guidelines-for-communicating-clearly-using-plain-english
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We developed these guidelines to help you communicate clearly with patients and service
users throughout the HSE. They will help you to create, write and check your plain English
written and spoken communications.
Plain English is a way to write and present information so a reader can understand and
act on it after a single reading.
Good health literacy means that you, as a health information provider, communicate clearly.
It also means that your patients and other service users have the knowledge, understanding,
skills and confidence to take an active role in their health and wellbeing. It will help your
colleagues to understand patient treatment and care instructions, which can lead to better
outcomes.
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Research shows that limited health literacy and numeracy could mean people:
• don’t fully understand their condition and treatment
• are more at risk of going to hospital
• are less likely to go for screening
• might make a mistake when taking medicines
• might visit the emergency department more frequently
• could die younger
Our patients and service users ask us to be clear when we give them information about their
health. They also want us to show care and compassion when we talk and write to them. When
we explain things clearly with care and compassion, people trust us more and are more likely
to take our advice.
Using this guide will improve the quality of your communications with patients and service
users. It also helps you to evaluate your documents. At a simple level, this may mean using the
checklists in this document or having another person review your writing.
User testing
Wherever possible, carry out some user testing with your patients and service users. You can
do this using surveys, interviews or testing with representative readers. It is very important to
do this for a document that has a wide audience, like a patient instruction leaflet. User testing
can also be easily done for internal documents – for example, an email you are sending to all
staff. Ask a couple of your colleagues to read it before sending it out to check that they can
understand it and follow any instructions easily.
Communicating clearly focuses not just on the individual’s capabilities but also on your skill as
a developer, writer or editor of health information and advice. You don’t have to be the best
writer or best communicator to communicate clearly, but the tips and guidelines in this
document will help you. You won’t need all of them, but we all need some. So, we ask that you
read the guidelines carefully and keep them close to hand.
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Before you write or speak to a patient or service user, listen to them, think of their needs and
consider what they are looking for from you.
It can be hard with different demands on your time, but try and keep open to answering
patients’ questions in the detail they need.
Consider the needs and circumstances of those with whom you are communicating:
• family status, for example widowed or • race (national, cultural and ethnic origin)
single parent
• membership of the Traveller Community
• age
You need to use language and examples that respect all of your patients. This means knowing
about different cultures and knowing what health treatments and practices are acceptable for
different groups of people.
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Before you write think of your reader. This will make it easier for you and for patients and
service users. If you are writing a letter, email, patient information leaflet or consent form, you
need to consider:
• how familiar are your readers with the terms you are using?
• how are you going to structure your information logically?
Instead of Write
the HSE we
Instead of Write
accompany join
commence start
endeavour try
consequently so
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Instead of Write
When trying to lower the health numeracy demands on your readers, you might also try
some or all of the following.
• Be aware that many of us find numeracy skills challenging, for example reading a label on
a prescription.
• Describe numbers consistently (for example, don’t use percent on one line and fractions
on the next).
• Explain the meaning of numbers (for example, use terms like ‘low risk’ and ‘high risk’).
Finally, please note that words such as ‘majority’, ‘common’ and ‘frequent’ are not always
easier to interpret than numbers.
Write actively
Try to use the active voice most of the time in your writing (and when speaking).
Active Passive
The nurse can vaccinate your child. Your child can be vaccinated by the nurse.
The consultant drafted the care plan. The care plan was drafted by the consultant.
Use the active voice about 80% of the time to make sentences more direct.
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Instead of Write
appearance appear
consideration consider
development develop
To convert nouns into verbs, you will often need to rephrase things.
Be concise
Keep sentences to 15 to 20 words on average. This will improve punctuation as well. Mix
shorter and longer sentences for variation. Avoid wordy phrases.
Instead of Write
in reference to about
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Use headings
You can use headings that are statements or questions. Avoid using one-word headings such
as ‘Introduction’ but instead write ‘About this document’.
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Example:
There are three main points about swine flu in 2017.
• There were 12,000 reported cases of swine flu in 2017.
• Of these, 5,000 people were hospitalised.
• None of the people who got swine flu had been immunised.
Example:
People like bullets because they:
• are easy to read
• grab attention
• signpost what a page is about
You should avoid images just for the sake of having them. If they are not really relevant, they
can confuse your reader. See also tips on using images on page 14.
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Teach-back technique
The teach-back technique is a very simple way for you to assess and confirm that people
understand what you have told them. Simply ask them one or two questions to find out if they
can repeat back the key information you have told them.
Example: Physiotherapist:
• What are the three exercises you are going to do every day?
• How many times will you do them each day?
If the person is not able to respond correctly, they have not understood your advice. Go over
the instructions again in a nice way to make it clearer. See www.teachbacktraining.org for more
information.
Ask Me 3
Ask Me 3 encourages people to ask their health professional the following questions at the end
of every health appointment or consultation; when preparing for a medical test or procedure; or
when picking up medicine.
Ask Me 3 was developed by the National Patient Safety Foundation in the USA.
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It is important to use clear and concise medical words. If you have to use medical terminology,
then explain what it means.
Instead of Consider
Acute Sudden and severe
Administer Give
Audiology Hearing
Benign Harmless
Catheter Tube
Coagulate Clot
Contusion Bruise
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Instead of Consider
Dosage How to take
Epidermis Skin
Immunise Protect
Incision Cut
Inhalation Breathing in
Myopia Short-sight
Ophthalmic Eye
Physician Doctor
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Instead of Consider
Prognosis Likely outcome, chance of recovery
Renal Kidney
Respiration Breathing
Therapy Treatment
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Images
Use images if they are useful and relevant. Don’t use purely decorative images. This tip also
applies to graphs, charts and infographics as well as photographs and illustrations.
Images of people
Choose images that are inclusive.
• Avoid idealised, ‘photo-shoot’-style images of people. Choose normal pictures of normal
people.
• Use images that don't reinforce negative or stereotypical attitudes especially for ethnicity,
age or gender.
Captions
People tend to spend time reading captions, particularly if the image is good and relevant.
Write captions in full sentences. They can be 2 or 3 sentences long.
Copyright
There is no such thing as a ‘copyright free’ image. You can use:
• images that the HSE owns the rights to use
• free images with suitable licences (example: Creative Commons but remember to
attribute them correctly)
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Yes No
You and your environment
1. Is your body language appropriate for the message you are conveying?
3. Have you made sure that you do not have your back to a light source,
which makes it difficult for the other person to see your face?
Your listener
4. Do you know how well they understand English, words and numbers?
6. If you are using visuals, are they relevant and familiar to your audience?
9. Are you speaking clearly and in a way that suits your audience?
10. Have you kept your message simple with no more than four messages?
11. Have you used everyday language and explained necessary jargon?
13. For automated phone messages, have you used a small number
of clear options?
Checking understanding
14. Did you check that the listener can tell you what they need to do?
15. Have you asked the listener if there is anything else they need to know?
16. Have you thought of using teach-back technique (see page 10)?
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Yes No
Written text
1. Does the document use ‘you’ and ‘we’, where possible?
7. Does it use the same term for the same concept throughout?
Structure
10. Does it use informative headings or questions to break up text?
11. Does it include a natural flow from one point to the next?
13. Does it use bullet point lists for detailed or complicated information?
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Yes No
Page design
14. Is the font size at least 12 point or ideally 14 point?
15. Is the font type clear? HSE brand guidelines recommend Arial
for documents and Helvetica for design.
19. Are images, charts or blocks of colour, if any, clear and relevant?
21. Does your document follow the HSE brand guidelines and those of
hospital groups and CHOs?
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Yes No
Language, punctuation and grammar
1. Does the form use ‘you’ and ‘we’, where possible?
5. Does the form avoid Latin and French phrases and Latin abbreviations?
Structure
10. Does the form include clear instructions ideally at the start?
11. Are ‘official use only’ sections, if any, near the end of the form?
Page design
16. Does it avoid underlining, groups of italics and unnecessary capital letters?
17. Does the form use a typeface (font) that is easy to read?
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Yes No
Assumptions
1. Are you clear about the meaning of the numbers you are presenting?
5. Have you used plain words to describe specialist terms and phrases?
8. When using percent, have you used the percentage symbol (%)?
13. Have you aligned numbers and column headings to the right?
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Yes No
Integrity of numbers
16. Has your presentation of numbers kept their meaning?
17. Have you used clear examples to spell out what the numbers mean?
19. Have you been upfront about the age of your sources?
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Yes No
Written text
1. Does it use ‘you’ and ‘we’, where possible?
7. Does it use the same term for the same concept throughout?
11. Does it use verbs to get people to take the action needed?
12. Have you developed text for any videos you are using?
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Yes No
Structure
13. Does it use informative headings or questions for easy skimming?
14. Does it include a natural flow from one point to the next?
15. Are your paragraphs on each page short and snappy with one idea in
each paragraph?
16. Does it use bullet point lists for detailed or complicated information?
17. Have you given the conclusion, or main message or research findings
in the top half of your web material or page?
Page design
20. Is the font size at least 12 point or ideally 14 point?
24. Does it avoid underlining, groups of italics and unnecessary capital letters?
25. Are images, charts or blocks of colour clear and relevant to the text?
26. Does it minimise the number of clicks needed for the reader to find
the information they want?
The HSE’s Content Style Guide will give you more information on creating content for online
use, see www.hse.ie/content-guide
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The following checklist can help you develop and check the clarity of your patient information
resource. You can answer one of three answers: Yes, No or Not Applicable. Try to answer Yes
or No to as many questions as possible. You should get a minimum score of 80%. If your
patient information leaflet scores lower, you need to edit it further using the plain English
guidelines in this booklet.
Answer Questions 21 to 26 if your information resource contains health information that talks
about patients having to change their behaviour, and or information about risk.
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Yes No N/A
Language
7. Does the resource use the words patients use? (Plain English)
Information design
Format
15. Have you made sure that patients do not have to calculate numbers?
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Yes No N/A
Behavioural recommendations
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Yes No N/A
Risk
Yes No
Total
Example:
Healthy literacy score = 75% (You need to do a little editing to reach 80%.)
(Adapted from the Saolta, Galway University Hospital Policy on the Development of Written Patient Information.)
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9. Useful resources
Well Now!
Well Now! is a ‘literacy-friendly’ course on health and wellbeing for adults developed by NALA.
The guide is for adult literacy and community education services who wish to provide these
courses.
www.nala.ie/wellnow
Simply Put
NALA’s plain English website. This site also has free plain English resources such as A to Z
Guides to legal terms (useful for consent forms) and updates on developments on plain
English.
www.simplyput.ie
Health Literacy
This health literacy website from expert, Helen Osborne, includes tips and articles about how
to communicate more clearly with patients and colleagues.
www.healthliteracy.com
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Teachback
See www.teachbacktraining.org for more information about this technique.
HIQA Guidance for providers of health and social care services: Communicating in plain
English
NALA, in association with HIQA, published guidance documents for health and social care
providers on communicating in plain English when working with adults and with children.
www.hiqa.ie
You might also like to view a video about health literacy and health-literacy friendly practice.
HIQA’s YouTube channel: http://bit.ly/21Ur4xQ
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A5 desktop card – a card that you can display on your desk with some tips on how to use
plain English with your patients and service users.
A3 posters
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Code: HNC01094
November 2017