How to Paraphrase 02
How to Paraphrase 02
Paraphrasing is simply re-writing a phrase or sentence so that it has the same meaning but with different words.
Paraphrasing is one of the most important skills to learn before doing your IELTS test. It is most important for
writing and speaking, but will also help you in the reading and listening tests. In other words, if you know how to
paraphrase, you are more likely to get the score you need.
The mental processes required to paraphrase will also help you to fully understand the question, and this is one of
the reasons I tell my students to begin all of their answers in the writing test by paraphrasing the question.
Example: Paraphrasing is one of the most important skills to learn before doing your IELTS test.
Paraphrased: Before taking the IELTS test, mastering paraphrasing is one of the most crucial things to do.
As you can see, the second sentence (paraphrased sentence) uses synonyms to change some vocabulary (e.g.,
‘important’ for ‘crucial’ and ‘’prior’’ to ‘before’ and changes the grammar (e.g., Paraphrasing is one of the most
important skills” for “mastering paraphrasing”). You can also change the word order.
You should use these three main methods in the IELTS test to paraphrase sentences. Ideally, you should try to use
all three, but sometimes two will only be possible.
We will now look at each method in detail and also have a look at the passive.
Synonyms are different words that have the same meaning. For example, ‘humans’ is a synonym for ‘people’ and
‘attractive’ is a synonym for ‘beautiful’. This method replaces words with the same meaning to produce a new
sentence.
For example:
As you can see, I have replaced 3 out of four words with synonyms to produce a new sentence with the same
meaning as the first one. You will notice that I didn’t replace all of the words, but you should try to replace most of
them.
This is the most common method that students use, and it can be used effectively, but you should be careful.
Violent crime is on the rise among teenagers./Violent offences are rising among young people.
This student has changed the word ‘teenagers’ to ‘young people’. They are similar words, and teenagers are, of
course, young people; however, children and young adults, aged between 18-30, could also be described as young
people. A more term would be ‘adolescents’ or ‘young people between the ages of 13-19.’ A better way to
paraphrase this sentence would therefore be:
You should, therefore, only use words you are 100% sure about. Don’t change a word unless you are 100% sure that
it is a direct synonym. Otherwise, you are likely to make mistakes, which will lower your score.
Climate change is mainly caused by the release of fumes from motor vehicles.
Changing the word order also allows us to effectively paraphrase a sentence, but again, we have to be careful. Don’t
change the word order without thinking about how this affects the grammar of the sentence. By changing the word
order, you may have to add a word, subtract a word or change the form of the word.
How to Paraphrase in the IELTS Test
The 100% rule applies again; don’t change it if you are not 100% sure it is grammatically correct. Remember that
you are judged on your ability to produce error-free sentences in the IELTS test and use a range of grammar
structures.
Fortunately, there are two straightforward ways to change the word order in most IELTS questions.
1. You can easily change the order of the clauses if the original sentence has more than one clause.
Question: As languages such as Spanish, Chinese and English become more widely used, there is a fear that many
minority languages may die out.
Paraphrased by changing word order: There is a fear that many minority languages may die out, as languages such
as Spanish, Chinese and English become more widely used.
Paraphrased with changing word order AND synonyms: There is dismay that many lesser-used languages may
pass away as languages such as Chinese, English and Spanish become more broadly spoken.
2. You can also change the word order if there is an adjective or noun in the question. You do this by simply
changing the adjective into a relative clause.
Question: Learning to manage money is one of the key aspects of adult life.
There are many different forms of words, including nouns, verbs, adjectives and adverbs. Changing the form of a
word allows us to paraphrase effectively. Again, don’t just change the form of the word; you also need to check that
your changes make grammatical sense. You might need to change the words around it to make the sentence
error-free.
Question: Longer life spans and improvements in the health of older people suggest that people over the age of
sixty-five can continue to live full and active lives.
Paraphrased by changing word form: Longer life spans and improvements in the health of older people are
suggesting that people over the age of sixty-five can continue living full and active lives.
The passive voice is often used in academic writing and can therefore be used in the IELTS academic writing test.
Only verbs with an object can be turned into passive.
Example active sentence: The property developers invested $20 million in the development of the shopping centre.
Example passive sentence: $20 million was invested in the development of shopping centres.
We often use the passive voice in academic writing when we don’t want to say it is our opinion.
Example active: People say that global warming is caused by the burning of fossil fuels.
Example passive: Global warming is said to be caused by the burning of fossil fuels.
The four methods can be used independently or together. I advise my students to try and change the grammar
(word order and/or word form) and use synonyms. Remember only use the methods you feel 100% comfortable
using and ensure your work is error-free.