A Guide To Literary Study Dickinson, Leon T Leon Townsend, 1912
A Guide To Literary Study Dickinson, Leon T Leon Townsend, 1912
LITERARY
STUDY
Leon T. Dickinson
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BASED ON THE WORK OF NORTON AND RUSHTON
LEON T. DICKINSON
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CONTENTS
Foreword xii
PART ONE
Chapter II—Fiction 11
The nature of fiction 11
The elements of fiction 13
The short story 32
Chapter III—Drama 34
The nature of drama 34
The elements of drama 35
Types of plays 42
The drama and the theater 45
Chapter IV—Poetry 47
The nature of poetry 47
The elements of poetry 48
PART TWO
Chapter VI—Examinations 77
Suggested procedures 77
Sample answers to examination questions 79
Index 88
PART ONE
.i.
THE NATURE OF
LITERARY STUDY
people have thought of it. The plays of Shakespeare were popular in his
day and have been admired ever since, though more so in some periods
than in others. Herman Melville was all but forgotten in the last thiity
years of his life, but has come in our time to be regarded as a truly
great writer. To study the course of a writer’s reputation and to discover
how his works have been regarded in different ages are legitimate ways
to examine the work-reader relationship. One should realize, however,
that study of this kind, often of interest to advanced students, sheds more
light on one part of the relationship than on the other. It tells us more
about the readers than about the work.
standing of what he reads. As for deferring its study until a later time,
the trouble is that advanced courses do not teach elements, but rather
assume a certain familiarity with them.
One hears the argument, too, that technique need not concern the
“general student,” who wants some acquaintance with literature, but who
does not intend to pursue his literary study beyond an elementary course.
This belief rests on the assumption that technique is something super¬
imposed on a body of material; one can study and appreciate the material,
it is held, without worrying about the superimposed technique. But tech¬
nique is not “superimposed” on subject matter in the best writing. The
way a thing is said is a part of what is said. In a real sense, then, to ignore
technique is to miss part of the substance of a literary work. The justi¬
fication for studying literature in a college class is that such study can
help us to read more perceptively, and hence increase our understanding
and enjoyment of what we read. One way, probably the most important
way, in which it can help is to acquaint us with the rudiments of literary
technique.
Finn, he could build a discussion around the way the book affected him
—showing what parts amused him, terrified him, saddened him, angered
him, and so on. If done well, such a statement might manage to say several
interesting things about the book. We would call it impressionistic criticism.
Or, one could discuss how the book revealed the author. By citing and
interpreting properly the episodes that exhibit human follies and depravi¬
ties, as well as virtues, one could write an interesting critique of the book
that would consist of an essay on Mark Twain’s view of human nature.
Again, one might wish to discuss the way the book reveals the social life
of mid-America before the Civil War. He could speak of the various
social classes represented, from Huck’s Pap to the aristocratic Granger-
fords, the several social types seen on and along the River and their
customs, habits, and attitudes; and he would want to say something about
the dominating social fact of slavery.
Such discussions of Huckleberry Finn would be criticism in the
broad sense. Criticism in the more restricted sense would focus not on
reader, writer, or social background, but rather on the book itself. It
might begin by describing the general nature of the story-^-a boy escaped
from a tyrannical father teams up with a runaway slave, and as the two
float downstream on a raft they encounter many experiences. It would
probably continue by analyzing the story, that is, by noting its component
parts. These might be segments of the narrative—individual chapters, or
groups of chapters. Or they might be such technical elements as theme,
setting, language, and point of view (the fact that Huck is the narrator
throughout). All, or the most significant, of these parts could be discussed
individually and their relationship to one another shown. When the parts
of a work fit together harmoniously, or when means are well adapted to
ends, we are inclined to say the work is a successful artistic whole. So, for
instance, in the episode where Huck struggles with his conscience over
whether to turn Jim in, the implicit satire against the institution of slavery
is greatly enhanced by the technical feature of point of view, and it is that
which makes for irony—Huck, as narrator, failing to see the implications
of his actions. On the other hand, many readers find the last portion of
the book relatively weak, chiefly because the tone and atmosphere as well
as the characters of the principals are not consistent with those elements
in the earlier part of the story.
Personal preferences may creep into criticism of this sort, but the
critic who views the work for itself seeks to be objective in his observations.
In broad terms we can say that he is concerned with two things, not singly
but in their relationship. These two things are known as content and
form, or matter and manner, or substance and technique—or, we might
say simply, the what and the how. What a writer says is of course impor¬
tant; but equally important is how he says it. Sometimes we feel that what
a writer says is so valuable that we are willing to overlook his carelessness
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in saying it; conversely, some writers of thin substance have been admired
for the richness or grace of their expression. The best literary works—
and this is one reason why they are the best—are those whose form not
only is well adapted to their content but also helps to shape it. Too often
readers are content with seeking the pure substance of a work. We need
also to recognize how the substance, or content, is handled, and, where
possible, to determine wherein and to what extent the handling, or form,
is appropriate to the substance. To cite an example, we can speak of the
content of Othello as being a series of actions revealing marital jealousy;
and we can make statements about the form or structure of the play—the
expository first act (a little drama in itself) serving as a kind of prologue,
and the absence of a subplot in the following acts serving both to speed up
the tempo of the action and also to rule out distractions from the central
action. Such observations about structure are fairly significant by them¬
selves, but they are much more so if one goes on to say that these
structural features are particularly appropriate to the substance of the play.
The drive toward the catastrophe in this play of jealousy must be steady
and swift. In short, the form is admirably suited to the content.
Literary criticism of this kind is often quite detailed and complex;
the critic may see many significances in a work and may point to various
features, qualities, and relationships that are not at all apparent to the
casual reader. When one encounters such criticism, in print or in the
classroom, he may feel that it is a revealing commentary on the work in
question. On the other hand, he may be skeptical; if asked his opinion, he
may say, “This comment is all very well, but I’m not sure the critic isn’t
reading things into the work. Is he sure the author intended to express
all these meanings?” Two separate matters are involved here.
As to the first, whether the critic is “reading things into” the work,
there can be no general answer; sometimes he is and sometimes he is not.
The test must be, Is his comment really supported by the text? Criticism
cannot be irresponsible. The critic must prove his case before the bar of
intelligent, experienced readers. Of course the critic may be reading things
into the text. If his discussion is incomplete, or is unsupported by the
text—in short, if he does not prove his case—then we do right to be
skeptical. But simply because a critic makes an observation that has not
occurred to us before, we must not necessarily conclude that his comments
are invalid. Readers vary greatly in intellect, literary experience, and
insight. What is obvious to one reader may seem intricate or farfetched
to another. Indeed, the function of criticism is to show us things we had
not seen before.
The second point involved in the remark of the skeptical reader has
to do with the author’s intention. Did the author, when he wrote, have in
mind all the things the critic says are in the work? Did he really intend
them to be there? The fact is that with most literary works we simply do
The Nature of Literary Study • 9
not know what the author intended, other than what he says in the work.
Writers theorize about their art, but they usually make little comment
about theii intention in particular works. They feel, quite properly, that
the work makes its own statement, and that if they had wanted to say
the thing differently they would have done so. When we do have the
author s comment on a work, in notebooks^ letters, prefaces, and so forth,
we should make use of it. Often it sheds light on his method of creation
or provides hints for interpreting the work.
Ultimately, however, we must be concerned not with what the author
was trying to do but with what he did. It is conceivable that he achieved
something different from what he intended; both Melville and Thomas
Wolfe insisted on this point. The extreme and familiar instance is the
student talking over a test paper with his teacher; “What I meant
was . . . ,” he will say, and the teacher will reply, “Yes, but what you
wrote is something different.” Criticism and creation, though related, are
different processes. The critic is concerned with what is on the page,
however it may have got there. It is for this reason that it is probably
a mistake, as we set out to comment critically on a work, to begin with
what we regard as the author’s purpose, proceeding to show how the
parts of the work help to achieve that purpose. Instead of following this
procedure, which is based on what has been called the “intentional
fallacy,” we will do better to speak only of the work as it stands, and to
assume nothing at all about the writer’s intention.
The discussion in this chapter has tried to orient readers to the task
of systematic literary study and of criticism based on that study. The
following chapters treat these matters in some detail. Let us remember, as
we proceed, that the ideal reader is an attentive reader. He reads closely
and infers meanings. How much a careful reader can infer is suggested in
Sean O’Faolain’s comment on a short story:
Take the following example. It is the opening of Chekov’s story The Lady
with the Dog. Here is the first sentence:—“It was reported that a new face had
been seen on the quay; a lady with a little dog.”
The amount of information conveyed in that sentence is an interesting
example of the shorthand of the modern short story. What do we gather from
it: “It was reported that a new face had been seen on the quay; a lady with a
little dog.” We gather, altogether by implication, that the scene is laid in a
port. We gather that this port is a seaside resort, for ladies with little dogs do
not perambulate on commercial docks. We gather that the season is tine weather
—probably summer or autumn. We gather that this seaside resort is a sleepy,
unfrequented little place: for one does not observe new faces at big, crowded
places like Brighton or Deauville. Furthermore, the phrase “it was reported”
implies that gossip circulates in a friendly way at this sleepy resort. We gather
still more. We gather that somebody has been bored and wakes up at this
bit of gossip; and that we shall presently hear about him. I say “him,” because
one again guesses, when it is a question of a lady, that the person most likely
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to be interested is a man. And sure enough the next sentence confirms all this.
“Dimitri Gomov who had been a fortnight at Yalta and got used to it . . .”
And so on.
We may imagine how much time it would take, and how boring it would
be to have all that told at length. This compression by suggestion and implica¬
tion is one of the great charms of the modern short story. . . -1
Daiches, David. A Study of Literature. Ithaca, N. Y.: Cornell University Press, 1948.
Wellek, Rene, and Austin Warren. Theory of Literature. 2nd ed. New York: Har-
court, Brace, 1955. (Harvest Books)
1 Sean O’Faolain, The Short Story (New York: Devin-Adair, 1951), pp. 151-
152. Quoted by permission of the publisher.
FICTION
In saying that history is true and fiction false we say only that history treats
what actually happened in the past, insofar as it can be determined,
whereas fiction does not. But in another sense fiction can be quite true: it
can be, as we say, true to human nature, or, as Hawthorne said, it can
show the “truth of the human heart.”
Consider the history of a person, that is, a biography. The biographer
tells us what a man did, and he tries to determine why he did these things—
that is, he tries to suggest motives, or causes, for his actions. But because
he must stick to facts, his statements of causation will probably be tentative
and incomplete, and will be limited to one man. A novelist, on the other
hand, can give a full, meaningful account of a character’s motives, an
account which, because the character is representative and universal, tells
us a good deal about human beings in general. Or again, contrast fiction
not with history but with life. We may think we know another person well,
but actually there is a great deal we can never know about even close
friends. Not only are they unwilling to reveal all—they do not know all,
and could not express it if they did. But a good novelist can explain every¬
thing, or at least all that is necessary in a given situation. For this reason
we can say that we know more of significance about Catherine Earnshaw
in Emily Bronte’s Wuthering Heights, Eustacia Vye in Thomas Hardy’s
The Return of the Native, Tom Joad in John Steinbeck’s The Grapes of
Wrath, or Huckleberry Finn than we know about most of our acquaint¬
ances. Reading fiction is vicarious experience, but it is experience that
often goes further and deeper than that of actual life, either as lived or
as reported in history. In this sense fiction is most certainly “true.”
Another way of considering the truth of fiction is in terms of the
kind of truth it reveals. Some novelists and story writers, particularly in
the last hundred years, have recorded with great accuracy the outward
features of life. They show us the clothes, room furnishings, and other
objects surrounding characters, and they take pains to make their char¬
acters’ speech authentic, that is, like the speech of actual people. Stories
that render faithfully these outward circumstances of life we call realistic
because they are true to reality, or, to put it more accurately, to actuality.
“Actuality” is the better term to describe the appearances of the world,
for we often feel that reality is found elsewhere than in appearances—
found, for instance, in psychological and moral truths. On the other hand,
writers primarily concerned with these inner truths often do little to picture
life as it is in its external forms. These two kinds of fiction (we are speak¬
ing of extremes; there are, of course, shadings and overlappings) once were
called, respectively, novel and romance, or, as we say today, the realistic
novel and the romantic novel. Hawthorne pointed the distinction: the
novel, he said, aimed “at a very minute fidelity, not merely to the possible,
but to the probable and ordinary course of man’s experience”; the romance,
concerned with truth of the human heart, “presents that truth under cir-
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Character
REVELATION OF CHARACTER
A writer reveals character in several different ways. One usual classifi¬
cation groups them as direct and indirect: when the trait itself is mentioned,
by the author or by another character (for example, “He is a mean old
skinflint”), we have direct characterization; when only the behavior
(speech, actions, and so on) from which we infer traits is given, we have
indirect characterization, the method preferred by more recent writers.
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“Want to see what whaling is, eh? Have ye clapped eye on Captain Ahab?”
“Who is Captain Ahab, sir?”
“Aye, aye, I thought so. Captain Ahab is the Captain of this ship.”
The owner’s remark “I thought so” implies a good deal; spelled out it
means “I felt sure, when you said you wanted to go whaling, that you
didn’t know Captain Ahab; if you knew him you probably wouldn’t be so
eager to sign on his ship.” Although the remark does not characterize
Ahab definitely and directly, it suggests how the owner feels about him—
suggests that Ahab has a reputation and is a man to be reckoned with.
Characterization of this kind is common in fiction. Of course, when we
encounter it in a story we must weigh the reliability of the person doing
the characterizing, for fiction here is like life: the credibility of testimony—
in court or in our everyday affairs—depends upon the trustworthiness of
the person giving it. The testimony of characters who are naive, ignorant,
or biased is valuable, but we have to discount or qualify much that
they say.
2. Characterization by Externals. Again in fiction as in life we
judge people not only by what we hear but by what we see: (a) A char¬
acter’s physical appearance can reveal things about his nature. It is true,
as psychologists tell us, that appearances are often deceptive. Persons con¬
fronted with mixed photographs of rogues and solid citizens will not always
make the proper identifications; and we have met shifty-eyed people who
were not untrustworthy, as well as people who look us squarely in the eye
and lie outrageously. Nevertheless we do associate character with appear¬
ance, and so does fiction. Writers tell us a good deal when they indicate
a character’s facial features, build or figure, posture, gait, and so on. (b) A
character’s surroundings (clothes, possessions) are also revealing. A de¬
scription mentioning Johnny Doe’s turned-up collar, low-slung Levi’s, and
the sonorous muffler on his car might be lost on the general reader, but
teen-agers would know how to place Johnny. Or think how much we learn
of a character’s taste, education, and background by being told he is read¬
ing True Confessions—or The Atlantic Monthly, or The Partisan Review.
Fiction • 15
Such details will not individualize a character, but they put him in a group,
and hence set him off from many other people.
3. Characterization by Speech. It is plain that a person, or a fictional
character, reveals himself in his speech: “Everybody thought him smart,”
the saying goes, “until he opened his mouth.” Many modern realistic writers
have learned to capture human speech with incredible accuracy. Besides
giving an air of actuality to a story, well-rendered speech tells a great deal
about a character. Through his speech we learn his thoughts, opinions,
attitudes, and feelings. Equally important with what he says is how he says
it. His grammar, sentence structure, vocabulary—in fact, all the elements
of style—not only show his social and educational level but also, and more
importantly, show how his mind works. A similar revelation is afforded
by a character’s written style. The eighteenth-century epistolary novels
(stories told entirely through personal letters) make use of the device, as
does John P. Marquand’s The Late George Apley.
4. Characterization by Action. This indirect method of characteri¬
zation, together with number 3, probably does more than any other method
to reveal character. Clearly, what a character does—or fails to do or
chooses not to do—reflects his character, just as in life we say that actions
speak louder than words. Perhaps the only difficulty here is that we may
become so engrossed in the action of the story that we forget to make the
full inference about character. In analyzing an action we should ask, “What
kind of person is it that would do a thing like that?” or, simply, “What
traits of character does the action reveal?”
5. Characterization by the Author’s Statement. In life we learn
about people by keeping our eyes and ears open, but there is nobody stand¬
ing by to interpret people’s actions and character for us. Fiction, however,
is not life but a representation of it, presented by an author, one of whose
privileges is to explain what is going on in the world he creates. Earlier
writers in particular availed themselves of the privilege; Fielding and
Thackeray, for instance, speak freely to the reader about their characters.
This direct method is the method of the essay, as when Addison discusses
Sir Roger de Coverley. The indirect method resembles that of the drama,
where all is done through speech and action, and the playwright can never
address us directly. Most novelists use both methods, although modern
fiction has come to rely more and more heavily on the indirect method.
Henry James objected to the direct, essaylike way of presenting character
on the ground that it tends to destroy the illusion that fiction seeks to
create: we see the puppet master manipulating the strings of his dolls.
Many writers and readers today share James’s opinion. Granted it can be
argued that although fiction seeks and is often able to create the illusion
of reality, we know it is an illusion, just as we know a dramatic perform¬
ance creates an illusion and consequently do not personally attack the
villain. Perhaps the real reason we value indirect characterization is that
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woids and sentences but with images and symbols, so the writer uses these
nonverbal terms of “thought,” which he must present to us through words.
Stream of consciousness writing is a complicated matter. As has been sug¬
gested, it is much more than the illogical jumble it appears to be. It repre¬
sents an effort of novelists to carry a step further one of the universal con¬
cerns of fiction, the exploration of the individual human being.
UNDERSTANDING CHARACTER
Plot
Keeping in mind that fictional elements are closely related (a man is
what he does, and does what he is), let us consider what we mean by plot.
Sometimes the word is used loosely to mean simply what happens in a
story. “Tell me the plot,” we say, and what we may get is a detailed particu¬
larized recital of events in the story—really a resume of the action, or a
summary. Or if our informer is experienced, he may give us a succinct,
generalized account (an epitome) that presents the gist of the story. This
is closer to plot in the stricter sense of the word, especially if the gist is seen
to involve a conflict, for by plot in literary discussion we usually mean a
pattern of actions involving conflict.
PLOT AS CONFLICT
statement that a story has “a beginning, a middle, and an end,” he may feel
it to be obvious, yet it states the essential portions of a plot. The opening
part of a story, called the exposition, acquaints us with the characters and
shows us their condition in a certain setting. The characters may be doing
things, but for a while we do not know what their actions are leading to.
Before long, however, a situation develops that promises conflict. This
situation and those that follow it develop the conflict in the section of the
story called the complication, usually the longest portion of the story. The
climax occurs when it becomes clear which way the conflict will be resolved,
and the final part of the story—the denouement, or resolution—shows how
the conflict is settled.
It is easy to recognize these main parts of the action in a typical
Western, which is to say that it has a clear, simple, and obvious plot. Most
serious fiction is more complicated. Furthermore, merely discovering the
main parts of a story and calling them by name tells us little about the
story; rather it is a starting point for discussion. In considering the exposi¬
tion, for instance, we note what possibilities for action lie in the initial situa¬
tion; and of episodes in the complication we ask, among other things, how
each of them contributes to the development of the conflict—where,
that is, as a result of the episode, the character stands with respect to the
conflict.
Sometimes it helps us grasp the structure of the story if we think
of the plot development in terms of a diagram. There are no set rules to
follow here. In general we can plot (in a different but related sense of the
word) the action in terms of the fortunes of the central character, that is,
where he stands in relation to the conflict in which he is engaged. So, for a
story showing the progressive degradation and defeat of a character we
would have a descending curve; for a success story, an ascending curve;
for a story showing a character triumphing only after severe difficulties,
we would have a low curve that rises sharply at the end; for a story show¬
ing a character succeeding up to a point and then failing, we would have
a reversal, and the curve would be mostly high but would drop sharply at
the end. Drawing such curves will not tell us a great deal, and it would
be easy to make them overelaborate. But they do help us to grasp the
course of a story’s plot by visualizing it.
When a character experiences actions that seriously affect his fortunes
(including his thoughts, feelings, attitudes), he may learn from the experi¬
ence and so be a somewhat different person at the end of the story from
what he is at the beginning. Such change, in fact, is often an important
feature of a story. A character who changes significantly in this way is
called a developing character, as distinguished from a static character, who
remains the same kind of person throughout the story. We require that a
change in character be convincing, and this leads us to several other fea¬
tures of plot that we can include under the term probability.
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PROBABILITY OF ACTIONS
tive, scene, analysis, and description. The rough formula for a given passage
is this: the sense of time’s passing is proportionate to the progress of the
story in relation to the space devoted to the passage (that is, the number
of lines or pages, and hence the reading time). So, straight narrative can
advance the action rapidly in relatively few words; scene, or dramatized
narrative with dialogue, can advance it slowly (though vividly); and analy¬
sis and description may not advance it at all—which is why some readers
skip what they consider tedious passages of description: they hold up the
progress of the story. In such ways a novelist can manipulate fictional time
to increase the probability of character changes and of actions.
2. Motivation. By motivation we mean the reasons a character acts
the way he does. We want to know what he does, but we also want to know
why he does it. Motives can be plainly stated or they can be subtly implied,
but if they are absent altogether we are likely to feel that the work is some¬
how not true and convincing—that it lacks probability.
Motives are suggested to us in several ways. The author may mention
them briefly or, as many nineteenth-century novelists did (George Eliot,
Thomas Hardy, Henry James), he may discuss them at length in passages
of analysis. The character in question may state his own motives or another
character may state them, though in both cases we must be on the lookout
for false motives; a character may, as we all do in life, rationalize his
behavior. That is, he may give good reasons for his actions, but reasons
that at bottom are not the real ones, which may, as we have seen, be located
in his unconscious mind. The chief way in which motive is suggested, how^
ever, is through character. If we know the character well enough—know
his desires, his scale of values, and the way his mind works—we feel, when
he performs an action, that the explanation of his conduct lies in the kind
of person he is. He is the kind of person who would do what he does.
This matter of probability sometimes presents a problem. We have,
all heard people say, “I don’t believe a man would act the way this char¬
acter acts.” Is it a fair objection? To answer the question one must ask
what it assumes. When the speaker says “a man” he implies an actual,
flesh and blood person; it is therefore apparent that he is assuming that
the character should act like an actual person, and is objecting to the
action of the character because he does not so act. In a word, he is testing
the action by life.
Nov/ we value “lifelike” portrayal in fiction so highly that this test
seems perfectly natural and legitimate, and in a way it is. But it presents
difficulties. Our personal experience, particularly if we are young, is lim¬
ited; in fact, one reason we read fiction is to extend our experience. Often
we simply do not know enough about what people do, and why, to be able
to say, with assurance, that such and such an action is not lifelike. Then
too, what would we say, for example, about the story of Oedipus in
Sophocles’ Greek tragedy? Oedipus put out his eyes when he discov-
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ered he had married his mother. We cannot test this action by experi¬
ence.
Take another example from the drama, Shakespeare’s Othello.
Desdemona, a Venetian girl, elopes against her father’s wishes with a
dark-skinned Moor, who later, suspecting her of infidelity, kills her. Sup¬
pose a reader objects to the elopement, saying, “I don’t believe a white
girl would have married a Moor.” We meet the objection, not by arguing
that such things do happen in life (although they do), but by showing that
Shakespeare took pains to give reasons, or motives, for Desdemona’s choice
of a mate; briefly, she was charmed by Othello’s moving account of his
exciting past. We justify the action of her elopement, then, not by testing
it according to fife, but by noting that the author made the action plausible
by presenting a clear motive.
Probability of this kind we call inherent probability, since it derives
from elements in the work itself. Often this kind of probability coincides
with probability to life; we justify an action in fiction both because it is
like life as we know it, and also because it seems consistent with what the
author tells us about the character. A case in point would be the actions
of Tom Sawyer. But the two kinds of probability will perhaps not coincide
in stories remote from our personal experience. In reading such stories,
indeed in reading all stories, we should look for the justification of an
action within the work itself.
3. Foreshadowing. The term “foreshadowing” refers to informa¬
tion presented in an early part of a story that tends to make us accept as
probable an event occurring in a later part. Character itself might in a sense
be regarded as a kind of foreshadowing, but the term is usually used for
specific statements or events. In Moby-Dick, for instance, statements by
various mariners about the terrific destructive power of the White Whale,
or revelations of their fearful attitude toward him, serve to foreshadow
the outcome of Ahab’s duel with the Whale; that is, they prepare for the
later action by telling us what we can probably expect from Moby Dick.
Melville was obliged to introduce a good deal of foreshadowing, he says,
so that we would not regard the final destruction of the Pequod as some¬
thing prodigious or fantastic, but would accept it as something imagina¬
tively quite true. Foreshadowing, then, increases the probability of the
final action.
It is sometimes said that foreshadowing should not be too plentiful
or too obvious, lest it rob us of the pleasure of surprise when the fore¬
shadowed event occurs. This is a sound principle, but it applies especially
to stories in which the turn of events is, of itself, of great interest. In mystery
stories too much foreshadowing destroys the suspense. But “suspense” can
be taken to mean more than that feature of a story which creates in us
an excited curiosity about the outcome. We can feel suspense in a story
even when, for any of several reasons, including generous foreshadowing,
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we are sure of the outcome. So it must have been with the Greeks, watch¬
ing their tragedies. These plays were based on familiar stories of famous
families, and the chorus, oracles, and other devices provided ample fore¬
shadowing. In such stories the interest is not in what will happen but in
how it will happen.
Another way to put the matter is to say that foreshadowing makes a
climax and denouement seem inevitable, as though this is the way the
story must turn out. As we read we may not always be aware that a par¬
ticular speech or action is functioning as foreshadowing, but it will have
done its work if, later, we regard the denouement as inevitable.
Setting
When we begin to read a story and enter imaginatively into the world
it presents, we need to get our bearings, that is, to find out where we are
and, in general, what time it is. In telling us these things the author is
providing the setting of the story by placing the action in space and time.
Furthermore, in creating a well-drawn setting, he helps make his fictional
world real to our imaginations, and consequently predisposes us to accept
as plausible what happens in it. To see in particular how setting does this,
we can consider some of the functions it performs, recognizing that it may
perform more than one at a time. One important function—its use in por¬
traying character—we have already touched on, under “Characterization
by Externals.”
the war take place on the plains, which are hot and dusty or, with the
rains, muddy. After Frederick Henry leaves the war, he retires with Cath¬
erine to the mountains, where it is cool and dry, and the air is pure. The
setting in each case suggests symbolically the feelings and attitudes of the
hero—war, hate, cynicism, and death on the one hand, and life, love, and
spiritual exaltation on the other. It is true that such conditions of weather
and terrain are what one expects in the sections of Italy described in the
novel. But to say this is not to deny that the descriptive details coincide
with—and suggest in the imaginative shorthand we call symbolism—the
rather complex ideas and attitudes of the central character. In short, set¬
ting can be both realistic and symbolic.
Point of View
During the whole of a dull, dark, and soundless day in the autumn of the
year, when the clouds hung oppressively low in the heavens, I had been passing
alone, on horseback, through a singularly dreary tract of country; and at length
found myself, as the shades of the evening drew on, within view of the
melancholy House of Usher.
We notice at once that the narrator, the visitor, is within the story
and so tells it in the first person. It is apparent, if we think about it, that Poe
has chosen quite the best point of view from which to tell his story. One
way to test this judgment is to ask what the story would have been like told
from other points of view.
From the objective point of view all would have to be told through
narrative and description. The visitor’s speculations about Usher and Made-
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line as well as his statements of his own feelings would be ruled out. This
would be a decided loss, since these elements do much to enhance the
eerie effect of the scene.
If analysis of minds is valuable, then, what about using the omniscient
point of view? Clearly, the author would not want, for the purpose of this
story, to enter the minds of Usher and Madeline; these are a mystery and
must remain so. What about limited omniscient? The point of view could
not be limited to either Usher or Madeline, for the reason just stated.
(Conceivably quite a story could be written from Madeline’s point of view,
but it would be a totally different affair.) That leaves the visitor as a
possibility, and since we know his mind in the story as it stands, the only
question is this: Is it better to reveal the visitor in the third or in the
first person?
Either the third or the first person would do what is needed for the
story, namely, to have a sensitive register of events—a consciousness that
reacts, that feels what is happening. This consciousness is better presented
in the first person, however, for the reasons stated above as advantages
of this point of view, particularly the advantage of intimacy. For Poe
unquestionably wanted to stir the reader as well as his narrator-visitor,
and apparently he felt he could do this by showing the visitor becoming
progressively terrified, and by using the point of view that would identify
the reader most closely with him. The reader, too, then, would become
progressively terrified. In another connection Poe spoke of showing a
change of thought in a character so as “to induce a similar one on the
part of the reader.” In the present story the visitor exhibits a change not
of thought but of feeling; calm and dispassionate at the start, he is nearly
mad himself when the story ends. As readers we feel this change in him,
and we feel it so acutely because, largely as a result of the first person
point of view, we have identified ourselves with him.
This, then, is one way to inquire into the significance of a story’s
point of view. It should be clear from our discussion of the Poe story
that a point of view is neither “good” nor “bad” in any absolute sense;
one is better than another insofar as it is more appropriate to the particular
story the author has to tell. Each of the four points of view has its advan¬
tages and disadvantages. Realizing this, a writer usually selects and
maintains his point of view with great care. As readers we, too, should
be attentive to it, for it plays an important part in giving to a piece of
fiction its emphasis, direction, and focus.
Meaning in Fiction
setting, and point of view, in order to talk about them, so can we isolate
the ideas of fiction to see the part they play in a work.
THEME IN FICTION
MORALITY IN FICTION
concerned with morality. When it is, they feel it is didactic, that is, designed
to teach a lesson, and they will use the merely descriptive term “didactic”
as a term of disapproval. This view of fiction, as it stands, is also narrow.
People who hold it make two errors: (1) they construe the word “moral”
too narrowly, and (2) they confuse “moral content” with obtrusiveness
of moral content. Let us consider these errors separately.
We often use the term “moral” to describe the conduct of a person
who avoids the grosser forms of evil. If he avoids committing murder
or swindling his associates, above all if he avoids a life of sexual profligacy,
we are likely to say he is moral; at least if he does not avoid them we are
likely to call him immoral. But a moment’s thought tells us that morality
is broader than this. In a sense, all choices are moral ones. We need not
push the matter so far, however, to recognize that morality extends
beyond that which is clearly and admittedly moral. Consider Sinclair
Lewis’s Babbitt. On the whole he behaves himself pretty well, but he is
an overgrown boy, an immature, back-slapping fellow who shirks his
responsibilities—to his job as real-estate man, to his city, to his family,
and to himself. Although his conduct is like that of many people, and
although it is treated humorously, it nonetheless can be said to be some¬
what immoral. If we understand “moral” in this broader sense, therefore,
we would have to agree that a great deal of fiction, perhaps most of it,
is moral.
Some older writers in both prose and verse were inclined to empha¬
size the moral content of their work, even, as it were, to the point of under¬
lining it. Today this practice is legitimately resented by discriminating
readers. A work of literary art, they feel, should be a harmonious whole,
and the harmony is damaged if the moral content obtrudes. Moreover,
obtrusive moral content is unlifelike. In life such matter is firmly embedded
in actions, and we feel that in a story, too, morality should be an inherent
part of the action, rather than a preachment that we can label “the moral”
of the story.
Fiction in which the moral content obtrudes often has a relatively
short life. It may do its work as propaganda, but when the issues it debates
are dead, the book is likely to die also. This has happened to Harriet
Beecher Stowe’s Uncle Tom’s Cabin, although it will long live as a his¬
torical document. Perhaps it is too soon to say whether the same fate will
befall The Grapes of Wrath, but one suspects that it will not. There is
preachment in Steinbeck’s novel. The moral content, however, is more an
exploration of a problem than a suggested solution. Also, although it
clearly involves the plight of people living at a certain time in a certain
place, it has universal relevance in its portrayal of oppression of the weak
by the strong. Finally, and most importantly, the preachment is inherent
in the natures and actions of very believable characters, the loads. When
moral content is an integral part of a well-told story, as is true in the best
of the world’s fiction, we value it highly as an enrichment of the story.
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[Since the ordinary novel] cannot be read at one sitting, it deprives itself,
of course, of the immense force derivable from totality. Worldly interests inter¬
vening during the pauses of perusal, modify, annul, or counteract, in a greater or
less degree, the impressions of the book. But simple cessation in reading would,
of itself, be sufficient to destroy the true unity. In the brief tale, however, the
author is enabled to carry out the fulness of his intention, be it what it may.
A skilful literary artist has constructed a tale. If wise, he has not fashioned
his thoughts to accommodate his incidents; but having conceived, with deliberate
care, a certain unique or single effect to be wrought out, he then invents such
incidents he then combines such events as may best aid him in establishing
this preconceived effect. If his very initial sentence tend not to the outbringing
of this effect, then he has failed in his first step. In the whole composition
there should be no word written, of which the tendency, direct or indirect, is
not to the one preestabhshed design. And by such means, with such care and
skill, a picture is at length painted which leaves in the mind of him who con¬
templates it with a kindred art, a sense of the fullest satisfaction. The idea of
the tale has been presented unblemished, because undisturbed; and this is an
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The salient qualities are here. Because of its brevity the short story requires
selectivity of detail (and hence economy and emphasis), and this makes
possible the all-important quality of unity (“totality,” “single effect”). Poe
also notes the crucial role of language when he says “there should be no
word written” that does not contribute to the “preestablished design.” One
might think Poe an unduly mechanical theorist, his “preestablished design”
suggesting a kind of blueprint which a writer follows mechanically. His
doctrine is sound, however, for it is hard to see how in brief compass a
writer could achieve unity through selectivity without a preestablished
design. The very nature of the short story demands conscious artistry.
A poet who had been explaining one of his intricate poems was asked
how much time he expected a reader to spend studying his poem. His
reply: As much time as it took me to write it. This is an extreme state¬
ment of a principle essentially sound. For writing that is tightly packed
with meaning and rich in suggestion cannot be read superficially; art has
gone into its creation, and its values will be fully revealed, Poe says, only
to “him who contemplates it with a kindred art.” More than any other
literary form except poetry, the short story demands of the reader an intel¬
lectual and imaginative alertness, a capacity and a willingness to make
inferences from what little data the author presents.
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Millett, Fred B. Reading Fiction. New York: Harper, 1950.
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of the play. He must do this because the relatively short time it takes us to
read or see the play, even if we are told in the directions that “a month
has passed,” tends to make fundamental changes of heart or mind im¬
plausible. A compensation for this disadvantage of the restricted time of a
play, however, is the magic of the theater. When a play is well produced,
it can make actions plausible which, on close scrutiny, we might reject as
implausible. Shakespeare’s Othello is a celebrated instance. Although some
readers of the play feel that Iago’s diabolical actions in arousing Othello’s
jealousy are adequately motivated, many do not. Even these readers, how¬
ever, usually feel that in spite of the inadequate motivation of Iago’s
actions, these actions are made to seem probable.
A related kind of probability has to do with actions that do not stem
essentially from the characters. (See “Probability of Actions,” under “Plot”
in Chapter II.) Perhaps in serious drama, at least, more than in fiction
we are quick to resent what we sometimes call “unmotivated” events—not
only accidents, but happenings that appear to be introduced merely to
make the plot come out right: a rich relative dies and leaves an inheritance
to the perplexed hero, thus solving his problems. Such an event is often
called a deus ex machina (literally, “god from the machine”), from the
practice in Greek drama of actually lowering from above, in a basket, an
actor impersonating a god, who resolved the tangled plot.
Ideally the denouement arises logically from what has preceded it in
the complication. The point separating these two main parts (separating
what is sometimes called the “rising action” from the “falling action”) is
usually called the climax, or turning point, or reversal. It is the point which
marks the crucial shift in the character’s fortunes, or, to put it another
way, the point at which it becomes quite apparent what direction the plot
will take. Some critics prefer to call this point the crisis of the play, reserv¬
ing the term “climax” for the point of greatest emotional interest. Our
satisfaction in the denouement follows from our realizing that things are
turning out as we have been led to expect they would: sometimes happily,
perhaps with poetic justice being served—the good rewarded, the evil pun¬
ished—and sometimes tragically, but always, in the best plays, inevitably.
A play that tells a single story through a well-knit plot, that is, a plot
composed of events logically related and strictly relevant to the main con¬
cern, we say has unity of action. Ever since it was first mentioned by
Aristotle, this dramatic ideal has been honored by playwrights, but not by
all of them. The Elizabethan dramatists, for instance, liked to introduce
subordinate lines of action in a play, to provide variety and hence to widen
the play’s appeal. Such a subplot may be so remote from the central action
as to mar the play’s unity. But when a subplot provides a structural or
thematic parallel to the main action, we feel that variety is achieved with¬
out real loss of unity. Instances in Shakespeare are the Falstaff plot in
Henry IV Part I, the Caliban-Stephano-Trinculo plot in The Tempest, and
the Gloucester plot in King Lear.
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Setting
Character
Much that was said in the preceding chapter about character in fiction
applies equally well to the drama. It may be useful, however, to reconsider
some of these matters to see their role in drama in particular.
KINDS OF CHARACTERS
nation of well-known, even “type,” traits. It has been shown, for instance,
that Shakespeare’s Falstaff combines traits of three well-known dramatic
types: the boastful soldier, the alehouse jester, and the parasite. Even
Hamlet, one of the most individual characters in all literature, has been
shown to embody the traits of the melancholy man and the hero dedicated
to revenge, both of which were familiar dramatic types. What gives both
of these characters individuality is the new combination of old ingredients,
plus, of course, the fact that their creator blew the breath of life into them.
3. A play tends to show static rather than developing characters,
again because of the limited time at its disposal. Circumstances may make
the actions of a character at the end of the play different from what they
were at the beginning, but usually his basic nature will be the same through¬
out. Here, too, we find an exception in Shakespeare, who was able to over¬
come seemingly insurmountable obstacles, and triumphantly. Othello
changes from a stable, dignified, affectionate man at the outset of the
play, to a man of violent passion at the end. It is quite possible that
Shakespeare chose a Moor for the role of the jealous husband because
to the Elizabethans a Moor was a type character, generally accepted as
being passionate and cruel. Shakespeare could count on this general
opinion to strengthen the probability of the quick change in Othello’s
character.
The development of Macbeth’s character is even more remarkable.
Macbeth is first shown returning from an engagement in which he has put
down rebels against his king; before long, his ambition stirred by the
witches’ prophecy and encouraged by his wife, he murders his king—
certainly a quick change from loyalty to extreme disloyalty. Yet it is quite
plausible. It will not do to argue that the change is plausible because all
men have the seeds of evil implanted in them. Indeed they do, but when
the seeds grow, as a rule they grow slowly. One could learn a good deal
by inquiring how Shakespeare was able to make such a rapid degeneration
believable. The supernatural witches figure in this matter, and so does
Lady Macbeth. The point at the moment, however, is that although many
novelists have successfully pictured degeneration, most playwrights have
found the problem too difficult for the drama and have been content to
use static characters.
REVELATION OF CHARACTER
Our previous discussion of how character is revealed in fiction applies,
with few modifications, to drama as well. Perhaps it is worth noting that
the first four methods of character revelation discussed in Chapter II are
listed in the order in which we usually encounter them in watching a play.
Often the appearance of the central character is deferred while subordinate
characters prepare for his appearance by talking about him. (In Molidre’s
Tartuffe, an extreme case, the minor characters talk about Tartuffe for
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two acts before he appears in the third of the five acts.) The central char¬
acter then appears and is characterized by physical appearance and by
speech and action. Characterization “by the author’s statement” obviously
is impossible in a play. What of the sixth method, revealing a character’s
thoughts? Here fiction has an advantage over the drama, which has always
found this a knotty problem. A character in a play can speak his thoughts
to other characters, but with many of them he may be in conflict, as in
Hamlet, and so will not say what he truly thinks.
Dramatists have solved this difficulty in several ways. One way, used
also in fiction, involves the use of a confidant, a character who is sympa¬
thetic with the main character and who “draws him out.” When he is a
mere sounding board, he serves only a mechanical function in the play
and his presence is likely to strike us as clumsy workmanship. Shakespeare,
however, with his genius for using the ordinary device (or plot, or theme,
or character, or form) but managing to transcend it, makes of Horatio,
Hamlet’s confidant, an interesting, likable character in his own right.
The aside, a device peculiar to drama, is another way a character can
reveal his true thoughts. He turns aside and addresses the audience in a
“stage whisper”; that is, he pretends to whisper so that the other characters
wifi not hear him, but actually speaks loud enough to be heard throughout
the audience. The patent artificiality of the aside has tended to make it un¬
acceptable in realistic drama. Eugene O’Neill, however, used it all through
Strange Interlude to indicate the discrepancy between what characters said
and what they felt. The device is still used by the comedian who tosses a
gag to the audience in the form of a pretended confidence, uttered behind
the hand. In older plays, lines to be delivered as asides are preceded by
the stage direction “aside.”
Formerly the commonest way to reveal a character’s thoughts in some
fullness was through use of the soliloquy—a speech delivered by a char¬
acter alone on the stage. The soliloquy had a good deal to recommend it.
In using it, Shakepeare wrote some of the most superb poetry of all time.
Furthermore, the soliloquy is not wholly implausible. People do talk to
themselves; and besides, when an actor delivers a soliloquy, he does not
appear to be establishing a confidential relationship with the audience (as
is true with the aside), but simply to be thinking aloud, and to be quite
unaware of an audience. Nevertheless, with the development of realism
in the drama, the soliloquy, like the aside, has tended to disappear. Some¬
thing like it is still seen in some films and television shows. We see a char¬
acter, writing a letter or in an attitude of reflection, and we hear what
purports to be his voice; but because his lips do not move, we are to
believe he is not speaking the statements but thinking them. This device
tries to reap the advantages of the soliloquy without violating the canons
of realism.
All three of these devices for portraying subjective matter—the con-
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fidant, the aside, and the soliloquy—reveal the drama struggling to escape
the restrictions of objectivity that are inherent in the dramatic medium.
Our quarrel with the devices—except, of course, in older plays—is not so
much that they are unrealistic. If one is willing to accept the convention of
a stage or, indeed, of acting itself, he should not find it hard to go one step
further in imagination and to accept these subjective devices. A more
legitimate objection is that the drama, being by nature an objective medium,
is not entitled to present subjectivity except implicitly. When it attempts
analysis, as in the soliloquy, it begins to encroach on the realm of fiction.
Dialogue
and to the point, no words are wasted, witty characters are invariably witty,
pompous ones invariably pompous—in short, all is heightened and exag¬
gerated. It may seem natural, however, especially if the dramatist has
caught the idiom and rhythm of actual speech. Dialogue has more to do
than merely “sound right,” but certainly speech that rings true does much
to create a convincing illusion of life.
TYPES OF PLAYS
Tragedy
The word “tragedy” was first used by the Greeks to describe a certain
type of play. Because the protagonist in a tragedy met an unhappy end,
usually death, the word came to be applied—by an understandable process
of exaggeration—to a situation in fife in which one suffered severe misfor¬
tune, often death. This is the sense of the word with which we are all
familiar; death from an automobile accident, we say, is a tragedy. Legiti¬
mate as this common meaning is, it can confuse us in our thinking about
the drama because it seems to suggest that death is what is central to a
tragic drama, whereas other elements are really more important.
A tragedy is fundamentally a serious play. It presents a character in
most ways admirable, who faces a moral issue; the issue is not peculiar to
him but is one that any man might have to face—a universal issue. The
forces of life being what they are, and human nature what it is, the protago¬
nist will wrestle with these forces, but he cannot hope to win over them,
and ultimately he is defeated. A play that engages our interest in such
basic, serious questions must deal with us honestly. Character must be
richly developed so as to be believable; our sympathy cannot be enlisted
for a shadowy figure. There should not be many twists and turns of plot
(one main reversal is common), for we need to concentrate on character
in a single situation. Motive must be clear and adequate.
The single quality resulting from such technical features is inevita¬
bility. We must feel that the protagonist’s fate is necessary, inexorable,
not to be escaped. Our realization that the protagonist, thus caught, is the
victim of a superior force arouses our pity; and our realization that the
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action demonstrates a universal truth and that therefore the victim could
just as easily be ourselves—this arouses our fear. Tragedy arouses pity and
fear, said Aristotle, but it also purges us of these feelings (his term is
catharsis). The exact meaning of his statement has been much debated.
It seems to refer to what many viewers of tragedy experience at the end
of the play—not a sense of sadness and depression, but rather, oddly, one
of elation. One hesitates to say why this should be so, but very likely it is
because the protagonist, before his final defeat, has measured for us the
value of human nature. In his death we feel a sense of loss, but only because
he has demonstrated his great worth. The difference between tragedy in
the popular sense and tragedy in drama should now be clear: in a dramatic
tragedy the catastrophe is not accidental but inevitable; it is not a mere
death, nor even necessarily an untimely one, but a death resulting only
after great struggle against the forces of life; and its effect on observers is
not one of sorrow and devastation, but of exaltation.
The nature of the tragic hero and the nature of the conflict he is
engaged in have changed as man’s ideas about himself and his world have
changed. The Greek tragic hero is a man of high estate, of royal or noble
position—Agamemnon, Oedipus, Orestes. He or his forebears have trans¬
gressed the moral law, embodied in the gods and the state, and the play
shows him struggling to avoid the consequences of the transgression. He
may err in thinking he can escape the consequences—may, that is, exhibit
a fatal pride. His conflict, however, is with forces outside himself, and he
is inevitably the loser in the struggle. The Elizabethan tragic hero is also
an eminent man, but his conflict is usually within himself. Good, or at least
grand, he nevertheless possesses a “tragic flaw,” which is demonstrated
in the play as leading to his downfall. In Marlowe’s Faustus it is excessive
intellectual ambition, in Macbeth it is excessive political ambition, in
Hamlet it is perhaps an excessive moral and intellectual niceness.
Plays of the Norwegian dramatist Henrik Ibsen come as close as any
in more modern times to fulfilling the requirements of tragedy. They are
quite different from earlier tragedy. The hero is from the middle classes.
His conflict, although it has broad moral implications, is usually of a
domestic or social nature. Ibsen’s plays, written in prose rather than verse,
are often called “problem plays,” since they are concerned primarily with
exploring some of the personal and social problems of modern man. Many
students of the drama feel that tragedy in the traditional sense is impos¬
sible in the modem world, and that the chief modern counterpart is the
problem play.
Comedy
comedies but not in all. It is difficult to isolate any one feature common to
all comedies because the term “comedy” is applied to so many different
kinds of plays. About all one can say by way of generalization is that al¬
though comedy often pictures life accurately and with shrewd insight, it
does not try to picture it profoundly. It will say, “See how amusing, how
foolish, how illogical—or how warmhearted and decent—people are,” but
it does not go beyond this and try, as tragedy does, to say something basic
and profound about the nature of man. Consequently we are likely to
view comedy with more detachment, to be less deeply involved emotionally
in the fate of the characters.
Certainly we view with detachment that comedy which satirizes or
mocks human nature by holding its follies up to ridicule—the “humors”
comedy of Ben Jonson {The Alchemist), Moliere’s comedy of character
(Tar tuff e), Restoration comedy of manners (Congreve’s The Way of the
World), or Bernard Shaw’s satiric comedies {Major Barbara). Satire calls
for detachment on the part of both playwright and audience, for it is a
process of measuring, weighing, evaluating conduct in relation to some
norm of behavior. In short, satiric comedy is intellectual rather than emo¬
tional, and the amusement it provides is likely to be wit rather than humor.
It is true that we become emotionally involved in some types of
comedy. In Shakespeare’s romantic comedy—for instance, Twelfth Night,
As You Like It—we sympathize with the lovers and wish them well in
their affairs of the heart. Likewise in the comedy of manners of the late
eighteenth century (Goldsmith’s She Stoops to Conquer, and Sheridan’s
The Rivals and The School for Scandal), we warm to the good-natured
heroes and applaud their successes. The same is true, of course, with the
countless love stories in modern plays and films. But however more emo¬
tionally involved we become in these plays than in more intellectual come¬
dies, it is not the profound involvement that we experience with tragedy.
This is not to say that comedy is inferior to tragedy, but simply that it is
a different genre and so has a different tone. Each genre has its own kind
of value and should be appreciated for what it is.
The term “tragedy” was formerly broad enough to include both truly
serious plays dealing with moral struggles and those that only seemed to
do so. Since about 1800 the term “melodrama” has been used to denote
the latter. In melodrama, as in tragedy, the hero is engaged in a serious
difficulty, often a life-and-death struggle. In melodrama he usually wins
and in tragedy loses. Usually but not always, for the ending in each case
is more a symptom or accompanying characteristic than an indispensable
requirement. The situation of melodrama may closely resemble that of
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tragedy, and so may the characters and action, at least superficially. What
distinguishes melodrama from tragedy is that it seeks to interest us in the
action for its own sake. The action is exciting, full of thrills. We have no
need for subtleties of character, or motive, or theme, all of which must be
kept plain and simple to clear the decks for swift action. This would seem
to describe the typical Western, which of course is pure melodrama. But
many apparently more sophisticated plays, especially in films, are just as
clear instances of the type: the surgeon performing a miraculous operation
under handicaps, the underdog lawyer spellbinding the jury and saving the
innocent defendant—these, and the scores of situations like them, insofar
as the exciting action predominates over character and thought, are melo¬
dramatic. They are gripping, but they say nothing, and after we witness
them we forget them.
Farce is related to comedy as melodrama is to tragedy. Farce is con¬
cerned with the ludicrous, the preposterous, with ridiculous misunder¬
standings and mix-ups, to say nothing of pie throwing and many other
forms of horseplay, which the movies used to bill as “comedy.” In farce,
character counts for next to nothing, and motive is almost nonexistent; the
portrayal bears a relation to life, but certainly a remote one.
It would be foolish to belittle farce and melodrama, or even to argue
that they are inferior to comedy and tragedy. They are less meaningful,
they are unquestionably less valuable as commentary on life, and aesthet¬
ically they are exceedingly simple. But they have their own value and make
their own appeal. Perhaps we should remember that even Shakespeare
made use of farce in Twelfth Night, The Taming of the Shrew, and else¬
where, and that Hamlet, for all its philosophy, superb characterization, and
immortal poetry, contains a strong dash of melodrama. The point is this:
we need to know what it is we are witnessing and we must value it accord¬
ingly. To put it another way, we can say that there is nothing wrong with
enjoying melodrama and farce, provided we know it is these we are enjoy¬
ing. The one great error we can make—and it is a most serious one—is to
believe melodrama to be an honest reading of life. Of course it is not. Once
we see it for what it is, however, we may enjoy it on its own terms.
Connotation
it was the imprecision of words that led some philosophers to give them up
altogether in favor of a system of symbolic logic, in which precise symbols,
as in algebra, are used instead of words.
Now the poet uses words quite differently from the way in which
precisionists use them. He knows that words tend to acquire clusters of
association and suggestion—from the contexts in which they are used
(religious, political, commercial, literary, and so on), and from the pre¬
vailing attitude toward their referents and toward the people who cus¬
tomarily use them. But instead of combating this tendency of language, he
welcomes it and capitalizes on it. A poet pays close attention to the con¬
notations of his words, for he knows that the nuances of associated mean¬
ings are what he is trying to convey. They will not be found in dictionaries,
but they are familiar to one who is at all attentive to language.
Manuscripts of poems often show poets experimenting with different
words in an effort to get the right one—“right” usually being a matter of
the proper connotation. In stanza 30 of “The Eve of St. Agnes,” which
describes Porphyro preparing a feast of rich, exotic food, Keats changed
several words to improve their connotations. The words in brackets repre¬
sent his first choice, which he replaced by the words that precede them:
Imagery
The language of poetry is suggestive, as we have seen. It is also vivid.
Whether the poet is seeking to evoke a sense of physical experience, to
tell a story, or to discuss ideas, attitudes, and feelings, he will usually use
many words that appeal to the senses. Do words actually affect our physical
senses, the several means by which we perceive the world about us—sight,
hearing, taste, touch, and the like? Apparently some readers are physically
affected by words, but many are not. All of us, however, have “senses of
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the mind,” so to speak, which are analogous to our physical senses and
no doubt are very closely related to them. We say we “see” something in
the “mind’s eye,” though of course our actual eyes may be closed. Again,
it is possible to run over a tune in the mind, making no actual sound at
all, nor even activating the muscles of the throat; yet we say we can “hear”
the tune—hear it, that is, in the mind. The same is true, though perhaps
to a lesser extent, with the senses of smell, touch, and so on. The major
senses are these:
When we say, therefore, that a poet uses words that appeal to our
senses, we mean the senses of the mind. Or, to use the customary term,
we say that a word creates an image in our mind—“a mental representation
of anything not actually present to the senses,” as the dictionary defines
“image.” All of the images called up by a poem (as well as the words that
call them up) are known as the imagery of the poem. Sensitivity to imagery
varies from person to person, but it is a quality that can be developed.
Notice how the several senses are affected by the following passages
or whole poems:
1. Cold (thermal)
3. Taste (gustatory)
See the stanza, quoted above (page 49), from “The Eve of St.
Agnes.”
4. Motion (kinesthetic)
A route of evanescence
With a revolving wheel;
A resonance of emerald,
A rush of cochineal;
And every blossom on the bush
Adjusts its tumbled head,—
The mail from Tunis, probably,
An easy morning’s ride.3
Figurative Language
figurative language (not all poems do) one can neglect rhythm, sound,
connotation, and so on, and still get something from the poem. But he
who misreads the figures of speech is almost certain to misread the poem
completely. Because this matter is crucial, we must consider it in some
detail.
He is not really talking about a garden, but about the world, or, rather,
the moral condition of the courtly society. But “moral condition” is an
abstraction; it is unpicturable, and it affects us only intellectually, not
sensuously or imaginatively, as “unweeded garden” does. Hamlet feels
that the moral condition of the court resembles an unweeded garden, and
so says it is one. He is speaking, then, of an abstract state in concrete
terms; or, we can say he is speaking of what is unknown to us (the moral
state) in terms of what is known (the unweeded garden). The poet uses a
figure—a word or phrase which is concrete and sensuous, and which refers
to something familiar in our experience—to stand for the thing, idea, feel¬
ing, or attitude he is trying to communicate.
A figure, therefore, at least in good poetry, is not a mere decorative
device, a “pretty” or “fancy” way of saying something which might be
better said literally. A literal statement by Hamlet—“the moral condition
of the Danish court is low”—would not convey a fraction of his meaning.
But note how much his metaphor suggests; “Unweeded garden” calls up
a picture of a lawless, ungoverned growth of coarse plants, shooting up
rapidly and promiscuously and choking out the beautiful, cultivated ones.
Then if, as metaphor demands, we transfer these qualities to the moral
situation of Claudius and Gertrude, we have a vivid sense of that loath¬
some situation, or Hamlet’s conception of it. Our senses are affected and
our emotions involved, and yet Hamlet has ostensibly spoken not of the
moral condition of the court but of an unweeded garden. This is what
critics have in mind when they say a poem really does not mean what it
says, that is, what it literally says. Or, as Robert Frost has put it, “Poetry
provides the one permissible way of saying one thing and meaning
another.” Not that metaphor is a capricious or perverse device. As our
example shows, metaphor is a means of enriching communication, for it
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enables the poet to engage our senses and emotions and imagination, as
well as our intellect.
Tenor Vehicle
Often abstract Usually concrete
Unfamiliar to the reader Familiar to the reader
Stated or implied Stated
Example: the low moral “an unweeded garden”
condition of the
Danish court
Often in sonnets based on extended similes, one main part treats the
vehicle and another main part the tenor.
2. The tenor may be interwoven with the statement of the vehicle.
Thus in a stanza built on an extended figure, Byron in “Stanzas for Music”
compares jaded, dissipated people with victims of a shipwreck:
Then the few whose spirits float above the wreck of happiness
Are driven o’er the shoals of guilt or ocean of excess:
The magnet of their course is gone, or only points in vain
The shore to which their shivered sail shall never stretch again.
KINDS OF FIGURES
“Metaphor,” used in a broad sense, is the general term denoting the
several figures of association or similitude we have been examining. These
figures have separate names commonly used in discussions of figurative
language.
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1. Simile is the most easily recognized of the figures because the resem¬
blance of the two things compared is explicitly pointed to by the intro¬
ductory word “like” or “as.” Common in popular speech (“Rumor spreads
like wildfire”), it is a favorite figure with poets. Sometimes the comparison
is briefly put, as in “Ode to the West Wind,” where Shelley compares
leaves to ghosts:
The two things compared in a simile are usually from different categories
or realms: artistic endeavor and mountain climbing, ghosts and leaves.
2. Metaphor in the limited sense is calling one thing by the name of
another (the world is an “unweeded garden”). Since this figure omits “like”
or “as,” and because the tenor itself is sometimes only implied, as we have
seen, metaphor is a less obvious figure than simile. For this reason it is
more surprising and hence imaginatively more effective than simile. The
liberty, which poets have always taken, of calling one thing by the name
of another, and of asking the reader to think of one thing in terms of some¬
thing quite different from it, but significantly related at one point—it is this
that does so much to give poetry the electric quality that distinguishes it
from prose.
3. Personification endows inanimate things, including abstractions,
with life and personality. The philosopher is concerned with abstractions
(being, knowledge, the good, beauty), and he treats them in abstract terms.
The poet, too, is often concerned with abstractions, but he renders them in
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Here “valor” and “beauty” name qualities of, and hence are made to stand
for, fallen soldiers and mourning women. Synecdoche names the part for
the whole (“crowned heads” means “monarchs”; “hands,” in one sense,
means “laborers”); or it names the whole for the part (“Washington
reports” means “government officials in Washington report”).
5 In The Complete Poems of Emily Dickinson (Boston: Little, Brown & Com¬
pany, 1929).
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EFFECTIVENESS OF FIGURES
leave behind us
Footprints on the sands of time,
Emerson valued in poetry: “The meaner the type by which a law is ex¬
pressed, the more pungent it is, and the more lasting in the memories
of men.”
3. Good figures seem natural. This is a difficult quality to define,
but one we appreciate in a good poet. Figures in an inferior poem give the
impression that the poet labored to “work them in,” whereas in a good
poem they have a kind of inevitability. It may be that even the good poet
has to search for figures, but usually his is a mind that thinks figuratively.
At least he succeeds in creating the impression that his figures were called
forth by the subject and not superimposed on the poem from a misguided
sense of poetic obligation.
4. Good figures are appropriate to the whole poem. From time to
time we have said that no literary feature—word, sentence, literary device,
or technique—is good or bad in itself, but only in relation to its total con¬
text. The same is true of figures of speech. A bold, metaphysical figure
would be out of place in a poem of haunting atmosphere or of a marked
musical quality. Sometimes, too, the tone of a poem will shift, in which
case a figure appropriate in one part of the poem would not be appropriate
in another. We need to ask not simply, “Is the figure good?” but, “Is it
good in this poem and at this place in the poem?”
Rhythm
When we utter the sounds of human speech, they do not come out
in a steady stream but rather with great variety—of stress or volume, of
pitch, and of time of utterance. This variation, or pulsation, we call rhythm.
All discourse is rhythmical, prose as well as verse, but the rhythm of verse
(variation in the stress or loudness of syllables) tends to be regular; that
is, the variations recur in a regular pattern, which we call the meter of the
verse. As we hear verse read, or even when we read it silently, we feel the
regular rhythm, much as we feel the rhythm of music. It is important that
we feel it, since it contributes so much to the total effect of a poem. It is also
important, however, that we analyze the rhythm, for analysis can often
reveal how a poet uses rhythm to convey meaning. Although the matter
is too complicated for thorough treatment here, we shall have made a good
start toward understanding rhythm in poetry if we learn how to determine
(1) the prevailing meter of a poem, and (2) the significant variations in
the meter and the advantages of such variations.
In reading a line of verse we lay more stress on some syllables (that is, we
sound them louder and more distinctly) than on others, for one of two
reasons: the normal pronunciation of a word requires it, or the sense of
the line requires it. The syllables of individual words in English are
stressed according to the accepted pronunciation; so, with the use of
symbols, we can indicate the stress of common words: above, today, pulley,
/ x / x x / xx xx/ xx / / / / /
terror, interval, beautiful, overturn, underrate, jackknife, sidewalk, and so
on. This is simply a matter of word accent, which presents no problem if
we know the proper pronunciation of the word. According to another prin-
ciple, that of rhetorical accent, we tend to stress those words in a sentence
which carry the meaning—usually the nouns, verbs, adjectives, and adverbs
(the content words) rather than the articles, prepositions, and conjunc¬
tions (the structural words). For example, in the first line from a Milton
sonnet
Filling in the rest of the accents is simple in this case. Once we do it, we
notice that the repeated unit of stressed and unstressed syllables_the
foot—is composed of an unaccented syllable followed by an accented one
(such a foot is called an iamb), and we separate the several units:
x / x / x / x ./ xi
When I | consider how my light | is spent.
/
1 foot monometer (mo-nom-e-ter)
/
2 feet dimeter (dim-e-ter)
/
3 feet trimeter (trim-e-ter)
/
4 feet tetrameter (te-tram-e-ter)
a line of is /
5 feet pentameter (pen-tam-e-ter)
/
6 feet hexameter (hex-am-e-ter)
/
7 feet heptameter (hep-tam-e-ter)
/
8 feet octameter (oc-tam-e-ter)
The second line is regularly iambic, except for “outcast,” the second sylla¬
ble of which demands considerable stress. In scanning the line, one could
give “-cast” equal emphasis with “state,” making the last foot a spondee,
or he could give “-cast” a secondary accent ('), as the dictionary does. We
should recognize, of course, that any system of scansion, or marking
syllables to show stress, is a crude device at best; variations in stress as
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one reads a line flexibly and with expression are too great to be represented
by only two, or even three, different marks.
The first and the third lines of the above example are even more
varied than the second. The three could be scanned like this:
/xx/ x/xx / /
When in | disgrace | with Fortune and | men’s eyes,
x / x / x / x / ' /
I all | alone | beweep | my outcast state,
x/x/ /x xx / x/
And trou|ble deaf | heaven | with my bootless cries ....
.x / , x //xx /
Must smite | the chords | rudely | and hard.
3. Substitute feet can also emphasize key words in a line. Look back
at the quotation from Shakespeare’s Sonnet 29. The first part of the poem
treats the poet’s depressed state: he has had bad luck and says he is scorned
or rejected by his fellows. In his dejection, he says, I “trouble deaf
heaven with my bootless cries,” that is, he implores the powers that be to
help him, but they do not help because, being “deaf,” they do not hear
him. His petition to heaven shows the extremity of his depression, which
is aggravated further by heaven’s failure to hear his plea. He even sounds
somewhat indignant and desperate at heaven’s indifference to his plight.
“Deaf heaven,” therefore, is an important phrase in the fine; in fact, it
is one of the most important in the first eight fines of the poem. The sub¬
stitute foot—trochee for iamb in the third foot—forces our attention on
“deaf heaven,” by bringing two heavy accents together. Emphasis is
achieved, too, by the matching short “e” sound in “deaf heaven”—a device
of sound, to be considered in a moment.
To repeat, naming the meter is a preliminary step in analyzing rhythm
in poetry. From there one should go on to notice how the rhythm is varied
and what exactly is gained for the poem by the variation.
Sound
Poetry makes its communication with the mind, but it does so through
a medium that is musical. The language of poetry is rhythmical, as we have
seen; it is also composed of remarkably numerous and varied sounds,
best heard when poetry is read aloud, but heard even by the “mind’s ear.”
Sometimes these sounds create a music that is beautiful in and of itself—a
pleasant accompaniment to the meanings of the words. In the best poetry,
however, sound not only accompanies sense, but also helps to convey it.
Let us note some of the ways it does this.
REPEATED SOUNDS
(note: Alliteration is a matter of the ear, not the eye; the “th” of
“that” and “the” would not be said to alliterate with “tells” and “time.”
Neither would the “th’s” in these words be said to alliterate with each
jther, since the words are insignificant and receive no stress.)
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(note. As with alliteration, it is the sound and not the spelling that
counts; the vowel sound of “woes” is identical with that of “own.”)
Rhyme. The repetition of final sounds of words, particularly words
appearing at the ends of lines:
(note: The above lines illustrate exact end-rhyme. Some poets have
been fond of approximate rhyme: (a) imperfect rhyme [us-dust; gained-
spade]; (b) vowel rhyme [be-die; me-say]; (c) suspended rhyme [near¬
hair; star-door].)
When sounds are repeated in these ways the effect is pleasurable. In
a poem using a regular pattern of end-rhyme, the reader is constantly
curious as to what word will appear to complete the rhyme; he anticipates
th^. need for the word of matching sound, and when it appears he recognizes
it as fitting. It is our satisfaction in recognizing the matching sound, plus
our suiprise at the word that bears it, that is the source of much of our
enjoyment in poets who play with rhyme, such as Byron, Lowell, and
Ogden Nash.
The patterning of end-rhymes is part of the architecture of a poem,
as we shall see presently. Alliteration and assonance also have a structural
function, in that through sound they can link key words that should be
associated in the reader’s consciousness. Refer, for illustration to the
quotation above under “Assonance.” The relation of “coldness” and “soul”
is lemforced by the matching “o” sound; and the syntactical parallelism
of the two clauses in the following line is emphasized by the pairing of vowel
sounds (assonance) in both “feel” and “dream,” and “woes” and “own.”
SUGGESTIVE SOUND
In several, ways the sounds of words, besides pleasing the ear, can
help to convey meaning. The clearest instance of this is the figure of sound
known as onomatopoeia, which refers to a word whose sound resembles
the thing or action denoted by the word: buzz, toll (of bells), jangle, rus¬
tling, bubbling, and so on.
1 his is an obvious device of sound, effective if not overdone. More
subtle effects are achieved through manipulation of vowels and conso-
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nants. The long, open vowels, pronounced deep in the throat (uh, oh, ah,
oo), seem more somber and grave than the short, front vowels, pronounced
near the front of the mouth (i, ee, ay). No doubt this is partly a matter of
individual feeling. Most attentive readers, though, would sense the change
in tone-color (a general term denoting effects achieved by arrangement
of sounds) in Shakespeare’s Sonnet 29. The shift comes in line 10, where
the poet, having spoken of his depressed state, says
Haply I think on thee, and then my state,
Like to the lark at break of day arising
From sullen earth, sings hymns at heaven’s gate ....
It so happens that the first four words are composed of vowels and of con¬
sonants that either are voiced or are continuants, so that there is no inter¬
ruption in the pronunciation of the line until one gets to the “pt” sound
at the end of “stopped.” To be sure, the words mean that the sled and
traveler stopped; but the vowels and consonants are so arranged that the
sounds of the words tend to convey the same meaning.
In good poetry, then, as Alexander Pope put it in his Essay on Criti¬
cism, “the sound must seem an echo to the sense.” He illustrated the
principle in the following well-known passage:
True ease in writing comes from art, not chance,
As those move easiest who have learn’d to dance.
’T is not enough no harshness gives offence,
The sound must seem an echo to the sense:
Soft is the strain when Zephyr gently blows,
And the smooth stream in smoother numbers flows;
But when loud surges lash the sounding shore,
The hoarse, rough verse should like the torrent roar:
When Ajax strives some rock’s vast weight to throw,
The line too labors, and the words move slow;
Not so, when swift Camilla scours the plain,
Flies o’er th’ unbending corn, and skims along the main.
Structure in Poems
In reading a poem one does not, of course, look only at the several
technical features we have been discussing. What of the poem as a whole?
What of the over-all statement it makes? In a sense it is true that the
poem’s meaning is the sum total of everything in it, which includes the
ways it uses sound, rhythm, imagery, and so on. Or we can say that a
poem has a core of more or less translatable meaning, to which the
various technical elements contribute—their contribution often “making”
the poem, that is, giving it its distinction as poetry. It will not do to equate
the poem with this core of meaning, or to regard a paraphrase as the
equivalent of the poem itself. Still, the core of meaning—theme, motif,
idea, story, over-all feeling—does exist in the poem and, of course, is an
important aspect of it. In reading a poem we should recognize this central
element, and we should notice how it is composed—that is, what its parts
are—for the arrangement of its parts is one of the things that gives
structure to the poem.
What are the parts of a poem—not the formal divisions of line,
stanza, and so on, which we will turn to in a moment—but the compo¬
nents of the central meaning or content of the poem? Of the many different
bases of division of whole into parts, we can mention a few in order to
show the kind of thing one looks for in determining the parts of the con¬
tent. For instance, if the poem is a narrative, the several stages in the
story are parts parts of the plot, noted in our discussion of fiction.
Even a philosophical poem may string ideas on a narrative thread, as
does Wordsworth’s “Tintern Abbey.” In other types of poems the parts
may be an aggregation of items, all of which develop a central idea: the
joys of pastoral life in Marlowe’s lyric “The Passionate Shepherd to His
Love ; or arguments for continued endeavor in Tennyson’s dramatic mono¬
logue Ulysses.” The parts may be contrasting items, as are the two dif¬
ferent moods presented in Shakespeare’s Sonnet 29 (quoted in part above)
or as is the shift from grief to assurance in such elegies as Milton’s
Lycidas” or Shelley’s “Adonais.” Some poems detail a conflict—warring
attitudes or feelings—which at the end may be resolved. Whatever the
terms in which the divisions may be stated, we need to discover the nature
of the parts, and see how each contributes to the development of the
whole central meaning.
This structural pattern of content is not always immediately apparent
as we read a poem. Usually we have to think about the matter—determine
the over-all meaning and then find the parts into which its development
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is divided. More readily seen are the several formal structural features
of the poem: the section (book, canto, and so on), the line, and the group¬
ing of lines in stanzas. This grouping is made according to conventional
patterning of end-rhymes known as rhyme schemes; each new sound at
the end of a line in a stanza is designated by a new letter, a, b, c, and
so on, as in the poem quoted below.
More often than not, these formal structural divisions that strike the
eye and sound in the ear will correspond to some of the real but less appar¬
ent divisions of content. In such cases the apparent form is adapted to the
content and helps to shape it. A well-known instance is Shakespeare’s
Sonnet 73:
CONCORD HYMN
Conclusion
Here at the end of our consideration of the three main types of imagi¬
native literature one final word should be said. Aldous Huxley, after analyz¬
ing the prose style of his grandfather, the scientist Thomas Henry Huxley,
concludes his study with this comment:
,.T Aldous Huxley, “T. H. Huxley as a Literary Man,” in The Olive Tree
(New York: Harper & Brothers, 1937). Reprinted by permission of the publisher.
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In the preceding chapters we, too, have spoken of literary “devices” and
“elements,” which we have isolated and arranged in neat outlines. As
students of literature, not writers, we are critics, who come “after the
event” of literature; and we therefore are entitled, as Huxley says, to
classify each device or element “in its proper chapter of the cookery-
book.” But of course criticism is not so mechanical as this phrase—or our
outline—would seem to imply. We need to study literature in terms of its
elements, but in our final critical commentary we will use them freely and
flexibly. They will not be ends in themselves, but ways of allowing us to
describe the nature of a literary work and to account for the appeal it
makes to our minds and hearts.
Blair, Walter, and W. K. Chandler. Approaches to Poetry. 2nd ed. New York:
Appleton-Century-Crofts, 1953.
Rosenthal, M. L., and A. J. M. Smith. Exploring Poetry. New York: Macmillan,
1955.
Stauffer, Donald. The Nature of Poetry. New York: Norton, 1946.
Van Doren, Mark. Introduction to Poetry. New York: Dryden, 1951.
PART TWO
• v •
MECHANICS OF STUDY
An obvious first step is to make sure you understand the scope and
method of the course you are in. As Chapter I makes clear, literature may
be approached in different ways. Unless you know clearly and definitely
the approach your teacher takes, you may find yourself studying the wrong
thing. Ideally you should learn everything about the work you study; it
would be abominable advice to urge you to pay attention only to those
things that you will be held for on tests. Still, assignments are long, one
has only so much time, first things must come first, and so on. It is only
prudent to spend your time on matters that count in your particular course.
Usually your teacher will state his approach in the first session of the
class a time, unfortunately, when you are not best equipped to grasp
fully what he means. He may repeat his aims later, perhaps before tests.
A more reliable index of his intentions is what he does from day to day
in class—the topics he considers, the questions he asks. Of course you
should not assume that what occupies class time is the only thing you will
be held for. One teacher may spend the hour expounding the text, relying
on you to work up “backgrounds”; another may not discuss the assigned
text, but lecture on historical or critical matters so as to help you read
the text properly. Whatever your teacher’s method, you should discover
it, and so learn what he expects from you. The clearer your knowledge of
this, the more efficiently can you study.
It would seem that the normal way to study a work is simply to sit
down and read it. Most works, however, demand more than a single read-
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3. Thinking It Over. Once you have read the work closely, there
remain several things to do to make your study thorough.
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1. General Questions
a. What assumptions are implicit in the work? What does the author
believe about the nature of God, of man, of society, of external nature,
of art? These are large questions, and the answers are often not to be
found in explicit statements but “between the lines.” They are assumptions
about life, and must be inferred from what is said and how it is said.
b. What is the structure of the work? What are the parts, how are
they ordered, and how does each contribute to the piece as a whole? Here
you are concerned not only with what a passage says but also with what it
does—that is, how it functions in the whole piece. You will ask, too,
whether the structure, once you determine it, is well adapted to what the
author is saying. Does it perhaps, in itself, help convey what he means?
c. Is the work an artistic unity? What contributes to its unity—action,
character, setting, theme?
d. What is the prevailing tone of the work? Tone is the attitude the
writer takes toward his material, and many tones are possible. Particularly
in poetry is this an important question, together with questions that inquire
how the tone is revealed to us—that is, in what features of the work it lies.
These questions should be asked of any work. Other questions we
can group by literary type. Many of them touch on matters discussed in
earlier chapters. If they are not clear, refer to the earlier discussions.
2. Questions on Fiction
a. Do the characters fall into significant groups?
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b. What is the function of each character? That is, what does his
presence contribute to the story?
c. What are the outstanding traits of the principal characters?
d. How do you define the principal conflict in the story?
e. What is the course of development of the conflict? Can you repre¬
sent it by a diagram?
f. How does a given episode contribute to the development or resolu¬
tion of the conflict?
g. Why does a character act as he does in a given situation?
h. Does the story have a discernible theme?
i. What is the significance of the title of the story? Do the names
of the characters have special significance?
j. Where, and in what proportions, does the author tell the story by
means of narration (of events), description (of setting), exposition (of
character), and scene (dramatic rendering, with dialogue)?
k. By what method(s) is a character made known to us?
l. How does setting function in the story?
m. From what point of view is the story told? What values result
from the story s being told in this way? Does the author maintain his point
of view consistently?
3. Questions on Drama
a. Questions a-i in the preceding section apply equally to drama.
b. Where do the main divisions occur in the play—between exposi¬
tion and development, development and denouement?
c. Is the action single, or are there subordinate lines of action (sub¬
plots)? Is the subplot merely a diversion, or is it related to the main
plot? If related, how is it related? By action, by character relationships,
by theme?
d. Can you visualize the play on a stage? Which scenes would act
particularly well?
e. What features of the play result from the peculiar conditions of
production and staging at the time the play was written?
4. Questions on Poetry
a. Can you analyze the syntax of each sentence? Because poetry uses
ellipsis (omits words) and inversions (arranges words in an unusual
order), an elementary but necessary step is to determine how each word
functions in the sentence.
b. Can you paraphrase (state in your own words) each passage?
c. From what source(s) does the poet draw his imagery? Does the
source of the imagery shed light on his meaning? Does he use a series of
consistent images (drawn from one source), or does he introduce a variety
of them? What senses are appealed to?
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names and unfamiliar terms. Too, it enables you to list material in groups
or classes, a very real aid to memory. Finally, it forces you to think of
appropriate expressions with which to discuss your subject. Many of these
words and phrases will come to mind later as you write the test.
You will discover the best way to arrange your material. One way is
to devote at least one large sheet to each author or major work, listing in
logical groupings the facts you want to remember. Also it is helpful to
marshal facts about groups of works related in theme or form, noting
similarities and differences. Very likely, anything that you take the trouble
to dig out of your text and notes and write down on these review sheets,
you will remember at examination time. Ideally you prepare the review
sheets some time in advance. Your final chore is to learn them.
3. Spotting Questions. Does it pay to try to guess what questions
will be asked, in order to prepare good answers? If done properly, yes.
You must not risk all on your guess. But it is only good sense to prepare
some topics more thoroughly than others. This is not a matter of out¬
guessing the teacher, but simply of putting the emphasis where it belongs.
Some topics are fundamental, and your teacher probably will have empha¬
sized them. The chances are good that you will be asked to write on them.
It is hardly gambling to work up such topics with special care.
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EXAMINATIONS
SUGGESTED PROCEDURES
notice what kind of information is called for, and then to plan to present
that kind and no other. If you are asked to treat the structure of a poem,
you will not discuss the poet’s life; if asked to state the major ideas, you
will not say how the poem affected you.
3. Organize Your Answer. Several patterns of organization are
available, most of them discussed in handbooks of composition. The point
is this: Usually the most desirable pattern is implied in the question. Thus,
if the question asks, “In what ways does so-and-so do such-and-such,” your
answer clearly will take the form of enumerated points. If the question
reads “Compare and contrast so-and-so with such-and-such,” your organi¬
zation is also clearly indicated, although you will have to decide whether
to use a pattern of whole-by-whole, point-by-point, or likeness-difference,
your choice depending on the material and what you want to say about it.
Again, if the question asks “Why?” your answer will consist of an argu¬
ment—that is, a statement involving “because,” which would introduce
one or more reasons. In short, the form of your answer is often dictated
by the nature of the question. The one notable exception is the question
that says “Discuss.” Such a question would seem to be less exacting than
others, for it allows you to select your material and arrange it as you
choose. This very freedom, though, imposes on you the responsibility of
choosing a suitable procedure, and so in a way makes for a harder assign¬
ment.
4. Develop Your Answer. This is a troublesome matter. A student
may write four or five sentences which make truthful, accurate statements;
yet when his paper is returned, he finds his answer graded C. Since there
are no red marks in the margin, he cannot see why the answer is not worth
more. If he is told that his answer is thin, that he should have written more,
he may still be confused. Isn’t it desirable, he asks, to get things said as
succinctly as possible? Yes, often it is, even on tests, especially when the
directions call for brevity. But an essay question to which you are asked
to devote twenty minutes or more calls for a well-developed answer. Some¬
times students realize this, yet find it hard to know how to develop an
answer. In an effort to fill up space they include material irrelevant to the
question, or they give lengthy summaries of the piece under discussion.
The best way to see how topics can be developed is to review the
matter of “paragraph development” in a good handbook of composition.
Of the several methods usually listed (definition, comparison and contrast,
analysis, and so on), one of the most useful is “illustration.” A broad
question will call forth some broad statements in the answer, but these
should be supported with particulars, in order to improve the exposition
and, more importantly, to show that you know the subject in some detail.
Learning how to work into your discussion specific references (including
apt quotations) will improve your answers considerably.
5. Watch Matters of Style. No one of the following items is crucial,
but each is worth handling properly.
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Plan in Chapter V.) The reason for considering them together is stated
in the question, although the student is asked to explain the common
phrase that unites them. After treating this resemblance, he is asked to
point out differences—an assignment calling for an enumeration, and
possibly a classification, of points.
Paper A
To justify the ways of God to men” means that Pope and Milton are
trying to show us that God’s plan for us is right. God’s ways do need explaining
because people don’t understand why there is evil in the world when God has
the power to stop the evil.
Although Pope and Milton have the same purpose in their compared
works, there are many differences in the poems themselves. Milton tries to
justify the ways of God by using a story with characters. Pope does this by a
discussion using rational reasoning and philosophy. The God of Milton is all
powerful, while Pope believes in Deism which accepts an impersonal God.
Milton writes in blank verse using long sweeps of expression while Pope writes
the heroic couplet. The world of Milton is not static. On the other hand, Pope
follows Sir Isaac Newton in his belief that the world is not changing, it is fixed.
Pope gives man an actual place in the chain of being, while Milton does not.
Pope does not write in the supernatural or religious vein, while Milton does.
Paper B
Down through the ages, man has been mystified by the ways of God.
He finds it hard if not impossible to comprehend why God acts as he does
toward his creation. Indeed, some men even challenge the justness of these
ways and wish to tell how things should be. Pope and Milton wish to clarify
and show the justice of the ways of God by giving man an insight into the
vastly greater perspective of the whole creation and its history. By giving man
a look at the history that led up to the present state of affairs, Milton can
make God’s ways seem more just and clear. Pope wishes to show man that if
viewed as a whole rather than as a small part, the world is entirely just. In a
word, if viewed from the correct perspective, “Whatever is, is right.”
Milton uses the epic form to convey his message. He invokes a muse of
wisdom to aid him to set down the story. He has the rich imagery and super¬
natural creatures of the epic. He conveys his meaning using the long epic
sumle, and the long sweeping verse paragraph. There is a vast pageant of
characters, with their formal speeches and lofty, dignified language, and all the
other dements of the typical epic.
Examinations • 81
Paper A
should not write a letter to Miss Watson, telling her that he has Jim, and
that he will bring him back. But then he gets to thinking that this is not right,
because a slave is property, and one is obliged, according to the code of the
day, to return runaway slaves. So in spite of his decision, he begins to realize
that he is doing wrong. The reason he is doing wrong, he realizes, is that he
has not been brought up right; he has never been taught what is right and
what is wrong. But then his conscience tells him that this is his own fault:
“There was the Sunday-school, you could ’a’ gone to it; and if you’d
a’ done it they’d ’a’ learnt you there that people that acts as I’d been
acting about that nigger goes to everlasting fire.”
He doesn t know what to do, and so decides he will write Miss Watson a letter
and then see how he feels after he has done it. (His test of good conduct
here reminds me of Ernest Hemingway, who said you know an action is good
if it makes you feel good after you have done it. Hemingway may have got
the idea from Mark Twain.)
But Huck doesn’t feel any different after he writes the letter. In fact he
begins to feel bad (though at first he feels good). But when he begins to think
of all the kind things Jim has done for him, he begins to realize that it would
be a cruel and heartless thing for him to turn Jim back to slavery. Here again
his conscience works actively. (Possibly Mark Twain is putting something of
himself in the story at this point; he, too, had a very active conscience, which
troubled him often.)
He is now back where he was when he started. He decides again that he
will not write the letter. In fact he tears up the letter:
All right, then 111 go to hell —and tore it up. Of course it is amusing
to us that he should think he will go to hell for doing this, because we
realize that he really is doing a good act, at least according to the way we look
at the matter today, though not according to the prevailing view in the South
in the days before the Civil War. Huck is acting, according to the Southern
code, in a way that is wrong; and he is so indoctrinated with these ideas that
he is convinced his action is a wrong one. We feel that this is amusing,
although I doubt that people reading the book in 1885 would have thought so!
In Mark’s earlier writing (both in Life on the Mississippi and in Tom
Sawyer) he portrays a young boy troubled by an over-active conscience. In
Huckleberry Finn he is doing the same thing, but I think he does it better
here. It is a very convincing treatment of how a boy’s mind works; boys are
often troubled with such problems—more than adults realize—and Mark Twain
has written this passage to make it realistic, just the way life is. Partly
this is due to Huck’s language; he talks the way a boy of his education would
talk, and this helps to make it all very real and convincing. The realism, plus
the humor that results from Huck’s predicament and his effort to get out of it,
makes the passage a good one. Also, it seems to me, that it has a good deal
of satire in it, since Mark Twain is making fun of the old ideas on slavery.
Paper B
Paper
The famous fight with the redcoats had taken place almost under
the shadow of Concord’s manse, an Emerson family home. Grandfather
Ripley, now the master of house and land, had given the town a slice of
his little field on condition that the grant should be fenced with heavy
stone and that a monument commemorating April 19, 1775, should be
erected on the ground by July 4, 1837. The cornerstone was’laid late in
1836, but the monument, though it bore that date, was not dedicated till
the following Fourth of July. . . . When the original hymn by a “citizen
of Concord” was read by Ripley and “beautifully sung” by a choir to the
tune of Old Hundred, the author was not there to hear, being absent on a
visit to Plymouth. . . . The “assembled multitude” was “highly gratified
and deeply impressed” by the day’s exercises and may have approved the
local paper’s judgment that the hymn spoke for itself and that it at once
excited ideas of originality, poetic genius, and judicious adaptation. . . .
The Concord Hymn,” as it was later called, was at once taken up by the
newspapers, though it was some thirty-eight years before its opening lines
were cut in stone on the farther side of the river. (Ralph L. Rusk,
The Life of Ralph Waldo Emerson [New York, 1949], pp. 273-74.)
Examinations • 85
The^ poem is composed with a metrical regularity seldom found in
Emerson s later verse. It consists of four quatrains, rhyming abab, cdcd, efef,
ghgh, and is in very regular iambic tetrameter, which is varied by several
trochaic and anapestic feet. The first stanza is an excellent introduction to such
an occasional piece and gives both the location and the time of the event
while also suggesting its nature. The second stanza introduces images of the
silent dead and of the relentless passage of destructive Time. In the third
stanza we are brought to the present action and are given the motivation for it:
“That memory may their deed redeem.” The concluding stanza begins with
an apostrophe to “Spirit,” the master of “Time” and “Nature.” Here the hymn
requests that Spirit bid “Time” and “Nature” to spare the monument.
The poem’s movement can be regarded as a point on a fluctuating time
continuum. Stanza one, with its verbs in the past tense, evokes the past. In
the second stanza the past blends with the present as both past tenses (“slept”
and “has swept”) and present tenses (“sleeps” and “creeps”) are used. The past
is given the greater emphasis through references to the “foe” and the
“conqueror,” who are now dead. The personification, “Time,” is also intro¬
duced here and is imaged as a destructive force that has literally swept the
old bridge down the stream. The third stanza brings us to the action of the
present and, in phrases yoked by alliteration (“our sires” and “our sons”),
suggests a future. The concluding stanza now brings all times together with
references to the heroes of the past, the “children” of the present, and the
memorial “shaft” which, if the prayer be answered, will preserve the memory
of the “heroes” into the future.
The four stanzas show a very tight continuity, which is made possible
through the suggestive and logical links between stanzas, and through the use
of parallelism. The lines “And fired the shot heard round the world” end the
first stanza and suggest, in conjunction with “embattled,” the warfare which
resulted in the deaths of the “foe” and the “conqueror” in stanza two. Again,
in the second stanza, a transition is provided by the movement of the “dark
stream,” here suggestive of the ravages of Time, into the “soft stream” of
stanza three. The transition between stanzas three and four is less smooth.
Although there is a continuation of imagery in the paralleling of “sires” and
“sons” in stanza three and “heroes” and “children” in stanza four, the initial
trochee in line 13 interrupts the transitional movement. The interruption is
appropriate, however, since it coincides with the introduction of the apostrophe
to “Spirit.”
The few departures from the iambic foot seem to have little purpose
other than that of providing variation, although the trochees at the beginning
of the first and fourth stanzas would seem to provide the emphasis with which
a singing group usually accentuates the first word of a stanza, especially in
the first and last stanzas of a hymn. A certain symmetry can also be seen in
the initial trochees in the last lines of the second and third stanzas, but an
organic necessity for this symmetry seems improbable.
There are very few connotative words in the poem. Those which are
suggestive are of that familiar nature necessary to elicit a response, conscious
or unconscious, from the general public. Such words as “rude bridge,” “dark
stream” and “creeps” are common and are suggestive to most people. Never-
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theless, such suggestive contrasts as “dark stream” and “soft stream” are quite
effective and the use of the relatively unfamiliar word, “votive,” seems to give
the poem an elevation that would naturally impress such a gathering. Allitera¬
tion is also quite well handled and the use of s’s in stanza two is very effective
in the imaging of men that sleep, Time that sweeps and streams that creep.
The poem as a whole is well composed, considering the incident and
the audience to whom it was addressed. In fact, it has some claim to posterity
on its own merits, quite aside from the obvious appeal to the national pride
and the local pride of men whose ancestors fired the “shot heard round the
world.” Although this latter appeal has a great deal to do with the poem’s
immediate and lasting popularity, the poem, as I have intimated, deserves con¬
sideration on grounds other than that of mere occasional verse.
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