susceptible to diseases caused by gaseous and
particulate pollutants. Moreover, the various indoor and outdoor facilities prepared in nursing E3
homes are disabled-friendly and suitable for those with physical disabilities. To illustrate, ramps,
Ex3
washrooms, and non-slip surfaces, wheelchair-accessible accommodations, such as a lift to the
floor where the room is located are prepared in nursing homes. This helps wheelchair users move EEx3
around the nursing home. Thus, nursing homes have suitable surroundings, which are crucial for
Concluding
the elderly's safety and health. Sentence

PARAGRAPH 4 (POINT NO. 3)

Last but not least, the elderly should live in nursing homes because they can interact with Topic Sentence
other people of their generation. There are other senior citizens who live in the same nursing
E1
homes. This provides an opportunity for the elderly to meet new people and broaden their social
circle. For example, the elderly can have meals together and enjoy companionship when they eat. Ex1
They get to mingle with each other by sharing their stories and experiences. This can give them a EEx1
sense of community and also a sense of belonging. Next, nursing homes offer a wide variety of E2
creative, engaging, and fun activities for residents. These activities include cooking therapy, art
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therapy, gardening, musical activities, robotic pets, and workouts. For instance, culinary therapy
Ex2
is a therapeutic technique that can improve the elderly's mental health. When the elderly prepare
food together, it strengthens their bond. During the musical activities, the residents get to play
EEx2
instruments or sing their hearts out. Residents can participate in musical programmes and perform
their music together, which can be satisfying. Senior citizens can interact with each other and
strengthen their relationships by taking part in activities organised by nursing homes. This can also
help them to break up the monotony of life, and they will feel less lonely than if they were living
alone in their own home. Hence, by living in nursing homes, the elderly can interact with others Concluding
of their generation, which provides them with mutual emotional support. Sentence

PARAGRAPH 5 (CONCLUSION)
Concluding
In conclusion, today, nursing homes are well equipped with facilities and services that
Line(s)
make life there comfortable and enjoyable. I still strongly believe that the elderly should live in
Restate
nursing homes due to the fact that nursing homes offer 24/7 care, a beneficial environment, and Stand/Opinion
the elderly can have interaction with others of their generation. The elderly should consider & Summarise 3
Points
living in nursing homes instead of staying in their homes, as they may receive inadequate care
Hope/Suggestio
from their busy children. The government should also implement suitable policies and regulations n
that require each nursing home to conduct care plans that meet the needs of residents. This enables
the elderly to enjoy their old age.

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Teacher’s Comments

Task Fulfilment (TF) -good response to the task

-develop ideas reasonably well
-info- well-linked
Language & Organisation (L) -meaning comes across very clearly
-able to LINK ideas effectively
-shows reasonable evidence of planning
-appropriate and varied vocabulary
-display reasonably confident control of language
*demonstrate the use of Low Frequency Words (LFW)
MUET Band 5

CEFR Level C1

Important Notes!!!

Low Frequency Words (LFW)

A. LFW is a MUST for C1 as it differentiates C candidates from other candidates.

B. Minimum 3 @ 4 LFW for higher language scores

C. List of LFW in this essay:

1. round-the-clock care
2. dietician or nutritionist
3. improving cognitive functions
4. activating good memories
5. susceptible to
6. gaseous and particulate pollutants
7. disabled-friendly
8. companionship
9. therapeutic
10. monotony of life

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Task 2
SAMPLE ESSAY 11– MUET BAND 5
You are advised to spend about 50 minutes on this task.

You attended a talk by a non-governmental agency, which was organised by the local town council. The following
comment was made by the speaker:

“Public health is becoming a serious problem in our nation.”

Write an essay suggesting ways to improve public health. Write at least 250 words.
PROBLEM-SOLUTION ESSAY
[60 marks]

PLAN OF DEVELOPMENT

PARAGRAPH 1 (INTRODUCTION)
Health is very important to ensure a normal and happy life. As the saying goes, Introduce the topic
"health is better than wealth". Although we may have a lot of wealth, however, we *Refer to the question

will not be able to enjoy our wealth without a healthy body. Recently, people are more and choose ANY WORD
to start your essay.
aware of the topics related to public health.
In my opinion, I agree that public health is becoming a serious problem in our nation. Stand
The increasing number of people suffering from obesity and diabetes has become a *Write your stand in
ONE SENTENCE.
major concern in developing countries like Malaysia. Obesity and being overweight
(You will NOT BE
lead to other health problems, including coronary disease, diabetes, cancer, or even
PENALISED if you
mental illness. write- I agree / disagree
with the statement)
The ways to improve public health are through the role of education and the media Thesis statement
to raise public awareness as well as the role of the government to strengthen laws *LAST SENTENCE of
paragraph 1. Write 3
and regulations to improve public health.
POINTS in the thesis
statement in ONE
SENTENCE.

PARAGRAPH 2 (POINT NO. 1)

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First and foremost, educational institutions play a vital role in educating the Topic Sentence (T)
public about ways to improve public health. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 1 should be
written there.
Physical education in schools that focuses on developing physical fitness among Elaboration 1 (E1)
students can benefit students. Juvenile diabetes and other obesity-related illnesses are * Give the first
explanation for your
becoming increasingly common among children and teenagers. Through physical
TOPIC SENTENCE.
education, teachers can impart knowledge to students about ways to keep fit and
healthy.
For example, during physical classes, students can engage in various physical Example 1 (Ex1)
activities like playing badminton and football.
This will help students burn deposited fat from their bodies and release the Elaboration to
accumulated stress due to study. example 1 (EEx1)

Next, health awareness campaign can be launched in schools and universities Elaboration 2 (E2)
nationwide that involves students, teachers, and parents. Many activities can be carried * Give the second
explanation for your
out during the campaign.
TOPIC SENTENCE.

For instance, health educational materials or brochures can be distributed so that Example 2 (Ex2)
parents or students can gain health knowledge by reading those materials.
By doing so, health awareness among students and parents can be increased. Elaboration to
example 2 (EEx2)

Moreover, educational institutions can also launch several meetings that involve Elaboration 3 (E3)
teachers and parents to introduce the concept of a healthy lifestyle. During these * Give the second
explanation for your
meetings, teachers and parents will be exposed to the importance and ways of living a
TOPIC SENTENCE.
healthy life.

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To illustrate, parents and teachers can broaden their spectrum of knowledge of Example 3 (Ex3)
unhealthy foods to avoid, such as junk food and fast food, as these foods frequently
lead to a variety of health problems.
As a result, teachers and parents will be able to inculcate health awareness among their Elaboration to
students. This will eventually improve public health. example 3 (EEx3)

Therefore, educational institutions play an important role in improving public health. Concluding Sentence
*ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*Low Frequency Words
1. juvenile diabetes
2. obesity-related illnesses
3. deposited fat
4. accumulated stress
5. spectrum of knowledge
6. inculcate

PARAGRAPH 3 (POINT NO. 2)

Furthermore, the media plays an important role in raising public awareness Topic Sentence (T)
about public health. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 2 should be
written there.
The advent of the digital era and the ubiquitous internet enable the media to spread Elaboration 1 (E1)
information easily. People can use digital devices like mobile phones to assess various * Give the first
explanation for your
types of information through digital media, such as online newspapers. The media
TOPIC SENTENCE.
should be more concerned about public health by spreading information about health
as the media has become a main channel of information for people. The media has a

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big influence on shaping people’s positive attitude towards public health. The media
can broadcast suitable programmes about health in order to raise public awareness.
For example, media should launch health promotion campaigns through television, Example 1 (Ex1)
newspapers, and radio.
A health promotion campaign should cover a variety of topics, such as a balanced diet Elaboration to
and exercise. example 1 (EEx1)

Besides, articles on health should be published in newspapers or health magazines so Elaboration 2 (E2)
that readers can gain knowledge about health. * Give the second
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.

For instance, through newspapers, people can read articles on the importance of having Example 2 (Ex2)
adequate sleep.
This will raise people’s awareness of the consequences of sleep deprivation, which Elaboration to
causes them to be more prone to cardiovascular disease. Newspaper articles on the example 2 (EEx2)
effects of sedentary lifestyles can also raise public awareness so that people will realise
that physical inactivity is a silent killer.

Additionally, television can be an effective channel to spread information on health. Elaboration 3 (E3)
* Give the third
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.

To illustrate, since people like to watch TV shows, health and lifestyle TV shows can Example 3 (Ex3)
raise public awareness about ways to live a healthy life.
People will be more likely to adopt a healthy lifestyle, such as reducing their intake of Elaboration to
fast food, as they gain knowledge through watching related TV shows. example 3 (EEx3)

Thus, the media has a great influence in raising public awareness in terms of public Concluding Sentence
health. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.

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NOTES:
*Low Frequency Words
1. ubiquitous
2. sleep deprivation
3. prone to
4. cardiovascular disease
5. sedentary lifestyles

PARAGRAPH 4 (POINT NO. 3)

Last but not least, the government should strengthen laws and regulations to Topic Sentence (T)
improve public health. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 3 should be
written there.
The government should implement stringent rules and regulations on the fast food Elaboration 1 (E1)
industry by imposing taxes on ultra-processed food and soft drinks to reduce the * Give the first
explanation for your
consumption of fast food, as it is considered to be the main cause of obesity. The
TOPIC SENTENCE.
government should also implement regulations related to alcohol and tobacco.

For example, the government can impose extra taxes on alcohol and tobacco products Example 1 (Ex1)
to increase their prices so that people will be less able to buy those products.
This is because overconsumption of alcohol and tobacco products can lead to serious Elaboration to
public health issues like cancer. example 1 (EEx1)

In addition, as environmental pollution is affecting public health, the government Elaboration 2 (E2)
should strengthen environmental laws to reduce pollution. * Give the second
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.

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For instance, forestry laws can slow down the deforestation process and reduce Example 2 (Ex2)
emissions of carbon dioxide. Carbon taxes should be implemented to reduce carbon
footprint and the emission of greenhouse gases.
This is because mass emissions of greenhouse gases like carbon dioxide have Elaboration to
exacerbated global warming and climate change, which are detrimental to public example 2 (EEx2)
health. The government should also strengthen regulations on proper disposal of waste
to reduce the irresponsible act of discharging waste into the river and prevent water
contamination. By strengthening environmental laws, pollution can be reduced and
this can ensure public health. If proper actions are not taken to reduce pollution, people
may be susceptible to diseases and illnesses like heart disease and lung cancer.

Hence, the government needs to strengthen laws and regulations to enhance public Concluding Sentence
health. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*Low Frequency Words
1. stringent rules
2. ultra-processed food
3. overconsumption
4. deforestation
5. emissions
6. exacerbated
7. detrimental

PARAGRAPH 5 (CONCLUSION)
To conclude, various measures can be implemented to improve public health. Concluding Line(s)
*Fresh rephrasing of the
topic

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I strongly agree that public health is becoming a serious issue in our country. Restate your stand /
Educational institutions, the media, and the government play significant roles in opinion
improving public health. &
Summarise your 3
points
Public health should be improved to reduce mortality and morbidity. This will ensure Hope / Suggestion
the sustainable development and prosperity of a nation.
NOTES:
*Low Frequency Words
1. mortality
2. morbidity

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Task 2
SAMPLE ESSAY 11– MUET BAND 5
You are advised to spend about 50 minutes on this task.

You attended a talk by a non-governmental agency, which was organised by the local town council. The following
comment was made by the speaker:

“Public health is becoming a serious problem in our nation.”

Write an essay suggesting ways to improve public health. Write at least 250 words.
PROBLEM-SOLUTION ESSAY
[60 marks]

PARAGRAPH 1 (INTRODUCTION)
Health is very important to ensure a normal and happy life. As the saying goes, "health is
Introduce the
better than wealth". Although we may have a lot of wealth, however, we will not be able to enjoy topic
our wealth without a healthy body. Recently, people are more aware of the topics related to public
health. In my opinion, I agree that public health is becoming a serious problem in our nation. The
Stand
increasing number of people suffering from obesity and diabetes has become a major concern in
developing countries like Malaysia. Obesity and being overweight lead to other health problems,
including coronary disease, diabetes, cancer, or even mental illness. The ways to improve public
health are through the role of education and the media to raise public awareness as well as the Thesis
role of the government to strengthen laws and regulations to improve public health. Statement

PARAGRAPH 2 (POINT NO. 1)

First and foremost, educational institutions play a vital role in educating the public about Topic Sentence
ways to improve public health. Physical education in schools that focuses on developing physical
E1
fitness among students can benefit students. Juvenile diabetes and other obesity-related illnesses
are becoming increasingly common among children and teenagers. Through physical education,
teachers can impart knowledge to students about ways to keep fit and healthy. For example, during Ex1
physical classes, students can engage in various physical activities like playing badminton and
football. This will help students burn deposited fat from their bodies and release the accumulated EEx1
stress due to study. Next, health awareness campaign can be launched in schools and universities
E2
nationwide that involves students, teachers, and parents. Many activities can be carried out during
the campaign. For instance, health educational materials or brochures can be distributed so that Ex2
parents or students can gain health knowledge by reading those materials. By doing so, health EEx2
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awareness among students and parents can be increased. Moreover, educational institutions can
E3
also launch several meetings that involve teachers and parents to introduce the concept of a healthy
lifestyle. During these meetings, teachers and parents will be exposed to the importance and ways
of living a healthy life. To illustrate, parents and teachers can broaden their spectrum of knowledge
Ex3
of unhealthy foods to avoid, such as junk food and fast food, as these foods frequently lead to a
variety of health problems. As a result, teachers and parents will be able to inculcate health EEx3

awareness among their students. This will eventually improve public health. Therefore,
Concluding
educational institutions play an important role in improving public health. Sentence

PARAGRAPH 3 (POINT NO. 2)

Furthermore, the media plays an important role in raising public awareness about public Topic Sentence
health. The advent of the digital era and the ubiquitous internet enable the media to spread
E1
information easily. People can use digital devices like mobile phones to assess various types of
information through digital media, such as online newspapers. The media should be more
concerned about public health by spreading information about health as the media has become a
main channel of information for people. The media has a big influence on shaping people’s positive
attitude towards public health. The media can broadcast suitable programmes about health in order
to raise public awareness. For example, media should launch health promotion campaigns through Ex1
television, newspapers, and radio. A health promotion campaign should cover a variety of topics, EEx1
such as a balanced diet and exercise. Besides, articles on health should be published in newspapers E2
or health magazines so that readers can gain knowledge about health. For instance, through
newspapers, people can read articles on the importance of having adequate sleep. This will raise Ex2

people’s awareness of the consequences of sleep deprivation, which causes them to be more prone EEx2
to cardiovascular disease. Newspaper articles on the effects of sedentary lifestyles can also raise
public awareness so that people will realise that physical inactivity is a silent killer. Additionally,
E3
television can be an effective channel to spread information on health. To illustrate, since people
Ex3
like to watch TV shows, health and lifestyle TV shows can raise public awareness about ways to
live a healthy life. People will be more likely to adopt a healthy lifestyle, such as reducing their EEx3
intake of fast food, as they gain knowledge through watching related TV shows. Thus, the media
Concluding
has a great influence in raising public awareness in terms of public health. Sentence

PARAGRAPH 4 (POINT NO. 3)

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Last but not least, the government should strengthen laws and regulations to improve
Topic Sentence
public health. The government should implement stringent rules and regulations on the fast-food
industry by imposing taxes on ultra-processed food and soft drinks to reduce the consumption of E1
fast food, as it is considered to be the main cause of obesity. The government should also
implement regulations related to alcohol and tobacco. For example, the government can impose
extra taxes on alcohol and tobacco products to increase their prices so that people will be less able Ex1
to buy those products. This is because overconsumption of alcohol and tobacco products can lead EEx1
to serious public health issues like cancer. In addition, as environmental pollution is affecting E2
public health, the government should strengthen environmental laws to reduce pollution. For
instance, forestry laws can slow down the deforestation process and reduce emissions of carbon Ex2

dioxide. Carbon taxes should be implemented to reduce carbon footprint and the emission of
greenhouse gases. This is because mass emissions of greenhouse gases like carbon dioxide have
exacerbated global warming and climate change, which are detrimental to public health. The
government should also strengthen regulations on proper disposal of waste to reduce the
irresponsible act of discharging waste into the river and prevent water contamination. By
EEx2
strengthening environmental laws, pollution can be reduced and this can ensure public health. If
proper actions are not taken to reduce pollution, people may be susceptible to diseases and illnesses
like heart disease and lung cancer. Hence, the government needs to strengthen laws and regulations Concluding
to enhance public health. Sentence

PARAGRAPH 5 (CONCLUSION)
Concluding
To conclude, various measures can be implemented to improve public health. I strongly Line(s)
agree that public health is becoming a serious issue in our country. Educational institutions, the Restate
Stand/Opinion
media, and the government play significant roles in improving public health. Public health should
& Summarise 3
be improved to reduce mortality and morbidity. This will ensure the sustainable development and Points
prosperity of a nation. Hope/Suggestio
n

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Teacher’s Comments

Task Fulfilment (TF) -good response to the task

-develop ideas reasonably well
-info- well-linked
Language & Organisation (L) -paragraphs have unity
-able to LINK ideas effectively
-shows reasonable evidence of planning
-appropriate and varied vocabulary
-display reasonably confident control of language
*demonstrate the use of Low Frequency Words (LFW)
MUET Band 5

CEFR Level C1

Important Notes!!!

Low Frequency Words (LFW)

A. LFW is a MUST for C1 as it differentiates C candidates from other candidates.

B. Minimum 3 @ 4 LFW for higher language scores

C. List of LFW in this essay:

1. juvenile diabetes 11. sedentary lifestyles

2. obesity-related illnesses 12. stringent rules
3. deposited fat 13. ultra-processed food
4. accumulated stress 14. overconsumption
5. spectrum of knowledge 15. deforestation
6. inculcate 16. emissions
7. ubiquitous 17. exacerbated
8. sleep deprivation 18. detrimental
9. prone to 19. mortality
10. cardiovascular disease 20. morbidity

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Task 2

You are advised to spend about 50 minutes on this task.

You attended a talk by a businessman, which was organised by your university. The following comment was
made by the speaker:

“Competition is necessary to achieve success.”

Write an essay expressing your opinion on the statement. Write at least 250 words.

DISCURSIVE/ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY [60 marks]

PLAN OF DEVELOPMENT

PARAGRAPH 1 (INTRODUCTION)
Competition has been the driving force behind many great achievements Introduce the topic
throughout history. Competition is all around us, whether it is in politics, sports, *Refer to the question
and choose ANY WORD
business or between classmates or siblings. Without competition, we may lose the
to start your essay.
motivation to try hard. Everyone needs competition to improve themselves and grow
stronger in life.
I agree that competition is necessary to achieve success. Stand
*Write your stand in
ONE SENTENCE.
(You will NOT BE
PENALISED if you
write- I agree / disagree
with the statement)
This is because competition encourages hard work, promotes interaction and Thesis statement
boosts the economic growth. *LAST SENTENCE of
paragraph 1. Write 3
POINTS in the thesis
statement in ONE
SENTENCE.

PARAGRAPH 2 (POINT NO. 1)

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First and foremost, competition is a driving motivator which encourages us Topic Sentence (T)
to try hard. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 1 should be
written there.
We always need motivation to develop our skills and try new things in life. Without Elaboration 1 (E1)
competition, we may not want to try new things or learn new skills in order to improve * Give the first
explanation for your
our lives. Therefore, we need competition so that we will feel the pressure to drive us
TOPIC SENTENCE.
to work hard with sheer determination and learn to be persistent.

For example, a student will have healthy competition with his classmates in subjects Example 1 (Ex1)
like Mathematics and Science.
The healthy competition in school encourages students to become more inquisitive, Elaboration to
research independently and learn to work with others to achieve better academic example 1 (EEx1)
performance.

Next, competition gives students the impetus to overcome obstacles and persevere in Elaboration 2 (E2)
pursuing education. They will set goal and plan well to achieve their target. * Give the second
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.

For instance, students may form a study group in order to discuss their knowledge and Example 2 (Ex2)
opinions so that they can get all the information at their fingertips and pass the
examinations with flying colours.
By doing so, they don’t get left behind, and by learning with others, their test scores Elaboration to
may improve by leaps and bounds. It is clear that competition stimulates example 2 (EEx2)
concentration, physical effort and learning.

Therefore, competition is necessary as it serves as a driving force motivator that Concluding Sentence
encourages us to try hard and improve ourselves. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.

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NOTES:
*Low Frequency Words
1. sheer determination
2. impetus

PARAGRAPH 3 (POINT NO. 2)

Furthermore, competition promotes interaction between each other in order Topic Sentence (T)
to achieve success in life. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 2 should be
written there.
Rivalry will encourage interaction as alliances are formed to achieve a shared goal. It Elaboration 1 (E1)
can be said that competition brings people together. This is because people need to * Give the first
explanation for your
support each other in order to reap the benefits of working together through alliance.
TOPIC SENTENCE.

For example, during sporting events like Olympic Games, sportsmen and Example 1 (Ex1)
sportswomen need to support each other in their team to raise their team spirit so that
they are encouraged to perform their best during sporting event.
Through interaction, people are able to learn new skills too. These skills involve Elaboration to
communication skills, interpersonal skills, critical thinking skills and leadership skills. example 1 (EEx1)
Without competition, people are not motivated to learn new skills.

Besides, the stiff competition in business sector promotes interaction between Elaboration 2 (E2)
business. Competition requires businessmen to establish business networking with * Give the second
explanation for your
various parties like suppliers, government, customers and retailers. The business
TOPIC SENTENCE.
networking enables businessmen to get useful information, resources and implement
new marketing strategies like digital marketing in order to success in business sector
as well as build their own business empire. Competition also contributes to interaction
between employees that work in a company.

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For instance, employees in marketing department can form a marketing team and build Example 2 (Ex2)
team spirit so that every employee can cooperate and collaborate well.
This can also promote good networking between each other that work in a company Elaboration to
to remain competitive and survive in the fierce competition. Healthy competition in example 2 (EEx2)
the workplace has been described as truly motivating employees to achieve their goals
through natural competition.

Thus, there is no doubt that competition boosts interaction between people in order to Concluding Sentence
achieve success. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*No repetition of words (Avoid repeating the same vocabulary)
1. promote- boost

*Low Frequency Words

1. rivalry
2. alliances
3. digital marketing
4. collaborate

PARAGRAPH 4 (POINT NO. 3)

Last but not least, competition is necessary to boost the economic growth. Topic Sentence (T)
*SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 3 should be
written there.
A developing nation like Malaysia needs to compete with other nations to boost the Elaboration 1 (E1)
economy. Creativity is stimulated by competition. When a nation’s citizens are * Give the first
explanation for your
capable of creating new solutions to solve the existing economic problems like
TOPIC SENTENCE.

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inflation or recession, it means that the nation’s economic achievements will outstrip
other nations. Creativity is very important in the economic sector like agriculture
sector, industrial sector and financial sector.
For example, in industrial sector, companies need to adopt innovative business Example 1 (Ex1)
strategies and develop new products if they want to stay ahead of their rivals.
Competition is fundamental to a well-functioning economy. When a business has to Elaboration to
compete for customers, it leads to lower prices, higher quality goods and services, example 1 (EEx1)
more variety, and more innovation, which benefits a country’s economic growth.

In addition, entrepreneurial spirit is what drives the economy. Elaboration 2 (E2)

* Give the second
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.

To illustrate, an entrepreneur who set up a food and beverage business need to be Example 2 (Ex2)
creative so that he can stay competitive in the business sector. He can use the
omnichannel approach that integrates different marketing and sales methods such as
through brick-and-mortar stores, marketing campaigns or mobile apps.
Competitive workforce is required in economic sector and this will provide more job Elaboration to
opportunities which can reduce unemployment rate. This will eventually result in the example 2 (EEx2)
increase in Gross Domestic Product (GDP) due to the increasing output by economic
sector.

Hence, competition is able to accelerate economic growth of a country. Concluding Sentence

*ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*No repetition of words (Avoid repeating the same vocabulary)
1. accelerate- boost

*Low Frequency Words

1. inflation

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2. recession
3. entrepreneurial
4. omnichannel
5. Gross Domestic Product (GDP)

PARAGRAPH 5 (CONCLUSION)
In conclusion, competition motivates individuals, businesses, teams and nations Concluding Line(s)
to work hard. It encourages people to form alliances in order to succeed. *Fresh rephrasing of the
topic
I still strongly believe that competition is necessary to achieve success as competition Restate your stand /
motivates people to try hard without fear, stimulates interaction and accelerate opinion
economic growth. &
Summarise your 3
points
Competition is an integral part of achieving success in various areas like education, Hope / Suggestion
business and sports. Thus, competition is a must to encourage people to work hard so
that they will not be left behind and can achieve success in life.

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Task 2

You are advised to spend about 50 minutes on this task.

You attended a talk by a businessman, which was organised by your university. The following comment was
made by the speaker:

“Competition is necessary to achieve success.”

Write an essay expressing your opinion on the statement. Write at least 250 words.

DISCURSIVE/ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY [60 marks]

PARAGRAPH 1 (INTRODUCTION)
Competition has been the driving force behind many great achievements throughout
Introduce the
history. Competition is all around us, whether it is in politics, sports, business or between topic
classmates or siblings. Without competition, we may lose the motivation to try hard. Everyone
needs competition to improve themselves and grow stronger in life. I agree that competition is Stand
necessary to achieve success. This is because competition encourages hard work, promotes Thesis
Statement
interaction and boosts the economic growth.

PARAGRAPH 2 (POINT NO. 1)

First and foremost, competition is a driving motivator which encourages us to try hard. Topic Sentence
We always need motivation to develop our skills and try new things in life. Without competition,
E1
we may not want to try new things or learn new skills in order to improve our lives. Therefore, we
need competition so that we will feel the pressure to drive us to work hard with sheer determination
and learn to be persistent. For example, a student will have healthy competition with his classmates Ex1
in subjects like Mathematics and Science. The healthy competition in school encourages students
EEx1
to become more inquisitive, research independently and learn to work with others to achieve better
academic performance. Next, competition gives students the impetus to overcome obstacles and E2
persevere in pursuing education. They will set goal and plan well to achieve their target. For
Ex2
instance, students may form a study group in order to discuss their knowledge and opinions so that
they can get all the information at their fingertips and pass the examinations with flying colours.
EEx2
By doing so, they don’t get left behind, and by learning with others, their test scores may improve
by leaps and bounds. It is clear that competition stimulates concentration, physical effort and

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learning. Therefore, competition is necessary as it serves as a driving force motivator that Concluding
encourages us to try hard and improve ourselves. Sentence

PARAGRAPH 3 (POINT NO. 2)

Furthermore, competition promotes interaction between each other in order to achieve Topic Sentence
success in life. Rivalry will encourage interaction as alliances are formed to achieve a shared goal. E1
It can be said that competition brings people together. This is because people need to support each
other in order to reap the benefits of working together through alliance. For example, during Ex1
sporting events like Olympic Games, sportsmen and sportswomen need to support each other in
their team to raise their team spirit so that they are encouraged to perform their best during sporting
event. Through interaction, people are able to learn new skills too. These skills involve EEx1
communication skills, interpersonal skills, critical thinking skills and leadership skills. Without
competition, people are not motivated to learn new skills. Besides, the stiff competition in business E2
sector promotes interaction between business. Competition requires businessmen to establish
business networking with various parties like suppliers, government, customers and retailers. The
business networking enables businessmen to get useful information, resources and implement new
marketing strategies like digital marketing in order to success in business sector as well as build
their own business empire. Competition also contributes to interaction between employees that
work in a company. For instance, employees in marketing department can form a marketing team Ex2
and build team spirit so that every employee can cooperate and collaborate well. This can also
promote good networking between each other that work in a company to remain competitive and EEx2

survive in the fierce competition. Healthy competition in the workplace has been described as truly
motivating employees to achieve their goals through natural competition. Thus, there is no doubt Concluding
that competition boosts interaction between people in order to achieve success. Sentence

PARAGRAPH 4 (POINT NO. 3)

Last but not least, competition is necessary to boost the economic growth. A developing Topic Sentence
nation like Malaysia needs to compete with other nations to boost the economy. Creativity is
E1
stimulated by competition. When a nation’s citizens are capable of creating new solutions to solve
the existing economic problems like inflation or recession, it means that the nation’s economic
achievements will outstrip other nations. Creativity is very important in the economic sector like
agriculture sector, industrial sector and financial sector. For example, in industrial sector, Ex1
companies need to adopt innovative business strategies and develop new products if they want to

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stay ahead of their rivals. Competition is fundamental to a well-functioning economy. When a
EEx1
business has to compete for customers, it leads to lower prices, higher quality goods and services,
more variety, and more innovation, which benefits a country’s economic growth. In addition, E2
entrepreneurial spirit is what drives the economy. To illustrate, an entrepreneur who set up a food
and beverage business need to be creative so that he can stay competitive in the business sector. Ex2
He can use the omnichannel approach that integrates different marketing and sales methods such
as through brick-and-mortar stores, marketing campaigns or mobile apps. Competitive workforce EEx2
is required in economic sector and this will provide more job opportunities which can reduce
unemployment rate. This will eventually result in the increase in Gross Domestic Product (GDP)
due to the increasing output by economic sector. Hence, competition is able to accelerate economic Concluding
Sentence
growth of a country.

PARAGRAPH 5 (CONCLUSION)

In conclusion, competition motivates individuals, businesses, teams and nations to work Concluding
Line(s)
hard. It encourages people to form alliances in order to succeed. I still strongly believe that
competition is necessary to achieve success as competition motivates people to try hard without Restate
Stand/Opinion
fear, stimulates interaction and accelerate economic growth. Competition is an integral part of & Summarise 3
achieving success in various areas like education, business and sports. Thus, competition is a must Points
to encourage people to work hard so that they will not be left behind and can achieve success in Hope/Suggestio
n
life.

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Teacher’s Comments

Task Fulfilment (TF) -good response to the task

-develop ideas reasonably well
-info- well-linked
Language & Organisation (L) -meaning comes across very clearly
-able to LINK ideas effectively
-shows reasonable evidence of planning
-use a variety of cohesive devices
-display reasonably confident control of language
*demonstrate the use of Low Frequency Words (LFW)
MUET Band 5

CEFR Level C1

Important Notes!!!

Low Frequency Words (LFW)

A. LFW is a MUST for C1 as it differentiates C candidates from other candidates.
B. Minimum 3 @ 4 LFW for higher language scores
C. List of LFW in this essay:
1. sheer determination
2. impetus
3. rivalry
4. alliances
5. digital marketing
6. collaborate
7. inflation
8. recession
9. entrepreneurial
10. omnichannel
11. Gross Domestic Product (GDP)

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Task 2

You are advised to spend about 50 minutes on this task.

You attended a talk by an invited speaker, which was organised by Sports and Entertainment Club of your
university. The following comment was made by the guest speaker:

“Due to advancements in electronic technology, traditional entertainment is rarely seen nowadays.”

Write an essay expressing your opinion on the statement. Write at least 250 words.

DISCURSIVE ESSAY [60 marks]

PLAN OF DEVELOPMENT

PARAGRAPH 1 (INTRODUCTION)
Entertainment is a form of activity that provides amusement or enjoyment for Introduce the topic
people. There are many forms of entertainment that can be divided into two groups, *Refer to the question
and choose ANY WORD
namely traditional entertainment and modern entertainment. Malaysia as a multiracial
to start your essay.
and multicultural country has various traditional entertainment that showcase
Malaysia’s rich culture. Technology has influenced entertainment, where people are
more inclined to online entertainment.
In my opinion, I agree that due to advancements in electronic technology, traditional Stand
entertainment is rarely seen nowadays. *Write your stand in
ONE SENTENCE.
(You will NOT BE
PENALISED if you
write- I agree / disagree
with the statement)
This is because more options for modern entertainment, user-friendly technology Thesis statement
and the ubiquity of the Internet have made traditional entertainment less sought *LAST SENTENCE of
paragraph 1. Write 3
after.
POINTS in the thesis
statement in ONE
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*Low Frequency Words
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1. ubiquity

PARAGRAPH 2 (POINT NO. 1)

First and foremost, due to advancements in electronic technology, people have Topic Sentence (T)
more modern entertainment options. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 1 should be
written there.
Modern entertainment can come in many forms including music, drama, dance and Elaboration 1 (E1)
sport. * Give the first
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.

For example, in terms of music, the younger generation are more inclined to jazz music Example 1 (Ex1)
and hip-hop music.
They are more likely to spend their time listening to modern music by using apps like Elaboration to
TikTok where they can enjoy modern music and break up the monotony of life through example 1 (EEx1)
meeting new like-minded people. Traditional entertainment like Kuda Kepang,
Wayang Kulit, Chinese Opera and folk music are less appealing to younger generation
nowadays as they have more options and those traditional entertainment are old-
fashioned. Comment: GOOD! A comparison must be made between
modern and traditional entertainment.

Next, people now have more choices in modern entertainment in terms of sports. Elaboration 2 (E2)
* Give the second
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.

For instance, Esports, short for electronic sports, is a form of competition using video Example 2 (Ex2)
games. Esports are now becoming more popular due to advancements in electronic
technology. Among others, League of Legends, Dota, Valorant, Street Fighter, and
StarCraft are the most sought-after Esports.
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Esports enable people to play sports online instead of traditional sports like soccer and Elaboration to
badminton. As modern entertainment provides more options compare to traditional example 2 (EEx2)
entertainment which is regarded as dull and old-fashioned, traditional entertainment
are less sought after. Comment: GOOD! A comparison must be made between
modern and traditional entertainment.

Therefore, due to advancements in electronic technology where more options for Concluding Sentence
modern entertainment are available, traditional entertainment is rarely seen nowadays. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*Low Frequency Words
1. inclined to
2. monotony of life
3. Esports

PARAGRAPH 3 (POINT NO. 2)

Furthermore, user-friendly technology makes modern entertainment easily Topic Sentence (T)
accessible. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 2 should be
written there.
People are able to gain access to modern entertainment easily anytime and anywhere Elaboration 1 (E1)
without training by using electronic devices like mobile phones and tablets. This can * Give the first
explanation for your
help people to save time and cost on entertainment.
TOPIC SENTENCE.

For example, the user-friendly computer technology enables consumers to engage in Example 1 (Ex1)
digital entertainment like playing computer games.
Users can use computers for their satisfaction and fun, which is easy to understand and Elaboration to
use, and they can operate it with little or no training. However, traditional example 1 (EEx1)
entertainments like congkak, wau and gasing require practice to get started.
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Besides, the accessibility of online entertainment causes the outdated traditional Elaboration 2 (E2)
entertainment become less popular. Due to hectic life, people prefer watching dramas * Give the second
explanation for your
or movies at home through smart TV which is more convenient to reduce stress.
TOPIC SENTENCE.

For instance, teenagers are more likely to binge-watch K-dramas and listen to K-pop Example 2 (Ex2)
music at home instead of engaging in traditional entertainments like playing board
games and cards.
People prefer user-friendly gadgets that can gain access to various applications like Elaboration to
music, educational, game or sports applications through Google Playstore. These example 2 (EEx2)
applications enable people to spend their free time without having to engage in outdoor
activities. On the other hand, people need to go outdoors to enjoy traditional
entertainment like Wayang Kulit and Chinese Opera, which are less favored.
Television and popular music have eclipsed traditional forms of entertainment. This
is because traditional entertainments like music theatres and traditional performances
have limitation and cannot be accessed anytime.

Thus, the easily-accessible modern entertainment due to user-friendly technology has Concluding Sentence
caused traditional entertainment which is slow-paced to become less favored. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
Comment: GOOD! A comparison must be made between
SENTENCE.
modern and traditional entertainment.
NOTES:
*Low Frequency Words
1. digital entertainment
2. accessibility
3. easily-accessible

PARAGRAPH 4 (POINT NO. 3)

Last but not least, the ubiquitous Internet plays a significant role in modern Topic Sentence (T)
entertainment, thus making traditional entertainment less appealing. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.

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Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 3 should be
written there.
The advent of digital era makes modern entertainment become more appealing. Elaboration 1 (E1)
* Give the first
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.

For example, Facebook, Weibo and Instagram are popular social media platforms Example 1 (Ex1)
where users can communicate with each other and sharing ideas more effectively.
Social media platforms can provide entertainment for people as they can watch videos, Elaboration to
post photos and stories online. People can also read articles and news online as a form example 1 (EEx1)
of entertainment.

In addition, Internet provides opportunities for people to try various games online. Elaboration 2 (E2)
online gaming has become popular where players can find all sorts of games. The * Give the second
explanation for your
online video games are interesting and thematic, which relate to a particular theme or
TOPIC SENTENCE.
subject.

To illustrate, players can try various online games with different themes like ancient, Example 2 (Ex2)
adventure, animals, art, sports games, travel and war.
However, traditional entertainment is much slower and cannot be played online. This Elaboration to
has resulted in younger generation showing less interest in traditional entertainment example 2 (EEx2)
like ‘congkak’,’wau’ and ‘gasing’. Traditional entertainment can only be enjoyed and
shared within a small group. Comment: GOOD! A comparison must be made between
modern and traditional entertainment.

Hence, the ubiquitous internet enable people to take part in modern entertainment Concluding Sentence
which makes traditional entertainment less popular. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:

*Low Frequency Words

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1. ubiquitous
2. thematic

PARAGRAPH 5 (CONCLUSION)
To conclude, advancements in technology enable people to engage in various Concluding Line(s)
modern entertainments. *Fresh rephrasing of the
topic
In my opinion, I still believe that due to advancements in electronic technology, Restate your stand /
traditional entertainment is rarely seen nowadays. This is due to the fact that modern opinion
entertainment offers more options, adopts user-friendly technology, and the &
ubiquitous Internet makes traditional entertainment less appealing. Summarise your 3
points
Modern entertainment is interesting and exciting, which can increase people’s Hope / Suggestion
satisfaction and enjoyment. The Internet has also helped modern entertainment to
evolve. Thus, modern entertainment will become more appealing in the future as the
technology will continue to evolve.

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Task 2

You are advised to spend about 50 minutes on this task.

You attended a talk by an invited speaker, which was organised by Sports and Entertainment Club of your
university. The following comment was made by the guest speaker:

“Due to advancements in electronic technology, traditional entertainment is rarely seen nowadays.”

Write an essay expressing your opinion on the statement. Write at least 250 words.

DISCURSIVE/ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY [60 marks]

PARAGRAPH 1 (INTRODUCTION)
Entertainment is a form of activity that provides amusement or enjoyment for people.
Introduce the
There are many forms of entertainment that can be divided into two groups, namely traditional topic
entertainment and modern entertainment. Malaysia as a multiracial and multicultural country has
various traditional entertainment that showcase Malaysia’s rich culture. Technology has
influenced entertainment, where people are more inclined to online entertainment. In my opinion,
I agree that due to advancements in electronic technology, traditional entertainment is rarely seen Stand

nowadays. This is because more options for modern entertainment, user-friendly technology Thesis
Statement
and the ubiquity of the Internet have made traditional entertainment less sought after.

PARAGRAPH 2 (POINT NO. 1)

First and foremost, due to advancements in electronic technology, people have more Topic Sentence
modern entertainment options. Modern entertainment can come in many forms including music,
E1
drama, dance and sport. For example, in terms of music, the younger generation are more inclined
Ex1
to jazz music and hip-hop music. They are more likely to spend their time listening to modern
music by using apps like TikTok where they can enjoy modern music and break up the monotony
of life through meeting new like-minded people. Traditional entertainment like Kuda Kepang,
EEx1
Wayang Kulit, Chinese Opera and folk music are less appealing to younger generation nowadays
as they have more options and those traditional entertainment are old-fashioned. Next, people now E2
have more choices in modern entertainment in terms of sports. For instance, Esports, short for
Ex2
electronic sports, is a form of competition using video games. Esports are now becoming more
popular due to advancements in electronic technology. Among others, League of Legends, Dota,
EEx2
Valorant, Street Fighter, and StarCraft are the most sought-after Esports. Esports enable people to

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play sports online instead of traditional sports like soccer and badminton. As modern entertainment
provides more options compare to traditional entertainment which is regarded as dull and old-
fashioned, traditional entertainment are less sought after. Therefore, due to advancements in Concluding
electronic technology where more options for modern entertainment are available, traditional Sentence
entertainment is rarely seen nowadays.

PARAGRAPH 3 (POINT NO. 2)

Furthermore, user-friendly technology makes modern entertainment easily accessible. Topic Sentence
People are able to gain access to modern entertainment easily anytime and anywhere without E1
training by using electronic devices like mobile phones and tablets. This can help people to save
time and cost on entertainment. For example, the user-friendly computer technology enables Ex1
consumers to engage in digital entertainment like playing computer games. Users can use
computers for their satisfaction and fun, which is easy to understand and use, and they can operate
it with little or no training. However, traditional entertainments like congkak, wau and gasing EEx1
require practice to get started. Besides, the accessibility of online entertainment causes the outdated
traditional entertainment become less popular. Due to hectic life, people prefer watching dramas E2
or movies at home through smart TV which is more convenient to reduce stress. For instance,
teenagers are more likely to binge-watch K-dramas and listen to K-pop music at home instead of Ex2

engaging in traditional entertainments like playing board games and cards. People prefer user-
friendly gadgets that can gain access to various applications like music, educational, game or sports
EEx2
applications through Google Playstore. These applications enable people to spend their free time
without having to engage in outdoor activities. On the other hand, people need to go outdoors to
enjoy traditional entertainment like Wayang Kulit and Chinese Opera, which are less favored.
Television and popular music have eclipsed traditional forms of entertainment. This is because
traditional entertainments like music theatres and traditional performances have limitation and
cannot be accessed anytime. Thus, the easily-accessible modern entertainment due to user-friendly Concluding
technology has caused traditional entertainment which is slow-paced to become less favored. Sentence

PARAGRAPH 4 (POINT NO. 3)

Last but not least, the ubiquitous Internet plays a significant role in modern Topic Sentence
entertainment, thus making traditional entertainment less appealing. The advent of digital era
E1
makes modern entertainment become more appealing. For example, Facebook, Weibo and
Ex1
Instagram are popular social media platforms where users can communicate with each other and

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E2
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sharing ideas more effectively. Social media platforms can provide entertainment for people as
Ex2
they can watch videos, post photos and stories online. People can also read articles and news online
as a form of entertainment. In addition, Internet provides opportunities for people to try various
EEx2
games online. online gaming has become popular where players can find all sorts of games. The
online video games are interesting and thematic, which relate to a particular theme or subject. To
Concluding
illustrate, players can try various online games with different themes like ancient, adventure,
Sentence
animals, art, sports games, travel and war. However, traditional entertainment is much slower and
cannot be played online. This has resulted in younger generation showing less interest in traditional
entertainment like ‘congkak’,’wau’ and ‘gasing’. Traditional entertainment can only be enjoyed
and shared within a small group. Hence, the ubiquitous internet enable people to take part in
modern entertainment which makes traditional entertainment less popular.

PARAGRAPH 5 (CONCLUSION)

To conclude, advancements in technology enable people to engage in various modern Concluding

Line(s)
entertainments. In my opinion, I still believe that due to advancements in electronic technology,
traditional entertainment is rarely seen nowadays. This is due to the fact that modern entertainment Restate
Stand/Opinion
offers more options, adopts user-friendly technology, and the ubiquitous Internet makes & Summarise 3
traditional entertainment less appealing. Modern entertainment is interesting and exciting, which Points
can increase people’s satisfaction and enjoyment. The Internet has also helped modern Hope/Suggestio
n
entertainment to evolve. Thus, modern entertainment will become more appealing in the future as
the technology will continue to evolve.

Comment: GOOD! A comparison must be made between

modern and traditional entertainment.

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Teacher’s Comments

Task Fulfilment (TF) -good response to the task

-terms like Esports, thematic are explained when used they are used for
the 1st time
-develop ideas reasonably well
-information- well-linked
Language & Organisation (L) -meaning comes across very clearly
-able to LINK ideas effectively
-shows reasonable evidence of planning
-use a variety of cohesive devices
-a variety of sentence structures
-display reasonably confident control of language
*demonstrate the use of Low Frequency Words (LFW)
MUET Band 5

CEFR Level C1

Important Notes!!!

Low Frequency Words (LFW)

A. LFW is a MUST for C1 as it differentiates C candidates from other candidates.
B. Minimum 3 @ 4 LFW for higher language scores
C. List of LFW in this essay:
1. ubiquity
2. inclined to
3. monotony of life
4. Esports
5. digital entertainment
6. accessibility
7. easily-accessible
8. ubiquitous
9. thematic

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Task 2

You are advised to spend about 50 minutes on this task.

You attended a talk by an officer from the Education Ministry, which was organised by your school. The following
comment was made by the speaker:

“Holding a part-time job disrupts a student’s studies.”

Do you agree with this statement? Write an essay of at least 250 words.

ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY [60 marks]

PLAN OF DEVELOPMENT

PARAGRAPH 1 (INTRODUCTION)
The increasing cost of pursuing higher education means that working part-time Introduce the topic
while studying is becoming a necessity for many students. They tend to work part- *Refer to the question

time in order to pay for their education fees. With the advent of digital era, they can and choose ANY WORD
to start your essay.
choose part-time online jobs to earn income.
I disagree that holding a part-time job while studying disrupts a student’s studies. Stand (Compulsory)
Students can choose part-time jobs that would not disrupt their learning at educational *Write your stand in
ONE SENTENCE.
institutions.
Instead, working part-time enables students to earn money, gain new experiences, Thesis statement
and develop life skills. *LAST SENTENCE of
paragraph 1. Write 3
POINTS in the thesis
statement in ONE
SENTENCE.

PARAGRAPH 2 (POINT NO. 1)

First and foremost, holding a part-time job enables students to make money Topic Sentence (T)
while at the same time not disrupting their studies. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.

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Point no. 1 should be
written there.
The increasing cost of pursuing higher education require students to work part-time in Elaboration 1 (E1)
order to pay for their education fee and living expenses. * Give the first
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.

For example, some students earn their own money through working part-time as retail Example 1 (Ex1)
workers, freelancers or cashiers to supplement the family income and reduce the
financial burden on their parents.
The monetary gain also enables students to further their studies. Students need to be Elaboration to
aware of the amount of time that they work so that they will not overexert themselves example 1 (EEx1)
and can have adequate time for their studies.

Next, there are plenty of online jobs for students that can be lucrative, pay well and Elaboration 2 (E2)
set them on a successful career path. They can choose to work from home or in another * Give the second
explanation for your
term, telecommuting.
TOPIC SENTENCE.

For instance, those who do not have their own transportation to go to workplace, they Example 2 (Ex2)
can work as an online tutor.
If they are doing well in college and enjoy teaching, they can become an online tutor Elaboration to
to teach other college students. They can also teach students from elementary school example 2 (EEx2)
to high school. With the advent of rapid-paced technological era, they no longer have
to be limited to their geographical area and can teach students from all over the world
while earning high salary. Through earning more income, they can purchase more
educational materials to increase their knowledge on the courses or subjects taken.

Therefore, working part-time will not disrupt student’s studies as students can earn Concluding Sentence
income, which can be used to improve their studies. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*Low Frequency Words

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1. monetary gain
2. overexert
3. adequate
4. lucrative
5. telecommuting
6. advent
7. rapid-paced
8. geographical area

PARAGRAPH 3 (POINT NO. 2)

Furthermore, students can acquire more experiences and sharpen their skills Topic Sentence (T)
when working part-time, which facilitate their studies. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 2 should be
written there.
They will be able to experience what it is like in actual working environment, which Elaboration 1 (E1)
will be helpful in their future. * Give the first
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.

For example, for those who are pursuing marketing courses, they may want to sharpen Example 1 (Ex1)
their skills by working part-time as a marketer. They can work part-time in a business
and learn to apply the marketing strategies like omnichannel approach, which
integrates different marketing and sales approach to provide customers with a
seamless shopping experience.
The ubiquitous internet enables them to promote the products online to attract Elaboration to
customers. They can also be familiar with digital marketing techniques. All the example 1 (EEx1)
experiences gain through working part-time will give students an impetus to study
harder so that they can apply their knowledge at work.

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Besides, for those who want to enhance their communication skills and interpersonal Elaboration 2 (E2)
skills, they can try some part-time jobs that require a lot of interaction with customers. * Give the second
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.

For instance, they can work as a part-time direct seller that requires good convincing Example 2 (Ex2)
skill. Direct sales require a high resistance to failure and a very strong work ethic.
They need to showcase sheer determination to deliver sales in order to increase sales Elaboration to
and earn high commission. By interacting with different customers, they can know example 2 (EEx2)
more people, widen their social circle and break up the monotony of life. They can
also enhance their skills and learn more experiences that can be useful to have better
understanding of their courses and help them to complete their courses.

Thus, working part-time enable students to gain new experiences and improve their Concluding Sentence
skills while encourage them to study harder. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*Low Frequency Words
1. marketer
2. omnichannel approach
3. integrates
4. ubiquitous
5. impetus
6. sheer determination
7. monotony of life

PARAGRAPH 4 (POINT NO. 3)

Last but not least, working part-time can help students develop their organizational Topic Sentence (T)
and multitasking skills. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.

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Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 3 should be
written there.
They will have to get used to juggling a job and attending college or university Elaboration 1 (E1)
simultaneously. For those who are attending online courses or distance education, they * Give the first
explanation for your
will have greater flexibility in terms of the allocation of time for works and study. This
TOPIC SENTENCE.
is a golden opportunity for them to learn time management skills. They need to be
self-disciplined and self-constraint between earning money and studying so that they
will not neglect their study.
For example, some may work part-time as retail assistant. For them, they need to Example 1 (Ex1)
manage their own timetable and stick to it so that they can divide their time
successfully between working at a retail store and studying.
They learn to be aware of the impact of overexertion as they may not be able to focus Elaboration to
during classes. Practicing good multitasking skills while working part-time enables example 1 (EEx1)
students to allocate adequate time for their studies. Thus, this would not affect their
grade and they may achieve success academically.

In addition, in order to study while earning money, they learn to be well-organized Elaboration 2 (E2)
and not working at the eleventh hour so that they can have adequate rest. * Give the second
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.

To illustrate, they learn to stick well to their timetable and divide time between Example 2 (Ex2)
working and studying.
By doing so, they can improve their organizational and multitasking skills. They will Elaboration to
be able to study well so that they can get good result and get a better job. Those who example 2 (EEx2)
manage to organize their time well will also be more sought after by employers who
are seeking for candidates that are well-organized and can manage time efficiently.
This is because well-organized individual can demonstrate high productivity and
increase an organization’s profit.

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Hence, working part-time can help students to develop organizational and Concluding Sentence
multitasking skills, which further facilitates their studies. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:

*Low Frequency Words

1. organizational
2. multitasking
3. flexibility
4. overexertion

PARAGRAPH 5 (CONCLUSION)
To conclude, maintaining a job while studying at school, college or university Concluding Line(s)
will not disrupt a student’s studies. *Fresh rephrasing of the
topic
In my opinion, I still disagree that holding a part-time job while studying disrupts a Restate your stand /
student’s studies. This is because students can earn money, acquire more opinion
experiences as well as develop organizational and multitasking skills that will be &
useful in their school or university life and also in their future. Summarise your 3
points
However, working part-time job is not for everyone. A self-motivated and well- Hope / Suggestion
organized person may find it easier to strike a balance between work and studies.
Hopefully, every student will think hard before making a commitment to a part-time
job.

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Task 2

You are advised to spend about 50 minutes on this task.

You attended a talk by an officer from the Education Ministry, which was organised by your school. The following
comment was made by the speaker:

“Holding a part-time job disrupts a student’s studies.”

Do you agree with this statement? Write an essay of at least 250 words.

ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY [60 marks]

PARAGRAPH 1 (INTRODUCTION)
The increasing cost of pursuing higher education means that working part-time while
Introduce the
studying is becoming a necessity for many students. They tend to work part-time in order to pay topic
for their education fees. With the advent of digital era, they can choose part-time online jobs to
earn income. I disagree that holding a part-time job while studying disrupts a student’s studies. Stand
Students can choose part-time jobs that would not disrupt their learning at educational institutions.
Thesis
Instead, working part-time enables students to earn money, gain new experiences, and develop
Statement
life skills.

PARAGRAPH 2 (POINT NO. 1)

First and foremost, holding a part-time job enables students to make money while at the Topic Sentence
same time not disrupting their studies. The increasing cost of pursuing higher education require
E1
students to work part-time in order to pay for their education fee and living expenses. For example,
Ex1
some students earn their own money through working part-time as retail workers, freelancers or
cashiers to supplement the family income and reduce the financial burden on their parents. The
monetary gain also enables students to further their studies. Students need to be aware of the EEx1
amount of time that they work so that they will not overexert themselves and can have adequate
time for their studies. Next, there are plenty of online jobs for students that can be lucrative, pay E2
well and set them on a successful career path. They can choose to work from home or in another
term, telecommuting. For instance, those who do not have their own transportation to go to
Ex2
workplace, they can work as an online tutor. If they are doing well in college and enjoy teaching,
they can become an online tutor to teach other college students. They can also teach students from
elementary school to high school. With the advent of rapid-paced technological era, they no longer

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have to be limited to their geographical area and can teach students from all over the world while EEx2
earning high salary. Through earning more income, they can purchase more educational materials
to increase their knowledge on the courses or subjects taken. Therefore, working part-time will not Concluding
disrupt student’s studies as students can earn income, which can be used to improve their studies. Sentence

PARAGRAPH 3 (POINT NO. 2)

Furthermore, students can acquire more experiences and sharpen their skills when Topic Sentence
working part-time, which facilitate their studies. They will be able to experience what it is like in E1
actual working environment, which will be helpful in their future. For example, for those who are
pursuing marketing courses, they may want to sharpen their skills by working part-time as a Ex1
marketer. They can work part-time in a business and learn to apply the marketing strategies like
omnichannel approach, which integrates different marketing and sales approach to provide
customers with a seamless shopping experience. The ubiquitous internet enables them to promote EEx1
the products online to attract customers. They can also be familiar with digital marketing
techniques. All the experiences gain through working part-time will give students an impetus to E2
study harder so that they can apply their knowledge at work. Besides, for those who want to
enhance their communication skills and interpersonal skills, they can try some part-time jobs that
require a lot of interaction with customers. For instance, they can work as a part-time direct seller Ex2
that requires good convincing skill. Direct sales require a high resistance to failure and a very
EEx2
strong work ethic. They need to showcase sheer determination to deliver sales in order to increase
sales and earn high commission. By interacting with different customers, they can know more
people, widen their social circle and break up the monotony of life. They can also enhance their
skills and learn more experiences that can be useful to have better understanding of their courses
and help them to complete their courses. Thus, working part-time enable students to gain new
Concluding
experiences and improve their skills while encourage them to study harder. Sentence

PARAGRAPH 4 (POINT NO. 3)

Last but not least, working part-time can help students develop their organizational and Topic Sentence
multitasking skills. They will have to get used to juggling a job and attending college or university
E1
simultaneously. For those who are attending online courses or distance education, they will have
greater flexibility in terms of the allocation of time for works and study. This is a golden
opportunity for them to learn time management skills. They need to be self-disciplined and self-
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constraint between earning money and studying so that they will not neglect their study. For
Ex1
example, some may work part-time as retail assistant. For them, they need to manage their own
timetable and stick to it so that they can divide their time successfully between working at a retail
EEx1
store and studying. They learn to be aware of the impact of overexertion as they may not be able
to focus during classes. Practicing good multitasking skills while working part-time enables
students to allocate adequate time for their studies. Thus, this would not affect their grade and they
may achieve success academically. In addition, in order to study while earning money, they learn
E2
to be well-organized and not working at the eleventh hour so that they can have adequate rest. To
illustrate, they learn to stick well to their timetable and divide time between working and studying. Ex2
By doing so, they can improve their organizational and multitasking skills. They will be able to
EEx2
study well so that they can get good result and get a better job. Those who manage to organize
their time well will also be more sought after by employers who are seeking for candidates that
are well-organized and can manage time efficiently. This is because well-organized individual can
demonstrate high productivity and increase an organization’s profit. Hence, working part-time can
Concluding
help students to develop organizational and multitasking skills, which further facilitates their Sentence
studies.

PARAGRAPH 5 (CONCLUSION)

To conclude, maintaining a job while studying at school, college or university will not Concluding
Line(s)
disrupt a student’s studies. In my opinion, I still disagree that holding a part-time job while
studying disrupts a student’s studies. This is because students can earn money, acquire more Restate
Stand/Opinion
experiences as well as develop organizational and multitasking skills that will be useful in their & Summarise 3
school or university life and also in their future. However, working part-time job is not for Points
everyone. A self-motivated and well-organized person may find it easier to strike a balance Hope/Suggestio
n
between work and studies. Hopefully, every student will think hard before making a commitment
to a part-time job.

Comment: GOOD! Elaborate how holding a part-time

job would not disrupt a student’s studies.

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Teacher’s Comments

Task Fulfilment (TF) -good response to the task

-term like ‘omnichannel approach’ is explained.
-develop ideas reasonably well
-show reasonably mature treatment of the topic
Language & Organisation (L) -appropriate and varied vocabulary
-able to LINK ideas effectively
-organization of paragraph - coherent
-use a variety of cohesive devices
-a variety of sentence structures
-display reasonably confident control of language
*demonstrate the use of Low Frequency Words (LFW)
MUET Band 5

CEFR Level C1

Important Notes!!!

Low Frequency Words (LFW)

A. LFW is a MUST for C1 as it differentiates C candidates from other candidates.
B. Minimum 3 @ 4 LFW for higher language scores
C. List of LFW in this essay:
1. monetary gain 9. marketer 17. multitasking
2. overexert 10. omnichannel approach 18. flexibility
3. adequate 11. integrates 19. overexertion
4. lucrative 12. ubiquitous
5. telecommuting 13. impetus
6. advent 14. sheer determination
7. rapid-paced 15. monotony of life
8. geographical area 16. organizational

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Task 2

You are advised to spend about 50 minutes on this task.

In a Youths’ Day event, a youth leader made the following statement in her talk:

“A good scare is worth more to man than advice.”

Do you agree with this statement? Write an essay of at least 250 words.

ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY [60 marks]

PLAN OF DEVELOPMENT

PARAGRAPH 1 (INTRODUCTION)
People always make unnecessary mistakes. This is because they are stubborn Introduce the topic
and do not want to listen to other’s advice. The question is, does advice worth more to *Refer to the question
and choose ANY WORD
man than a good scare? People are forgetful and do not always remember advice.
to start your essay.
Therefore, I don’t think that advice is useful to everyone.
I totally agree that a good scare is worth more to man than advice. Stand (Compulsory)
*Write your stand in
ONE SENTENCE.
This is because people will always remember their mistakes after experiencing health Thesis statement
scare, financial scare and a good scare after involving in road accidents. *LAST SENTENCE of
paragraph 1. Write 3
POINTS in the thesis
statement in ONE
SENTENCE.

PARAGRAPH 2 (POINT NO. 1)

First and foremost, a good scare to one’s health is worth more to man than Topic Sentence (T)
advice. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 1 should be
written there.

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Health is better than wealth. However, in today’s world, with the advent of fast-paced Elaboration 1 (E1)
technological and digital era, everyone is busy with their job to fulfil their material * Give the first
explanation for your
goal. They always overexert themselves by working day and night to earn more
TOPIC SENTENCE.
income.

For example, a businessman would not listen to advices related to health as he Example 1 (Ex1)
prioritizes wealth and is busy to build his business empire.
The long-term exertion is hazardous to one’s health and one may experience a good Elaboration to
scare due to serious health issues like heart attack, high blood pressure and depression. example 1 (EEx1)
Without good health, one will not be able to accumulate wealth. After recovering from
illnesses due to overexertion, people will take good care of their health.

Next, we also tend to indulge in unhealthy lifestyle. Elaboration 2 (E2)

* Give the second
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.

For instance, we tend to neglect our sleep to spend more time on mobile games or Example 2 (Ex2)
digital games.
Our parents may advise us to have adequate sleep but we tend to ignore them. As a Elaboration to
result, sleep deprivation will lead to cardiovascular disease and we are more example 2 (EEx2)
susceptible to chronic health conditions like heart disease, cancer, stroke and diabetes.
This is a good scare to our health and we will remember the consequences of not
cultivating healthy lifestyle. Some people may also ignore other’s advice on not to
indulge in alcohol abuse or drug abuse. Eventually, they may suffer from lung cancer
and need to undergo a series of treatments. This is a good scare to those who do not
listen to advice and they will always remember it. They will avoid from repeating the
same mistakes due to ignorance.

Therefore, a good health scare is worth more to man than advice. Concluding Sentence
*ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.

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NOTES:
*No repetition of words (Avoid repeating the same vocabulary)
1. hazardous to- harmful to, detrimental to

*Low Frequency Words

1. fast-paced technological era
2. overexert
3. accumulate
4. sleep deprivation
5. cardiovascular disease
6. susceptible to
7. hazardous to

*Change word forms

1. long time exertion- overexert themselves

PARAGRAPH 3 (POINT NO. 2)

Furthermore, a good financial scare is worth more to man than advice. Topic Sentence (T)
*SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 2 should be
written there.
We will always listen to advice given by the elderly on spending wisely. However, we Elaboration 1 (E1)
are forgetful and may not remember those advices. When we are getting financially * Give the first
explanation for your
devastated, we will remember the negative impacts and do not repeat the same
TOPIC SENTENCE.
mistakes.

For example, some people may borrow money from loan sharks, people who offer Example 1 (Ex1)
loans at extremely high interest rates.
Lending money without a licence is illegal, but people tend to borrow money from Elaboration to
loan sharks because of the much looser regulation than that of banks. When the example 1 (EEx1)

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borrowers are unable to settle their debt, their life may be threatened by loan sharks.
The life-threatening situations are debilitating and the borrowers will be frightened.
These consequences will serve as a good scare and borrowers will not borrow money
from loan sharks again in the future, which is worth more than advice.

Besides, the concept of online shopping is prevailing in today’s society. The Elaboration 2 (E2)
ubiquitous advertising messages and campaigns entice consumers to indulge in * Give the second
explanation for your
compulsive shopping. If consumers do not exercise self-constraint and self-control,
TOPIC SENTENCE.
they will get themselves into hot water due to overspending.

For instance, we may ignore our parents’ advice to plan a financial budget. We tend Example 2 (Ex2)
to indulge in online shopping and purchase anything that we like.
When we overspend on online products, we may find ourselves in a large debt. This Elaboration to
is a good scare to us as we spend more than what we earn, which is worth more than example 2 (EEx2)
advice. As a result, we will always remind ourselves to spend wisely.

Thus, it is an undeniable fact that a good financial scare is worth more to man than Concluding Sentence
advice. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*Low Frequency Words
1. financially devastated
2. debilitating
3. prevailing
4. entice
5. ubiquitous
6. entice
7. compulsive shopping
8. self-constraint

PARAGRAPH 4 (POINT NO. 3)

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Last but not least, people who involve in road accidents will have a good scare Topic Sentence (T)
that is worth more to them than advice. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 3 should be
written there.
Most road accidents are caused by human errors. People tend to ignore advice on road Elaboration 1 (E1)
safety and they will remember the consequences after having a good scare due to road * Give the first
explanation for your
accidents. Road accident is the result of speeding, drunk driving and recklessness.
TOPIC SENTENCE.

For example, reckless drivers may drive under the influence of alcohol and speed on Example 1 (Ex1)
the road.
They do not listen to other’s advice on not to drive under the influence of alcohol. As Elaboration to
a result, they may involve in car accidents and cause deaths. This will contribute to example 1 (EEx1)
the high rate of fatalities. After involving in car accidents, those reckless drivers will
experience a good scare and this remind them to practice road safety tips.

In addition, rebellious teenagers always ignore parents’ advice and tend to involve in Elaboration 2 (E2)
illegal racing. * Give the second
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.

To illustrate, they drive modified cars or ride motorcycles to enjoy street racing, which Example 2 (Ex2)
is exhilarating.
This is detrimental to their safety as they may accidentally knock down other Elaboration to
pedestrians or involve in a roll over car accidents. As a result, this serves as a good example 2 (EEx2)
scare to those teenagers and they will always remember the impact of illegal street
racing. Eventually, the good scare enables them to learn from their mistakes, which is
worth more than advice.

Hence, a good scare is worth more to man than advice in terms of road accidents. Concluding Sentence

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*ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:

*Low Frequency Words

1. recklessness
2. fatalities
3. detrimental to
4. pedestrians
5. exhilarating

PARAGRAPH 5 (CONCLUSION)
To conclude, advice may be useful to some people, but a good scare is more Concluding Line(s)
useful to a majority of people. *Fresh rephrasing of the
topic
In my opinion, I strongly agree that a good scare is worth more to man than advice. Restate your stand /
This is because people will always remind themselves after experiencing a good scare opinion
on health, financial and road accidents. &
Summarise your 3
points
We must learn from our own mistakes and do not repeat those mistakes. Hopefully, Hope / Suggestion
everyone will change their negative attitudes and learn from their mistakes after
having a good scare in their life. By doing so, everyone can become a better person in
the future, work hard and contribute to a country’s sustainable development.

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Task 2

You are advised to spend about 50 minutes on this task.

In a Youths’ Day event, a youth leader made the following statement in her talk:

“A good scare is worth more to man than advice.”

Do you agree with this statement? Write an essay of at least 250 words.

ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY [60 marks]

PARAGRAPH 1 (INTRODUCTION)
People always make unnecessary mistakes. This is because they are stubborn and do not
Introduce the
want to listen to other’s advice. The question is, does advice worth more to man than a good scare? topic
People are forgetful and do not always remember advice. Therefore, I don’t think that advice is
useful to everyone. I totally agree that a good scare is worth more to man than advice. This is Stand
because people will always remember their mistakes after experiencing health scare, financial
Thesis
scare and a good scare after involving in road accidents. Statement
PARAGRAPH 2 (POINT NO. 1)
First and foremost, a good scare to one’s health is worth more to man than advice. Health Topic Sentence
is better than wealth. However, in today’s world, with the advent of fast-paced technological and
E1
digital era, everyone is busy with their job to fulfil their material goal. They always overexert
Ex1
themselves by working day and night to earn more income. For example, a businessman would
not listen to advices related to health as he prioritizes wealth and is busy to build his business
empire. The long-term exertion is hazardous to one’s health and one may experience a good scare EEx1
due to serious health issues like heart attack, high blood pressure and depression. Without good
health, one will not be able to accumulate wealth. After recovering from illnesses due to
overexertion, people will take good care of their health. Next, we also tend to indulge in unhealthy E2
lifestyle. For instance, we tend to neglect our sleep to spend more time on mobile games or digital
Ex2
games. Our parents may advise us to have adequate sleep but we tend to ignore them. As a result,
sleep deprivation will lead to cardiovascular disease and we are more susceptible to chronic health
conditions like heart disease, cancer, stroke and diabetes. This is a good scare to our health and we
will remember the consequences of not cultivating healthy lifestyle. Some people may also ignore
other’s advice on not to indulge in alcohol abuse or drug abuse. Eventually, they may suffer from EEx2

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lung cancer and need to undergo a series of treatments. This is a good scare to those who do not Concluding
listen to advice and they will always remember it. They will avoid from repeating the same Sentence
mistakes due to ignorance. Therefore, a good health scare is worth more to man than advice.

PARAGRAPH 3 (POINT NO. 2)

Furthermore, a good financial scare is worth more to man than advice. We will always Topic Sentence
listen to advice given by the elderly on spending wisely. However, we are forgetful and may not E1
remember those advices. When we are getting financially devastated, we will remember the
negative impacts and do not repeat the same mistakes. For example, some people may borrow Ex1
money from loan sharks, people who offer loans at extremely high interest rates. Lending money
without a licence is illegal, but people tend to borrow money from loan sharks because of the much
looser regulation than that of banks. When the borrowers are unable to settle their debt, their life EEx1
may be threatened by loan sharks. The life-threatening situations are debilitating and the borrowers
will be frightened. These consequences will serve as a good scare and borrowers will not borrow
money from loan sharks again in the future, which is worth more than advice. Besides, the concept E2
of online shopping is prevailing in today’s society. The ubiquitous advertising messages and
campaigns entice consumers to indulge in compulsive shopping. If consumers do not exercise self-
constraint and self-control, they will get themselves into hot water due to overspending. For
instance, we may ignore our parents’ advice to plan a financial budget. We tend to indulge in Ex2
online shopping and purchase anything that we like. When we overspend on online products, we
EEx2
may find ourselves in a large debt. This is a good scare to us as we spend more than what we earn,
which is worth more than advice. As a result, we will always remind ourselves to spend wisely.
Thus, it is an undeniable fact that a good financial scare is worth more to man than advice.
Concluding
Sentence

PARAGRAPH 4 (POINT NO. 3)

Last but not least, people who involve in road accidents will have a good scare that is Topic Sentence
worth more to them than advice. Most road accidents are caused by human errors. People tend to
E1
ignore advice on road safety and they will remember the consequences after having a good scare
due to road accidents. Road accident is the result of speeding, drunk driving and recklessness. For
example, reckless drivers may drive under the influence of alcohol and speed on the road. They do
Ex1
not listen to other’s advice on not to drive under the influence of alcohol. As a result, they may
involve in car accidents and cause deaths. This will contribute to the high rate of fatalities. After EEx1
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involving in car accidents, those reckless drivers will experience a good scare and this remind them
to practice road safety tips. In addition, rebellious teenagers always ignore parents’ advice and E2
tend to involve in illegal racing. To illustrate, they drive modified cars or ride motorcycles to enjoy
Ex2
street racing, which is exhilarating. This is detrimental to their safety as they may accidentally
knock down other pedestrians or involve in a roll over car accidents. As a result, this serves as a EEx2
good scare to those teenagers and they will always remember the impact of illegal street racing.
Eventually, the good scare enables them to learn from their mistakes, which is worth more than Concluding
Sentence
advice. Hence, a good scare is worth more to man than advice in terms of road accidents.

PARAGRAPH 5 (CONCLUSION)

To conclude, advice may be useful to some people, but a good scare is more useful to a Concluding
Line(s)
majority of people. In my opinion, I strongly agree that a good scare is worth more to man than
advice. This is because people will always remind themselves after experiencing a good scare on Restate
Stand/Opinion
health, financial and road accidents. We must learn from our own mistakes and do not repeat & Summarise 3
those mistakes. Hopefully, everyone will change their negative attitudes and learn from their Points
mistakes after having a good scare in their life. By doing so, everyone can become a better person Hope/Suggestio
n
in the future, work hard and contribute to a country’s sustainable development.

Comment: GOOD! Elaborate on both GOOD SCARE and

ADVICE. Why good scare is worth more, not advice.

Comment: seems that now you are more comfortable using

words like “ubiquitous, debilitating, exhilarating, overexert,
susceptible to, hazardous to” …etc, good!
You can also memorise some idioms/ old sayings/ proverbs, just
to show cariations in your language.

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Teacher’s Comments

Task Fulfilment (TF) -good response to the task

-develop ideas reasonably well
-show reasonably mature treatment of the topic
Language & Organisation (L) -appropriate and varied vocabulary
-able to LINK ideas effectively
-organization of paragraph - coherent
-use a variety of cohesive devices
-a variety of sentence structures
-display reasonably confident control of language
*demonstrate the use of Low Frequency Words (LFW)

MUET Band 5

CEFR Level C1

Important Notes!!!

Low Frequency Words (LFW)

A. LFW is a MUST for C1 as it differentiates C candidates from other candidates.
B. Minimum 3 @ 4 LFW for higher language scores
C. List of LFW in this essay:
1. fast-paced technological era 8. financially devastated 15. self-constraint
2. overexert 9. debilitating 16. recklessness
3. accumulate 10. prevailing 17. fatalities
4. sleep deprivation 11. entice 18. detrimental to
5. cardiovascular disease 12. ubiquitous 19. pedestrians
6. susceptible to 13. entice 20. exhilarating
7. hazardous to 14. compulsive shopping

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Task 2

You are advised to spend about 50 minutes on this task.

You attended a talk by a well-known motivational speaker, which was organised by your university. The
following comment was made by the guest speaker:
NOTE:
“The most valuable thing in life is money.” This sample essay was a
Band 5 in the old format,
Write an essay expressing your opinion on the statement. Write at least 250 words. but in the new format,
students are advised NOT
DISCURSIVE/ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY to change the key words
[60 marks]
(money) to family, health,
friendship. This is due to
PLAN OF DEVELOPMENT the fear that students
might lose marks for off-
topic discussions (without
discussing money).
PARAGRAPH 1 (INTRODUCTION)
Our life is precious and invaluable. As human beings, we need to identify the Introduce the topic
most valuable thing in life so that we can life a meaningful life. The question is, what *Refer to the question
and choose ANY WORD
is the most valuable thing in our life?
to start your essay.
In my opinion, I totally disagree that the most valuable thing in life is money. Although Stand
money can be used to buy a lot of things and fulfil our material goal, it can only bring *Write your stand in
ONE SENTENCE.
short-term happiness.
(You will NOT BE
PENALISED if you
write- I agree / disagree
with the statement)
Instead, the most valuable thing in life is family, health and friendship. Thesis statement
*LAST SENTENCE of
paragraph 1. Write 3
POINTS in the thesis
statement in ONE
SENTENCE.

PARAGRAPH 2 (POINT NO. 1)

First and foremost, family is the most important and valuable thing in life, but Topic Sentence (T)
not money.

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*SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 1 should be
written there.
Family is a precious gift of our life. Without family, we may not be able to live a Elaboration 1 (E1)
fruitful life. Family means love, encouragement, understanding and hope. We can * Give the first
explanation for your
experience love in a family, but money can’t buy us love. It is the family love that
TOPIC SENTENCE.
enable us to live a meaningful life. Parents’ love gives us a sense of security and
provide us with all-time support when we get into hot water.
For example, whenever we experience a breakup, parents can support us and Example 1 (Ex1)
encourage us to be strong. When we have been fired from a job, parents can give us
constructive criticism and offer valuable suggestions to help us getting through a
stressful time with a minimum of difficulty.
It is clear that open-minded parents can mould our life by boosting our self-esteem Elaboration to
and they can bring out the best in us. example 1 (EEx1)

Next, Parents also give us unconditional love which help to boost our mental Elaboration 2 (E2)
happiness. They love us and remain with us through thick and thin. They love us no * Give the second
explanation for your
matter what life throws at us and do not expect anything in return. We are never alone
TOPIC SENTENCE.
in facing life obstacles. This is because parents can encourage us and give us the
impetus to try hard without fear and we will have sheer determination to achieve our
goals in life.
For instance, when someone plans to start a business from scratch, he or she may face Example 2 (Ex2)
a lot of challenges. With the encouragement and support of family, he or she will be
able to gradually build a business empire.
We cannot fulfil our goals without the all-time support provides by our parents. Even Elaboration to
though we have lots of money, we may give up easily and cannot achieve success in example 2 (EEx2)
life if we do not have a supportive family.

Therefore, family is the most precious and valuable thing in our life compare to Concluding Sentence
money.
Comment: GOOD! A comparison must be made between
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*ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*Low Frequency Words
1. constructive criticism
2. life obstacles
3. impetus
4. sheer determination

PARAGRAPH 3 (POINT NO. 2)

Furthermore, health is more valuable in our life instead of money. Topic Sentence (T)
*SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 2 should be
written there.
As the saying goes, “Health is better than wealth”. We must take good care of our Elaboration 1 (E1)
health so that we can enjoy our wealth. However, we cannot enjoy our wealth if we * Give the first
explanation for your
are sick. We must work hard to widen our spectrum of knowledge on how to stay
TOPIC SENTENCE.
healthy. We must practise healthy lifestyle and cultivate good eating habits. If we have
a balanced diet, we can avoid from being succumbing to diseases.
For example, to stay healthy, we must eat enough fruits and vegetables, avoid eating Example 1 (Ex1)
junk food and do not indulge in alcohol and tobacco.
This is utmost important to rejuvenate our body and we will be less susceptible to Elaboration to
chronic disease like cancer and diabetes. example 1 (EEx1)

Besides, health is more valuable than money because we can live a normal life with a Elaboration 2 (E2)
strong body. Bear in mind that money can’t buy us health. Instead of accumulating * Give the second
explanation for your
wealth through a busy job, we should cultivate a healthy lifestyle.
TOPIC SENTENCE.

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For instance, regular physical exercise and adequate sleep is crucial to ensure our Example 2 (Ex2)
pristine health. When we engage in outdoor activities, we will be away from stress and
feel invigorated. This can reduce our stress level and contribute to our happiness in
life. Regular physical exercise can protect us from health deterioration and debilitating
disease. We must also have adequate sleep. Poor sleeping habits and sleep deprivation
always contribute to a higher risk of cardiovascular disease. Enough sleep can
recharge our batteries. For instance, we must sleep at least six to eight hours a day so
that our body can rest and recover.
We may overexert our body and work until the eleventh hour to earn more money. Elaboration to
Eventually, we are prone to disease and cannot enjoy our wealth. Even though we have example 2 (EEx2)
a lot of wealth, our health suffers if we spend our money on unhealthy lifestyles, so
when we get sick, we can no longer enjoy our wealth.

Thus, health is more valuable than wealth and we need a healthy body to live a normal Concluding Sentence
life. *ONE SENTENCE.
Comment: GOOD! A comparison must be made between
Refer to your TOPIC
health and money.
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*Low Frequency Words
1. spectrum of knowledge
2. cultivate
3. succumbing
4. rejuvenate
5. less susceptible
6. invigorated
7. health deterioration
8. debilitating disease
9. sleep deprivation
10. cardiovascular disease
11. overexert
12. prone to

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PARAGRAPH 4 (POINT NO. 3)

Last but not least, friendship is important and more valuable than money in life. Topic Sentence (T)
*SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 3 should be
written there.
We cannot use money to buy friendship. Friendship is the rainbow of life that colours Elaboration 1 (E1)
our horizons with invaluable experiences. We should not lose the camaraderie and life * Give the first
explanation for your
experiences that come with friendship because friendship can bring happiness. It is
TOPIC SENTENCE.
encouraged to stablish and develop friendship at our early adolescence period. Positive
peer influence is utmost important to mould our life.
For example, good friends can have positive influence on us by advising us not to Example 1 (Ex1)
engage in negative activities like smoking, drinking, drug-taking and vandalism.
This can ensure our bright future and we can live a normal life. Establishing friendship Elaboration to
with different people can broaden our social circle and break up the monotony of life. example 1 (EEx1)
Man is by nature a social animal. We cannot live without social interaction with others.
We need companionship to ensure our mental and emotional well-being.

In addition, friends can be helpful and understanding in times of trouble. Elaboration 2 (E2)
* Give the second
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.

To illustrate, we can turn to our friends to express despair and sadness. Example 2 (Ex2)
Friends can be good listener and give us emotional support when we get into hot water. Elaboration to
As the saying goes, “No man is an island”. No one in this world can live alone without example 2 (EEx2)
friendship. Without friendship, we may live solitarily and lonely. We cannot use
money to buy friendship as friendship is priceless.

Hence, friendship is more valuable than money. Concluding Sentence

Comment: GOOD! A comparison

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*ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:

*Low Frequency Words

1. monotony of life
2. live solitarily

PARAGRAPH 5 (CONCLUSION)
To conclude, we must determine our priorities in life and identify the most Concluding Line(s)
valuable thing in life. *Fresh rephrasing of the
topic
In my opinion, I still strongly disagree that the most valuable thing in life is money. Restate your stand /
This is because we cannot exchange money for family, health and friendship. opinion
&
Summarise your 3
points
Everyone should be aware of their purpose in life. They should not be materialistic Hope / Suggestion
and enslaved by wealth. This is to ensure a normal and meaningful life.

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Task 2

You are advised to spend about 50 minutes on this task.

NOTE:
You attended a talk by a well-known motivational speaker, which was organised by your university. The
This sample essay was a
following comment was made by the guest speaker: Band 5 in the old format, but
in the new format, students
“The most valuable thing in life is money.” are advised NOT to change
the key words (money) to
Write an essay expressing your opinion on the statement. Write at least 250 words. family, health, friendship.
This is due to the fear that
DISCURSIVE/ARGUMENTATIVE students might lose marks
[60 marks]
ESSAY for off-topic discussions
(without discussing money).
PARAGRAPH 1 (INTRODUCTION)
Our life is precious and invaluable. As human beings, we need to identify the most
Introduce the
valuable thing in life so that we can life a meaningful life. The question is, what is the most valuable topic
thing in our life? In my opinion, I totally disagree that the most valuable thing in life is money.
Stand
Although money can be used to buy a lot of things and fulfil our material goal, it can only bring
Thesis
short-term happiness. Instead, the most valuable thing in life is family, health and friendship. Statement

PARAGRAPH 2 (POINT NO. 1)

First and foremost, family is the most important and valuable thing in life, but not money. Topic Sentence
Family is a precious gift of our life. Without family, we may not be able to live a fruitful life.
E1
Family means love, encouragement, understanding and hope. We can experience love in a family,
but money can’t buy us love. It is the family love that enable us to live a meaningful life. Parents’
love gives us a sense of security and provide us with all-time support when we get into hot water.
For example, whenever we experience a breakup, parents can support us and encourage us to be Ex1

strong. When we have been fired from a job, parents can give us constructive criticism and offer
EEx1
valuable suggestions to help us getting through a stressful time with a minimum of difficulty. It is
clear that open-minded parents can mould our life by boosting our self-esteem and they can bring
out the best in us. Next, Parents also give us unconditional love which help to boost our mental E2
happiness. They love us and remain with us through thick and thin. They love us no matter what
life throws at us and do not expect anything in return. We are never alone in facing life obstacles.
This is because parents can encourage us and give us the impetus to try hard without fear and we
will have sheer determination to achieve our goals in life. For instance, when someone plans to Ex2

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start a business from scratch, he or she may face a lot of challenges. With the encouragement and
support of family, he or she will be able to gradually build a business empire. We cannot fulfil our EEx2

goals without the all-time support provides by our parents. Even though we have lots of money,
we may give up easily and cannot achieve success in life if we do not have a supportive family.
Concluding
Therefore, family is the most precious and valuable thing in our life compare to money. Sentence

PARAGRAPH 3 (POINT NO. 2)

Furthermore, health is more valuable in our life instead of money. As the saying goes, Topic Sentence
“Health is better than wealth”. We must take good care of our health so that we can enjoy our
wealth. However, we cannot enjoy our wealth if we are sick. We must work hard to widen our E1
spectrum of knowledge on how to stay healthy. We must practise healthy lifestyle and cultivate
good eating habits. If we have a balanced diet, we can avoid from being succumbing to diseases.
For example, to stay healthy, we must eat enough fruits and vegetables, avoid eating junk food and Ex1
do not indulge in alcohol and tobacco. This is utmost important to rejuvenate our body and we will EEx1
be less susceptible to chronic disease like cancer and diabetes. Besides, health is more valuable E2
than money because we can live a normal life with a strong body. Bear in mind that money can’t
buy us health. Instead of accumulating wealth through a busy job, we should cultivate a healthy
lifestyle. For instance, regular physical exercise and adequate sleep is crucial to ensure our pristine Ex2
health. When we engage in outdoor activities, we will be away from stress and feel invigorated.
This can reduce our stress level and contribute to our happiness in life. Regular physical exercise
EEx2
can protect us from health deterioration and debilitating disease. We must also have adequate sleep.
Poor sleeping habits and sleep deprivation always contribute to a higher risk of cardiovascular
disease. Enough sleep can recharge our batteries. For instance, we must sleep at least six to eight
hours a day so that our body can rest and recover. We may overexert our body and work until the
eleventh hour to earn more money. Eventually, we are prone to disease and cannot enjoy our
wealth. Even though we have a lot of wealth, our health suffers if we spend our money on Concluding
unhealthy lifestyles, so when we get sick, we can no longer enjoy our wealth. Thus, health is more Sentence

valuable than wealth and we need a healthy body to live a normal life.

PARAGRAPH 4 (POINT NO. 3)

Last but not least, friendship is important and more valuable than money in life. We cannot Topic Sentence
use money to buy friendship. Friendship is the rainbow of life that colours our horizons with
E1
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invaluable experiences. We should not lose the camaraderie and life experiences that come with
friendship because friendship can bring happiness. It is encouraged to stablish and develop
friendship at our early adolescence period. Positive peer influence is utmost important to mould
our life. For example, good friends can have positive influence on us by advising us not to engage
Ex1
in negative activities like smoking, drinking, drug-taking and vandalism. This can ensure our
bright future and we can live a normal life. Establishing friendship with different people can
EEx2
broaden our social circle and break up the monotony of life. Man is by nature a social animal. We
cannot live without social interaction with others. We need companionship to ensure our mental
and emotional well-being. In addition, friends can be helpful and understanding in times of E2
trouble. To illustrate, we can turn to our friends to express despair and sadness. Friends can be Ex2
good listener and give us emotional support when we get into hot water. As the saying goes, “No EEx1
man is an island”. No one in this world can live alone without friendship. Without friendship, we Concluding
may live solitarily and lonely. We cannot use money to buy friendship as friendship is priceless. Sentence
Hence, friendship is more valuable than money.

PARAGRAPH 5 (CONCLUSION)

To conclude, we must determine our priorities in life and identify the most valuable thing Concluding
Line(s)
in life. In my opinion, I still strongly disagree that the most valuable thing in life is money. This is
because we cannot exchange money for family, health and friendship. Everyone should be aware Restate
Concluding
Stand/Opinion
Sentence
of their purpose in life. They should not be materialistic and enslaved by wealth. This is to ensure & Summarise 3
a normal and meaningful life. Points
Hope/Suggestio
Comment: GOOD! A comparison must be made between n
family and money.

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Teacher’s Comments

Task Fulfilment (TF) -good response to the task

-develop ideas reasonably well
-information- well-linked
Language & Organisation (L) -meaning comes across very clearly
-able to LINK ideas effectively
-shows reasonable evidence of planning
-use a variety of cohesive devices
-a variety of sentence structures
-display reasonably confident control of language
*demonstrate the use of Low Frequency Words (LFW)

MUET Band 5

CEFR Level C1

Important Notes!!!

Low Frequency Words (LFW)

A. LFW is a MUST for C1 as it differentiates C candidates from other candidates.
B. Minimum 3 @ 4 LFW for higher language scores
C. List of LFW in this essay:
1. constructive criticism 10. invigorated
2. life obstacles 11. health deterioration
3. impetus 12. debilitating disease
4. sheer determination 13. sleep deprivation
5. spectrum of knowledge 14. cardiovascular disease
6. cultivate 15. overexert
7. succumbing 16. prone to
8. rejuvenate 17. monotony of life
9. less susceptible 18. live solitarily

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Task 2

You are advised to spend about 50 minutes on this task.

You attended a talk by a famous educator, which was organized by your school. The following statement was
made by the guest speaker:

“It is better to study abroad than at local universities.”

Do you agree with this statement? Write at least 250 words.

ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY [60 marks]

PLAN OF DEVELOPMENT

PARAGRAPH 1 (INTRODUCTION)
Every student has to set their own goals in pursuing higher education. Many Introduce the topic
students are looking forward to further their studies at foreign countries. Some may *Refer to the question

choose to study locally because of the familiar environment and more affordable costs. and choose ANY WORD
to start your essay.
From my point of view, I totally agree that it is better to study abroad than at a local Stand
university. *Write your stand in
ONE SENTENCE.
This is because when studying abroad, students are able to become more Thesis statement
independent, widen their horizons and form rewarding relationships. *LAST SENTENCE of
paragraph 1. Write 3
POINTS in the thesis
statement in ONE
SENTENCE.

PARAGRAPH 2 (POINT NO. 1)

First and foremost, students can be more independent when studying abroad. Topic Sentence (T)
*SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.

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Point no. 1 should be
written there.
Studying abroad means that students need to step out of their comfort zone and stay Elaboration 1 (E1)
away from their families. This is a new challenge for students, giving them the * Give the first
explanation for your
opportunity to develop their abilities and hone their skills.
TOPIC SENTENCE.

For example, they need to enhance their organizational skills to manage their daily Example 1 (Ex1)
life, which includes planning for food, clothing, studies, accommodation and
transportation.
They need to be responsible for their daily life and learn to be self-disciplined when it Elaboration to
comes to spending. It is important to plan their own financial budget so that they will example 1 (EEx1)
not overspend and get themselves into hot water. This is also a good way for them to
master problem-solving and decision-making skills.

Besides, students need to develop adaptability skills so that they can adapt well to new Elaboration 2 (E2)
environment at foreign land. They need to build mental resilience and greater * Give the second
explanation for your
flexibility to adapt to new surroundings.
TOPIC SENTENCE.

For instance, students may face culture shock at foreign land which requires them to Example 2 (Ex2)
come up with effective solutions to cope with their problems and learn to be Comment:
independent. Can elaborate more

When they can showcase sheer determination and try their best to overcome the Elaboration to
problems encountered while studying abroad, they will become more mature and example 2 (EEx2)
independent.

Therefore, students learn to cut the cord and stop depending on their parents while Concluding Sentence
studying abroad. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*Low Frequency Words
1. hone

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2. organizational skills
3. adaptability skills
4. mental resilience
5. greater flexibility
6. sheer determination

PARAGRAPH 3 (POINT NO. 2)

Furthermore, students can broaden their horizons and gain new perspectives Topic Sentence (T)
while studying abroad. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 2 should be
written there.
They can experience different culture at foreign countries, which includes the Elaboration 1 (E1)
language, custom, traditional food, costume and festival. * Give the first
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.

For example, when they further their studies at western countries, they get the chance Example 1 (Ex1)
to celebrate the western festivals like Halloween.
This is a unique experience that allows them to better understand the cultural life in a Elaboration to
foreign country. example 1 (EEx1)

They can also widen their spectrum of knowledge of foreign cultural backgrounds. Elaboration 2 (E2)
* Give the second
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.

For instance, students who further their studies at Japan can get acquainted with the Example 2 (Ex2)
monoculture of Japan.
They get new perspective on how Japanese live and able to think objectively about Elaboration to
oneself. example 2 (EEx2)
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Additionally, open-mindedness is of utmost importance to enable students to tolerate Elaboration 3 (E3)

differences and understand a phenomenon from a worldwide perspective. Students * Give the second
explanation for your
need to show mutual understanding and reciprocal respect when they mingle with
TOPIC SENTENCE.
other people of different cultural background. Comment:
Can elaborate more
To illustrate, a Malaysian student who study at Italy needs to tolerate differences Example 3 (Ex3)
between Eastern and Western culture.
It is important that students recognize and appreciate cultural diversity in order to live Elaboration to
together in harmony. As a result, students who study abroad will be more open-minded example 3 (EEx3)
and more tolerant.

Thus, studying abroad enables students to broaden their horizons and gain new Concluding Sentence
perspectives. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*Low Frequency Words
1. spectrum of knowledge
2. acquainted
3. monoculture
4. mutual understanding
5. reciprocal respect
6. cultural diversity

PARAGRAPH 4 (POINT NO. 3)

Last but not least, studying abroad offers students the opportunity to form new Topic Sentence (T)
and rewarding relationships. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 3 should be
written there.

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When they further their studies at foreign universities, they get to meet new classmates Elaboration 1 (E1)
of different nationalities and cultural background. * Give the first
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.

For example, students will experience studying in a large community in foreign Example 1 (Ex1)
universities where there are lots of students from all around the globe.
This offers students a golden opportunity to meet new people and broaden their social Elaboration to
circles. They can mingle with each other, forming new friendships and breaking up example 1 (EEx1)
the monotony of life. They can hone their social skills by communicating with other
students from different countries.

In addition, forming new relationships are rewarding. This is because students can Elaboration 2 (E2)
have fun and enjoy sharing experiences with new friends. * Give the second
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.

To illustrate, they can have someone around to console them and provide them Example 2 (Ex2)
companionship when they are feeling homesick.
The emotional supports provided by others who have the same experience will help Elaboration to
students to overcome their homesickness while studying abroad. As the saying goes, example 2 (EEx2)
“No man is an island”. No one in this world can live alone without friendship. When
they graduated, they still can meet each other virtually through social media such as
Facebook, Instagram and Twitter. The ubiquitous internet enables them to keep in
touch regardless of the geographical limitations. These relationships formed during
university life can last a lifetime.

Hence, students can form genuine camaraderie while studying abroad. Concluding Sentence
*ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:

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*Low Frequency Words
1. monotony of life
2. ubiquitous
3. geographical limitations

PARAGRAPH 5 (CONCLUSION)
To recapitulate, there are lots of advantages when studying abroad. Concluding Line(s)
*Fresh rephrasing of the
topic
Personally, I still strongly believe that it is better to study abroad then at local university. This Restate your stand /
is because students can be more independent, broaden their horizons and form new opinion
relationships. &
Summarise your 3
points
Hopefully, every student can make a wise decision by furthering their studies abroad Hope / Suggestion
to reap the benefits and become a more mature person in the future.

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Task 2

You are advised to spend about 50 minutes on this task.

You attended a talk by a famous educator, which was organized by your school. The following statement was
made by the guest speaker:

“It is better to study abroad than at local universities.”

Do you agree with this statement? Write at least 250 words.

ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY [60 marks]

PARAGRAPH 1 (INTRODUCTION)
Every student has to set their own goals in pursuing higher education. Many students are
Introduce the
looking forward to further their studies at foreign countries. Some may choose to study locally topic
because of the familiar environment and more affordable costs. From my point of view, I totally
Stand
agree that it is better to study abroad than at a local university. This is because when studying
abroad, students are able to become more independent, widen their horizons and form Thesis
Statement
rewarding relationships.

PARAGRAPH 2 (POINT NO. 1)

First and foremost, students can be more independent when studying abroad. Studying Topic Sentence
abroad means that students need to step out of their comfort zone and stay away from their families.
E1
This is a new challenge for students, giving them the opportunity to develop their abilities and
hone their skills. For example, they need to enhance their organizational skills to manage their
Ex1
daily life, which includes planning for food, clothing, studies, accommodation and transportation.
They need to be responsible for their daily life and learn to be self-disciplined when it comes to
EEx1
spending. It is important to plan their own financial budget so that they will not overspend and get
themselves into hot water. This is also a good way for them to master problem-solving and
decision-making skills. Besides, students need to develop adaptability skills so that they can adapt E2

well to new environment at foreign land. They need to build mental resilience and greater
flexibility to adapt to new surroundings. For instance, students may face culture shock at foreign Ex2
land which requires them to come up with effective solutions to cope with their problems and learn
to be independent. When they can showcase sheer determination and try their best to overcome EEx2

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the problems encountered while studying abroad, they will become more mature and independent.
Concluding
Therefore, students learn to cut the cord and stop depending on their parents while studying abroad.
Sentence

PARAGRAPH 3 (POINT NO. 2)

Furthermore, students can broaden their horizons and gain new perspectives while Topic Sentence
studying abroad. They can experience different culture at foreign countries, which includes the E1
language, custom, traditional food, costume and festival. For example, when they further their Ex1
studies at western countries, they get the chance to celebrate the western festivals like Halloween. EEx1
This is a unique experience that allows them to better understand the cultural life in a foreign E2
country. They can also widen their spectrum of knowledge of foreign cultural backgrounds. For
Ex2
instance, students who further their studies at Japan can get acquainted with the monoculture of
Japan. They get new perspective on how Japanese live and able to think objectively about oneself. EEx2
Additionally, open-mindedness is of utmost importance to enable students to tolerate differences E3
and understand a phenomenon from a worldwide perspective. Students need to show mutual
understanding and reciprocal respect when they mingle with other people of different cultural
background. To illustrate, a Malaysian student who study at Italy needs to tolerate differences Ex3
between Eastern and Western culture. It is important that students recognize and appreciate
cultural diversity in order to live together in harmony. As a result, students who study abroad will EEx3

be more open-minded and more tolerant. Thus, studying abroad enables students to broaden their Concluding
Sentence
horizons and gain new perspectives.

PARAGRAPH 4 (POINT NO. 3)

Last but not least, studying abroad offers students the opportunity to form new and Topic Sentence
rewarding relationships. When they further their studies at foreign universities, they get to meet
E1
new classmates of different nationalities and cultural background. For example, students will
experience studying in a large community in foreign universities where there are lots of students Ex1
from all around the globe. This offers students a golden opportunity to meet new people and
EEx1
broaden their social circles. They can mingle with each other, forming new friendships and
breaking up the monotony of life. They can hone their social skills by communicating with other
students from different countries. In addition, forming new relationships are rewarding. This is E2
because students can have fun and enjoy sharing experiences with new friends. To illustrate, they
Ex2
can have someone around to console them and provide them companionship when they are feeling
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homesick. The emotional supports provided by others who have the same experience will help EEx2
students to overcome their homesickness while studying abroad. As the saying goes, “No man is
an island”. No one in this world can live alone without friendship. When they graduated, they still
can meet each other virtually through social media such as Facebook, Instagram and Twitter. The
ubiquitous internet enables them to keep in touch regardless of the geographical limitations. These Concluding
relationships formed during university life can last a lifetime. Hence, students can form genuine Sentence
camaraderie while studying abroad.

PARAGRAPH 5 (CONCLUSION)
Concluding
To recapitulate, there are lots of advantages when studying abroad. Personally, I still strongly Line(s)
believe that it is better to study abroad then at local university. This is because students can be more Restate
independent, broaden their horizons and form new relationships. Hopefully, every student can make Stand/Opinion
Concluding
& Summarise
Sentence 3
a wise decision by furthering their studies abroad to reap the benefits and become a more mature Points
person in the future. Hope/Suggestio
n

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Teacher’s Comments

Task Fulfilment (TF) -good response to the task

-develop ideas reasonably well
-information- well-linked
Language & Organisation (L) -meaning comes across very clearly
-able to LINK ideas effectively
-shows reasonable evidence of planning
-use a variety of cohesive devices
-a variety of sentence structures
-display reasonably confident control of language
*demonstrate the use of Low Frequency Words (LFW)

MUET Band 5

CEFR Level C1

Important Notes!!!

Low Frequency Words (LFW)

A. LFW is a MUST for C1 as it differentiates C candidates from other candidates.
B. Minimum 3 @ 4 LFW for higher language scores
C. List of LFW in this essay:
1. hone 9. monoculture
2. organizational skills 10. mutual understanding
3. adaptability skills 11. reciprocal respect
4. mental resilience 12. cultural diversity
5. greater flexibility 13. monotony of life
6. sheer determination 14. ubiquitous
7. spectrum of knowledge 15. geographical limitations
8. acquainted

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WRITING- TASKBAND
18– MUET 2 SAMPLE
5 ESSAYS
Task 2

You are advised to spend about 50 minutes on this task.

You have watched a documentary about the growing concern on the dependence on computer. The following
remark was made in the documentary:

“Today, we are becoming increasingly dependent on computers.”

Write an essay expressing your opinion on the statement. Write an essay of at least 250 words.

DISCURSIVE/ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY [60 marks]

PLAN OF DEVELOPMENT

PARAGRAPH 1 (INTRODUCTION)
Computer is an electronic device that manipulates information or data. It has the Introduce the topic
ability to store and process data. We can use a computer to type documents, send *Refer to the question
and choose ANY WORD
email, play games and browse the website. We can also use computer to create
to start your essay.
presentations or videos. There are different types of computers such as desktop
computers, laptop computers, tablet computers and servers.
Personally, I agree with the statement that we are becoming increasingly dependent Stand (Compulsory)
on computers. *Write your stand in
ONE SENTENCE.
(You will NOT BE
PENALISED if you
write- I agree / disagree
with the statement)
We are dependent on computers in our daily life, in education field and also business Thesis statement
sector. *LAST SENTENCE of
paragraph 1. Write 3
POINTS in the thesis
statement in ONE
SENTENCE.

PARAGRAPH 2 (POINT NO. 1)

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First and foremost, we are dependent on computers in our daily life. Topic Sentence (T)
*SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 1 should be
written there.
Nowadays, it is a necessity to use a computer in daily life. Computers are used for Elaboration 1 (E1)
different purposes. * Give the first
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.

For example, some people use computer to take online classes while some people use Example 1 (Ex1)
computer to do online business.
Almost all daily activities are based on online services and products that can be done Elaboration to
through computers. example 1 (EEx1)

Next, people in different roles needs computers to complete everyday tasks. Elaboration 2 (E2)
* Give the second
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.

For instance, consumers need a computer to buy online products through Shopee or Example 2 (Ex2)
Lazada. Students need computer to search relevant information to complete school
projects. Employees need computer to create presentations and write reports.
Employees can even telecommute by using computer. For household, they need
computer to help manage monthly expenses such as using Excel spreadsheet.
By using computer application, it can save our money, time, and also provide various Elaboration to
entertainment like watching videos, playing games and listening to music. example 2 (EEx2)

Thus, people depend a lot on computers in their daily life for various purposes. Concluding Sentence
*ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.

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NOTES:
*Low Frequency Words
1. telecommute

PARAGRAPH 3 (POINT NO. 2)

Furthermore, computer is a vital tool in education field. Topic Sentence (T)
*SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 2 should be
written there.
Educational institutions around the world use the information and communication Elaboration 1 (E1)
technology to teach students digitally and creatively. Schools and colleges use * Give the first
explanation for your
computers in classrooms to enhance creativity and imagination among students.
TOPIC SENTENCE.
Teachers are dependent on computers to teach their students and manage their classes.

To give an example, teachers use computer to do PowerPoint presentations, showing Example 1 (Ex1)
pictures and videos to students during classes to boost the impetus of learning.
This can provide new learning experiences for students and make learning process Elaboration to
more interesting. Students can learn deeply and excitedly through computer. example 1 (EEx1)

Besides, computers reinvent the education system. Colleges and universities use Elaboration 2 (E2)
computer to conduct online courses and online degree programs for college students. * Give the second
explanation for your
Since computers have access to the ubiquitous Internet, distance education is possible,
TOPIC SENTENCE.
which reduces the cost of education.

For instance, students are able to learn from home without having to pay for uniforms, Example 2 (Ex2)
accommodation fees and transportation fees.
This can save students’ time, energy, and money. Elaboration to
example 2 (EEx2)

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Therefore, computer plays a very important role in education field. Concluding Sentence
*ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*Low Frequency Words
1. digitally
2. impetus
3. ubiquitous
4. distance education

PARAGRAPH 4 (POINT NO. 3)

Last but not least, computers become increasingly prominent in business sector. Topic Sentence (T)
*SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 3 should be
written there.
Computer plays a vital role in business management as it enables businessman to Elaboration 1 (E1)
manage their business well. Computers are used for marketing, financial, accounting, * Give the first
explanation for your
production, and communication purposes.
TOPIC SENTENCE.

To illustrate, companies use computer to do business planning and record customer Example 1 (Ex1)
data. Almost all kinds of businesses use computers in their daily official works like
Powerpoint for project presentations.
Computer can facilitate business management and also business dealings. Elaboration to
example 1 (EEx1)

In addition, online business can be conducted through computer. We cannot imagine Elaboration 2 (E2)
daily business operations around the world without the use of computer technologies.

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* Give the second
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.

To wit, businesses and companies use computer to do digital marketing, sell products Example 2 (Ex2)
and services online. They can hire employees from all around the world through the
use of computers and internet.
By doing so, companies grow their customer base faster. Consumers can have a lot of Elaboration to
options to choose the best product or service through the use of internet. example 2 (EEx2)

Hence, businesses can maximize their profit and minimize their management cost by Concluding Sentence
using computer. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:

*Low Frequency Words

1. prominent
2. digital marketing

PARAGRAPH 5 (CONCLUSION)
To recapitulate, computer plays a vital role in almost every sector nowadays. Concluding Line(s)
*Fresh rephrasing of the
topic
In my view, I still firmly believe that we are becoming increasingly dependent on Restate your stand /
computers. This is because computers are widely use in our daily activities, in opinion
education field, as well as in business sector. &
Summarise your 3
points
Computers have revolutionized our lives and make our life easier. We need to use Hope / Suggestion
computer wisely in order to reap the benefits and improve our living standard.

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Task 2

You are advised to spend about 50 minutes on this task.

You have watched a documentary about the growing concern on the dependence on computer. The following
remark was made in the documentary:

“Today, we are becoming increasingly dependent on computers.”

Write an essay expressing your opinion on the statement. Write an essay of at least 250 words.

DISCURSIVE/ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY [60 marks]

PARAGRAPH 1 (INTRODUCTION)
Computer is an electronic device that manipulates information or data. It has the ability to
Introduce the
store and process data. We can use a computer to type documents, send email, play games and topic
browse the website. We can also use computer to create presentations or videos. There are different
types of computers such as desktop computers, laptop computers, tablet computers and servers. Stand
Personally, I agree with the statement that we are becoming increasingly dependent on computers.
Thesis
We are dependent on computers in our daily life, in education field and also business sector.
Statement

PARAGRAPH 2 (POINT NO. 1)

First and foremost, we are dependent on computers in our daily life. Nowadays, it is a Topic Sentence
necessity to use a computer in daily life. Computers are used for different purposes. For example, E1
some people use computer to take online classes while some people use computer to do online Ex1
business. Almost all daily activities are based on online services and products that can be done EEx1
through computers. Next, people in different roles needs computers to complete everyday tasks. E2
For instance, consumers need a computer to buy online products through Shopee or Lazada.
Students need computer to search relevant information to complete school projects. Employees Ex2

need computer to create presentations and write reports. Employees can even telecommute by
using computer. For household, they need computer to help manage monthly expenses such as
EEx2
using Excel spreadsheet. By using computer application, it can save our money, time, and also
provide various entertainment like watching videos, playing games and listening to music. Thus,
Concluding
people depend a lot on computers in their daily life for various purposes. Sentence

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PARAGRAPH 3 (POINT NO. 2)

Topic Sentence
Furthermore, computer is a vital tool in education field. Educational institutions around
the world use the information and communication technology to teach students digitally and
E1
creatively. Schools and colleges use computers in classrooms to enhance creativity and
imagination among students. Teachers are dependent on computers to teach their students and
manage their classes. To give an example, teachers use computer to do PowerPoint presentations, Ex1
showing pictures and videos to students during classes to boost the impetus of learning. This can
EEx1
provide new learning experiences for students and make learning process more interesting.
Students can learn deeply and excitedly through computer. Besides, computers reinvent the E2
education system. Colleges and universities use computer to conduct online courses and online
degree programs for college students. Since computers have access to the ubiquitous Internet,
distance education is possible, which reduces the cost of education. For instance, students are able
Ex2
to learn from home without having to pay for uniforms, accommodation fees and transportation
EEx2
fees. This can save students’ time, energy, and money. Therefore, computer plays a very important
Concluding
role in education field.
Sentence

PARAGRAPH 4 (POINT NO. 3)

Last but not least, computers become increasingly prominent in business sector. Computer Topic Sentence
plays a vital role in business management as it enables businessman to manage their business well.
Computers are used for marketing, financial, accounting, production, and communication
E1
purposes. To illustrate, companies use computer to do business planning and record customer data.
Ex1
Almost all kinds of businesses use computers in their daily official works like Powerpoint for
EEx1
project presentations. Computer can facilitate business management and also business dealings. In
addition, online business can be conducted through computer. We cannot imagine daily business E2
operations around the world without the use of computer technologies. To wit, businesses and
Ex2
companies use computer to do digital marketing, sell products and services online. They can hire
employees from all around the world through the use of computers and internet. By doing so, EEx2

companies grow their customer base faster. Consumers can have a lot of options to choose the best
product or service through the use of internet. Hence, businesses can maximize their profit and
Concluding
minimize their management cost by using computer. Sentence
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PARAGRAPH 5 (CONCLUSION)

To recapitulate, computer plays a vital role in almost every sector nowadays. In my view, Concluding
Line(s)
I still firmly believe that we are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. This is because
Restate
computers are widely use in our daily activities, in education field, as well as in business sector. Stand/Opinion
Computers have revolutionized our lives and make our life easier. We need to use computer wisely & Summarise 3
Points
in order to reap the benefits and improve our living standard.
Hope/Suggestio
n

Teacher’s Comments

Task Fulfilment (TF) -good response to the task

-develop ideas reasonably well
-show reasonably mature treatment of the topic
Language & Organisation (L) -appropriate and varied vocabulary
-able to LINK ideas effectively
-organization of paragraph - coherent
-use a variety of cohesive devices
-a variety of sentence structures
-display reasonably confident control of language
*demonstrate the use of Low Frequency Words (LFW)
MUET Band 5

CEFR Level C1

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Important Notes!!!

Low Frequency Words (LFW)

A. LFW is a MUST for C1 as it differentiates C candidates from other candidates.
B. Minimum 3 @ 4 LFW for higher language scores
C. List of LFW in this essay:
1. telecommute
2. digitally
3. impetus
4. ubiquitous
5. distance education
6. prominent
7. digital marketing

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Task 2

You are advised to spend about 50 minutes on this task.

You attended a talk by a famous environmentalist, which was organized by your school during “Environment
Week”. The following statement was made by the guest speaker:

“We should advocate the preservation of a high percentage of green lungs in urban areas.”

Write an essay expressing your opinion on the statement. Write at least 250 words.

DISCURSIVE/ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY [60 marks]

PLAN OF DEVELOPMENT

PARAGRAPH 1 (INTRODUCTION)
Forests are the green lungs of Mother Earth. Do you know that forests act as Introduce the topic
green lungs that provide fresh air to us to breathe? The air now is polluted by smoke *Refer to the question
and choose ANY WORD
emitted by vehicles and factories due to rapid development. Forests all over the world
to start your essay.
are vanishing at an alarming rate. Awareness and knowledge about the conservation
of forests are still low.
I totally agree with the statement that we should preserve the high percentage of green Stand
lungs in urban areas. *Write your stand in
ONE SENTENCE.
(You will NOT BE
PENALISED if you
write- I agree / disagree
with the statement)
This is because we need to safeguard green lungs against further degradation and Thesis statement
destruction due to development, and green lungs contribute to good urban climate *LAST SENTENCE of
paragraph 1. Write 3
and sustainable development of urban areas.
POINTS in the thesis
statement in ONE
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*Low Frequency Words
1. degradation
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2. sustainable development

PARAGRAPH 2 (POINT NO. 1)

First and foremost, we need to safeguard green lungs against further Topic Sentence (T)
degradation and destruction due to development. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 1 should be
written there.
The forests act as habitats for flora and fauna, suppliers of raw materials and places of Elaboration 1 (E1)
recreation. Forests are rich in rare plants and animals’ pieces on earth. However, a lot * Give the first
explanation for your
of forests are cleared for different purposes.
TOPIC SENTENCE.

For example, forests are being explored for development such as industries and tourist Example 1 (Ex1)
spots that are related to money.
As a result, due to rapid development, the forests are disappearing tremendously. Elaboration to
example 1 (EEx1)

Immediate actions need to be taken to preserve green lungs in urban areas. Laws Elaboration 2 (E2)
should be reinforced to ban the mass burn down of trees in urban areas to protect * Give the second
explanation for your
wildlife and their habitats. Some green zones in urban areas should be retained in order
TOPIC SENTENCE.
to make sure that the green lungs can function properly.

For instance, urban green space in Kuala Lumpur takes the form of parks, gardens and Example 2 (Ex2)
urban forests.
By doing so, the green lungs are protected and it can ensure a better air quality in urban Elaboration to
areas. example 2 (EEx2)

Therefore, it is vital to protect the green lungs from further damage caused by Concluding Sentence
development.

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*ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.

PARAGRAPH 3 (POINT NO. 2)

Furthermore, green lungs contribute to good urban climate by reducing the Topic Sentence (T)
impact of global warming. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 2 should be
written there.
Forests contribute significantly to oxygen generation and carbon storage. As green Elaboration 1 (E1)
lungs, they provide a multitude of ecosystem services for the constantly growing cities. * Give the first
explanation for your
They clean the air by binding CO2 and exhausted gas particles.
TOPIC SENTENCE.

For example, through photosynthesis, trees absorb carbon dioxide from the air to help Example 1 (Ex1)
their leaves, branches and roots grow.
As a result, by-product of photosynthesis is oxygen. At the same time, they provide Elaboration to
shade and cool down their surroundings by releasing humidity. The temperature- example 1 (EEx1)
regulating effect of forests on their surroundings is why urban parks or green spaces
are especially popular during hot periods.

Besides, all these qualities are of highest relevance in view of progressing climate Elaboration 2 (E2)
change. * Give the second
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.

For instance, forests increase oxygen level which help to regulate the temperature Example 2 (Ex2)
levels and protect the citizens from heat wave.
However, the deforestation process has resulted in a less oxygen level in urban areas Elaboration to
and has incresed air pollution. The environment is also more susceptible to heat waves, example 2 (EEx2)
droughts, storms or heavy rainfall.

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Thus, there is no doubt that the green lungs in urban areas need to be preserved as Concluding Sentence
green lungs play a vital role in regulating urban climate. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*Low Frequency Words
1. multitude of ecosystem services
2. binding CO2
3. exhausted gas particles
4. deforestation process
5. susceptible to
6. heat waves

PARAGRAPH 4 (POINT NO. 3)

Last but not emphatically least, we need to retain a high proportion of green Topic Sentence (T)
lungs in urban areas, because green lungs can ensure the sustainable development *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
of urban areas.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 3 should be
written there.
By bringing plant life into the town centre, planting trees along roads and planting Elaboration 1 (E1)
more forest species to bring the jungle into the city, the citizens will be able to enjoy * Give the first
explanation for your
an improved air quality. The forest contributes to ecological balance as it maintains
TOPIC SENTENCE.
the hydrologic cycle and the oxygen cycles.

For example, the urban green spaces in Kuala Lumpur preserve trees in urban areas Example 1 (Ex1)
that increase the release of oxygen and absorb more carbon from the atmosphere.
Urban forests are known to provide important ecosystem services such as the Elaboration to
improvement of air quality with a significant positive impact on human health by example 1 (EEx1)
removing gaseous and particulate pollutants.

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This will result in the reduction of mortality and morbidity. Elaboration 2 (E2)
* Give the second
explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.

To illustrate, without the support of ecosystem, human being may not be able to live Example 2 (Ex2)
any longer because severe air pollution and natural disaster like droughts, storms or
heavy rainfall will occur.
Town planning is required to preserve green lungs in urban areas and reduce air Elaboration to
pollution. example 2 (EEx2)

Hence, this can ensure a sustainable development of urban areas and the nature will Concluding Sentence
not sacrificed in the name of development. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*Low Frequency Words
1. ecological balance
2. hydrologic cycle
3. oxygen cycle
4. gaseous and particulate pollutants
5. mortality
6. morbidity

PARAGRAPH 5 (CONCLUSION)
In conclusion, forests should be preserved as forests act as green lungs in urban Concluding Line(s)
areas. *Fresh rephrasing of the
topic
From my point of view, I still firmly believe that we should preserve the high Restate your stand /
percentage of green lungs in urban areas. This is important to prevent further opinion
degradation of nature due to development, and green lungs contributes to good &
urban climate as well as ensure a sustainable urban development.

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Summarise your 3
points
Therefore, proper actions should be taken to preserve green lungs. Government and Hope / Suggestion
communities should work hand in hand to enhance the resilience of urban forests and
ensure ecosystem services.

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Task 2

You are advised to spend about 50 minutes on this task.

You attended a talk by a famous environmentalist, which was organized by your school during “Environment
Week”. The following statement was made by the guest speaker:

“We should advocate the preservation of a high percentage of green lungs in urban areas.”

Write an essay expressing your opinion on the statement. Write at least 250 words.

DISCURSIVE/ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY [60 marks]

PARAGRAPH 1 (INTRODUCTION)
Forests are the green lungs of Mother Earth. Do you know that forests act as green lungs
Introduce the
that provide fresh air to us to breathe? The air now is polluted by smoke emitted by vehicles and topic
factories due to rapid development. Forests all over the world are vanishing at an alarming rate.
Awareness and knowledge about the conservation of forests are still low. I totally agree with the Stand
statement that we should preserve the high percentage of green lungs in urban areas. This is
because we need to safeguard green lungs against further degradation and destruction due to Thesis
development, and green lungs contribute to good urban climate and sustainable development Statement

of urban areas.

PARAGRAPH 2 (POINT NO. 1)

First and foremost, we need to safeguard green lungs against further degradation and Topic Sentence
destruction due to development. The forests act as habitats for flora and fauna, suppliers of raw
materials and places of recreation. Forests are rich in rare plants and animals’ pieces on earth. E1
However, a lot of forests are cleared for different purposes. For example, forests are being explored
Ex1
for development such as industries and tourist spots that are related to money. As a result, due to
EEx1
rapid development, the forests are disappearing tremendously. Immediate actions need to be taken
to preserve green lungs in urban areas. Laws should be reinforced to ban the mass burn down of E2
trees in urban areas to protect wildlife and their habitats. Some green zones in urban areas should
be retained in order to make sure that the green lungs can function properly. For instance, urban Ex2
green space in Kuala Lumpur takes the form of parks, gardens and urban forests. By doing so, the EEx2
green lungs are protected and it can ensure a better air quality in urban areas. Therefore, it is vital
Concluding
to protect the green lungs from further damage caused by development. Sentence

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PARAGRAPH 3 (POINT NO. 2)

Furthermore, green lungs contribute to good urban climate by reducing the impact of Topic Sentence
global warming. Forests contribute significantly to oxygen generation and carbon storage. As E1
green lungs, they provide a multitude of ecosystem services for the constantly growing cities. They
clean the air by binding CO2 and exhausted gas particles. For example, through photosynthesis, Ex1
trees absorb carbon dioxide from the air to help their leaves, branches and roots grow. As a result,
EEx1
by-product of photosynthesis is oxygen. At the same time, they provide shade and cool down their
surroundings by releasing humidity. The temperature-regulating effect of forests on their
surroundings is why urban parks or green spaces are especially popular during hot periods. E2
Besides, all these qualities are of highest relevance in view of progressing climate change. For
Ex2
instance, forests increase oxygen level which help to regulate the temperature levels and protect
EEx2
the citizens from heat wave. However, the deforestation process has resulted in a less oxygen level
in urban areas and has incresed air pollution. The environment is also more susceptible to heat
waves, droughts, storms or heavy rainfall. Thus, there is no doubt that the green lungs in urban Concluding
areas need to be preserved as green lungs play a vital role in regulating urban climate. Sentence

PARAGRAPH 4 (POINT NO. 3)

Last but not emphatically least, we need to retain a high proportion of green lungs in urban Topic Sentence
areas, because green lungs can ensure the sustainable development of urban areas. By bringing
E1
plant life into the town centre, planting trees along roads and planting more forest species to bring
the jungle into the city, the citizens will be able to enjoy an improved air quality. The forest
contributes to ecological balance as it maintains the hydrologic cycle and the oxygen cycles. For Ex1
example, the urban green spaces in Kuala Lumpur preserve trees in urban areas that increase the
release of oxygen and absorb more carbon from the atmosphere. Urban forests are known to EEx1
provide important ecosystem services such as the improvement of air quality with a significant
positive impact on human health by removing gaseous and particulate pollutants. This will result E2
in the reduction of mortality and morbidity. To illustrate, without the support of ecosystem, human Ex2
being may not be able to live any longer because severe air pollution and natural disaster like
EEx2
droughts, storms or heavy rainfall will occur. Town planning is required to preserve green lungs

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in urban areas and reduce air pollution. Hence, this can ensure a sustainable development of urban Concluding
Sentence
areas and the nature will not sacrificed in the name of development.

PARAGRAPH 5 (CONCLUSION)

In conclusion, forests should be preserved as forests act as green lungs in urban areas. Concluding
Line(s)
From my point of view, I still firmly believe that we should preserve the high percentage of green
Restate
lungs in urban areas. This is important to prevent further degradation of nature due to Stand/Opinion
development, and green lungs contributes to good urban climate as well as ensure a & Summarise 3
Points
sustainable urban development. Therefore, proper actions should be taken to preserve green
Hope/Suggestio
lungs. Government and communities should work hand in hand to enhance the resilience of urban n
forests and ensure ecosystem services.

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Teacher’s Comments

Task Fulfilment (TF) -good response to the task

-viewpoints are presented reasonably well
-info- well-linked
Language & Organisation (L) -meaning comes across very clearly
-appropriate and varied vocabulary
-shows reasonable evidence of planning
-use a variety of cohesive devices
-display reasonably confident control of language
*demonstrate the use of Low Frequency Words (LFW)
MUET Band 5

CEFR Level C1

Important Notes!!!

Low Frequency Words (LFW)

A. LFW is a MUST for C1 as it differentiates C candidates from other candidates.
B. Minimum 3 @ 4 LFW for higher language scores
C. List of LFW in this essay:
1. degradation 11. ecological balance
2. sustainable development 12. gaseous and particulate pollutants
3. multitude of ecosystem 13. mortality
4. binding CO2 14. morbidity
5. exhausted gas particles
6. deforestation process
7. susceptible
8. heat waves
9. hydrologic cycle
10. oxygen cycle

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