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1. “WILMINGTON, NC.—The first punch of Hurricane Irene (WHO) landed (WHAT) here
(WHERE) on Friday (WHEN), foreshadowing what is to come as this vast storm, its most forceful
winds stretching outwards for 90 miles, churned north towards New York City
(CONTEXT/ADDITIONAL INFORMATION).”
2. “New York City officials (_who__) issued what they called an unprecedented order
(__what__) on Friday (___when__) for the evacuation of about 250,000 residents of the low-
lying areas of the city’s edges (__where__).”
3. “The Federal Reserve chairman, Ben Bernanke (_who_), said Friday (__when__) that the
political battle this summer over the federal government’s borrowing and spending had
disrupted financial markets ‘and probably the economy as well.’” (_how__). Note that, to avoid
awkwardness, the WHEN comes between the first word of the WHAT—“said”—and the rest of
it.)
4. “The State Department (_who__) gave a crucial green light (__what__) on Friday (__when__)
to a proposed 1,711-mile pipeline that would carry heavy oil from oil sands in Canada across
the Great Plains to terminals in Oklahoma and the Gulf Coast (_where_).”
6. “ABUJA, Nigeria—A suicide bomber (_who__) detonated a vehicle packed with explosives
(WHAT) outside the United Nations headquarters in the Nigerian capital of Abuja (_where_) on
Friday (_when__), destroying several floors in a thunderous blast that left at least 18 people
dead (__why__), witnesses and officials said (_how_).TWO DIE IN MORNING CAR CRASH.
1. From the following facts, write a lede/lead.
What: detonated
Where: 40 miles from a meeting of pacifists and 2,000 feet beneath the surface of Pahute
Mesa in the Nevada desert
When: Tuesday
Other information: Department of Energy officials are the source; 450 physicians and peace
activists were gathered to protest continued nuclear testing by the United States.
On Tuesday, a nuclear weapon with a yield equivalent to 150,000 tons of TNT was
detonated 2,000 feet beneath the surface of Pahute Mesa in the Nevada desert, just 40
miles from a gathering of 450 physicians and peace activists protesting continued
nuclear testing by the United States,
2. From the following facts, write the first two paragraphs of a news story.
Who: 40 passengers
Other information: There was no fire or injuries; the smoke was caused by hydraulic fluids
leaking onto hot landing brakes, according to Bob Gibbons, a Northwest spokesman